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System holder ki favourability check karne ke liye system se poochna padega. Ava apni system Lily se poochh sakti hai ki Veer ki favourability uske liye kya hai.![]()
Par, Veer isliye nahi poochhta kyunki ek time par Ava ne use dhoka de diya tha. Warna pehle wo bhi system holders kj favourability check kiya karta tha. Dhoka milne ke baad se... Wo favourability par zyada trust nahi karta. Aur, isliye ab wo system holders ki favourability check nahi karta.
Kal clear karunga.
Thanks.
Update kitna tarikh Tak aa sakta bhai
Dhanyavad.
Satya vachan. Pyaar to veh Veer se hi karti hai. Lekin, use ye ehsaas dilaana chaahti hai ki wo uske liye kitna tadpi hai. Halanki, samay ke saath jaise jaise aur raaz khulenge Ragini ye samajh jaayegi ki Veer sirf uska nahi.इंसान जब इमोशनल होता है तब वह सही गलत भूल जाता है ,और रागनी के साथ भी यही हुआ है
उसके शरीर के घाव के साथ-साथ दिल पर भी घाव लगा है ।
रागिनी के मन का एक हिस्सा वीर को दर्द देना चाहता है जो दर्द रागिनी ने महसूस किया वही दर्द रागिनी का मन वीर को देना चाहता है ।
रागिनी कितनी भी कोशिश करले वह वीर से डर भी नहीं रह सकती ये बात वो खुद भी जानती है
Yahi to dekhne laayak hoga. Aur yahi sabse kathin hoga mere liye.विवेक को ठिकाने लगाना चाहिए ।
रागिनी सुमन से भी ईर्ष्या रहती है, उसे वीर को सुमन के साथ रहना अच्छा नहीं लगता है । क्या होगा अब उसे पता चले कि वीर की पसंद निधि, सुहाना, तेज, अवा, केरा, सोनिया और आदि सब लाइन में हैं।
कैसे स्वीकार करेगी वाह कि वीर कोई एक का नहीं हो सकता। वैसे तो सारी फीमेल में टेंशन रहेगी कि वीर किसे स्वीकार करेगा।
Har Pari ki ability alag hai.वीर का किरदार ट्रांसफॉर्म हो रहा है ,
अब देखना ये होगा कि वो ट्रांसफॉर्मेशन कैसा होगा ।
वीर और रेनशू पार्टी ने अपनी क्षमताओं और कार्ड के बारे में एक दूसरे को सब विवरण बता दिया।
सिस्टम के पास भी अपनी ने एक अनूठी क्षमता होती है, यही वजह थी कि लंबे समय तक लड़ाई के समय परी ने वीर की बॉडी को कंट्रोल कर लिया था।
Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Saath bane rehne ka.वीर एंड पार्टी का अगला फोकस समिट आर्क है।
Overall update was as always like a fire .
Waiting for more
Dhanyavad.3 weeks se my ye story padh rha hu bahut hi baytarin story. Sach me bahut hi badiya likhi hai
Veer and Nidhi ke scenes bhi aayenge. Sabr rakhe. Dhanyavad.Superb update brother extremely emotional update specially from ragini point of view
And Veer ke andr changes lgta h kuch bda krne wala he veer.
Ek aise hi full update bhai Veer aur Nidhi ka bhi chaiye ya 2 update
Eagerly waiting for your next update brother.
Take care
Villains are not born. They are made.For me Both Slogan and Aatish past are too saddening and disturbing.....Crime bosses always had a depressing past...which made them to take revenge at any cost....Slogan ke past ko jis dhang se aapne dikhaya hai ,,salute to you....literally cried at the moment when Swati falls into the ditch....Uske baad Sudha ki khudkushi...Koi bhi insaan kese itna seh lega.....for me ,,Sanjeev ko apna badla lena tha jo jayaj bhi tha par afsos ye ki uske raaste mein Veer aa gya .....Nahi to wo anyhow Kaera ko khatm kar hi deta....
Kinda... Yes...Ab Suhana ko kon bataye System ke aage koi bol skta hai kya......
Natalia knew about Veer from earlier so she had camouflaged her status .....but as someone checks system alerts her thats the reason for sudden stare.....also she mark a death flag on Veer here too...
Kyunki, readers ko samajh nahi aa raha tha. So, I had to explain everything.That was Crimson who identified him if i am not wrong....
This scene was interesting and too much interconnected though...the explanation of real thing that happened was just wow...Venoms cure buy karna ,,poison level badhana and all the thing was too good....
Wese yaha pe Werewolf apna frustration bhi nikal rahe the kya explanation ke waqt...it feels like that
I see nothing wrong in that.No, it's not that simple. Ragini apni jagah sahi kaha? Holi ke din wo bathroom wala scene. She was intentionally seducing Veer, she was intentionally happy to see Veer's erection then it goes on, hotel wala scene again she was intentionally seducing him.. isse pehle bhi usne wahi kiya tha... Veer aur karta hi kya.. even though he was always protective.... Even Ragini's first choice was not Veer, after the divorce happened Ragini started seeing other dudes. But eventually ended up with Veer. Usne kabhi bhi Veer se physical hone se pehle poochha nahi uski zindagi mein koi aur ladki hai ya nahi, Ragini khud chahti thi Veer ke saath physical ho.
Reverse the gender. Hmm, you mean Veer ladki ho aur Ragini ek ladka. Okay.Now just reverse the gender, can you say same thing? If no then I must say it's a pseudo feminist thinking. Pehle khud situation create karo khud hi uss situation mein faso fir victim play karo.
To keep him close to herself.Is she dumb? Ragini wants an answer, a statement from Veer but Veer keeps skipping, she knows and realizes ki Veer is not giving her the statement Ragini wants to hear, still she kept her physical relationship with him. Why?
Agar aanshik roop se dekha jaaye to dono hi kahi na kahi galat hai, aur agar aur thoda aanshik roop se dekha jaaye to dono hi galat nahi hai.Yahan Veer galat kahan hai? And after all this she blames Veer ki woh uska physically use kar raha tha I mean, girl.. come on tum khud hi Veer ko bhogne ke liye invite kar rahi thi. Ragini pehle se hi bas khud ke feelings ko hi mahatva deti thi aaj bhi.
No way. Aaj ki society me jo hota hai wo hurt karne ke liye hota hai. Ragini unn feminazis se koso door hai.This situation is the mirror of our real life society, jahan victim act karke sympathy liya ja raha hai bina koi baat ke.
No, wo apni jagah sahi nahi hai, not at all. Last update ke baad Ragini meri favourite list se bahut dur chali gayi, and she will never be in my favourite list again.
Har koi nahi manataHar koi chhuttiyaan mana raha![]()
I Feel you broHar koi nahi manata![]()