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[Zas23]

UPDATE-97​

Dono mayus hokar auto se utar ke office ke liye chal padi jo ki samne hi tha…..vahi rajnandini aur agni ko lekar khatra evam chitra hospital pahuch gayi.

Iss samay vaha anand ke alawa aur koi nahi tha urmila ke paas….khatra aur chitra ke sath jab usne agni ko dekha to chounk gaya…lekin jaise hi uski nazar rajnandini par gayi to vo usko shree samajh kar ashcharya aur hairangi se chair se girte girte bacha.

Theek ussi samay megha aur ajeet bhi urmila se milne hospital ke liye nikal pade….

Ab Aage…….

Anand (shocked)—Shreeeeeee…….?

Agni (pair chhu kar)—Pranam pita ji

Anand (hairani se shree ko dekhte huye)—hmmm…..sada khush raho…

Rajnandini (ankho ke ishare se)—agni ye koun hain….? Kya tumhare pita ji hain….?

Agni (dhire se)—didi ye unke pita ji hain …..mera matlab hai ki apke aur mere sasur ji hain.

Rajnandini—oohhhh

Rajnandini ne apne sir par pallu dal kar turant anand ke pair chhuye…..anand ki ankhe chhalak aayi jiski kuch boonde rajnandini ke sir aur hatho par bhi ja giri….apradh bodh ke karan ashirwad ke liye muh se koi shabd nikal hi nahi raha tha….phir bhi badi mushkil se usne koshish ki.

Anand—tum hameshaaaa kkkhush raho betiii

Rajnandini ke hatho me jaise hi anand ki ankho se anshu ke katre gire to vo chounk kar khadi ho gayi aur hairanagi se unki oor dekhne lagi.

Rajnandini—ye kya….? aap ro rahe hainnn…..?

Anand—kuch nahi beti..ye khushi ke anshu hain….tum nahi janti ki tumhe jinda dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai…..shayad mere upar apradho ka bojh kuch kam ho jaye.

Rajnandini (hairan ho kar mann me)—mujhe jinda dekh kar……? Lekin main to aaj pahli baar hi dharti lok me aayi hu..to inhone mujhe dekha kab…..? shayad rishi ne in logo ko bataya hoga mere vishay me…..ohhhh, rishi tum mujhe itna chahte ho….mujhe kabhi kabhi lagne lagta tha ki shayad tum apni rajnandini ko bhul gaye ho jo uski khabar bhi nahi le rahe….par tumne meri soch ko galat sabit kar diya……main bhi tumhe bahut bahut bahut pyar karti hu…

Khatra—sahab, aap chinta mat kijiye ab sab theek ho jayega.

Anand khatra se adii ke baare me puchne hi wala tha ki ....Tabhi vaha ajeet aur megha pahuch gaye….megha ki nazar ward room me ghuste hi anand par gayi to uske dil me ek tees ubhar aayi….uska dil apne bete aur shree ki yaad me tadap utha.

Ajeet uska dard samajh gaya aur usne megha ko na me ishara kiya to usne bhi anand ki taraf se nazare mod li aur urmila ki taraf badhi.

Lekin jaise hi kamre ke andar usne apne kadam rakhe vaise hi uski ankho ne shree (rajnandini) ko dekha to vo vahi par thithak kar ruk gayi.

Pahle to usne isko apni ankho ka fareb samjha aur do teen baar apni ankho ko meesa…lekin jab phir se ankhe kholi to uske samne shree hi nazar aayi.

Yahi halat ajeet ki bhi thi….dono hairani se kabhi shree ko to kabhi ek dusre ko dekh rahe the…..unki iss hairani ko anand ne door kar diya.

Anand—megha…..dekho bhagwan ne hamari sunn li…..hamari beti sahi salamat lout aayi hai.

Anand ki baat se megha aur ajeet ko ye vishwash ho gaya ki ye unki ankho ka bhram nahi hai.....unke samne unki apni beti shree hi khadi hai.

Megha (jor se chilla kar doudte huye)—meri bachchiiiiii.....

Ye ehsaas hote hi dono doud pade uski taraf aur megha ne rote huye shree ko apne hriday se chipka liya.....shree (rajnandini) ko bhi ye ehsaas bahut achcha aur apnapan jaisa laga....halanki usne megha aur ajeet ko pahchana to nahi tathapi itna to samajh hi gayi thi ki ye dono ka bhi rishi se koi na koi gahra rishta hai.

Ajeet—kaha chali gayi thi beti.....kaha kaha nahi talash kiya hamne tumhe......hamari to sab ummide hi dhumil ho chuki thi....pahle adii aur phir tumhe khone ke baad to jaise hum dono nishpran hi ho gaye the.

Megha (shree ko check karte huye)—tujhe kaha kaha chot lagi hai...dikha mujhe beti..... ? main abhi doctor ko bulati hu.

Anand—ye sab mere paapo ki saza hai....achcha hua beti jo tum sahi salamat vapis aa gayi warna main urmii ko kya muh dikhata..... ? kaise samna kar pata uski baato ka..... ? vo to bechari sach kya hai ye janti bhi nahi hai…sach pata chalne par pata nahi kya haal hoga uska…..? isse achcha to yahi hoga ki urmii ab kabhi coma se bahar hi na aaye....kyon ki sach vo bardast nahi kar payegi....pagli ne adii ke bina to jeena usne sikha hi nahi hai....ye sach uski jaan le lega.

Agni—Pita ji.....aap chinta mat kijiye....maa ji bilkul theek ho jayengi.....unka beta jinda hai.

Ajeet/anand (shocked)—kyaaaaaa......adiiiiiii jinda haiiiiii...... ?

Khatra—ji sahab.....mere malik jinda hain....

Anand aur ajeet poori tarah se chounk gaye....jabki megha jo ki shree ke check up ke liye doctor ko bulane ja rahi thi, agni ki baat sunte hi jadwat ho gayi.....use apne kano par yakin nahi hua jo usne abhi abhi suna.

Megha (palat kar turant)—kya kaha tumne abhi..... ? phir ek baar kahnaaa....

Chitra—Ye sach hai.....adii jinda hai.....unhe kuch nahi hua hai.....jaldi hi vo hamse milne ayenge..

Ajeet aur anand jaha ye khabar sunte hi hairani aur khushi se bhar gaye vahi megha ki ankho se itne saalo se bandha hua pani ka baandh phoot pada.

Megha jor se rote huye pachhad kha kar niche dhadam se gir kar achanak behosh ho gayi.....log kahte hain ki achanak dukh ki kisi khabar se logo ko heart attack aa jata hai....kintu kabhi kabhi achanak mili khushi ki khabar bhi heart attack ki vajah ban sakti hai......shayad itna bada khushi ka jhatka megha ka nazuk hriday bardast nahi kar saka.

Ajeet (chillate huye)—meghaaaaa.......doctorrrrr

Turant megha ko VIP cabin me treatment ke liye le jaya gaya......rajnandini ko to ye sab kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha lekin vo inta avashya janti thi ki sab rishi ke marne ki khabar se bahut dukhi hain...lagbhag ek ghanta chale treatment ke baad doctors bahar aaye.

Ajeet—doctor...kaisi hai meri patni....vo theek to hai na.

Doctor—dekhiye unhe heart attack aaya hai…..ab unki halat pahle se behtar hai….lekin abhi vo behosh hain… do se teen ghante baad unhe hosh aa jayega tab ek baar check up hone ke baad aap unse mil sakte hain…she is now all right.

Ajeet—thanks doctor.

Anand (bhavuk ho kar)—dekha urmii….hamara adii jinda hai….jinda hai tumhara adiii….dekhna vo jaldi hi ayega.

Ajeet—beti..tum shayad agni ho na…..?

Agni—Ji….par aap…..?

Anand—beti ye ajeet aur megha dono adii ke asli mata pita hain…..aur ajeet, tumhari bahu hai..adii ki patni.

Anand ki baat ne ek baar phir se sabhi ko ashcharya chakit kar diya….jaha ajeet adii ki shadi hone ki baat par chakit tha to vahi baki ye sun kar ki anand aur urmila, adii ke asli maa baap nahi hain.

Agni (shocked)—ye aap kya kah rahe hain pita ji….?

Anand—yahi sach hai beti….(phir anand ne sab ko poori baat shuru se bata di)

Anand ki poori baat sunn kar jaha sabhi ko uske upar pahle to bahut gussa aaya vahi megha aur urmila ki halat aur dard ka andaza hote hi unka hriday bhi dravit ho gaya.

Ajeet (khushi se)—meri bahu....mere bete ki patni.......

Agni (pair chhu kar)—pranam….maine apko pahchana nahi tha.

Ajeet—hamesha khush raho.

Agni ke baad rajnandini ne bhi ajeet ke pair chhu kar ashirwad liya….to bhala chitra kaha piche rahne wali thi..usne bhi dono ki dekha dekhi akhir ashirwad le hi liya.

Khatra (mann me)—tune pair chhu kar ashirwad kyo liya….? Vo dono ki mere malik ki biwi hain..unki baat alag thi lekin tu ek chudail hai……aaahhhhh

Anand—kya hua khatra….? Tum achanak gir kaise gaye….kahi chot to nahi lagi.

Khatra—nahi sahab …main theek hu.

Chitra (ghurte huye mann me)—tujhse maine kaha tha na ki mujhe bhi choti malkin bola kar aur izzat kiya kar meri ab dubara yaad rakhna nahi to phir patak dungi..samjha.

Khatra (mann me)—kya musibat hai….pata nahi iss musibat ko malik ne itne din kaise jhel liya…..?

Chitra (ankhe dikhate huye)—kyaaa kahaaaa..musibat….?

Khatra (mann me)—nahi..nahi..meri maa..maine kuch nahi kaha.

Anand—ajeet, aaj main bahut khush hu…..hamara adii jinda haiii….aur hamari beti bhi lout aayi hai…..poore hospital me mithayi baato……main bhi apni sabhi company ke employees ko poore ek saal ka bonus dunga iss mahine.

Ajeet—aap sahi kahte hain bhai sahab…..aaj ka din bahut hi shubh hai…..bas urmila bhabhi aur theek ho jaye to ye khushi duguni ho jayegi.

Sabhi behad khush the…lekin ek ghatna ki taraf shayad kisi ka dhyan nahi gaya tha ki kamre me baar baar adii ke naam ka jikra hone se urmila ke jism me kuch halchal bhi huyi thi.

Ajeet turant market chala gaya...mithayi lene.…aur rajnandini ne urmila ke pair chhu kar uske sirahane baith gayi aur urmila ke hatho ko apne hatho me le liya.

Rajnandini—aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye….apka beta bahut jald ayega apke paas…unhe kuch nahi hua hai…jivit hain vo…...lagta hai apke bete ko har kisi ko intazar karwane aur taklif dene me maza aata hai….lekin ab ki baar main aisa hargij nahi hone dungi.

Agni—didi aap maa ji ko theek kar do na..

Rajnandini—nahi agni…jisne dard diya hai usko hi dawa bhi dene do…..ye dukh ke badal jaldi hi chhat jayenge…phir ek naya savera hoga.

Iss baar urmila ke sharir me kuch tezi se move ment huyi jise sabhi ne dekha….sab ke chehro par ummid ki ek kiran dikhayi dene lagi…anand jo ki vahi khada tha, ye dekhte hi khushi se doctor ke paas bhaga….doctors ne sab ko bahar bhej kar urmila ka check up kiya..lekin unhe kuch khas improvement nazar nahi aayi.

Doctor (bahar aane ke baad)—dekhiye kuch halki fulki improvement to jarur huyi lagti hai…halanki abhi to kuch nazar nahi aa raha hai….hame ummid ka daman nahi chhodna chahiye….ho sakta hai ki kuch major improvement jaldi hi dekhne ko mil jaye.

Anand—ok doctor

Ajeet ne poore hospital me mithayi batwana start kar diya tha….lagbhag do ghante baad megha bhi hosh me aa gayi aur hosh me aate hi ek baar phir se uski ankho se ganga jamuna ki jal dhara bah nikli.

Megha (rote huye)—kaha hai mera beta….? Mujhe mere rishi ke paas le chalo….uske paida hone se aaj tak meri ankhe usko dekhne ke liye taras rahi hain…..mujhe mere bete ke paas jana hai.

Ajeet—nahii megha..leti raho.

Megha bistar se uth kar bahar ki oor bhagne lagi rote rote….usko iss samay sambhalna aur samjha pana behad mushkil ho raha tha…..usne bas ek hi jid pakad li thi ki usko rishi ke paas jana hai….majburan doctors ne usko need ka injection laga kar shant kiya.

Ajeet—beti tum sab ghar chalo….kuch kha pi lo

Anand—haa beti….tum log ghar ja ke thoda fresh ho jao.

Kisi ka vaha se jane ka mann to nahi tha kintu unke baar baar kahne ke baad sabhi ghar chale gaye….poore ghar me har deewar par adii ki tasveer lagi huyi thi….ye kaam shree ka kiya hua tha.

Inn tasveero ko dekhte hi sabhi ki palake chhalak uthi….rajnandini to jaise khud ko hi bhul baithi thi….usko iss baat ka koi hosh nahi tha ki vo iss samay kaha hai, uske aas paas koun hai….usko kuch dhyan nahi rah gaya tha…vo to bas adii ki tasveero me hi kho gayi thi….uske kadam khud ba khud bina kisi ke kuch bataye hi adii ke uss room ki taraf badh gaye jaha adii ka poora saman rakha hua tha.

Kamre me rakhi har cheez jaise usko jani pahchani si lag rahi thi....vo adii ki har cheez ko bade dhyan se dekh rahi thi....khatra aur chitra bhi uske piche piche room me jane lage to agni ne unhe jane se ankho ke ishare se mana kar diya....

Kyon ki shayad usne sadiyo se dil me chhupe judayi ke dard ko rajnandini ki ankho me mahsoos kar liya tha….vah rajnandini ko iss samay ekant dena chahti thi jisse uske mann me daba dard ka gubbar kuch kam ho jaye adii ki cheezo ko apne karib dekh kar.

Rajnandini ki ankho se anshu lagatar bahte ja rahe the, par vo bilkul shant thi….har ek cheez ko uthati, usko chumti aur phir rakh kar dusri cheez dekhne lag jati.

Achanak uski nazar kapdo ke beech rakhi ek tasveer par gayi to uske sabra ka baandh toot gaya uss tasveer ko dekhte hi….ye adii ki hi tasveer thi jisme shree uske seene se lagi huyi thi….usne uss tasveer ko utha kar apne seene se chipka liya aur usko paglo ki tarah chumte huye fafak fafak kar rone lagi.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—mujhe maaf kar do rishi….kaha ho rishi….ab ye judayi mujhse sahan nahi ho rahi hai…aa jao rishi aa jao ab…ab inn saanso ka bojh mujhse nahi saha jata hai….sadiyo se to tumhare aane ki pratiksha karti aa rahi hu…ab aur kitna tadpaoge…..dil lagane ki itni bhi badi saza mat do rishi…ab to lout aao…..tumhe tumhari rajnandini ka vasta.

Aise hi rote rote raknandini, rishi ke sath bitaye huye apni pichhli yaado me khoti chali gayi.

Vahi england me margret ne raat me pahra de rahi do mahila police karmiyo ko sar me patthar patak kar jaan se maar diya aur pagal khane se bhag gayi.

Pagal khane se bhag kar vo ek baar phir se adii ke bunglow me pahuch gayi...par vaha to lock laga hua tha..... vo bunglow ke charo taraf ghum kar uske andar ghusne ka rasta khojne lagi.

Sanyog se aaj vaha se gujarte huye franklin aur daniel ne margret ko dekh liya aur turant uska picha karte huye vaha pahuch gaye.

Daniel (shocked)—margret tum.....yaha.. ?

Franklin—lagta hai ye aaj phir koi kand kar ke pagal khane se bhag aayi….?

Margret—mujhe adii se milna hai…koi usko bula do.

Daniel—par adii to marr chuka hai

Margret (daniel ki gardan pakad ke)—nahiii...adiii jinda hai....vo andar hai..apne kamre me so raha hai....(phir rote huye hath jod kar)—koi mujhe usse milne nahi deta hai.....dekho na kisi ne darwaje par lock bhi laga diya hai....adii mujhse naraz hai..main usse maafi mang lungi....bas ek baar mujhe andar chale jane do adii ke paas.

Margret ki aisi avastha aur uski dard bhari baate sun kar franklin aur daniel ki ankhe bhi bhar aayi..akhir adii unka bhi dost tha.

Franklin—par adii ke mummy papa to india chale gaye hain....yaha ab koi nahi rahta hai

Margret (hath jod kar)—to mujhe bhi india pahucha do..pls

Daniel—chal yaar india ghum hi aate hain…uncle aur aunty se bhi mil lenge…mera mann bhi bahut karta hai unke paas jane ka.

Franklin—ummm…chal to theek hai…..juliya ko bhi bula lo…aaj raat hi nikal chalte hain

Poori city me do logo ka murder kar ke margret ke pagal khane se bhagne ki khabar aag ki tarah phail gayi thi… ye jaankar franklin, juliya aur daniel ne samundra marg se margret ko sath lekar india ki oor rawana ho gaye.

Vahi dusri taraf adii guru vishwamitra se yuddh vidhya sikhte huye har roj kisi na kisi ko damnak ke ashram me bhej deta doodh lane ko.

Natiza damnak doodh ka naam sunte hi uss shisya ki jam kar dhunayi kar deta…antatah .pareshan ho kar damnak ne apni sabhi gaayo ko hi daan kar diya dusre rishi muniyo me.

Jabki radha nirantar kisi na kisi bahane se adii se milti rahti thi aur usko chhedne bhi lagi thi baat baat par…kintu adii ne uske prem prastav ko swikar nahi kiya tha ab tak.

Aaj vishwamitra shastra vidhya sikha rahe the adii ko lekin adii ka dhyan aaj kuch vichlit lag raha tha uska mann baar baar bhatak raha tha…Achanak uske seene me tez dard hona shuru ho gaya….

Vishwamitra—kya hua putra….? Tum itne vichlit kyo lag rahe ho….?

Adii—pata nahi gurudev….aaj mera mann mere vash me nahi lag raha hai…..seene me tez pida ho rahi hai… kisi ka dhundhla dhundhla sa chehra nazar aa raha hai lekin saaf nahi…jaise koi mujhe yaad kar raha hai.

Vishwamitra (mann me)—lagta hai ki aaj rajnandini ke sabra ka baandh toot gaya hai…..jaisi prabhu ki marzi…ab dono ke milan ki ghadi aa chuki hai….aur atyachariyo ke sarvanash ki.

Jabki ek anya sthan par ek ladki har kisi se azgar ka pata thikana puchte huye ghum rahi thi…..behad kroadh me thi vo…jaise ki aaj sab ko jala kar bhasm kar degi….uski kamar me ek bada sa chaku latak raha tha.

Tabhi uss ladki ke muh se azgar ka naam sun kar ek admi chounk gaya aur vaha se jane laga jaldi se..lekin uss ladki ne usko bhagte dekh liya aur turant uska picha kar ke uske samne pahuch gayi.

“Azgar kaha milega.” Uss ladki ne sakht lahze me pucha.

“Mujhe kya pata…..jungle me talash karo na ja kar…..aaaaahhhhhhhh” uss admi ne berukhi se jawab diya.

Lekin agle hi pal uss admi ke gale se ek dardnak cheekh goonj kar rah gayi…..uss ladki ne apni kamar me latke tez chaku se uski gardan ko kaat diya tha.

Aur iske baad vo aage badh gayi phir se azgar ka pata puchte huye.

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[Saif119]

Story kafi slow chal rahi he last kuch updates se. Kuch naya padhne nahi mil raha he plz thora aage lejao kahani

 

[Fighter]

Jabardast & Super & Gajab update bro

Aapne maa shad k 2 superb example diye h megha or urmila . in dono ki maa wali filling ko aapne itne achhe se dikhaya h ki mai usk bare me kya kahu

Ab aate raj nandini pr mujhe aapke lekh me sabse achhi baat yahi lagi ki aapne love filling or usk lekhan ko b super dikhaya h

Kya pyaar vo apne lover se itne dur hone pr b ek dusre k dard ko mahsus kr lete h

Y chitra to chhoti malkin bne bina nhi manne wali or Margret ab kuch tik dikh rhi h

Y kya radha ka dudh to gya lekin y asli radha kyo aadi me itna interest le rhi h , are usk pas pahle hi bahut h

Y kon h shayad shree ho ?


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[Rohan008]

UPDATE-97​

Dono mayus hokar auto se utar ke office ke liye chal padi jo ki samne hi tha…..vahi rajnandini aur agni ko lekar khatra evam chitra hospital pahuch gayi.

Iss samay vaha anand ke alawa aur koi nahi tha urmila ke paas….khatra aur chitra ke sath jab usne agni ko dekha to chounk gaya…lekin jaise hi uski nazar rajnandini par gayi to vo usko shree samajh kar ashcharya aur hairangi se chair se girte girte bacha.

Theek ussi samay megha aur ajeet bhi urmila se milne hospital ke liye nikal pade….

Ab Aage…….

Anand (shocked)—Shreeeeeee…….?

Agni (pair chhu kar)—Pranam pita ji

Anand (hairani se shree ko dekhte huye)—hmmm…..sada khush raho…

Rajnandini (ankho ke ishare se)—agni ye koun hain….? Kya tumhare pita ji hain….?

Agni (dhire se)—didi ye unke pita ji hain …..mera matlab hai ki apke aur mere sasur ji hain.

Rajnandini—oohhhh

Rajnandini ne apne sir par pallu dal kar turant anand ke pair chhuye…..anand ki ankhe chhalak aayi jiski kuch boonde rajnandini ke sir aur hatho par bhi ja giri….apradh bodh ke karan ashirwad ke liye muh se koi shabd nikal hi nahi raha tha….phir bhi badi mushkil se usne koshish ki.

Anand—tum hameshaaaa kkkhush raho betiii

Rajnandini ke hatho me jaise hi anand ki ankho se anshu ke katre gire to vo chounk kar khadi ho gayi aur hairanagi se unki oor dekhne lagi.

Rajnandini—ye kya….? aap ro rahe hainnn…..?

Anand—kuch nahi beti..ye khushi ke anshu hain….tum nahi janti ki tumhe jinda dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai…..shayad mere upar apradho ka bojh kuch kam ho jaye.

Rajnandini (hairan ho kar mann me)—mujhe jinda dekh kar……? Lekin main to aaj pahli baar hi dharti lok me aayi hu..to inhone mujhe dekha kab…..? shayad rishi ne in logo ko bataya hoga mere vishay me…..ohhhh, rishi tum mujhe itna chahte ho….mujhe kabhi kabhi lagne lagta tha ki shayad tum apni rajnandini ko bhul gaye ho jo uski khabar bhi nahi le rahe….par tumne meri soch ko galat sabit kar diya……main bhi tumhe bahut bahut bahut pyar karti hu…

Khatra—sahab, aap chinta mat kijiye ab sab theek ho jayega.

Anand khatra se adii ke baare me puchne hi wala tha ki ....Tabhi vaha ajeet aur megha pahuch gaye….megha ki nazar ward room me ghuste hi anand par gayi to uske dil me ek tees ubhar aayi….uska dil apne bete aur shree ki yaad me tadap utha.

Ajeet uska dard samajh gaya aur usne megha ko na me ishara kiya to usne bhi anand ki taraf se nazare mod li aur urmila ki taraf badhi.

Lekin jaise hi kamre ke andar usne apne kadam rakhe vaise hi uski ankho ne shree (rajnandini) ko dekha to vo vahi par thithak kar ruk gayi.

Pahle to usne isko apni ankho ka fareb samjha aur do teen baar apni ankho ko meesa…lekin jab phir se ankhe kholi to uske samne shree hi nazar aayi.

Yahi halat ajeet ki bhi thi….dono hairani se kabhi shree ko to kabhi ek dusre ko dekh rahe the…..unki iss hairani ko anand ne door kar diya.

Anand—megha…..dekho bhagwan ne hamari sunn li…..hamari beti sahi salamat lout aayi hai.

Anand ki baat se megha aur ajeet ko ye vishwash ho gaya ki ye unki ankho ka bhram nahi hai.....unke samne unki apni beti shree hi khadi hai.

Megha (jor se chilla kar doudte huye)—meri bachchiiiiii.....

Ye ehsaas hote hi dono doud pade uski taraf aur megha ne rote huye shree ko apne hriday se chipka liya.....shree (rajnandini) ko bhi ye ehsaas bahut achcha aur apnapan jaisa laga....halanki usne megha aur ajeet ko pahchana to nahi tathapi itna to samajh hi gayi thi ki ye dono ka bhi rishi se koi na koi gahra rishta hai.

Ajeet—kaha chali gayi thi beti.....kaha kaha nahi talash kiya hamne tumhe......hamari to sab ummide hi dhumil ho chuki thi....pahle adii aur phir tumhe khone ke baad to jaise hum dono nishpran hi ho gaye the.

Megha (shree ko check karte huye)—tujhe kaha kaha chot lagi hai...dikha mujhe beti..... ? main abhi doctor ko bulati hu.

Anand—ye sab mere paapo ki saza hai....achcha hua beti jo tum sahi salamat vapis aa gayi warna main urmii ko kya muh dikhata..... ? kaise samna kar pata uski baato ka..... ? vo to bechari sach kya hai ye janti bhi nahi hai…sach pata chalne par pata nahi kya haal hoga uska…..? isse achcha to yahi hoga ki urmii ab kabhi coma se bahar hi na aaye....kyon ki sach vo bardast nahi kar payegi....pagli ne adii ke bina to jeena usne sikha hi nahi hai....ye sach uski jaan le lega.

Agni—Pita ji.....aap chinta mat kijiye....maa ji bilkul theek ho jayengi.....unka beta jinda hai.

Ajeet/anand (shocked)—kyaaaaaa......adiiiiiii jinda haiiiiii...... ?

Khatra—ji sahab.....mere malik jinda hain....

Anand aur ajeet poori tarah se chounk gaye....jabki megha jo ki shree ke check up ke liye doctor ko bulane ja rahi thi, agni ki baat sunte hi jadwat ho gayi.....use apne kano par yakin nahi hua jo usne abhi abhi suna.

Megha (palat kar turant)—kya kaha tumne abhi..... ? phir ek baar kahnaaa....

Chitra—Ye sach hai.....adii jinda hai.....unhe kuch nahi hua hai.....jaldi hi vo hamse milne ayenge..

Ajeet aur anand jaha ye khabar sunte hi hairani aur khushi se bhar gaye vahi megha ki ankho se itne saalo se bandha hua pani ka baandh phoot pada.

Megha jor se rote huye pachhad kha kar niche dhadam se gir kar achanak behosh ho gayi.....log kahte hain ki achanak dukh ki kisi khabar se logo ko heart attack aa jata hai....kintu kabhi kabhi achanak mili khushi ki khabar bhi heart attack ki vajah ban sakti hai......shayad itna bada khushi ka jhatka megha ka nazuk hriday bardast nahi kar saka.

Ajeet (chillate huye)—meghaaaaa.......doctorrrrr

Turant megha ko VIP cabin me treatment ke liye le jaya gaya......rajnandini ko to ye sab kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha lekin vo inta avashya janti thi ki sab rishi ke marne ki khabar se bahut dukhi hain...lagbhag ek ghanta chale treatment ke baad doctors bahar aaye.

Ajeet—doctor...kaisi hai meri patni....vo theek to hai na.

Doctor—dekhiye unhe heart attack aaya hai…..ab unki halat pahle se behtar hai….lekin abhi vo behosh hain… do se teen ghante baad unhe hosh aa jayega tab ek baar check up hone ke baad aap unse mil sakte hain…she is now all right.

Ajeet—thanks doctor.

Anand (bhavuk ho kar)—dekha urmii….hamara adii jinda hai….jinda hai tumhara adiii….dekhna vo jaldi hi ayega.

Ajeet—beti..tum shayad agni ho na…..?

Agni—Ji….par aap…..?

Anand—beti ye ajeet aur megha dono adii ke asli mata pita hain…..aur ajeet, tumhari bahu hai..adii ki patni.

Anand ki baat ne ek baar phir se sabhi ko ashcharya chakit kar diya….jaha ajeet adii ki shadi hone ki baat par chakit tha to vahi baki ye sun kar ki anand aur urmila, adii ke asli maa baap nahi hain.

Agni (shocked)—ye aap kya kah rahe hain pita ji….?

Anand—yahi sach hai beti….(phir anand ne sab ko poori baat shuru se bata di)

Anand ki poori baat sunn kar jaha sabhi ko uske upar pahle to bahut gussa aaya vahi megha aur urmila ki halat aur dard ka andaza hote hi unka hriday bhi dravit ho gaya.

Ajeet (khushi se)—meri bahu....mere bete ki patni.......

Agni (pair chhu kar)—pranam….maine apko pahchana nahi tha.

Ajeet—hamesha khush raho.

Agni ke baad rajnandini ne bhi ajeet ke pair chhu kar ashirwad liya….to bhala chitra kaha piche rahne wali thi..usne bhi dono ki dekha dekhi akhir ashirwad le hi liya.

Khatra (mann me)—tune pair chhu kar ashirwad kyo liya….? Vo dono ki mere malik ki biwi hain..unki baat alag thi lekin tu ek chudail hai……aaahhhhh

Anand—kya hua khatra….? Tum achanak gir kaise gaye….kahi chot to nahi lagi.

Khatra—nahi sahab …main theek hu.

Chitra (ghurte huye mann me)—tujhse maine kaha tha na ki mujhe bhi choti malkin bola kar aur izzat kiya kar meri ab dubara yaad rakhna nahi to phir patak dungi..samjha.

Khatra (mann me)—kya musibat hai….pata nahi iss musibat ko malik ne itne din kaise jhel liya…..?

Chitra (ankhe dikhate huye)—kyaaa kahaaaa..musibat….?

Khatra (mann me)—nahi..nahi..meri maa..maine kuch nahi kaha.

Anand—ajeet, aaj main bahut khush hu…..hamara adii jinda haiii….aur hamari beti bhi lout aayi hai…..poore hospital me mithayi baato……main bhi apni sabhi company ke employees ko poore ek saal ka bonus dunga iss mahine.

Ajeet—aap sahi kahte hain bhai sahab…..aaj ka din bahut hi shubh hai…..bas urmila bhabhi aur theek ho jaye to ye khushi duguni ho jayegi.

Sabhi behad khush the…lekin ek ghatna ki taraf shayad kisi ka dhyan nahi gaya tha ki kamre me baar baar adii ke naam ka jikra hone se urmila ke jism me kuch halchal bhi huyi thi.

Ajeet turant market chala gaya...mithayi lene.…aur rajnandini ne urmila ke pair chhu kar uske sirahane baith gayi aur urmila ke hatho ko apne hatho me le liya.

Rajnandini—aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye….apka beta bahut jald ayega apke paas…unhe kuch nahi hua hai…jivit hain vo…...lagta hai apke bete ko har kisi ko intazar karwane aur taklif dene me maza aata hai….lekin ab ki baar main aisa hargij nahi hone dungi.

Agni—didi aap maa ji ko theek kar do na..

Rajnandini—nahi agni…jisne dard diya hai usko hi dawa bhi dene do…..ye dukh ke badal jaldi hi chhat jayenge…phir ek naya savera hoga.

Iss baar urmila ke sharir me kuch tezi se move ment huyi jise sabhi ne dekha….sab ke chehro par ummid ki ek kiran dikhayi dene lagi…anand jo ki vahi khada tha, ye dekhte hi khushi se doctor ke paas bhaga….doctors ne sab ko bahar bhej kar urmila ka check up kiya..lekin unhe kuch khas improvement nazar nahi aayi.

Doctor (bahar aane ke baad)—dekhiye kuch halki fulki improvement to jarur huyi lagti hai…halanki abhi to kuch nazar nahi aa raha hai….hame ummid ka daman nahi chhodna chahiye….ho sakta hai ki kuch major improvement jaldi hi dekhne ko mil jaye.

Anand—ok doctor

Ajeet ne poore hospital me mithayi batwana start kar diya tha….lagbhag do ghante baad megha bhi hosh me aa gayi aur hosh me aate hi ek baar phir se uski ankho se ganga jamuna ki jal dhara bah nikli.

Megha (rote huye)—kaha hai mera beta….? Mujhe mere rishi ke paas le chalo….uske paida hone se aaj tak meri ankhe usko dekhne ke liye taras rahi hain…..mujhe mere bete ke paas jana hai.

Ajeet—nahii megha..leti raho.

Megha bistar se uth kar bahar ki oor bhagne lagi rote rote….usko iss samay sambhalna aur samjha pana behad mushkil ho raha tha…..usne bas ek hi jid pakad li thi ki usko rishi ke paas jana hai….majburan doctors ne usko need ka injection laga kar shant kiya.

Ajeet—beti tum sab ghar chalo….kuch kha pi lo

Anand—haa beti….tum log ghar ja ke thoda fresh ho jao.

Kisi ka vaha se jane ka mann to nahi tha kintu unke baar baar kahne ke baad sabhi ghar chale gaye….poore ghar me har deewar par adii ki tasveer lagi huyi thi….ye kaam shree ka kiya hua tha.

Inn tasveero ko dekhte hi sabhi ki palake chhalak uthi….rajnandini to jaise khud ko hi bhul baithi thi….usko iss baat ka koi hosh nahi tha ki vo iss samay kaha hai, uske aas paas koun hai….usko kuch dhyan nahi rah gaya tha…vo to bas adii ki tasveero me hi kho gayi thi….uske kadam khud ba khud bina kisi ke kuch bataye hi adii ke uss room ki taraf badh gaye jaha adii ka poora saman rakha hua tha.

Kamre me rakhi har cheez jaise usko jani pahchani si lag rahi thi....vo adii ki har cheez ko bade dhyan se dekh rahi thi....khatra aur chitra bhi uske piche piche room me jane lage to agni ne unhe jane se ankho ke ishare se mana kar diya....

Kyon ki shayad usne sadiyo se dil me chhupe judayi ke dard ko rajnandini ki ankho me mahsoos kar liya tha….vah rajnandini ko iss samay ekant dena chahti thi jisse uske mann me daba dard ka gubbar kuch kam ho jaye adii ki cheezo ko apne karib dekh kar.

Rajnandini ki ankho se anshu lagatar bahte ja rahe the, par vo bilkul shant thi….har ek cheez ko uthati, usko chumti aur phir rakh kar dusri cheez dekhne lag jati.

Achanak uski nazar kapdo ke beech rakhi ek tasveer par gayi to uske sabra ka baandh toot gaya uss tasveer ko dekhte hi….ye adii ki hi tasveer thi jisme shree uske seene se lagi huyi thi….usne uss tasveer ko utha kar apne seene se chipka liya aur usko paglo ki tarah chumte huye fafak fafak kar rone lagi.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—mujhe maaf kar do rishi….kaha ho rishi….ab ye judayi mujhse sahan nahi ho rahi hai…aa jao rishi aa jao ab…ab inn saanso ka bojh mujhse nahi saha jata hai….sadiyo se to tumhare aane ki pratiksha karti aa rahi hu…ab aur kitna tadpaoge…..dil lagane ki itni bhi badi saza mat do rishi…ab to lout aao…..tumhe tumhari rajnandini ka vasta.

Aise hi rote rote raknandini, rishi ke sath bitaye huye apni pichhli yaado me khoti chali gayi.

Vahi england me margret ne raat me pahra de rahi do mahila police karmiyo ko sar me patthar patak kar jaan se maar diya aur pagal khane se bhag gayi.

Pagal khane se bhag kar vo ek baar phir se adii ke bunglow me pahuch gayi...par vaha to lock laga hua tha..... vo bunglow ke charo taraf ghum kar uske andar ghusne ka rasta khojne lagi.

Sanyog se aaj vaha se gujarte huye franklin aur daniel ne margret ko dekh liya aur turant uska picha karte huye vaha pahuch gaye.

Daniel (shocked)—margret tum.....yaha.. ?

Franklin—lagta hai ye aaj phir koi kand kar ke pagal khane se bhag aayi….?

Margret—mujhe adii se milna hai…koi usko bula do.

Daniel—par adii to marr chuka hai

Margret (daniel ki gardan pakad ke)—nahiii...adiii jinda hai....vo andar hai..apne kamre me so raha hai....(phir rote huye hath jod kar)—koi mujhe usse milne nahi deta hai.....dekho na kisi ne darwaje par lock bhi laga diya hai....adii mujhse naraz hai..main usse maafi mang lungi....bas ek baar mujhe andar chale jane do adii ke paas.

Margret ki aisi avastha aur uski dard bhari baate sun kar franklin aur daniel ki ankhe bhi bhar aayi..akhir adii unka bhi dost tha.

Franklin—par adii ke mummy papa to india chale gaye hain....yaha ab koi nahi rahta hai

Margret (hath jod kar)—to mujhe bhi india pahucha do..pls

Daniel—chal yaar india ghum hi aate hain…uncle aur aunty se bhi mil lenge…mera mann bhi bahut karta hai unke paas jane ka.

Franklin—ummm…chal to theek hai…..juliya ko bhi bula lo…aaj raat hi nikal chalte hain

Poori city me do logo ka murder kar ke margret ke pagal khane se bhagne ki khabar aag ki tarah phail gayi thi… ye jaankar franklin, juliya aur daniel ne samundra marg se margret ko sath lekar india ki oor rawana ho gaye.

Vahi dusri taraf adii guru vishwamitra se yuddh vidhya sikhte huye har roj kisi na kisi ko damnak ke ashram me bhej deta doodh lane ko.

Natiza damnak doodh ka naam sunte hi uss shisya ki jam kar dhunayi kar deta…antatah .pareshan ho kar damnak ne apni sabhi gaayo ko hi daan kar diya dusre rishi muniyo me.

Jabki radha nirantar kisi na kisi bahane se adii se milti rahti thi aur usko chhedne bhi lagi thi baat baat par…kintu adii ne uske prem prastav ko swikar nahi kiya tha ab tak.

Aaj vishwamitra shastra vidhya sikha rahe the adii ko lekin adii ka dhyan aaj kuch vichlit lag raha tha uska mann baar baar bhatak raha tha…Achanak uske seene me tez dard hona shuru ho gaya….

Vishwamitra—kya hua putra….? Tum itne vichlit kyo lag rahe ho….?

Adii—pata nahi gurudev….aaj mera mann mere vash me nahi lag raha hai…..seene me tez pida ho rahi hai… kisi ka dhundhla dhundhla sa chehra nazar aa raha hai lekin saaf nahi…jaise koi mujhe yaad kar raha hai.

Vishwamitra (mann me)—lagta hai ki aaj rajnandini ke sabra ka baandh toot gaya hai…..jaisi prabhu ki marzi…ab dono ke milan ki ghadi aa chuki hai….aur atyachariyo ke sarvanash ki.

Jabki ek anya sthan par ek ladki har kisi se azgar ka pata thikana puchte huye ghum rahi thi…..behad kroadh me thi vo…jaise ki aaj sab ko jala kar bhasm kar degi….uski kamar me ek bada sa chaku latak raha tha.

Tabhi uss ladki ke muh se azgar ka naam sun kar ek admi chounk gaya aur vaha se jane laga jaldi se..lekin uss ladki ne usko bhagte dekh liya aur turant uska picha kar ke uske samne pahuch gayi.

“Azgar kaha milega.” Uss ladki ne sakht lahze me pucha.

“Mujhe kya pata…..jungle me talash karo na ja kar…..aaaaahhhhhhhh” uss admi ne berukhi se jawab diya.

Lekin agle hi pal uss admi ke gale se ek dardnak cheekh goonj kar rah gayi…..uss ladki ne apni kamar me latke tez chaku se uski gardan ko kaat diya tha.

Aur iske baad vo aage badh gayi phir se azgar ka pata puchte huye.

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haha bhai ye ladki ka kya suspence daal diya aapne mazza hi aagya
brilliant update keep rocking margeret murderer ban gyi lekin uski haalat dekhte hue usko kuch khaas saza nhi hogi
sawaal ye h shree kaisi h ???
brilliant update bhai
keep rocking

 

[FRIDAY]

Nice update...
Story kaafi interesting more par hai.
Lagta hai bahut bada dhamakka hone wala hai.
Great going...
Waiting for next update...

 

[janu2016]

superb

 

[Sunilgupta]

Superb update

 

[Zas23]

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[Sudipkr]

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