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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,440 82.7%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 237 13.6%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 37 2.1%

  • Total voters
    1,741

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lovely update. juhi ko bacha liya .Erica renshu bhi aa gaye hai madad karne par Erica ne nidhi ko behosh kiya uske baad kya hua iski baare me kuch nahi bataya .
Kaise veer dusre hospital me aaya .
manohar ki maut ho gayi sunkar bura laga par ragini pehle jaisi chal nahi sakti ,usko kaha par goli lagi jo uski aisi halat ho gayi ,,,,
Woh sab aage jaanane ko milega na bhai.
Waise veer ke paas koi skill hogi hi jisse wo ragini ko theek kar sake ya phir ava ,garofano ki madad se kuch ho jaaye ..
Dono Veer aur garofano ka full status first page me diya hai bhai. Dekh lo. Kya lagta hai!? Hai kya unke paas aisa kuchh?
nidhi aur veer ka past achcha tha ,kaise veer akela rehta tha ,koi dost nahi ,,nidhi ne usko motivate kiya padhkar maja aa gaya ,aur ab wo veer ke pyar ko accept bhi kar li .
Yes!
Werewolf nice update....o din yad aa gaye jab veer ke pass system nahi thi kaise usse ghar me beijjat kiya jata kaise pranjal usako satata aur ye sab ka boz utha ke o clg me aaj jata sab ankho ke samane aa gaya..... Finally Nidhi be accept kar diya..Juhi and Pihu safe hai....Manohar ji ab nahi rahe bechare...and ragini apahij ho gayi but ab veer ko usaski bhi jimmedari nibhani padegi....shayad ab usse bhi veer ki wife banane ka moka mile vaise ab to clear ho gaya hai aur aapane bhi hint de he di hai ki veer ki ek se jyada wife hongi.
Thanks a lot. ✨
Ye toh pehle se hi nirdharit tha ki Veer ki ek se zyada wives hongi. Kyunki, itni saari potential females hai, unme se agar ek hi bas banegi toh itne characters hone ka koi sense hi nahi.
After tragedy k imotions se bhara hua jise 1 purn episode kah sakte h
is episode me veer aur nidhi ki connection ki gahrai samjhne ko mili ki kyo nidhi ka veer k jivan me sarv pratham sthan hona chahiye
dil me santushti pahuchane wala episode
Exactly!

Ye update foundation ko mazboot banaane waala update tha. Ab mein blatantly keh sakta hu ki meri kahani ab thoda aur matured audience ke liye hai. Jo readers thoda adhik samajhdar hai woh iss update ki importance ko samajh jayenge. Jo sirf plot ko aage badhta dekhna chaahte hai, unhe past se, sideline characters se zyada matlab nahi, woh ye nahi samajh payenge.

Generally, readers update ko ek single entity ki tarah treat karte hai. Usme agar cheezein unke mutabik gayi toh unke liye update achha. Nahi gayi toh update bekar.

Mein jab woh update likhta hu toh mujhe saamne dikh raha hota hai ki iss se jude aur kitne updates honge, aage kya kuchh hoga. It's like I'm adding another ruby in my unfinished art. Jo sirf mujhe pata hai ki kaha lagega, aur poori art ki kitni shobha badhayega. But readers uss time uss particular ruby ko hi dekhenge. Uska color nahi jama toh uski complaint, jamm gaya toh protsahan. It's like that...
 

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Ok Dada ji nahi rahe or ab Ragini bhi hamesha ke liye wheel chair par ,OK matlab chalo dadaji to old age the par prestige par humla kar ke kya vo bach jayga or is pagal se bhidne ke liye mujhe lagta hai vo America wale dono system holder ki requirement hogi abhi ke liye aarav ki life hil chuki hai
You need a serious mind detoxification.

Kyunki, Aarav naam ka toh koi side character bhi nahi hai story me. Protagonist toh dur ki baat hai. Agar, abhi se ye haal hai toh pata nahi aage aane waale characters ko kaise yaad rakhoge. Jab protagonist ka hi naam bhul gaye, then at this rate you won't be able to keep up. :sigh:
 

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You need a serious mind detoxification.

Kyunki, Aarav naam ka toh koi side character bhi nahi hai story me. Protagonist toh dur ki baat hai. Agar, abhi se ye haal hai toh pata nahi aage aane waale characters ko kaise yaad rakhoge. Jab protagonist ka hi naam bhul gaye, then at this rate you won't be able to keep up. :sigh:
Bhai nam me kya rakha hai character to yaad hai na tension not
 

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Bhai nam me kya rakha hai character to yaad hai na tension not
Naam me bahut kuchh hota hai. Agar yaad na aaye toh mention mat karna. But galat naam mat likha karo characters ke. :sigh: Ye mujhe personally pasand nahi. Aisa socha ki tum SRK ke paas jaa ke keh rahe ho ki bhai aapki woh dangal movie badhiya thi. Samajh aaya?
 
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Naam me bahut kuchh hota hai. Agar yaad na aaye toh mention mat karna. But galat naam mat likha karo characters ke. :sigh: Ye mujhe personally pasand nahi. Aisa socha ki tum SRK ke paas jaa ke keh rahe ho ki bhai aapki woh dangal movie badhiya tha. Samajh aaya?
Got it bro
 
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Toh manorath ji the wah jo ab nahi rahe
Hospital scene ko jab read kar raha pehli tej,kavya, Aarohi,shweta, bhavna , aur brijesh aur other ka jikar hua toh laga Werewolf sir ne ragini ko bhi gayab kar diya but she is alive.
Ragini ko apahij kar diya gaya hai
Ye bas ek shuruwat hai. Ek hint thi ye ki ab se samay me parivartan aayega.
So sad manorath ji nahi rahe reader ke attachment itna nahi honge unse but veer ka attachment bohat hai .
Yes. Exactly.
Iss update ka major portion nidhi ke liye dedicated tha aaj wo apne aap se haar gayi wo bhi jaldi hi veer ko propose kar hi dengi.
Ye arc me Nidhi hu main focus thi. Pehle bhi maine bata hi diya tha.
Ava ne bhi erica aur reshu ko bataya ki veer kahan hai, wo behosh thi par phir bhi uth kar batadiya ki wah underground liar aur shamshan ke pass hoga uski healing capacity achi hai aur uske cards ke karan.
Healing factor use baaki system holders se aur bhi tez heal hone ki taaqat pradan karta hai.
Erica,renshu aur gorofona ke bich jo tussle hai wo bhi dekhne ko mila
It shows that the trio has formed some sort of camaraderie between them. :declare:
Aadesh ne bhi mouke ka fayda uthaya hai wo bhi apni image aur achi banana chahta hai
Woh toh hai hi sly fox. Aise kaise haath se mauka jaane de dega?
Shreya ke bhi emotions describe kiye irshya, khusi juhi ke milne ki,

dekna honga ki veer manorath ji kaatil ke sath kya karte hai, golu ke samay veer badi mushkil se depression se bahaar aaya tha ab dekhna hoga ki jab usse pata chale ga ki uske enemies ki wajah se uske dadaji aur ragini aur uski family ko suffer karna padha
Isliye toh change aayega. This will tell Veer that whatever he did... It was for nothing. He will realise the dangers that are lurking behind his family.
Dexter toh mara gaya, but rajat aur wo kya naam village wale ka beta wo bhi tha isme veer inko toh bakshega nahi bohat buri mout marenge ye log
His name is — Dhananjay :declare:
Puhi ne jo bhi dekha hoga Shayad veer ne kuch toh plan kiya hoga uska

Isme jo bhi flashback Nidhi aur veer ke dikhye woh jaruri hote hai ki veer aur nidhi itne close kaise hogaye the.
Sirf uske liye hi nahi, balki core foundation aur unn dono ke beech ke rishte kk mazboot karne ke liye bhi ye zaroori tha. Kal ko mein agar main-main plot dikha ke kahani khatam kar du, toh fir yahi log bolenge ki yaar Nidhi aur Veer ke beech thoda aur past ka kuchh dikh jaata, ya unke beech ke lamhe thode aur mil jaate toh aur achha rehta.
Isliye, maine kaha... Mein update ko poori story ki tarah treat kar ke chalta hu. I don't treat it as a single entity. :declare:

Ava ko bhi bahut dukh hua hoga ki veer ke ek family members ko wah nahi bacha payi but usne tej aur ek aur ko bachaya the
She did what she could do. Sniper ki bullet se tez woh nahi ho sakti thi. Also, use pata bhi nahi tha ki aisa kuchh hoga. But yes... She saved Tej. There's no doubt in that.
agar tej ya kisi aur female character ko kuch hua hota toh discussion mein ek adh toh thread open ho jana tha ki Werewolf ne aisa kyu kiya jinda karo jinda karo ke trend chalte.
Shayad future me khul jaaye? Who knows. :D
Overall update agar jyada aur bada hota toh itna sab digest nahi hota.
aap update week end par hi diya karo ek ghante se uper mein update read Kiya aur 45. Minutes se review likh raha hu
Ab Zara socho use craft karne me kitna samay laga hoga. :smile2: Fir log aate hai keh dete hai bekar tha update. Kyunki, cheezein unke mutabik nahi gayi.
Isliye, maine upar ek comment me kaha tha. Ye kahani ab thoda aur mature audience ke liye ho chuki hai. Shuruwat me ye sabhi ke liye thi. Par, ab nahi.

Werewolf waise aapne mere is thread ke mere first comment ka reply nahi diya wo bada review tha puri story leke usme bohat kuch likha tha .
Karta hu reply uska bhi man. Worry not! Thanks a lot for this review btw. And, keep supporting as usual. ✨
 

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Kaun tha woh jo hint hint kar raha tha.... Who was saying "baki sab ne dil se nahi padhi"... Haa bhai woh to naa mari jo hint tujhe mila tha.

Wanna say something :waiting:
Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai... SKY WORRIOR ne ye kaha tha. :smile2:
 

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Bhot achha tha bhai past bhi bhot acha connect kiya per humari bhookha badh gyi hai.... Kripya agla update jaldi de ishwar aapki kalam ko or strength de..
Target jitni jaldi complete karoge, utna better rahega readers ke liye. :declare:
Finally Nidhi ne accept kar liya veer ka love 💕
Fantastic update
Werewolf bhai
Aapki story ka koi jawab nahi , Lajawab hai
Aisi story aap hi apni thought se likh sakte hain koi dusra nahi
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting. ✨
Bhai jab bhi update dete ho g faad dete ho maja aa gaya mujhe ek pal laga koi heroine nipat jayegi per aapne to last mai rahat de di
Dhanyavad. Saath bane rehne ka.
Veer ne pihu ko kiske pas choda jiske pas choda unka veer ko dekhke kya reaction tha vo nhi aya update me
Update ke neeche ka bhaag nahi padhte kya? Usme information rehti hai. Jaa ke usko padhne ka. Pata chal jayega ki woh bhaag kyu nahi aaya.
Sabse pahle to thanks
Aapne Nidhi ko kuch nahi hone diya.
Aur Nidhi aur Veer ki journey jo dikhayi.

And bas itna hi kahunga ki bahut hi jyada emotional kar diya aaj aapne.
Bahut hi khubsoorat update tha.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Intezar rahega aise hi emotional update ka.🫠🫠🫠
Dhanyavad. Saath bane rehne ka. ✨
 
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Aaila apun ko yaad Kiya Kya Kese Ne

Wolfi bhai Mai Sahi tha Mai ragini ko he Socha tha but Usky bus legs Gye Apny dadu ko parlok pohcha diya ab meko thodi andaza tha Ke Aap 2 logo ko target karke Bethe ho Maine Ek ko miss kr diya tha it's my fualt
Koi na!!! :D
Assumptions rakhna hi toh ju logo ka kaam hai. ;)
 
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