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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.5%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 240 13.7%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 38 2.2%

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An amazing and wonderful update as always Werewolf bhai.Update adhiktar Ragini par hi kendrit tha aur uske pov se hi darshaya gaya,bohot samay baad kisi female ka pov dikhaya gaya hai.mujhe jaha tak yaad hai akhri baar arohi ka pov dikhaya gaya tha jab manorath ji mandir ki sidhiyo se neeche gir gaye the,if I am not wrong.
Keh sakte hai. Yes. Nidhi ka past third person perspective me tha to use hum uska POV count nahi kar sakte. Kaafi samay baad aaya hai POV kisi female ka. But aage aise hi aur bhi females ke POVs aate rahenge.
You are doing a great job with the flashbacks,is flashback mai Hume pata laga ki Ragini kabhi veer ke prati nafrat ke bhaav nahi rakhti thi,they just didn't interact at all aur Vivek ki mithi baaton Mai aakar voh bhi unke saath shamil ho gaye although uske dil mai veer ke prati nafrat ke bhaav kabhi nahi aaye.
Yes. Wo uski koi dushman nahi thi. Use bas apne pati ke hisaab se chalna pada. Galti yahi thi ki shayad wo thoda aur prayas kar sakti thi.
Abhi ki baat kare toh veer aur Ragini ka rishta bahut complicated nazar aata hai ,veer doesn't want to let her go,but Ragini wants a clear answer on their relationship.Abhi tak ki story ko dekhe toh Ragini is among those characters who are really possesive towards veer,she really wants veer to herself but that's just not possible.
Har koi aisa hi hota hai bhai. :D Ab zara ladko ki taraf se socho. Kya har ladka ye nahi chaahega ki uski partner sirf uski ho. Yahi to Ragini chaah rahi hai. Kya galat hai isme? :D
Is update ke baad Ragini ke prati kaafi readers ke vichaaro mai badlav aaye honge,kisi ko ye ravaiyya pasand nahi aaya hoga,kisi ko aaya hoga har reader ki ispe alag pratikriya hogi.mai Ragini ke character se starting se itna attached raha nahi hu,but after reading this update I have started to like her a bit more,fir bhi meri favourites ki jagah toh kabhi nahi le sakti😄
Ragini ke character me ups and downs hai, isliye kuchh ko wo pasand aati hai, kuchh ko nahi. Lekin, uska character aisa hi rahega. Veer ko to yahi pasand hai.
Ab aate hai veer aur uski paltan pe,toh renshu ne sabke saamne ye ujaagar kar diya ki system holder ka count X ne hi bataya tha,aur issi beech hame ek nayi jaankari prapt huyi system ke baare mai ki system ki ek apni ability hoti hai,sugar mommy pari ka veer ki body pe control karna voh uski ability thi aur current pari ki ability hai uska intellingce.
Abhi aur bhi cheeze hongi Jo abhi tak veer aur uske system holder dosto ko pata bhi nahi hai,who knows ki background mai kya ho raha hai.
Yup. Abhi jitni pari previously aa chuki hai unki abilities bhi dekhni baaki hai. :D
I am curious to know what abilities did the other pari's have .Mujhe yu lagta hai ki jo pehli baar modulated voice mai call tha voh X ke dwara kiya gaya tha while joh female voice mai call aaya tha voh rebecca ka tha,Mujhe Aisa bhi lagta hai ki casa belle mai jis female ka mention garofano ne kiya tha voh aur koi nahi rebecca hi thi.
Bas dekhte jao man.
So, we have An alliance 'V' a simple name ,but it works just fine.One week has passed since the incident and veer ke saath ye aadmi kon the ,balhaar ke aadmi the kya ya uske khud ke workers?
Update ke end mai ek aur sawaal ujaagar ho gaya readers ke man mai ki Aakhir ye SUMMIT hai kya?my guess is that as summit means a meeting as you have hinted ,maybe meeting new system holders who are willing to join them .who knows ,we will find out later.dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Summit means meeting here. :approve:
Veer ke saath kaun aadmi the ye hum last ke updates me dekhenge isi arc ke.
Eagerly waiting for the next one♥️♥️
Bahut bahut dhanyavad man. Aise hi saath bane rehne ka. ✨
 

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Hain..? To renshu x ki location Jaan ta hai?
Pata chalega uske baare me ki X tak kaise envelope bheja gaya. Aane waale updates me ujaagar hoga. Abhi ke liye ise side of the mind bitha ke chalo.
 

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There was a famous saying "agar bhog ki wastu Bani rahogi to log bhogenge hi" phir bhi veer ne tala tha, par Ragini peeche nahi hati, #beach wala scean ko yaar karo#

Yeha pe veer doshi kaha? Yeh pr keh sakte hai, she is dumb. Aur pyaar ka izhar kiya, kiya pyaar sach mein tha? Mujhe to Aisa lagta hai woh attracted hai veer se, don't forget that ki agar Ragini ko divorce ke baad koye uske pasand ka mil jata to woh veer ko nahi chunti, par veer uske pass tamam ladkiyan hone ke bavjud usne Ragini ko apne paas aane diye. Usse bhuli nahi.

Agar nidhi veer ko thappad bhi maare gi toh bhi chalega, par Ragini nahi. Wo kahi se bhi Sahi nahi. Selfish decision liya hai usne har waqt. to be honest Ragini ne veer ko use Kiya hai, naki veer ne Ragini ko.
jab veer ke paas koye pyar dene wala nahi tha, tab Sirf Nidhi thi, par Ragini yeha pe ulta hai, jab Ragini akeli reh gai Vivek wala incident ke baad tab usne veer ko apne paas rakha. Tab suddenly usse laga ki veer akele hai, usse bhi kisi ki jarurat hai. Funny.


Sonia kaha se aa tapki, na uska veer se saath pyar wala angle hai, aur nahi friends wala. Bas familiar si knowing hai. Uska love angle kaha se aa tapka, veer should ignore her I mean seriously. Sonia ne uss waqt kuchh nahi boli thi jab veer ka apman huya tha. Usse apni hi medicine ka test chakana padega veer ko.

Veer kab tak gentleman Banta phirega, kuchh logon ko usse ignore karni chahiye tabhi realistic lagega.

Sajish karna sajish mein shamil hona, ya phir sajish ko hote hue dekhna donon hi galat hai, Ragini galat hai har jagah se.


Aur baat rahi Harem ki toh- veer ne kabhi bhi kisi Ladki ko aage se approach nahin kiya, jo huya un ladkiyon ke wajah se hi.

Keara usne khud ko veer ke hawale chhod diya tha, tab to veer ek Anjan tha.

Aarohi, veer donon ke beech bas ek unexpected kiss huya tha, par arohi seems like she might have felling for him, not as a brotherly way, yeha pe bhi veer doshi kaha.

Kavya, usne to had hi per kar diya tha yahan, aur uska kahana bhi yahi tha ki bahanon ke sath Ho manage kar legi, per Veer Doshi kaha tha.

Tej, uska bhi wahi hai, usne bhi pahle shuruaat ki kiss se.

Upay ek hi hoga agar sabhi ko Veer chahie to, polygamy hoga. Even koi bhi veer ke sath nahi rahana chahie phir bhi Veer usse apna protection dega, we can say that- according to Veer's personality and nature.


Duniya dumb women centric ho chuka hai, story ho ya real life, unki galti ko sabhi najarandaaz kar dete Hai, jo ki Hona nahin chahie, Dhyan se padho to dekh payooge Ragini galat thi har waqt Veer nahi.
Galti dono ki thi. Veer doodh ka dhula nahi hai. Kahi na kahi dono ki hi galti hai. No questions asked. :sigh:
 

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Agar author ka yah motive hai ki Ragini ko Sahi dikhayen, toh Ragini ke character ko usi tarah likhna chahie tha, ek Aisa ultimate sacrifice agar Ragini karti veer ke liye toh me veer ko hi galat kehta, per Aisa Kuchh hua hi nahi,

Veer ke pass kya Karan Hai Rajni Ko pyar karne ke liye? Nothing, but still he loves her.

Ghar mein panha Deni wali baat? Toh veer tab chahta to Nidhi ke ghar rah sakta tha usse jarurat nahi thi Ragani ki.
Yahi pe to galat ho tum :sigh:
Insaan kisi aur ke ghar me ek din reh sakta hai, do din, do hafte, do mahine... Lekin humesha ke liye nahi. :sigh:

Family wo cheez hai jaha insaan bina kuchh kiye bhi unke beech reh sakta hai, na koi sankoch na koi dabaav aur na hi koi chinta.

Ragini ne use bas ek baar bulaaya saath rehne ke liye aur Veer turant chala gaya. Kyu? Chaahta to keh deta ki nahi mein Nidhi ma'am ke saath theek hu, badhiya chal raha hai yaha.

Kyunki, kahi na kahi Ragini uski family ka hi hissa thi. Wo bhi chotil thi aur ghar chhor ke bhaagi thi. Nidhi ke upar aur dabaav nahi daalna chaahta tha Veer. Apna ghar apna hi hota hai. Puraana ghar na sahi. Ragini ka hi sahi. Isliye, Veer turant hi Ragini ke ghar me shift ho gaya tha. (Nidhi ko farewell waala letter likhne ke baad.)

Agar, Ragini use panaah nahi deti to Veer zyada din Nidhi ke ghar me nahi tikne waala tha. :sigh:
aur sab se badi baat veer ne usko bachaya tha usse samay jab Ragini ke low testosterone Pati ne bhi hal chhod diya tha.

Veer ko bike gift karni wali baat, toh jitna mujhe yad hai Veer ne bhi Ragini ko necklace gift kiya tha.

Ragini owes veer, but Veer doesn't.
Ye tumhari galat fehmi hai bhai. :sigh:
Yahan per debate honi hi nahi chahie Ragini sahi hai ya galat- galat hai.

Last update, Ragini ki prospective Ko Nahi balki uski character ko white out Kiya ja raha tha usmein. Kyon?


Me author ke is Mein Rai Janna chahta hun.

Werewolf bhai, shaadi Mein enjoy karo maze maro, apna mental health ki bhi Dhyan rakho, free hoke samay dekh likhna. Best wishes saath Hai.
Koi nahi keh raha ki Ragini sahi hai. Wo galat hai. Lekin, poornta galat nahi. Khaali uska dosh nahi hai. Veer bhi isme shaamil hai. Ye bhalayi keh sakte hai ki 60% Ragini ki galti hai aur baaki 40% Veer ki... Percentage upar neeche ho sakta hai. Lekin, shaamil dono hi hai.

Veer jis samay Ragini ki chhat ke neeche reh raha tha tab wo kuchh bhi nahi kama raha tha. Kisne use khaana khilaaya? Kisne ann diya? Kisne jal diya? Kisne kapde khareede? Kisne kitaabein khareedi? Kisne uski daily life ke liye har wo cheez khareed ke rakhi taaki use koi dikkat na hoye?

Ragini ne.

Jab wo Aatish ke gundo se ladne ke baad ghayal ghar aata tha to kaun uski marham patti karta tha? Clinic ke expenses, medication ke expenses, college life ke expenses, traveling ke expenses, kaun deta tha?

Ragini.

Ek prakar se Ragini ne Veer ko paala hai. Bhale hi bahut kam samay ke liye. Lekin parvarish usne bhi ki hai. Anjaane me hi sahi par hui hai.

Kal ko Suman, aabha, Sonali ko Veer leke aaya. Kisne unhe panaah di? Bhavna, Tej aayi. Kisne unhe rakha? Shweta aur bhumika bhi shamil hui, kisne sahaara diya?

Ragini ne.

Wo chaahti to keh deti ki nahi Veer mein inko ghar me nahi rakh sakti. Sab ke yaha hone se hi Veer ko ek family jaise feel hua. Aur, isme Ragini ka hi haath tha.

Electricity bill, water bill, gas cylinder inn sab chhote chhote kharcho ke baare me to mein baat bhi nahi kar raha. But who does it?

Ragini.

Of course ab jab itne log aa gaye hai to wo bhi madad karte hai inn expenses me. But iske pehle kaun tha? Ragini.

Ye wo cheezein hai jinka zikr nahi kiya jaata par agar deeply socho to pata lagta hai ki Ragini ne bhi kitna kuchh kiya hua hai.
 

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Waise ek question reh gya tha ki aakhir Damian ko in sabke baare mein pata kaise chala ?wo Veer ke enemies ke baare mein kaise jaanta tha ye abhi bhi hidden hi hai ya open kar diya hai?
Abhi disclose nahi hua. But don't forget that he's a system holder. :hint:
 
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There is nothing so important for her role, if she wouldn't have love angle with Veer.

Nidhi aur Veer ke bich Shreya ayegi, Suhana aur Veer ke bich me Sonia.
Behan hi behan ki dushman hogi.
And I don't like both.

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Yahi pe to galat ho tum :sigh:
Insaan kisi aur ke ghar me ek din reh sakta hai, do din, do hafte, do mahine... Lekin humesha ke liye nahi. :sigh:

Family wo cheez hai jaha insaan bina kuchh kiye bhi unke beech reh sakta hai, na koi sankoch na koi dabaav aur na hi koi chinta.

Ragini ne use bas ek baar bulaaya saath rehne ke liye aur Veer turant chala gaya. Kyu? Chaahta to keh deta ki nahi mein Nidhi ma'am ke saath theek hu, badhiya chal raha hai yaha.

Kyunki, kahi na kahi Ragini uski family ka hi hissa thi. Wo bhi chotil thi aur ghar chhor ke bhaagi thi. Nidhi ke upar aur dabaav nahi daalna chaahta tha Veer. Apna ghar apna hi hota hai. Puraana ghar na sahi. Ragini ka hi sahi. Isliye, Veer turant hi Ragini ke ghar me shift ho gaya tha. (Nidhi ko farewell waala letter likhne ke baad.)

Agar, Ragini use panaah nahi deti to Veer zyada din Nidhi ke ghar me nahi tikne waala tha. :sigh:

Ye tumhari galat fehmi hai bhai. :sigh:

Koi nahi keh raha ki Ragini sahi hai. Wo galat hai. Lekin, poornta galat nahi. Khaali uska dosh nahi hai. Veer bhi isme shaamil hai. Ye bhalayi keh sakte hai ki 60% Ragini ki galti hai aur baaki 40% Veer ki... Percentage upar neeche ho sakta hai. Lekin, shaamil dono hi hai.

Veer jis samay Ragini ki chhat ke neeche reh raha tha tab wo kuchh bhi nahi kama raha tha. Kisne use khaana khilaaya? Kisne ann diya? Kisne jal diya? Kisne kapde khareede? Kisne kitaabein khareedi? Kisne uski daily life ke liye har wo cheez khareed ke rakhi taaki use koi dikkat na hoye?

Ragini ne.

Jab wo Aatish ke gundo se ladne ke baad ghayal ghar aata tha to kaun uski marham patti karta tha? Clinic ke expenses, medication ke expenses, college life ke expenses, traveling ke expenses, kaun deta tha?

Ragini.

Ek prakar se Ragini ne Veer ko paala hai. Bhale hi bahut kam samay ke liye. Lekin parvarish usne bhi ki hai. Anjaane me hi sahi par hui hai.

Kal ko Suman, aabha, Sonali ko Veer leke aaya. Kisne unhe panaah di? Bhavna, Tej aayi. Kisne unhe rakha? Shweta aur bhumika bhi shamil hui, kisne sahaara diya?

Ragini ne.

Wo chaahti to keh deti ki nahi Veer mein inko ghar me nahi rakh sakti. Sab ke yaha hone se hi Veer ko ek family jaise feel hua. Aur, isme Ragini ka hi haath tha.

Electricity bill, water bill, gas cylinder inn sab chhote chhote kharcho ke baare me to mein baat bhi nahi kar raha. But who does it?

Ragini.

Of course ab jab itne log aa gaye hai to wo bhi madad karte hai inn expenses me. But iske pehle kaun tha? Ragini.

Ye wo cheezein hai jinka zikr nahi kiya jaata par agar deeply socho to pata lagta hai ki Ragini ne bhi kitna kuchh kiya hua hai.
Ok chalo mann lete hai, mujhe Ragini ke current POV ko samajhne ke liye fir se uss update se padha na hoga jab veer Ragini ke ghar pe aaya, wo kaun sa update tha?
 

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Jaw Long ke time pe Renshu ke shabd abhi yaad aa gye ,,Veer ko apna khud ka ek weapon decide kar lena chahiye ...ya phir jo surrounding mein present ho usi ko use karna chahiye but here we see ,wo staff Disembowler ka main weapon tha par Veer ne use yu hi fek diya ...jo baad mein wapas se disembowler ne Veer ke against use kiya tha ....Chhoti Chhoti mistakes ne Lairs ki fight ko aur bhi critical bana diya ...
Everytime it gives me such goosebumps and thrill like reading for the first time ,,you have an Overpowered writing skill bro no doubt....Small space mein fights ka aisa description...just wow
Thanks a lot. Veer might get his hands on some weapons now. :hint: Because something has changed. There will be a reason again. There will be an explanation as to why he would would a weapon.
Btw Werewolf what's your opinion on the two godly cards for Veer as he has 2 Slots,From the cards unveiled till now
For me it's" Bewolf and Zephyr's Mask"...
what is your choices dear readers?
Zephyr's Mask is strong af. :declare: What else do you want me to say?
Story ki timeline IRL timeline se bahut hi piche chal rahi hai ,agar story ko one go mein padha jaye to aisa feel hoga 4 saal mein Veer ke 2 years ka hi description hai😂 ....Obviously writer ki personal life and stuffs matters here...
Obviously. Kahani me sirf 2-3 saal hi guzre hai.
Insaan humesha sukhi nahi reh skta ya humesha dukhi nahi reh skta ....Dada ji ki maut ko maan kar ab aage to badhna hi tha jo Veer ne pratyaksh roop se dikhaya bhi ....Ab Naya alliance ban chuka hai sath hi new mission bhi mil gya hai "SUMMIT" ye kya hone wala hai wo to writer hi jaane ....
Wese Veer ke paas 30k points collect ho chuke the na is mission ke baad.... I wish to see his new stats of 200 to each....
waiting for new update bro ....deliver it soon
Wo edit karne me samay lagega. Mujhe dekhna padega kaha kya badha hai, kaun si penalty lagi hai, kya favourabilities me antar aaya hai. Jaha zaroorat hogi waha par full status dikhaaya jaayega. Bahut hectic kaam hai bhai wo.
 
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