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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

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  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

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Bro mujhe pta hai kyu veer ko ranjeet ka past ni dikhaya gya🧐.... Kyuki ranjeet ko marne wala veer ni trisha thi🤯... Obviously wo eventually mar jata but Final blow toh trisha ne hi dia tha🔫🔫Aur isiliye veer ko uska past nhi dikha
 
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Bro mujhe pta hai kyu veer ko ranjeet ka past ni dikhaya gya🧐.... Kyuki ranjeet ko marne wala veer ni trisha thi🤯... Obviously wo eventually mar jata but Final blow toh trisha ne hi dia tha🔫🔫Aur isiliye veer ko uska past nhi dikha
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Update 202 Review.

As always a fantastic and well written update Werewolf ,you never disappoint with the updates.
The way you wrote the slaughterhouse scene,I can only imagine ki kitni cheeze khojni padi hongi use likhne ke liye,kyuki obviously vaha pe kabhi gaye toh honge nahi,isliye appreciation toh banta hai :respekt:
I am really liking what you are doing with Trisha's character.She is very dedicated to her work and I do like this trait of her,hope she will continuosly make appeareances in later updates which I am sure she will kyoki ab toh veer par uska Shaq aur bhi badh gaya hoga.

And then comes the twist!,The twist about which probably no one expected,Dhananjay kabhi tha hi nahi ye toh Bihar ke kisi gang ka leader Ranjeet tha,makes sense ki voh kaise bhojpuri mai bol raha tha,mujhe yaad hai jab starting mai ye character aaya tha tab kisi ne pucha tha ki ye dhananjay bhojpuri kaise bol raha hai,tab toh ju ne smartly ye bol diya tha ki voh vaha kaam karta hai isliye aisi boli hai uski,but who knew you were cooking this!
Police ke aane ke baare mai ranjeet aur uske aadmiyo ne expect nahi kiya hoga .Ranjeet ki maut bhi kitne brutal tarike se hui ,maar maar kar bharta bana diya veer ne,is update mai jo scenes ju ne likhe hai voh bhayankar the,Hook se latka hua Ranjeet ka adhmara sharir,aur Trisha ka us par goli chalana,jab Trisha ne uski halat dekhi hogi toh voh khud ghabra gayi hogi.
. Yahi par veer ne bhi apni intelligence ko show Kiya ,Trisha ke goli chalate hi usne photo le li Trisha ki ,as a proof ki Ranjeet ko maarne vali Trisha hi thi,ab dekhna hoga aage kya hota hai,Trisha ko veer ke baare mai kya kya pata chalega,ek baat toh keh sakta hu ki ab Trisha veer ke baare mai Jan ke hi rahegi.
Agar ye ranjeet tha toh asli dhananjay ka kya hua update se toh pata chal raha hai ki probably mar gaya par exactly kya hua?ye jaane ke liye mai behad utsuk hu.Yahi par Vandna ka character bhi dekhne ko mila,maine socha tha ki vandna ka koi role hoga nahi par ab lag raha hai ki vandna hame aage bhi zarur dikhegi,Aur uski favourability veer ke liye 50?aisa kyu ,uski nazro ke saamne uske pati aur sasur ko jisne maar diya uske liye utni high favourability ye baat kuch hazam nahi hui.ab veer vandna ko lekar parijaat Ghar aa gaya hai toh iska jawab probably agle update mai mil jaayega.

Aur phir aate hai Bihar ke scene par Ranjeet ke guru,Raman.iski vaapis entry hogi yeh toh pata tha par is maamle se isko link karoge ye bilkul nahi socha tha.Ab veer aur Raman toh na kabhi mile hai na unme koi dushmani toh ranjeet veer ke piche kyu pada tha?Dekhna hoga ye Raman ka kya role rehta hai aane wale updates mai.

Vaise toh ju ne ai images ke baare mai decide kar liya hai phir bhi bol deta hu,real life images are better kyuki ai kabhi kabhi images de dega accurate par voh phir bhi thodi off hi lagengi toh ju ne decision liya hai voh sahi hi hai mere hisaab se toh.
 

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आपके पास चार रोज है। इस महीने के
इतने में तो काम बन ही जाएगा। अपडेट का

बाकी आप लेखक है। जब मूड ओर कलम चलेगी। तब ही अपडेट आयेगा।
 
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Fantastic as always. There is always a line that one should never cross, jo Dhananjay ne cross kr di aur yahi uski sabse badi galti thi. Well wo deserve bhi krta tha kyuki kisi ki bhi family sabse sensitive spot hoti hai jo kisiko touch nahi krna chahiye. Why tf vandana was happy?? 🧐
We'll come to know in the next update kyu Vandna hass rahi thi.
Aur is baar ka villain thoda confusing lag rha hai. So basically veer ne jise mara wo small fry tha and the main culprit is someone else.
Main culprit Raman hai.
You know I like these type of parts the most jaha aap ko brainstorming krni pare and yahi hamare wolfie ki specialty hai. Chalo agle update me kamse kam vandana ka kuch pata chalega aur meri curiosity thodi shaant hogi. That hook wala scene got me goosebumps fr.
Thanks a lot. ✨
Next update me sab clear ho jaayega.
Bina kisi Gore visuals warning ke ju me blockbuster update drop kr diya. Well veer ke liye next mission bhi line up me hai to it's gonna get interesting.
Thank you once more for such an amazing update
Well yeah, mein lagaane waala tha note but fir bhool gaya tha :laughing: Aur, fir edit karne ka mann nahi kiya. So... As it is waisa hi rehne diya. Thanks and keep supporting as usual. ✨
 

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Readers target pura kar bhi le to kya hi ho jayega update to fir bhi mahine bad hi aani hai ..to target bhi update ki tarah slow hi pura hone do
Bilkul nahi. :sigh: Jab target poora ho jaata hai toh mein likhna start kar deta hu serious way me. Agar khichta rehta hai toh wo dheela dhaala kaam hota jaata hai.

Target sahi time par complete ho jaaye toh next update 2-3 din pehle mil sakta hai compared to late target achieve karwaane waale din se.
 

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Fabulous 👌 ye update pura uske naam ke jayse hi ta veer bhi apna kam shadow ke jayse kiya ye Dhananjay bhi real Dhananjay ki shadow ki tarh tha babaji bhi vahi kar rha hai great update
Thanks a lot. ✨
Bahut hi jabardast pura Dhananjay ke charecter ko hi change kardiya our ye jo babaji ye keara ke baap ke pahchan valahi hai shayad our Dhananjay ki ma ko esne hi phasake estamal kiya shayad Veer ke against
Raman Slogan ke guru ji ka right hand tha.
Vakahi bahut jabardast har bar our bhi intresting our ek do naye suspense our nava thrill ajata hai bahut shandar kam kiya hai update pe
Dhanyavad.
Pahle to sorry yaar update let review dene office work me. Our vakahi ye update apne title ke hisabse hi kam kiya ye raman me bhi zol hai sala ye bhi system holder hi honanda nhi to veer ke piche padne na dusra reason bhi nhi dikhta ya ye to nhi ye raman keara ke pita vala hi hai our keara ke pita ne hi ye ranjeet ko veer ke piche lagaya ho Q ki mirror gallery me bhi keara ke pita ne veer ko marvane ko bola tha apne admiyo ko sala din ba din zol badh hi rha hai upar se ye sala asli Dhananjay bhi nhi hai🤔🤔🫡
Kaera ke pita ke paas itna phaaltu time nahi hai bhai ki wo Veer ke peechhe hi baitha rahe. In fact agar Veer se use nipatna hi hota toh woh directly hi apne aadmi bhej deta. Kishore ka taluqat Slogan ke guru ji se tha. Na ki guru ji ke right hand man Raman se.
Bhai pahli bat to ye sab chal kya rha hai salamat ye Dhananjay hi nhi hai sabse bada shock Trisha veer ki shefty ke liye fikar kar rhi hai ye baba fir agaya raman chal kya raha hai sale sabke sab veer ke piche lage hai naha doke
Trisha Veer ki safety ke liye nahi chintit thi, wo isliye chintit thi ki kahi Dhananjay na marr jaate kyunki, wahi ek clue tha jiske zariye woh Veer ke baare me aur jaan sakti thi but Dhananjay urf Ranjeet marr gaya. Toh ab clue bhi chala gaya.
Brilliant fantastic Vandna ko baba ne ya Dhananjay ne plan ke tahat veer ke pass to nhi bheja plan B ke tahat q ki baba ya ye nakli Dhananjay to nhi gaye honge na vandna ke pass uske pati ka badla le ne ko bolne our shayad ye baba system holder ho our eske pas koi card ho ava ke tarha favorability badane ki
Baba Raman hai aur wo koi system holder nahi hai. Wo purana character hai. Slogan ke guru ji ka right hand man.
धमाकेदार शानदार जानदार abhi to muze lagne laga hai ki agar ye raman vahi hai baba ka chela hai to keara ka baap system holder ho sakta hai our vahi shayad mr x bhi ho
Bhai itni khatarnak guessing toh maine kisi ki nahi dekhi.
खरच खूप खूप छान अणि अप्रतिम असे लिखाण आहे खूप उत्कृष्ट अशी कामगिरी मित्रा
Samajh me toh kuchh nahi aaya, par padhke achha laga.
Ye update pura apne title ke hisabse hi hai shadow adhere me khela gaya sara khel Trisha ki bhi hava tight hogai thi pura khukhar badla le rha hai veer apne dushmano se ek naya suspense thriller bhi dal diye bhai bahut badiya shandar
Yes. Stealth kills. Thanks and keep supporting.
Kya jabardast badla liya hai Dhananjay our uske admiyo ko tadpa tadpa ke police valo ke hote huve mara our Trisha ke hato Dhananjay ko bhi marvaya muze lagta hai ye Veer ne janbuzke kiya hai sahi hai na bina Trisha our baki police valo ke najarme aye bager superb
Yup. You can say that...
Outstanding update bro har update me ek naya suspense ata hai eska kya honga ye sochte rhte hai to dusra hi naya zol ata hai ab ye naya zol sala Dhananjay Dhananjay chal rha tha sala vahi Dhananjay farzi nikla pura ka pura dimag ka dahi hogaya superb update bro
Thanks and keep supporting.
Veer pari se jada communicate nhi kar raha hai etne me veer ke dimagme kya chal rha hai ye bhi intresting hai apne dushmano ko bhi bahut jaladki tarha mar rha hai Our Ava ko bhi sath nhi le jarha hai Trisha ko bhi pasine chudva diye police ke bich me jake dushmano ko mar rha hai
Veer badal raha hai. Yahi explanation hai bas.
 
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Whattttt??? 🤯🤯🤯
Dhananjay dhananjay ni tha? To ye ranjeet kaha se tapak pda? 🥴 Suspense pe suspense... 😭 Ab next update me hi doubts clear honge... Ye to expect hi ni kia tha ki Dhananjay koi aur hi niklega ...
Yes. Dhananjay Ranjeet nikla. Asli Dhananjay is gone. Kaha gaya? Kaise gaya wo next update me.
Ab sab sense bna rha h... Tbhi wo bhojpuri bolta tha... Nd tbhi wo vandna se bhi rootha behaviour kia... Like uss se rudely phone par baat Krna kyuki wo uska beta hi ni tha...
Yup. :smartm:
Another unexpected thing was.... Raman ki re-entry... 🥶 Didn't see that one coming... Wow. Fabulous. Fight was very stealthy as well. I liked this change... It's like batman... Eradicating the corrupts from the shadows... Ai images are really good... But...
You can say that...
Ab to aadat si h mujhko kendall jenner ko dekhne ki.... 🤌😭😭

So...

I like the previous way. Can't pass on kendall jenner... 🤌 Nd Arohi as well... Not to mention Ava... 🤌
I'll keep the real life images only. Ab unki aadat lag chuki hai sabhi ko. So, don't worry. Ai images... I can post them after the update if I generate them.
Keep writing! Waiting for another banger... ❤️
Thanks a lot and keep supporting as usual. ✨
 
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Mast update tha, although a little bit late but worth it.

Update consists Butcherhouse scene, Trisha's thoughts and last secret revealed.

Butcherhouse ka scene tha, proper detailing aur research. Boiler, hooks, blood, separation chamber, cold storage everything.

Also action part, main action mystery me chal raha tha (Veer killing ) aur side action focus me tha (Police). Although we haven't seen Veer action like proper wa but can imagine the brutality. Specially Dhananjay ki maut batati hai ko there is something that changed in Veer.
This time I showed people's fear when they confront a system holder like Veer who's killing them from the shadows. An unknown force. A force which couldn't be seen making it more mysterious and dangerous.

Toh maine directly Veer ko na dikha ke seedhe alag alag logo ke zariye unke darr ko dikhaaya hai. Kaise wo maut ke muh me gire aur unhe kaun maar raha tha ye bhi logo ko pata tha but kahi bhi Veer ko dikhaya nahi gaya.

Because there was no need to... Trisha aur police ke hone se ye zaahir si baat thi ki Veer ko apna kaam toh karna hi tha but use bina kisi ki nazar me aake karna tha. He can't invite more trouble. Wo already pehle se bahut occupied hai.
Baat karu Trisha ki she is deeply interested in Veer not intimately but kind of mystery. We know how much she was involved in slogan and aatish case. Itna ki Mumbai me chal rahe murder bhi najarandaz kar rahi thi, usme Veer ka aana, phir vahi killer iski beti ko le gaya aur Veer use bachake laya, the hotel par hamla aur Dhananjay ka involvement. Har taraf se clues use Veer ki taraf hi le jaa rahe hai. And he saved his daughter so obviously she has a soft corner for him.
But she was kinda right though. Uski approach sahi saabit hui. Ultimately, wo case me aur deep jaa paayi. Kyunki sab kuchh Veer se linked hai kahi na kahi. Aur, woh Veer naam ki parat ko hi tatol rahi thi shuruat se.
Abhi Veer hi uske life ki sabse badi mystery hai jise solve kiye bina ise chain nahi milega.
Of course.
Last reveal was something else. Matlab Dhananjay Dhananjay(DJ) nahi hai Ranjeet hai. Pura Yarnia ka scene hi badal gaya phir to.
Yup.
Agar asli DJ mar chuka hai to iss Ranjeet ki Veer se kya ladai. Bhanu aur Harikiran ke marne se iska kya nuksan hua. If we saw differently to iska fayda hi tha ki ye DJ bana hua tha to Harikiran ki maut se ise unki property milti. There is some other reason. Also Harikiran ki maut tak agr asli DJ jinda tha to kya Harikiran yaa Bhanu ko iss Ranjeet ki koi khabar thi.
Yahi sab raaz agle update me khulenge. Ye saare doubts clear ho jaayenge usme.
Raman ki dushmani bhi nahi hai Veer se, to usne Ranjeet ko kya karne bheja hoga Mumbai (lagta to yahi hai ki Raman ne hi bheja tha).
We'll see in the next update. Raman aur Veer ek dusre se nahi mile aur na hi ek dusre ko jaante hai. That's a given.
Agr kaera ke through Raman ki entry hoti to sense bhi banata, although dushmani to usse bhi nahi thi. There is lot of mystery behind everything. Aur isi Dhananjay se uss system holder ne contact kiya tha unhe to sach pata hoga ki ye Ranjeet hai. Isme bhi X ka koi involvement hai?
X didn't know Damian was sent to the India. He asks Rebecca in one of the updates ~ "Where's your lapdog?" indicating that he didn't know where Damian was.
Bahut bhasad hai......there are lot of questions?

Well that's it for now.


Excellent Update 👏👏👏

Waiting for next update, give it this month if possible.
I'll try my best to give the update before the closure of this month. Let's see.
Thanks a lot and keep supporting. ✨
 
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2 months ka sign off uske baad main id ka password kho jana ....itna sab ke baad alias se aake review daal raha hu ,sincerity to hai as a reader😁...lambe time ke baad forum pe aaya , socha tha Werewolf ne 3 update May wala June mein pura kar diya hoga but as like me sab busy chal rahe hai life mein ..
2 hi updates hai stock mein abhi 201 ko complete read kiya to socha review daal hi du...
Site ka issue bhi hua tha beech me toh bahut hi chikallas ho gayi thi. Kaafi din site hi inactive thi. Uske baad investments me theek ho rahi thi. Aur, jab proper theek ho gayi toh readers gaayab hone lage.

Ab jaake thoda stable hua hai. Toh, zaahir hai kahaniyon par bhi iska asar pada. Agar, sab kuchh stable hota toh ek-do updates aur extra dekhne ko milte yaha no doubt.
Update ke vishay mein kya hi kehna humesha ki tarah lajawab aur ending thrill se bharpoor....happiest things first ..jab Juhi ne darwaza khola us point se lekar Nidhi ke ghar ka scene jab tak end nahi ho gya mere chehre se wo muskan nahi gyi...too much appreciable scene that was...chahe koi bhi men ho girl kids se lagaav alag hi hota hai ,,personal experience hai mera bhi....
Usme mein bhi shaamil hu bhai. Chhoti bacchi se lagaav zyada hota hai bajaaye chhote bacche ke. Pata nahi kyu... Humesha meri bonding achhi baithati hai.
..Juhi ka nadani mein hi Veer aur Nidhi ko ek kar dena ,,ufff,, kya hi kahu is scene pe ☺️😊...Shreya ka news channel dekh kar killer se related sawal karna sath hi aage ke scene mein Bhumika ka bhi khud me wahi chiz dohrana...itna to ab pure family members aur jitne veer se close relation mein ordinary people hai sabhi ko shaq hai ki kuch to Raaz hai jo Veer apne tak mein rakhe hue hai ..
Yes. Veer ki family, uske aas paas ke log ab gaur karna shuru kar diye hai. Wo din door nahi jab wo inn baato ko lekar use confront karenge. Aur, tab Veer ko answer Dena hi padega.
ab ye writer pe hai ki isko kaise taalte hai Bhawna ke sath conversation ke time bhi Nidhi ko bich mein laake topic change kar diya tha ..so system ka raaz to saamne nahi aane wala ab baaki Veer ke underworld connections aur past incidents ke secrets hai kya wo saamne aayenge....
System ka raaz toh aise katayi saamne nahi aane waala. Allowed hi nahi hai. Sirf Veer ke liye hi nahi. Baaki system holders bhi ye sach chhipa ke rakhe hai.
.Prestige Yarnia and family sabhi ko nuksan jhelna pada but ek chiz jo sure hai ki comeback to tagda hona hai in sabhi ka ....Trisha ne Rohan se Veer ko unknown rakha hai abhi tak aur ab jis direction mein pura case jaa raha hai usse Trisha ki saari theory bhi Veer ko as a reference maanke sahi ho rahi hai...aaage chalke in dono ke bich kya hoga ye jaanna interesting rahega..Trisha Veer ko as a Friend consider karegi ya Foe
Ye toh waqt hi batayega. Trisha ab Veer par ekdum focused hai. Aur use close surveillance me bhi rakhegi.
Casa belle ka scene alag hi thrill paida kar diya bhai ye kya dekhne ko mila Veer mein...past ke emotional surges ke side effects ka result hai ya kuch alag hi personality saamne aa rahi hai Veer ki but jo bhi hai gossebumps dene wala hai future scenes mein...abhi hi ruthlessness itna hai.. is personality ka future kaisa hoga?...
He's more calculated now.
Overall wholesome update tha poora ka poora ...padh ke wahi purani feelings wapas aa gyi ..Next update hai stock mein par usse next update ka intezaar rahega so keep writing...
Thanks a lot for the review. And, keep supporting as usual. ✨
 
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