Interesting story.bahut hi jaandaar romanch.Avinash kud hi rahasmai kirdar hai.
Interesting story.bahut hi jaandaar romanch.Bahut bahut shukriya kingkhankar bhai aapke is khubsurat review aur pratikriya ke liye,,,,Yahan do possibilities lag raha hye.
1. Avinash kisi manasik rog se predit hey jo us se chori aur rape karvata hey aur use yeh sab yaad nehi rahta baad mein.
2. Avinash ka hamshakal / Avinash ka mask pahna hua admi woh sab apraadh karke Avinash ko fasa raha hey.
Mujhe pata nehi aur koi possibilities ki. Dosto, aur kuch possible hey to bataiye.
Overall story full of suspense hey aur yeh character of Avinash jabardast hey.
Kudos TheBlackBlood
Aaj dopahar tak update dene ki puri koshish karuga vikrant bhai,,,,,Waiting for next update bro.![]()
Bahut bahut shukriya 23n24 bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,Interesting story.bahut hi jaandaar romanch.
Avinash kud hi rahasmai kirdar hai.
Pahle punishment fir begunah..Disclaimer
Ye story puri tarah kaalpnik hai aur kisi bhi insaan ke jeewan ya ghatna se iska door door tak koi sambandh nahi hai. Kahani me maujood paatra aur ghatnaye sab kuch lekhak ki maatra kalpana hai. Is liye sabhi se nivedan hai ki is kahani ko sirf manoranjan maatra hi samjhe aur ise padh kar lutf uthaye.
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BEGUNAAHDosto kaise hain aap sab.
Main ek baar fir se aap sabke saamne haazir hu ek nayi kahani ko le kar. Meri pichhli kahani THE PUNISHMENT ko aap sabne padha aur us par aapni apni pratikriya di jise dekh kar mujhe behad khushi huyi. Khair ab ek aur thriller kahani main yaha par shuru kar raha hu. Ummid karta hu ki aap sab ka sath hamesha ki tarah bana rahega aur kahani me jo bhi trutiya aapko nazar aayengi un trutiyo se aap sab mujhe rubaru karayenge.
BEGUNAAH ek thriller kahani hai. Is kahani me aapko bharpoor maza aaye aisi main koshish karuga. Jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain ki main apni story me sex daalne se parhej rakhta hu magar kuch aap logo ki ichchha aur kuch kahani me zarurat ke hisaab se sex daalna jaise meri majburi ban jati hai. Khair main bas itna hi kahuga ki aap sab is kahani ko padhe aur iske har update par apne vichaar athwa apni pratikriya zarur de. Aapke vichaar aur aapki pratikriya se mujhe khushi bhi milegi aur aage badhne ki ummid bhi bani rahegi.
!!Dhanyawaad!!
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Index banane ke liye itna jagah chhoda hai ...Res,,,,
Bahut bahut shukriya Chutiyadr sahab,,,,,Pahle punishment fir begunah..
Agali hogi begunah ko punishment
Congratulations subham urf masoom kumar bhai...
Aisa to sab karte hain yaha. Index to ek do me hi aa jata hoga magar spamming kar jate hain sab. Maine bhi kiya,,,,,Index banane ke liye itna jagah chhoda hai ...
Story 100 updates to chalne hi wali hai lag raha hai
Sayad kuch bhut / dayan/ pret uske undar ghus ke yeh sab kar raha hogaBahut bahut shukriya kingkhankar bhai aapke is khubsurat review aur pratikriya ke liye,,,,
Aapne isme do sambhaavnaao ki baat zaahir ki ye dekh kar achha laga. Khair aapki hi sambhaavna ki baat par ek sawaal hai ki agar avinash kisi maansik rog se peedit hai aur use kuch yaad nahi rahta to itna jaldi wo kaise sab kuch bhool gaya hoga.??? Baat agar ye hoti ki wo kaand karne ke baad so jata aur fir subah use jagaya jata ya fir uske sath maar peet ki jati tab ye socha ja sakta tha ki shayad use sab kuch bhool gaya hoga magar yaha par jo ghatna ghati wo usi wakt ka maamla tha. Agar dosi avinash hai to kaand karne ke baad wo itna jaldi kaise so jayega aur use sab kuch kaise bhool jayega.?? Sawaal to ye bhi hai ki agar usne kaand kiya hai to wo kaand karne ke baad kamre me ja kar kyo soyega balki wo to waha se rafu chakkar ho jayega na.??
Dusri sambhaavna aapki thik hai jo ki situation ke anusaar tark sangat hai. Khair dekhiye kya hota hai,,,,![]()