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Fantasy Aryan: Kaalivan Ka Uday

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Bahot behtareen shaandar update
Aryan ki mehnat rang layi Jo kalivan ke Liye bahot achchi BAAT h
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Ab waha par kheti Badi ho Shakti h
Idhar dekhte h Laksh or Raghav ka baap or Bhai kia sochte h or kia woh log Aryan ke offer ko accept karate h
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Chapter 8: Faisla Aur Kaalivan Sena






Yeh bolkar Aryan Rathore kamre se nikal gaya aur Anjali ke ghar ki taraf chal diya, jo Kala Tara Academy se sirf 10 minute ki doori par tha. Uske saath uske do guards the.



Jab Aryan ja raha tha, principal Shyam Gill ne Laksh aur Raghav ke parivaar walon ko samjhane ki koshish ki ki Aryan ka offer na maanein.



“Raman, Gautam, faisla aapka hai. Humara Gill khandaan kabhi kisi ko force nahi karta apne saath judne ke liye. Par sach bolun toh, mujhe nahi lagta ki yeh chhokra humse behtar kuch de sakta hai.



Agar iske paas itni daulat hai ki Black-grade cultivation technique de sake, toh yeh yahan kya kar raha hai?” Shyam ne kaha, lekin uski awaaz mein gussa jhalak raha tha.



“Main is ladke ke past ke baare mein thoda jaanta hoon. Uska baap Arjun ek Spiritual King tha, par woh Rajputana Rajya ke raja ke subordinate the. Aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai, aise subordinates ko sirf do Black-grade techniques milti hain, woh bhi cultivation ke liye nahi hoti,” Shyam ne kaha, apni baat ko weight dene ke liye.



“Matlab, agar iske paas uske baap ki do techniques hain, aur ek cultivation technique bhi Black-grade ki hai, toh yeh ek technique bech kar kisi spiritual energy se rich ilaake mein kyun nahi chala jata? Yahan Kaalivan mein apna time kyun waste kar raha hai?” Shyam ne apna point rakha.



“Upar se, iska yahan koi past nahi hai. Pata nahi yeh kya chahta hai, par mujhe yeh risk bhara lagta hai. Meri salah hai ki is chhokre ki baat mat suno,” Shyam ne apni poori baat kahi, kyunki woh nahi chahta tha ki uska khandaan yeh dono talented ladke kho de.



Gill khandaan Rajputana Rajya ke central hisse mein ek developing khandaan tha, par abhi capital ke bade shahi khandaanon jaisa nahi tha. Unhe talented log chahiye the jo bahar se aayein, taaki khandaan grow kar sake.



Isliye unhone chhote aur gareeb ilaakon mein spiritual academies ke saath partnership shuru ki thi, talented logon ko apne saath jodne ke liye. Par agar koi apna mann badal le aur investment wapas kar de, toh woh force nahi karte—lekin yeh tab tak valid tha jab tak koi unke khandaan mein officially join na kare aur techniques na le le.



Kuch minute aur baat karne ke baad, Raman aur Gautam wahan se nikal gaye. Dono mein se Gautam abhi bhi Aryan ke offer ke baare mein curious tha, par Raman poora convinced ho chuka tha ki Kaalivan mein rukna bekar hai. Woh Aryan ki baatein sunna bhi nahi chahta tha.







Aryan aur uske do guards kuch minute chal kar ek chhote se ghar ke saamne pahunch gaye. Ghar ek manzil ka tha, poora neela rang mein ranga hua, sadak ki taraf ek hi khidki thi. Par ghar kaafi saaf-suthra tha, lagta tha jaise ghar ke log isse achhe se maintain karte hain, apni gareebi ke bawajood.



Aryan ne darwaze par knock kiya.

Pa! Pa! Pa!



Ek 10 saal ki ladki ne darwaza khola, jiske kaale baal ek ponytail mein bandhe the. Usne ek sadharan si lehenga-choli pehni thi. Usne chillakar kaha, “Amma, koi aaya hai!”



Thodi der mein ek adhed umar ki aurat bhaagte hue darwaze par aayi. Woh kaafi sundar thi, uska jism well-developed tha, kaale baal, aur aankhon mein ek narmi thi. Usne ek purani par saaf saree pehni thi. Usne poocha, “Kaun hain aap? Kya kaam hai?”



Aryan ne muskurate hue jawab diya, “Namaste, Savitri ji. Main hoon Aryan Rathore. Main yahan aapki beti Anjali ke future ke baare mein baat karne aaya hoon. Meera ne pehle iske baare mein bataya hoga.”



“Oh! Toh aap hain chhote sahab Aryan. Andar aaiye na. Mere pati kamre mein hain, hum wahan baat kar sakte hain,” Savitri ne muskurate hue kaha.



Andar jaake, Aryan ki mulakaat Savitri ke pati aur Anjali ke baap, Pratap Singh, se hui. Woh ek lamba aadmi tha, 40s mein lagta tha, aur uska sar bilkul ganja tha. Usne ek sadharan kurta-dhoti pehna tha.



Thodi der baad unhone asli baat shuru ki.

Pratap Singh ne poocha, “Toh, chhote sahab, main apni beti ka future yahan kyun risk karun?”



Aryan ne apne saare cards table par rakh diye.



“Pehle main yahan aata, toh yeh kehna bewakoofi hoti ki aap kisi behtar jagah na jayein. Par ab baat alag hai. Maine Kaalivan ki zameen ko khetibadi ke liye theek kar diya hai—ek mahine se bhi kam waqt mein aap apni aankhon se yeh dekh lenge, jab paudhe bade ho jayenge aur shahar ke har koi yeh change notice karega. Aur 10 saal mein Kaalivan ki spiritual energy bhi badhne lag jaye gi,” Aryan ne confidence ke saath kaha.



“Matlab, maine is ilaake ke do sabse bade problems solve kar diye hain. Ab yeh ilaaka develop hone mein bass waqt hi lagna hai,” usne apni baat aage badhayi.



“Lekin yeh main point nahi hai. Agar aapki beti kisi shahi khandaan mein jaati hai, toh woh unki subordinate ban jayegi aur use resources milega. Shayad aapko nahi pata, lekin mere baap Arjun Rajputana Rajya ke raja ke subordinate the—yeh is ilaake ka sabse developed khandaan hai.”



“Par unke yahan, mere baap jaise subordinates ko zyada se zyada do Black-grade techniques milti thi, woh bhi cultivation ke liye nahi hoti. Yeh isliye kiya jata hai taaki khandaan ke asli members ki cultivation speed zyada rahe. Aur yeh techniques bhi saalon ki service ke baad milti thi,” Aryan ne samjhaaya.



“Saath hi, unhe cultivation stage ke hisab se salary milti thi—Body Foundation stage par 20 low-grade crystals, aur Spiritual King par 10 medium-grade crystals har mahine. Aur parivaar walon ko kuch nahi milta,” usne kaha, uski awaaz mein ek seriousness thi.



Aryan ne Pratap Singh aur Savitri ki taraf dekha aur kaha, “Main ek Black-grade cultivation technique dunga, jo specially cultivation ke liye hai, jaise hi Anjali 10 saal ki ho jayegi aur cultivate shuru karegi. Main yeh bhi guarantee deta hoon ki usse jo bhi techniques milengi, woh kam se kam Black-grade hongi. Aur agar usne achha kaam kiya, toh shayad usse higher-grade techniques bhi mil sakein.”



“Main usse 50 low-grade crystals se lekar 50 medium-grade crystals tak har mahine dunga, agar woh Spiritual King stage tak pahunchti hai, ya usse bhi zyada, uske cultivation stage ke hisab se,” Aryan ne apna offer rakha.



“Aur aap dono ke liye bhi future mein madad ho sakti hai. Anjali ke performance ke hisab se, main aap dono ko apni zindagi mein level 69 tak pahunchane mein madad kar sakta hoon.



Par usse aage nahi, kyunki Blue talent wale log special tareekon se bhi zyada se zyada itna hi level tak ja sakte hain,” Aryan ne apni baat khatam ki.



Is duniya mein, Blue talent ka matlab tha ki agar waqt ho, toh level 29 tak pahunchna pakka tha. Uske baad, agle stage par jaane ke 50% se zyada chances hote the. Stages ke andar koi bottleneck nahi hota, toh koi bhi apne stage ke peak tak pahunch sakta tha agar cultivate karta raha. Par 5th stage tak pahunchne ke chances 20% se kam hote the, bina special pills ya medicines ke. Uske aage special resources ki zarurat padti thi. White, Blue, Black, Silver, aur Golden talent wale log special items ke saath respectively 5th, 7th, 9th, aur 11th stage tak pahunch sakte the.



Yeh sab bolkar, Aryan ne Anjali ke maa-baap ke jawab ka intezaar kiya.



“Yeh… Kya aap sach mein yeh sab kar sakte hain? Mujhe toh lagta hai Rajputana ke Maharaja bhi aisa waada nahi kar sakte!” Pratap Singh ne hairani se kaha, uska chehra ekdum shocked tha.



Aryan ne apni spatial ring se ek silver scroll nikala—yeh ek Silver-grade attack technique thi.



Yeh dekhkar Pratap Singh ekdum dang reh gaya. Yeh ladka aisi legendary technique aise nikal sakta hai, jaise koi sadharan cheez ho! Pratap Singh ne kabhi itni high-grade technique nahi dekhi thi, par is duniya mein koi bhi technique ka grade ek baar dekhkar pata kar sakta tha, kyunki techniques mein ek spirituality hoti thi.



Scroll wapas lete hue, Pratap Singh aur uska parivaar poora convinced ho gaya ki yeh ladka jo waada kar raha hai, woh sach mein kar sakta hai. Thodi der baat karne ke baad, unhone Anjali ko Aryan ki sena mein join karne ke liye haan kar di.



Aryan ne unhe kaha ki Anjali ko haveli mein le aayein jaise hi woh 10 saal ki ho jati hai—jo agle kuch hafton mein hone wala tha. Uske baad, Aryan alvida bolkar wapas haveli chala gaya.







Ek poora hafta guzar gaya. In dinon mein Aryan ne khoob mehnat ki aur level 8 tak pahunch gaya. Is waqt mein, 3 hectare zameen poori tarah taiyaar ho gayi thi, aur crops bhi ugne lage the.



Aaj Aryan ke paas Gautam aaya—Laksh ka bada bhai. Gautam ko Aryan ka poora offer jaanne ki bahut curiosity thi, aur agar offer achha hua, toh Laksh bhi Aryan ki sena mein join kar sakta tha.



Gautam ne ek sadharan kurta-dhoti pehna tha, par uski aankhon mein ek chalaaki thi. Woh haveli ke ek kamre mein Aryan ke saamne baitha tha, aur bola, “Chhote sahab, main aapka offer sunne aaya hoon. Agar yeh sach mein achha hai, toh Laksh aapke saath jud sakta hai.”



Aryan, jiske kaale kurte mein ek raja wala swag tha, ne muskurate hue kaha, “Gautam, offer toh maine Anjali ke parivaar ko bhi diya tha, aur unhone haan kar di. Par tumhare liye ek baar phir bol deta hoon.”



Aryan Rathore ne Gautam ko apne daftar mein muskurate hue welcome kiya. Sach mein, usse pehle se hi ummeed thi ki Gautam aayega uska offer sunne, kyunki woh Shyam Gill ke daftar mein kaafi curious dikh raha tha.



Par Raghav ke baap, Raman, ke aane ki koi ummeed nahi thi. Woh ek jaldi gussa hone wala aadmi tha, jo bade picture ko dekhe bina hi galti kar baithta tha.



Aryan apni kursi par baitha aur Gautam ko ishaara kiya, “Yahan baitho, baat karte hain. Seedha point pe aata hoon—mujhe pata hai tum jaanna chahte ho ki main tumhare bhai Laksh ke liye kya offer kar raha hoon, jo Gill khandaan nahi de sakta. Toh suno…”



Thodi der baat karne ke baad, Aryan ne Gautam ko wahi offer diya jo usne Anjali ke parivaar ko diya tha—Black-grade cultivation technique se lekar salary tak jo Laksh ko milegi. Aryan ne yeh bhi waada kiya ki Laksh aur Gautam ki chhoti behen Aarti ko bhi jab woh 10 saal ki ho jayegi, tab welcome kiya jayega. Saath hi, Gautam ko bhi level 69 tak pahunchane mein madad milegi, jaise Anjali ke maa-baap ko.



Yeh sab sunke Gautam ko bhi yakeen nahi hua, jaise Pratap Singh ko nahi hua tha. Par jab usne Silver-grade technique dekhi, toh uska shak ekdum khatam ho gaya. Aakhir mein dono mein agreement ho gaya, aur Laksh bhi 10 saal ka hote hi haveli mein aayega.



Yeh masla solve karne ke baad, Aryan ne socha ki ab Kaalivan Sena ke liye kuch shuru karna chahiye. Pehle, usne Sukha Nagar ke guards aur apni personal team ko merge karne ka plan banaya.



Iske liye usne har ek ki strength levels record karne ka socha, aur phir ek nayi hierarchy banane ka plan kiya, jo level aur potential ke hisab se hogi.

Aryan ne Pratap aur Devraj ko bulaya taaki yeh kaam shuru ho sake.



“Tum dono ko pata hai ki main Kaalivan Sena shuru karna chahta hoon. Toh pehle yeh jaanna hai ki humari strength kya hai. Devraj chacha, meri personal guards ke levels kya hain?” Aryan ne seedha sawal kiya, bina ghumaaye.



Devraj ne jawab diya, “10 guards mein se 1 level 33 par hai, 1 level 34 par, 3 level 35 par, 2 level 36 par, 1 level 37 par, aur 2 level 38 par. Sab ke paas Blue talent hai.”



“Aur tumhare log, Pratap?” Aryan ne Pratap ki taraf dekha, jo ek leather kurta-dhoti mein tha. Pratap ne jawab diya, “Mere saath 30 aadmi hain, jismein 9 level 27 par hain, 6 level 28 par, 5 level 29 par, 3 level 31 par, 4 level 32 par, 1 level 33 par, 1 level 34 par, aur 1 level 35 par. Sab ke paas Blue talent hai.”



[ Dono Partap mai confuse mat ho jana dono alag alag hai. Apko toh pata hi hai ek naam ke bhut sare viaykti ho sakte hai.]



“Hmm, shuruaat ke liye bura nahi hai,” Aryan ne socha. Uske baad, Aryan ne faisla kiya ki woh 6 mahine mein sena officially set karega. Hierarchy is tarah hogi:



• Student: Level 0-9

• Recruit: Level 10-19

• Soldier: Level 20-29

• Corporal: Level 30-39

• Sergeant: Level 40-49

• Lieutenant: Level 50-59

• Captain: Level 60-69

• Major: Level 70-79

• Colonel: Level 80-89

• General: Level 90-99



Har position ke liye salary level ke hisab se hogi—ek Student ko 50 low-grade spiritual crystals milenge, aur ek General ko 800 high-grade crystals. Saath hi, har position se agle rank tak jaane ke liye minimum service time bhi hoga—Recruit banne ke liye 6 mahine, aur Colonel se General banne ke liye 25 saal.



Yeh hierarchy sunke Devraj aur Pratap ke chehre ekdum safed pad gaye. Yeh ladka already demigods (level 90-99) ke baare mein soch raha tha, jabki unke liye Spiritual Emperors (level 70-79) bhi ek sapna tha.



Par Aryan ko unke reaction ki parwah nahi thi. Yeh toh waqt ki baat thi. 30 saal mein, jab spiritual root poori tarah theek ho jayega aur Kaalivan mein spiritual energy ki density badh jayegi, tab yahan Spiritual Emperors zaroor honge.

“Khair, 6 mahine mein yeh sab changes hone chahiye. Main ek headquarters bhi banwana chahta hoon Kaalivan Sena ke liye. Jab current crop se pehla profit aayega, tab yeh kaam shuru kar dena hai,” Aryan ne kaha.



“Ek saal se zyada nahi lagna chahiye, aur tab tak hum apni sena ke members ki tadaad badha denge. Abhi ke members ke liye, hum low-level spiritual pills aur medicines mein invest karenge, taaki unki strength badhe,” usne apna plan bataya.



Spiritual pills woh compounds hote the jo alag-alag cheezon—jaise medicines, beasts ka khoon, haddiyan—ko mix karke banaye jaate the. Yeh pills ingredients ki spirituality ko preserve karte the, aur kabhi-kabhi badha bhi dete the. Inka use diseases theek karne se lekar cultivation badhane tak hota tha. Inhe alchemists banate the, jo cultivators hote the aur apni techniques ko is kaam ke liye specialize karte the, jaise spiritual blacksmiths aur array masters apne kaam ke liye karte hain.



Yeh sunke Pratap ekdum khush ho gaya. Kaalivan ki zindagi mein ek bada badlav aane wala tha, aur woh iska hissa banne ke liye excited tha.



Aryan ne Devraj ki taraf dekha, “Devraj chacha, alchemists ke baare mein bhi jankari dhoondhna mat bhoolna. Humein ache se taiyaari karni hai taaki sab kuch best tareeke se ho.”



Aryan khud bhi kaafi khush tha. Woh 3 hafte se bhi kam waqt pehle ‘woke up’ hua tha, par itna kuch already kar chuka tha.



Devraj ne jawab diya, “Hmm, agle kuch dinon mein main array masters aur blacksmiths ke baare mein basic jankari le aaunga. Alchemists ki bhi jaldi se laane ki koshish karunga.”



Thodi aur baat karne ke baad, Devraj aur Pratap chale gaye, aur Aryan apne daftar mein akela reh gaya. Thodi der baad Meera andar aayi.



“Chhote sahab, maine corn, rice, aur wheat ka average consumption data nikal liya hai,” Meera ne muskurate hue kaha. Usne ek tight maroon lehenga-choli pehni thi, jo uske curves ko ekdum highlight kar rahi thi. Uske baal khule the, aur ek chhoti si bindi uske maathe par thi.



“Oh! Aur kya nikla?” Aryan ne poocha, uski nazar Meera ke chehre par thi.

“Pichhle saal, in crops ka consumption tha—corn 300 tons, rice 150 tons, aur wheat 200 tons har mahine. 3 hectare jo humne taiyaar kiye hain, uske hisab se hum local market ki sirf 2% demand poori kar payenge abhi,” Meera ne bataya.



“Maine yeh bhi dhoondh liya ki shahar mein spiritual fruits ki bhi kaafi demand hai. Toh yeh ek aur plantation ho sakti hai jo future mein profit de,” usne ek naughty smile ke saath kaha, jaise Aryan ko impress karna chahti ho.



“Hmm, achha kaam kiya Meera,” Aryan ne satisfaction ke saath kaha, aur Meera ek playful wink dete hue nikal gayi, apne hips ko sway karte hue.







Din ke kaam khatam karne ke baad, Aryan Antriksh Rajya mein cultivate karne chala gaya. Woh level 9 ke kareeb tha, aur zyada se zyada ek hafte mein woh level 10—Transition stage—tak pahunch jayega!



Transition stage par kuch important cheezein hoti hain. Pehla, cultivator ke jism mein ek bada change aata hai—saari cells qualitatively change hoti hain, impurities nikalti hain, aur average vitality badh jati hai.



Jism mein ek energy bhi aati hai, jo us stage ke initial level ki spiritual energy ka 10% hoti hai. Matlab, jab koi Spiritual King banta hai, uska jism poora transform ho jata hai—agar uski cultivation cripple bhi ho jaye, toh sirf jism ki taakat se woh ek level 35 cultivator ko hara sakta hai, jo apni poori cultivation use kar raha ho.



Iska yeh bhi matlab tha ki agar kisi ki cultivation cripple ho jaye, toh bhi uski vitality waisi hi rahegi, kyunki yeh jism se related hoti hai. Par yeh change sirf Spiritual Beginner stage se shuru hota hai, kyunki usse pehle spiritual energy kaafi kam hoti hai. Body Foundation se Transition stage tak, sirf vitality badhti hai.



Aur Transition stage par Aryan ek aur technique bhi add kar sakta tha.







Idhar Sukha Nagar ke ek hotel mein, Roshni apne porch par bethichai pee rahi thi. Roshni ek hafte se zyada waqt se yahan thi, yeh dekhne ke liye ki kya naye raja ne sach mein Kaalivan ko ‘theek’ kar diya hai.



Pichhle kuch dinon mein usne apne guard Eduard ko bheja tha us jagah par, jahan 200 log kaam kar rahe the, yeh dekhne ke liye ki koi change hua ya nahi.



Thodi der baad, Eduard wapas aaya, uske chehre par ek badi smile thi. Usne leather ka kurta-dhoti pehna tha. Usne kaha, “Roshni ji, aapki baat phir se sahi nikli. Kaalivan sach mein ‘theek’ ho gaya hai—at least us jagah par jahan woh kisaan kaam kar rahe hain, purana problem khatam ho gaya hai. Woh zameen ab khetibadi ke liye bilkul taiyaar lagti hai, jaise maine aur jagahon par dekha hai.”



“Hmph, jaise maine socha tha. Ab humein is Aryan se milne ki koshish karni chahiye. Sukha Nagar ko kaafi cheezon ki zarurat hai jo Stone Island bech sakta hai,” Roshni ne muskurate hue kaha, jaise usse koi khazana mil gaya ho.



Uske baad, usne hotel ke ek naukar se kaha ki Aryan ke saath ek meeting set kare, taaki woh business kar sake. Agar woh ab Kaalivan ko support kar leti hai, toh future mein is jagah par uski ek important position ho sakti hai.



To be continued…….
 

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