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[Whats in a name]

Awesome update bro

Bro kya story main system bhi hai ya bas supernatural

Bro aap next update ka schedule bata dijiye

Thanks Ak47203 for your continuous support

Nahi System nahi hoga, Supernatural powers hi hongi.

Haa powers use dheere dheere milti jayengi aur abhi usme time hai.

Next update Monday tak deta hu, I haven't started writing yet.

 

[kas1709]

Thanks Ak47203 for your continuous support

Nahi System nahi hoga, Supernatural powers hi hongi.

Haa powers use dheere dheere milti jayengi aur abhi usme time hai.

Next update Monday tak deta hu, I haven't started writing yet.

intezaar rahega....

 

[dhparikh]

Thanks Ak47203 for your continuous support

Nahi System nahi hoga, Supernatural powers hi hongi.

Haa powers use dheere dheere milti jayengi aur abhi usme time hai.

Next update Monday tak deta hu, I haven't started writing yet.

intezaar rahega...

 

[parkas]

Next update Monday tak deta hu, I haven't started writing yet.

Besabari se intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka Whats in a name bhai....

 

[ROHIT RAJ SINGH]

Once again very brilliant updates brother...
Sorry pichle update ka review na de paya, Dono hi updates abhi read kiye aur dono hi upates kafi kamal ke the...

So Abhay and Meera have shifted to Mumbai...Most probably abhi to aisa hi lg rha hai ki Mumbai hi main city hone wali hai iss story ki
Khair Abhay aur Meera Mumbai aa to gye hai pr inko definitely yha kafi challenges face krne pdenge...Khaskr Abhay ko , uss bechare ko to akele bhut sare chizo ko dekhna hai like -
1. Settle in a big city like Mumbai with his sister Meera
2. Apne asli parivar ko khojna
3. Meera ke asli parivar ko khojna
4. And the most difficult , Apne baba Yogesh ka badla lena ( ye dekhne me mja aane wala hai ki aakhir Yogesh ki kya story rhi hai)
Ek bechare akele pr itna bojh...Abhi to super natural power bhi nhi mili hai

By the way bro ek request hai ki hero ko jb bhi super natural power dena tb sari powers agar ho ske to ek sath na de dena....Hero ki power dhire dhire badhti rhegi to shi rhega wrna agar hero ek bar me hi full superior bn gya to wo mja nhi rhega ( For example werewolf ya salty otaku ki story dekh lo jaise usme hero ki power samay aur mehnat ke sath badh rhi)

Abhi story me kewal 4 hi updates hue hai pr fir bhi acche khase negative character aa chuke hai like Ravi, Veera, Madan etc. ....Villain na bolke negative character isliye bol rha hu kyuki mujhe nhi lgta inme se koi main villain bn skta hai , waisi dangerous vibe na aa rhi inme se...Ha , inn sb me se Madan thora khatarnak lga abhi tk jisne bdi calaki se Pinto jo uske khilaf sabit ho skta tha use mar diya ya marwa diya

Aisa feel hota hai ACP Deepika ka role kafi interesting and important hone wala hai story me....Andar se aisi feeling aa rhi hai ki aage story me ye Abhay ko kafi help kre...Khair dekhte hai kya hota hai

BRILLIANT UPDATES...
KEEP WRITING...
WAITING FOR NEXT...

 

[Whats in a name]

Once again very brilliant updates brother...
Sorry pichle update ka review na de paya, Dono hi updates abhi read kiye aur dono hi upates kafi kamal ke the...

Thanks

So Abhay and Meera have shifted to Mumbai...Most probably abhi to aisa hi lg rha hai ki Mumbai hi main city hone wali hai iss story ki
Khair Abhay aur Meera Mumbai aa to gye hai pr inko definitely yha kafi challenges face krne pdenge...Khaskr Abhay ko , uss bechare ko to akele bhut sare chizo ko dekhna hai like -
1. Settle in a big city like Mumbai with his sister Meera
2. Apne asli parivar ko khojna
3. Meera ke asli parivar ko khojna
4. And the most difficult , Apne baba Yogesh ka badla lena ( ye dekhne me mja aane wala hai ki aakhir Yogesh ki kya story rhi hai)
Ek bechare akele pr itna bojh...Abhi to super natural power bhi nhi mili hai

Challenges to hai bahut sare, kuch ka jawab next update me mil jayega.

By the way bro ek request hai ki hero ko jb bhi super natural power dena tb sari powers agar ho ske to ek sath na de dena....Hero ki power dhire dhire badhti rhegi to shi rhega wrna agar hero ek bar me hi full superior bn gya to wo mja nhi rhega ( For example werewolf ya salty otaku ki story dekh lo jaise usme hero ki power samay aur mehnat ke sath badh rhi)

Yes, I'll keep that in mind. Hero ka gradual development hi karne ki koshish hai meri. Dekhte hai kitna kamyab hota hu. Abhi kai phases me story chalegi. Ye to pehla phase hai jo majorly Mumbai and underworld par focus hai. Isme jyada kuch supernatural power nahi ayengi.

Abhi story me kewal 4 hi updates hue hai pr fir bhi acche khase negative character aa chuke hai like Ravi, Veera, Madan etc. ....Villain na bolke negative character isliye bol rha hu kyuki mujhe nhi lgta inme se koi main villain bn skta hai , waisi dangerous vibe na aa rhi inme se...Ha , inn sb me se Madan thora khatarnak lga abhi tk jisne bdi calaki se Pinto jo uske khilaf sabit ho skta tha use mar diya ya marwa diya

Definitely no one of this is final villan vo to abhi bahut durr hai. Abhi gehri nind me hai vo. Jab jagega to sabke pasine chhut jayenge

Aisa feel hota hai ACP Deepika ka role kafi interesting and important hone wala hai story me....Andar se aisi feeling aa rhi hai ki aage story me ye Abhay ko kafi help kre...Khair dekhte hai kya hota hai

Dekhenge ki kaisi rehti hai Deepika aur Abhay ki pehli mulakat. Role to important hai Deepika ka.

BRILLIANT UPDATES...
KEEP WRITING...
WAITING FOR NEXT...

Thanks again for your precious words and appreciation.
Keep supporting
Writing next update started today. Maybe Monday tak aa jayega.

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Yasasvi3]

Update

 

[dhparikh]

intezaar rahega....

 

[Ak47203]

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