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Or kitne jaldi update chaheye aap log ko

Bhai mujhe or bhi kaam hote h

Ya fir admin se bolo paise de ek update ke 20 bhi dega to bhi chalega

Bhai story to superb hai aapki
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But 1 bat smj ni aarhe apna hero abi tk 11 saal bad bi waise ka waisa he hai esa Q bhai
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Mujhe lga ab tk to kuch behter bn gya hoga but ye to waisa he hai or khas bat koi pochne wala bi ni aaya hai use
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Apni half life to aanath rh ke bitadi ABHAY ne ab aage or kitna bechare ko manhoosta ka samna krega hero
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Such me yr mujhe bhot trs aarha hai hero pe
Or nfrt uske MAA or BAAP se

 

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Bhai story to superb hai aapki
.
But 1 bat smj ni aarhe apna hero abi tk 11 saal bad bi waise ka waisa he hai esa Q bhai
.
Mujhe lga ab tk to kuch behter bn gya hoga but ye to waisa he hai or khas bat koi pochne wala bi ni aaya hai use
.
Apni half life to aanath rh ke bitadi ABHAY ne ab aage or kitna bechare ko manhoosta ka samna krega hero
.
Such me yr mujhe bhot trs aarha hai hero pe
Or nfrt uske MAA or BAAP se

Isme se 1 sawal ka jawab agle hi update m h

Or use abhi tak kisi se pyaar ya nafrat isliye nahi h kyuki use pata hi nahi ki pyaar yaa nafrat hota kya h

Abhay ek ayisa bacha h jo bachpan se hi ek kamre m raha h or uske baad ek army hostle m
Usne Aaj Tak Arav ko hi dekha h jisse sab pyaar karte the

Ab jise pata hi nahi ki pyaar ya nafrat hoti kya h to woh kaise kisi se kuch krega

 

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Kajani waki me lajwab hai....
Kahani me mujhe lagta hai asali ldai do bhaiyo me hone wali hai jaisa ki ab lag raha hai..... Lekin mereko ek baat samjh nahi aayi ki jab guruji ne kaha ki abhay apane sath durbhagy lekar aaya hai to usaki jhalak to aapne dikhaya nahi sabhi log aankh mund kar unako bato ko follow karne lage ha alag baat hai ki usaki ma ki tabiyat kharab huyi par ye bhi to dekhiye ki usaki vajah aapne kya diya hai aur vah hai ki unhe apani nind na puri karne ki vajah usake baad to kuchh nahi huaa......aur Jisane bhi aawaj uthane ki koshish ki use bolane nahi diya gaya aur nahi abhay aur hi bachho jaisa tha kyoki use jo kaha jata tha vah karta bhi tha par bachhe chanchal hote hai vah kitana bhi dar jay par apane man ko mana nahi pate hai aur vahi karte hai jo unase na karne ke liye kaha gaya ho..... Khair sab thik hai kyoki jab use bahari ka gyan ya fir samjh nai hai to vah kya samjhega ki usake sath kya ho raha hai....
Ab to dekhana ye hai ki abhay jab ghar jata hai tab kya hota hai......
Mujhe lagata hai ki guruji ne bahut bada jhol kiya hai vah to aage pata chalega ki asal baat kya hai aur ha aisa mujhe lagta hai....
Abhay school me rah raha hai to kya sabhi bachhe pyar se hi rahte hai ki maarpit karte hai ya fir sabhi bachhe abhay ke jaise hi hai aur abhay ko aur bachho koi matlab dikhaya hi nahi hai aapne aur ye bhi ho sakta hai ki abhay hamesha alag raha hai fir bhi school ya fir hostel me aane ke baad bhi usake vyavhar ya fir usame koi bhi badlaw nahi aaya hai vah jaisa pahale tha vaisa hi hai militri school me padh raha hai to fiting to achhi khasi aati hogi vah alag baat hai ki abhay ke andar ki quality baad me dikhegi par aapne kahani ko bahut slow tarike se dikhaya hai to iatana to jankari banta hai aur waha school me hone wale compitition me bhi abhay ka kya role raha hai ya nahi raha hai vah bhi dikhana chahiye tha aur mujhe lagta hai ki jaisi aapki lekhan shaili hai us tarike se aap ye sab likhte aur abhay ko kisi bhi compitition me dikhate to kahani ko padhane me boriyat bhi mahsus nahi hoti aur hero (mere khyal se abhay hi hai) ko har samay ek jaise dekhane se chhutkara milata....
Aapko bata du ki reader jab kahani padhte hai to hero ki jagah khud ko mante hai to hero ko samay samay par thodi hi sahi par powerful dikha dete to aur bhi maja aata( vaise aapki kahani kaise aage badhegi ye aapke upar hai) vaise bhi xforum par ab adhiktar nai suru hone wali kahani hero ke bechargi ko dikhate huye hi suru ho rahi hai aur yah bechargi lekhak lambe samay tak khich le ja rahe hai .....
Aap kahani ko bahut hi achhe tarike se pes kar rahe hai par padhte vakt thoda boriyat lagta hai kyoki itane update padhne ke baad bhi koi twist dekhane ko nahi mila jisase aur bhi jyada boriyat ho jati hai par aapki story wakai me achhi hai jisase sabhi khiche chale aate hai.....
Mai bas itana hi kahana chahunga ki jo bhi is kahani ka hero ho (aarav, abhay ya fir koi bhi ho) pariwar me agar sex scene ho to usi ke sath ho kyoki jab kahani me randipana dikhata hai to kai log bhadak jaate hai aur comment karne lagte hai jisase writer bhi pareshan ho jata hai kyoki yaha sabse adhik log incest lover hai aur sex unhi ke sath padhana pasand karte hai jo kahani ka hero hota hai .......

Khair sab baato ko maine kewal apane kahani ko padhne ke hisab se kaha hai kyoki mujhe jaisa laga vaisa maine bataya kahani aapki hai aap apane hisab se kahani ko aage badhaiye kyoki aagar aap apane hisab se kahani ko aage badhayenge to kahani bahut dur tak jayegi aur aap confuse nahi honge....


Waiting for next.........

 

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Update- 9

No recap today_ _ _

Log kahte h ki duniya m kuch bhi ruk sakta h pr samay nahi
samay ka pahiya chalta rahta h

11 saal baad

Location mumbai Taj hotel

ankar - Ladys and geltalman please welcome ki jiye 1000 caror bussness club ke naye member
mr. Ranveeeer thakur ka

Ranveer stage pr jata h sabhi uska swagat taliyo se kar rahe the

ankor- to mr ranveer kaisa lag raha h aapko aaj thousand caror club me shamil ho kar

ranveer - aaj me bata nahi sakta ki me kitna khush hu
Mene kabhi nahi socha tha ki mera besness itna kaamyaab hoga ki woh 1000 caror tak pahuch jayega

ankor- sir log janna cahte h ki jaise har kamyaab admi ke piche ek aurat ka hath hota h
Waise hi aapke liye woh orat kon h

ranveer - waise to is baat me koi 2 ray nahi h ki meri biwi ke bina ye sab shayaad kabhi mumkin nahi hota
pr me apni kamyaabi ka pura credit apne bete arav ko dena chahuga
woh mere liye mra luckey charm h

ankor - haaahaaahaa sir apke dusre bete ne aapki baat suni to kahi woh bura naa maan jaye

ab itna bada bussness-man kam se kam apne bache to duniya se nahi chupa sakta

ranveer ne is sawaal ko bhi waise hi has kar taal diya jaise aaj tak abhay ke bare m taalta aa raha tha

khair party khatm ho chuki thi ranveer or kajal mumbai me bane apne banglow m aa chuke the

Ranveer- kajal aaj m bahut khush hu kal ham finelly haveli jaa sakte h
ab me apne hisse wale gao ke liye kuch karna chahata hu taki
aane wale time m raja sahab baki 3no pariwaro se zada hame mahattv de
fir me dikhauga un .......... Ko ki thakuro se takrane ka anjaam kya hota h

kajal - ham chal rahe h naa kal aap fikr mat kijiye
Mujhe bhi apni beti se jald se jald milna h 4 salo se ham bas bussness me busy ho gye
Bacho pr dhiyaan hi nahi de paye
Rani or Arav to hamare sath hi the pr divya me haveli nahi chhodi


ranveer - haa bacho se yaad aaya akhir hamare dono bache h kaha

kajal- rani to apne room me so rahi h
Or aapne sahabzade ka to aapko pata hi h

ranveer - hahahahaha sher h mera beta sher

Location mumbai race road

Bahut sari cars ek road pr bhag rahi thi
ye woh amirzade h jo raat ke waqt apni thodi raisi or tareef ke liye apni or duron ki jaan khatre m daal dete h

sabhi cars tezi se bhag rahi thi

Or waha khade sabhi log ek sath bas ek hi gana gaye jaa rahe the

log - let's go Arav clap clap clap clap clap yahi chez baar baar reapet kar rahe the

admi_1 - bhai akhir ye majra kya h cars to itni sari h fir sab log ek hi kaa naam kyu le rahe h

admi_2 - kyuki woh Arav thakur h or woh aaj tak kabhi nahi haara

admi_1 pr woh to bacha h naa

admi_2 - bacha bol raha h chutiye 16 ka h woh or m use pichle 2 saal se dekh raha hu pr aaj tak mene use kabhi haarte hue nahi dekha

or hua bhi wali jaisa us admi ne bola tha
jeetne wala koi or nahi Arav thakur hi tha

Abhi arav apne 2 doston ke sath khada tha


dost 1 - mubarak ho bhai akhir tu race jeet hi gya

dost 2- aryy race to Arav hamesha hi jeetta aaya h asli party to uncle ke 1000caror ke bussness khada karne ki banti h

dost 1- haa yaar Arav mubarak ho

arav - mujhe pata h dad ka bussness 1000 caror ka ho gya h isi liye ham kal mumbay to Tata krke apne gao jaa rahe h

Dost 1 - aryy bhai kya krega yaar waha jaa kar asli maze to idhar h naa

arav - ye bas bacho ke khel h asli race to waha shuru hone wali h

dost 1 - matlab

arav - kuch nahi chal party karte h

Location shimla

meow meow

Ek billi jo baraf ke pahad pr ek choti si jagha m apna balance banaye hue thi
woh billi kafi uchai pr thi giri to marna pakka tha
niche ek chota bacha khada ho kr to raha tha
shayaad ye billi isi ki thi

us jagha 5 7 log or khade the pr abhi garmi ka mousam tha or baraf pighalne ka khatra bhi isi liye ek billi ke liye koi ye zahmat uthana nahi chahata tha


abhi thodi der hi hui thi ki chat ki awaz ke sath woh baraf ka tukda tut gya or billi niche girle lagi
bache ne apni aankhain band krli

thodi der baad us ladke ke kaano m ek awaz aayi
meow
ladke ne aankhain khol ke dekha to
Ek ladka billi ko hatho me liye khada tha uske kapdo pr baraf thi
or paint pani me bhig gyi thi shayaad baraf sach m pighal rahi thi
ladke ki kismat acchi to bach gya

bacha - thank you bhaiya

ladke ne kuch nahi kaha bas ek smile krke ladke ke sar par hath fera or chala gya

abhi tak to aap samajh hi gye honge woh ladka m hi hu
abhay...

mujhe yaha rahte hue 11 saal ho chuke the
in 11 salo m bahar ki duniya m kya badla mujhe nahi pata tha
pr jis jagha m tha waha zada kuch nahi padla tha

bas ab yaha logo ke pass button wale mobile aa chuke the
mene suna h ki bahar to ayise mobile bhi chalte h jo ungli lagane se chalte h
pr yaha thand or baraf ki wajha se devlopment ruka hua tha

jabki ek time pr roseworld ki wajha se ye ilaka hi shimla ka sabse adhunik ilaka mana jaata tha
or ab pichda hua

roseworld ke halat bhi ab pahle jaise kaha rahe the
jaha pahle woh amir or kaidi bacho ki jail tha

ab to jaise amiro ne roseworld se apna naata hi tod liya tha
ab yaha bas kaidi anath or kuch middle class ke bache hi aaya karte the

m yaha ka sabse purana student ban chuka tha
kyuki kaidi bacho ko har kuch salo m alag alag jail m shift kr diya jata tha
anatho ko ya to addopt kar liya jata tha
ya fir kisi ayise anath asharam me bhej diya jata tha taki koi adopt kr le ya kuch ban sake

Ab bache woh bachhe jinki familys hua karti thi woh sabse kam rukte the
ya to bache apne pariwaar ko bana lete the ya pariwar hi apne bacho ko 1 2 saal se zada yaha rahane nahi dete the

ab yaha 4 5 logo ko chhod diya jaye to m hi sabse purana tha

in 11 salo me mujhe mere ghar mere pariwaar ki koi khabar nahi thi
m aaj bhi didi ke phone ka wait karta tha
ab to meri ummid bhi dum tod chuki thi
bas ek aas baki thi kyuki aaj tak mera pariwar meri hostel or school fee bhar rahe the

yaha tak ke har mahine ki 1 tarik ko meri pokit money 2000 rs bhi aa jati thi
principal sir har mahine mujhe bula kar paise pakda dete or kahte waha se msg aaya h waha sab theek h tum bas apni padai par dhiyaan do

mujhe pata hota tha sir juth bol rahe h unhe juth bolna nahi aata tha
kyuki har mahine same baat bolte the
pr mere liye itna hi bahut tha ki woh mujhe padha rahe the

Or mene bhi soch liya tha ki me unhe nirash nahi kruga
mujhe baki logo ki parwa nahi thi bas me cahta tha ki jab didi or bua mere number dekhe to unhe mujhpe proud ho

or kya pata mere number dekh kar or mujhe itne salo baad dekh kar woh log bhi mujhe pyaar kre
koi or naa sahi maa hi mujhe bas ek bar gale laga ke beta kahde mere liye kafi tha

aaj mera 12th ka result aane wala tha
or mene soch rakha tha ki 12 ke baad m apni family ke pass lout jauga

agar woh log mujhe ghar me naa bhi rakhna chahe to usi shahar m kisi hostel m rah luga kam se kam didi se mil to pauga or kabhi kabhi bua se
or fir chote chacha bhi mujhse milne aa hi jaya krige

me ek paid ke niche baith kr apne iklote dost se baat kar raha tha

yoda (mera toy) bachpan se mere sath tha
pikachu ko me didi ko de aaya tha

me- yoda thoda or ruk jaa fir ham ghar chalige didi ke pass Pikachu ke pass bua ke pass

me -- haa haa mujhe pata h bua ki shadi ho gyi h pr unki sasuraal chalige naa milne

or pata nahi kis kis bare m meri or yoda ki baatin hoti rahi

30 mint baad
abhay o abhay result ka time ho gya h principal bula rahe h


Jaisa mene aapko bataya ye ilaka abhi devlop nahi hua h yaha abhi bhi 2 g hi chalta tha woh bhi computer m jo sirf ek tha hamare yaha principal ke office m

khair me result dekhne gya or jaisa har baar hota tha m 1st aaya tha

principal - shabash abhay tumse hame yahi umeed thi

me- thank you sir

sir - 1 2 din me marksheet tumhe mil jayegi
aage tumhe kya karna h jo bhi cours karna ho uska form bhar do
me to kahta hu agar tum kaho to tume army camp me bhej deta hu bagal m hi h

me - nahi sir actually ab me apni family ke pass wapas jana cahta hu

meri baat sun kar sir ek dum se hadbada gye or fir thoda gusse se bole

sir - koi zarurat nahi h
tumhari family tumhari degree tak hostel or cours ka paisa bhar chuki h
agle or 4 saal tum kahi nahi jaa sakte

sir ka gussa dekh kar me thoda dar gya tha kyuki abhi tak mera or sir ka bond itne salo m bahut accha ho chuka tha

me - ok sir nahi jaata pr m apne pass hone ki khushi m kam se kam aaj to ek phone kar hi sakta hu naa

Sir - nahi uski koi zarurat nahi h tumhari family nahi cahti ki tum unse baat kro or tumhari padhai pr koi zor pade

or uske baad sir ne wahi apna salo purana dailog chipka diya mujhe

sir - tumhari family ne kaha h waha sab thik h tum fikr mat karna or apni padhai par dhiyaan dena

me - ok pr kam se kam aaj m bhar town ghumne to jaa sakta hu naa

sir - ok pr sirf 2 ghante or rules to yaad h naa tume

me - yes sir ladai jhagda nahi karna musibat se dur rahna ladkiyo ko mat dekhna or most important phone mat krna tume allow nahi h
Yaad h sir salo se sun raha hu aaj tak kiya h kya

or ye bol kar me nikal gya town ki taraf
15 mint baad
me 1 public phone boot ke samne khada tha
bhale hi sir ne mana kiya tha pr me aaj apni ye khushi didi ke sath baatna cahta tha

Me boot me ghusa or apne kaapte hatho se phone uthaya

( Ayisa nahu tha ki me aaj se pahle kabhi hostel se bahar nahi aaya tha
ya m pahle kabhi ghar phone nahi kar sakta tha
Bas baat itni si thi ki me cahta tha ki m kuch hasil kr ke hi ghar baat karna cahta tha)

mere hath abhi bhi kaap rahe the mera dil zoro se dhadak raha tha
aaj itne salo baad m ghar baat karne wala tha

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