Incest Chawla Family Ki Kahani - Adultery, Romance,Eroticism, Incest. EXCLUSIVELY FOR XFORUM (COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

very happy to see 2 big updates, was eagerly waiting but sad cant read it now as i will be driving...
will read as soon as i reach home bro

thanks yara

 

[pie]

When Saanvi is going to get underneath Chawla, make it more Erotic and raunchy

 

[sharaabi]

Faru

 

[Casinar]

Wow wow wow!!
Fantastic update bro, just wonderful
amazinf in the right sense!
I never thought Chawla saheb had this side of a personality.No.never ever imagined that she will be so cold with Sanjana, infact he was all the way thinking of saanvi this means...
he was driving and sanjana sitting by his side but in his mind there was only saanvi which made him be indifferent towards sanjana
What an update bro! what an update! marvelous! no enough and perfect word to praise your writing my friend.
it was very touching to see San jana crying in gasps talkng to him that way.... even i felt a tumult of emotion as she was bearing his silence and cold behaviour all the way from home as she was expecting him to come inside and hug and kiss her which he did not do then all the way through the drive he did not even talk to her...that was really tough for a cute girl like Sanjana
you wrote this update with perfection my friend and it deserves a great ovation to you.

thanks very very much for such a lovely appreciative comment rowdy bro

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Amazing, but the threesome I think was too early, but its your story so you know the story line better.

 

[Casinar]

reading the next one which looks bulky compared to the first one

thanks bro

 

[Casinar]

oh you replied me immediately? this is rare
thank you bro. yes yes will wait for the next update to know how you cooked it further
thanks for quick response casi bro, appreciate it

i was waiting if i can see any comment where someone ask me about the clips in his mobile... all others who posted comment before you did not.... but you did

 

[Casinar]

Casi bhai
Kia likha bhai. Kia likha hai vah.
Iss mein bilkool sex nahin hai fir bhi bahut hi badhya update. Faadu update hai bhai. Padhke bahut hi achah laga yaar. Do baar padha. Kayi para ko baar baar padha. .. seedha dil mein utar jane wala update hai ye.
Aap ne itne behtareen tarike se likha hai ke lagta tha sab mere enkhon k saamne dekh raha hoon.
Sanjana ka udaas chehra nazar aya jab chawla sahab nahin utre car se uss se milne ko, gale lagaane ko. Usska utra hua chehra dikha jab car mein bina baat kiye chawla sahab drive karta raha. Usski udaasi usska dukh bahut mehsoos hua.
Usska rona bilkool laajmi tha.
Aur sisakte hue jab chawla sahab ki gale lagi aur unhon ne ussko chup karaya tab jaake dil ko sukoon mili.
Vah casi bhai vah. Kamaal k writer ho aap. Jhuk kar salaam aap ko bhai.
Fantastic faaaadddduuuu update.

thaks so very much rahul

 

[Casinar]

Casi bhai oh ho ab main kia kahun??!!
Yaar ye update to aur bhi kamaal ka hai yaar.... ek se badhkar ek updates vaj wo bhi itna bada wala update.... bhai kia khaya hai aap ne ke itna badhya likhe jaa rahe ho yaar
Bhai sab kuch lag raha tha ke ek drisht chal raha hai aur main baith kar sab dekh raha hoon . Itna acha likha hai aap ne ke buss padhte rehne ko mann kar raha tha. Dil karta tha ke padhna kabhi khatam hi nah ho..
Iss mein bhi bilkool sex aur erotic nahin phir bhi phanttastik update bhai bahut bahut hi badhya laajawab, mast, jhakaas, faaduuuuu update bhai.
Ab main kia kia baat karun iss update k bare mein.... ek ek line best of best hai. Sab seedhe dil ki gehraayi tak gaye. Sab dil mein utre. Kia nahin likha hai iss update mein yaar vah!
Chawla sahab itna dard chupa rahe the apne andar jo sharaab pine k baad baahar nikla.... rona agaya yaar jab wo khud se baatein kar rahe the... to saanvi ki berukhi se unnke dil ko gehra chot pahuncha hai magar wo sehen kar rahe the... issi liye bechari sanjana se bhi baat nahin kiye the... hmmm
Aur kitna pee liya yaar...
Udhar pyari sanjana kitni kathinayon se unnko dhunda apne papa ko bhi lene gayi...
Ab mobile chorri ho gayi. Are uss mein to unn dono ke aur sanjana k papa ke sath bhi recording hai nah? An kissi ghalat hath mein lag gaya ya share ho gaya to? Baap re ye soch ke ghabrahat ho rahi hai... aap kia likhne wale ho aage bhai? Kia Sanjana ki clip sab log dekhenge? Kia sari dunya sanjana aur unnke papa ko sex karte dekhenge? Eisa hoga kia bhai? Agar eisa hua to kia saanvi aur Aarav ko bhi pata chal jaega? Kia kahani end hone wali hai kia bhai? Kia clip leak hone se sanjana suicide to nahin karegi nah? Bhai plz eisa kuch mat hone dena yaar. Sanjana humko bahot hi pyari hai ussko nahin maarna bhai.
Bahut acha laga jab sanjana k papa ne chawla sahab k chest dekh kar sanjana se pucha ye tum ne kiya hai nah? Bahut bhut acha laga jiss tarah se aap ne sanjana ko hamein dikhaya uss waqt.
Bhut hi kamaal ki update hai bhai.
Darr lag raha hai agle update ko sochkar kahin kuch bura nah ho...
Well fantastic, mindblowing wonderful update bhai.

are baap re itna bada review Rahul?
thanks very very much yaara aur kia kahun?

 

[Jitu kumar]

Waiting bhai