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They'll be here soon at the right time.Bro,Everyone has arrived in the scene barring the Heroine Kaera and Sonia who are yet to meet VEER.
Yes! That's why... Something is prepared for them.Let us see whether they arrive in the scene or not because that should be a separate Update.
Thanks a lot. We'll meet the trinity soon. Keep supporting.Of course,it is my wish only,how to carry forward this terrific Story is your decision. Will be waiting eagerly for their meeting.
Already bahut words ho gaye the. Iss se adhik attention time se zyada ka ho jaata.Outstanding update brother nidhi ke sath scene thoda aur dikhna tha![]()
Thanks a lot.Mind blowing bhai
I'm waiting ki kb veer and nidhi ka sb shi hoga
Let's see
But ye nya bnda kaffi interesting h
Rebecca ka bhi chutiya bna rha h ye
Salla is se niptna veer ko kaffi dikkat dega
Chlo dekhte h
Kya hotta h
Umeed h next update jldi hi Mille ga
Thanks. Nidhi aur Veer ka scene thoda aur hota toh baaki cheezein ghat jaati.Awesome update bhai
Ek misunderstanding ke chalte ,kavya ,nidhi ,Karan aur tej sabko veer ka gussa ek baar phir dekhna pada aur ek baar phir se veer ,tej se door hota hua nazar aa rha hai aur idhar Suman ne bhi Ragini ko veer ka sara such bata diya hai ......
Nidhi aur veer ka scene thoda aur hona chahiye tha ,aur ye naya Banda ( king) kaun hai jo sayad Rebecca ko bhi chutiya bana raha hai
Thanks.Kya baat bhai ji aapki lekhni adhbhut hai ekdum dhasu Jabardast superb mast update![]()
Dhanyavad.aapke likhne Ka Tarika sabse unique hai aapko sat sat Naman![]()
Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Jaanane ke liye saath bane rehna hoga. Filhal toh guess hi kar sakte hai.बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट भाई क्या ही सीन दिखाया है करन को तो बिल्कुल अपनी दुनिया लुटती हुई दिखाई दे गई थी तेज बहुत ही शर्मिंदा है उसे लग रहा है कि उसके इस कृत्य से उनके बीच फिर दूरी बढ़ गई वहीं रागिनी अब क्या करेगी और निधी का सीन सबसे इमोशनल था और लास्ट में वो unknown व्यक्ति ऐसी क्या चीज लेकर आ गया शायद वही redioactive elements या कुछ और।
Samay batayega bhai. Pehle se waise sab nirdharit hai. Baaki, padhte jao. Jo hoga accha hi hoga.भाई एक रिक्वेस्ट है कृपया कर के रागिनी और निधी के वीर के साथ रिश्ते में कोई उलट फेर मत करना ये मेरे दो पसंदीदा character हैं
आप writer हो आप के हाथ में ही इस कहानी का भाग्य है कृपया इस request को accept कर लेना भाई please![]()
Thanks a lot.Superb, beautiful, wonderful, awesome, amazing, mind blowing, excellent, dhamakedaar and lovely update and thanks for biggest ever megha update for readers
That's because Nidhi and Veer's relationship is already planned. I know what must be done. You read only this update, hence the unsatisfied feelings. But, I'm writing with the vision of knowing what will happen in the future. No need to worry. Whatever will happen between them will be interesting. Thanks btw.Overall I thoroughly enjoyed your story ... Because I am a silent reader I appreciate any story which keeps me hooked and yours is one such it elevates the mood and keeps us waiting for the next update ... But don't take it the wrong way but i think if veer had kissed nidhi and told her this is I am to you and left instead of raising his hand on her I personally would have liked it more but hey wat do I know I m just a reader and your writing skills are much appreciated specially the twists...
Dhanyavad. Things will happen at the right time. This is the longest arc so we'll move with sequences which have the most priority right now. Keep supporting.First of all, thanks itna bda update dene k lie hum sabko,,, tarif krne jesa kuchh h nhiii kyuki tarif uski ki jati jahan pr gunjaish ho,,, but it's not the case with this special heart touching creation,, lekin ek baat ki shikayat h tumse Mr. Werewolf ,, tumne bechaini badha di h,,, tumhri story se hum readers kitne jyda attached h ye tum bhi jante hoo,, hr ek character humare lie important h lekin kuchh characters bhut special h,,
Ek request h,,, unn special characters k sath scene complete hota h toh ek alag he sukun sa milta h,,,
Isilie sukun pahunchane me jyda deri na Krna,,,
Love Gratitude and take care dear Werewolf![]()
Dheere-dheere saamne aayega woh. Agle update me aur jankari pata lagegi.Awesome update bhai.
Cafe scene pe mazza aa gya
Iss update me serial killings ke baare me kuch dekhne ko nahi mila lekin ye update zaruri tha thoda light-hearted scence k liye.
Yup! Aur, apni jagah Ragini sahi bhi hai.Ragini aar ya paar kuch karne wali hai aisa lag rha hai. Suman apne maalik ke liye rasta asaan karne me lagi hai pehle shweta ke saath aur ab ragini.
Bas dekhte jao Bhai. Jo ho raha hai ekdum sahi ho raha hai.Aur ye nidhi mam ka matter to aur bhi complicate hota jaa rha hai. Dekhna hoga kya hota hai unke saath.
Dekhte hai.Morocco me kuch alag hi daal pak rhi hai...lagta hai veer ka next trip Morocco ya spain hone wala hai![]()
We might see Ava in the next update.Werewolf bhai ho sake to next update me ava ko hotel room se bahar nikaloshe should meet kaera and sonia.
Bahut bahut dhanyavad bhai. Keep supporting.Overall mast aur long update. Mazze aa gye. Keep writing this beautiful story![]()
ThanksBahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
Waiting for updateAbhi toh 1k words hi ready hue hai bhai![]()
Definitely brooDhanyavad. Things will happen at the right time. This is the longest arc so we'll move with sequences which have the most priority right now. Keep supporting.![]()
Thanks a lot.Bhai bhai bhai !!!
What an amaaaazing and brilliant update!??... Superb![]()
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Karan and Kritika were out of the picture so it was required to let them shine too. Their relationship have also taken a step further. And, so does Veer and Tejal's relationship.I couldn't have imagined that this update would come with a Full Packed Family Drama ...???
This is soooooo much..!!!
Dhanyavad. Last part iss update me dene nahi waala tha mein. Par, de diya kyunki bahut samay baad update aa raha tha.Lot's of Emotions...or sath me lay banate hue readers ko jo Suspense ka Tadka laga k diya hai na....
Literally Awesome![]()
Bilkul! Dhanyavad!I can't say anything about every moments in this Episode now (Because I am happily diving into the Canal filled with Joy) Accept...??
Blockbuster ||
-Baaki baatein Section ki Tapri pe baaki Toliyon k sath Saajha ki jayngi..."
Thoda risk leke bhi diya hai. Mein itna bada dene nahi waala tha. Attention time maatr 10-15 minute ka hota hai kisi bhi cheez ko read karne ke liye agar woh interesting hai toh. Bahut interesting hai toh half hour at max. Lekin, uss se zyada fir nuksandayak hota hai. Isliye ab updates 9-10k ke around hi rahenge.Literally Bhai..!
2 hafton bhaad,aisa Mega Update deke DilKhush kar diya, woh bhi approximately 12.7 k words ka..
Previous Update se 4200 Words more..Ju ne Kamaaal Kar diya..![]()
Thanks. Keep supporting.Thank you !
Werewolf bhai, for giving such a wonderful Story to Us![]()
Who knows.Or ek baat..!
Ye Mr.India ka Parallel World wala bhai Mr.X kahi Nuclear Warhead to nahi bana raha![]()
Chai toh pee thi usne.Uske sath kya dikhega bhai
Apna londa Veer jab bhi waha jata hai moment ki to chhodo aysa scene ho jata h bichara kabhi khana - pina chhod k chala aata hai to kabhi ladai or Spicy Thappad se pet bhar k aata hai...or aaj to hadd ho gyi...
Apni SpcL Chai ( 3 spoon with sugar waali) or apne Favourite Biscuit ko Bina khaye aana pada...
Mai to na sehta![]()
Nahi! She's here now so we'll see her time to time.Han bhai hm sb Cutie Ava ko kaise bhool sakte hain... Writer Sahab ne to use ek tarah se Cage me band kar rakha hua h ki jab us character ki story line aaygi tb pinjra khulega..![]()
Nope! We'll move according to the priority of the sequences. Jo sirf mujhe pata hai.BTW..i think in next update it should be done...The Trio Conversation ||
•Kaera
•Sonia
•Ava
DhanyavadBAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT ADBHUT ROMANCHAK JABARDUST FANTASTIC LOVELY MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Kyuki, dono hi jaante hai ki dono ke beech kaisi feelings hai. Nidhi aage nahi badhna chaahti. And, she has her own reasons.Zadatar update tho Ghar k halat mein nikal gaya
Veer Or Tej and company ki woh lambi conversation or misunderstanding
Veer or Nidhi k bich phir se argument
jo ki ab har mulakat mein hone lage hai
Bilkul! Bas uss segment ko dimag me rakhna. Things will get easier later. Thanks and keep supporting.Or last mein Morraco k King or ??? k bich conversation jo zada samjh nhi aayi lekin aane wale updates mein shayad yeh clear ho jayega
Thanks a lot. I think last humorous update was when Pranjal gave his speech at manorath's b'day party. Where he was drugged by Veer and then he farted on the mic.Wonderful updates (more like 4 updates in a single update).
Bahut din ke baad ya saayad first time ke liye ek comedy wala scene aya story mein.
Writer ka sense of humor bhi ek alag level ka hey.
Way to go bro.!!!
Keep focus on your grammar, spacially basic grammar... just go step one by one and do practices...and then try to speak just normal and simple English words ..
Or han ek aur baat - 6th class se lekar 8th class tak ki apni English books k whole chapters ki poori ki poori word meaning learn kar lo... bahut kaam aygi dost...
U can't speak English because,
Tumme kabhi is par dhyan nahi Diya...
Just focus on your Goal then See....![]()
We are eagerly waiting for feel roller coaster of emotionsThanks a lot.
Karan and Kritika were out of the picture so it was required to let them shine too. Their relationship have also taken a step further. And, so does Veer and Tejal's relationship.
Dhanyavad. Last part iss update me dene nahi waala tha mein. Par, de diya kyunki bahut samay baad update aa raha tha.
Bilkul! Dhanyavad!
Thoda risk leke bhi diya hai. Mein itna bada dene nahi waala tha. Attention time maatr 10-15 minute ka hota hai kisi bhi cheez ko read karne ke liye agar woh interesting hai toh. Bahut interesting hai toh half hour at max. Lekin, uss se zyada fir nuksandayak hota hai. Isliye ab updates 9-10k ke around hi rahenge.
Thanks. Keep supporting.
Who knows.
Chai toh pee thi usne.
Bas khatam nahi kar paaya.
Unke beech ki khataas hi mithaas me badlegi. Bas, padhte jao.
Bhai! Appeal hai....Nahi! She's here now so we'll see her time to time.
Nope! We'll move according to the priority of the sequences. Jo sirf mujhe pata hai.
Dhanyavad
Kyuki, dono hi jaante hai ki dono ke beech kaisi feelings hai. Nidhi aage nahi badhna chaahti. And, she has her own reasons.
Bilkul! Bas uss segment ko dimag me rakhna. Things will get easier later. Thanks and keep supporting.
Thanks a lot. I think last humorous update was when Pranjal gave his speech at manorath's b'day party. Where he was drugged by Veer and then he farted on the mic.Yeah! Kaafi samay ho gaya. Beech me bhi kayi humorous scenes the magar itne strong nahi the.
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