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Dhanyavaad brother!Keara ka ateet bahot hi disturbing hai usne bahot kuch saha hai kya veer usko change kar paega aur aysa karne ke liye wo kya kya effort dikhata hai ye janna hai aur suman ka surprise kya hai ye to is update mein pata nahi chal paya par agle upadte mein sab clear ho jaega so agle update ka intezar rahega![]()
Awesome update
Yes! Kaera ke emotions uss se bachpan me hi chheen liye gaye. Na kisi friend ka aana, na baap ka saaya, na maa ki goad, uska bhai jisse saari azaadi thi. Par wo bechaari bas ek band bangle me hi sab kuch kiya karti thi. Aur sab kuch matlab!? Keval padhaayi.To yeh thi kaera ki story iss liye wo itni emotionless hai daikhty hain ab veer kya krta hai apny pahly sex partner k liye or suman ab subah subah kis ko ly ai hai veer k room main as a gift yeh b pata chal jaye ka next update main jo Thursday ko aye gi
Excellent update
Nice update...
Amazing update brother keep it up maza a gya thanks

What were you expecting? Rocket science?koi sense nahi bani last update ki
main toh kuch bahut bada raz expect kar raha tha keara ke behaviour ke piche
sorry to say but keara wali story ka koi logic nahi laga mujhe
although that's my opinion
anyways story is going still good
keep updating

Thanks a lot brother!Very Very impressive update bro feeling really bad for kaera now even more than before didn't know about her past fuck those rascals so called baba ( dhongi) they play with other people life through their emotions and fool them to make their own owl direct
And what suman bring surprise for veer still suspense but bro you take 3 days for this update now I know from where you bring such an amazing update
Exactly! This is what happened to Kaera. Uski subah hi jaldi uthne se hoti, wo taiyaar hoti, breakfast karti aur bas fir jo lectures ka silsila shuru hota wo raat me hi khatam hota tha. Daily! Uska yahi routine rehta. Na baap ka saaya, na maa ki goad, na bhai ka sahaara. Ek robot taiyaar kii jaa rahi thi. Aur uska result, hamaari current Kaera, who wants to feel those sentiments once again. But she need someone to make her feel so.Bhai wo kehte hai na jis tan lage so tan Jane to bas wahi baat hai kyunki kabhi apne soch kr dekha hai ki agar apke parents apse apki azaadi apka bachpan apke sapne khud ke apki desires apka sab kuch apse cheen kr par kate parinde ki trah ghar roopi pinjare Mai daal de Or ap par apne desires sapne jo kuch bhi apka apse cheena wahi sab wo apni marzi ka apke upar thop denge to life kaisi ho jayegi apki bas wahi cheez hai
Awesome Superb update bhai![]()
Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...
Thank you guys!Nice update bhai
Dhanyavaad Alok bro!Nice update bhai...
Kiera ka past wakai bahut hi dukhad tha..
That's good to know ki Ab veer kiera ke aur close hokar usko cheer up karega.
This is nothing. XDWonderful update writer saab. You have kept a lot of situations in mind to make a plot and hence this is such a nice story.
We need to store your brain for analysis.!!!!!!!
Boht boht dhanyavaad mitr!कायरा का अतीत वाकई बहुत दुख भरा है
इंसान जो मशीनी रोबोट जैसी बन गई
वीर उसके भीतर इंसानी ज़ज्बात भरेगा एहसास दिलाएगा
क्या कहूँ क्या लिखूं
वाव
Thank you bro!Nice update bhai kaera ke sath bahut hii bura kiya uske bap ne ab veer kaise usse normal banate hai dekhte hai aage
Kavya nahi bro, Kaera! Haha~Awesome update brother to kavya ke emotionless hone ke peeche ye karan hai I think ki veer jab usko life jeena seikhayega tab kaera ke dil me uske liye feelings aayengi and dono me love start hoga
Mene aisa kahi nahi likha bro ki harr sadhu dhongi hote hai.कुछ अटपटा सा अपडेट रहा
आपने अपने इस अपडेट मे दिखाया कि बाबा या साधु कितने ढोंगी होते है,
Ye baat mein boht acche se jaanta hu. Mene apne jeevan me dhongi bhi dekhe hai aur pahaadi ilaako me mene aise aise tapasvee bhi dekhe hai jinhe moh maaya se koi matlab nahi. In fact, mene kuch aise bhi dekhe hai jinhe siddhi praapt thi.कुछ चुतिये ढोंगी को छोड़ दिया जाए तो आप देखेंगे कि साधु कितने ज्ञानी, तपस्वी, जानकार होते है,
Sahi kaha. Par ye bhi nahi keh sakte ki sansaar me koi bhi dhongi nahi hai. Mene toh aankho se dekha hai. Par haa iska matlab ye nahi ki sabhi dhongi hai.पर वे ढोंगियो की तरह रास्ते रास्ते पैसे माँगते नही घूमते, ना ही जनता को बेवकूफ बनाते घूमते है,
Abhi mene upar bataaya aapko. Mein aise vyakti se bhi mila hu jisne mera bhavishya bataaya tha. Uss waqt mein usse dhongi samajh aage badh chala. Par uski baat 100% sach nikli thi. Aaj bhi mein uski talaash me hu par wo kahi nahi mil raha mujhe. Toh mein kitna jaanta hu unke baare me ye sab kuch experience se hi aaya hai.शायद लेखक साहब भी केवल वैसे ही ढोंगियो को ही जानते है,
विज्ञान के उदय से पहले ही शल्य चिकित्सा, आयुर्वेद, अंतरिक्ष की जनकारी, और बहुत कुछ का ज्ञान इन ऋषि साधुओ ने ही दुनिया को दिया था।
Dhanyavaad! Ye bas Kaera ki badkismati thi ki usse dhongi mila. Na ki ek siddh gyaani purush.बाकी कहानी अच्छी जा रही है,
कारण कुछ भी हो, पर कायरा का बचपन बहुत ही दुखभरा रहा, ऐसे बचपन की कोई भी कल्पना नही कर सकता है।
सुमन अब अपनी बहु को भी वीर को सौप रही है।
आगे के अपडेट का इंतज़ार रहेगा।
Super se upar
Mast update
Mind-blowing update
Nice update
Nice update
Surprise me beti hogi ya bahu dekhenge agle bhaag me. Ha ha ha.
Nice one.
Thank you so much guys!Awesome update
Waiting for your next update
And that's what all she was watching in veer bcz veer is somewhere also going from same trauma and all the things kaera was before that's why she thinks veer is the one with upgraded and fully matured minded guy who can let her to feel each and everything again in her life hope to get next update soon broThanks a lot brother!
Yes! It takes a lot of time. Always more than 3 hours of continuous sitting.
Exactly! This is what happened to Kaera. Uski subah hi jaldi uthne se hoti, wo taiyaar hoti, breakfast karti aur bas fir jo lectures ka silsila shuru hota wo raat me hi khatam hota tha. Daily! Uska yahi routine rehta. Na baap ka saaya, na maa ki goad, na bhai ka sahaara. Ek robot taiyaar kii jaa rahi thi. Aur uska result, hamaari current Kaera, who wants to feel those sentiments once again. But she need someone to make her feel so.![]()
Thanks a lot!Nice update
Kaera ka past badaa hi dard bhara hai lagta hai aage bhi shayad kabhi kabhi past ki kuch baatein aayegi jab Kaera situation ko analyse karegi.
Suman shayad apni Bahu ko laayi hai jo kal apna paani bahaw rahi thi bahar khadi hokar.
Boht boht dhanyavaad bro!Ek masoom bachi se uska bachpan
Hi cheen liya.kaera ek robot hi ban ke
Reh gayi.dekhte hai veer uski kitni madad
Kar pata hai
Awesome update
Harr update, around 4k words ka hota hai bro. More than enough hai itna bro.Bhai ek to aap late update dete ho.. Upar Se Itna Chhota...![]()

Awesome update
Nice update
HATTS OFF FOR PANDIT JI
Awesome Updatee
Wahh! Bhai selute you! Ek he update main slogan, kiera ki detailed history bata dicongreta
Khubsurat update dost
Wonderful update...
Bhai mast update
Nice update
Thank you guys!Super awsm update to gud luvd it Plzzzz do cont asap Takecare

Jitna padho utna kam lagta hai par acha sabse jyada lgta haiThanks a lot!
Yes! You were right!
Boht boht dhanyavaad bro!
Aise hi bane rahiyega!
Harr update, around 4k words ka hota hai bro. More than enough hai itna bro.![]()