Incest Bheed me akela (abhay)
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didi school se aake mere sath khelti thi
bua ka collage pura ho chuka tha or unke liye ladki dekhi jaa rahi thi chachu bhi apne 2nd year m pahuch gye the
meri choti bahne(rani,avni/matlab didi se choti aage apne aap samajh jana) bhi school jane lagi thi
Kyuki ab gharme krne ke liye zada kuch nhi hota tha to maa ne bhi papa ka office join kr liya tha woh bhi 8.30 se 2 tak office m hi hoti thi
Abhi tak mujhe ek room me hi rakha jaa raha tha mujhe sabke sath baithneke khane ki khelne ki or naa hi sone ki prmisn thi pr meri or didi ki zidd ki wajha se jis kamre m
mujhe rakha gya tha use bada kra diya gya tha
kyuki mera bhai ab 4 saal ka ho gya tha isliye uska admission kra diya gya tha
woh 7 se 12 school m rahta tha to me bahar ghar m ghum sakta tha bas mom ke pass or unke room ko chod ke m kahi bhi ghum sakta tha
mujhe zada to samajh nhi thi pr mujhe bataya gya tha ki m bahut bimar hu isliye sabke sath nhi rah sakta
mere ghar wale itne bhi bure nhi the ek room me jo kuch ho sakta h woh sab tha mere pass jo ek bache ka sapna ho sakta h
video.game,khilone, tum jo bolo woh sab tha mere pass
mera bhai school gya hua tha or me pure ghar me bhag raha tha kyuki mere room me games to bahut sare the pr m waha bahar ki tarha matti m nhi khel sakta tha sidhiyo pr nhi bhag sakta tha
Mujhe sidhiyo pr bhagna bahut passand tha kyuki is time zadatar log ghar se bahar hote or jo ghar m bhi hote woh khapi ke so jate the
mujhe kya pata tha ye sidhiyo pr bhagne. Wali passand mujhe le dubegi
ek din ayise hi m sidhiyo pr bhag raha tha or mera pair slip ho gya m gira or mera sar fut gya mere sar se khun nikal raha rha
ab mere liye pareshani wali baat ho chuki thi sar se khun nikal raha tha or ghar pr koi tha nhi or jitne bhi the unme se m kisi ke pass jaa nhi sakta tha
bua or dadaji panchayat jate the
chote chacha collage m the
Sare bache school m
mom,dad,bade chacha office m
gangu tai bhi abhi apne ghar gyi hui thi (unke pati vaiday h woh jadibutiyo or shanti ke liye kashmir side ek gao m apne bete or bahu ke sath shift ho gye the) gangu tai bhi har 2/3 mahine m milne chali hi jati thi
M jaanta tha dadi mujhe passand nhi krti woh meri wajha se 8 se 12 (jab tak mera bhai naa aaye) tab tak andar se apna room band krleti thi taki m unke room me naa jau
chachi se m bahut darne laga tha (hua kuch ayisa tha ki jab mujhe pahle din room se bahar laya gya to m bahut khush ho gya
kyuki mere liye to mera room hi meri duniya tha
pr jab mujhe room se bahar laya gya to mujhe laga ki ab m dhire dhire thik ho raha hu )
pahle din to bas ghar m bhagne m hi nikal gya
dusre din mene socha ki aaj m sabke rooms dekhta hu
isi liye ek ke baad ek rooms m jane laga likin jab me ek room me ghusa to
chachi- (chilla kr) teri himmat kaise hui yaha aane ki chala jaa or apna ye manhus cahra mujhe kabhi mat dikhana or agar aaj ke baad yaha aaya to kha jaugi tujhe m
chachi ki tez awaz se hi m dar gya tha or khane wali baat sun kr to m or bhayankar dar gya mujhe lagne laga tha ki chachi koi bhoot h
me kaanta maa ke pass jaa sakta tha pr is pure ghar m ab me sabse zada kaanta maa se hi Dara krta tha
kaanta maa sabke samne bahut hi acchi banti thi sabke samne mujhe bahut pyaar bhi kiya krti thi
pr aakele m mujhe hi pata tha ki woh orat kaisi h
aksar hi woh mujhe pita krti thi or pitte waqt bhi koshish krti thi koi nishan naa bane yaa mujhe ayisi jagha mare ki pade bhi to neshan dekhai naa de
aksar hi woh mere zakhmo pr namak laga diya krti thi
m bahut rota tha dil krta tha ki sabko bata dun pr woh dayan thi mujhe dar tha bataya to meri jaan bhi le sakti h
khair mere sar se khun tezi se bah raha tha me kitchen m gya champa ko dekhne kyuki mujhe laga woh ghar m hi hogi pr woh nahi thi
khair m kr bhi kya sakta tha chup chap sar pakad kr baith gya or khun bahne ki wajha se dheere dheere behosh ho gya
pata nhi fir kya hua pr jab aankh khuli to mere pass dadaji bua ji didi or chote chacha the
dadaji- kya hua aapko kaise lagi ye chot
me-(darte hue) woh dadaji m sidhiyo se gir gya tha
dadaji- to aap kitchen me kaise mile
me-(ghabrate hue) dadaji me gir tha pr mujhe chor lagi h mujhe ye nhi pata tha isliye kitchen m khana lene gya tha (juth)
meri jitni samajh thi or jitni akal thi us hisaab se bahana to mene maar diya tha
mujhe nhi pata ki unhe mujhpe yakin hua ya nhi pr ab mera bahar khelna dubara se band kara diya gya tha
me dubara apni duniya m wapas aa chuka tha (mere room m)
pr dubara m gir kr room m behosh naa ho jau is wajha se mere room me
cctv lagwa diya gya tha pr us time cctv utne high-tech nhi hote the isliye usme awaz nhi aati thi cctv mere room ke us hisse ko cover krta tha jisme mere khilone or video games rakahe the
cctv ka connection hall wale tv ke sath kr diya gya tha
pr mere ghar walo ko pata nhi tha ki jis c.c.t.v ko woh log mujhpr nazar rakhne ke liye lagwa rahe the wohi unki pareshani ka karan ban jayega
hua kuch ayisa tha ki ab tak mere bhai ko mujhse alag hi rakha gya tha halaki
jaha mujhe bataya gya tha ki meri bimari ki wajha se mujhe bahar nhi aane diya jata wahi
mere bhai ko bataya gya tha ki
me ganda bacha hu or mere sath nahi khelna chaheye or naa hi mere pass jana chaheye
isi wajha se bhai jab bhi hota tha tab didi or bua ya to mere pass aate nhi the yaa aate bhi to chup kr
ek din m video player m contra
khel raha tha screen hall m tha or mere bhai ne mujhe contra khelte hue dekh liya
Raat 9 bje
maa- Arav zidd nhi kro chup chap khana khao
arav- ni mom me nhi khauga aap sab juthe ho
mom- apna pgalpan band kro or khana khao
Dada ji- kya hua bahu kyu mere sher ko preshan kr rahi ho
arav - ni hu m aapka sher aap sab bure ho aap sab mujhse juth bolte ho
papa - aryy bhai kis ne juth bola bete se mujhe btao
ek hi to beta h mera kyu paresan krte h sab use
Ye baat sun kr mujhe bahut bura laga bura to is baat ka bua or didi ko bhi laga tha pr unhe is baat ki ab adat ho chuki thi papa kabhi mujhe apna beta nhi kahte the
mujhe to ye bhi yaad nhi tha ki woh kabhi mujhse kisi
festival pr bhi milne nahi aate the
(Ab aap sab soch rahe hoge ki me ye sab baatin kaha se sun raha tha mujhe to sabke sath khana khane ki parmisn nhi thi fir kaise)
asal baat ye thi ki mujhe jis kamre m rakha gya tha woh khass tha sound proof type jisme bahar ki awaz to andar aati thi pr andar ki awaz bahar nhi jati thi
yahi wajha thi ki kanta m mujhe kitna bhi Marti or m kitna bhi chillata kabhi awaz bahar nahi jati thi
arav - nhi papa aap bhi sabki tarha juthe h aap sabne kaha tha bhai ganda bacha h fir bhai ke pass video game kyu h woh pure din baith kr kelta rahta h
aap use punish kr rahe ho or woh andar enjoy kr raha h
mujhe to sirf 2 ghante video game khelne dete ho
is baat pr kisi ko kuch samajh nhi aaya ki kya jawab de
Itne m
rani didi ne bhi kaha- haa mom chotu sahi kah raha h woh ganda bacha h fir bhi uspe sab h woh bas enjoy krta rahta h
Isbaat pr Avni bhi undono ke sath bolne lagi
ghar walo ne is baat ko talne ki bahut koshish ki pr koi faida nhi hua akhir m Arav chair pr khada ho gya
arav- aap log meri baat manoge ya m khana nhi khauga
itna bol kr arav ne chair pr hi jump krne laga or uska blance bigad gya
arav chair se niche gir gya or use ghutne or sar pr mamuli si chot aa gyi
sab log- ek sath cheekheee aravvv
sab chikhe to ayise maar rahe the jaise duniya hi khatm ho gyi ho
arav ko chot lagte dekh papa gusse m aa gye
papa- ye sab us manhus ki wajha se hua h
itna bol kr woh mere room m aaye or mera pura game utha kr Zameen se maar diya
mere game ke parkhache udd gye
m dar ki wajha se kaap raha tha ghar me bhi kisi ki himmat nhi hui papa ko rokne ki sab log hall me dur khade hoke ye sab dekh rahe the
ayisi baat nhi h ki koi papa ko rok nhi sakta tha
pr shayaad aaj koi papa ko rokna chahata hi nhi tha
or jo log rokna chachare bhi the unki itni hasiyat hi nhi thi ki papa ke samne kuch bol sake
papa mujhe kha jane wali nazaro se dekh rahe the
agar nazron se khun hua krte to papa mujhe 100 baar maar chuke hote
Pr unhone mujhse kuch nhi kaha or woh chale gye us raat kisi ne khana nhi khaya or sab apne apne room me chale gye thodi der baad didi or bua aaye or mujhe chup kara kr chale gye
Halaki mujhe bhi khana sabke khane ke baad hi milta tha aaj bhi sabke jane ke baad gangu tai or champa khana laye the pr mene bahut thoda hi khaya dar ki wajha se
asal me papa ki aankho ka dar mere dil m baith gya tha
ab me room me akela tha or mere pass the mere do best friend Yoda or Pikachu (cartoon dolls)
Yahi mere do sabse acche dost the mere toys m se or mere Fev..... Bhi
me - Pikachu kya me kabhi sahi nahi houga
Kya m kabhi apne bhai behno ke sath nhi khel pauga
Kitna accha hota naa agar tum dono bhi baat kr sakte (Pikachu/Yoda) or chal fir sakte to ham sath me bahut Masti kiya krte
me- tume pata h Yoda mera koi friend bhi nhi h
ha haa tum dono to mere best friend ho hi pr koi khelne or bolne wala friend nhi h naa duffer
(Me aksar hi toys se kuch sawal kiya krta tha pr kyuki toys to bol nahi sakte isi liye khud hi dono taraf se bol liya krta tha)
Didi haa dini bhi meri friend h pr woh bhi to thodi hi der ke liye aati h na
me- tum dono ko to pata h meri kabhi birthday bhi nahi hoti
Or jab ghar me kisi ki birthday hoti bhi h to sab log bahar se lock kr dete h
(Taki koi galti se abhay ke room m naa jaye)
kitne boys or girls aate h bhai or didi logo ke birthday pr bahar se kitni masti krne ki awazain aati h naa
Prr woh log to mujhe bulate bhi nahi h
haa cake sahi m bahut tasty hota h naa
pr mujhe to sirf didi ke birthday ka milta h
abhi m apne toys se kuch or baat krta ki door khulne ki awaz aayi
or bas meri ruh tak kaap gyi me jaanta tha ye awaz kis chez ki h
raat ko jab bhi sabke sone baad kamra kulne ka matlab tha ki meri shamat ka aana
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ab konsi musibat aane wali h abhay pr
( Bhai log me bahut thankful hu ki aap log commant or like kr rahe ho pr agar aapko kahani me koi loop holes h to aap log point out kr sakte ho)
m koshish kr raha hu ki kahani m loop holes na chodu or har baat ka explanation aap logo ko deta hua chalu taki aap log kal ko ye naa kaho ye h to ye kaise ho gya woh h to woh kaise ho gya
pr fir bhi aapko kuch milta h to plzz commant kre
didi school se aake mere sath khelti thi
bua ka collage pura ho chuka tha or unke liye ladki dekhi jaa rahi thi chachu bhi apne 2nd year m pahuch gye the
meri choti bahne(rani,avni/matlab didi se choti aage apne aap samajh jana) bhi school jane lagi thi
Kyuki ab gharme krne ke liye zada kuch nhi hota tha to maa ne bhi papa ka office join kr liya tha woh bhi 8.30 se 2 tak office m hi hoti thi
Abhi tak mujhe ek room me hi rakha jaa raha tha mujhe sabke sath baithneke khane ki khelne ki or naa hi sone ki prmisn thi pr meri or didi ki zidd ki wajha se jis kamre m
mujhe rakha gya tha use bada kra diya gya tha
kyuki mera bhai ab 4 saal ka ho gya tha isliye uska admission kra diya gya tha
woh 7 se 12 school m rahta tha to me bahar ghar m ghum sakta tha bas mom ke pass or unke room ko chod ke m kahi bhi ghum sakta tha
mujhe zada to samajh nhi thi pr mujhe bataya gya tha ki m bahut bimar hu isliye sabke sath nhi rah sakta
mere ghar wale itne bhi bure nhi the ek room me jo kuch ho sakta h woh sab tha mere pass jo ek bache ka sapna ho sakta h
video.game,khilone, tum jo bolo woh sab tha mere pass
mera bhai school gya hua tha or me pure ghar me bhag raha tha kyuki mere room me games to bahut sare the pr m waha bahar ki tarha matti m nhi khel sakta tha sidhiyo pr nhi bhag sakta tha
Mujhe sidhiyo pr bhagna bahut passand tha kyuki is time zadatar log ghar se bahar hote or jo ghar m bhi hote woh khapi ke so jate the
mujhe kya pata tha ye sidhiyo pr bhagne. Wali passand mujhe le dubegi
ek din ayise hi m sidhiyo pr bhag raha tha or mera pair slip ho gya m gira or mera sar fut gya mere sar se khun nikal raha rha
ab mere liye pareshani wali baat ho chuki thi sar se khun nikal raha tha or ghar pr koi tha nhi or jitne bhi the unme se m kisi ke pass jaa nhi sakta tha
bua or dadaji panchayat jate the
chote chacha collage m the
Sare bache school m
mom,dad,bade chacha office m
gangu tai bhi abhi apne ghar gyi hui thi (unke pati vaiday h woh jadibutiyo or shanti ke liye kashmir side ek gao m apne bete or bahu ke sath shift ho gye the) gangu tai bhi har 2/3 mahine m milne chali hi jati thi
M jaanta tha dadi mujhe passand nhi krti woh meri wajha se 8 se 12 (jab tak mera bhai naa aaye) tab tak andar se apna room band krleti thi taki m unke room me naa jau
chachi se m bahut darne laga tha (hua kuch ayisa tha ki jab mujhe pahle din room se bahar laya gya to m bahut khush ho gya
kyuki mere liye to mera room hi meri duniya tha
pr jab mujhe room se bahar laya gya to mujhe laga ki ab m dhire dhire thik ho raha hu )
pahle din to bas ghar m bhagne m hi nikal gya
dusre din mene socha ki aaj m sabke rooms dekhta hu
isi liye ek ke baad ek rooms m jane laga likin jab me ek room me ghusa to
chachi- (chilla kr) teri himmat kaise hui yaha aane ki chala jaa or apna ye manhus cahra mujhe kabhi mat dikhana or agar aaj ke baad yaha aaya to kha jaugi tujhe m
chachi ki tez awaz se hi m dar gya tha or khane wali baat sun kr to m or bhayankar dar gya mujhe lagne laga tha ki chachi koi bhoot h
me kaanta maa ke pass jaa sakta tha pr is pure ghar m ab me sabse zada kaanta maa se hi Dara krta tha
kaanta maa sabke samne bahut hi acchi banti thi sabke samne mujhe bahut pyaar bhi kiya krti thi
pr aakele m mujhe hi pata tha ki woh orat kaisi h
aksar hi woh mujhe pita krti thi or pitte waqt bhi koshish krti thi koi nishan naa bane yaa mujhe ayisi jagha mare ki pade bhi to neshan dekhai naa de
aksar hi woh mere zakhmo pr namak laga diya krti thi
m bahut rota tha dil krta tha ki sabko bata dun pr woh dayan thi mujhe dar tha bataya to meri jaan bhi le sakti h
khair mere sar se khun tezi se bah raha tha me kitchen m gya champa ko dekhne kyuki mujhe laga woh ghar m hi hogi pr woh nahi thi
khair m kr bhi kya sakta tha chup chap sar pakad kr baith gya or khun bahne ki wajha se dheere dheere behosh ho gya
pata nhi fir kya hua pr jab aankh khuli to mere pass dadaji bua ji didi or chote chacha the
dadaji- kya hua aapko kaise lagi ye chot
me-(darte hue) woh dadaji m sidhiyo se gir gya tha
dadaji- to aap kitchen me kaise mile
me-(ghabrate hue) dadaji me gir tha pr mujhe chor lagi h mujhe ye nhi pata tha isliye kitchen m khana lene gya tha (juth)
meri jitni samajh thi or jitni akal thi us hisaab se bahana to mene maar diya tha
mujhe nhi pata ki unhe mujhpe yakin hua ya nhi pr ab mera bahar khelna dubara se band kara diya gya tha
me dubara apni duniya m wapas aa chuka tha (mere room m)
pr dubara m gir kr room m behosh naa ho jau is wajha se mere room me
cctv lagwa diya gya tha pr us time cctv utne high-tech nhi hote the isliye usme awaz nhi aati thi cctv mere room ke us hisse ko cover krta tha jisme mere khilone or video games rakahe the
cctv ka connection hall wale tv ke sath kr diya gya tha
pr mere ghar walo ko pata nhi tha ki jis c.c.t.v ko woh log mujhpr nazar rakhne ke liye lagwa rahe the wohi unki pareshani ka karan ban jayega
hua kuch ayisa tha ki ab tak mere bhai ko mujhse alag hi rakha gya tha halaki
jaha mujhe bataya gya tha ki meri bimari ki wajha se mujhe bahar nhi aane diya jata wahi
mere bhai ko bataya gya tha ki
me ganda bacha hu or mere sath nahi khelna chaheye or naa hi mere pass jana chaheye
isi wajha se bhai jab bhi hota tha tab didi or bua ya to mere pass aate nhi the yaa aate bhi to chup kr
ek din m video player m contra
khel raha tha screen hall m tha or mere bhai ne mujhe contra khelte hue dekh liya
Raat 9 bje
maa- Arav zidd nhi kro chup chap khana khao
arav- ni mom me nhi khauga aap sab juthe ho
mom- apna pgalpan band kro or khana khao
Dada ji- kya hua bahu kyu mere sher ko preshan kr rahi ho
arav - ni hu m aapka sher aap sab bure ho aap sab mujhse juth bolte ho
papa - aryy bhai kis ne juth bola bete se mujhe btao
ek hi to beta h mera kyu paresan krte h sab use
Ye baat sun kr mujhe bahut bura laga bura to is baat ka bua or didi ko bhi laga tha pr unhe is baat ki ab adat ho chuki thi papa kabhi mujhe apna beta nhi kahte the
mujhe to ye bhi yaad nhi tha ki woh kabhi mujhse kisi
festival pr bhi milne nahi aate the
(Ab aap sab soch rahe hoge ki me ye sab baatin kaha se sun raha tha mujhe to sabke sath khana khane ki parmisn nhi thi fir kaise)
asal baat ye thi ki mujhe jis kamre m rakha gya tha woh khass tha sound proof type jisme bahar ki awaz to andar aati thi pr andar ki awaz bahar nhi jati thi
yahi wajha thi ki kanta m mujhe kitna bhi Marti or m kitna bhi chillata kabhi awaz bahar nahi jati thi
arav - nhi papa aap bhi sabki tarha juthe h aap sabne kaha tha bhai ganda bacha h fir bhai ke pass video game kyu h woh pure din baith kr kelta rahta h
aap use punish kr rahe ho or woh andar enjoy kr raha h
mujhe to sirf 2 ghante video game khelne dete ho
is baat pr kisi ko kuch samajh nhi aaya ki kya jawab de
Itne m
rani didi ne bhi kaha- haa mom chotu sahi kah raha h woh ganda bacha h fir bhi uspe sab h woh bas enjoy krta rahta h
Isbaat pr Avni bhi undono ke sath bolne lagi
ghar walo ne is baat ko talne ki bahut koshish ki pr koi faida nhi hua akhir m Arav chair pr khada ho gya
arav- aap log meri baat manoge ya m khana nhi khauga
itna bol kr arav ne chair pr hi jump krne laga or uska blance bigad gya
arav chair se niche gir gya or use ghutne or sar pr mamuli si chot aa gyi
sab log- ek sath cheekheee aravvv
sab chikhe to ayise maar rahe the jaise duniya hi khatm ho gyi ho
arav ko chot lagte dekh papa gusse m aa gye
papa- ye sab us manhus ki wajha se hua h
itna bol kr woh mere room m aaye or mera pura game utha kr Zameen se maar diya
mere game ke parkhache udd gye
m dar ki wajha se kaap raha tha ghar me bhi kisi ki himmat nhi hui papa ko rokne ki sab log hall me dur khade hoke ye sab dekh rahe the
ayisi baat nhi h ki koi papa ko rok nhi sakta tha
pr shayaad aaj koi papa ko rokna chahata hi nhi tha
or jo log rokna chachare bhi the unki itni hasiyat hi nhi thi ki papa ke samne kuch bol sake
papa mujhe kha jane wali nazaro se dekh rahe the
agar nazron se khun hua krte to papa mujhe 100 baar maar chuke hote
Pr unhone mujhse kuch nhi kaha or woh chale gye us raat kisi ne khana nhi khaya or sab apne apne room me chale gye thodi der baad didi or bua aaye or mujhe chup kara kr chale gye
Halaki mujhe bhi khana sabke khane ke baad hi milta tha aaj bhi sabke jane ke baad gangu tai or champa khana laye the pr mene bahut thoda hi khaya dar ki wajha se
asal me papa ki aankho ka dar mere dil m baith gya tha
ab me room me akela tha or mere pass the mere do best friend Yoda or Pikachu (cartoon dolls)
Yahi mere do sabse acche dost the mere toys m se or mere Fev..... Bhi
me - Pikachu kya me kabhi sahi nahi houga
Kya m kabhi apne bhai behno ke sath nhi khel pauga
Kitna accha hota naa agar tum dono bhi baat kr sakte (Pikachu/Yoda) or chal fir sakte to ham sath me bahut Masti kiya krte
me- tume pata h Yoda mera koi friend bhi nhi h
ha haa tum dono to mere best friend ho hi pr koi khelne or bolne wala friend nhi h naa duffer
(Me aksar hi toys se kuch sawal kiya krta tha pr kyuki toys to bol nahi sakte isi liye khud hi dono taraf se bol liya krta tha)
Didi haa dini bhi meri friend h pr woh bhi to thodi hi der ke liye aati h na
me- tum dono ko to pata h meri kabhi birthday bhi nahi hoti
Or jab ghar me kisi ki birthday hoti bhi h to sab log bahar se lock kr dete h
(Taki koi galti se abhay ke room m naa jaye)
kitne boys or girls aate h bhai or didi logo ke birthday pr bahar se kitni masti krne ki awazain aati h naa
Prr woh log to mujhe bulate bhi nahi h
haa cake sahi m bahut tasty hota h naa
pr mujhe to sirf didi ke birthday ka milta h
abhi m apne toys se kuch or baat krta ki door khulne ki awaz aayi
or bas meri ruh tak kaap gyi me jaanta tha ye awaz kis chez ki h
raat ko jab bhi sabke sone baad kamra kulne ka matlab tha ki meri shamat ka aana
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ab konsi musibat aane wali h abhay pr
( Bhai log me bahut thankful hu ki aap log commant or like kr rahe ho pr agar aapko kahani me koi loop holes h to aap log point out kr sakte ho)
m koshish kr raha hu ki kahani m loop holes na chodu or har baat ka explanation aap logo ko deta hua chalu taki aap log kal ko ye naa kaho ye h to ye kaise ho gya woh h to woh kaise ho gya
pr fir bhi aapko kuch milta h to plzz commant kre
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Nhi bro ye puri tarha se nayi story h
Haa is form pr ayisi kuch ayisi storys h jisme starting m hero ka struggle dikhaya gya h pr woh storys kabhi puri nhi hui
Dusra un storys me ek sath bahut sare carackters introduce kra diye the jiski wajha se kuch important carackters ke sath story justice nhi kr payi
3rd in storys m bahut sare loop holes the isi liye m unhe kam krne ki koshish kr raha hu
Or apni taraf se full try kr raha hu ki aapko ek perfect story mile
MAD. MAX
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Bro story perfect jroor hogi
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Lekin
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Uske lye aapko pehle perfect hona padega
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Jb aap perfect hoge to update bi continue aayge
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Or
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Update continue hoge to aapke sath update apne ap perfect hojayge
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Baki aap writer aapki story
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In short
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AAP HE RAJA
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AAP HE MANTRI
bhai apki kahani acchi hai aur padne m bhi sahi hai bas ye kehna chahta hu k ap ye kahani puri karna kyuki update kahani m interest bohot hai readers ko yaha par aisi kahani likte to bohot log hai par adhuri chod dete hai ap aisa mat karna bas yahi request hai
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Bro m kahani to adhuri to nhi choduga but m me nhi chahata ki me kahani ka kabada kr dun
Mujhe abhise bolne lage h log ki maa ke sath sex mat dekhana bhen ke sath sex mat dekhana
Kuch chahate h ki bhen ko heroin rakhu
Hamhara ek bhai chahata h story m jitna sex ho adultery ho incest naa ho
To m ye sab ek sath ek hi story m kaise kr pauga mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha
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Bhai m ek din m 2 update de raha hu woh bhi lambe lambe
Is site pr mujhe yaad nhi ki koi daily update de raha ho or jo dete h woh bahut chote hote h
Mr.007
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Bhai aap ki story padhi bohot achhi hai par ab thoda fast time skip Karo taki Main story suru ho sake family drama hai to incest bhi hoga waiting for next update 