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Recap-me dukhi apni duniya m baitha hua tha mujhe kaha pata tha ki ab 2 or ghatna ghatne wali h jo meri life hi badal dene wali h

ab aage

Baat kuch ayisi thi ki dadaji 12 13 gao ke malik type the halaki har gao ka apna ek mukhiya tha panchayat thi pr agar koi apni panchayat or mukhiya ke faisle se khush naa ho ya koi galat faisla ho to mamla dadaji tak aata tha

ek tarha se kaha jaa sakta tha ki dadaji hi in 12/13 gao ke supream cort or raja the
dadaji ne ab tak apne bade bete yani papa ko apna Uttar adhakari nahi banaya tha
(Ye is pertha ka niyam tha ki hamesha ki bada beta Uttar adhikari hota tha
or agar bada beta zimmedari lene se mana krde to kisi bhi bete ko uttaradhikari banaya jaa sakta tha)

Ya prmukh prdhan chahe to apne bade pote ko bhi gaddi ka varis goshit kr sakta h

dadaji hamesha se hi apne pote ko ye gaddi dena chahate the jaise unke dada ne unhe di thi

or is saal ki bhavya puja m sabhi gao ke mukhiya chahate the ki dadaji apne uttaradhikari ki ghoshna kre

(Ab aap soch rahe hoge ki ye bhavya puja kya h hamare 13 gao mil ke har 5 saal baad prachin mandir me ek bada sa yagya krte the jisse sare gao m sukh samridhhi aaye)

waise to har saal hi sab gao m alag alag puja ya yagya type hota tha pr ye alag tha isme sab gao sath aate the alag alag mukable hote the bada mela lagta tha
or dur dur se log mannat magne aate the khas kr nayi shadi wale jode (aate kyu the pata nhi)

(Kuch log soch rahe honge ki me faltu me chezo ko lamba krta hu or faltu m har chez ki explanation de raha hu pr ayisa nahi h agar kisi chez ka lena dena kahani ke present se nhi h to samajh jana ki woh kahani ke feature ke liye h ya may be , past ke liye kise pata😉)



Sabhi gao ke mukhiya- thakur sahab ham sabhi ne socha h ki aap is baar ke yagya m apne pote ko apna utter adhikari ghoshit kyu nahi kr dete
ab waqt tezi se badal raha h or ham chahate h ki marne se pahle apne agle raja ke darshan kr jaye

dadaji- thik h

dadaji ye bol kr ghar aa jate h dadaji kuch pareshan ho gye the unhone raat ko khana nahi khaya dadi ne pucha bhi pr dada ji ne unhe nahi bataya
raat bhar sochne ke baad dadaji ne ek faisla liya

agli subha sab log nashta kr rahe the

dadaji- sabhi mukhiya chahate h ki is baar ke mele m ham sabke samne apne uttaradhikari ki ghoshna kre

sab ye sunkr chouk gye the

dadi- ye aap kya bol rhe h ji aapko pata h naa woh ladka apshaguni h

chachi- haa papaji me bhi nahi chahati ki ghar ke kisi insaan pr koi khatra aaye

maa- papa ji ab waise bhi sirf ek saal hi to rah gya h abhay ke sharap ko khatm hone m
agar aapne abhi abhay ko nikal liya or mere Arav ko kuch ho gya to ( ma apne aankho me aasu liye boli)

dadaji- hamne kab kaha ham abhay ko nikaalne wale h hamne to kaha ki ham apne uttaradhikari ki ghoshna krne wale h

Sab- matlab

Dadaji- matlab ye ki is baar ki puja ke baad mele m ham apne pote arav ko apna uttaradhikari ghoshit krne wale h

bua- papa pr ye to galat h naa waise bhi abhay apka bada pota h

dadaji - kuch galat nhi h or waise bhi dono m sirf 5 minit ka hi to farak h

bua- par papa bada to abhay h naa sab sab jaante h

dadaji- tum kaise kah sakti ho abhay hi bada h waise bhi dono judwa h

bua- papa aap kise pagal bana rahe h hame yaa apne aapko woh dono bhale hi judwa h pr woh dono ek jaise nahi dikhte naa bachpan m naa ab or ham sab bachpan se hi jaante h kon bada h kon chota

dadaji- (gusse m )bas hamne kah diya naa ab bas wahi hoga

uske baad kisi ne kuch nahi kaha
pr shayad ghar wale bhul gye the ki ghar m koi or bhi h jo inki baatin sun raha h
ji ha sahi samjhe abhay yani me

Itna sab sunkr mera man bas marne ko hi kr raha tha
Mujhe zada nahi pr itna samajh aa gya tha ki jo shuru se mujhse mere bimaar hone wali baat batai gyi thi woh juth thi
or usse bhi zada jis baat ne mujhe dukh pahuchaya ki maa bhi mujhe bahar aane dena nahi chahati
mujhe samajh aa gya tha ki maa mujhe pyaar nahi krti or yahi baat mujhe sabse zada dard de rahi thi

halaki ayisa nahi tha ki kajal abhay se pyaar nahi krti thi kajal bhi abhay se pyaar krti thi bhale hi sabhi bacho m sabse kam pr krti zarur thi
pr kajal ka pyaar ab tak Arav ke liye itna bhad chuka tha ki baat jab Arav ki hoti to use kuch nahi dikhta tha

khair 10 dino m mela tha udhar pura ghar hi mele ki taiyariyo m busy raha

or idhar mene khana pina lag bhag chhod hi diya tha or agar m kha bhi leta to 1 2 ghante baad hi mujhe ulti ho jati
meri aankho ke niche kale kale nishan ban gye the m bilkul chuse hue aam jaisa ho gya tha

khair mela pura hua dadaji ne Arav ko apna uttaradhikari ghoshit kr diya

ab m abhay thakur dhananjay thakur ka bada pota ranveer thakur ka bada beta officeally sabki nazron m chota beta ho gya tha
Pr waise bhi kise is baat se farak padne wala tha mujhe to waise bhi koi nahi jaanta tha jaanta chodo mujhe to ab tak dekha bhi gine chune logo ne tha

Sab log apne apne kaam me busy the kuch office gye the dada bua panchayat ghar or bache school sabke jane ke baad gangu tai mujhe nashta dene aayi
jab gangu tai ne kamre me aane ke liye tala khol ke darwaza khola to

gangu tai ko samne hi m behosh pada mila

gangu tai- baba abhay baba kya hua aapko
pr mujhe naa hilte dekh zor zor se chillane lagi

gangu tai- malik Malik idhar aao koi madat kro

kismat se us waqt chote chacha apne collage jane ke liye nikal hi rahe the

chote chacha- aryy kya hua gangu tai kyu is umar me chillati rahti ho kisi din awaz ke sath hi pran nikal jayige

gangu tai- chote baba dekhiye abhay baba ko kya hua h

chacha ne jab mujhe dekha to woh bhi ghabra gye or mujhe leke bhage hosptial

2 ghante baad doctor's cabin

abhi tak mujhe admit kra diya gya tha doctor mujhe cheq kr chuke the ab mujhe bottle chada rahe the
gangu tai ne ab tak sab ko phone kr diya tha (ab kahani m 2003- 2004 kaa time chal raha h)
abtak mobile aa chuke the keypaid wale pr kam hi the hamare ghar m bhi bas 3 hi the 2 papa ke ek ghar pr emergency ke liye

dada or bua nikal chuke the hospital ke liye didi log abhi school m hi the or mom dad ne busy hone ka bol diya tha

Dadaji - kya hua h hamare pote ko doctor

doctor- ye baat to mujhe aapse puchni chaheye thakur sahab
kya kiya h aapne apne pote ke sath

bua- matlab aap kahna kya chahate ho doctor

doctor- matlab ye ke us bache ke test se hame pata chala h ki uske pet m pichle 6/7 dino se kuch nahi gya

bua- nahi doctor ye juth h ham khud daily reapoting krtte h uske khane pine ki ye ho hi nahi sakta

doctor- miss aapki reporting galat ho sakti h pr hamara test nahi or us bache ki to halat dekh kar hi pata chalta h ki uski halat sahi nahi h

dadaji- ab kya kiya jaye doctor


doctor- ab to m uske hosh me aane ke baad hi kuch kah sakta hu

Dusri taraf haveli pr......
sabhi bache ghar aa chuke the didi aate hi sabse pahle bura ke room m gyi pr waha bua nhi thi

didi- ye bua aaj abhi tak kyu nahi aayi abhay abhi andar tha to didi mere room ki taraf bhad gyi

Mujhe apne room me naa pa kr didi ghabra gyi or zor zor se awaz lagane lagi

kaanta chachi ,gangu tai ,champa didi
kaha ho aap sab
bolte hue woh halll m aa gyi

champa- kya hua jyoti baby aap itna kyu chilla rahi ho

Didi - mera bhai kaha h

champa- arav baba to room me h

didii- (gusse me) aap shayad bhul gyi h champa didi ki mera ek bhai or bhi h

ye sun kar champa hadbada gyi

champa- maaf krna baby ji mujhe laga ki
Fir champa ne sab bata diya

mere bare m sun kr didi rone lagi woh bas mere pass aana chahati thi

khair dusri taraf mujhe hosh aa chuka tha doctor baar baar mujhse baat krne ki koshish kr raha tha pr me uski baat ka koi jawab nhi de raha tha

asal baat ye thi ki me hamesha hi ek band kamre m raha tha mujhe naye cahre dekhne ki aadat hi nahi thi
me naye logo ke dekh kr dar jaya krta tha

doctor - thakur sahab is bache ko kisi baat se gahra Sadma laga h or ye shayad pahle se dipration me bhi h
uper se itni kamzori

dadaji- to kya kiya jaye doctor

doctor- meri maaniye to is bache ko kahi ayisi jagha bhej dijiye jaha khuli hawa ho pahad ho
or thodi thandi jagha ho

dadaji- pr hamare gao m bhi to khuli hawa h

doctor - thakur sahab aapka gao shahar ke pass hi h
Mushkil se 1 ghante ki duri h shehar se
m ise kisi ayisi jagha bhejne ko bol raha hu
jaha dur dur tak sahar ka (s) bhi na aata ho
tabhi ye ladka thik ho sakta h nhi to fir bhul jaiye apne pote ko

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ab kya dadaji abhay ko jane dige or kaisi hogi abhay ki aage ki zindgi
kya ab abhay ko koi pyaar mil payega yaa abhi kismat me dhoke or baki h
Nice and beautiful update....
 

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bhai apki story bahut badiya chal rahi he.kahanika main kirdar abhay uski jindagi ki ane vale din kase hoge he dekna hoga. Abhay age hero aya villain banke apane family ke samne ayega he age pata chalega.ap lekhak he ap hamse behetar jante he or ap apne tarike se he story age badaho ..
 
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bhai apki story bahut badiya chal rahi he.kahanika main kirdar abhay uski jindagi ki ane vale din kase hoge he dekna hoga. Abhay age hero aya villain banke apane family ke samne ayega he age pata chalega.ap lekhak he ap hamse behetar jante he or ap apne tarike se he story age badaho ..
Ye best commant h jo ab tak mila h

Ayise hi commant padhne m maza aata h pata chalta h ki samne wala dhiyaan se padh raha h

Or baat karu aage ki to maza aayega bane raho aaj koshish kruga ek update or de dun pr aaj light ka problem shayaad ek se hi kaam chalana pade
 

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Note ( ye kahani wahi se start hogi jaha meri last story khatm hui thi)

me marne wala hu, zindgi ke kuch aakhri pal chal rahe h mere
m 1000 fit ki uchai se ek khai me gir raha hu me jaanta hu itni uper se gir kr mere bachne ka koi chans nhi h

bhale hi tumhare liye ye mere aakri pal kuch sec.. ya minute ke jaise ho pr mere liye ye ek ek pal salo jaise bit raha tha

aksar logo ko kahte suna krta tha aryy bade acche admi the bas beti/bete ki shadi or dekh jate to accha hota ya
bas apne nati/poto ko goad me or khila jate to accha hota
ye or kr jate woh or kr jate pachpan se sunta aaya tha m jab bhi koi buzurg marta tha to log aksar ayisi baatin kiya krte the

logo se yaad aaya kam se kam unhe log yaad to kiya krte the
kitne khushnasib hote h na woh log jinhe log yaad krte h jinhe pyaar krte h

mere marne ke baad mujhe koi yaad krne wala nhi tha
ayisa nhi h ki m anath hu ulta me to bahut bade parivaar se hu
Maa baap bhai bhen chacha chachi dada dadi sab the .......
...or hote hue bhi nhi the

nhi samajh aa raha naa kya baat kr raha hu, haa tume kaise pata hoga mere bare m

tume to apne bare m mene bataya hi nhi

Hii me abhay hu or me 19 saal ka hu
Aapko ye to pata hi h me niche kaise gira(meri last story m padh lena)

Pr aapko meri puri kahani jaanne ke liye chalna hoga aaj se 19 saal pahle jab me paida hua tha haa tabise hi mera bura waqt shuru hua h

(Flashback)

19 saal pahle ek hospital me, Ranveer thakur(papa) idhar udhar chakkar kaat rahe the aaj woh 3ri baar baap banne wale the
unhe bechaini is baat ki nhi thi ki woh baap ban rahe h asal me to woh is baar ek bete ki umeed lagaye baithe the
pahle unki 2 batiya ho chuki thi pr unhe apna vansh chalane ke liye koi chaheye th
ayisa nhi tha ki Ranveer apni betiyo se pyaar nhi krta tha ulta woh to ek bahut accha pita tha pr kahte h naa beta beta hi hota h

kyu pareshan hote ho Ranveer dekhna is baar pota hi hoga

ye awaz thi Dhananjay thakur(dada ji) ki inhe bhi isbaar pote ki chahat thi kyuki inke 3 bete the (1chacha ki abhi shadi nhi hui h) or dono m se abhi tak koi bhi inhe pota nhi de paya tha chote bete ke bhi 1 beti hi hui h ab tak

Waqt bit raha tha or dusri taraf Ranveer or Dhananjay ki be chaini badhti jaa rahi thi
30 mint baad ek nurse bhagti hui aayi mubarak ho thakur sahab mubarak ho

ranveer- kya hua jaldi batao
Nurse - thakur sahab judwa bete hue h

bas itna sunte hi Ranveer to mano aasmano m tha usne 1 beta maaga tha Bhagwan ne 2 2 de diye Ranveer ne turant hi noto ki gaddi nikaal kr us nurse ko pakda diye

ranveer - jao or pure hospital m mithaiya batwado
dhananjay- ruko (nurse se)

nurse ruk gyi Dhananjay thakur ne apne gale se ye motiyo ki mala tod kr use dete hue kaha ye lo ye tumhare liye hamari tarafse nurse ki to mano chandi hi ho gyi woh apna maal pani leke chalti bani

(Abse rishte ke hissaab se hi chaluga ranveer ko m (dad) likuga dhannayjay ko (dadaji) i hope aap log samajh gye honge)

dada ji jaldi se telephone krne gye (abhi ye kahani 1999 or 2000 me chal rahi h) is time lade line wale telephone hua krte the woh bhi zada nhi the
dada ji ne ghar pr ye khabar di to ghar pr pura jashan ka mahol hi ban gya dadi apne do poto ko leke bahut khush hui
idhar dad doctor se puchke milne gye to dekha ki maa abhi leti hui thi or pass ke palne me do judwa bache the ek thodasa kamzor tha or dusra zada healthy tha papa ki aankho m aasu aa gye

maa- kya hua ranveer aap ro kyu rahe ho
papa- me bata nhi sakta kajal(mom) ki tumne kitni badi khushi di h mujhe me aksar hi maa pitaji (dada , dadi) ki aankho me pote ki chahat dekha krta tha jab bhi kisi ko pote ki dadai dete dekhte to
or sach kahu to ab mujhe bhi lagne laga tha ki jab hamari betiya shadi krke chali jayegi to ham aakele ho jayige
Maa- aap khush ho mere liye utna hi kafi h

thodi der m dada bhi aa gye unhone bhi apne poto se bahut pyaar kiya
isi tarha hasi khushi me 2 din beet gye
2din baad mom ko hospital se chutti mil gyi sab log haveli pahuche
haveli ko dulhan ki tarha sajaya gya tha
gao wale bhi khush the ki thakur sahab ke waris hue h

Kuch din tak pure gao ka mahol tyohaar wala tha
kuch din gao walo ki 1 time ki dawat bhi thi

or fir aaya woh manhus din jis din mera or mere bhai kaa naam karn hona tha
pr m us din ko manhus hi kahuga kyuki mere liye woh mere bure dino ki shuruwat thi

usdin hamare ghar Acharya ji aane wale the ye hamare liye khass the kyuki guruji or unka ashram hamare purvajo ke time se har chez m inki sahmat lete the
Inse pahle acharya ji ke guruji sab kiya krte the
pr 5 saal pahle unhone apni deh tyag di(saral shabo me bole to) mar gye
tabse hi acharya ji hamare pariwaar ke naye guru ban gye or 5 saalo m inhone kamaal hi kr diya ye bolte gye ghar wale busnesses kholte gye or bussness chalte gye tabse sabki inpe badi aastha h

papa - pirnaam guruji andar aaye sab aapka hi intzaar kr rahe h
guruji- hamesha khush raho putra

Papa or guruji andar aaye or sabne guruji se asirvaad liya

ab jab tak ye log guruji se baatin kr rahe h tab tak zara inka intro jaan lete h

sabse pahle aate h pariwaar ke hi nhi pure 12 gao ke mukhiya
dhananjay thakur - 50 lambe caude acche insaan h pr thakuro wala ghamand bhi h inme ek baar faisla le liya to fir to ye apne aapki bhi nhi sunte (purane zamane ke akshaya kumar)

dadi -savitri thakur 48 bhagwaan m bahut maanti h apne zamane m kamal ki dikhti thi

fir aate h mere papa - Ranveer thakur age 28 hight 6 ft thakur h to gore bhi h gussa bahut jaldi aata h
waise ghar m to bahut Sharif bante h pr kabhi kabhi kisi pr dil aa jaye to bahar muh maarne su bilkul nhi chukte

mom-kajal thakur 27 bussness man ki beti h to bussness inke khun m h papa ki or inki love marrage hui thi tabhi to 5 saal m dono ne 4 bache kr diye

chacha- Sanjay age 26 papa ke sath busness krte h shadi ko 2 saal ho chuke h 1 beti h inki

chachi - kamini 24 shadi ko 2 saal ho chuke h gareeb ghar se h jab chacha ne inhe dekhte hi passand kr liya or thakur sahab ke ghar se rishta aaya to kon hi mana krta

ab aati h bua - ramya age 22 saal abhi collage ka last year h dada ki ladli h (kabhi kabi sochta tha dada ne apne bacho m itna lamba space kyu liya)

ab aate h mere chote chacha alok - age 21 dada ki sabse choti or aakhri olad sabse chote h to dadi ke ladle h

ab zara bacho ki baar kr lete h sabse pahle meri badi didi (divya age 4 saal) fir meri choti didi (rani ,2 saal)
or fir aati h chacha ki beti (Avni 2, saal)

(ab mene aurto ke figure ki isliye baat nhi ki kyuki abhi zaruri nhi h)

to ab tak guruji or unke chelo ka khana pina nashta pani ho chuka tha ab bari thi naam-karn ki mujhe or mere bhai ko laga gya guruji ne dono bacho ko acchi tarha dekha or fir bole

pahle mote wale ladke ko dekh kr bole iska naam hoga (abhay)

or fir us kamzor ladke ki taraf dekh kr bole iska naam hoga (Arav)

Or uske baad guruji mene bhai ki kundli banane lage or banate banate bade hi khush nazar aane lage

or fir meri banane lage banate banate unki muskurahat jati gyi or woh chinta m dikhne lage

ghar ke sab log ye sab notice kr rahe the papa se zada der chup nhi raha gya unhone pucha

papa- kya hua guruji aap ek dum se pareshan kyu ho gye
guruji- ab tumse kya kahe ranveer hame khud samajh nhi aa raha
papa - kya hua guruvar koi parehsani h kya
guruji- (pahle to guruji kuch der shant rahe fir bole) tumhare ghar bhagya (kismat) or durbhagya ne ek sath janam liya h ranveer
dada- acharya ji bhi baat h use spasht (khul ke) kahiye

Guruji - aapka ye wala pota (mera bhai) bhut hi bhagya shali h jiske ghar m bhi jayega laxmi kaa waas hoga sukh or samriddi ka wass hoga iske pairo me ye nishan dekh rahe ho Ranveer (papa) ye swam bhagwaan ki kirpa h ispe

Tab jake sabne dekha ki mere bhai ke pair me ek laal nishan tha chota sa tirshul type ka ye dekhke sabki aankho m chamak aa gyi

fir meri taraf ishara krke bole jaha tumhara chota pota (mera bhai)
bhagya h wahi ye bada pota (me) durbhagya h iske karibiyo ka jiwan sakat m rahega ye sone ko bhi chuyega to patthar ban jayega or isse prem krne wale sadev dukhi hi rahige
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ab kya hoga abhay ke sath
(Bhai log tum log ko nhi pata ki me kitni mahnat kr raha hu is story ke liye to passand aaye to commnet krna)
Bhai ab tumhari last story kaun si thi kis naam se thi uska link to thaa dena chahiye ......tab to samajh aayega...
 
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Ye best commant h jo ab tak mila h

Ayise hi commant padhne m maza aata h pata chalta h ki samne wala dhiyaan se padh raha h

Or baat karu aage ki to maza aayega bane raho aaj koshish kruga ek update or de dun pr aaj light ka problem shayaad ek se hi kaam chalana pade
bhai me itana hi kahuga ki writer jab kohi story liktha he use us story ka the end pata hota he or us ke mutabik ho story age badatha he par aksar log us story ko apne hisabse dekte he parkhte he or apna sujav dete he or writer bi un sujav ko apne story me changes karta he he achi bat he par asar mene dekha he us story ka main polt change ho jata he.or phir logo ke negativ comment ate he or phir writer ka bhi man nahi hota story age badane ka liye mera kayena he ki ap apne hisabse story age likho.
 
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Recap-me dukhi apni duniya m baitha hua tha mujhe kaha pata tha ki ab 2 or ghatna ghatne wali h jo meri life hi badal dene wali h

ab aage

Baat kuch ayisi thi ki dadaji 12 13 gao ke malik type the halaki har gao ka apna ek mukhiya tha panchayat thi pr agar koi apni panchayat or mukhiya ke faisle se khush naa ho ya koi galat faisla ho to mamla dadaji tak aata tha

ek tarha se kaha jaa sakta tha ki dadaji hi in 12/13 gao ke supream cort or raja the
dadaji ne ab tak apne bade bete yani papa ko apna Uttar adhakari nahi banaya tha
(Ye is pertha ka niyam tha ki hamesha ki bada beta Uttar adhikari hota tha
or agar bada beta zimmedari lene se mana krde to kisi bhi bete ko uttaradhikari banaya jaa sakta tha)

Ya prmukh prdhan chahe to apne bade pote ko bhi gaddi ka varis goshit kr sakta h

dadaji hamesha se hi apne pote ko ye gaddi dena chahate the jaise unke dada ne unhe di thi

or is saal ki bhavya puja m sabhi gao ke mukhiya chahate the ki dadaji apne uttaradhikari ki ghoshna kre

(Ab aap soch rahe hoge ki ye bhavya puja kya h hamare 13 gao mil ke har 5 saal baad prachin mandir me ek bada sa yagya krte the jisse sare gao m sukh samridhhi aaye)

waise to har saal hi sab gao m alag alag puja ya yagya type hota tha pr ye alag tha isme sab gao sath aate the alag alag mukable hote the bada mela lagta tha
or dur dur se log mannat magne aate the khas kr nayi shadi wale jode (aate kyu the pata nhi)

(Kuch log soch rahe honge ki me faltu me chezo ko lamba krta hu or faltu m har chez ki explanation de raha hu pr ayisa nahi h agar kisi chez ka lena dena kahani ke present se nhi h to samajh jana ki woh kahani ke feature ke liye h ya may be , past ke liye kise pata😉)



Sabhi gao ke mukhiya- thakur sahab ham sabhi ne socha h ki aap is baar ke yagya m apne pote ko apna utter adhikari ghoshit kyu nahi kr dete
ab waqt tezi se badal raha h or ham chahate h ki marne se pahle apne agle raja ke darshan kr jaye

dadaji- thik h

dadaji ye bol kr ghar aa jate h dadaji kuch pareshan ho gye the unhone raat ko khana nahi khaya dadi ne pucha bhi pr dada ji ne unhe nahi bataya
raat bhar sochne ke baad dadaji ne ek faisla liya

agli subha sab log nashta kr rahe the

dadaji- sabhi mukhiya chahate h ki is baar ke mele m ham sabke samne apne uttaradhikari ki ghoshna kre

sab ye sunkr chouk gye the

dadi- ye aap kya bol rhe h ji aapko pata h naa woh ladka apshaguni h

chachi- haa papaji me bhi nahi chahati ki ghar ke kisi insaan pr koi khatra aaye

maa- papa ji ab waise bhi sirf ek saal hi to rah gya h abhay ke sharap ko khatm hone m
agar aapne abhi abhay ko nikal liya or mere Arav ko kuch ho gya to ( ma apne aankho me aasu liye boli)

dadaji- hamne kab kaha ham abhay ko nikaalne wale h hamne to kaha ki ham apne uttaradhikari ki ghoshna krne wale h

Sab- matlab

Dadaji- matlab ye ki is baar ki puja ke baad mele m ham apne pote arav ko apna uttaradhikari ghoshit krne wale h

bua- papa pr ye to galat h naa waise bhi abhay apka bada pota h

dadaji - kuch galat nhi h or waise bhi dono m sirf 5 minit ka hi to farak h

bua- par papa bada to abhay h naa sab sab jaante h

dadaji- tum kaise kah sakti ho abhay hi bada h waise bhi dono judwa h

bua- papa aap kise pagal bana rahe h hame yaa apne aapko woh dono bhale hi judwa h pr woh dono ek jaise nahi dikhte naa bachpan m naa ab or ham sab bachpan se hi jaante h kon bada h kon chota

dadaji- (gusse m )bas hamne kah diya naa ab bas wahi hoga

uske baad kisi ne kuch nahi kaha
pr shayad ghar wale bhul gye the ki ghar m koi or bhi h jo inki baatin sun raha h
ji ha sahi samjhe abhay yani me

Itna sab sunkr mera man bas marne ko hi kr raha tha
Mujhe zada nahi pr itna samajh aa gya tha ki jo shuru se mujhse mere bimaar hone wali baat batai gyi thi woh juth thi
or usse bhi zada jis baat ne mujhe dukh pahuchaya ki maa bhi mujhe bahar aane dena nahi chahati
mujhe samajh aa gya tha ki maa mujhe pyaar nahi krti or yahi baat mujhe sabse zada dard de rahi thi

halaki ayisa nahi tha ki kajal abhay se pyaar nahi krti thi kajal bhi abhay se pyaar krti thi bhale hi sabhi bacho m sabse kam pr krti zarur thi
pr kajal ka pyaar ab tak Arav ke liye itna bhad chuka tha ki baat jab Arav ki hoti to use kuch nahi dikhta tha

khair 10 dino m mela tha udhar pura ghar hi mele ki taiyariyo m busy raha

or idhar mene khana pina lag bhag chhod hi diya tha or agar m kha bhi leta to 1 2 ghante baad hi mujhe ulti ho jati
meri aankho ke niche kale kale nishan ban gye the m bilkul chuse hue aam jaisa ho gya tha

khair mela pura hua dadaji ne Arav ko apna uttaradhikari ghoshit kr diya

ab m abhay thakur dhananjay thakur ka bada pota ranveer thakur ka bada beta officeally sabki nazron m chota beta ho gya tha
Pr waise bhi kise is baat se farak padne wala tha mujhe to waise bhi koi nahi jaanta tha jaanta chodo mujhe to ab tak dekha bhi gine chune logo ne tha

Sab log apne apne kaam me busy the kuch office gye the dada bua panchayat ghar or bache school sabke jane ke baad gangu tai mujhe nashta dene aayi
jab gangu tai ne kamre me aane ke liye tala khol ke darwaza khola to

gangu tai ko samne hi m behosh pada mila

gangu tai- baba abhay baba kya hua aapko
pr mujhe naa hilte dekh zor zor se chillane lagi

gangu tai- malik Malik idhar aao koi madat kro

kismat se us waqt chote chacha apne collage jane ke liye nikal hi rahe the

chote chacha- aryy kya hua gangu tai kyu is umar me chillati rahti ho kisi din awaz ke sath hi pran nikal jayige

gangu tai- chote baba dekhiye abhay baba ko kya hua h

chacha ne jab mujhe dekha to woh bhi ghabra gye or mujhe leke bhage hosptial

2 ghante baad doctor's cabin

abhi tak mujhe admit kra diya gya tha doctor mujhe cheq kr chuke the ab mujhe bottle chada rahe the
gangu tai ne ab tak sab ko phone kr diya tha (ab kahani m 2003- 2004 kaa time chal raha h)
abtak mobile aa chuke the keypaid wale pr kam hi the hamare ghar m bhi bas 3 hi the 2 papa ke ek ghar pr emergency ke liye

dada or bua nikal chuke the hospital ke liye didi log abhi school m hi the or mom dad ne busy hone ka bol diya tha

Dadaji - kya hua h hamare pote ko doctor

doctor- ye baat to mujhe aapse puchni chaheye thakur sahab
kya kiya h aapne apne pote ke sath

bua- matlab aap kahna kya chahate ho doctor

doctor- matlab ye ke us bache ke test se hame pata chala h ki uske pet m pichle 6/7 dino se kuch nahi gya

bua- nahi doctor ye juth h ham khud daily reapoting krtte h uske khane pine ki ye ho hi nahi sakta

doctor- miss aapki reporting galat ho sakti h pr hamara test nahi or us bache ki to halat dekh kar hi pata chalta h ki uski halat sahi nahi h

dadaji- ab kya kiya jaye doctor


doctor- ab to m uske hosh me aane ke baad hi kuch kah sakta hu

Dusri taraf haveli pr......
sabhi bache ghar aa chuke the didi aate hi sabse pahle bura ke room m gyi pr waha bua nhi thi

didi- ye bua aaj abhi tak kyu nahi aayi abhay abhi andar tha to didi mere room ki taraf bhad gyi

Mujhe apne room me naa pa kr didi ghabra gyi or zor zor se awaz lagane lagi

kaanta chachi ,gangu tai ,champa didi
kaha ho aap sab
bolte hue woh halll m aa gyi

champa- kya hua jyoti baby aap itna kyu chilla rahi ho

Didi - mera bhai kaha h

champa- arav baba to room me h

didii- (gusse me) aap shayad bhul gyi h champa didi ki mera ek bhai or bhi h

ye sun kar champa hadbada gyi

champa- maaf krna baby ji mujhe laga ki
Fir champa ne sab bata diya

mere bare m sun kr didi rone lagi woh bas mere pass aana chahati thi

khair dusri taraf mujhe hosh aa chuka tha doctor baar baar mujhse baat krne ki koshish kr raha tha pr me uski baat ka koi jawab nhi de raha tha

asal baat ye thi ki me hamesha hi ek band kamre m raha tha mujhe naye cahre dekhne ki aadat hi nahi thi
me naye logo ke dekh kr dar jaya krta tha

doctor - thakur sahab is bache ko kisi baat se gahra Sadma laga h or ye shayad pahle se dipration me bhi h
uper se itni kamzori

dadaji- to kya kiya jaye doctor

doctor- meri maaniye to is bache ko kahi ayisi jagha bhej dijiye jaha khuli hawa ho pahad ho
or thodi thandi jagha ho

dadaji- pr hamare gao m bhi to khuli hawa h

doctor - thakur sahab aapka gao shahar ke pass hi h
Mushkil se 1 ghante ki duri h shehar se
m ise kisi ayisi jagha bhejne ko bol raha hu
jaha dur dur tak sahar ka (s) bhi na aata ho
tabhi ye ladka thik ho sakta h nhi to fir bhul jaiye apne pote ko

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ab kya dadaji abhay ko jane dige or kaisi hogi abhay ki aage ki zindgi
kya ab abhay ko koi pyaar mil payega yaa abhi kismat me dhoke or baki h
ye update badhiya tha yaha se shayad abhay apni family se dur ho jaye aur usne to soch bhi liya hai k usse koi pyar nahi karta to ho sakta hai wo dubara wapas aaye na aaye ya aaye bhi to aisa banke k use dubara koi pareshan n kar paye
 
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