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Fantasy Battle through the Heavens [BTTH]
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Story to basdhiya chune ho bhai .
Behtarin waise ye super yodha se mel khata hai..
Story aage bhadhao likhe .I like the story.
Haan ye Chinese novel based hai English padha hun. Intezar rahega hinglish ke saath best
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Bhai super yoddha se match nahi hoti kyuki super yoddha khud ek copy hai ek novel ki jiska naam BATTLE THROUGH THE HEAVENS hai and pocket fm walo ne bas es story ko copy kara hai..
And yeh ek bahut purani novel hai and youTube par iska donghua matlab animated version bhi hai chao to woh bhi dekh sakte ho..
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Chapter - 5
Title - 3 Saal Baad ek chunauti
Do din beet chuke the Nalan Clan ke apmaan bhare sandesh ke baad. Poora Xiao Clan gusse mein tha — par Xiao Yan shaant tha… bahut shaant.
Yeh woh khamoshi thi jo tufaan se pehle aati hai.
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Morning – Training Hall
Xiao Yan (ab jo log usse Aarav ke naam se bhi jaane lage hain) ek training hall ke kone mein dhyaan mein baitha tha. Uski aankhon mein kuch alag hi tej tha.
Yao Lao ki awaaz uske dimaag mein goonji:
“Tumhari progress achee hai. Par agar Nalan Yanran se badla lena hai, to sirf strength nahi — naam bhi chahiye.”
Xiao Yan ne aankh khol kar poocha, “Naam?”
Yao Lao: “Naam ka matlab hai – ek identity. Agar tum Misty Cloud Sect jaake sirf ek disciple ko hara doge, to log bhool jayenge. Par agar tum ek Alchemist banke jaoge, to duniya dekhegi.”
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Alchemist Banane Ka Pehla Kadam
Yao Lao ne us raat Xiao Yan ko ek pill recipe di — “Qi Revitalization Pill” – jo basic Dou Qi ko double speed se grow karta tha.
Isse banane ke liye chahiye tha:
Flame Root
Moon Dew Grass
Essence of Red Fire Flower
Ye sab cheezein milti thi Wu Tan City ke alchemist market mein, jahan sirf bade log hi jaate the.
Xiao Yan ne socha, “Main kisi se maangunga nahi. Main khud kamaunga, khud seekhunga, aur khud banaunga.”
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Afternoon – Market Scene
Xiao Yan market gaya, ek purani cloak pehen ke, apna chehra chhupakar. Usne ek shopkeeper se poocha, “Moon Dew Grass kitne ki hai?”
Shopkeeper: “80 gold coins.”
Xiao Yan: “Itna mehnga?!”
Shopkeeper (taana maarte hue): “Alchemist banna hai? Tere jaise hazaar log aate hain.”
Xiao Yan chup raha, par usne note kar liya — power sirf muscles ki nahi hoti, market samajhne ki bhi hoti hai.
Usne chhoti moti trading se 3 ghante mein thoda paisa kamaaya, aur end tak saare ingredients le aaya.
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Raat – Pehla Alchemy Experiment
Yao Lao ne kaha:
“Apne Dou Qi ko flame mein badal. Tumhari Flame Mantra technique is waqt kiya jaa sakta hai.”
Xiao Yan ne haath uthaye, aur dhyaan lagaya.
Ek patli si blue flame uske haath se nikalne lagi — choti, lekin shuddh.
Pehla step: cauldron ko heat karo.
Doosra: ingredients ko proper order mein daalo.
Teesra: spiritual energy se unka fusion.
Do ghante tak ghani ghani ghantiyaan bajti rahi — kabhi kuch phat raha tha, kabhi kuch jal raha tha.
Lekin… aakhri moment pe, ek chamak hua!
Pop!
Ek chhoti, light green-colored pill, cauldron ke andar roll kar gayi.
Xiao Yan ne us pill ko haath mein uthaya, aankhon mein aansuon se zyada garv tha.
“Main Alchemist ban gaya…”
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Agla Din – Xiao Clan Hall
Xiao Yan ne sabke saamne khud announce kiya:
“Main Nalan Yanran ka challenge accept karta hoon. 3 saal baad, Misty Cloud Sect ke entrance pe, uske saath ek combat karunga. Agar main haarta hoon, to jo punishment tum chaho, le lena. Lekin agar main jeeta…”
“...to poora Bharatvarsh dekhega ki Xiao Clan ka naam kaise jagta hai!”
Sab elders shocked the. Log jinhone use loser kaha, ab chup the.
Xiao Zhan (uske pita) ne aankhon mein aansu lekar sir hilaaya. “Aakhir vo waqt aa gaya.”
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Chapter 5 Samaapt
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Next Chapter Hint:
Xiao Yan ki alchemy training ab ek secret master se advanced stage mein jaayegi.
Ek nayee ladki se mulakaat – jiski aankhon mein raaz chhupa hai…
Aur pehli baar… ek real battle!
Title - 3 Saal Baad ek chunauti
Do din beet chuke the Nalan Clan ke apmaan bhare sandesh ke baad. Poora Xiao Clan gusse mein tha — par Xiao Yan shaant tha… bahut shaant.
Yeh woh khamoshi thi jo tufaan se pehle aati hai.
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Morning – Training Hall
Xiao Yan (ab jo log usse Aarav ke naam se bhi jaane lage hain) ek training hall ke kone mein dhyaan mein baitha tha. Uski aankhon mein kuch alag hi tej tha.
Yao Lao ki awaaz uske dimaag mein goonji:
“Tumhari progress achee hai. Par agar Nalan Yanran se badla lena hai, to sirf strength nahi — naam bhi chahiye.”
Xiao Yan ne aankh khol kar poocha, “Naam?”
Yao Lao: “Naam ka matlab hai – ek identity. Agar tum Misty Cloud Sect jaake sirf ek disciple ko hara doge, to log bhool jayenge. Par agar tum ek Alchemist banke jaoge, to duniya dekhegi.”
---
Alchemist Banane Ka Pehla Kadam
Yao Lao ne us raat Xiao Yan ko ek pill recipe di — “Qi Revitalization Pill” – jo basic Dou Qi ko double speed se grow karta tha.
Isse banane ke liye chahiye tha:
Flame Root
Moon Dew Grass
Essence of Red Fire Flower
Ye sab cheezein milti thi Wu Tan City ke alchemist market mein, jahan sirf bade log hi jaate the.
Xiao Yan ne socha, “Main kisi se maangunga nahi. Main khud kamaunga, khud seekhunga, aur khud banaunga.”
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Afternoon – Market Scene
Xiao Yan market gaya, ek purani cloak pehen ke, apna chehra chhupakar. Usne ek shopkeeper se poocha, “Moon Dew Grass kitne ki hai?”
Shopkeeper: “80 gold coins.”
Xiao Yan: “Itna mehnga?!”
Shopkeeper (taana maarte hue): “Alchemist banna hai? Tere jaise hazaar log aate hain.”
Xiao Yan chup raha, par usne note kar liya — power sirf muscles ki nahi hoti, market samajhne ki bhi hoti hai.
Usne chhoti moti trading se 3 ghante mein thoda paisa kamaaya, aur end tak saare ingredients le aaya.
---
Raat – Pehla Alchemy Experiment
Yao Lao ne kaha:
“Apne Dou Qi ko flame mein badal. Tumhari Flame Mantra technique is waqt kiya jaa sakta hai.”
Xiao Yan ne haath uthaye, aur dhyaan lagaya.
Ek patli si blue flame uske haath se nikalne lagi — choti, lekin shuddh.
Pehla step: cauldron ko heat karo.
Doosra: ingredients ko proper order mein daalo.
Teesra: spiritual energy se unka fusion.
Do ghante tak ghani ghani ghantiyaan bajti rahi — kabhi kuch phat raha tha, kabhi kuch jal raha tha.
Lekin… aakhri moment pe, ek chamak hua!
Pop!
Ek chhoti, light green-colored pill, cauldron ke andar roll kar gayi.
Xiao Yan ne us pill ko haath mein uthaya, aankhon mein aansuon se zyada garv tha.
“Main Alchemist ban gaya…”
---
Agla Din – Xiao Clan Hall
Xiao Yan ne sabke saamne khud announce kiya:
“Main Nalan Yanran ka challenge accept karta hoon. 3 saal baad, Misty Cloud Sect ke entrance pe, uske saath ek combat karunga. Agar main haarta hoon, to jo punishment tum chaho, le lena. Lekin agar main jeeta…”
“...to poora Bharatvarsh dekhega ki Xiao Clan ka naam kaise jagta hai!”
Sab elders shocked the. Log jinhone use loser kaha, ab chup the.
Xiao Zhan (uske pita) ne aankhon mein aansu lekar sir hilaaya. “Aakhir vo waqt aa gaya.”
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Chapter 5 Samaapt
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Next Chapter Hint:
Xiao Yan ki alchemy training ab ek secret master se advanced stage mein jaayegi.
Ek nayee ladki se mulakaat – jiski aankhon mein raaz chhupa hai…
Aur pehli baar… ek real battle!
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Chapter - 6
Title : mysterious Riya
Title : mysterious Riya
Subah – Xiao Clan Courtyard
Xiao Yan ki training ab roz intense hoti ja rahi thi. Alchemy ke sath-sath usne Dou Qi Control mein bhi masteri shuru kar di thi.
Yao Lao uske har move ko monitor karta.
“Apni breathing Dou Qi ke flow ke according match karo,” Yao Lao ne kaha.
Xiao Yan (Aarav) ne aankhen band ki, aur uski Flame Mantra technique active ho gayi.
Ek halka sa golden ring uske aas-paas ghoomta hua energy kheench raha tha.
Lekin usi waqt…
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Nayi Entry – Riya
Ek patli si figure training area ke bahar se andar aayi. Usne ek white robe pehna tha, jiska pallu zameen ko chhoo raha tha. Kamar tak lambe baal, aur aankhon mein ek ajnabee shanti thi.
Usne kaha, “Xiao Yan?”
Xiao Yan ne aankh kholi — saamne ek ladki thi, jo lagbhag usi umar ki thi, lekin uske presence mein ek powerful aura tha.
“Tum kaun ho?” usne poocha.
Ladki ne aage badhkar kaha, “Mera naam Riya hai. Main Mu Family se hoon. Alchemist Association ne mujhe tumhari progress track karne bheja hai.”
Xiao Yan thoda hairaan hua.
Yao Lao ne andar se kaha, “Ye ladki simple nahi lagti. Iski presence... itni refined hai, jaise kisi high-ranked clan ki ho.”
Riya ne ek chhoti si bottle nikaali aur usse diya.
“Ye Spirit Condensing Liquid hai. Agar tum isse training se pehle use karoge, tumhara Dou Qi double speed se evolve karega.”
Xiao Yan: “Tum mujhe madad kyun kar rahi ho?”
Riya: “Kyunki mujhe lagta hai… tum Misty Cloud Sect ko hila doge. Aur main dekhna chahti hoon vo pal.”
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Doopahar – First Real Battle
City ke ek kone mein ek small arena tha jahan young disciples sparring practice karte the.
Wahan par Anshul, ek arrogant youth, jo pehle Riya ko impress karna chahta tha, ab Xiao Yan se jalan kar raha tha.
“Tum us ladki ke liye hero ban rahe ho, Xiao Yan?” Anshul ne taana mara.
Xiao Yan ne seedha aankhon mein dekha.
“Main kisi ko impress karne nahi, sirf apne aap ko prove karne aaya hoon.”
Anshul: “Toh fir sparring ring mein aa jao.”
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Sparring Battle Begins
Do log ring mein khade the. Doonon ne basic Dou Qi aura activate kiya.
Anshul ne pehla move maara – Stone Fist Technique.
Ek heavy punch, jo ring ke floor ko hila deta hai.
Xiao Yan ne stance badla, aur Serpent Step Technique se us punch ko easily dodge kiya.
Fir usne apna pehla custom Dou Move activate kiya –
“Flame Needle!”
Ek chhoti flame ki sui jaisi energy, jo Anshul ke shoulder ko graze karke nikal gayi.
Anshul cheekha, “Ye cheat move tha!”
Xiao Yan: “Ye technique hai… aur tum training mein soye rahe ho.”
3 moves ke andar, Anshul neeche tha – har gaya.
Log cheer karne lage — “Xiao Yan ne jeet liya!”
Riya door se muskura rahi thi. Usne andar hi andar socha:
“Yeh ladka… alag hai. Ismein aag hai.”
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Raat – Yao Lao ka Sandesh
Yao Lao: “Bohot ache. Ab waqt aa gaya hai ki tumhe ek aur flame technique sikhaun –
‘Flame Lotus Explosion’ – lekin iske liye tumhara Dou Qi level minimum 7th stage hona chahiye.”
Xiao Yan ne mutthi band kar ke kaha:
“Main taiyaar hoon. Teen saal door nahi lagte, jab iraade faulaadi ho.”
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Chapter 6 Samaapt
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Next Chapter Hint:
Xiao Yan ki advanced flame technique ki training.
Riya ka past – uske clan aur ek dangerous secret ka pata.
Aur ek mysterious masked assassin jo Xiao Yan ko target kar raha hai!