Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Ajay chauhan]

ROHIT RAJ SINGH Ju ka revo lamba hai. Bhula nahi hu mein. Uska reply Dena baaki hai. Samay milte hi dunga. Toh aisa mat sochna ki ju ke revo ka reply ab tak nahi aaya. Bade revos ka reply hamesha itminaan se baith ke lutf leke unhe padhte hue deta hu mein.

Isme koi Shak nahi wolfi tumhari story ke update ka jitna Hume intezaar hota hai utna hi humne bheje huye review ke reply ka bhi hota hai

Or buddy tumhare jaisa writer is fouram par koi nahi hai tum jiss tarah image and all per brainstorming karte ho HAD naam ke jese chutiye waha kabhi nahi pahuch sakte jaha par abhi tum khade ho

Pata nahi konsa Ganja fuk ke aate hai comments karne mujhe lagta hai HAD naam ka ye banda daaru samjh ke hukke ka Pani hi pi jata hai isi liye iska ye haal hai

 

[Ashwathama]

Teen baar padhne ke baad bhi kuch samajh nahi aaya toh chullu bhar paani me doob maro Bhai. Story padhna tumhare bas ka nahi.
Apni retaining power badhao. Bahut zaroori hai.

Your comment was indeed for hatred purpose and was a publicity stunt as well. I'll tell the reason below later. Let's start! Shall we?

See! This is what happens when you don't read anything carefully.100 baar bata chuka hu ki system ka raaz kahani ka last part hai. Mein unn writers ki tarah ek ek update soch ke nahi likhta. Ki haan pehle ye dikha diya... Fir agle din baith ke kuch socha fir woh dikha diya aur kahani chalti jaa rahi hai. Poora plot pen down kiya jaata hai pehle mere dwara. Sabse pehle ant hi likha jaata hai. Jab Maine kaha ki system ka raaz kahani ke ant me hai iske peeche koi reason hi hoga na?Usi ant se agli story linked hai. Ab agar wahi abhi mein disclose kar dunga toh matlab hi kya itni brainstorming ka? Update update bas padh lete ho, comments me mein jo details deta hu woh padhna nahi hai. Tumhare alawa kisi ne pichhle kayi mahino se ye nahi pucha ki system ka raaz kyu nahi khul Raha. Kyuki unko pata hai. Woh legit readers hai jo mere comments par dhyaan dete hai.

Kisne kaha Nidhi ghaas tak nahi daal rahi? Kya padh rahe ho? Ye baat sabhi ko pata hai par tumhe nahi samajh aa rahi toh fir samjha deta hu. Nidhi ek divorcee hai. Veer se 8-9 saal badi hai. Veer uska student hai. Aur upar se woh do baccho ki maa hai. Inn lines ko dobara padhna ek baar. Divorcee! 8-9 years age gap! Student teacher relationship! And, 2 kids...!Matlab samajh rahe ho? Kaun si aisi stree hoti hai jo apne 8-9 yrs Age gap waale student ke saath, aur divorcee aur baccho ke hone ke baad uske pyaar ko asaani se accept kar le??Nidhi ki personality ko kayi baar updates me darshaya gaya hai. Woh reserved kind of person hai. Bhala woh kaise Veer ko accept kar sakti hai.Samaaj naam ki koi cheez hoti hai. Samaaj kaise dekhega, Veer aur uska parivar kaise unhe dekhega. Baccho par kya asar padega bade hoke ye baat pata lagne par? Nidhi koi chutiya nahi hai jo bas physical need ke liye ek young aadmi ko accept kar le. It's obvious ki woh ye sab deny karegi hi... Because she has some feelings for Veer too. Ye toh updates padh ke hi pata lag gaya tha. Baar baar uski saansein tez hona, Veer se nazre chura ke bhaag jaana ki kahi woh kuch galat na kar de. Obviously wo bhaagegi hi... aisi aurat ki sthiti aur uske dil ko nahi samjhoge to kuch nahi samajh paoge. And, plot me unka koi role hoga tabhi toh woh exist kar rahi hai na?

Pehle incest ki spelling sahi dhang se likho. Fir pucho ye sawal. Lekin fir bhi mein uttar de hi deta hu.Prefix maine daala hai. Incest hoga tabhi toh daala hai na? Suman, Sonali aur Aabha indeed slaves hai and wo incest me count nahi hongi. Haan! Toh kya galat hai isme? Matlab chaahte kya ho? Kya Veer bas Ghar me hi sab kuch karta rahe? Kya tumne kisi aur aadmi ko Veer ki slaves ke saath kuch karte dekha hai? Kya kisi ne uski partners par haath daala hai? Jab se Veer ne unke saath sabandh banaye hai tab se kisi bhi baahri mard ne unn mahilao ke saath kuch bhi nahi kiya. Isliye, yaha par woh adultery laagu nahi hoti. Kuch samjhe??? Agar mein yahi par kisi ek female ko kisi aur mard ke saath sex karwa du toh ye adultery consider ho jayegi. Know the difference first. Protagonist ka baahar sex karna isliye chal jaata hai because at the end use wife ghar me laani hi hai. Upar se majority readers males hai. Kahani ke points me bhi pehle hi bata diya gaya tha ki harem based hai kahani. Harem ka matlab jaante hi hoge I guess?Rahi baat Tej, Bhumika and Arohi ki... There's a huge difference. Suman toh slave hai. Upar se uski seva karne ke liye uska parivar baadhya hai. Updates nahi padhe kya? Tej Bhumika aur Arohi kab se slaves ho gayi? Tej toh aayi hi kitne updates ke baad hai. Bhumika ka ravaiyya change hone me kitne updates lage. Arohi ke saath at least 2 kisses ho gayi hai abhi. Woh uski sisters hai. Unka parivarik sambandh hai. Itni asaani se kaise ho sakta hai sab? Aur agar itni asani se hi sab kuch dekhna hai toh day 1 se bhai behan ki chudayi wali stories dhero uplabdh hai yaha. Go and read them. Ye story lambi story hai. Late romance based hai.

Pehli baat... Woh Kiara nahi... Kaera hai. Dusri baat... Veer ne Kaera ka use nahi kiya. Kaera ne Veer ko seduce kiya tha woh sab karne ke liye. Baat fir wahi par aa gayi. Ki story dhang se nahi padhi hai. Kaera nashe me thi... Usi ne Veer ke saath pehle pahal ki. Poora dosh Veer pe kaise daal sakte hai hum? Sonia ek acchi friend thi. Lekin, gap hone ke chalte woh rishta kamzor pad gaya hai. It's as simple as that. Din bhar ki life me hamari zindagiyo me hi aise kitne log honge jinse hum short period of time ke liye kaafi baatein kiye par aaj unse touch khatam sa hai. Kyu?Kyuki woh consistency banayi hi nahi gayi. Jis tarah se baatein honi chahiye thi waha par samay ka gap aa gaya. Yahi reason hai ki Sonia Veer ke liye Aadesh ki hotel me uski madad karne ke liye sankoch me kyu pad gayi thi. It's because of that time gap... Accha woh pakke dost bhi nahi the. Sirf dost hi the... Toh ye hona toh zahir tha.Sonia is crazy about defeating Kaera. Uske liye woh kitna important hai ye bhi updates me bahut baar bataya gaya hai. Inferiority complex. It makes sense why she didn't want to lose that deal which later could have been grabbed by Kaera.

Tumhare shabdo ka chayan hi galat hai.
Use karne ka matlab jaante ho? Uska matlab hota hai koi Prem bhaavna na hona. Sirf matlab ke liye istemal kiya jaane waala...Rahul kab se matlab ke liye sex karne laga? Aur agar matlab ke liye hi karna tha... Toh unki itni parvah kyu karta tha? There shouldn't have been any care and love involved.Aur mujhe bataane ki zaroorat nahi ki meri kahani disappointment hone waali hai ya fir kuch aur...Maine already forum par kayi records break kar diye hai iss story se. So, that explains it all. Most liked post bhi yahi milegi jo ki update 175 aur upar top pinned comment hai. Views ke baare me toh jaante hai sabhi. Revos dekh lo page 1 se leke ab tak ke. Aur pages me top par hai kahani.Toh mere khayal se readers sab jaante hai. Siwae tumhare... (Ohh btw, akhir kyu bhi hit thi jab woh forum par aayi thi. )Ohh btw again... Ye kahani continuosly do baar scoop me google ranking par top pe reh chuki hai. Uske baad se Google rankings scoop me aa nahi rahi hai warna 4 baari ho jaata. umeed hai iss baar aa jayegi. Siraj bhau bole toh hai.

Tumhare saath kuch brain problem hai bhai. Tum aurto ko istemal karne ki cheezon ki tarah dekh rahe ho. You have a serious problem with you. Veer Suman ko haq se isliye istemal karta hai kyuki Suman masochist hai. Ye baat bhi update me batayi gayi hai. Firse wahi baatein aa jaati hai. Woh seva karne ke lie baadhya hai, favorability bahut high hai. Toh fir kyu nahi?Itni females hai toh ka kya matlab? Matlab kisi ke paas bhi jaake uski choot me lund daal Diya jaaye? Yahi matlab hua na tumhara?Women are not for use. Get this thing in your head. Incestuous relations takes time. Veer ne jitna samay ghar par diya hai uss hisaab se uski progress badhiya hai. Kavya already kaafi aage aa chuki hai. Aur Tej aur Arohi bhi kiss ki hadd tak pahuch chuki hai. I don't have any sort of complaints here with myself. I know what I'm doing.

I will tell you what the actual fuck is going on... It's your brain which is not able to comprehend a simple time segments.Kaera Julia se kab kehti hai ki 'I want him to claim me?' It's after those segments where Veer has already given her that diary. Woh cheezein samajhne lagti hai but still... Fully grasp karne me thoda waqt lagega use.Tab woh kehti hai... Because she has started to feel something for Veer. She's clueless what it is.. but andar kuch toh ho raha hai.Rahi baat mission clear kyu nahi hua? Phir wahi baat... Itni baar comment me samjhaya gaya hai fir bhi padhna nahi hota hai aur fir apna assumption maan ke chale aate ho. Mein fir se wahi example dunga jo harr baar deta hu. Ek baar aur samjhaya tha tumko Maine shayad. Paani ka baandh jab khulta hai toh kya woh ek baar me poori sookhi nadi ko bhar sakta hai? Matlab palak jhapakte hi..!? Nahi na? Use hazaro kilometres ki uss Nadi ko bharne me samay toh lagta hoga na? Paani behte behte jaata hoga jab tak ki woh kisi samundar se na mil jaaye. Kuch samajh aaya? Hoshiyar vyakti ko itne me sab samajh aa gaya hoga.Kaera ke emotions uss baandh me fasse paani ki tarah hai jo abhi abhi release hue hai. It will take time to understand different types of emotions.

It's as simple as it's sounds.
Maine kahi par bhi nahi likha ki uske paas judo ki martial arts hai, ya fir karate ki... Wahi Renshu aur Erica ke paas defined martial arts hai. Limited to only one style. Veer ke me kahi bhi ye nahi likha ki uski Martial arts style kisi ek style par based hai. Jaisa ki Death Kiñg ne kaha. Veer ki Martial arts Street fighting based hai. Aur ye sahi bhi hai par isme mein thoda add on karna chahunga.Veer shuru me goons se ladta aaya hai Mumbai me. Isliye style bhi uss hisaab se prapt Hui hai aur dhali hai. Wahi Renshu shuru se hi Shaolin ke prati dedicated raha hai. Zaahir hai uske paas uski style rahegi.Veer situations aur environments ka upyog bhi karta hai unlike other system holders. Veer isme maahir hai baaki sabhi se. Crimson ki fight lelo. Kaise Veer ne woh blade lagayi thi neeche stairs par lighthouse ke. Kaise woh bench periodic motion me roll ki thi bhaagne ke liye. He uses his environment to his best.Uski style defined nahi hai. Moves situation ke hisaab se baahar aate hai. Kisi ek style se stick hoke nahi chalta woh. His martial arts style is >>> Renshu and Erica's martial arts style.

Pehla factor... Is luck...!But uss luck ko safal karne ke liye dusra factory hota hai insaan ki pravatti.
Bahut badi hint aur spoiler de diya hai maine yaha. Hoshiyar vyakti decode kar lega. Aur agar na Kiya toh mere liye accha hi hai kyuki ye sab baad me aane waala hissa hai.

Kisne keh diya bhai ki crimson ke saare cards aur skills Ava aur Veer me distribute ho gaye??? kisne keh diya? Maine toh nahi kaha kabhi. Agar saare distribute ho gaye toh Vertigo kaha gayi??? Koi jawab hai?? Vertigo skill gayi kaha? Crimson ka toh full status hi nahi dikhaya tha maine. Tumne assume bhi kaise kar liya ki uske paas bas teen hi cards the??? Vertigo toh na hi Veer ko mili aur na hi Ava ko. Khud hi assume karna hai fir khud hi sawaal uthana hai. ab woh gayi kaha ye mat puchna kyuki woh last ka part hai kahani ka. System ke Raaz se juda hai.

Kisne kaha ki uske paas koi buff card nahi tha? Just because I didn't show his full status iska matlab ye nahi ki uske paas bas utne hi limited moves the. Uske paas bhi toh business se related koi skill rahi hogi? Swimming ya sharks se related koi skill? Kaha gayi woh sab? Inka jawab bhi dedo. Woh Ava aur Veer ko kyu nahi mili?Iska jawaab already update me diya hua hai wese Maine for your kind information. Update me jaha Veer island par hota Hai crimson ko haraane ka baad tab woh ye baat Ava se bolta hai ki uska guess hai ki ek system holder ko maarne ke baad uski 'KUCH' skills and cards shayad dusre system holder ke paas aa jaate hai. GO AND READ THAT UPDATE AGAIN.
Rahi baat why Crimson was powerful? Because he gained more missions than Veer. It's as simple as that. He invested more in system than Veer. Uska appearance bhi kam tha unlike Veer. Woh points usne baaki stats me daale the. Appearance ko lekar shayad Maine bataya hai waha par. Crimson ke stats show kiye hai shayad Maine. Full status toh nahi, par stats zaroor show kiye honge.

Probably a level higher than Veer? Kya ye obvious nahi?
Obviously Veer ke system ke level se uska system level higher hi hoga.

Ye kaise samajh aa gaya Bhai???
Maine toh kisi bhi update me aisa kuch nahi bataya ki sabhi system holder ko 1-2 saal pehle hi system mila hai aur mr.x ko uss se zyada saal ho gaye hai. Kaun sa assumption leke chal rahe ho?? Ko baat batayi hi nahi gayi hai usko beech me kaise laa sakte ho? Kis update me maine ye confirm likha hai? Zara mujhe bhi bata dena.

Are you nuts?
System ka level up poora ka poora EXP pe depend karta hai. Harr full status me neeche end me likha rehta hai ki kitni exp chahiye level up hone ke liye. Kabhi wo bhi dekha karo. Exp missions se milti hai. Jitne zyada missions succesful honge utni zyada exp milegi. Jitne jaldi ye missions milenge. Utni jaldi system level up hoga.6 mahine waala system holder bhi 1-2 saal waale system holder ko Hara sakta hai agar use zyada missions mile ho toh. Aur, ye baat bhi kahani me samjhayi gayi hai. Zahir hai Jaw Long aur Crimson dono hi kisi tarah ki clash me uljhe hue the. Jaw Long continuosly Order ke sath uljha tha, obviously na jaane use kitne missions mil gaye honge. Toh wahi Crimson uss unknown caller ke saath bhida hua tha aur apna house of the killers bhi bana raha tha. Again... More missions for him. Veer ek family person tha. Use mission tab hi milte the jab woh baahar ki duniya se zyada interact karta tha. Hope ab samajh aa gaya hoga.

Siddh ho gaya ki tum na samajh ho.
Aura ek Bindu bann ke ya ek jwala bann ke nahi dikh raha hai insaan ke andar.Jaw Long can see the entire body filled with blue aura. Kuch samajh aaya? Each and every thing...! Body ko woh poora dekh sakta hai blue aura se bhare hue hai. Same is the case with other living things. Bas color different hai to differentiate between them.Ab yahi pe common sense aa gaya jo tumne lagaya hi nahi. agar use theek se nahi dikh raha hota toh woh kya chutiya tha jo apni aankhein ritual me sacrifice karta?

Publicity stunt ki bhi ek Seema hoti hai. Readers ka pyaar mere liye kaafi hai ye jataane ke liye ki story kis level ki hai aur kis muqam ki hai. Galtiya toh har kisi se hoti hai. Ek galti jo abhi mere reader ne ginayi thi woh ye ki ek system holder apne system se dusre system ki favorability ke baare me puch sakta hai. Veer ne Ava ke liye Pari se pucha tha. Aur usne dikhaya bhi tha. Par Ava ke dhoka Dene ke baad se Veer ne system holders ki favorability check karna chorr diya hai.Yaha pe mein thoda ye bhool gaya ki baaki system holders Veer ki favorability apne liye check kar sakte hai. Jo ki mein ab aage dikhaya karunga. Iss se plot me koi dikkat nahi hai. Par readers ki request ke liye mein inhe add on kar sakta hu.Rahi baat tumhari... Tumhare intensions saaf nazar aa rahe hai aur sab kuch dikhayi de raha hu. Ek aakhiri post mortem karne do mujhe ..!Alias ID kaun si waali hai? Had waali ya fir Dark Rider69 waali? @Had story likhta hai. Aur tum uspe aise comments karte ho jaise Oscar award wali story script likh di gayi ho. Baar baar Mera naam leke comparison karte ho. Aur sabse bada joke toh ye tha.

Kisi aur ki story ko extract kar ke apna plot create karna apne aap me bahut badi baat hai. Did I read that right? Death Kiñg Am I seeing things or he literally wrote that? Matlab scratch se plot apni imagination pe banana is actually lower than extractings someone else's plot. Nayi cheez pata lagi re baba.So? Which one is the real one? Had or Dark Rider69 ??Ab use aur siddh karne ke liye mein kuch aur hints de deta hu. 'Ise' ko tum dono hi 'issay' likhte ho. Uske baad... Turant hi turant Had ka yaha aa jaana. Ye dekho

For your information my dear. Content uss muqam pe hai jaha records break ho rahe hai. Mujhe batane ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai. Almost Harr story fantasy hi hoti hai. Kya jo incest, adultery, romance, thriller me chal rahi hai woh fantasies nahi? Kya woh aap beeti likh rahe hai?

Dark Rider69 ka comment subah 2:36 AM par aana. Tumhara use like karna aur fir tumhara hi comment subah 3:22 pe aana.

I don't think kisi ko bhi aur kuch samjhane ki zaroorat hai. Banda khud hi ki dusri Id se khud hi ki story par comment kar raha hai. aur upar se yaha gandh machayi jaa rahi hai.

I'll give one first and last fair warning to you. Apni story likho... Meri kahani me dakhal mat do. Of course as a reader everyone is welcomed. But as a mocker I won't tolerate such things. Apni kahani likhte raho, don't even think of collaborating or using any of my characters. Only I have that copyright. Iske peeche pehle bhi kayi stories band ho chuki hai. Woh bhi yahi kar rahe the. No one is allowed to use my story's characters or any other things without taking my permission. And of course, permision is no.

Apna plot socho, apna likhte raho apne readers ko entertain karte raho. I don't have any problem. Par agar iss tarah se yaha aake gandh machaana, readers ko gumraah karne ki koshish karna aur unhe apne thread par le jaane ka ek zariye dena... I can see through your every move. Haven't you read my tagline on my profile?

Samajhdar ko ishara kaafi hota hai. Mein controversies me nahi ghusta. But agar jaan boojh ke koi ghusede... Then I'll tore it apart. Consider this a very sweet warning to you.

अरे इन महाज्ञानियो को extra knowledge क्यों दे रहे हो भाई... इन्हे ज्ञान की ज़रूरत थोड़ी है...
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इन्हे तो बस मेरी लाँ.... खैर छोड़ो...
फिर सब मेरे लिखे शब्दों को एडिट करने को कहोगे...
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बाकी समझ तो गए होगे​

 

[Ashwathama]

How dare you drag me in with your dispute to someone?
I am here since a long time.
All mods know that I am blind.
Tumnay kaysi fazool bat ke halakay opinion dayna hamari merzi hi.
Waysay tum her time ro rahay hotay ho k mujay yea hua mujay wo hua.
Jaysay he thora sach bola kissy nay or usko maynay support kia to tumay mirchy lag gai.
Funny
Shit man
Totally bulshit.
I don't have any dread for u just replied a comment and u dragged ne in it too. Shame on you. How can you treat others like this before checking out your own self? Also, you said that ur story is from a scratch. Don't kid me. You just have taken a tale and befitted your character into it and nothing else. You r not supreme if u have pins for your brains. If you are contradicting someone come through with solid sense. Just timing is not enough to clame it out. Or koi b her time badshah nhi rehta there is always an emperor superior then that keep this In your mind. Meri story may mujay koi fake id laganay ke zaruret nhi it's going well because of its better content. Maybe you do it yourself that is why u feel for others too but your psychy should onlysfay with you. Understood? Don't feel that my blindness can resist me on getting to someone who thinks nothing but I'll for the weak onezs. I am not weak nor is my story. Baki tumara attitude he kafi hi readers ko scatter krnay k liathey don't acquire anything. Best of luck and do look to yourself before raising your nonsense logics. Especially to a blind one because we can tear your famous image down in no time. Samjay tum. Rip.

अजीब प्राणी हो बे... सच मे... बहुत ज़ोर से गाली आरही है... खैर मनाओ मै शभ्य किस्म का सन्यासीयों जैसी सोच बाला हूँ...
वरना... ... वरना क्या ही कर लेता मै यार... शिर्फ अपने डंड कमंडल के तुम्हारे गंडमंडल की सैर पर भेज देता ।
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और एक बात ध्यान से सुन ले बे दो टांग के बीच बाले पोथे... अगर हगना हो तो अपनी स्टोरी के थ्रेड पे हगो...
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हर जगह गांड दिखाओगे... तो फिर फड़वा के जाओगे...
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सभ्यता के अनुरूप बात कर रहा हूँ... वरना मेरे शब्दों से सभी अच्छी तरह से वाक़िफ़ है....

 

[Werewolf]

अजीब प्राणी हो बे... सच मे... बहुत ज़ोर से गाली आरही है... खैर मनाओ मै शभ्य किस्म का सन्यासीयों जैसी सोच बाला हूँ...
वरना... ... वरना क्या ही कर लेता मै यार... शिर्फ अपने डंड कमंडल के तुम्हारे गंडमंडल की सैर पर भेज देता ।
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और एक बात ध्यान से सुन ले बे दो टांग के बीच बाले पोथे... अगर हगना हो तो अपनी स्टोरी के थ्रेड पे हगो...
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हर जगह गांड दिखाओगे... तो फिर फड़वा के जाओगे...
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सभ्यता के अनुरूप बात कर रहा हूँ... वरना मेरे शब्दों से सभी अच्छी तरह से वाक़िफ़ है....

Calm down... Calm down...

 

[Tri2010]

Waiting for update

 

[Ashwathama]

Calm down... Calm down...

Always ​

 

[sandyk1234]

Nice update

 

[Ranchojaiker]

Ye story padhni chhodi hai par recent updates aaye hai ya nahi ye check karne ke liye iss thread par najar banaye rakhta hoon. Sabne ek kahawat to suni hi hogi "Ae lakdi kyun padi hai jhaad, aaja ghuss ja meri gaand me" Aur jo Dark Rider69 ne li hai wo lakdi nahi kateela baans hain jo door tak aur der tak andar iske har chhidra ko khol ke rakh dega. Tune tip taap ke hi sahi point wise apni vishtha nikaali hai to points wise hi jawab sunn.

1) System kya hai ye tere se jyada Werewolf Bhai ko pata hai. Story ke according unhe jaisa change sahi lagega wo karenge. Mujhe to kahi aisa nahi laga ki Pari unusual ho gayi ho. Jaise kisi software me development hote hain waisa ho raha hai isliye har level ke baad Pari ka style badal raha hai. Thoda gehraai se padh bhai. Upar upar se padhega to bhram bana rahega.



2) Honestly saying Nidhi ka character mujhe pasand nahi hai par reality me ek aam bhartiya mahila jo divorcee ho aur jiska ek baccha ho wo aisi hi hoti hai. Nidhi ne hamesha se ghar ki jimmedaari nibhaai hai. Wo koi bahot rich family se belong nahi karti isliye bichari job karke Rajat ko paise dena chahti thi. Jisne hamesha khud se jyada family ke baare me socha ho aur usko pati ke naam par shaitaan mil jaaye jo ek maa ko uske hi bete se alag karde to uss mahila ke mann ki kya sthiti hogi ye andaja lagana bhi asmabhav hai. Kaise wo Veer ko apna le???? Uske peeche uske maa papa hain, chhoti behan hain, bacche hain. Jitni simple sex stories me life lagti hai utni real me hoti to har koi hanste hanste hi duniya se jaata. Pyaar karti hai wo Veer se par abhi tak aisa koi trigger point nahi aaya hai jo Veer ke liye uske andar dabe hue pyaar ko bahar nikaal de. Main guraantee se keh raha hoon jis din Nidhi ne Veer ke saamne apna pyaar accept kar liya log Suman ko bhool jayenge.

3) Matlab females hain to sirf chudai ke liye??? Aabha Suman Sonali ke saath kya case hai agar tune sahi se padha hai to pata hoga. Baaki sabke saath itna time kaha mila hai Veer ko??? Mana aam bande se kayi guna accha hai to kya har ladki kapde utaar de uske saamne??? Fir to har update me sex chhapne waali aur iss story me koi antar nahi hua. Seedhi si baat hai jiska jitna interaction hoga usse utni closeness aayegi. "Pehli baar dekha tujhe love ho gaya, second time me sab ho gaya" Ye filmo me chalta hai. Iss kahani me ye funda to nahi hi chalega.



4) Ye point padhke to pakka yakeen ho gaya ki tune story ek baar bhi sahi se nahi padhi. Kaera ko Kiara likh raha hai, Siddharth Malhotra masal dalega tujhe uske maal par najar maarne ke evaj me....... Kaera me feelings aayi hai par abhi bhi wo kisi businesswoman ki tarah as an authority type hi soch rahi hai jaise usne Julia se kaha ki I want him( Veer) to claim me. Uski feelings ka mission tab clear hoga jab use dukh prem bichoh gussa nirasha mehsoos hona shuru ho jaayegaa aur kya mehsoos ho raha wo khud pehchaan sakegi.


5) Kisi situation ke hisaab se kab kya dikhana hai ye faisla writer pe hi chhod de. Jiski jaisi ability, kismat, uske paas waise cards. Ab isme kisi ke paas ye card kyun nahi hai, uske paas wo card kyun nahi hai sochega to tu apna adhaar card pan card bhool jayega.



6) Crimson waale updates ko ek baar phir se padh aur apne points ko bhi. Pata chal jaayega tune kya miss kiya hai. Aur Update 167 ke baad waale updates maine padhe nahi hai phir bhi daave ke saath keh sakta hoon ki mistake tujhse hui hai samajhne me. Naruto ka to tune naam bhi nahi suna hoga. Usme chakra ka use dikhaya gaya hai jo sharir me alag alag points par hote hain. Ho sakta hai isi ka use Jaolong ne kiya ho. Naye waale updates detail me padhne de phir teri ye vishtha bhi door kar doonga.



Aur ek baat tere comments aur likes ki sankhya se hi pata chal jaata hai ki ye bas ek ghatiya sa publicity stunt tha. Raat ke 12 baje apni neend kharab karke ye post likhne ka mera koi mann nahi tha par tere jaise chapadganju ko aaina dikhana jaruri tha.Werewolf Bhai maine soch liya tha ki abse aapki story par na hi comment karunga na hi new updates padhunga par koi aira gaira mere 2nd favourite writer ki story pe bematlab ke sawaal uthaaye aur main chup reh jaaun ye to hone se raha. Abhi to ye kateela baans aur door tak aur der tak tere har chhidra ko saaf karega. Just wait and read.

 

[Sky07]

भाई जिस लोडु को system के बारे मे नही पता वो पैसा फूंक कर manga पढ ले अगर फिर भी दिमाग मे गोबर भरा हो तो Solo leveling anime देख ले, यहा क्यों रायता फैला रहे हो भाई। Werewolf लगा पङा है free मे एक बहतरीन story लिखने और हम तक पहुंचने तो भाई दिमाग chill कर और कहानी पढो। writer कि भी life है यार

So be cool and enjoy this marvelous story because my Ava has just came back after a long break.

 

[Werewolf]

AS ALWAYS A GREAT UPDATE BROTHER....
Bhut lamba intezar krna pda iss update ke liye prr aise update ke liye ye itntezar bhi worth it tha...
An update full of action

Kya Karu Bhai. Naukri pesha waala vyakti hu. Naukri se aane ke baad sach kahu toh himmat hi nahi reh jaati kuch karne ki. Udhar dimag khapa ke aane ke baad, agar firse brainstorming karni pade toh socho ki brain ki kya haalat hoti hogi haha.

Par ziddi bhi hu. Jab tak likhta nahi, tab tak chenn nahi aata hai. Samay ki pabandi na hoti toh bahut accha hota. Unfortunately that's not the case.

First of all sorry bro itne late review ke liye...Exams me busy chal rha tha
Iss update me 2 main fight scene dekhne ko mile aur dono hi jabardast the...Hrr scene ko perfectly likha gya hai aur likhne ka tarika to harmesa se hi one of the biggest positive point rhi hai aapki story me

Thanks mate. Koi na... Exams pehle hai. Ye sab toh baad ki baatein hai. Pehle niji jeevan hi aata hai.

Renshu aur New system holder ke fight scene me bhi bhut kuch dekhne ko mila....In dono ke fight dekh kr aisa lga jaise New ne bhut kuch pre planned kr rakha tha renshu ko fasane ke liye...Bhut sare jagaho pr usse bhut tough competition diya Renshu ko....Renshu ka apne aap ko guuse me bhi calm rakhna bhut help kiya iss New ko harane me...Ab ye jo bhi hai iska raaz sayad agle update me khul jaye kyuki dekhne me to yhi lg rha hai ki sayad Renshu ne uspe kabu pa liya hai ya fir kya pta picture abhi baki ho....

Ye dekhna hoga. Abhi humne sirf utna hi dekha hai ki lethal blow ke baad unknown system holder zameen par gir dher ho gaya hai. Uske aage agla bhaag hi batayega ki kya hona hai. Aur, ye baat bhi satya hai ki unknown Renshu ke liye jaal bicchaya hua tha. Sab pre plan kar ke use yaha laya tha. But, Renshu bhi Jaan boojh ke uske jaal me gira. Aur, uss se bahar bhi aaya. So props to Renshu.

Erica ne bhi aakhir Veer ko khoj hi liya....Jaisa ki sbne kha tha ye war Erica ko bhut change krne wala hai...Aaj use system aur skills ki dark side ke bare me pta chala jo definitely uske thought process ko effect krega ki chize jitni dikhti hai utni simple nhi hoti....Erica ki system Genie bhi kafi shi lgi mujhe. Uska involvement kafi jyada tha jaise samay samay pr usse badhiya suggestion dena , panic ke time usse calm krna ya fir apne aap mandatory action perform krna for the betterment of Erica...Simple words me mujhe Genie ki personality bhut had tk France ke Pari se similar lgi...Ab ise coincidence khe ya koi hint Pari bhi france me lvl. 8 pr thi aur Genie bhi abhi lvl. 8 ki hai....

Yes. Genesis urf Genie ek samajhdar system hai. Aur, Erica ke prati caring bhi. France ki pari se agar compare kare toh ...
France waali Pari actually me aur bhi zyada emotional hai.

Jab se ye war chalu hua hai system lovers ki to chandi hi ho gyi hai...Mtlb itne sare system owner ke full stats , darzano new skills aur cards ki information mtlb kya kuch nhi dekhne ko mila pichle 2 updates me aur ummed hai abhi aage bhi bhut kuch baki hai kyuki aapne kha tha ki fight 4 updates tk jaiegi...Waise mujhe lgta hai ki inti detailing se itni sare skills aur cards ke bare me sochna aur likhna one of the most toughest job hota hoga...Aur itni tough job ko inti khubsuruti se krne ke liye dil se respect....Khaskar ki iss update me bhut new skill aur card dekhne ko mile

Honestly yes... Unke baare me sochna bahut bada task hota hai. Ju jaante hi ho ki kahani apne roots se lag ke chal rahi hai.

Kahi par bhi Aisa scene nahi hai ki ekdum hi alag power mil gayi ho jo reality se itni dur bhaag jaaye ki kahani hi magical ho jaaye.

Invisibility, jaisi koi power nahi hai. Hawa me udne jaisi koi power nahi hai. Aankhon se laser fekne waali koi power nahi hai. Sunane me bhale hi ye powers cool lage par iss kahani ki maang wo nahi hai. Aur, na hi inn powers me utna maza reh jaata hai baad me. Chaahta toh mein bhi Overpowered prowess se sabhi system holders ko bana sakta tha.

But kya maine Aisa Kiya? Nahi na! Nahi kiya isliye kahani itni aage aa paayi. Kahani ki woh maang hi nahi hai. Inhi cheezon ko control me rakhte hue mein ise reality se nazdeek leke chalta hu. Kehne ko toh fantasy hai. Par padhte time mehsoos hoga ki ye sab ho raha hai. Aur, aisa bhi lagega ki haan ye possible ho sakta hai. Akhir system hai. Par wahi agar mein Veer ko hawa me udwa du... Toh ho sakta hai kuch logo ko wo pasand bhi aaye. Par poora maza kirkira ho jayega. Aur, readers ka jawab yahi rahega ki bhai ye kuch zyada ho gaya.

Inhi cheezon ko subtle rakhta hu mein. Powers ho .. par aisi ho ki asliyat ke nazdeek lage... Aur judaav bana rahe. Aur inhi ko sochne me sabse adhik samay lagta hai. Kyuki zayadatar samay overpowered waali powers hi dimag me aati hai.

Jha Veer ke pas ek bhi legendary skill nhi hai whi Jaw Long ke pas 2-2 hai yani ki uska level bhi veer se aage hi hona cahiye...Agar Jaw Long Veer ke hatho marta hai to veer ko bhu faida hone wale hai Jaw Long se
Jaw Long ki Aura Vision skill mujhe kafi interesting lgi....iske apne positive aur negative impact hai...negative ye ki normal life me aap Non-living ko nhi dekh paoge to whi positive ye ki ye skill fight ke time kafi madad kregi kyuki different aura ke different colours ke chalte ab koi aapse chup nhi paiega....Jaw Long jaise aadmi ke liye ye best skill hai kyuki usko to normal life jeena nhi hai

Abhi iss baare me agle bhaag me aur details me pata lagega. Ek cheez readers ne miss kar di hai isko lekar.

Jaw Long ki skill ko lekar. Next update me poora details me samjhaya jaayega.

Aur probability manipulation , ab iske bare me to kya hi khna...ye mera one of the fav card rha hai jbse ye aaya hai... iss fight ke duran bhi isne 3 bar Veer ki jan ko bacha liya hai (special thanks to Crimson)

Top tier cards me se ek hai probability Manipulation. Luck factor ke saath khelta hai ye. Basically, agar Veer ki taraf kuch fek ke hamla kiya gaya toh kaho Veer ka perr usi waqt neeche keechad hone ki wajah se fisal jaaye aur woh Bach jaaye.

Keechad ka waha hona, Veer ka usi waqt uss par perr pad fisalna... It's probability manipulation's work. This is how it works.

Ek aur kafi interesting chiz notice hui ki Jaw Long iss fight ko leke kafi jyada serious hai....Mtlb serious to Renshu bhi hai pr wo bat chit se bhi mamla suljhane ko ready hai pr Jaw Long....Wo to aise sacrifices kr rha hai jaise ye uske jindgi ki aakhri fight ho aur usse jitna hi jitna hai ise at any cost....I mean usne apne dono eyes sacrifice kr diye aur sayad apne tribe ke kuch aadmi ka bhi balidan diya for fresh human blood

Ye baat satya hai ki usne aankhein sacrifice Kari hai aur woh serious bhi hai. Par wo khoon ki aadmiyon ka tha. Iss baare me abhi Raaz Khulna baaki hai. Jo isi arc me khul hi jayega.

Ab Pari ke bare me to kya hi bolu....Personality cahe pari ki koi bhi ho kam aksar pariyo wala hi kiya krti hai....Kya accurate information nikal ke di hai sb correct , aur ye sb to tb jb wo uski bat nhi man rha hai...Ek bar ko agar Mommy bol de tb to khud bahar aakar sbko pel de....Ab dekhte hai last me kaun jit ta hai Veer ya Sugar Mommy Pari

It's actually true.
This Pari is a psycho.... Veer just has to call her mommy and then... She will go beyond his expectations.
Woh kaho kuch Raaz bhi pok de system ke baare me.

Aur as always update ka end bina kisi dhamake ke to hota nhi hai...Pr aaj ke update me to sidhe bomb ko wapas lete aaye : ....Mtlb yha pr Ava ko kisi ne bilkul bhi expect nhi kiya hoga...Kya entry mari Ava ne...Wo aayi , jaw long ko peli , veer ko indirectly apna pyar btaya aur fir jaw long ko pelne aage badh gyi...idhar se Erica bhi aage badh chuki aur Ava bhi , yani agle update me hme jaw long 2 beauties se bhidte dikhega??....Yani ab Jaw Long V/S 3 System owner dekhne ko milne wala hai...Sunne me bhale aasan lge pr I am sure ki abhi fight me bhut kuch hone wala hai...Afterall its Werewolf story , to chize itni simple kaise ho skti hai

Yes. Jaw Long ke arsenal me abhi bhi kuch cheezein baaki hai. Hum dekhenge ki kaise ye fight aur interesting hoti hai. Akhir aur kya woh chhipa ke rakha hai. Bas zyada lamba nahi hai ab. Mushqil se ek do updates me hi ye fight khatam hai. Aur uske baad ek do updates aur honge shayad tak jo arc ke closure ke liye honge aur kuch Raaz khol jaayenge par saath hi Jaye sawaal khade kar jayenge.

Ab ek guess hai Ava se related jo mai kr pa rha hu...Shi ya galat ye to nhi pta pr mujhe lgta hai Ava aur Gorofano ek dusre ko jante hai aur Ava Veer ki information Gorofano ke through hi leti hogi....Yad hai Gorofano aksar Veer ke sath conversation ke bich kuch kuch kha krti thi like 'She was right about you' krke....to yha pr wo jis She ki bat krti thi wo sayad Ava hi ho....ab kitna shi hu mai ye to agle update me hi pta lgegi

Ye bhi isi arc me pata lag jayega hume Kya ju ki theory sahi tha ya fir alag. Nazdeek hai ab sab kuch. Bas thoda sabr aur rakhna hoga.

Thanks again bhai story ke sbse lmbe update ke liye

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Thanks a lot brother iss pyaare aur lambe revo ke liye. Aise hi saath bane rehne ka. Thoda late zaroor ho jaata hu replies dene me par deta zaroor hu mein. Toh keep supporting.
Agla update jald hi...!