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DEVIL MAXIMUM

"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
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DEVIL MAXIMUM

"सर्वेभ्यः सर्वभावेभ्यः सर्वात्मना नमः।"
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Thanks you so much Devil bhai is story ko aage badhane ke liye❤️, ye story apne aap mai bahut khas h isilie log ismai uljh gaye khair aap mast likh rahe ho aur ab lag raha h aap khud bhi maje le rhe ho ise likhne mai pura ghuma rhe ho suspense mai waise sandya wakai baklol hi h 😂

Is story ka main point is story ka emotional angle h between sandya and abhay please us par thoda aur focus kare 🙏🏻
Ab use one by one ahsas hone chahiye usne kya khoya kya galat kiya h.
Malti ka character clean h i think bs Frusted h.

Aapki lekhni kaafi saral h isilye aachi lagti h
Keep writing hope to see more such content from your end.
Aapko bahut time se dekh raha hu kai stories par socha ab aapse jud hi jate hai 👍🏻

Waiting for next update hope is baar bhi jald aayega
Thank you sooo much despicable
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Waise ek bat aapne bilkul such bolo ki is story ko likhne me mujhe such me maja aa raha hai bahut
.
Lekin iske elava ek bat or bhi such hai ki maine kbhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki is story ko likhoga Q ki mere jaise new writer ke leye ye story apne aap me challenge hai
.
Lekin is asli credit kisi or ko jata hai Q ki mai Pani me tairnaa nahi janta lekin kisi ne mujhe kaha
.
Tu kood mai ho na sath me kuch nahi hoga tere ko
.
Bus kood Gaya nadi me ab taair Raha hoo mje se 😂😂😂😂
.
Name lena chahta ho uska lekin fir sunayga baate mujhe 😂😂😂
 

despicable

त्वयि मे'नन्या विश्वरूपा
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Thank you sooo much despicable
.
Waise ek bat aapne bilkul such bolo ki is story ko likhne me mujhe such me maja aa raha hai bahut
.
Lekin iske elava ek bat or bhi such hai ki maine kbhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki is story ko likhoga Q ki mere jaise new writer ke leye ye story apne aap me challenge hai
.
Lekin is asli credit kisi or ko jata hai Q ki mai Pani me tairnaa nahi janta lekin kisi ne mujhe kaha
.
Tu kood mai ho na sath me kuch nahi hoga tere ko
.
Bus kood Gaya nadi me ab taair Raha hoo mje se 😂😂😂😂
.
Name lena chahta ho uska lekin fir sunayga baate mujhe 😂😂😂
Wo aapne jaisi sandhya raman ka conversation dikhya lga maje le rhe ho likhne mai. Wakai mai ye story bahut hi awesome h maine sare version padhe h pahle ke bali logo ne jo likhe hai. Aap aacha kar rhe ho lage raho
Aapko meri baat aachi lage to emotional content badhiyega whi is story ko alag level par lekar jayegi
Abhi ek writer ne Khamoshiya karke ek aur version likhne ka try kiya aur ek hi update likha h par wo update apne aap mai winner h aap dekhiyega use.

Aapke dost hi nahi hum sb bhi aapke sath h aap badhe chalo aise hi

Best of luck dear
 
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Wo aapne jaisi sandhya raman ka conversation dikhya lga maje le rhe ho likhne mai. Wakai mai ye story bahut hi awesome h maine sare version padhe h pahle ke bali logo ne jo likhe hai. Aap aacha kar rhe ho lage raho
Aapko meri baat aachi lage to emotional content badhiyega whi is story ko alag level par lekar jayegi
Abhi ek writer ne Khamoshiya karke ek aur version likhne ka try kiya aur ek hi update likha h par wo update apne aap mai winner h aap dekhiyega use.

Aapke dost hi nahi hum sb bhi aapke sath h aap badhe chalo aise hi

Best of luck dear
Thank you sooo much sir
 

Yasasvi3

😈Devil queen 👑
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Oohhhooo kya bat hai Yasasvi3 lagta hai latest update aapko kuch khass pasand nahi aaya kuch kmi reh gayee kya agar eesa hai to batao aapko isme kya acha nhi lga ya samj me nahi aaya
Nahi asi koi baat nahi h update was awesome ......😔meri energy kafi low thi... update ka pta bhi nahi tha ...to bas inhi wajaho se... soory aapko ajib laga ho to
 

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