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Intezar rahega bhai2-3 din toh Maan ke chalo. Kyuki 10k words ke approx ka toh update hi rahega. Aur, mein sirf raat ko hi 1-1:30 ghante baithata hu likhne.
Story ka end pehle se hi decided hai bhai. Proper ending hi hai. Par iss khwaab me mat rehna ki Veer ki shaadi readers ki mann-pasand female leads se ho jayegi. Shaadi ho bhi sakti hai aur nahi bhi. Pehli story maine rush me end ki thi because of the readers' continuous blabbering. Uske baad se hi maine readers ki sunana band kar diya. Story ab sirf mere according jaati hai. Na ki readers ke. Toh agar mann pasand heroine se shaadi nahi hui Veer ki then usme mein kuch nahi kar sakta. Kyuki, pehle se hi sab decided hai.DUDE JUST A HUMBLE REQUEST TO YOU= PLEASE STORY KO SASTE M KHATAM NA KARNA CHAHE KITNA BHI TIME LELO LEKIN STORY KO EK PROPER ENDING DENA JAISE= VEER OR NIDHI[TEACHER] KI SHADI... MAINE AAPKI PAHLI STORY PADHI LEKIN USKI ENDING STRONG NAHI THII TUMNE JALDI JALDI FINISH KI H VO.
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Yaar Bhai Aise Bolke Darao Mat ,Mera Bohut Mann Hai Nidhi Mam N Veer Ki Shadi Ko Leke Update Dekhne Ka.Story ka end pehle se hi decided hai bhai. Proper ending hi hai. Par iss khwaab me mat rehna ki Veer ki shaadi readers ki mann-pasand female leads se ho jayegi. Shaadi ho bhi sakti hai aur nahi bhi. Pehli story maine rush me end ki thi because of the readers' continuous blabbering. Uske baad se hi maine readers ki sunana band kar diya. Story ab sirf mere according jaati hai. Na ki readers ke. Toh agar mann pasand heroine se shaadi nahi hui Veer ki then usme mein kuch nahi kar sakta. Kyuki, pehle se hi sab decided hai.
Maine kaafi major changes kiye hai story me warna abhi ye kuch aur hi hoti. Suhana was supposed to die fyi.She was supposed to die after getting shot. Lekin, mein khud uspe daya kha gaya. And, seeing her character development... I let her live. That was one of the major changes. Kyuki, Suhana re-enter kar gayi thi plot me and I had to make subtle changes for her presence in the plot. Toh jo ho raha hai woh bas padhte jaane ka. Kahani bharpoor satisfaction degi.
Ju better just write the updateStory ka end pehle se hi decided hai bhai. Proper ending hi hai. Par iss khwaab me mat rehna ki Veer ki shaadi readers ki mann-pasand female leads se ho jayegi. Shaadi ho bhi sakti hai aur nahi bhi. Pehli story maine rush me end ki thi because of the readers' continuous blabbering. Uske baad se hi maine readers ki sunana band kar diya. Story ab sirf mere according jaati hai. Na ki readers ke. Toh agar mann pasand heroine se shaadi nahi hui Veer ki then usme mein kuch nahi kar sakta. Kyuki, pehle se hi sab decided hai.
Maine kaafi major changes kiye hai story me warna abhi ye kuch aur hi hoti. Suhana was supposed to die fyi.She was supposed to die after getting shot. Lekin, mein khud uspe daya kha gaya. And, seeing her character development... I let her live. That was one of the major changes. Kyuki, Suhana re-enter kar gayi thi plot me and I had to make subtle changes for her presence in the plot. Toh jo ho raha hai woh bas padhte jaane ka. Kahani bharpoor satisfaction degi.
Bhai log jhatko Ke lye tayar ho jao wolfi bhai Sabke jazbaton Ka achar dalne wale Hain so don't take seriously any female Kyu Ke wolfi bhai Ke baton Se Andaza lag rha Jo Socha hai Wo Hoga Nhi Aur Jo Hoga Wo koi soch be Nhi SaktaStory ka end pehle se hi decided hai bhai. Proper ending hi hai. Par iss khwaab me mat rehna ki Veer ki shaadi readers ki mann-pasand female leads se ho jayegi. Shaadi ho bhi sakti hai aur nahi bhi. Pehli story maine rush me end ki thi because of the readers' continuous blabbering. Uske baad se hi maine readers ki sunana band kar diya. Story ab sirf mere according jaati hai. Na ki readers ke. Toh agar mann pasand heroine se shaadi nahi hui Veer ki then usme mein kuch nahi kar sakta. Kyuki, pehle se hi sab decided hai.
Maine kaafi major changes kiye hai story me warna abhi ye kuch aur hi hoti. Suhana was supposed to die fyi.She was supposed to die after getting shot. Lekin, mein khud uspe daya kha gaya. And, seeing her character development... I let her live. That was one of the major changes. Kyuki, Suhana re-enter kar gayi thi plot me and I had to make subtle changes for her presence in the plot. Toh jo ho raha hai woh bas padhte jaane ka. Kahani bharpoor satisfaction degi.
Mujhe khud 98% vibe aa gyi thi ki ab ye yaha cutie Suhana ko sacrifice kiya jayga jab aapne woh Titli waala explanation diya tha, mai bata nahi sakta mai kis qadar surprised or khush hua tha Suhu ko alive dekh ke, literally jis tarah aapne Suhana ka flashback dikhaya tha uske baad agar uski death dekhta to pakka aankhon se se aansoo nikal jaane theStory ka end pehle se hi decided hai bhai. Proper ending hi hai. Par iss khwaab me mat rehna ki Veer ki shaadi readers ki mann-pasand female leads se ho jayegi. Shaadi ho bhi sakti hai aur nahi bhi. Pehli story maine rush me end ki thi because of the readers' continuous blabbering. Uske baad se hi maine readers ki sunana band kar diya. Story ab sirf mere according jaati hai. Na ki readers ke. Toh agar mann pasand heroine se shaadi nahi hui Veer ki then usme mein kuch nahi kar sakta. Kyuki, pehle se hi sab decided hai.
Maine kaafi major changes kiye hai story me warna abhi ye kuch aur hi hoti. Suhana was supposed to die fyi.She was supposed to die after getting shot. Lekin, mein khud uspe daya kha gaya. And, seeing her character development... I let her live. That was one of the major changes. Kyuki, Suhana re-enter kar gayi thi plot me and I had to make subtle changes for her presence in the plot. Toh jo ho raha hai woh bas padhte jaane ka. Kahani bharpoor satisfaction degi.