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[Werewolf]

Nice update.

To akhir Ragini apne aap se, Veer ke liye apni feelings se, haar gayi aur isme kuch mystic touch ne bhi apna kaam kiya. Ab weh Veer ke saath hi rehne wali hai. Ab dekhnna hai ki Nidhi ke saath uski mulakaat kaisi jati hai. Jis tarah ka Ragini ka swabhav hai, weh Nidhi se seedhe Veer aur uske baare me puchne wali hai. Prashn yeh hai ki NIdhi kya uttar deti hai. Waise Nidhi, Ragini aur Suhana ne hi Veer ka saath diya hai jab usko sabse jyada jarurat thi aur weh kuch bhi nahi tha.

Well you were right. Lekin, Ragini ne directly ye sawaal nahi rakha. Aur, na hi kuchh disclose kiya. But use pata lag gaya hai ki Nidhi hi wahi aurat hai. And, now things might get ugly very soon.

Kavya aur Kritika ka milna bahut hi pyara tha, bachpan me aise hi do dost ladte aur phir sab gile shikve bhool kar mil jaate hain. Padh kar accha laga.

Glad to know you liked it.

Veer aur Ava ki dooriyan bhi simat rahi hain.

Yup!

To Morocco ka King Mr X ke jaal me phans hi gaya, NPT (hope you mean Non Proliferation Treaty) ke chakkar me weh bahut kuch kho dega, Nuclear weapon prayog lane ke liye. Aur duniya me tabahi shuru ho jayegi. Is Mr X ko jaldi hi marna chahiye, lekin yeh abhi to bahut kathin dikh raha hai.

Rebecca confronted Veer easily.
Rebecca was dealt by Mr. X easily.
You do the math.

Rebecca ki files me akhir kya bhed chupa hua hai. Kya weh bhi duniya ko apne control me karne ki planning kare huye baithi thi.

You answer lies in - Finale arc

Ye Australian girl kaunsi hai jisko Mr X marwana chahta hai. Idhar Galileo ek naya naam aaya hai, jarur Spanish duo me se ek hoga. Lekin kya bhed hai, lag to System holder raha hai.

You can make your guesses.
Soon, it will be revealed.

To us ladke ka naam Damian hai. Akhir usne Veer ke sabhi dushmano ko dhund liya hai. Lagta hai ki Bhanu aur Harikrishan ke murder ke khilaf usne Veer ke khilaaf FIR karwa di hai aur Rajat ko yeh case ladne ke liye kaha hai. Uske jaane ke baad ab Rebecca Divya se Veer ki jamkari leti rahegi, Rebecca ka ek aur pyada..

Now the question arises. How was Damian able to locate Veer's enemies? Or let's say... How did he even come to know about them in the first place.

Answer : Do you remember one skill Veer has? Basic Enemy Tracker. Do you remember what it used to do?

Damian has a skill similar to that one.

Lagta hai ki Bhanu aur Harikrishan ke murder ke khilaf usne Veer ke khilaaf FIR karwa di hai aur Rajat ko yeh case ladne ke liye kaha hai. Uske jaane ke baad ab Rebecca Divya se Veer ki jamkari leti rahegi, Rebecca ka ek aur pyada..

We'll see about that...

Veer ke khilaaf puri shatranj ki baji bich gayi hai, aur sabse badi baat, usko abhi tak koi iska andesha bhi nahi hai. Serial murders aur Dexter ka bhi kuch pata nahi, lagta hai ki yeh bhi Veer ko dusri taraf se gherne ki saajish hai.

All are coming... And, Veer doesn't know anything about it. This will be very serious.
Thanks btw for great revo.
Keep supporting as usual.

 

[rajpurohitkikahani99]

Iska comment padh ke main bhi bahut kuch bolne vala tha, but I ignored...now you have specifically mentioned me.

He is just a person who knows everything from only insta comments....

Bhawna's character is one of best, mature and realistic.

Ek aurat jisne akele apni ladhai ladhi ho, apne baccho ko bachne ke liye unse duri bana li. And she is concerned about their career and life.

Iss bande ka world view sirf Insta ki immature shitty comments se inspired hai jahan sabko dank banke ka bhoot rehta hai.

Zero knowledge about character development and their complexities. He can't differentiate between strong character and toxic character.

In short abhi baccha hai.

Tu kya comment karega writer ki chatne Wale

 

[rajpurohitkikahani99]

Kis angle se Bhavna feminist nazar aa gayi tumhe?

Samar_Singh Silent_killer Death Kiñg
Let me know if you guys think that Bhavna is a feminist.

Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai, Niharika hi kahani me ek hai jo feminist hai. Aur, mahila mandal ki kuchh sadasya. Bhavna kab se feminist bann gayi?

Ab ya toh tumhe theek se kahani nahi padhi, ya fir personal khunnas nikaal rahe ho.

Tej ko chhipa ke isliye rakha gaya taaki Harikiran log uski jaan na le. Poora village arc hi iss par hai.

Language. Mein kaafi kuchh bardasht kar leta hu. Par, characters ke liye befaaltu ki gaaliya mein bardaasht nahi karta.

Bhavna ko readers bahut achhe se samajhte hai. You look like quite amateur. Aur, mein tumhari age ka bhi andaza laga sakta hu.

Should I care?

It's as I've said above. Ye personal khunnas, kahi aur nikaalna. Ye kahani chudaayi ke liye nahi banayi gayi hai unlike most of the stories that are written here.

Baaki, matured log hoshiyar hai. Unhe pata hai Bhavna ka kya character hai. Aur, kya rehna chahiye.

Tumhari kahani ke maine almost sare updates pade hai aaj se nahi kaafi pehel se
Jis tarah se tum shweta aur veer ka role dikha rahe jisme shweta aur veer ki conversation mai shweta kitne pyar se veer se baat karti hai aur vir usko puchta tak nahi aur vo aurat bhavana hamesha khunnas se baat karti ha

Kya bhavana vaisa pyar se baat sabke samne baat karti hai? Maano ya naa maano ye role vichar karne wala hai

Werewolf : mai koi chudayi ki khaniya nahi padta apne bhi words thik se use Karo maine kahi bhi chudayi se related bola? Battamizi nahi bhai


Sorry for my word " architecture ki chodi"

Still no hate for my brother dear werewolf

But a lot of hate for that character so called bhavana" hate till eternity
Story ka sabse irritating character hai vo lady!!!

 

[rajpurohitkikahani99]

Kis angle se Bhavna feminist nazar aa gayi tumhe?

Samar_Singh Silent_killer Death Kiñg
Let me know if you guys think that Bhavna is a feminist.

Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai, Niharika hi kahani me ek hai jo feminist hai. Aur, mahila mandal ki kuchh sadasya. Bhavna kab se feminist bann gayi?

Ab ya toh tumhe theek se kahani nahi padhi, ya fir personal khunnas nikaal rahe ho.

Tej ko chhipa ke isliye rakha gaya taaki Harikiran log uski jaan na le. Poora village arc hi iss par hai.

Language. Mein kaafi kuchh bardasht kar leta hu. Par, characters ke liye befaaltu ki gaaliya mein bardaasht nahi karta.

Bhavna ko readers bahut achhe se samajhte hai. You look like quite amateur. Aur, mein tumhari age ka bhi andaza laga sakta hu.

Should I care?

It's as I've said above. Ye personal khunnas, kahi aur nikaalna. Ye kahani chudaayi ke liye nahi banayi gayi hai unlike most of the stories that are written here.

Baaki, matured log hoshiyar hai. Unhe pata hai Bhavna ka kya character hai. Aur, kya rehna chahiye.

I'm not someone who compromises on self-respect, nor do I flatter others. I have a unique perspective, and if I respect the writer's point of view, they should also respect the reader's perspective.


I acknowledge that my previous comment contained an inappropriate word, but that doesn't mean you can label me as immature, etc. Arrogance never suits anyone, yet you remain one of the best writers in my opinion, brother.


And sorry, I won't read your stories again."

 

[Werewolf]

Tu kya comment karega writer ki chatne Wale

That just explains everything.

Tumhari kahani ke maine almost sare updates pade hai aaj se nahi kaafi pehel se

No you didn't! And, even if you did... Toh didn't read the properly. That I can guarantee.

Jis tarah se tum shweta aur veer ka role dikha rahe jisme shweta aur veer ki conversation mai shweta kitne pyar se veer se baat karti hai aur vir usko puchta tak nahi aur vo aurat bhavana hamesha khunnas se baat karti ha

Kisne kaha Veer Shweta ko nahi poochhta? Kya hum woh sab bhool jaaye jo Shweta ne iske pehle Kiya hua hai? Veer ke khilaaf shadiyantra me shaamil hona. Use ghar se nikalwana. Uss par atyachaar karwana.

Yahi pe gap aa jaata hai, ek attentive reader aur ek rushed reader ke beech me.

Agar ek update abhi mein Veer ke past ka likh du, toh readers ko samajh aa jayega ki Shweta kya kuchh kari baithi hai. Uske bawajood, Veer ne use maaf kiya aur yaha tak ki woh use Shweta maa tak keh ke pukaarne laga hai. Agar ye progress achhi nahi hai toh mujhe nahi lagta iss se better kuchh ho sakta hai.

Also, kahani abhi chalti hi jaa rahi hai. Zaahir hai ye rishte aur bhi mazboot hote jayenge aage chal ke. Baaki, Bhavna ka character samajhna sab ke bas ki baat nahi.

Werewolf : mai koi chudayi ki khaniya nahi padta apne bhi words thik se use Karo maine kahi bhi chudayi se related bola? Battamizi nahi bhai

When did I say tum chudaayi ki kahaniyaa padhte ho? Tum khud hi explain kar rahe ho.

Mein toh bas clear Kiya tha ki meri story chudaayi based nahi hai. Isme iska arth ye kab se ho gaya ki tum waisi story padhte ho? Aisa toh kuchh likha hi nahi maine.

Battamizi nahi bhai

Mujhe nahi lagta Maine koi badtameezi ki hai. Na Maine koi cuss word ka istemal kiya aur na hi koi aarop lagaya.

Sorry for my word " architecture ki chodi"

No one gives an F about that tbh.
I mean... Ab kya bolu. There are thousands of readers who loves Bhavna. There are 2 of them who don't love her. But Bhavna will remain as she is. And, as I have decided to portray her. She's one of my best written character.

Still no hate for my brother dear werewolf

But a lot of hate for that character so called bhavana" hate till eternity
Story ka sabse irritating character hai vo lady!!!

Might be as per your perspective. Not for me. Not for my other readers as well.

I'm not someone who compromises on self-respect, nor do I flatter others. I have a unique perspective, and if I respect the writer's point of view, they should also respect the reader's perspective.


I acknowledge that my previous comment contained an inappropriate word, but that doesn't mean you can label me as immature, etc. Arrogance never suits anyone, yet you remain one of the best writers in my opinion, brother.

Again. When did I say you're immature? You can read my comment again. I never said that you are immature. You yourself are explaining to me. A matured person never bothers to explain that he is mature. That nullifies the whole meaning of being mature. Isn't it?

And sorry, I won't read your stories again."

That again... is up to you. But who will ever know... Whether you stopped reading or not?

 

[Barewolf student]

Bhawna ek mature character hai....vo vaise hi react kar rahi hai jaise use karna chahiye.

Veer aur Bhawna ke scene hi ginti ke aaye hai ab tak....aur kitni baar usne Veer se narajgi dikhayi hai....

Parijat ghar pe naraj hone par uske paas proper reason tha,China Veer sabko bina bataye gaya tha to Bhawna ka strict hona banta hai.....yahan iss scene me usne Veer ko to kuch nahi kaha...usne Tej se sawal pucha tha jo ki obvious hai...ki harr samjhdar maa puchegi....ki uski beti achanak aise job kyun chhod rahi hai...

But maybe tumhe aur baki kaiyo ko maa ka character aisa chaiye jaisa ki jyadatar kahaniyo me hota hai...ek emotional fool wala....jo 24 ghante bas apne bete me khoyi rehti hai...aur use apne bete ke siva kuch sahi galat nahi dikhata....ab tak usne Veer ki kisi galat vajah par hi sawal kiya hai.

Vo moment yaad nahi hai ju ko jab bhawna ne Veer ko life ke purpose aur goals ko leke samjhaya tha....jab usne kaha tha ki paise se upar bhi ek purpose life me hona chahiye...I don't think Bhawna ke alawa koi aur character aisa hai.

Veer aur Bhawna life ke uss moment me mile hai jahan Veer ke pass time nahi hai family ke liye jyada....pehle gaon gaye vo uske baad Veer paris gaya....phir business me busy ho gaya aur phir China chala gaya....aur ab khatra 4ro taraf se aane wala hai....to aise me itne moment kafi hai....baki unke bond ko aage bhi time mil jayega....

Veer ke paas time kam hai to vo use Bhawna ke sath rude behave karke kharab nahi karna chahega....

Veer baki sabko asani se mana sakta hai, unhe manipulate kar sakta hai...lekin Bhawna ne duniya dekhi hai akele to use uljhana itna asan nahi hai bakiyo ki tarah isliye Bhawna ne use chhat par bheja....

Aur konsi maa yaa baap jab baccho ko saja dete hai to khud ko bhi vahi saja dete hai....asal me to nahi dekha mene kabhi....ye bakchodi bas purani bollywood filmo ke hoti thi....

As I said Bhawna's character is mature than other ladies nothing else....

Agar baki kahaniyo ki tarah maa ka character chahiye "Hayy mera lalla...ohhh mera raja beta....tu kuch bhi kar lekin main tujhe nahi datungi..." Type to mujhe nahi lagta
Werewolf vaisa character banayega....

That's it....

Are bhai paripkv to tum aise kh rahe ho j

Tumhari kahani ke maine almost sare updates pade hai aaj se nahi kaafi pehel se
Jis tarah se tum shweta aur veer ka role dikha rahe jisme shweta aur veer ki conversation mai shweta kitne pyar se veer se baat karti hai aur vir usko puchta tak nahi aur vo aurat bhavana hamesha khunnas se baat karti ha

Kya bhavana vaisa pyar se baat sabke samne baat karti hai? Maano ya naa maano ye role vichar karne wala hai

Werewolf : mai koi chudayi ki khaniya nahi padta apne bhi words thik se use Karo maine kahi bhi chudayi se related bola? Battamizi nahi bhai


Sorry for my word " architecture ki chodi"

Still no hate for my brother dear werewolf

But a lot of hate for that character so called bhavana" hate till eternity
Story ka sabse irritating character hai vo lady!!!

Bhai same yrr, mai bhi yahi kah Raha hu ki bhavna ka behave alg hi h
Wo pyar se nahi rah Rahi h ,
Bilkul yarr ekdum Dil ki baat kah di

 

[Barewolf student]

Werewolf bhai , kya veer ke pass koi legendary skills hogi aage Jake?
Waiting

 

[rajpurohitkikahani99]

That just explains everything.

No you didn't! And, even if you did... Toh didn't read the properly. That I can guarantee.

Kisne kaha Veer Shweta ko nahi poochhta? Kya hum woh sab bhool jaaye jo Shweta ne iske pehle Kiya hua hai? Veer ke khilaaf shadiyantra me shaamil hona. Use ghar se nikalwana. Uss par atyachaar karwana.

Yahi pe gap aa jaata hai, ek attentive reader aur ek rushed reader ke beech me.

Agar ek update abhi mein Veer ke past ka likh du, toh readers ko samajh aa jayega ki Shweta kya kuchh kari baithi hai. Uske bawajood, Veer ne use maaf kiya aur yaha tak ki woh use Shweta maa tak keh ke pukaarne laga hai. Agar ye progress achhi nahi hai toh mujhe nahi lagta iss se better kuchh ho sakta hai.

Also, kahani abhi chalti hi jaa rahi hai. Zaahir hai ye rishte aur bhi mazboot hote jayenge aage chal ke. Baaki, Bhavna ka character samajhna sab ke bas ki baat nahi.

When did I say tum chudaayi ki kahaniyaa padhte ho? Tum khud hi explain kar rahe ho.

Mein toh bas clear Kiya tha ki meri story chudaayi based nahi hai. Isme iska arth ye kab se ho gaya ki tum waisi story padhte ho? Aisa toh kuchh likha hi nahi maine.

Mujhe nahi lagta Maine koi badtameezi ki hai. Na Maine koi cuss word ka istemal kiya aur na hi koi aarop lagaya.

No one gives an F about that tbh.
I mean... Ab kya bolu. There are thousands of readers who loves Bhavna. There are 2 of them who don't love her. But Bhavna will remain as she is. And, as I have decided to portray her. She's one of my best written character.

Might be as per your perspective. Not for me. Not for my other readers as well.

Again. When did I say you're immature? You can read my comment again. I never said that you are immature. You yourself are explaining to me. A matured person never bothers to explain that he is mature. That nullifies the whole meaning of being mature. Isn't it?

That again... is up to you. But who will ever know... Whether you stopped reading or not?

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Werewolf said
"Bhavna ko readers bahut achhe se samajhte hai. You look like quite amateur. Aur, mein tumhari age ka bhi andaza laga sakta hu"


Here you labeled me as 'immature.'


"It's as I've said above. Ye personal khunnas, kahi aur nikaalna. Ye kahani chudaayi ke liye nahi banayi gayi hai unlike most of the stories that are written here"


You've made inaccurate statements about the storyline and this forum particularly...
(Yaha tumse better bhi writers hai
RAJ : HERO OF THE FAMILY PADHI HAI KABHI) leave it

Let's talk regarding Veer and Kavya's interactions. Was their behavior acceptable? (Kavya ne veer ka lund chusa tha bhul gaye ? Vo seen kyu?)​

Bhavana's actions seem inconsistent, prioritizing Tej's safety over Veer's. Did Bhavana expel Tej from the house like Veer's family?

( Do You remember jab veer first time purvi ke ghar gaya tha jaha bhavana ne Mumbai aane ke baad first time veer se baat ki next day vo village jaane wale the!!
Bhavana ..... Veer ab tum ab ghar jaao raat bohat ho gayi hai
Veer ko kitna bura laga tha vo vaha rukna chahta tha
Veer ke jaane ke baad jhuthe aasu dikhaye the us bhavana ne)

Veer's dignity is consistently disregarded. Bhavana dominates the narrative, even taking credit for Shweta's willingness for Veer.

Treat Veer with respect, as the supreme male lead.

Ensure responsible character development to avoid spoiling the story.

Mai shingh hu kabhi jhukta nahi hu sach bolta hu werewolf bhaiya !!

Is forum ke aap ek best writer ho ek reader ki request hai mard ka character jhukne mat do mai akela nahi hu jo ye sab aapko bol raha aise

Apne comments deko bohat logo ne bola hai aisa

Thankyou
Regards
Your virtual brother

 

[rajpurohitkikahani99]

Are bhai paripkv to tum aise kh rahe ho j

Bhai same yrr, mai bhi yahi kah Raha hu ki bhavna ka behave alg hi h
Wo pyar se nahi rah Rahi h ,
Bilkul yarr ekdum Dil ki baat kah di

Ye lo were wolf bhaiya !!
Mai aapki story pe kuch bhi faltu comment karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta bas haath jod ke request hai bhavana ko tej pe haavi mat hone do vo ye hakh kho chuki hai!!

 

[Samar_Singh]

Tu kya comment karega writer ki chatne Wale

You just proved everything was right, what I said about you.