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BHAI PLEASE UPDATE THIS THREAD
 
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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..
 

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Hello Everyone :hello:
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.

Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.

Regards :Xforum Staff.

 

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Ayega is pe bhi aayega revised karta hoon sabkuch jald
 

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Update 2

Ek Pariwar hain Delhi Ranvanshi Pariwar jiske mukhiya hain Raghu (umar 47) aur unki dharmpatni Kavita(umar 45) unki kul 3 santan hain.

pahli putri nam hain Sunaina (Umar 23), dusari putri (umar 21) aur tisra putr (umar 20).

Raghu apna ghar bar sabkuch chhod chuke hain kyo wo kahani me aage pta chalega.

Kavita ek pyari grihani, pati ki har bat ek adesh hain inke liye aur ye use manti hain. Kahate hain inka prem vivah hua tha aur yehi shayad mukhy karan hain dono ka apne apne gharon muh modane ka. Apne pariwar ko bahut prem karti hain. Khud ko bhi mention kiya hua hain lagta nhi hain ki 45 ki hain, jab apne betiyon ke sath khadi hoti hain unki badi bahan lagati hain. 34D 32 36 ka figur hain shayad yehi hain jisane Raghu ko inka deewana bna diya.

Sunaina apne maa ki corban copy uska bhi manana hain ek pariwar ko sahi se chalana ho to ek hath me bagdor do aur baki use supoort karo MBA final year me hain MBA ke bad apne papa ke sath milkar kam karna chahati hain. Puri gherulu riti riwajon ko manane wali, iski jan iske chhote bhai bahan me basati hain.

Naina apne bahan ulat thodi morden magar is bhi pariwar aur maryada ki value pta hain shayad ye Kavita aur Raghu ke gun hain jo inke tino bachchhon me aaya hain
. Naina ka dil hightech duniya me lagta hain isliye usane usi stream ko chuna. Hardware and software duniya se ise pyar hain. Thodi akhad hain karate expret do char ko nipta sakti hain. Badi bahan se pyar hain magar nhi patata to chhote bhai. Kisi na kisi bat ladai dono ki hoti rahati hain.

Raghav kahate hain ghar me pandit aur yodhya ek sath paida ho gaya hain bachpan se pahleani, judo aur dharm granthon ke sath jaise jivan jine ke liye paida hua. Kai bhasaye janta hain har dharmbgranth ka adhyan hain aur hindi se graduation kar rha hain. Aage bahut kuch iske bare me pta chalega.

ye pariwar kya kyu hain sab aage pta chalega abhi ham story pe aate hain.

Simran se bat karne ke bad Raghav nind me chala gaya.

Delhi se dur Lucknow ke kisi college ke girl hostel me. 3 ladkiya baithi huyi thi jinhe L1, L2 aur L3 likhuga.

L1: loji tum logon ke diye task ko maine pura kar diya.

L2: Magar tera naam Simar hain tune apna galat naam kyo bataya.
L1 aka Simar: To kya apna asli nam bta deti pagal, Dekh Priya manti hoon phone pe bat karte samay banda shi lga magar ye matlab to nhi hain ki main pahli bar me apna asli nam use bta doon. Tujhe to pra hain aajkal FB aur Insta pe khojna kitna asan hain isliye maine apna real name nhi bataya.

L3 jo kab se in dono ki bat sun rhi thi : Didi fir aapne ye kyo kaha. Ki dono ek hi shahar ke hain kya apko pta tha wo Lucknow se hain?

Simar: na meri lado maine apne is new number ke last digit ko change karte huye call kiya tha isliye mujhe lga shayad wo bhi isi shahar se ho isliye maine kahan ki ham ek hi shahar se hain vaise shayad ye bat maine nhi usane boli thi.



Priya: Nhi Simar Riya sahi kah rhi hain ye bat tune boli thi.

Simar: boli hogi magar kya karna hain ye kahon itane calls me jisne phone uthaya wo chahe jaisa banda ho phone pe to shi nikla ye Riya ki bachchi mujhe har bar shart jeet kar kahin na kahin fasa deti hain.

Riya: Didi kuch bhi bola aapne usake nam ke sath match karta hua bollywood ki hit lover name chuna DDLJ ke Raj ki Simran.

Simar: yaar maine ispe dhya hi nhi diya ghar me sab Simi bulate hain to usi ko Simran kar diya.

Riya: koi na ja Simran ji le apni jindagi.

YE bolkar Riya khilkhilakar hasane lagi aur uske Simar aur Priya bhi.

Priya: jokes part lekin Simar bta kya tu is Raj se aage bat karegi, kyoki tu ladko se koshi dur rahati hain tera kahena hain koi tujhe tere fild me harayega tab tu usake bare me sochegi.

Simar: dekh yaar baton se banda shi tha aur main ladko se dir nhi rahti mere ladke dost hain bus bf-gf ke chakkaron se dur rahati hoon aur kya galat sochati hoon ki jisko main chahun wo mujhse achchha ho ye sab sochati hain.

Riya: didi apki bat shi hain magar aap ye batao aajkal koun sa ladka Hindi aur sanskrit me expert hota hain aur jo hote hain unka masa allaha bis jaise ghar walon ke pressure pe padhai karne chale aaye ho.

Priya: ha yaar Simar Riya ne bat to shi kahin.

Simar: dekho tum log koi mila to thik warna mom dad to khojage hi usise pyar kar lugi.

inki batein aesi chalti rahi fir thodi der bad sune chali gayi
 
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