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This is what I appreciate most about you as a writer. Veer ki skill set are nothing compared to your skill set. Hahaha... Of course, you only created him. A lot is still to come, I think the next 4 - 5 updates will be very thrilling...The better it is for you, the tougher it is for me.Showcasing each and every system holder's full status is one hell of a job. And, to come up with their unique skills, cards, and all is another headache. Not to mention designing those and editing the pictures.
Furthermore, to create a fight choreography based on their skills is another mind fucking task.And then to set up the premise is another one... I won't even go into the narration and dialogues. You can imagine that...!
And, that's why it takes TIME!
Yup! There aren't much updates left for this arc to finish. Hardly 5 or 6. They will take you on a whole another ride. New secrets, new mysteries and suspense... Some questions will be answered. Some secrets will be revealed.This is what I appreciate most about you as a writer. Veer ki skill set are nothing compared to your skill set. Hahaha... Of course, you only created him. A lot is still to come, I think the next 4 - 5 updates will be very thrilling...
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Thanks man. All the upcoming updates will be as detailed as this one. It's the end of the arc. One of the major arcs to put it accurately... So, it does deserves all those details.This update was out of the world, the narrative so strong, one felt as if one is walking along the marching Bravehearts, dead in the night, in a dense forest. It had all the emotions, doubts in the minds of few of the weak ones, the leadership of the leader, proving why he is called the The Lord, the budding love and care of a budding lover, the disquietness of an old lover.
Renshu doesn't want to kill. They don't deserve to die. They are following their leader's footsteps. What Jaw Long will instruct... They will simply follow that...The idea of Erica leading the team was great, she used her Stealth and Nocturnal Shade skills to locate and neutralize the main person of the first line of defense, and then others. The best part was that they did not kill the Long fighters, just injured them and also gave them medical aid. Yes, ultimately, Order And Long have to reunite and Renshu has to lord over them.
Thanks. It takes a lot of brainstorming to come up with skills and cards.The second line of defense had become alert, but all the traps were cut by Renshu. The Skills were very innovative.
We can't say whether she'll assist or not for now. I mean she's not even there yet... So can't say much about that.So the second system owner has come, about which Renshu was always thinking, right in the beginning. He also seems to be powerful. But Erica's going to assist Veer, was totally unexpected.
They were already alert. Veer observed the trail, right? Remember?I thought that the invasion, and fight at the main entrance was very intense, but the scene at the East Side was really frightening. The moment I read about the blood trail, it looked very unusual. Veer, and specially Pari, should have got alerted before crossing it. The attacks of the various animals, and Veer's escape were very scary.
Jaw Long isn't in the meditative state btw.<Koi tezi se uski orr aa raha tha.>
Now who can that be, another animal, maybe Black Panther, or Jaw Long, or Erica. But the bridge has been cut, how can Erica come and Jaw Long seems to be in a meditative state, controlling the animals. But why Veer has not activated his Alpha personality.
There was no need to delve into all of those cards. When in use, then only there's a need to explain them.So many Skills and Cards were shown in the status. It would have been difficult to remember them, and would have broken the flow of the story. I like the idea of explaining them as and when they are used.
Thanks a lot mate. And, it took me ages to complete that... Haha!Again, a great update. The associated arts were very relevant, the status windows were well made.
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Nahi 10 din nahi Lagenge. Kaam chal raha hai. But fight ki choreography banana bahut mushqil kaam hota hai. Jaise hi complete ho jayega mein inform kar dunga.Mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki abhi next update aane me 10 din aur lagege
fir bhi bhai ham aapko support karte hai
aur next update ka intezaar karege
baas update likhne me jaldbaaji mat karna