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Harr cheez chaalu hoti hai toh woh khatam bhi hoti hai. Ye bhi khatam hoyegi. But after every ending... There's a new beginning.Wa
Hummm wao dil karta hy bs yeh chalti rahy aur parhty rahin but majbori apki bhi social life hy but thanks
Yup! Veer ab pehle se kaafi strong hai.Sandar update bhai jaw longki mayya ****** di lekin ye new entry khatarnak lag rahi he aage jyada majha aane vala he or veer bhi strong hota jaraha he gajab
Ek jhalak me judge kar liye?Idk but I'll be really happy if Rebecca dies.![]()
Gaur se dekho gaav waalo.Between, what rewards did my cutie Ava get, shed some light on that as well..![]()
(Pari's best version till now is back, gotta put that word 'useless' in hiding for a while now..)
Raat bhar jaagte rehne ki zaroorat nahi. Mera kya hai... Mein toh estimate bata deta hu.Tnq, dear bro, for your kind words. I was literally exhausted so much that within few minutes I fell asleep. Thanks again dear bro
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Zaroori nahi ki uss time me aa jaaye update. Toh jab samay rahe tabhi padhne ka. Update yahi rahega kahi bhaagega nahi. Behtar timing night ki hoti hai. Mein suggest karunga ki updates padho toh shaant mahaul me baith ke raatri me padho.Dhanyavad Bhai. Aise hi saath bane rehne ka.बहुत बढ़िया अपडेट भाई! एक के बाद एक सभी अपडेट अद्भुत हैं! इसका वर्णन करने के लिए कोई शब्द नहीं हैं !!!!
Haha! Jo hai so hai.Bbbbbrroooo whhaaat is thisss yaar this is aa fucking insane woooowwww really brother ye update ne to itne jhatke diyee hai ki kyaa hi kahu
Dono ka nahi keh sakte hum. Rebecca par zaroor pata tha ki Jaw Long maara jayega. Baaki, woh dono kisi ke dwara bheje gaye hai ya fir apni free will ke hisaab se kaam kar rahe hai ye toh waqt hi batayega.Sabse pehle wo unknown system holder and that women with haatt brro ye dono ka system levar may bhi bahut advanced hai lagta hai saalo ko ye bhi pata tha ki veer jaw long ka past jarur dekhega par kya ye dono system holders mr.x ke dwara bheje Gaye the ye janne wali bat hogi
Mr. x mystery hai poora. Uske baare me ab cheezein aane shuru ho jayegi. Aur iski bhanak agle update se pata lag hi jayegi. Divya ke baare me bhi details agle update me hi pata lag jayengi.And the Divyas kidnapping bro aakhir ab wo Divya se kya cahte hai kyu ki Divya to koi system holder nahi hai to aakhir unka uddeshya kya hai and agar ye dono system holder itne khatarnaak hai to mr .x to kya hi hoga
Bhai baar baar web series bol ke dukh na pahuchao. Na hi apne paas utni skills hai, na hi apun uss field se hai, na hi koi staff hai aur na hi ye wesi story hai jaha public me ise darshaya jaa sake.And pari and jawlong ki fight bhai kyaa hi likhte ho agar tum ispe webseries banate to Naa jane international leval par ye kitne hi records Tod daalti bro really suupeerrrvbb and dillse respect for you and your imagination and your writing skills buddy
Woh cards aur skills kyu nahi mili hai iska jawab bhi next update me hi Milne waala hai. Toh sabr rakhne ka.Jesa ki main chahta tha veer keliye ek strength power badhane wala card ye to main jaw long ke pass bersark card dekh kar hi samjh Gaya tha ki ye jaw long ka sabse power full card hai or aapne kaha tha jo bhi jaw long se bhidega or use sabse jyada chot pahuchayega jaw long ki sabse top tier skills and card use hi milenge or yahi huva but bro mujhe laga tha ki ek animal kingdom bhi milega veer ko
Jaw Long ek evil practitioner tha. Rahi baat Legion ka kya hoga toh ye bhi agle update me hi pata lagega. Kyuki, ab unke Lord toh duniya me rahe nahi. Ab govt. saamne aayegi aur dekhna hoga ki kya action leti hai.But ek baat main dilse chahta tha ki veer ko shaynas access Naa mile pata nahi kyu but main nahi chahta tha ki Ava ya veer black magic wali skills main pade but bro ab ye dekhna hoga ki animal kingdom and wo black magic card kise mila hai or baki ki jaw long ki skills kiske hath kya laga hai or ab ye baate sense bana Rahi hai ki kyu jaw long nahi chahta tha ki koi bhi us jungle me aaye jaw long to khud hi seitaan banke baitha tha jo inshano ki bali Chadha Raha tha khud powerful banne keliye or order ko apne keliye or bro ab legion ka kya hoga
Jaw Long already marr chuka hai. Renshu unknown system holder ke dwara ghayal na hua hota toh woh Veer tak zaroor pahuch Gaya hota. But unfortunately, wo wounded tha.Buddy sach main jab jawlong ka past ho ya fir renshu or us unknown ki ladayi bhai kya hi gazab thi I am almost speech less yaar main khud shock main hu abhi bhi or last wala jawlong ko mine sahit uda Diya ye to Maine expect bhi nahi kiya tha yaar or mujhe laga tha ki jawlong and Li renshu ek baar keliye ho sahi but aamne samne jarur ayenge but koina ye to hona hi nahi tha kabhi jaw long ke nasib main veer ke hatho hi mitna likha tha
Bhulo nahi, ki usi personality ne Veer ko iss daldal se baahar nikaala tha.And the Paris personality sach main bro ye wahi personality dekh kar accha laga main humesha hi chata hu ki jab bhi veer aisi ladai lade tab uske paas yahi pari ho naki attitude personality walikyu ki wo veer le aagenst hokar pura maza kirkira kardeti hai mujhe ye pari personaly pasand hai
Dekhna hoga ye.Bhai jiss hisab se ye pari uski duri image ko gali bak Rahi thi us hisab se to lagta hai ye sab karna veer keliye kabhi khatra bhi ban sakta hai
Isliye toh Veer iss mission ko poora karna chaahta tha. Kyuki, reward bahut bada tha. Points toh kuch bhi nahi ek naye slot ke saamne. Woh toh kabhi bhi earn kiye Jaa sakte hai. Par Naya slot? Na jaane kabhi mile ya na mile.And kehte haina save the best for last one more card slot buddy this is insanely insane yaar ye ek or slot kis had ki taqat badha sakta hai veer ki ye sirf main or tum hi jante hai veer ne single slot se hi jawlong or crimson jese dushmano ko haraaya hai us hisaab se to veer ab kitni tabahi macha sakta hai samne wali ki ye to guess bhi nahi kiya jasakta and mujhe lagta hai veer ka subse jyada accha pair bansakta hai berserk and beowolf card ye dono jab milenge na tab samne walo ke pajame fatke haath main ajayenge and aura vision ko ko bhi veer jab cahe use karsakta hai jese aakhon Mai mitti girna ya kuch or chize jo veer ko temporery blind karti ho ya ghuup andhere main dekhna ho vwaha aura vision bahut kam aa sakta hai
Aage jo kahani aayegi woh alag kahani hai. Dono ke beech link aisa rahega ki jo khaali ek hi kahani padhna chaahte hai toh usme bhi koi taqleef nahi aayegi unko aur jo pehle se hi ye padhe hue hai aur baad me woh padhte hai toh unke liye experience thoda aur badh jayega... Bas... Cleverly link kiya gaya hai.Buddy tumto jante hi ho ki meri halat ki business ke vhjah se main reply nahi de pa Raha tha but Aaj ka update padhke mujse Raha nahi Gaya broo sach main Aaj to mujhe reply bhejna hi bhejna tha but bro aage ka game kitna khofnaak hoga ye to ab sirf tum hi jante ho or bro kya tum is story ka part 2 laaoge kyu ki tumne kaha tha ki jo dusri story tum likhoge wo is sse link hoga to kya aadha ye part or adha dusra hoga ya ye ek hi story main complete karoge or bhai Divya ka kya hoga
Woh sab kuch jald hi dekhne ko milega.But bro mujhe sach main Ava and veer ki camestriy acchi lagti hai naki veer or garofano ki but ab dekhna ye hai ki jyada taqatwer kon hai Ava ya garofano ye sach main dekhna hoga or mujhe ek baat ki tahe dill se khusi hogi jab Ava or veer ek saath honge or bhai kya Ava wapas Apni wo life jee payegi apni dono dosto ke sath or Sonia or keara ka kya reaction hog jab unhe pata chalega ki veer or Ava ek dusre ko bakhubi pehchante hai ye sach main dekhne layak hogi
Maybe you'll find these in the next arc.And jab veer ki family ko jab pata chalega ki Ava jesi sakhshiyat veer ke itne close hai tab kya hi reaction hoga
Yup!Wolfi bhai aap kehte ho ki bade reply pasand aate hai jise dekh kar aapni din bhar ki thakn utar jati hai so I hope Mera ye reply aapko pasand aaya hoga
Aise hi saath bane rehne ka man.
Aur behatreen revo bhi...!Verry verry insanely thriller update buddy hatts of o you

My dear, friend! Veer ko Animal kingdom nahi Mila hai.More things to add in the review
Veer got Animal Kingdom, but what's use of it without Shayna's Blood ritual.
Jemisha's blood ring, Shayna's Blood ritual, Animal Kingdom and Shayna's Access all are connected with each other.
You can't access Animal kingdom without Shayna's Blood ritual, and for perform Blood ritual you must have Shayna's Access.
But veer only got Animal kingdom, will veer buy Shayna's cards from his system with points or something else.
I'm more interested in Shyana than the Rebecca. I think Mr. X is not the final villan, he knows more than anyone but not know everything. Maybe the System or secret of system itself is ultimate villan.
BC piche ke update repeat par padho to kuch jyada hi detail me chize samajh aati hai, pehli baar me to upar upar se nikal jata hai.
Bhai baar baar web series bol ke dukh na pahuchao. Na hi apne paas utni skills hai, na hi apun uss field se hai, na hi koi staff hai aur na hi ye wesi story hai jaha public me ise darshaya jaa sake.
My dear, friend! Veer ko Animal kingdom nahi Mila hai.
Use Berserk mila hai. Ek baar aur padhna padega ju ko update lagta hai.
Final villain kaun hai ye toh mein khud se nahi bataane waala. Warna maza kir kira ho jaata hai.![]()
Lagta hai ab full status waali link daalni padegi ab.Dimag ka bhosda ho rkha hai...
Maine bola tha ye card skills sab ab meri IQ se pare hai.
Ab aur nahi taal sakta shayad mein. 
Ye kaam tab hi kar lena tha jab hame pta chala tha ki Veer ke alawa bhi koi system holder hai.Lagta hai ab full status waali link daalni padegi ab.Ab aur nahi taal sakta shayad mein.
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Tab dimag me hi nahi aaya.Ye kaam tab hi kar lena tha jab hame pta chala tha ki Veer ke alawa bhi koi system holder hai.
But nahi aalas kara lo tumse![]()

I agree with you buddyDukh dard peeda.
Bas harem aur incest part ko change kare to pura public me dikhane layak hai. But I understand![]()