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Incest Chawla Family Ki Kahani - Adultery, Romance,Eroticism, Incest. EXCLUSIVELY FOR XFORUM (COMPLETED)
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Got shivers in the spine reading these two updates.
I felt reading a best seller novel.
Very bright writing casinar ji.
Bilkool ek upanyas bana diya aap ne is story ko. Ek sex story mein itni gehraayi kabhi bhi nahin padhi hai main ne.
Jiss tarah se saanvi ne sab handle kiya aur sambhala is praithworthy and the credit goes to you only Casinar ji.
Many parts have been so emotional and made me cry for true.
I understand both saanvi and Aarav equally. I cried together with him when he felt now he is parting for good from saanvi.
I cried also when Sasnvi ctied. I even cried when Saanvi announced him the good news of her pregnancy.
You hv not written but i understood that the night when Aarav was cring in agony same night saanvi also had a bad night and was sick after ending the last call at 3 in the morning which she told aarav. Means she also suffered parting from Aarav on that night.
Fantastic updates Casinar ji.
I read both updates more than 5 times.
You finished the flasback like a professional writer and proved your quality of a great writer.
Hats off Casinar ji.
Would love to read much much more from you.
you cried Amity? will you believe me that even I cried while writing the update? yes I did!!
thanks very much for the appreciation and feeling it deep my dear, love you.
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bahot shukriya soft bhai. mujhe pata tha ke flashback ke ant hone tak aap zaroor aur khub passand karoge, aap ko sabr nahin hota aao bahot jald conclusion nikaal lete ho aur fikar karne lagte ho ke Saanvi ko eisa nahin hna chahiye tha Saanvi har kissi ke saamne nahin jhuk sakti etc etc...ab dekha nah aap ne bhai? mujhe pata tha ke aap jaldbaazi mein ho....thoda sabr karo to sab sahi ho jata hai nah bhai?
chalo koyi baat nahin, mujhe Khushi hai ke aap mo updates passand aaye aur aap khush hue. thanks very much, padhte chalna aur comments karte chalna saath saath bhai. thanks again.
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bahot shukriya indian bhaikamaal ka update diya hai bhai vah kia kahun
jhakaas update hai... samajh mein nahin araha ke keise taarf karun
iss update ki quality bahut hi high jai baap, apun chota reader isske baare mein bus aap ko yeh de sakte hein
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are bhai koyi chota ya bada nahin hota hum sab barabar heinCasi bhai yeh ek top ki writer ki nishani hai
eise updates, chapters upanyason mein hote hein
ek sex story par eisi gambhir update main ne kabhi nahin padha
main khud ko bahut hi chota feel kartta hoon ke aap ko koyi comment de sakun
aap mahaan writer ho, aap bahut bade writer ho, main bacha hoon aap ke saamne
to mujhko maaf karna agar ab tak main ne jitne replies kiye unn mein agar mujhse kabhi
koyi ghalatiyan hui honge to
iss update se aap ne saabit kiya ke aap ho kia chij
aap jeise writer ke mukable hum jeise chote reader jero hai
humto buss sex kahaniyon ko enjoy karne ate hein net par magar aap ke inn 5/6 updates khaas kar yeh do last update padh kar samajh mein agaya ke aap kiss level ka writer ho baap
bus itna kahunga ke kamaal ke updates hein , lajawaab updates hein, bahut oonche sthaan ke updates hein
jite raho bhai aur likhte raho.
main behad khush hua inn dono updates ko padhke
aur bhi khush hua ke aap ki kahaniyon ko padhne ka afsar mila mujhe
aga aap nahin hote mere kahani aur updates ko nahin padhte to main kahan se hota
mujhe aap ki utni hi zarurat hai jitna kissi bhi ek reader ki
aap sab mere liye ek ho aur main koyi bada vada nahin hoon buss likhta hoon aur kabhi acha likh jata hai
saat bane rehna dost aur thanks very much once again
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thanks so very very much Rowdy bro, I was waiting for your reply
you are the only one to see the pain of Aarav, and it is while writing his pain that I cried!!
you have same feeling like mine bro. glad to know that... you pointed out the parts which even I felt should be seen by other readers but none did, only you did... thanks very much for sharing my feelings bro
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Wow wow wow!!
first of all Casi bro get to bow to you for this MAGNIFICENT UPDATE
And now i can say or give my point of view about this update
pheeeewwwwwwwwww
What an update, What an update man! Woooooooooow!!!
This is an update of the category of a best seller, like a novel of Nicholas Spark or Sydney Sheldon
You proved once again the wonderful and magical writer that you are casi bro
hats off mate, hats off.
What do i say? i am short of words, Speechless really.
Its a breathtaking update, blowing the mind in the real sense of words
It makes me ponder and plunged in thoughts this update....
Well, Saanvi really proved to be a very strong woman, mature, intelligent and you portrayed him as the winner over Aarav in the last two updates though i still pity Aarav.
And the young lad aarav also understood it if not immediately, at least when he got the news of sanvi's pregnancy that he get to step back and he stopped then only.
If i was you i would have written few updates describing aarav, his mental trauma the days he spent without her at the university, the way he missed her, the way he spent his nights watching her videos, the way he dreamt of her, and the days he decided to erase her memories from his mind..... i understand the flash-back then would have been too lengthy and could have become boring, monotonous, but i don't know why i feel that should have been shown, i find it unfair that saanvi's part is heavier than that of aarav in the two last updates. saanvi has been dominating all along in the Flashback.... She was at the top during the days she was taming him, sexually provoking him, seducing him and accomplishing his desires by dropping her 'pallu' and letting him rest his cheek and head over her cleavage.... all around she was at the top over him, and finally again she got the lion's share in the update
But still i understand that this should have been the way you have written and you have done a FANTASTIC JOB CASI BRO
Iread this particlar update thrice and will read it again i do not know how many times.... YES IT IS ONE OF THE BEST UPDATES IF NOT THE BEST.... there were few updates Erotics which are to be amongst the bests of this thread, and adding this one we get about 5 or 6 best updates you have written for this thread...
The moment Saanvi threatened to commit suicide i understood that it was her last bullet to capitulate Aarav, i knew it then itself that Arav will become like a sheep and will get the shock of his life, which really happened.... and saanvi was forced to say that to prevent him form sharing those clips of hers.....
the part she announced her pregnancy was really emotional too..
but the most emotional part which really made my tears flow was when Aarav understood that its the end and he is now parting with Saanvi for good when saanvi told him that they have reahed the garage and sent the last goodbye kiss to him....
i loved the way you portrayed Aarav's pain and woes at that moment, his cries, his suffocation, the way you have written how he felt his heart torn into pieces falling inside his chest (what a description mate)... and ow he was hitting the floor while crying then hitting his own head and chest, and how he ran outside to breathe...... and kept crying outside at 3 in the morning..... that was very very painful.... this part you focussed on Aarav and let saanvi away.... i appreciate that you showed Aarav's pain so well here....
Now the question which i get to ask you casi bro, is will you please tell me, had you planned this story like this? you have written it like it was pre planned, how did you so perfectly balance the time, date, how it came to be to the point that aarav was back from uni exactly when Depti was 3 years old..... did you know since the beginning that you will write these flashbacks and show deepti at thress yrs old when aarav returns back from uni? had you planned that saanvi will announce her pregnancy to aarav by phone?
Since we started reading this story we only know mister chawla, saanvi and 5 yrs old deepti, and we knew aarav and vivaan.... but how everything seems to be planned so well that in the flash back it comes to the point with all the actual time?
this amazes me you know... this shows what a perfect writer you are casi bro, and my admiration for you always grow and grow..... i have repeated this so many times since the days i was replying you on rapist and faraar stories.... here you showed that calibre again.... hats off my dear and thank you very very much for this marvelous update and this amazing story.
wow!!! oh my god!!! such a long review bro??? you could have written an update lol...
you found everything to the point...you hit the bulls eyes my dear
yes Saanvi has been given priority by crushing Aarav I agree, Aarav was like the villain when in fact he was not, rather sanvi should have been pointed the finger but this is how the world around us evolves nah bro? isn't it? but never mind my dear in future updates Aarav will get what he was owned (I hope so at least)
you found it all right and to the point
I won't say more as it I say it the climax will start to appear...
so just stay tuned my friend and follow it you will understand all gradually
till now you almost have all understood I see
thanks very very much from the depth of the heart for understanding it deep like me bro
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