Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Naughtyrishabh]

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Update to aate-jate rahenge .
Kal ka rahega ,

Intjaar

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[Raja thakur]

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Ok bhai

 

[sonukale]

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[RAAZ]

UPDATE- 98 (B)​

Adirishi ashram se nikalte samay sabhi shisyo se gale mila…..damnak rishi bhi usse aa kar rundhe kanth se mile aur apne dwara kiye gaye kunthit vyavhar ke liye adii se kshama mangi kyon ki gurudev ne unko sach se avgat kara diya tha…..adii ne unhe kshama kar diya.

Jate samay raste me use radha apni ashru poorit ankhe liye khadi mili….radha ko dekhte hi adii ne apni dono baanhe phaila di….radha kisi pagal hirni ki bhanti doudte huye adii ki chhati se simat gayi.

Radha (rote huye)—mujhe chhod kar mat jao…..jab vapis hi jana tha to mere mann mandir me prem ka deepak jalaya hi kyo tha…? ab main apke bina nahi jee paungi…mujhe bhi apne sath le chalo.

Adirishi—pagli main kaha ja raha hu tujhe chhod kar….? Main to ja hi raha hu vapis aane ke liye….jaldi hi main apni iss dulhan ko lene vapis loutunga.

Badi mushkil se adii ne radha ko samjha bujha kar shant kiya…..jane se pahle usne radha ke komal adhro par apne prem ki mohar laga di aur usse jaldi loutne ka vada kar ke dharti lok ke liye nikal pada.

Ab Aage……

Margret aur baki dost india pahuch kar sidhe anand ko call kiya...anand ne unhe lene ke liye driver ko bhej kar pick karwa liya....margret ki mansik halat dekh kar aur uske bare me sun kar sab ko dukh hua.

Kintu jab sabhi dosto ko adii ke jivit hone ki baat pata chali to vo sab chounk gaye…unhe gahra jhatka laga…sath hi unhone margret ko shukriya kiya kyon ki aaj uski hi vajah se unhe ye good news mili thi.

Lekin sab ko urmila ke come me hona ka behad dukh tha…ab to vo sab kewal ish pratiksha me the ki kab unka adii vapis ayega….?

Ab vo shree se milna chahte the lekin vo to abhi bhi adii ke kamre me khud ko band kar ke uski tasveer ko apne seene se lagaye roye ja rahi thi.

Sabhi usse milna chahte the….lekin agni ne sabhi ko iss samay usse akela hi chhodne ke liye kaha aur kisi ko uss kamre me jane se rok diya.

Franklin—ye shree ko kya ho gaya hai….? Hame bhi to milne do usse

Agni—aap sab kuch samay intazar kijiye…didi khud hi jab kamre se bahar ayengi to mil lena tab tak koi bhi iss kamre me nahi jayega aur na hi unhe disturb karega.

Pari lok ki halat me ab kafi sudhar tha ….ab vaha andhere ki bajaye roshni ka samrajya tha, shayad ye rajnandini ke shubh kadam pari lok me padne ki vajah se hi sambhav hua tha….kintu sonalika ki halat ab bhi pahle jaise hi thi….

Maharaj aur maharani ne rajguru se apni putri ke swasthya labh ki akanksha se kayi bar anurodh kiya to unhone ye kah kar iss baat ko taal diya ki abhi uske karmo ki saza samapt nahi huyi hai aur waqt aane par sab theek ho jayega tak tak pratiksha kare….sonalika ko ab kshama karne ya na karne ka adhikar kewal rajrani rajnandini ko hai.

Vahi maine apne ghar loutne se pahle apne dost munish se milne gaya…vo bhi mujhse mil kar behad khush hua… maine priyamvada se bhi jaldi vapis aane ka vada kiya..halanki vo bhi mere sath hi aana chahti thi lekin maine usko kuch din aur intazar karne ko kaha.

Priyamvada se milne ke baad main apni sarjami apne vatan lout aaya….yaha ki jamin par kadam rakhte hi maine dharti maa ko naman kiya aur sarva pratham kanak rishi ke ashram me gaya.

Kanak rishi uss samay dhyan me baithe huye the…mere vaha pahuchte hi maine unko pranam kiya to unhone mushkurate huye apni ankhe khol di.

Adii—pranam munivar

Kanak—tumhara kalyan ho putra

Adii—aapne mujhe nav jeevan pradan kiya hai munivar..atah ab mujhe aage kya karna chahiye kripya aap hi mera marg prashast kare.

Kanak—tumhare inn vinamra vachno ne hamara mann moh liya hai vats…tumhe iss samay kayi avashyak karya karne hain, jinke liye tumhara ye jeevan bana hai…..vaise to tumhara marg darshan samay samay par tumhare guru ashtavakra aur vishwamitra ji karte hi rahenge tathapi avashyakta padne par main bhi sada tatpar rahunga.

Adii—to phir mere liye kya agya hai….?

Kanak—putra tumhare sawalo ke jawab khud ashtavakra ji hi de to behtar hai karan vo tumhare guru hain.

Maine ankhe band kar ke dhyan me guru ashtavakra ko yaad kiya to prakat ho gaye….maine unhe pranam karne ke uparant apna prashna unke sammukh rakh diya.

Adii—pranam gurudev

Ashtavakra—tumhara kalyan ho putra

Adii—apka varad hast jiske sir par hoga uska kalyan hona to nishchit hi hai….mera bhi aaj tak kalyan hi kiya hai aap ne.

Ashtavakra (haste huye)—kaho vats…kaise yaad kiya mujhe….?

Adii—mere liye kya nirdesh hai gurudev….?

Ashtavakra—putra ye jeevan tumhara hai, ataiv har karm ka dayitva bhi tumhara hi hai….phir bhi main itna hi kahunga ki kisi ko tumhari avashyakta hai….shaktiya tumhare paas hain..jan kalyan karne ke liye…jao aur apne kartavya path par aage badho…..mera ashirwad hamesha tumhare sath hai.

Ashtavakra ke antardhyan hote hi meri ankho ke samne dhyan mudra me rahte huye hi shree ke khate me phanse hone ka drishya ghumne laga aur iske sath hi mera dhyan bhi toot gaya.

Maine kanak rishi ko pranam kar ke himalaya ki uss gufa ki oor badh gaya….jaha shree iss samay moujud thi…udhar shree ne jaise hi kisi ki bhari awaz suni to vo chounk gayi.

Shree—kkkk…koun ho tummmm….?

“A….Z….G…..A…..R” phir se vahi awaz goonji vaha par.

Shree—ohhhh...to tu hai azgar..... ! achcha hua ki tu khud yaha aa gaya…..kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ki Jiski mout jaha likhi hoti hai, vo vaha pahuch hi jata hai…..aaj teri mout bhi mere hi hatho likhi hai isliye tu yaha pahuch hi gaya..

Azgar—hahahahahaaha.......tu mujhe maregi.. !…hahahahaha…azgar ko maregi…..mujhe koi nahi maar sakta.

Shree (jor se)—andhere me chhup kar kya hihihihii kar raha hai kaayar….samne aa, abhi batati hu tujhe

Aur uske baad azgar joro se haste huye shree ke samne aa gaya….shree ne to socha tha ki vo bhi ek insan hi hoga kintu jaise hi usko dekha to uske hath se chaku chhut gaya…..mann me darr aur khauf sama gaya.

Kyon ki azgar ka roop hi bahut bhayanak tha….aise roop ki to usne kabhi sapne me bhi kalpana nahi ki thi…ye to uske liye bahut badi apratyashit ghatna thi.

Azgar—bahut tadpaya tune….tu kya samajhti thi mujhse bach jayegi….hahahahaha….ab mujhse bach kar kaha jayegi..

Shree (darr se piche jate huye)—mmmm….mere paas mat aana….door hato…

Shree darte huye piche hatne lagi lekin piche khadi damdami se takra gayi…jaise hi palat ke dekhi to uski cheekh hi nikal gayi joro se…kyon ki damdami aur jhinga lala bhi apne asli roop me aa gaye the.

Shree (ghabra kar)—kkkkk…koun ho tum dono….?

Damdami—hahahaha…mujhe nahi pahchana…rajnandini…! Bhul gayi…main hi to tumhe yaha layi hu.

Shree—nahii…vo tum kaise ho sakti ho….? Uska chehra to alag tha….

Jhingalala—aur main vahi qaidi hu…ye sab jaal tumhe fasane ke liye hi to hamne bichhaya tha…rajnandini.. hahahaha

Shree—kkk…koun rajnandini….? Mera naam shree hai…rajnandini nahi…tum logo ko jarur dhokha hua hai

Azgar—dhokha to aaj tak tum hame deti aayi ho rajnandini….lekin ab nahi…vaise ab bhi waqt hai..maan lo meri baat…main tumhe apni rani bana kar rakhunga….warna rakhail ban ke rahna padega meri…hahahaha

Shree—nahiii…main kitni baar kahu ki main shree hu.shree hu….rajnandini nahi hu….main usko janti bhi nahi

Azgar dhire dhire shree ki taraf badhane laga aur shree darte huye vaha se bhagne ki koshish karne lagi lekin tabhi unke samne kilwish aur jaykal aa gaye….shree ek bar phir se darr aur khauf se cheekh uthi.

Kilwish—Andhera kayam rahe….kaha tak hamse bhagogi rajnandini.

Azgar—andhera kayam rahega Kilwish…..Shaitan Jindabaddddd

Shree ab unn sabhi se charo oor se ghir chuki thi….vo mann hi mann apni bewqoofi par rone lagi ki yaha aa kar usne kitni badi galti kar di hai aur bhagwan ko madad ke liye yaad karne lagi.

Jabki azgar aur kilwish mann hi mann ye soch kar hairan aur pareshan the ki akhir rajnandini itni darri aur sahmi huyi kyo hai unko dekh kar….? Aur usne kisi ko pahchana kyo nahi….? Jabki rajnandini to kisi se darne walo me se nahi thi…aag ka gola hai vo....sadiya beet gayi lekin hum aaj tak usko pakad nahi paye…phir aaj ye itni sadharan jaisi kyo lag rahi hai….? Ya phir kahi ye adirishi ki mout ke gum me pagal to nahi ho gayi…..?

Ye sabhi prashna unn sabhi ke dimag me chahal kadmi kar rahe the….shree ab poori tarah se unn bhediyo ke beech me bebas ho chuki thi.

Shree (rote huye)—ddd…dekho chahe to mujhe jaan se maar do….lekin mere paas mat aana….adiiiiiiiii.

Vo apne aap ko khatam karne ke liye sath me laya hua chaku dekhne lagi lekin vo to uski pahuch se kafi door gira hua tha…..tab tak damdami aur jhingalala ne usko pakad liya.

Shree (chillate huye)—chhodo..mujhe…..adiiiiiiii

Kilwish—hahahahaha…..tumhe bachane ke liye ab vo jinda hi nahi hai…..hahahaha

Magar tabhi BOOMMMMM kar ke poori gufa ki chhat ud gayi….aur kisi adrishya shakti ne damdami aur jhingalala ko utha kar door phenk diya.

Achanak huye is hamle se sabhi hairan ho gaye….shree bhi chakit ho gayi….agle hi pal vahi haal jaykal ka bhi hua azgar aur kilwish charo taraf dekhne lage.

Azgar (jor se)—koun hai….kiski mout usse yaha khich layi hai…samne aa himmat hai to….?

Phir tabhi unke samne adirishi aa gaya….jise dekhte hi kilwish aur azgar to pachhad kha kar piche gir gaye….unhe vishwash nahi ho raha tha ki ye kaise ho sakta hai….? Jabki shree ne jaise hi apne samne adii ko dekha to vo khushi se cheekhte huye ro padi.

Shree (shocked)—adiiiiiiiiiii

Kilwish (hairan…mann me)—Andhera kayam rahe ki jagah ye roshni kayam rahe kaha se aa gaya….?

Azgar (mann me)—nahi ye nahi ho sakta….isko to main do baar maar chuka hu…ye jarur rajnandini ki koi maya hai..?

Adii ne shree ki taraf apni baahe phaila di…vo bhi chhoti bachchi ki tarah jor se kilkari marte huye bhag kar rote rote uski baaho me simat gayi.

Magar tabhi azgar ne uske charo taraf aag ki moti parat bana di....lekin adii ne pani ki power se usko bujha diya kilwish ne vampires ko uske charo taraf khada kar diya lekin unme se jo bhi adii ke paas aata vo unhe apni ankho se nikalne wali lal tarango se jalane laga.

Azgar—tu koun hai….? Jarur koi chhalava hai tu….? Ye le sambhal apne aap ko….hahahaha

Usne adii ke upar bade bade naago se prahar kiya....apne charo oor vishaile saanpo ko dekh shree darr gayi...lekin tabhi adi ne apni talwar ko yaad kiya aur vo turant uske hatho me apni roshni bikherte huye aa gayi.

Adi ne talwar ko jamin par jaise hi touch kiya to sabhi saanp uss roshni me jalne lage....jabki uss talwar ko dekh azgar aur kilwish dono chounk gaye.

Azgar (mann me chounk kar)—ye talwar iske paas….! Iska matlab ye adirishi hai.

Kilwish—adirishiiii

Adii ne talwar ka rukh jaise hi azgar ki oor kiya vo turant vaha se gayab ho gaya…kilwish bhi gayab ho ke bhag gaya unko bhagte dekh ye teeno bhi chupchap khisak liye.

Shree (rote huye)—tu kaha chala gaya tha..mujhe chhod ke…..itna naraz ho gaya tha…ek galti ki itni badi saza….?

Adii—main kisi se naraz nahi tha didi….main to bas apne aap se hi naraz tha…meri vajah se sab ke dil ko thes pahuchi….maine mummy ka dil dukhaya bas yahi gum tha.

Shree—tere jane ke baad tujhe pata hai ki mousi ki kya halat huyi….? Vo bechari to tere gum me aaj tak coma me hain.

Adii (shocked)—kyaaaa…mummy comaaa meee hainnnn….?

Shree (sisakte huye)—hmmmmmm

Adii—phir chalo jaldi…..vaise didi aap yaha kaise aayi..aur apke sir me ye chot kaisi…..?

Shree (sisakte huye)—vo jab chitra aur khatra ne bataya ki …(sab batate huye)…uske baad hospital me mujhe jaise hi hosh aaya to main vaha ki khidki se nikal kar bhag gayi…aur yaha a gayi ..ye soch kar ki main bhi ganga me kud kar apni jaan de dungi….lekin phir yaha aane ke baad mujhe yaad aaya ki chitra ne bataya tha ki usne kisi azgar ka naam suna tha jisne tere upar hamla kiya tha…..to maine soch liya ki marne se pahle uss azgar ko marungi, aur phir kudungi ganga me….main yaha sabse azgar ka pata puch rahi thi ki uss dhokhebaaz ladki ne jhuth bol kar mujhe yaha le aayi…..maine to socha tha ki azgar koi admi hoga lekin vo to janwar hai poora rakshas…achcha hua ki tum aa gaye warna vo aaj meri izzat…….

Adii—hmmm….to ye baat hai….khair chinta mat karo uss kamine ki mout apke hatho hi hogi

Shree—sach

Adii—hmmm

Shree (dhire se)—adii…mujhe tumse kuch kahna hai…

Adii—hmmm…kahiye

Shree (niche baith kar)—adii i love you very much……mujhe tumse shadi karni hai

Adii—chaliye ghar chalte hain…pahle mujhe mummy ko dekhna hai….iss bare me baad me baat karenge….mummy main aa raha hu…..apka beta aa raha hai…

Main jaise jaise ghar ki taraf badh raha tha meri bechaini dil me utni hi tez hoti ja rahi thi….ek dhundhla dhundhla chehra mere manas patal par har aage badhte kadam ke sath ubharta ja raha tha….na jane kya kashish thi uss chehre me ki mera dil uski ek jhalak pane ke liye machal ja raha tha.

Vahi hospital me achanak urmila joro se adii ka naam chillate huye coma se uth kar baith gayi…vahi haal megha ka bhi hua….urmila ko coma se bahar aate dekh doctor turant harkat me aa gaye aur uska treatment karne ki koshish karne lage…aur anand ko ye khush khabri batayi…agni ko chhod kar baki sabhi hospital ke liye nikal gaye … . rajnandini ko to iss samay khud ka hi hosh nahi tha…vo uss kamre me se bahar hi nahi nikli….

Urmila (cheekh kar)—adiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Megha—rishiiiiiiiiiiii

Urmila (doctor’s se)—ye kya kar ho mujhe…chhodo…..meraaa adiiii aa raha haii….maine abhi abhi dekha …vo mujhe mummy mummy bula raha tha……door hato…mujhe apne bete ke paas jana hai…..vo subah se bhukha hai…usne kuch khaya nahi hai…..dekho…vo aa raha hai…mera beta..

Nurse—madam koi nahi aa raha hai…pls aap leti rahiye.

Urmila (daant kar)—chup kar.....tujhe kya pata.....mera adii mujhse kabhi jhuth nahi bolta....usne mujhse abhi abhi kaha hai ki mummy main aa raha hu.....chalo door chalo...mujhe adii ke paas jane do...

Megha (khushi se rote huye)—sunaaa tumne ajit.... ? mera beta aa raha hai....vo aa raha hai

Ajit—ye tumhara vaham hai megha....tum aram karo..tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai..

Megha (bhavuk)—tum kya jano... ? tumhare paas maa ka dil nahi hai na...usne abhi mujhse kaha ki apka beta aa raha hai... haye main kaise sambhalu apne aap ko....kahi mere mere bete ko meri nazar na lag jaye...jaldi se kajal ki dibiya le aao.....main usse kala tika laga dungi....mera beta aa raha hai.....tum rahne do...main apni ankh ke kajal se hi tika laga dungi....

Dono pagalpan ki had paar kar chuki thi.....vo kisi ki baat sunne ko taiyyar hi nahi thi....aur antatah dono sabhi ko dhakka dekar tezi se hospital se bahar ki taraf bhagne lagi...doctor aur baki sab dono ko pakadne ke liye unke piche doude lage.

Dono kisi na kisi se takrate, girte padte rote paglo ki tarah badahawsh ho kar bahar bhag rahi thi....guards ne rokne ki koshish ki to dono ne unko niche gira ke aage nikal gayi....

Aalam ye ho gaya tha ki unke piche poora hospital ka staff bhi bhag raha tha....har koi dekhne wala yahi soch raha tha ki bete ke gum me dono pagal ho gayi hain...

Bheed me se koi—dono bete ki mout ke gum me pagal ho gayi hain..bechari..

Dusra—ek abhi come se bahar aate hi pagal ho gayi aur dusri to na jane kab se pagal hai..

Teesra—bhagwan ki leela aprampar hai bhai..

Uss samay kahi aas paas bahut sundar madhur geet baj raha tha....

"O...Re...Kanhaiyaaaa, Kis ko kahega tu maiyaaaa.....Kanhaiyaaa kisko kahega tu maiyaaa
Ek ne tujhko diya janam re, ek ne jeevan sanwaraaa....kanhaiyaaa kisko kahega tu maiyaaa"

Dono girte padte kisi se takra kar niche girne hi wali thi ki kisi ne unhe apni majboot bhujao me thaam liya.... vahi sab ki ankhe ashcharya aur hairat se khuli ki khuli rah gayi.

Zabardast bhavuk. Update Hai bhai ek Maa ka hirday kia hota hain aur usme ki halat hoti Hao iska bohat acche se pesh kia Hai aapne ab dekhna Hai ki dono matao ko kaisay sambhalta Hai aur megha aur urmila kaisay react karti Hai abhi ko lekar coz dono maut kw munh se Bahar aayi Hai Adii ke aane se. Aur kia hoga jab shree ka Sanna Rajnandine se hoga aur kia Rajnandine Adi aur rishi ka rehasya ko suljha payegi. Bohat mazedar mod pe khadi ho gayi Hai story.

 

[Naina]

Do din se need bilkul bhi nahi ho payi Jitu bhai update likhne me hi busy rah gaya, isliye iska update complete nahi kar paya...1000 words ke karib likha jarur hai magar 2000 words se niche ke update dene ka koi matlab nahi hai.....aaj office se aane me hi 11 baj gaya...abhi saand ka update likh raha hu...agle ek ghante me usko post kar dunga.....iska update kal hi de paunga bhai.

Health is wealth Anand ji... kam ke sath sath rest leni bhi jaruri hai... aap araam kijiye.. update ka kya hai... aaj nahi kal de dijiyega...

 

[Raguhalkal]

Health is wealth Anand ji... kam ke sath sath rest leni bhi jaruri hai... aap araam kijiye.. update ka kya hai... aaj nahi kal de dijiyega...

I AGREE

 

[RAAZ]

UPDATE-99​

Uss samay kahi aas paas bahut sundar madhur geet baj raha tha....

"O...Re...Kanhaiyaaaa, Kis ko kahega tu maiyaaaa.....Kanhaiyaaa kisko kahega tu maiyaaa
Ek ne tujhko diya janam re, ek ne jeevan sanwaraaa....kanhaiyaaa kisko kahega tu maiyaaa"

Dono girte padte kisi se takra kar niche girne hi wali thi ki kisi ne unhe apni majboot bhujao me thaam liya.... vahi sab ki ankhe ashcharya aur hairat se khuli ki khuli rah gayi.

Ab aage……

Dono bhagte huye jiski baho me ja kar giri vo unka apna hi beta adirishi tha….adii ko samne dekh kar sabhi ki ankhe hairat se khuli rah gayi….unhe apni ankho par yakin hi nahi ho raha tha.

Magar kahte hain na ki ek maa ke hriday me teesri ankh bhi hoti hai jo apni aulad ko pahchanne me dhokha nahi khati….vo apni santan ki har dukh taklif bhookh aur pyas ko bina kahe hi bhamp leti hai…aaj bhi vaisa hi kuch hua jise sab unn dono ka pagalpan kah rahe the lekin vo to unki teesri ankh ka chamatkar tha jisne apni aulad ke aane ki aahat ko koso door se hi pahchan liya tha.

Yah shakti kewal ek maa ko hi prapt hai….shayad yahi vajah hai ki bhagwan ko bhi maa ki mamta ka anand uthane ke liye baar baar dharti par janam lene ke ko vivash hona padta hai.

“Maa…” mere muh se bas itna hi nikla tha ki dono bina mera chehra dekhe hi dono taraf ke gaalo ko betahasha chumne lag gayi….dono ki ankho se jhar jhar karte huye anshuo ki ladi lagi huyi thi kintu ye khushi ke anshu the.

Urmila (rote huye)—tu aa gaya….meraa adii aa gaya….ummmm….ummm…tu kaha chala gaya tha…itna naraz ho gaya ki apni maa ko hi bhula diya……ye bhi nahi socha ki main kaise jinda rahungi….tere bin….main tere bina nahi jee sakti…tu to meri jaan hai adii…mere lal…uuummmmmm

Megha (rote huye)—mera beta aa gayaaa…..uuummmmm….kaha kaha nahi dhoonda tujhe….koi mandir, koi masjid nahi bachi jaha tere liye matha na teka ho……aisa koi pal nahi jab tujhe iss maa ke dil ne yaad na kiya ho…. Ab tujhe kahi nahi jane dungiii….apne aanchal me chhupa kar rakhungi tujhe….ummmm

Dono rote huye badbadaye ja rahi thi aur dono galo aur sir ko chumte bhi ja rahi thi…..aur main chup chap khada unko rote dekh kar bahut koshish ki lekin khud bhi apne anshuo ko bahne se nahi rok saka.

Adii (nam ankhe)—sorry maaa,..mujhse galti ho gayiii…ab main tumhe chhod kar kahi nahi jaunga…mat ro maa..dekh tumhara beta aa gaya hai.

Hum teeno ko rote dekh vaha moujud sab ki ankhe bhig gayi….unhe bhi pata nahi tha ki unki ankhe kab unhe daga de gayi….?

Maine jhuk kar dono ke pairo me gir gaya…..ek hath urmila ke pairo par to dusra megha ke pairo par….dono ne jaldi se utha ke mujhe apni chhati se chipka liya jaise koi bandar apne bachche ko chipka leta hai.

Shree ab tak andar nahi aayi thi..vo gate se hi chhup kar sab dekh rahi thi…uski bhi ankhe dawadol thi…anand aage aane me sankoch kar raha tha, megha aur ajit ke samne…..

Ajit—adii beta hum bhi to hain….dono usko chhod bhi do ab…hame bhi to mil lene do

Megha—chup raho…..abhi hamara dil nahi bhara hai

Lagbhag ek ghante tak vo mujhse aise hi lipti chumti rahi..shikayte karti rahi aur roti rahi….badi mushkil se maine unhe shant karaya…..unke kuch shant hone ke baad maine ajit aur anand ke pair chhuye…unhone bhi apne seene se kafi der tak lagaye rakha.

Anand ke seene me maine pashchatap ke dard ko bhali bhanti mahsoos kar liya tha…..vaise bhi unhe saza dene ka adhikar megha maa aur urmila maa ko hai….ek baap ka farz nibhane me unhone koi kami nahi rakhi kabhi bhi.

Iske baad main apne sabhi dosto se mila….khatra ne mere aage aa kar apne hath jode to maine usko apne gale se laga liya.

Khatra—malik aap aa gaye…? Bahut talsh kiya maine apko…?

Adii—pagle main tera malik nahi balki dost hu..samjha…aur main sab janta hu.

Chitra—adiii…mujhe maf kar do…sab kuch meri vajah se hua hai

Adii—nahi chitra…sab upar wale ki marzi hai…..vahi har kadi ko ek dusre se alag bhi karta hai aur phir milata bhi vahi hai.

Ab akhiri me bachi agni aur margret…..dono ki hi ankho me anshu the….agni ne aage badh kar mere pair chhu kar apni maang me laga liya aur maine utha kar usko apne seene se.

Agni (anshu bahate huye)—aaj meri tapasya safal ho gayi….aap ne mujhe apni iss dasi ko charno me jagah to de di.

Adii—rote nahi agni…aur tum meri dasi nahi balki meri patni ho….tumne aisa koi kaam nahi kiya jiske liye tumhe sharminda hona pade….balki gunahgar to tumhara main hu, jo tumhare prem ko pahchan nahi saka aur usse door bhagta raha hamesha…..ho sake to mujhe kshama kar dena.

Agni—aap kshama maang kar mujhe paap me mat daliye…..aap mere pati bhi hain aur mere parmeshwar bhi…. Aap se bada devta mere liye iss poore brahmand me koi dusra nahi hai.

Adii—tumhe patni ke roop me pa kar main dhanya ho gaya agni….main bhi kitna bada agyani tha jo iss heere ko nahi pahchan paya…tum sach me bahut sundar ho agni..

Agni se milne ke baad main margret ki taraf gaya….to usne apne dono hath jod liye rote huye…maine usko bhi apni baho me bhar ke samjhane laga….kyon ki main janta tha ki vo bachpan se hi mujhe bahut chahti hai…galtiya har kisi se hoti hain….maine use maaf kar diya tha bahut pahle hi…vaise bhi ab mere alawa uska tha hi koun…uske pagal hote hi uski mummy ne suicide kar li aur dad to uske pahle hi gujar gaye the.

Usko bhi samjhane bujhane ke baad maine shant kiya…phir mera dhyan shree ki oor gaya…to maine shree ko andar bulaya…..shree ko yaha dekh kar sab chounk gaye.(agni, khatra aur chitra ko chhod kar)

Adii—kya hua…? Ye shree hai..pahchana nahi kya…?

Shree—agni, margret..tum log mujhe bhool gaye kya…?

Anand (shocked)—par ye to abhi ghar me thi, tumhare room me baith kar jor jor se ro rahi thi…itna jaldi yaha kaise pahuch gayi….?

Franklin (shocked)—agar ye shree hai to phir vo koun hai jo tere room me teri photo liye ro rahi thi….?

Agni—vo…vo….Rajnandini hai

Shree (full shocked)—whatttttttttttttt…….raaajjjjjnandiniiiiiii……..? ab samjhiiiii ye baat haiiii

Sab (shocked)—rajnandiniiii…..? lekin vo to bilkul shree jaisi hai.

Itna sunte hi mere dil ki bechaini badi tezi se badhne lagi……meri ankho ke samne jhil milane wala vo dhundhla chehra dhire dhire saaf hone laga aur jaise hi vo saaf nazar aaya to meri ankho se anshu chhal chhala uthe…meri chetna mere niyantran se bahar ho gayi.

Adiii (rote huye jor se)—Rajjjnandiniiiiii

Main turant vaha se paidal hi daud pada ghar ke liye…..sab mere iss pagalpan par hairan ho gaye….kisi ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki achanak mujhe kya ho gaya.

Urmila (jor se)—adiiiiiiii

Megha—betaaaaaaa

Agni—aaj unhe mat rokiye….ho jane dijiye do dilo ko ek aaj…..bahut intazar kiya hai rajnandini didi ne iss pal ke liye aaj unn do dilo ke beech me koi mat aaiye…meri sab se yahi vinti hai.

Ajit—akhir koun hai ye rajnandini jo hamari shree ki hamshakal hai…..?

Agni—Rajnandini vo hai jiske pyar ne inhe dubara jindagi di…….rajnandini vo hai jisne apne vishwash ke anshuo se kabhi inki dhadkan ko band nahi hone diya…..rajnandini vo hai jiski vajah se inki saanse chalti hain…rajnandini unka pahla pyar hai….hazaro saal sadiyo purana pyar hai ye…..hazaro saal se vo iss pal ka intazar hi kar rahi hain…

Sab (shocked)—kyaaa kahaaaa….hazaro saallllll….?

Khatra—hmmmm….yahi sach hai.

Urmila—jaldi mere bete ke paas mujhe le chalo…mujhe kuch nahi sunna…mujhe adii ke paas jana hai

Anand—hmmm chalo jaldi

Main bilkul badhawash ho kar road par bhage ja raha tha…bas bhage ja raha tha…..na to mujhe road par aane jane wale vahan dikhayi de rahe the aur na hi beech sadak me lage huye electric pole….kabhi kisi ki gadi se takrata to kabhi kisi pole se…mujhe kisi ki awaz tak sunayi nahi de rahi thi iss samay.

Agar mujhe nazar aa raha tha to vo tha kewal rajnandini ka anshuo me bhiga hua chehra…..main jald se jald uske paas pahuchna chahta tha….doudte huye main raste me na jane kis kis se bhidta raha….aise hi bhagte huye phir kisi se bhid ke niche gir gaya lekin phir se uth kar bhagne laga…mujhe iss baat ka hosh hi nahi tha ki main abhi jisse takraya tha vo mujhe jor jor se awaz lagaye ja raha tha.

Ye koi aur nahi balki chuttad tha jisse main takra kar gira tha…..mujhe dekhte hi vo hairan rah gaya….lekin mujhe to kuch dikhayi aur sunayi de hi nahi raha tha..to main bhag kar aage nikal gaya.

Chuttad (chillate huye)—rishiiiiiiiii……ruk ja rishiiiiiiiiii….rishiiiiiiii

Aur mere piche piche chuttad bhi chillate huye doud pada….baki teeno dost jo paas ke tapre me chaay pi rahe the…jaise hi unhone chuttad ko rishi..rishi kah ke chillate aur bhagte dekha to vo bhi chaay phenk kar doud pade chuttad ke piche.

Vahi market me yaha vaha saroj aur deepa charo ki talash me bhatak rahi thi ki tabhi murugan ki nazar bhagte huye chuttad par pad gayi.

Murugan (jor se)—vo…raha….chuttad…..kahi se muh kala kar ke bhag raha hai…..teeno bhi hain piche piche….

Saroj (shocked)—kaha..kidhar…? are haann…sahi hai….chal deepa bhag inke piche..aaj pakadte hain inko.

Deepa—sahi kaha…chalo bhago jaldi se

Murugan--Lagta hai pakka kisi ka rape kar ke bhag rahe honge…piche jarur police lagi hogi…mujhe chhod do.. nahi to mujhe bhi police pakad legi.

Deepa (bhagte huye)—arey chup....tujhe kyo police pakdegi….tu parrot hai koi admi nahi hai samjha….?

Murugan—arey tum nahi janti….ye India hai…..agar pakda gaya to bees saal to mujhe yahi sabit karne me lag jayenge ki main admi nahi tota hu.

Jabki udhar rajnandini abhi bhi meri tasveer liye roye ja rahi thi…kabhi usko chumti to kabhi seene se laga leti to kabhi kuch badbadane lagti.

"Tere Libas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai, Tere Ehsaas Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tu Mere Paas Nahi Hai Phir Bhi, Maine Teri Yaad Se Mohabbat Ki Hai

Kabhi Tune Bhi Mujhe Yaad Kiya Hoga, Maine Unn Lamho Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Jinme Ho Sirf Teri Aur Meri Baate, Maine Unn Alfaaz Se Mohabbat Ki Hai

Jo Mahakte Ho Teri Mohabbat Se, Maine Unn Jazbaat Se Mohabbat Ki Hai
Tumse Milna To Ab Ek Khwab Sa Lagta Hai, Isliye Maine Tere Intazar Se Mohabbat Ki Hai"

Aur achanak tabhi jor se darwaja khula aur phir………

Wow Zabardast Anand bhai maza aa Gaya kayi kadiya jud gayi kayi uljhane sulajh gayi guttihiya khul aur jo baqi Hai shayad woh bhi jaldi khul jaayegi maza aa Gaya bhai. Bichde huay ka Milan hoga aur sath sath Purani dost bhi mileage naye shikwe shikayto ke sath aur woh manzar bada ki romanchik hoga jab Adirishi apni dhadkan apni ruh apni mohabbat se milega.

 

[RAAZ]

Do din se need bilkul bhi nahi ho payi Jitu bhai update likhne me hi busy rah gaya, isliye iska update complete nahi kar paya...1000 words ke karib likha jarur hai magar 2000 words se niche ke update dene ka koi matlab nahi hai.....aaj office se aane me hi 11 baj gaya...abhi saand ka update likh raha hu...agle ek ghante me usko post kar dunga.....iska update kal hi de paunga bhai.

Anand bhai aapke dedication ko thanks Kah ker Chita nahi karna chahta hoon Haan magar bhai dil khush Kar deta aap logo ka dedication dekh Kar hats off bro...
Really working very hard. Aao jaisay writers ki stories pad ke tension free mind ho jata hain aur maza aa jata aur. Upar se aap logo ka dedication aap logo ke liye respect paida karta Hai. Thanks ki jagah aapki sehat aur tandrusti ki dua karte hain.

 

[Govindsonic]

Jabardasttt update bhai


WAITING for next

 

[janu2016]

dost hum sab jante h ki aap likhne ke liye kitni mehnat karte ho,
to aap chahe to rest bhi le sakte h, quoki agar aap bimar ho gaye to itni sari gajab ki stories m break lag jayega.
so pls take ur time ane give the updates.