All good but writer ji zara dhyan se..do bahene lehenga choli me tih fir achanak ek bahen pink t shirt me aa gayi , page 9 me nisha choti bahen thi aur revati gusse wali badi bahen aur baad mein aake nisha badi bahen ban gayi, ab itna continuity jerk hone se keisa chalega , is liye writer ji zara dhyan se....itni acchi story ki aisi haal na karo