Waise writer shahab pichle bar hamare baaton ka bura maan gyee thee....aur mujhe ye bhi ptaa hai ke mujhe dusron ke story ko criticise kerne ka koye hak nhi hai ....
Per me ek baat bolunga ...writer sahab ko is story me abay aur sandhya ka emotional sence jyada se jyada dalna chahye...fir ye story kamal ke ben jayege ...aur to aur fir kisi ko sikayet bhi nhi hogee....
Jo original story thee uska main focus he abhay aur sandhya per thaa ...
I hope writer sahab iss bar mujh per gussa nhi honge ...me apka hatter nhi hu ...me buss apke story ko aur batter banane ke ummid rekhne wala ek reder hu ...