Thriller ATMAKAMI....Mindfuck Thriller(Completed)

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[Gaurav1969]

Such an exceptional mind blowing novel which i got .yugpurush bro the ending where arman knew about death of eesha infront of himself by daddu brings rush of emotions into eyes and face . Koi kaisa feel kar skta hai jab use pata chale ki puri story jiske around ghoom rahi hai uski death bhi aisi hogi .the consciousness shift in multiverse was an extraordinary part that confused the most .from the starting 4.0 was willing to make 3.0 or 2.0 die for this he did everything at last when the most important part of arman's life that's eesha goes for forever arman has no willing to live so he surrendered and his past memories were all erased except angelina and nayi consciousness ke sath naye universe mein jaisi life wo ab tak jeena chahta tha wo use mil bhi gayi yani decent life and Angelina .
Story's starting to its end was completely unimaginable except for the man Yugpurush himself . Ending was beautiful but feeling sad for Eesha how cute she was and how terrible she goes later on after 8th semester .
Thank you so much for this novel .
Now i am sad for why this novel ends here.

 

[Yug Purush]

Such an exceptional mind blowing novel which i got .yugpurush bro the ending where arman knew about death of eesha infront of himself by daddu brings rush of emotions into eyes and face . Koi kaisa feel kar skta hai jab use pata chale ki puri story jiske around ghoom rahi hai uski death bhi aisi hogi .the consciousness shift in multiverse was an extraordinary part that confused the most .from the starting 4.0 was willing to make 3.0 or 2.0 die for this he did everything at last when the most important part of arman's life that's eesha goes for forever arman has no willing to live so he surrendered and his past memories were all erased except angelina and nayi consciousness ke sath naye universe mein jaisi life wo ab tak jeena chahta tha wo use mil bhi gayi yani decent life and Angelina .
Story's starting to its end was completely unimaginable except for the man Yugpurush himself . Ending was beautiful but feeling sad for Eesha how cute she was and how terrible she goes later on after 8th semester .
Thank you so much for this novel .
Now i am sad for why this novel ends here.

Thanx for your kind words...

 

[Gaurav1969]

Thanx for your kind words...

Sir i just want to know what were your thoughts when you are writing such death to Eesha .jis tarah arman ki imagination realest than the reality itself hoti hai waisi hi kuch meri bhi imagination mein Eesha ke character ko draw kiya tha maine 8th semester ke starting mein par last mein jaisi uski death ko explain kiya , dil chaknachoor ho gya abhi tak sad feel kar raha hu ki Eesha ko aisi death nahi milni chahiye thi use to arman ke sath hona chahiye tha .par har ending humare hisab ki ho aisa kabhi kabhi hi hota hai .
Could you please suggest more of your bangers story

 

[Yug Purush]

Sir i just want to know what were your thoughts when you are writing such death to Eesha .jis tarah arman ki imagination realest than the reality itself hoti hai waisi hi kuch meri bhi imagination mein Eesha ke character ko draw kiya tha maine 8th semester ke starting mein par last mein jaisi uski death ko explain kiya , dil chaknachoor ho gya abhi tak sad feel kar raha hu ki Eesha ko aisi death nahi milni chahiye thi use to arman ke sath hona chahiye tha .par har ending humare hisab ki ho aisa kabhi kabhi hi hota hai .
Could you please suggest more of your bangers story

Esha ki ending jaise hee dimag me aayi thi maine laptop fek diya tha.. Aur 5-10 min tak dimag sann tha ekdum.. Par wo bahut hee shocked krne wala moment tha aur Armwn ki ending ko justify krta tha to maine story me daal diya.. Baki maine kuch aur stories likhi hai.. Jise padh sakte ho.. Try with short stories.. Especially.. A Loner, a space theme based sci fi romance.. You can find it here..

Thriller - Pdf of All the stories written by....

Three Girls of My Life...( Running):yes2: (A Story of Life)समुन्दर का शिकारी : सम्राट मार्टिन की सल्तनत ((LINK IS IN 2ND POST :yo: ))~A LONER ~~ PDF Uploaded (USC 2021 WiNNER :cool:)

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[Gaurav1969]

Esha ki ending jaise hee dimag me aayi thi maine laptop fek diya tha.. Aur 5-10 min tak dimag sann tha ekdum.. Par wo bahut hee shocked krne wala moment tha aur Armwn ki ending ko justify krta tha to maine story me daal diya.. Baki maine kuch aur stories likhi hai.. Jise padh sakte ho.. Try with short stories.. Especially.. A Loner, a space theme based sci fi romance.. You can find it here..

Thriller - Pdf of All the stories written by....

Three Girls of My Life...( Running):yes2: (A Story of Life)समुन्दर का शिकारी : सम्राट मार्टिन की सल्तनत ((LINK IS IN 2ND POST :yo: ))~A LONER ~~ PDF Uploaded (USC 2021 WiNNER :cool:)

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Oh ohhk. I have started your novel Shivam the incomplete intention
After its completion i will surely read all your stories

 

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[sex_shweta]

Atmakami to download hi nahi ho rahi bhai...ek baar phir se pdf upload kar na...plzzzzz