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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.5%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 240 13.7%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 38 2.2%

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Update chota tha but sounds interesting 🤔
Kamal update 🔥
Superb update food business ab mujhe v karna hai
Dhanyavaad guys!
Update acha tha but veer na investment bhi to Jana di ha suhana ki so dekhte ha kya karta ha.
400 skill is quite good and as food acha hoga then badiya growth bhi ayegi dekhte ha buisness ka kya hota ha aur ya Karan kya Kya karta ha.
Keep posting story just keep getting interesting update by update
Thanks a lot! Yes, Veer did lose his investment but as we all know. For him, his Pride is bigger than anything.
Veer or suman jab rang raliya mana rehe thai tow room k baher ko khada tha or suman n aisa kia or samjha ki woh veer boli ki kal use ek tohfa milega
Suhana n ek baar fir veer ko samjhne m galti kerdi aveer dikhayega ki food tarak ka business kaise kia jata h
Ab ye kaera ka bhai kia kahani sunane jaa raha h kaera ki veer ko
Dekhte h aage kia hota
As always shaandaar update bhai
Dhanyavaad Naik bro!
Keep supporting! ✨
 

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Superb Update :applause:
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Nice update bro
Nice update bhai
Veer k pss sala bhi h:hinthint:
Thanks a lot guys! ✨
स्टार्ट अप के लिए फ़ूड ट्रक बहुत अच्छा आईडीआ है
अच्छा स्किल चुना है वीर ने
सुहाना को और एक सबक मिलेगा
अब दृश्य पटल पर नया चरित्र करण
और लगता है अल्फा मैल के लिए एक सील पैक की जुगाड़ करेगी सुमन
चलो देखते हैं
आगे आगे होता क्या है
Boht boht dhanyavaad bro!
Bane rahiyega!
bhai people are interested in long story....
i personally like long and longest stories but story theme can't be change...
i have told earlier that story is incest and harem type and its nature should not be change....
by the way writer has great sense of humor amd he knows well how to handle the situation....
and how to entertain his readers....
these are god gifted symbols of few people and this man is one of them...
story should he long much long i am with you my writer.... 😉
Thanks a lot! Don't worry! If I have put this into harem and incest genres then there must be something right? You'll have to be patient. Everything will happen when the right time arrives.
Haar baar ki trah is baar bhi writerrrrrrr suspense suspense mat khela karo yarrr.
:laughing:
Everyone has different likes brother...some like long story... some like short story, but I like both... just their plot should be good... Me bs yhi chahta hu ki story me kuch romantic part include ho bs esse jyada meri koi farmaish nhi hai .. vaise bhi me na ke barabar stories padta hu or filhaal es forum par 1-2 stories hi read kar rha hu ...
Romantic scene's frequency will increase in the upcoming arc.
 

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Update - 51~ Trapped
Ab tak...

*Ding*

[Mission : Rescue Kaera from the hideout.

Rewards : ??? Points.
Mission Failure Penalty : 5000 Points.
Time Limit : 2 Days.]

Aur ye padhte hi uski aankhein felti chali gayi....

'Shiiiitttttt!!!'


Ab aage...

Aaj naye saal ka pehla din tha. Ek shubh din. Sab kuch kitna acche se guzar raha tha. Aaj hamaara parivaar kaafi saalo ke baad idhar hamaari kuldevi ke mandir me darshan karne aaya tha.

Shuruaat se hi mujhe puja paath me utni dilchaspi nahi rahi, par aaj waqai sab ke saath milke samay guzaarne me mera mann khush ho gaya tha. Ye sab ki mujhe kitni zaroorat thi, ye aaj mujhe aur acche se samajh me aane laga tha.

Hum sab abhi yahi the, bas lautne ki hi derr thi. Mein baithi hui soch hi rahi thi ki sab ikhatta hoye aur hum sab laute. Ek acche naye saal ki shuruaat ke baad ek acchi bhali shubh raatri. Par shayad ye hona devi ko manzoor nahi tha.

Jab achanak...

"Dadaaaaa jiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!"

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Paas me hi maujood upar mandir ki seedhiyo se kuch awaazein aayi.

Jese hi meri nazre uss shor ki orr gayi...

Toh saamne ka nazaara dekh meri rooh kaanp gayi.
Dada jii! Mandir ki seedhiyo se ludhakte hue neeche girte jaa rahe the. Unke peeche unki wheelchair bhi girti hui bas neeche ki orr aati jaa rahi thi. Aur mujhe jo sunaayi de raha tha wo tha shor... Dada jii ki dard bhari cheenkh, Pranjal ka bebasi se chillaana aur uss wheelchar ki girne ki awaaz jo seedhiyo se bas takraati jaa rahi thi.

Tabhi unke peeche se upar mandir se Pranjal ghabraata hua daudta hua neeche aane laga. Saath hi saath mandir me maujood baaki jan bhi. Unke chehro par shikan saaf nazar aa rahi thi mujhe.

Aur hum sab jo mandir ke niche side bhandaare waali jagah par baithe hue the, sab ikhatte uthe aur Dada jii ki taraf daud pade.

Meri choti behan Kavya...

Dada jii ki haalat dekh, unke maathe par khoon saja dekh zorr zorr se bilakhne lagi.

Mein chup chaap peeche khadi hui thi. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kya karu. Par itna zaroor abhaas ho gaya tha mujhe ki...

Meri aankhein bhi namm ho chali thi.

Tau jii aur mere papa, dono hi boht ghabraaye hue lag rahe the. Unn dono ne Dada jii ko uthaaya aur sabse pehle ek jagah acche se unhe litaaya.

Harr taraf afra tafri sii machi hui thi. Kavya ro rahi thi. Tau jii aur Papa Pranjal se sawaalo pe sawaal kar rahe the. Bhumika dii aur Tai jii... Wo bhi chintit nazre liye baato me uljhi hui thi. Vivek bhaiya upar mandir me dekhne gaye the ki Tau jii akhir gire kese!?

Pranjal ka kehna tha ki wo prashaad le raha tha jab achanak hi usne peeche se Dada jii ki cheenkh suni toh woh ghabraate hue daud ke forun hi neeche aaya. Mandir ke pujaari jii ka bhi yahi kehna tha. Wo apne haatho se hi Pranjal ko prashaad de rahe the. Jab achanak hi Dada jii ki wheelchair seedhiyo se neeche chali gayi.

Par ye kese ho sakta tha?

Mein iss sawaal me uljhi hui thi. Akhir Dada jii ki kursi apne aap kese neeche aa gayi!?

Mere mann me bas sawaal hi sawaal ghoom rahe the. Pehle laga ki shayad Pranjal se galti se khisak gayi hogi, par Pranjal toh Pujaari jii ke paas tha. Fir ek pal ke liye mere mann me ye khayaal bhi aaya ki kahi aisa toh nahi ki Dada jii ko kisi ne peeche se dhakka de diya ho? Par fir agle hi pal ye khayaal mere mann se nikal gaya.

Nahi! Aisa kaun karega!? Gaav ke log hume bade hi aadar ke saath kal se rakhe hue the. Hamaari hi seva me lage the. Koi kar hi nahi sakta aisa. Aur kar ke milega bhi kya? Toh bas ab ek hi anumaan baaki tha.

Ki shayad Dada jii ne hi khud galti se chair move kar lii ho aur wo neeche ki orr aa gire. Ye possible tha. Par ye jaan'ne ke liye unka hosh me aana zaroori tha.

Par filhaal...

"Tod dunga... *sniff* Kyu laaye aap sab ye kursi!? Haan!? Mein tod dunga aisi kursi ko. Sab iss kursi ke kaaran. Nahi baithenge aaj se Dada jii ispe..."

Pranjal zorr zorr se rote hue wheelchair ko utha utha ke fek ke patak raha tha. Usne ek wheel bhi ukhaad diya tha wheelchair ka.

Jab Achanak Vivek bhaiya ne aake usse peeche se jakad liya.

"Chorr! Chote... Chote chorr!!! Kya kar raha hai? Paagal ho gaya hai kya!?"

"Chorr do mujhe bhaiya! Sab iss kursi ke kaaran. Na ye hoti na Dada jii girte... *sniff* "

Mein...

Kuch bhi kehne laayak nahi thi. Ekdum maun hi saare nazaare ko dekh rahi thi. Shayad ghabra gayi thi mein. Aisa pehli baar meri aankho ke saamne ho raha tha. Dada jii ki khoon se sani haalat dekh mere jese paav jamm se gaye the.

"Jaldi! Nazdeek me hospital dikha tha na hume aate waqt!? Forun! Papa jii ko car me litao aur chalo forun. Jaldi!"

Tau jii ki awaaz sunn hum sab jese ab rukne laayak sthiti me nahi thi. Gaav waalo ko jaldbaazi me hi vida dekaar hum sab jald se jald nazdeeki hospital pohuche.

Kavya! Mere kandhe par sarr rakh poore time aasu bahaati jaa rahi thi. Meri maa bhi, boht chinta me thi.

Dada jii ko forun hi hospital waalo ne bharti kar liya tha.

Aur hum sab bas unke ward ke baahar hi gumsum se baithe hue the.

Aaj ka itna accha shubh din, jese ek maatam ke din me badal gaya tha. Palak jhapakte kya se kya ho gaya. Bas dua yahi thi, ki Dada jii ko kuch na ho.

Sabse zyaada Dada jii ka attachment Kavya se tha aur...

Haan!

Jese mujhe koi yaad aaya.

Veer!

Kavya aur Veer se hi Dada jii sabse zyaada attached rahe hai. Shayad kuch dino se Pranjal ke prati bhi unka rujhaan badh raha hai.

Veer ke baare sochte hi... Mujhe uska chehra apne mann me nazar aane laga.

Aur wo lamhe...

Wo Diwali ki raat...

Jab Mein Kavya ko scooty par baitha ke unn gundo se bhaag rahi thi. Aur uss raat Veer hume bachaane aaya tha. Jab wo ek chattaan ki tarah saamne khada tha mujhe unn gundo se bachaane ke liye.

Pata nahi kyu, par aaj bhi uss lamhe ko yaad kar, mere raungte khade jaate hai. Wo pal mein kabhi na bhul paungi.

Uske baad se samajh aaya tha mujhe. Ki mein kitni galat thi. Kitne bade andhkaar me jee rahi thi. Bhala mein aisa kese kar sakti thi!? Keval Vivek Bhaiya aur Pranjal ki baato me aakar mein apne uss pyaare bhai ko neglect karti aayi jo bina kuch soche, bina apni jaan ki parvaah kiye ek pal me waha haazir ho gaya tha mujhe bachaane ke liye.

Wahi ye Vivek bhaiya, aur Pranjal. Kehne ko toh mere sage bhai hai. Par inn dono ne uss din mera phone nahi uthaaya tha. Aur mein inki baat maan rahi thi!?

Sach me...

Mujhe khud pe ab hassi bhi aati hai aur ghin bhi. Mein shayad isliye... Veer se nazre nahi mila paati. Badi mushqil se uske aas paas mein khadi reh paati hu. After all, he's too pure.

Aur Veer ke baare me sochte sochte hi mujhe ye bhi khayaal aaya ki...

Dada jii ke baare me usse toh pata hi nahi.

Mene bagal me baithi Kavya ko dekha aur uss se kaha,

"Kavya! Veer ko iss baare me kuch nahi pata hai. Usse bata do."

"Huh!?"

Kavya meri baat sunn ascharya me mujhe dekhi par fir agle hi pal wo haan me sarr hilaayi aur uth ke baahar ki orr chali gayi.

Aur mein yaha yahi soch rahi thi.

'Will he come!?'

***

'Fuck! Keval tumhaare kehne par mein ye risk le raha hu.'

[Wait what!? Mene tumhe force nahi kiya okay!? I only suggested.]

'Haan! I know ki kese suggest kiya tha tumne. Arre Dada jii ke paas baad me chale jaana. Pehle mission pe jao. Uske baare me details lo. Blah blah blah. Kaun tha ye kehne waala!?'

[Wh-!?? Haan toh kya galat kaha!? Hmph! Dada jii ko toh baad me bhi dekhne jaa sakte hai. But Mission ki time limit 2 days ki hi hai. Aur bhulo mat ki mission update hua tha kuch derr pehle hi. Yadi firse hua aur time limit ghat gayi toh!? Fir kya karoge!?]

'Ussi ko dhyaan me rakh ke yaha aaya hu. Even though, mujhe Dada jii ko dekhne ka mann kar raha hai. Na jaane kya hua hai, kis haal me honge wo?'

Raat ke 9 baj rahe the aur Veer aur Pari dono hi yaha anjaan sii jagah par apni hi behas me lage hue the.

Kaaran!?

Kaaran tha ki Veer ka mission already update ho chuka tha aur usse location mil gayi thi ki hideout kaha par hai.

Nikla toh wo Ragini ke liye samaan lene tha. Par bechaara aa pohucha tha wo hideout. Yahi thi Veer ki Zindagi. Naye saal ke pehle din hi, usse aaj aise mod pe laake khada kar diya tha system ne. Ek taraf uske Dada jii toh ek taraf Kaera. Uski zindagi me uthal puthal toh hona hi tha.

Aur kab na jaane kya ho jaaye.

Kherr! Usne phone kar Suman ko bol diya tha ki wo Ragini ke liye samaan le aaye aur Ragini ko jata bhi de ki wo late aaega aaj.

Par sabse bada sawaal abhi uske mann me ye tha ki...

'Wtf is Miss Kaera doing here!? Wo toh Delhi me thi na? Yaha kab aayi? Shit! Kaun hai ye log jo unhe yaha le aaye hai. I can't let anything happen to her.'

[I don't know. Par mujhe kuch galat sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Like kuch waqai bura hone waala hai. So beware~]

'Hmm! Par ye kesi ajeeb sii jagah hai!?'

Usne apni bike ek jagah dur lagai jaha kisi ko asaani se nazar na aaye aur wo sunsaan raaste ko paar kar hideout ki boundary par aaya.

Usne dekha ki andar jaane ke liye side me ek bada sa gate tha jo ki band tha andar se. Aur aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki gate ke andar pehre daar bhi ho.

Par abhi iss waqt usse boundary par lagi jaaliyo se hi andar ka kuch nazaara dikhaayi de raha tha.

Lohe ke bade bade container rakhe hue the alag alag rang ke. Na jaane kya bhara hua tha unme.

'Huh!? Ye Pubg me goergopol waali jagah ki tarah kyu dikhaayi de raha hai mujhe. Khaas kar ki wo lohe ke containers.'

[Shut up! Think ki andar kese jaaoge. Game ke baare me baad me sochna.]

'Oh c'mon! I'm your master! Not you... I dont know tumhari deal kya hai but I have already figured out ki tumhaara behaviour harr level par badal jaata hai.'

[What!? What are you saying!!? It's... It's nothing like...]

'Jhooth nahi bolo. Koi fayda nahi hai. I already know. Harr level par... Your behaviour changes. Warna mujhe aap kehkar pukaarti tum. Aise rudely baat naa karti. Na jaane meri pichle level ki Pari kaha chali gayi. I miss her.'

[Huh!? W-What the hell? Y-You think I'm rude!? Huh!??? :angry: ]

'Of course you are. Aur shut up! Let me think...'

[Y-You... Y-You... :angry++: ]

'Sleep mode me bheju tumhe!?'

[Ehhh!? N-Noo! Ughhh! Dekh lungi... Hmph! :beee:]

'I can hear that.'

[ :eek1: ]

'Just what are these things...!?'

Bauhe sikodte hue wo dheemi chaal chal ke ek boundary ke paas rakhe hue container ke paas aaya aur...

'Check'

[Description : An Iron Container. Contains sedatives and other drugs for smuggling.]

Veer ne uss container ko jese hi check kiya, uski aankhein hairaani ke maare felti chali gayi.

'No wayyyyy! This...!?'

[Drugs... Iska matlab saaf hai. Ye koi gang hai. Andar boht log ho sakte hai. Now I think ki tumhe andar nahi jaana chahiye. It's getting late.]

'Waah! Pehle khud bolti ho ki jaldi se hideout par chalo, aur ab aa gaye toh keh rahi ho ki waapas chalo.'

[That... That's because Mujhe nahi pata tha ki it will be a gang. Look! In simpler terms, hume nahi pata andar kaun hai, uska kya iraada hai, kyu wo Kaera ko laaya hai. Mere khayaal se hume kuch details leke hi andar jaana chaahiye.]

'Nahi! I'm going in. Miss Kaera andar hai.'

[B-But...]

'You won't understand! She's my responsibility. Jab tak wo khud se mujhe mana nahi kar deti, wo meri zimmedaari rahengi. I must help her. Aur kya pata, kaho andar kam log ho aur hum asaani se unhe churra ke baahar le aaye.'

[I-I don't think so...]

'As I said... I'm going in...'

[W-Wait!]

Par Veer na ruka. Shayad uske andar jaane ka kaaran, bheetar maujood Kaera thi.

Veer ko na jaaane kyu, Kaera apni ek zimmedari ki tarah prateet hoti rahi.

Akhir, Kaera ka first time usne uss se chheena tha.
Chheena toh nahi kehenge. Par ye bhi nahi kahenge ki Kaera ne apni marzi se usse diya tha. Akhir wo toh nashe me thi. Bas! Shayad isliye, Veer ko ek sense of responsibility mehsoos hoti thi apne upar.

Andar jaane ke liye, zaahir sii baat thi wo main gate se nahi jaane waala tha. Waha se jaana matlab khud ke perr par kulhaadi maarna.

Poore hideout ki boundary ka chakkar lagaane ki soch jab wo aage badha toh ek jagah usse ek chota gate nazar aaya. Ye hideout ka pichla hissa tha shayad. Aur yaha se keval auto tak ke nikalne jitni jagah thi. Uss se zyaada nahi.

Jese hi Veer uss gate ke nazdeek aaya, usne gate ko halka sa dhakka diya aur...

*Creeeaaaaaaakkkkk*

'Fuckkk! It's open!'

[Shor mat karo....]

'You shut up first...'

[You.... ]

Andar aate hi uske kaano par ek awaaz padi,

"Abe peeche ka gate band kar, aur faaltu ke jo bulb jal rahe hai unhe bhi band kar..."

"Haan! Karta hu..."

Aur ek aadmi gate ki taraf badha.

'Shit~!"

Mauka dekhte hi Veer ek wahi rakhe container ke peeche chhup gaya.

Ye uski kismat thi, jo uss aadmi ne usse nahi dekha tha. Wo aadmi aaya gate band kiya aur andar chal diya.

Andar ek badi sii building type kii thi. Kuch jagah se puraani toh kuch jagah se nayi prateet ho rahi thi.

Khud ko savdhaan kar, Veer ahista ahista logo se bach bach ke jese tese andar tak pohucha.

'1, 2, 4.... 16... 22... Fuckkk! Kitne log hai behanchod! Damn it! Where is she!?? Miss Kaera!?'

[B-Be... Safe...]

'I know! Mein soch raha hu ki bina fight liye hi unhe yaha se churra ke le jau. But I don't think ye utna asaan hai.'

[Asaan hai!? It's almost impossible!]

Jab Veer thoda aur andar tak aaya toh usse jese sabse bada jhatka laga.

Uske perr wahi jamm se gaye the. Muh ekdum khula ka khula, ankhein feli ki feli...

Kyuki saamne...

Kaera ek kursi par baithi hui thi, rassiyo se bandhi, shayad behosh thi woh.

Par...

Uss se bhi zyaada jhatka dene waali baat ye thi ki Kaera ke saamne jo shaks khada tha...

Wo koi aur nahi balki wahi tha. Jis se Veer do baar path cross kiya tha.

Slogan!!!

'N-No wayyyy! H-He... Ye toh wahi hai. It's him!!!! K-Kya naam tha!? Yes!!! Slogan!!!! Wh-What is he doing here!? Iska matlab... He's the one!??? I... I knew it. There was something wrong with him.'

[W-Why!?? Ye sab aur ulajhta jaa raha hai. Listen! Let's go back. Kaera ke bodyguards ko hum inform karte hai. Wo usse search karne me lage honge. We will find tgem aur fir unke saath hum waapas yaha...]

"Chalo baahar bhi aa jao ab!"

Pari ki baat adhoori hi reh gayi jab achanak hi Veer ko apni peeth par ek gun ki nok mehsoos hui aur uske peeche se kahe gaye wo shabd.

'Shit!!!!'

Wo palta aur dekha toh saamne ek hatta katta aadmi maujood tha. Uske haath me ek silver colour ka revolver tha.

Revolver se ishaara kar wo Veer ko baahar laaya aur Veer aur Slogan ki aankhein ek baar fir aapas me takraayi.

Slogan : Swaagat hai! Welcome! Welcome! Mujhe pata tha tum yaha aaoge hi!

'Huh!? How did he..!?'

[Isse kese pata? Is he joking or what!?]

Slogan : Baitho! Baitho!

Slogan ne ishaara kae Veer ko Kaera ke bagal me rakhi chair par baithaaya. Majbooran Veer ko baithna pada.

Par uski nazre ek baaj ki tarah Slogan par hi maujood thi.

Slogan : Zara inka bhi toh swagat karo bhai!

Aur uske itna kehte hi Steve jo revolver liya tha usne apna revolver khosa aur rassiya laake Veer ke haath perr dono baandh diye.

Veer (gusse me) : Kaun ho tum asal me!? Aur ye sab kya hai!?

Slogan (smiles) : Arre bataya toh tha na bacche!? I'm Slogan!

Veer (gusse me) : Don't fuck with me. Mein already internet aur harr jagah search kar chuka hu. Slogan naam ka koi aadmi nahi hai.

Slogan (laughs) : Of course! Of course! Hahaha~ But... Kya tumne underworld me kisi se pucha!?

Veer : Huh!??

Slogan (smiles) : Nahi na!? Toh kese pata chalega!?

[Ugh! Ye aadmi boht creepy hai. What the hell is wrong with his smile!?]

Slogan : Steve!

Steve : Jii Dada!

Slogan (smiles) : Kursi lagao bhai! Aur show shuru kiya jaaye!

*Clap* *Clap*

Aur uske taali bajaate hi achanak hi saari lights band ho gayi. Bas baaki tha, toh Veer aur Kaera ke upar laga hua uss safed L.E.D ka jalna jo hawa me taar se latka hua tha.

Aage kya hone waala tha, Ye toh Veer nahi jaanta tha. Par itna zaroor jaanta tha ki...

Something bad was about to happen.

***

Veer jab Ghar se baahar samaan lene nikla hua tha. Uske kuch derr baad hi uske ghar me ek shaks aaya.

Aur ye koi aur nahi uski chaheeti Nidhi ma'am thi.

Ragini : Arre!? A-Aap yaha!? Itni... Raat gaye!? Aaiye na!

Nidhi : Hmm~

Ragini : J-Jii! Kese aana hua!? Sab theek toh hai na?

Nidhi : Huh!? Ah! Sab... Sab theek hai. Wo... V-Veer kaha hai!?

Ragini : Veer ko toh mene samaan laane ke liye bheja tha. Par... Abhi thodi derr pehle hi uska phone aaya ki wo kisi kaam me busy hai toh aane me late ho jaega.

Nidhi (frowns) : Itni raat gaye wo kis kaam me busy hai!?

Ragini : Ye toh usne mujhe bhi nahi bataaya. Par jab aaega toh zaroor bata dega. Kuch aa gaya hoga usse zaroori kaam...

Nidhi : Aap uski Bhabhi ho... Aur aapko zara bhi chinta nahi ki wo kaha gaya hai itni raat gaye!? Na college jaata hai woh, na koi kaam dhandha, aur na hi uska koi dost hai. Fir kis kaam se gaya hai woh!? Aapne ek baar bhi sochne ka prayaas nahi kiya!?

Nidhi ke ekdum se bole gaye shabdo ko sunn Ragini jese hairat me wahi khadi reh gayi. Aur wo bas stabdh nigaaho se Nidhi ko ghur rahi thi.

Fir jese Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki bhala ye kesa ravaiyya dikha diya usne apna Ragini ko. Na jaane kya soch rahi hogi woh uske baare me.

Nidhi : Ah! Wo... Maaf karna... Wo mein... I didn't mean it like...

Ragini : It's! It's okay! Aap aaiye... Baithiye na!

Nidhi : Hmm~

Thoda embarassed feel karte hue Nidhi sofe par baithi toh Ragini ne usse paani serve kia.

Ragini : Ab bataaiye!

Nidhi : Actually! Mujhe Veer se hi milna tha.

Ragini : Koi zaroori kaam!?

Nidhi : Hmm~ Kal jab hum saath me giant wheel...

Ragini : !???

Nidhi : Ahem... Mera matlab hai... Kal jab wo mere saath tha toh usne bataaya tha ki... Wo ab college continue nahi karega. Kal toh mein usse kuch keh na paayi...

Aur Nidhi kyu na keh paayi thi ye baat bhi wo jaanti thi. Akhir Veer uske hontho ke kareeb jo aa gaya tha kal.

Ragini : Usne aisa kaha!?

Nidhi : Hmm~ Aur isliye... Ek teacher hone ke naate ye mera farz hai ki mein apne students ko sahi raah dikhau. Aur Veer toh fir bhi mera favourite student raha hai. Hamaara relationship friends ki tarah bhi raha hai. Toh mein laut rahi thi... Isliye socha Veer se baat kar usse fir se samjhau... Kitna zaroori hai. Career!

Ragini : Aapki baat sahi hai. Wese... Aap kidhar se laut rahi thi? Aapka ghar toh yaha se thoda sa dur hai. Kisi relative ke yaha aayi thi aap!?

Nidhi : Wo...

Aur itna bol Nidhi bauhe sikode ekdum chup ho gayi.

Ragini : Maaf karna. Yadi nahi bataana hai toh koi baat nahi.

Nidhi : ....

Ragini : Par yadi aapki ye college waali baat sahi hai toh. Mein Veer se iss vishay par zaroor baat karungi. Usse samjhaungi.

Nidhi : You must...

Ragini : J-Jii! Bilkul! Ye kya!? Aapne itni patli sweater pehni hui hai!? Baahar kitni thand hai.

Nidhi : No! I'm fine~

Ragini : Aise kese!? Mein abhi aapke liye ek shawl le aati hu. Thand me laut'te waqt kaam aaega. Aur... Aap rukiye abhi chai bana ke laati hu.

Nidhi : Nahi! Iski koi zaroorat nahi.

Ragini : Mene kaha na... Rukiye! Warna Veer mujhe chillaega fir... Kahega ki meri favourite ma'am ko yu hi bina kuch khilaaye pilaaye hi kese jaane de diya!? Haha~

Nidhi (budbudaate hue) : Yadi usse meri baato ki itni parvaah hoti toh unn vaado ko nahi todta woh...

Ragini : Hmm!? Kuch kaha kya aapne!??

Nidhi : N-Nahi! Kuch bhi nahi!

Kuch derr baad dono hi baith ke chai pee rahi thi aur baato me lagi hui thi.

Par Ragini ko kuch mehsoos zaroor ho raha tha.

Usne dekha ki baat baat par kabhi Veer ka zikr aate hi Nidhi jese gum sum sii ho jaati thi toh kabhi kuch aur soch apne khayalaato me doob jaati.

Unki ye mulaqaat zyaada derr tak ki na rahi, kyuki Nidhi waha se bina Veer se mile hi jaa chuki thi.

Aur idhar Ragini bechaari...

Wo iss umeed me thi, ki Veer kuch derr me laut aaega. Par usse kya pata tha, ki Veer toh waha Slogan dwara kab ka uske changul me phass chuka tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyavaad!
Nice update..!!
Arohi ko ab bura lag raha hai..lekin jab usko taklif dete the uske bhai tab maja le rahi thi toh fir ab yeh guilt kis kaam ka..!! Yeh slogan toh bada chalak nikla veer ko hi fasa diya..ab dekhte hai veer kaise bahar niklta hai kaera ko bachake..!! Nidhi aur Ragini ko veer ki fikr hona toh jayaj hai..!!
 

Werewolf

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Very good update.

Suhana ki eisi ki teisi....
:laughing:
subah subah sex ka maja liya veer ne suman ke saath par aisa lagta hai aabha ne aawaj sun li hogi aur chut me ungali bhi ki hogi jiska pata chal gaya suman ko aur wo veer ko surprise gift ke taur pe aabha ko le aayegi .

suhana ne veer ka food truck wale business ko madad karne se mana kar diya par ab veer ke paas chef ki skill hai wo bhi best wali to veer ko apne upar full confident hoga hi .
par sochna ye hai ki veer paise kaha se layega .

kaera ka bhai karan hai jo veer se milne aa gaya aur lagta hai wo kuch secret batanewala hai kaera ke baare me .
Ohhh~ :shocked: Kya baat!!
Sahi disha me socha hai.
Dhanyavaad! ✨
Mast update tha bhai maza hi gaya lagta hai suman apne baad apni bahu 70% nahi to apni beti 40% chances hai neeche litane ki firaq Mai hai kahi aisa na ho ki unki jagah ragni hi neeche aa jaye veer ke 😁😁😁😁
Aur ek baar firse suhana ko usi feeling se awgat krate hue humare veer babu unka ghamanad Or unki chote Or bhade kaam ke prati nazariye ko badlne ya bole to todne ka intezam kr rhe hai 😜😜😜
Aur akhir kar lagta hai veer ko karan ke moonh se sunne ko milegi kaera ki sad life story ki esa kya hua past mai jo kaera esa behave krti hai ja esi ho gayi hai jis se use hint bhi milega or apni intelligence use krke kaera ke Akelepan ko door bhi karega


Dekhne Mai Maza ayega ab ki karan ko suman ke pass esa kya hai jo veer ko jindagi jeene or samjane ke naye tarike seekayega😇😇🤩🥰😍😍😍😍
Dhanyavaad bro! Par ye font ko padhne me mujhe 5 minute lag gaye. :cry:
Btw thanks a lot! ✨
Keep supporting!
Super update
Nice update
Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update...
Mast update bhai lagta hai veer ki business partner karan banega.... Veer bhi haveli se koi rishta rakhta hai kaera bhi haveli gaya hai koi rishta to hai dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Nice update
Thank you guys! ✨
 

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Update - 49 ~ The Last Day of the Year
Ab tak...

Bechaara Veer jawaab ke taur par kuch bhi nahi sunn paaya.

Par...

Nidhi na jaane kya soch rahi thi. Par uski nazre ek jagah hi tiki hui thi. Saasein pehle se thodi tezz. Aur unn aankho ke saamne uske baal the jo uske expression ko chhupaaye hue the.

Kya hone waala tha kal!? Inke iss plan me!? Toh wahi Pranjal aur Vivek ke plan me!? Aur saath hi saath... Slogan!!!! Jiski activities Veer ke palle nahi pad rahi thi.


Ab aage...

31st December...
At Morning...

Kal Shreya se jab Veer ki phone par baat hui thi toh Veer ki haami liye bagerr hi Shreya ne usse apne plan me shaamil kar liya tha. Aur tay hua tha ki aaj ki raat Veer, Shreya, Nidhi aur Juhi sabhi saath me enjoy karne jaenge aur late night tak naye saal ka swaagat kar thoda celebration kar ke hi ghar lautenge.

Veer ko uss mission ke 200 points mil chuke the par abhi tak usne unn points ko spend nahi kiya tha siwae 10 points ke. Usne Appearance me 10 points kal raat me hi invest kar diye the. Aur ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar se the.

[ Stats :
Strength - 56/100
Intelligence - 70/100
Agility - 50/100
Endurance - 50/100
Appearance - 50/100]

Veer shayad apne bache hue points ko ekdum effectively use karna chaahta tha. Shayad shop me aisi kisi anokhi skill ki talaash thi usse jo uske behad kaam aa sake.

'Show me my full status Pari!'

[Sure thing, Master!]

[Name : Veer

Age : 21
Status : Student

Stats :
Strength - 56/100
Intelligence - 70/100
Agility - 50/100
Endurance - 50/100
Appearance - 50/100


Skills :
1) Sex Protection : ON (Silver Tier Skill)
2) Basic Martial Arts Skill (Bronze Tier Skill)
3) Hawkeye (Diamond Tier Skill)

System's Internal Features :
Check-I, Check-II, Path Tracker, Past Illustration.

Relationships :
1) Suman : Loyal Slave (Favourability : 84)
2) Aabha : Familiar (Favourability : 58)
3) Sonali : Familiar (Favourability : 30)
4) Ragini : Close Friend (Favourability : 60)
5) Nidhi : Close Friend (Favourability : 52)
6) Shreya : Close Friend (Favourability : 64)
7) Juhi : Best Friend (Favourability : 85)
8) Suhana : Close Friend (Favourability : 59)
9) Sonia : Good Friend (Favourability : 50)
10) Kavya : Very Close Friend (Favourability : 80)
11) Arohi : Good Friend (Favourability : 55)
12) Bhumika : Familiar (Favourability : 20)
13) Shweta : Familiar (Favourability : 8)

System Level : Level 4
(56 EXP more to reach Level 5)]

'Hmm!! I need to earn money and need more points. Meri priority yahi hai abhi.'

[Right master!]

'So!? Umm... Miss Kaera ki favourability nahi dekh sakta kya mein!?'

[Dekh sakte ho but not now. Yadi kisi ka status nahi dekh sakte toh aap uski Favourability bhi nahi dekh paoge.]

'Hmm! I see! Alright! Let's go...'

Aaj Veer ke 2 jagah plans the. Ek toh wahi Shreya aur baaki sabhi ke saath raat ka plan tha aur dusra Ragini aur baaki sabhi ke saath.

Jab Veer ne ye baat bataayi thi ki wo raat me free nahi rahega, ye sunn ke Ragini kaafi udaas ho gayi thi. Par usne behla fusla ke Ragini ko jese tese mana liya aur din me ghoomne chalne ko keh diya. Yaha Veer ko ek aur baat jaan'ne ko mili ki Kavya aur baaki sabhi parivaar ke saath kul devi ke mandir ke liye subah nikal chuke the.

Beshaq! Veer iss achanak trip se unki thoda aascharya chakit tha par usne zyaada nahi socha. Kavya ka kehna tha ki uske Dada jii ne Veer ko saath le chalne ke liye bhi bola tha par Vivek ne beech me kood kar Dada jii ke kaan bhar diye aur wo baat wahi tal ke reh gayi.

Kherr! Aaiye, toh wahi chal ke dekhte hai ki waha kya chal raha tha iss waqt...

Iss samay subah ke 8 baj rahe the aur sabhi ghar waale do badi badi gaadiyo me baithe hue the apni aur apne gaav ki orr jaa rahe the.

Veer ke parivaar ke poorvaj saalo se uss devi mata ki pooja karte aaye the aur uss mandir ki sthaapna bhi unke poorvajo ne hi kii thi par jese jese samay guzarta gaya aur aane waali peedhi sheher se judti gayi, wo mandir dheere dheere waha ke trust me samarpit kar diya gaya.

Kaaran!? Kaaran tha ki ab Veer ka parivaar sheher me panap raha tha aur ghar ka koi sadasya roz roz mandir ki dekh bhaal ya chakkar lagaane ke liye kisi ke paas itna samay nahi tha. Toh uss mandir ko wahi ke trust me samarpit kar diya gaya. Ab uss mandir ki poori zimmedari unn trust waale logo ki thi.

Par aaj bhi, jab bhi Veer ka parivaar, khaas kar Manorath jii jab bhi waha jaate the, gaav ke sabhi log unhe bade hi aadar aur satkaar ke saath unka swaagat karte the. Yaha tak ki wo ye bhi kehte the ki ab bhi ki wo mandir unhi ka hai aur hamesha unhi ka rahega. Shayad aaj bhi unki acchi khaatirdaari hone waali thi.

Unn do cars me se, ek car me Brijesh sang Bhumika, Shweta, Kavya aur Manorath viraajmaan the.

Toh wahi dusri me Karunesh sang Sumitra, Vivek, Arohi aur Pranjal.

Dono hi car me do drivers the. Sheher se kuch ghanto ki duri par hi unka gaav tha.

Kavya : Dada Jii aapne... Veer bhaiya ko nahi bulaaya!?

Manorath : Beta mene kaha tha par Vivek bola ki aaj Veer shayad kahi aur jaa raha hai... Meri toh koi sunta hi nahi hai. Jese jese budha hota jaa raha hu, meri baato ko ab log hawa me udaate jaa rahe hai.

Brijesh : Papa jii... Aisi baat kyu keh rahe ho aap!? Hum sab aapki baat maante hai. Ab uss baare me charcha mat kariye aap. Mandir jaa rahe hai, accha mood rakh ke chaliye.

Brijesh ki iss baat pe sabhi shaant pad gaye. Wo aage driver ke sang baitha hua tha. Toh wahi peeche side ki seat par Manorath aur unke bagal se Kavya, fir Bhumika aur fir Shweta.

Bhumika : Aaj saari responsibility Nandini ko deke aayi hu Mom.

Nandini unke hotel ki manager thi. Jo sab kuch badi hi acchi tareeke se manage kar leti thi.

Shweta : Hmm! Chinta ki koi baat nahi hai. Wo acche se dekh legi.

Bhumika : Hmm! Bas koi bada client ya guest na aa jaaye. Aur aisa na ho ki kuch problem ho jaaye.

Shweta : Don't overthink! Just enjoy the day mera baccha...!

Bhumika (smiles) : Hmm!

Aur kuch ghanto ki doori tay karne ke baad hi wo pohuch chuke the apne kuldevi ke mandir.

Sabhi ka waha harr baat ki tarah bade hi aadar ke saath swaagat kiya gaya. Saath hi saath waha unke rukne aur khaane ki bhi vyavastha kii gayi.

Darshan kar lene ke baad sabhi khaana khaane me lage hue the jab Vivek aur Pranjal aapas me baith na jaane kya baatein kar rahe the.

Pranjal : Saara plan ready hai bhaiya... Bas derr hai toh usse anjaam dene kii...

Vivek : Nahi chote... Aaj nahi...! Hume wese bhi kal nikalna hai. Aaj risky hai. Kal karna... Wese bhi yaha se naashta karne ke baad hi niklenge hum.

Pranjal : Thik hai bhaiya! Kal sahi fir...

Na jaane dono kis plan ko anjaam dene ki baat kar rahe the.

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Idhar Veer din me apne parivaar ke saath ho rahi baato se anibhigya Ragini aur baaki sabhi ke saath aaj ghoomne nikla hua tha.

Par achanak hi raaste me usse nazar aaya ki kuch ladies kisi kapde ki sale par humgama kar rahi thi.

Veer : Kya ho raha hai udhar!?

Ragini : Virodh!

Veer : Virodh!? Kesa virodh!?

Ragini : Umm... Wo dekho na... Mahila mandal jama ho gaya poora udhar. Kisi sale ki peeche ladaayi ho gayi hai. Shayad kuch ghapla kiya hai sale waale ne. Isliye aurate itni awaazein laga rahi hai.

Aur waqai! Jab Veer ne dhyaan se dekha toh usse samajh aaya ki naye saal ki sale ke bahaane kapdo ka business karne waala aadmi kuch phate aur bekaar pieces ko nikaalne ke liye ye sale rakha hua tha. Aur wo kapdo ki wrapping ko kholne nahi de raha tha.

Jab kuch aurato ne khol ke kapdo ki jaanch kii toh unhone dhaava bol diya. Ittefaaq se mahila mandal wahi se kahi aur jaa rahi thi aur ye virodh dekh wo bhi unke saath jud gayi aur poori tarah se waat laga dii uss dukaan daar kii.

Ragini (sighs) : Harr sale me kuch na kuch hota hi hai.

Veer bade hi dhyaan se sab kuch dekh raha tha aur achanak hi jese uske dimaag ki ghanti baji aur agle hi pal uske hontho par ek muskaan bikhar gayi.

Veer : Bhabhi!

Ragini : Hmm!?

Veer : Meri aap se ek request hai. Aap poori karogi!?

Ragini : Hmm? Okay! Kya baat hai!?

Veer : Kya aap... Kya aap Suman jii ko sheher ke poore taur tareeke sikha sakti ho? Mera matlab hai saare niyam kaayde, khareed-daari se leke devices ko operate karna sab kuch. Ek modern vyakti ka poora knowledge jitna apa de sakti ho... Kya aap kar sakti ho?

Ragini (surprised) : Huh!? P-Par ye ekdum se aise kyu!?

Veer : Suman jii ne mujhse hi khud kaha tha. Kyu hai na!? Suman jii!?

Suman : E-Ehhh!? Ohhh! Haa haa! Mene kaha tha...

Suman baat ko samajh forun hi haa me sarr hilaayi aur apni razamandi dii. Par uski samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki uske maalik ke dimaag me akhir chal kya raha tha.

Ragini : O-Okay! Mein apni poori koshish karungi inhe sab kuch bataane me...

Veer (smiles) : Thank you Bhabhi!

Ragini : Umm... It's okay!

Lunch ke samay, Ragini aur Veer agal bagal hi baithe the jab Veer ne Ragini ke chehre par maayusi ko turant hi bhaanp liya...

Veer : Aap pareshaan lag rahi ho Bhabhi!

Ragini : Huh!? N-Nahi toh!? Mein bhala kyu pareshaan hone lagi!?

Veer : Jhooth mat boliye! Mujhse toh bilkul bhi nahi! Vivek bhaiya ka call aaya tha na!?

Veer ki baat sunn Ragini iss baar dheere se haa me sarr hilaayi aur apne nigaahe neeche kar baith gayi.

Veer : Kya kaha unhone!?

Ragini : Wo... Wo sabhi aaj hamaari kuldevi ke mandir gaye hai.

Veer : Unhone aap ko bhi bulaaya hoga!?

Ragini (nods) : Umm...

Veer : Toh!??

Ragini ne apni nigaahe upar kar ek pal ke liye usse dekha... Unn aankho me nami jo panap rahi thi wo Veer asaani se dekh paa raha tha.

Ragini : I... Mein... Mein kabhi bhi mandir ke naam par devi ka tiraskaar nahi karti mana kar ke... Par...

Veer : ....

Ragini : Par...

Veer : Aapka mann nahi kiya zara bhi...

Ye vaakya sunn Ragini chaunki aur Veer ko ghurne lagi.

Bhala uske mann ki baat Veer ne kese bhaanp lii thi!?

Veer : Itne dino se aap ke saath reh raha hu. Thoda boht toh mein bhi aapko samajhne laga hu.

Kehte hue usne jese hi apna haath Ragini ke haath ke upar rakha toh bechaari Ragini ki idhar haalat hi bigadne lagi. Wo phati aankho se Veer ko ghure jaa rahi thi.

Uske gulaabi honth khule... Par keval halki sii hawa hi baahar nikli, koi shabd nahi.

Aur aankhein jyo ki tyo Veer par tiki thi.

Veer : I don't know ki aap kya decision logi. But aap jo bhi decision logi. Hum sab aapke saath hai. But if... Yadi aapne Vivek bhaiya se sach me alag hone ka decision liya then... I was wondering ki... Kya hum aise hi reh paenge!? I mean... Fir aap uss ghar ki sadasya nahi rahogi aur mera aur Suman jii ka aapke ghar rukna...

Wo apni baat aage rakh paata ki uske pehle hi Ragini ne apna haath uske hotho par rakh usse rok diya.

Ragini : Veer! Mein uss parivaar ki sadasya rahu ya na rahu. Tum aur Suman jii mere apne sadasya ho. Wo ghar mera akele ka nahi hai. Tum sabhi ka bhi hai. Aur kya karungi mein itne bade ghar me akele reh ke!? Bhulo mat Veer... Tum bhi... Uss parivaar se alag ho chuke ho. Toh aise me yadi mein bhi hoti hu... Toh... Aren't we the same!?

Usne muskuraate hue kaha par Veer jaanta tha. Ki uss smile ke peeche kaafi kuch chhipa hua tha. Jisse shayad vyakt karna abhi Ragini ke bas me nahi tha.

Aur bilkul wesa hi hua... Bhaavuk hote hue Ragini ne forun hi apna chehra ferr liya aur jab usne dekha ki Suman samet sabhi counter se waapas uski aur Veer ki taraf aa rahi hai toh forun hi apni aankhein mal seedhi hokar baith gayi.

Ant me unn sabhi ne thoda enjoy kiya jiske chalte Ragini ka mood kaafi hadd tak theek ho chuka tha.

Par ab samasya thi raat ki...

Veer ko Nidhi ko jo face karna tha. Wese toh Nidhi ne usse maaf kar diya tha. Par...

Pratkyash aamne saamne milna ek alag baat thi.

Aur zaahir hai ki dono ke beech awkwardness barkaraar rehne waali thi.

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31st December...
At Night...

Veer apni bike par tha aur wo theek Nidhi ki society me hi neeche khada hua tha jab Nidhi samet Juhi aur Shreya neeche utarti hui aayi.

Shreya : Arre kya koi mehmaan ho tum haan!? Jo ek minute ke liye bhi upar nahi aa...

Par uske bol wahi tham gaye jab usne paas aate hue Veer ko dekha.

Appearance me 10 points daalne ka asar tha ye!?

Shreya (blushes) : You... You look good!

Veer (smiles) : Thanks!

Shreya (blushes) : Aisa... Aisa kya laga rahe ho aajkal huh!? Hume bhi bata do...

Veer (smiles) : It's a secret!

"Maaaaaamuuuuuuuu!!!"

Aur beshaq! Veer ko dekhte hi uski pyaari fuljhadi bole toh Juhi sarpat daudati hi aayi aur uske perr se lipat gayi. Veer ne forun hi usse godi me uthaay aur uska gaal choom liya.

Veer : Aa gayi Juhi!? Kya pehni ho aap!? Ohhhh! New jacket!??

Juhi : Hmm! Maasi ne dilaayi!

Veer : Kya baat hai!? Boht kharche ho rahe hai!?

Shreya : Kyu na honge!? Ab mein kamaane jo lagi hu.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Shreya (blushes) : Wese bhi... Sab tumhari hi wajah se toh hai.

Veer aage kuch keh pata ki tabhi...

*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*

Usse heels ki awaaz sunaayi dii aur usne dekha ki Nidhi ek khubsoorat sii saree pehne aur ek shawl upar daale neeche aa rahi thi.

Aaj wo itni khubsoorat dikh rahi thi ki Veer khud apne aap ko kuch derr yu taktaki lagaye usse dekhne se na rok saka.

Dono ki hi nazre mili aur pal bhar ke liye dono hi jese bhul gaye ki wo dono akele nahi hai. Aas paas bhi log hai.

Shreya : Toh chale!?

Veer : Ah! Y-Yeah! Right!

Juhi : Mein Maamu ke saath baithungi... Aage bike pe...

Shreya : Huh!?

Nidhi : Nahi Juhi! Mere saath baitho chalo. Maasi ko baithne do unke saath. Hum apni scooty me chalte hai.

Wese toh iss baat se Shreya boht khush thi ki usse Veer ke saath baithne ka mauka mil raha tha par fir bhi... Wo apni behan se bhi utna hi pyaar jo karti thi. Aur uski fiqr bhi.

Nidhi saree me thi. Aur aise me scooty chalana wo bhi Juhi ko lekar, raat ke waqt. Ye kitna kathin tha wo jaanti thi. Aur khatarnak bhi ho sakta tha.

Isliye...

Shreya : Nahi dii! Aap aur Juhi Veer ke saath baithiye! Aapne saree pehni hui hai Dii. Dikkat jaegi. Aur mera kya hai? Mein toh jeans me hu. Mein scooty se chalti hu.

Nidhi ne ek pal Veer ko dekha jo bina kuch kahe hi uske nirnay ka intezar kar raha tha aur fir akhir kaar Nidhi ne finally dheere se haa me sarr hilaaya aur Veer ke theek peeche jaake wo baith gayi.

Ye pal...

Veer ke hontho par apne aap hi muskaan laa diya. Aise hi toh ek saath baith ke college se lauta karte the wo. Aise hi toh Nidhi uske peeche yu baitha karti thi. Aaj itne dino baad ussi anubhuti ko firse mehsoos kar paa raha tha Veer. Par sabse aham baat ye thi ki iss waqt chaand bhi apne poore rang dhaaya hua tha. Poora chamak raha tha aur apni roshni bakhoobi bikhere hue tha.

Aur finally Veer aur baaki sabhi society se nikle.

Raat ka plan simple tha. Koi acchi si jagah jaake pehle thoda entertainment. Fir dinner aur ant me new year celebration ke fireworks dekhne ka plan.

Sabse pehli jagah Veer aur baaki sabhi amusement park me gaye the. Amusem park toh nahi tha, ek pradarshini lagi hui thi. Bhale hi amusement park se thoda chota tha par rides idhar bhi thi.

Juhi baccho waali rides enjoy kar rahi rhi, toh wahi Shreya uski photos utaar rahi thi. Aur wahi Veer aur Nidhi side me khade unhe dekh rahe the.

Juhi : Mummyyyyy! Mujhe wo bade waale me baithna.

Usne ishaara karte hue kaha. Uska ishaara Giant wheel ki orr tha.

Nidhi : Huh? Nahi Juhi! Bilkul bhi nahi! Darr jaogi baad me tum hi. Dekh rahi ho kitni upar tak jaata hai.

Shreya : Juhi! Wo dekho! Wo train waali me baithe apan!? Mein bhi baitha sakti hu usme toh.

Juhi : Haa chalo chalo maasi... Jaldi...!

Aur wo kheech ke Shreya ko le gayi.

Ab bache the toh keval Veer aur Nidhi.

Veer : Umm... Kya aap chalna chahogi!? Ma'am!? Giant wheel me!?

Nidhi : Huh? M-Mein!? N-Nahi... Mein nahi...

Veer : O-Okay!

Wo jawaab dete hue apni nazre jhuka liya. Par jese Nidhi ne uska expression dekh liya tha toh wo puchi,

Nidhi : Umm... Kya tumhe ride karna hai!?

Veer : Hmm? Y-Yeah! Mein kabhi baitha nahi hu inn rides me. Kabhi koi laaya hi nahi...

Usne ek feeki smile dete hue kaha toh Nidhi ko jese yaad aaya ki Veer ka bachpan kese guzra tha. Aur ye yaad karte hi wo bauhe sikode usse dekhne lagi aur ek duwidha me phass gayi.

Nidhi : O-Okay! If... If you want then... Hum chal sakte hai!

Bas fir kya tha kuch hi derr me Veer aur Nidhi dono hi Giant wheel par sawaar the. Par...

*Ding*

[Mission : Hug Nidhi! Let her know you are her support.
Rewards : ?? Points
Time limit : Before 12 A.M
Mission Failure Penalty : 50 Points Deduction.]

'What the fuckkkkkkkkk!?'

[Hahaha~]

'Mazaak chal rahi hai? No seriously!? Mazaak hai? Fuckkkk! Uss din hi mene unke haathe se thappad khaaya tha aur ab ye? Jhoote padwaane ki planning hai kya? Wtf is this mission?'

[I cannot help it master! Execute this mission properly. Aur... Haa~ iss Mission ke complete hote hi mein level up ho jaungi. But I'll be in sleep mode for loading your new resources. Toh pehle se hi wish kar deti hu. Happy new year master! Enjoy your time! Hehe~]

'W-Wait what!??? Wtf??? Sleep mode achanak kyu?'

[I told you kuch surprise hai right? So wait for it!]

Nidhi : Ummm...

Nidhi ne uska dhyaan kheecha toh Veer hosh me aaya. Giant wheel ghoomte hue upar jaa raha tha.

Aur Nidhi aur Veer agal bagal baithe hue upar se poora nazaara dekh rahe the.

Nidhi : It's so beautiful...

Veer : Bilkul aap ki tarah...

*Badump*

Nidhi (gasps) H-Huhhhh!?

Veer : Mene kabhi iss ride pe sawaari nahi kii thi. Aaj aap aayi toh ye bhi ho gaya... Thanks for agreeing.

Nidhi : It's... It's fine!

Nidhi : Veer!

Veer : Hmm?

Nidhi : Sach kahu... Toh I'm really mad at you.

Veer : ??

Nidhi : Kitna kehti rehti hu tum se. Kitna keh chuki hu pehle bhi. Don't leave your studies. Par tum ho ki sunte hi nahi. Kya karna chaahte ho aage!? Kya karoge!? Kuch plan hai ki nahi? Mein tumhe daant nahi rahi hu. Tumhari teacher bhi hu. Tumhare career ki chinta mujhe lagi rehti hai. Aur tum toh mere khaas student ho. Ek tarah se parivaar ka hissa bhi ban gaye the tum haal hi me. Toh kidhar jaana chaahte ho, koi lakshya hai ki nahi? Kya kar rahe ho abhi? Study nahi karte toh kya karte ho din bhar? Kuch socha hai future ke baare me? Kyu nahi aate ho college!? Ye saare sawaalo ke jawaab tumhe acche se pata hone chaahiye Veer.

Wo lagataar bole jaa rahi thi. Par Veer chaand ki uss roshni me keval Nidhi ke husn ko hi dekhta raha aur bas muskuraata raha.

Abhi bhi Nidhi ko Veer ke bhavishya ko lekar chinta thi.

Veer (smiles) : Aapki yahi baatein toh mera dil jeet leti hai.

Nidhi : Huhhhh!??

Veer : M-Mera matlab hai... Aapko meri itni chinta hai?

Nidhi : Kyu nahi hoegi? Akhir tum...

Kehte hue wo ruk gayi.

Veer : Akhir tum!?? Akhir tum kya ma'am!?

Wheel ekdum upar aa chuka tha jab Nidhi ne Veer ke chehre ko dekha aur uska chehra apne ekdum sameep paaya toh uske bol wahi tham gaye.

Nidhi : Kuch... Kuch nahi...!

'Fuckkk! I'm doing it. Jo hoga dekha jaega. Ek thappad aur kha lunga.'

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne Nidhi ko zorr se apni baaho me kheech liya.

Iss achanak hamle ki umeed Nidhi ko bilkul bhi na thi. Wo apni aankhein faade abhi abhi jo kuch hue usse digest karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aur jese hi usse abhaas hua ki iss waqt wo Veer ki baaho me thi aur Veer usse zorr se bheencha hua tha, Nidhi ki saasein tez ho gayi.

Usne apna haath upar le jaake Veer ke seene par rakha aur usse dhakelne hi waali thi jab Veer ke shabd uske kaano me pade,

"Sabse pehle toh thank you ma'am. Mujhe uss daldal se nikaalne ke liye. Fir apne saath rakhne ke liye, mera itna support karne ke liye ye jaante hue bhi ki aap khud itni pareshaani me ho. Uske baad thank you ki aapne harr hardship me mera saath diya. Aaj bhi aapko meri parvaah hai, thank you ki aap aaj aane ke liye taiyaar hui, mere saath ride me baithne ke liye taiyaar hui. Rahi baat mere aim ki... I'm leaving the college ma'am. Because I know ki mujhe kya karna hai. Thank you so much! Aap hamesha hi meri ma'am rahogi, chaahe mein college jau ya nahi. And lastly... Jese aapne mera saath diya wese hi mein bhi aapka saath dunga. I'm here for you. Always!"

Unn baato ko sunte hi Nidhi ka haath jo Veer ko dhakelne ke liye the wo ekdum se dheela pad gaya.

Dono ke hi chehre aapas me behad qareeb the. Dono hi ek dusre ki garam saaso ko bakhubi mehsoos kar paa rahe the.

Aur na jaane aise kya hua ki Veer apne aap hi Nidhi ki orr jhukne laga.

Nidhi ka attraction jese usse kheech raha tha.

Paas aate hi usse sunaayi dii... Nidhi ke tezz dhadkate hue dil ki heartbeat. Kitni zorro se dhadak raha tha uska dil.

Wo bas lambi lambi saasein liye jaa rahi thi.

Par jese hi Veer uske ekdum kareeb aa gaya, jab wo uske hontho se bas kuch hi centimetres ki duri par tha, Nidhi ne zorr se dhakka deke usse peeche dhakel diya.

Nidhi : N-Nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!

Aur ek baar fir dono ke beech me wahi awkwardness ka mahaul chha gaya.

Uske baad toh jese dono me hi koi baat nahi hui.
Dinner ke baad bhi wo dono ek dusre se baat nahi kiye. 12 bajte hi jab fireworks ka show shuru hua toh dono hi baithe zaroor the par dono ke beech me Juhi baithi hui thi.

Aur dono hi pal do pal apni nazro ko ek dusre se milaate par nateeja wahi, koi bhi kuch kehne ki haalat me nahi hota.

Aur tabhi...

*Ding*

[System has reached Level 5.]

*Ding*

[In-built feature ~ Translator has been unlocked.]

*Ding*

[In-built feature ~ Slot has been unlocked.]

*Ding*

[Quest hunt is now accessible.]

'Huh!??!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!


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Update - 50 ~ New Year's Blast
Ab tak...

*Ding*

[System has reached Level 5.]

*Ding*

[In-built feature ~ Translator has been unlocked.]

*Ding*

[In-built feature ~ Slot has been unlocked.]

*Ding*

[Quest hunt is now accessible.]

'Huh!??!'


Ab aage...

1st January...
New Year's Morning...

Aaj naye saal ka pehla din tha. Jaha Veer ke ghar me, yaani ki Ragini ke ghar me iss waqt sabhi ground floor par hassi mazaak kar aaj naashte me kuch special banaane ki soch rahe the, wahi iss waqt Veer apne kamre me apne bistar par baithe sawaalo ke chakravyuh me ghira hua tha.

Wese hi Veer uss Slogan waale mission ko lekar uljhan me tha pehle se hi ki bhala aisa mission system ne usse kyu saupa tha, jiska koi sense hi nahi bann raha tha!?

Upar se ab Veer ko kuch aur baatein sata rahi thi. Aur wo thi...

[Oye Itna shaant kyu ho tum!? Huh!? Kuch bolo bhi!?]

Pari ka ye firsa badla hua ravaiyya.

Zaahir sii baat thi, ki kal raat jab Veer ne Nidhi ko hug kiya aur wo mission complete kiya, uske baad hi Pari Level 5 par pohuch chuki thi. Aur naye features bhi unlock ho chuke the. Parantu uske baad se hi Pari ka ravaiyya ek baar fir badla badla sa nazar aa raha tha jisse lekar Veer uljhan me fassa hua tha.

Bhala kya hai ye system!? Pari baar baar yu apna ravaiyya kyu badalti rahi hai? Kabhi aisa lagta hai sab sahi hai par kabhi achanak se Pari ajeeb dhang se apna behaviour poora change kar leti hai.

Aur iss baar bhi wahi hua tha. Akhir kya raaz chhupa tha iske peeche!?

'Halla mat karo... I'm thinking!'

[Thinking what!? I can listen to your thoughts you know.]

'Just shut up!'

[Ugh!!! Hmph...!]

Ek gehri saas lete hue Veer ne kal ki vardaato par ek baar firse prakaash daala aur sab kuch yaad kia.

Kal Nidhi ko hug karne ke baad usse 50 points mile the. Uske paas pehle hi 190 points the. 10 points wo Appearance me jo daal chuka tha. Toh ab total 240 points uske paas maujood the.

Par ab sawaal aata hai naye features ka...

Jo ki the~

In-built feature ~ Translator
In-built feature ~ Slot
Aur wo Quest Hunt.

'Pari! Kal toh tum sleep mode me thi. Ab mujhe vistaar se sab kuch batao inke baare me.'

[Yeah! Right! So... Basically, Translator ek In-built feature hai. Just like Check and all. Aur jesa ki iska naam hai wesa hi iska kaam hai.]

'Hmm!? Don't tell me...!?'

[Yes! Tumne sahi samjha. It's a Translator. Chaahe koi bhi vyakti koi bhi bhaasha kyu na bole, tumhe unke bole gaye shabd translate hoke screen par dikh jaenge. Aur ye automatically hoega. So, you don't have to worry at all.]

'I see! Par ye 'tum' kehke kab se bulaane lagi mujhe tum? Hmm?'

[Wh-What!? Don't tell me ki tumhe 'aap' hi sunn'na pasand hai.]

'No! Bas! Tumhara behaviour achanak se badal gaya isliye puch raha hu.'

[W-What!? N-No! It's not like that. Mein toh tumhaari wahi Pari hu. Right!?]

Veer ne kuch kaha toh nahi aur wo apne dimaag me bhi kuch sochna nahi chaahta tha. Warna Pari uske thoughts padh leti. Isliye usne shaant rehna hi theek samjha.

'Tell me about Slot! Ye kya hai!?'

[Yesss! :D Yahi toh hai asli cheez. Slot ka matlab toh jaante hi ho tum right?]

'Hmm! Yaani ki ek prakaar ki khaali jagah jaha pe kuch rakha jaa sake.'

[Exactly!]

'Aur ye Slot kya kaam aane wala hai mere!?'

[Right! Yahi pe Quest hunt kaam aata hai. Ab tum Quest Hunt ko access kar sakte ho.]

'Explain!'

[Hmm~ Simple bhaasha me... Quest open karo aur card paao.]

'Card!?'

[Yes! Various cards! But ek dikkat hai.]

'Kesi dikkat!?'

[Quest me se do hi kism ke cards nikalte hai. Ek Legendary Tier Card aur ek Trash Card.]

'Hmm... Toh!?'

[Legendary Tier Cards nikalne ke chances 15% hai. And Trash card nikalne ke chances 85%]

'Hmm! I'm getting it now.'

[Yes! In simple terms, Quest Hunt me jaa kar Quest kholo, usme se cards pao aur uss card ko Slot par lagao.]

'Hmm! Aur Legendary Cards kis type ke honge?'

[Good Question! Legendary Cards jesa ki naam hi bataata hai. They will be Legendary. Par harr Legendary card apne aap me alag hota hai aur unki apni khoobi hoti hai. For Example~ Yadi tum Quest open karte ho aur usme se Legendary card nikla toh wo kayi saare Legendary cards me se ek ho sakta hai. Tumko aisa card mil sakta hai jis se kaho tumko 50% kam neend aaegi. Jaldi nahi thakoge. Wagarah wagarah. Par ye kaam tab hi karega jab iss card ko Slot me equip karoge.]

'This...!?'

Pari ki harr ek baat Veer ko jese naye naye jhatke de rahi thi.

[Kyu na isse live try kare!? :D ]

'!??'

[Tumhare paas 240 points hai.]

'Quest kholne ka price kitna hai!?'

[200 points!]

'Wtf!???'

[Of course! Tumhe kya laga? 10-12 points me sab ho jaega?]

'Fuckkkkk! 200 points!? Wese hi badi mushqil se missions ke through points ikhatte ho paate hai. Aur upar se...'

[Bhulo mat ki isme Legendary Card nikalne ke 15% chances hai. Yadi ek bhi Legendary Card haath lag gaya na. Toh tumhe pata bhi nahi hai ki wo kya kar sakta hai.]

'Aur Trash card haath laga toh? Aakhir uske chances toh 85% hai?'

[Toh kuch nahi, gaye points... :whistle: ]

'Wtf!???'

[Y-Yeah! Ab kuch paane ke liye risk toh lena padega na!?]

'Shiitttttttt!! So it's a gamble...!'

[Exactly!]

Veer samajh gaya tha ki ye poore juye ke khel ki tarah tha, jisme uske jeetne ke chances 15% the aur haarne ke 85%.

Dusre shabdo me, 200 points invest kar usse quest kholne milega. Yadi usse Legendary Card milta hai, tab toh sab kuch sahi hai. Par yadi Trash card milta hai, jiske chances itne zyaada hai toh Veer ke 200 points gaye samjho. Poori tarah se barbaad ekdum.

'Aur meri kismat jaanti hi ho tum right!?'

[Yeah! It's trash... :whistle: ]

'!???'

[What!? I'm saying the truth!]

'Ahem! Right!'

[So? Live try karna hai? :D Ho sakta hai tumhe Legendary Card mil jaaye!?]

'Fine! Do it!'

[What!? Really?]

'Yeah! Do it! Gaye toh gaye. Par yadi Legendary card mila... Then... mein bhi toh dekhu kya kar sakta hai wo card!?'

[Wow! Mujhe nahi laga tha tum risk loge.]

'I said do it!'

[Ugh!!! Fine! Fine! Just say Quest Hunt!]

'Quest Hunt!'

*Ding*

Veer ke kehte hi uske mann me ek imaginary screen khuli jisme ek treasure chest jesa kuch dikh raha tha usse.

Aur neeche open karne ka option tha.

Par...

Open ke hi just neeche, waha likha tha~

Cost : 200 Points.

Bechaara Veer ye dekhte hi apne decision ke baare me dobaara sochne laga.

[Bas click karo mann me hi uss option pe. Aur bas. Quest khulega aur kuch na kuch milega. Hehe~]

'Fine!'

Dil pe haath rakh, Veer ne ek lambi saas lete hue open par click kar hi diya aur tabhi...

Usne dekha ki wo quest dheere dheere khula aur andar se chamakti hui roshni aa rahi thi.

Aur uske khulte hi ek card baahar aake nikla.

[This... This...!? No waayyyyyyyyy! :shocked: ]

Pari ka shock hona bhi swabhaavik tha.

Akhir Veer ko aisi cheez jo mil gayi thi.

Uski screen par, ye card maujood tha~



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'Wait! Let me read. Increases Bone's Rigidity by 70%, Recovery Rate by 60%... Wait whaaaaaatttt!??? What the fucccckkkkkkk!?????'

[This... Just how lucky you are?]

'Almost Unbreakable Rib... Ribcage guaranteed!????'

[Yes! Dekha ab. Mene kaha tha na!? Ki ek hi card sab kuch badal sakta hai. Now look at that baby hahaha~ Bone Reaper. Saral bhaasha me, aapki jo bones ki hardness hai. Yaani ki unka thospann. Wo 70% badh jaega. Aur bone ki recovery 60% badh gayi hai. And look at that... Almost Unbreakable Ribcage guaranteed. Matlab aapka ribcage... Almost Unbreakable bann chuka hai. Tootne waala nahi ab. Damnnnnn!]

'This...!?'

Veer ko shocked hona laazmi tha. Akhir cheez hi aisi haath lagi thi.

[Now equip it!]

Pari ke nirdesh anusaar Veer ne forun hi uss card ko apne slot me equip kar liya.

[Dhyaan rahe. Kisi bhi card ko equip kar lene ke baad aap usse 24 ghante ke pehle nahi hata sakte. Kam se kam 24 ghanto ke baad hi aap unequip kar paoge.]

'Gotcha... Let's go~'

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Veer ka new year filhaal toh sahi jaa raha tha. Filhaal ke liye. Par yahi baat shayad anya jagah par nahi kahi jaa sakti thi.

Jese ki iss waqt...

Yaha apne gaav me aaye kuldevi ke darshan ke liye Manorath aur baaki sabhi ko aaj din me ghar ki orr wapas Mumbai ko lautna tha.

Kal unhone darshan kiye the aur aaj unki hi taraf se Bhandaare ka aayojan bhi tha.

Bas khaana almost ready tha aur bas logo ko baatna baaki tha.

Arohi iss waqt ek jagah baithi hui thi aur saare khaana banaane waalo ko dekh rahi thi wahi dur se hi.

Ye sab uske liye naya tha. Wo pooja paath me shuru se hi utna samarpit nahi thi. Aur yaha aake bhandaara karwaana, ye sab uske liye ekdum naya tha. Iss kaarya me wo pehli baar sammalit ho rahi thi.

Abhi wo baithi hi thi ki tabhi usne Kavya ko aate hue dekha. Kavya kisi se muskuraate hue phone par baat kar rahi thi.

'Kavya...!? Bhala kis se baat kar rahi hai!?'

Usne mann me socha.

Kavya jab nazdeek aayi toh usne khud hi puch lia.

Arohi : Kavya!? Kiska call hai!?

Kavya : Hmm? Ohh! Veer bhaiya ka... Lo na... Aap bhi unhe New Year wish kar do...

Kehte hue usne Arohi ko apna phone thama diya. Aur Arohi bechaari ab iss soch me pad gayi thi ki baat ko kese start kare.

Veer : Hello!?

Arohi : H-Hello!?

Veer : Arohi... dii...

Arohi : Umm... H-Happy... Happy new year Veer!

Veer : Happy new year to you too!

Arohi : Th-Thank you!

Veer : ....

Arohi : Wo... Hum... Hum sabhi kuldevi ke mandir aaye hai...

Veer : I know that...

Arohi : R-Right! Wo... Dada jii ne tumhe laane ka socha tha. B-But...

Veer : I know that too...

Arohi : O-Ohhh!! Okay! W-Wo...

Veer : !??

Arohi : N-Nothing...

Veer : Ohhh!

Bechaari Arohi, na toh samajh paa rahi thi ki kese conversation ko chaalu kare aur yadi kar bhi de toh kese uss conversation ko banaaye rakhe!? Aaj bhala itna kyu darr rahi thi wo Veer se baat karne me!?

Wese ye darr nahi tha kuch aur hi tha. Jisse wo khud bhi nahi jaan paa rahi thi.

Usne Kavya ko phone waapas se thamaya aur khud uth ke chali gayi.

Kuch derr me hi bhandaare ki saari prakriya poorn ho chuki thi aur sabhi ne fir baatna bhi shuru kar diya.

Gaav ke log bhaari maatra me aaye aur sabhi ne acche se bhandaare ka lutf uthaaya.

Kavya jaha kheer baatne me lagi hui thi toh wahi Arohi sabzi baat rahi thi.

Bhumika aur Shweta puri baatne me lage hue the.

Aur Manorath chup chaap sabhi ko muskuraate hue dekh rahe the.

Wese toh wo chalne me ekdum swasth the par fir bhi unhe zyaada thakaan na ho isliye unke liye ek wheelchair leke rakhi thi Brijesh ne.

Taaki jab wo thak jaaye toh koi bhi wheelchair ke zariye unhe unki jagah le jaa sake.

Aur iss waqt bhi, subah subah mana kiye jaane lar bhi aaj wo taiyaariyo me apna haath bataaye jiske chalte kaafi thakaan bhar aayi thi ab unme.

Wheelchair par hi baithe hue wo araam farma rahe the aur apne parivaar ko mil jul ke gaav ke logo ke beech unn sab ko bhandaare ka prashaad dete hue wo bade hi chaav se dekh rahe the sab kuch.

Tabhi unhone dekha ki Pranjal waha se unki taraf aaya. Aaj Pranjal ne itna kaam kiya tha ki Manorath khushi se fule nahi sama paa rahe the.

Pranjal (haafte hue) : Dada jii! Bas kuch derr ka aur hai... Fir hum sab bhi baith jaenge khaane.

Manorath : Beech beech me araam bhi kar liya kar 5-10 minute beta. Aaj toh tumne boht kaam kiya hai.

Pranjal : Kya Dada jii!? Devi ke mandir me... Ye sab kaam thodi maana jaata. Yahi toh pooja hai. Aur pooja jitni bhi karo, kam hi lagti hai.

Manorath toh jese harr ek pal guzarte khushiyo ke naye starr par pohuchte jaa rahe the.

Pranjal : Aapne aaj darshan kiye!?

Manorath : Abhi nahi beta.

Pranjal : Ye kya baat hui Dada jii!? Kherr! Jab sabhi khaana khaa lenge uske baad mein aapko leke chalunga. Upar mandir me...

Manorath : Bilkul beta. Ab tum araam karo. Subah se lage ho. Warna perr boht dukhenge. Thoda sa rukk jaaya karo.

Pranjal : Abhi nahi Dada jii! Meri behne mere rehte hue akele kese kaam kar sakti hai? Bhaiya aur mein dekh lenge sab. Aap araam karo.

Aur itna bol, wo chal diya waapas unhi gaav waalo ke beech unhe prashaad baatne.

Sab kuch ekdum sahi jaa raha tha.

Ye pal, Manorath ke liye sabse zyaada khush-haal tha. Kyuki aaj wo apne parivaar ko ek saath gaav waalo ke liye seva karte dekh rahe the.

Yahi hoti hai uparwaale ki mahima, ki wo na jaane kab ek saath sab ko le aaye aur ekjut kar de.

'Kaash mera Veer bhi yahi hota...!'

Sochte hue Manorath apne khayalaato me kho gaye.

Kuch samay beet jaane ke baad sab kuch kushal mangal se sampann ho chuka tha aur ab bas gharwaalo aur mandir ke trust logo ka hi khaana bacha hua tha.

Jab gaav waale log dheere dheere jaane lage toh Manorath ne sabhi ko khaane ke liye hidaayat dii.

Aur bas, neeche dari biccha ke sabhi parivaar ke sadasya pattal me khaana paros shuru ho chuke the.

Pranjal : Kaash... Mera bhai Veer bhi yahi hota... Aur Ragini Bhabhi bhi!

Pranjal ne shaatirta se halki awaaz me kaha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya baithi hui thi. Aur ye vaakya sunte hi dono ki hi bauhe sikudne lagi.

Wo jaanti thi ki Pranjal toh ulta unhe Veer se dur rehne ko kehta tha toh bhala aaj wo yaha uske baare me kese soch sakta hai?

Ye zaroor dhong tha. Mann me ye nirdhaarit kar, dono hi behno ne usse ignore hi karna sahi samjha.

Wahi dusri aur Shweta aur Bhumika apni baato me lagi hui thi.

Shweta : Kya hua? Baat ho gayi na?

Bhumika : Haan! Sab kuch sahi hai hotel me mom.

Shweta : Mene kaha tha na. Tu khamakha tension le rahi thi.

Bhumika : Hmm! Wese... Aapne fir uske baare me kya socha? Matlab? Kesa kya chal raha hai?

Shweta : Beta! Bas... Jald hi Papa jii decision lenge zameen ka. Aur fir dekhna, humaare paas hamaara hissa hoga. Fir usse hum jese chaahe use kare.

Bhumika : Ohhhh! Par... Aapko kese pata Dada jii jald hi decision lene waale hai!?

Shweta (khuspusaate hue) : Vivek ne toh yahi kaha tha.

Bhumika : Hmm? Kya kaha!? Kuch sunaayi nahi diya mom!

Shweta : Ahh!? Arre nahi beta. Mene kaha ki mera mann kehta hai ki jald hi Papa jii decision lene waale hai. Tum dekhna.

Bhumika : Ohhh! P-Par... Unhone toh kaha tha na ki... V-Veer yadi ghar me nahi hoga toh tab tak koi bhi charcha zameen ke baare me nahi kii jaegi?

Shweta : Hmm! Kaha tha unhone. Par tum dekhna meri bacchi, jald hi denge wo apna faisla.

Bhumika : Hmm~

Shweta apni beti Bhumika se bhi baatein chhupaayi hui thi. Wo baatein ki wo Vivek ke saath mili hui hai aur Veer ko baahar nikalwaane ke plan me Vivek ka hi haayh tha. Bachaari Bhumika ye soch ke chal rahi thi ki uski Mom hi sab kuch kar rahi hai.

Idhar Shweta aas lagaaye baithi thi ki jald hi wo mauka aaye jab Manorath apni jayzaat aur zameen ka batwaara kare aur wo apna hissa lene me safal ho jaaye. Fir toh Shweta ko kisi cheez se matlab nahi hone waala tha. Bas apni hotel, apni zameen, aur apni bacchi. Bas!

Par usse kya pata tha. Ki jis khaayi se usne Veer ko feka tha ussi khaayi se fekne ke liye Vivek uske peeche khada hua tha.

Wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki Vivek ka iraada usse sui ke baraabar tak ki zameen dene ka nahi hai. Kya hoga jab Shweta apne karmo ke fal ka parinaam dekhegi? Jab usse pata chalega ki jis zameen ke liye usne itne paapad bele the, wo toh uske haath aani hi nahi thi.

Jab sabhi khaana khaa ke fursat hue toh bas ab nikalne ka samay ho chuka tha. Lagbhag shaam hone ko aa gayi thi.

4 baj rahe the...

Wese toh wo sabhi din me nikalne waale the par sab kuch thoda late hua ya yu kahe ki sab kuch hone me samay zyaada lag gaya. Aur issi kaaran vash aaj wo thoda late the.

Pranjal Manorath ke paas aaya aur unse bola,

"Dada jii! Darshan nahi hue na aapke abhi bhi?"

Manorath : Haa beta! Darshan karna baaki hai. Ek akhiri baar jaane se pehle.

Pranjal : Chaliye! Mein karwaaye deta hu Dada jii!

Manorath : Haa chalo beta.

Kehte hue jab Manorath uthne lage toh pranjal ne unhe pakad ke waapas se wheelchair par baitha diya.

Pranjal : Arre arre!? Ye kya!? Subah se thak gaye ho aap. Aap isme hi baitho raho mein leke chalta hu na?

Manorath : Beta isme!? Arre waha seedhiya hai beta. Seedhiyo me kese le jaoge upar tak?

Pranjal : Arre Dada jii side me rasta bhi hai. Upar jaane ka. Udhar se chalenge na hum.

Manorath : Beta fir bhi chadhaayi toh hai na. Thak gaye hoge tum bhi. Rehne do...

Pranjal : Na matlab na... Mene kaha na. Aap tension mat lo. Mein nahi thaka hu. Bas aap chaliye.

Manorath : Accha! Accha beta theek hai.

Aur apne pote ki baat maante hue Manorath akhir kaar baith hi gaye. Pranjal pyaar se muskuraaya aur theek unke peeche chala gaya aur wheelchair ko pakad wo upar side me bane mandir ki orr le jaane laga.

Par iss waqt uski wo muskaan... Pyaar bhari muskaan se tabdeel hoke ek haivaani kutil muskaan bann chuki thi.

Aur uski nigaahe Vivek ko dekh rahi thi. Wahi Vivek ki nigaahe bhi chup ke se Pranjal ki aankho se takraayi maano jese mann hi mann kuch baatein kahi jaa rahi thi.

Upar side ke raaste se le jaate hue Pranjal dheere dheere Manorath ko mandir ke dwaar par le gaya.

Aur fir mandir ke andar bhi...

Andar aate hi Manorath ne devi ke darshan kiye aur prashaad bhi liya.

Jab lautne ki baari aayi toh Pranjal ne Manorath ko seedhiyo ke paas laake roka aur bola,

Pranjal : Arre! Mene prashaad toh liya hi nahi Dada jii!

Manorath : Jao beta le aao. Fir chalte hai.

Pranjal : Abhi aaya Dada jii...

Aur itna bol wo chal diya Mandir ke pujaari ki orr waapas peeche.

Pranjal prashaad le hi raha tha ki pata nahi kya hua ki Manorath ko wheelchair aage badhi.

Manorath ne jab aahat paate hi peeche dekha toh usse koi dikhaayi nahi diya. Pranjal dur khada prashaad le raha tha. Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.

Jab tak Manorath ki kuch samajh me aata, wheelchair ka ek pahiya seedhi ke neeche jaa chuka tha.

Aur fir...

*Craaaaashhhhhhhh*

"Aaaaaaaaaaa...."

Upar se ludakte hue Manorath seedhiyo par girte chale gaye.

"Dadaaaaaaa jiiiiiiii!!????"

Pranjal ne jab peeche mud ke dekha toh shocked hote zorr se chillaaya aur tezz kadmo ke saath seedhe Dada jii ki orr bhaaga.

Manorath seedhiyo par girte padte neeche jaate jaa rahe the.

Seedhiya itni bhi nahi thi par kam bhi nahi thi.

Kuch seedhiyo se lagtaar girne ke baad ek jagah aakar wo ruke aur behosh ho chuke the.

Pranjal ghabraaya hua unke paas aaya aur dekha toh uske Dada jii ka maatha aur perr khoon se sana hua tha.

"Dadaaaaaaa jiiiiiiii!!!!"

Wo zorr se cheenkha aur uski ye cheenkh ne aas paas ke sabhi logo ko chaukanna kar diya.

Aur sabhi uss orr bhaage...

***

1st January...
New Year's Eve...
Mumbai...

Ek badi sii hotel ke corridor me ek aadmi tezz kadmo ke saath chalta hua jaa raha tha.

Uske peeche kayi saare hatte katte aadmi chal rahe the.

Kuch ki jebo me toh guns bhi thi. Aur sabhi dekhne me itne bhayaanak ki maano abhi pakad ke zinda maar denge.

Par iss waqt wo sabhi apne Boss ko follow kar rahe the jo iss waqt tezz kadmo ke saath hotel ki lift ki orr jaa raha tha.

Aur ye aur koi nahi Slogan hi tha.

"Kaam hua!?"

Usne tezz awaaz me pucha.

Steve : Sab ready hai. Bas uske aane ki derr hai.

Slogan : Good! Sab kuch fatafat hona chahiye. Mujhe Mumbai chorre saalo ho chuke hai aur Aatish ab nahi hai toh police gaandupana zaroor dikhaegi. Saari gaadi ready rakhna aur CCTVs saare band karwa diye hai na?

Steve : Aas paas ke sabhi band hai.

Slogan (smiles) : Good! Aaj naye saal me naya dhamaaka hoga...

Steve : Bas uske aane ki derri hai. Aur bas fir...

Slogan : Hmmm~ hume jald nikalna hoga. Aatish ke resources aur man power ko kal hideout par jama karwao. Police ko busy rakhne me kaam aaenge wo.
Itna bada mauka haath se aaj chooth nahi sakta mere...

Steve : Jii Dada!

Aur Slogan Steve ke saath neeche utar apni gaadi me jaa chuka tha.

Na jaane kiska wait kar rahe the ye sabhi. Par itna toh tay tha ki jiska bhi intezaar ho raha tha. Wo inn sabhi ke liye boht zaroori tha.

***

Mumbai ke hi iss sheher me ek alag anya hotel me iss waqt new year ki party chal rahi thi.

Aur party toh abhi sahi se shuru ho rahi thi. 8 baj chuke the... Par...

Uss hotel se hi ek behad hi khubsoorat sii ladki ek black dress me baahar aayi aur apni gaadi ki orr jaane lagi.

Par abhi wo gaadi se kuch hi doori par thi jab...

*Kabooooooooooommmmm*

Ek itni tezz blast hua...

Uski hi car me... Jo waha khadi uska intezaar kar rahi thi.

Andar maujood driver ke chithde udd chuke the aur car toh poori aag ki lapto me qaid thi. Chaaro aur dhuaa hi dhuaa...

Aur aas paas afra tafri...

Log cheenkhte hue waha se dur bhaagne lage.

Toh wahi wo ladki jo car ki taraf jaa rahi thi wo blast ke blow se thoda sa dur jaa giri aur behosh ho gayi.

Ye sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki waha ke logo ko samajh me hi nahi aaya ki hua kya achanak se.

***

Kuch derr pehle...

Veer iss waqt ussi chhetra me maujood tha. Ragini ne usse kuch samaan laane bheja hua tha. Aaj new year special dinner bann'ne waala tha.

Par...

Wo abhi dukaan ke andar jaane hi wala tha jab achanak se usse ye sunaayi diya.

*Kabooooooooooommmm*

Aur agle hi pal uske raungte khade ho gaye.

'What the...!? What was that!? Kahi aas paas se hi aayi hai awaaz.'

[We must check that out.]

Aur wo gaadi me baithne hi waala tha jab uska phone baj utha.

'Huh!? Kavya?'

Veer : Hello??

Dusri side se Kavya ki zorr zorr se rone ki awaaz aa rahi thi.

Veer : H-Hello? Kavya kya hua? Bol na kuch!? Ro kyu rahi hai?

Kavya ki sisakne ki awaaz Veer ko aur bhi ghabraahat me daalte jaa rahi thi.

Kavya (rote hue) : Bh-Bhaiyaaaaaaaa.... *sniff*

Veer : Kavya darra mat bol jaldi... Kya hua?

Kavya : Dada jiii... Seedhiyo se gir gaye. Hum sabhi hospital me hai. *sniff* Aap jaldi se aa jao...

Aur maano ye khabar sunn Veer ko saanp soongh gaya.

Kavya : Hum sabhi thoda dur hai. Kyuki ye mandir me hi hua.... *sniff* Toh jo hospital accha nazdeek mila wahi aa gaye hum. Aap jaldi aa jao bhaiya... *sniff*

Veer : M-Mein abhi aa raha hu Kavya. Don't worry!

Usne call kaata aur key ko wo lagaaya hi tha gaadi me jab...

*Ding*

[Mission : Rescue Kaera from the hideout.

Rewards : ??? Points.
Mission Failure Penalty : 5000 Points.
Time Limit : 2 Days.]

Aur ye padhte hi uski aankhein felti chali gayi....

'Shiiiitttttt!!!'
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Dhanyavaad!
Fabulous update
 

Yamraaj

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Nexka t update ka intazaar h ....kripa kar ke aaj 10 baje tak de de....

Uske baad insan so jata h ....
 

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Great update Werewolf bhai.
Kaera ka past dikhaya he. Thik nahi hua uske sath. Uski freedom hi chhin li uske papa ne kisi aur ke kehne par. Yahi hota he jab andhvishwas aapke dimag pe kabja kar le.
Uss dhongi ne to bas paisa ke liye hi sab kara par ye usko nahi pata tha ki ek ladki ki freedom hi chhin jayegi isse. Sonu aur Ava dono bhi juda ho gayi usse. Ab Sonia to he hi par Ava abhi tak nahi aayi wapis. Teeno jab sath hogi tab hoga dhamal aur halat kharab hogi veer ki.
Ek aur baat bhi he yaha ki slogan kaera ke piche uske bachpan se pada he. Kishor ne jo faisla liya usse usne indirectly slogan ko jarur kafi waqt tak chup rakha. Kyuki kaera to ghar se bahar na nikalti aur jab ghar me hi rehti to safe bhi slogan se. Sawal ye he ki kyu piche pada he slogan kaera ke ???
Archana ji chal basi par kaera ke liye jarur kuch chhod gayi hogi. Jisse kaera hamesha uski maa ke pass rahe. Veer karayega ye sab feel use. Karan ko apni bahen ki chinta to he hi. Aur sath me har baat pe najar bhi rakhta he wo.
Friends wali baat pe veer ko golu yaad aa gaya. Ab veer ko bhi overcome Karna padega usse. Aur aap jisse pyaar karte ho wo aapka ek sachha dost bhi hota he. Aur lagta he Nidhi veer ki help karegi usme.
Ab dekhte he jija sala kya karte he sath me.
Yaha ghar pe suman ne gift ready kar diya he jo aabha hi lagti he mujhe to.
Ab hard work Karna he veer ko. Taki chocolate factory khol sake wo.
Suhana ko ek baar aur galat sabit Karna he.
 
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