wah! kya ek superb kahaani hai yah! ekdom jhakkas aur zabardast writings!Chapter - 15
Main apne kamre mein baitha baar-baar ghadi dekh raha tha. Raat ke 10 bajne wale the, aur Noor abhi tak ghar nahi aayi thi. Maine badi mushkil se jhoot bolkar abbu-ammi ko samjhaya tha ki Noor ko emergency operation ke liye rukna pada. Doctor se baat karne ka bahana bhi main kai baar bana chuka tha. Meri dil ki dhak-dhak tez thi, aur andar se darr laga hua tha ki kahin kuch galat toh nahi ho gaya. Maine us kameene aur Noor ko kai baar phone kiya, lekin dono mein se kisi ne ek bhi call nahi uthayi.
Samay dheere-dheere beet raha tha. Main bas phone ko ghoorta raha, umeed mein ki kisi ka call aaye. Aakhirkaar, kareeb 10:30 baje, mera intezaar khatam hua aur usi kameene ka phone aaya.
Maine jhat se phone uthaya aur apne gusse ko dabate hue chillaya, “Kahan tha, behenchod? Itni der kaise ho gayi?” Mere gusse se wo ghabra gaya aur dheere se bola, “Yaar, thodi si pee li thi...” Uski awaaz ladkhada rahi thi. Main turant samajh gaya ki wo nashe mein hai. Maine apne aap ko sambhalte hue kaha, “Kahan ho tum abhi? Aur Noor kahan hai?” Ispe wo chup raha, kuch nahi bola. Mera gussa aur bhadak gaya. “Saale, bol kahan ho? Chutiya hai kya?” Maine dobara chillaya. Usne phir dheere se kaha, “Arre yaar, OYO mein hain, wahi market wala.” Yeh sunte hi mujhe samajh aa gaya ki wo kis jagah ki baat kar raha hai. “Accha, main aa raha hoon. Room number kya hai?” Maine poocha. Usne dheere se kaha, “201,” aur phone kat gaya.
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Main jaldi se ghar se nikla aur bike nikali. Market ki taraf tezi se chal pada. Dekhte-dekhte main OYO ke kamre number 201 ke saamne khada tha. Maine darwaza khatkhataaya, par andar se koi jawab nahi aaya. Us kameene ko phone lagaya, lekin usne call uthane ke bajaye sidhe darwaza khol diya. Saamne Hira khada tha—bilkul nanga, lund latakta hua, aankhein laal, badan ladkhadate hue. Itna nasha chadha tha ki usse apne nange lund ko chhupane ki bhi sujh nahi thi. Kamre ka manzar toh bilkul tabaahi ka tha—Noor ka burqa zameen par pada tha, uski salwar-kameez idhar-udhar bikheri, aur bra aur chaddi bistar ke ek kone par uljhi hui. Hawa mein cigarette ki gandi si badboo thi, saath mein daaru aur chudai ki mehak. Bistar ke paas ek chhoti table par do gande glass pade the, unmein daaru ke daag sookh rahe the. Ek plate mein adha-khaya chicken chili bikhra tha, jaise kisi ne jaldi mein chhod diya.
Main wahin khada reh gaya, mera dil zor-zor se dhadak raha tha. Hira ne mujhe dekha, lekin uski nasheeli aankhein jaise mujhe pehchan bhi nahi rahi thi. Wo bas ek thandi si hansi ke saath ladkhadaya aur bistar ke paas girte-girte baith gaya. Meri nazar uske lund par gayi—bada, mota, aur abhi bhi thodi si akad ke saath. Phir maine apne chhote se lund ke bare mein socha, aur andar hi andar has pada. Hira ka yeh kameena lund mujhse kahi zyada mardana tha, aur yeh baat mujhe ek tarah se jala rahi thi, par saath hi ek gandi si khushi bhi de rahi thi. Mera yeh cuckpan, yeh gandagi, mujhe ek deewana sa bana raha tha.
Phir meri nazar Noor par padi. Wo bistar par leti thi, nangi, bas ek chadar uske badan ke kuch hisson ko chhupa rahi thi. Uska chehra bilkul shant tha, jaise wo kisi gandi sukoon ke sapne mein doobi ho. Uski saansein sust aur lambi thi, nashe mein madhoshi ka ehsaas chhalk raha tha. Uske bikhre baalon mein Hira ka sookha hua maal saaf dikh raha tha—chipchipa, safed, uske chehre ke ek taraf aur baalon ke kuch laton par sookh chuka tha. Main usse dekhta raha, ek gandi si uttejana aur sharam ke saath. Noor ke hothon par ek halki si muskurahat thi, jaise usne abhi-abhi kisi jannat ka maza chakha ho. Uske gale par laal nishaan, uske kandhon par ungliyon ke daag—sab kuch us chudai ke toofan ka saboot de raha tha jo abhi guzar chuka tha.
Kamre mein sannata tha, bas Hira ki nasheeli siskiyon aur Noor ki sust saanson ki awaaz thi. Bistar ke neeche zameen par kharoch ke nishaan, daaru ki botal ke paas cigarette ke tukde, aur woh adha-khaya chicken chili ka plate—yeh sab us raat ki gandi kahani suna raha tha. Main wahan khada tha, apne gusse, apni gandi bechaini, aur apni khushi ke saath. Yeh meri Noor thi, aur yeh Hira, jo usse mujhse kahi zyada maza de chuka tha. Main uske chehre par, uske baalon par Hira ka sookha hua maal dekhta raha, aur andar hi andar ek gandi si khushi mehsoos kar raha tha. Yeh thi meri kahani—ek aisi kahani jismein main khud apni haar ka deewana ban chuka tha.
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Main Noor ko dekhta raha, aur ek pal ke liye hairaan reh gaya. Yeh wahi Noor thi, jo mahzabi aur deendar thi, jo kabhi daaru ko haath nahi lagati thi. Par ab uske paas pade glass aur uski nasheeli saansein sab kuch suna rahi thi. Maine andar hi andar has diya—meri wajah se wo zina kar rahi thi, aur use pata bhi nahi ki yeh sab meri marzi se ho raha tha. Main Hira ki taraf mudkar bola, “Bhai, Noor ko ghar le jana hai, thodi madad kar de.” Hira ne meri baat suni, aur ek gandi si hansi ke saath mujhe ignore kar diya. Wo sidha bistar par gaya, Noor ke peeche let gaya, aur usse chipak kar spoon karne laga, uska nanga lund uski kamar se takra raha tha. Yeh sab meri aankhon ke saamne ho raha tha. Mera lund ekdum tight ho gaya, aur main khud ko rok nahi paya. Maine apni pant kholi aur wahin khade-khade muth marna shuru kar diya, meri aankhein Noor aur Hira par tiki hui thi. Thodi der mein main itni zor se jhada ki ek cheekh si nikal gayi, aur main girte-girte sambhala. Dil zor-zor se dhadak raha tha, aankhon ke saamne andhera sa chha gaya. Phir maine apne kapde theek kiye, un dono ko wahi chhod diya, aur ghar wapas aa gaya. Ghar pahunchte hi main bistar par gira aur itni gehri neend soya jaise koi tension hi nahi thi. Subah jab aankh khuli, Noor mere bagal mein leti thi, uska sar pakadte hue, chehra dard se bhara hua.
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Noor bistar par leti thi, uska sar itni zor se dard kar raha tha ki wo aankhein band karke bas haath se sir pakde hue thi. Uska chehra sookha hua tha, nashe ka hangover saaf dikh raha tha. Main uske liye paani aur ek painkiller laya, dheere se uska sar dabaya, aur phir ammi-abbu ko bol diya ki Noor ki tabiyat kharab hai, aaj wo aaram karegi. Wo dono chinta mein pad gaye, lekin maine unhe samjha diya ki bas thodi si thakan hai. Phir main jaldi se tayyar hua aur office jaane se pehle Hira se milne nikal gaya. Dil mein ek ajeeb si bechaini thi, ek gandi si uttejana jo mujhe us kameene ki baatein sunne ke liye kheench rahi thi. Main uske paas ek chhote se chai ke tapri par pahuncha, jahan wo apni motorbike ke paas khada cigarette pee raha tha, uski shirt ke button khule hue, badan abhi bhi us raat ki madhoshi mein dooba sa lag raha tha.
Hira ne mujhe dekhte hi ek gandi si hansi di, uski aankhein mujhe upar se neeche tak ghoor rahi thi. “Arre, bhadwa, aa gaya apni biwi ki kahani sunne?” usne kaha, aur ek zor ka thook zameen par phenka. Main chup raha, lekin mera lund pant ke andar ekdum tight ho gaya. Usne cigarette ka lamba kash liya aur shuru ho gaya, “Teri Noor, bhai, kya cheez hai. Pehle toh na-na karti thi, bolti thi ‘main toh deendar aurat hoon, daaru nahi peeti.’ Lekin maine usse ek glass mein thodi si vodka daali, thodi si baatein ghumayi, uske kandhe par haath rakha, aur bas… wo pigal gayi.” Usne apni ungliyon se ek chhoti si chhed banayi, jaise koi ganda ishara kar raha ho, aur phir hasa. “Ek baar daaru andar gayi, uska burqa utar gaya, aur phir toh wo meri godi mein thi, bol rahi thi, ‘Hira, aur ek sip de do.’ Bhai, teri biwi ka woh nasha, woh madhosh aankhein—main toh usi waqt uspe jhapta.” Main uski baatein sun raha tha, meri saansein tez ho rahi thi, aur maine apna haath pant ki jeb mein daal liya, dheere-dheere apne lund ko sehlane laga. Hira ki har baat mere dil mein ek ganda sa toofan utha rahi thi, aur main uski har baat ko apne dimaag mein dohra raha tha—Noor ka burqa utarna, uska Hira ke saath madhoshi mein doobna.
Hira ne cigarette zameen par phenki aur apni baat aage badhaya, “Aur sun, bhadwa, hum dono shopping bhi kiye the us din. Tera paisa kharch karke maine uske liye do saree li—ek bilkul transparent wali, jo uske badan ko dikhaye, aur ek laal wali, jo main usse pehnake chodunga. Aur haan, kuch sexy panties bhi li—wo lace wali, jo main usse utarunga jab agli baar usse OYO mein le jaunga.” Usne apne honth chate, aur ek gandi si muskurahat ke saath mujhe dekha. Meri jeb mein haath ab tez chal raha tha, mera lund itna sakht tha ki pant phatne wali thi. Hira ki baatein meri biwi ko ek chudai ki cheez ki tarah pesh kar rahi thi, aur main, yeh sab sunke, ek gande sukoon mein doob raha tha. Usne achanak meri taraf dekha, apni aankhein sikodi, aur kaha, “Ek baat yaad rakh, bhadwa. Noor ab meri maal hai. Tu usse haath bhi nahi laga sakta, samjha? Wo ab sirf meri hai.” Uske yeh shabd mere kaanon mein teer ki tarah lage, par mere lund ne ek aur jhatka maara, aur main bas sar hila diya, jaise ek kutte ki tarah uske hukum maan raha ho. Hira ne ek aakhri hansi di, apni bike start ki, aur nikal gaya. Main wahin khada raha, jeb mein haath abhi bhi chalta raha, dil mein ek ajeeb si garmi aur sharam ka toofan uth raha tha.
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Main ghar wapas aaya, dil mein abhi bhi Hira ki baaton ka ganda sa nasha chadha hua tha. Kamre mein ghuste hi maine darwaza band kiya, pant utari, aur bistar par letkar muth marna shuru kar diya, Noor ke burqa utarne aur Hira ke saath uski chudai ki tasveerein mere dimaag mein chal rahi thi. Jhadne ke baad maine ek plastic ka shopping bag dekha jo almari ke paas rakha tha. Usmein do saree thi—ek transparent si, jo Noor ke badan ko nanga sa dikha degi, aur ek laal wali, bilkul suhagraat ke jaisi. Main unhe haath mein liya, unki mulayam fabric ko mehsoos kiya, aur jaise koi nasha chadh gaya. Mera lund phir se khada ho gaya, lekin maine khud ko roka aur office ke liye tayyar hua. Office mein pura din main kaam mein dhyan nahi laga paya, bas yahi sochta raha ki Hira kab Noor ko in saree mein pehnake apni suhagraat manayega, uska mota lund uske andar jayega, aur wo dono madhoshi mein doob jayenge. Shaam ko office se nikalte hi maine Hira ko phone lagaya, bahana banaya ki chat pe kamre ka light kharab hai, usse theek karne aana hoga. Hira maan gaya, aur maine plan banaya. Ghar pahunchte hi maine Hira ko chat par bheja aur Noor ko kaha, “Jao, dekho wo kya kar raha hai, thodi help kar dena.” Noor, abhi bhi sar dard se pareshan, chali gayi, aur maine thodi der baad chupke se chat par chadh gaya. Wahin ek kone mein chhupkar unki baatein sunne laga. Noor gusse mein bol rahi thi, “Teri wajah se mera sar phata ja raha hai, Hira! Ek toh pehli baar daaru piya, upar se yeh hangover. Aur pata nahi kaisa chutiya hai mera sauhar, koi khabar hi nahi use meri!” Main飛chhupkar sun raha tha, uski yeh baat sunke mera lund ekdum tight ho gaya—woh nahi jaanti thi ki main sab jaanta hoon. Hira ne ek gandi si hansi di aur kaha, “Arre, meri jaan, yeh dard toh bas pehli daaru ka hai. Aur tera sar dard? Mera lund uski dawa hai, le le, sab theek ho jayega.” Wo uske kareeb gaya, apni pant kholi, aur apna mota lund uske saamne latka diya. Noor pehle hichkichayi, phir uski aankhon mein wahi madhoshi chadh gayi jo kal OYO mein thi. Usne dheere se Hira ka lund apne haath mein liya, phir apne muh mein le liya, aur chusne lagi, uski awaaz chat ke sannate mein goonj rahi thi. Main chhupkar dekhta raha, mera lund pant ke andar phatne ko tayyar tha. Hira ke haath Noor ke baalon mein the, aur wo usse dheere-dheere guide kar raha tha. Main apne aap ko rok nahi paya, jeb mein haath dala, aur dheere-dheere sehlane laga, har pal ka maza le raha tha. Yeh meri Noor thi, Hira ke lund ko chus rahi thi, aur main, ek chhupa hua cuck, is gande sukoon mein doob raha tha, apni biwi ki chudai ka ek aur naya chapter dekh raha tha.
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Waaaahh itna mast likha haiChapter 10
Shaam ko dining room mein hum khana kha rahe the, meri nazar baar-baar Noor pe ja rahi thi—uske chehre pe wohi masoomiyat thi, aur main soch raha tha ki yeh wahi Noor hai jo kal us harami ka lund haath mein masal rahi thi. Saali, yeh masoom chehra dekh ke kaun sochega ki isne OYO mein “gadhe ka lund” bol ke masti ki thi? Khair, khana khate waqt hum sab baatein ki, jaise kuchh hua hi na ho—Ammi-Abbu ke saamne sab normal tha. Khana khatam hua, hum room mein chale gaye. Main aur Noor bistar pe lete, thodi der baatein ki—Hafiz ka zikr kiya—aur phir so gaye. Main so gaya, lekin shayad Noor raat bhar us kameene se chat karti rahi.
Agle din office mein baitha tha, kaam mein dooba hua, par dimaag mein plan chal raha tha—jab tak Ammi-Abbu ghar pe hain, Noor aur us harami ka milna mushkil hai, to main khud Noor ko bahar le jaunga aur usko milwaunga. Dupahar mein Noor ko phone kiya, “Noor, agle hafte door ke rishte mein shadi hai, kapde lene hain—yaad hai na?” Woh boli, “Haan Rizwan ke abbu, yaad hai.” Main mann mein muskaya—kapde to bahana the, asli kaam us kameene ke saath bhejna tha.
Mera plan seedha tha—main khud Noor ko ghar se bahar leke jaunga, aur ghar ke bahar usse kahunga, “Noor, tum iske saath kaam kar lo, kapde le lo—yeh ladka mehram jaisa hai, bhai jaisa samajhna isko.” Ammi-Abbu ko lagega Noor mere saath hai, koi shak nahi hoga.
Maine Noor ko phone pe kaha, “Noor, tum ready ho jao, main 15 minute mein aata hun, aaj thodi si shopping kar lete hain, nahi to ek baar mein kaafi zyada ho jayega.” Noor ne meri baat suni aur haami bhari, “Ji Rizwan ke abbu, aap aaiye, main ready rehti hun.”
Main office mein manager ko keh ke nikla ki main 30 minute mein wapas aa jaunga, aur bike se ghar pahunch gaya. Noor ko phone lagaya to woh ready thi aur peechhe aake mere saath baith gayi.
Main phir bike pe hi usse baat karne laga, “Noor, main to bahut busy hun, tujhe ek kaam karna padega, lekin Ammi-Abbu ko mat batana.” Noor ne kuchh der socha aur kaha, “Kya Rizwan ke abbu?” Main aage badha, “Noor, main to shopping mein itna time barbaad nahi kar sakta, office bhi zaroori hai.” Usne apna sir haan mein hilaya, “To phir?” Phir main bola, “Woh delivery boy yaad hai na, jo ghar ke kaam bhi kar deta hai? Maine use keh diya hai ki tumhari shopping mein help kar de.” Ispe woh thodi shock hoke boli, “Lekin Rizwan ke abbu, uske saath shopping, woh bhi akele?” Main use katate hue kaha, “Arre Noor, woh mera bhai jaisa hai, aur tune bhi dekha na kitna imaandaar aur nek dil hai—use mehram hi samajh, lekin Ammi-Abbu ko mat batana.” Usne kuchh der socha aur phir kaha, “Okay Rizwan ke abbu.” Main Noor ko leke market pahunch gaya, aur mere bataye hue woh ladka intezaar kar raha tha. Main use dekh apne paas bulaya aur bola, “Hira, mam ko achchhe se shopping karwa ke shaam tak mere office mein drop kar dena, aur shopkeeper ko kehna samaan ghar pe pahuncha de.” Usne haan mein sir hilaya, “Bilkul bhaiya, aap tension mat lo.” Phir main un dono ko akela chhod office ki aur nikal gaya, ek badi si smile mere chehre pe faili hui thi, aur main soch raha tha ki mujhe yeh pehle se karna chahiye tha.
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Main wapas office pahunch gaya, mere dil mein sakoon tha aur mera lund akda hua tha, lekin main apne lund pe haath lagana jayaz nahi samjha aur kaam mein busy ho gaya.
Shaam ko mujhe Noor ki call aayi, “Rizwan ke abbu, humne shopping kar li hai, hum kuchh der mein aa rahe hain.” Maine uski baat suni aur jawab diya, “Samaan ghar bhijwa diya na?” Ispe Noor ne jawab diya, “Haan Rizwan ke abbu.” To main phir kaha, “Achchha aa jao, waise bhi mera kaam khatam hone ke kagar pe hai.”
Us kameene ne Noor ko mere office mein drop kar diya aur jaldi se nikal gaya, mujhse baat bhi nahi ki, aur phir kuchh waqt baad main aur Noor bhi ghar ki aur nikal gaye.
Hum ghar pahunche, Noor sidhe nashta aur chai banane chali gayi, aur main us ladke ko message kiya -
- Kaisi rahi shopping?
- Teri bibi bahut waqt lagati hai kapde dekhne mein.
Mujhe yeh baat achchhe se maloom thi, Noor ke isi aadat ki wajah se meri mulaqat is kameene se hui thi—woh kapde dekhne mein busy thi aur main is kameene ko plan batane laga tha. Mujhe andar hi andar hansi aa gayi…
- Woh chhodo, kuchh baat badhi, kuchh kiya tum dono ne ki nahi, ya time barbaad?
- Badhegi baat jaldi hi, tu bas roz milwata reh.
- Haan aaj se main koshish karunga ki tum dono roz milo.
- Bhadwa saala, ha ha ha.
Main bhi uski gaali sun hansne laga.
- Yaar mera bas kare to main tum dono ki shadi karwa doon.
- To phir tera kya hoga be, ha ha ha.
- Kuchh nahi hoga, meri bibi ke do-do shauhar honge bas, main kamaunga aur tum maze karna.
- Sahi hai saale, bhadwe.
Main messages padh ke mann mein muskurane laga, aur mann mein socha, “Noor ki ek aur shadi, ek baar phir woh dulhan ban jaye to kitna maza aayega.” Yeh soch mere liye kaafi thi, mera lund kadak hone laga…
Noor ki awaz aayi to maine phone rakh diya, uske haathon mein nashta aur chai thi aur hum dono baith nashte ke saath chai ki chuski lene lage. Ammi bhi jag gayi thi, woh bhi hamare saath baith gayi.
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Agle din phir maine Noor ko ghar se bahar le aaya aur main phir use us kameene ke haath mein saunp aaya. Main chahta tha ki woh jitna ho sake utna akele mein mile, unke beech ishq ho, mohabbat ho aur baat aage badhe jo pichhle do mahine se atki padi thi. Us kameene ne to waise bhi Noor ko pataya hua tha, lekin ek bedi jo uske zehen mein thi qaid rehne ki wajah se, woh main todna chahta tha. Main chahta tha ki Noor bilkul azaad ho jaye.
Noor ko drop karne ke baad main office mein baitha kaam kar raha tha. Mujhe jaanne ka dil to tha ki un dono ke beech kya ho raha hai, lekin main unhe disturb bhi nahi karna chahta tha. Shaam ko phir usne Noor ko mere paas pahuncha diya, aur main mehsoos kar sakta tha ki Noor mein badlaav aane laga hai. Noor ka chehra chamakne laga tha, uske muh pe hansi aur badi ho gayi thi, aur use dekh main bhi khush tha.
Maine phir ghar pahunch pata kiya ki cheezein kaisi ja rahi hain un dono ke beech mein, aur isi wajah se maine use message bheja -
- Aaj to Noor bahut smile kar rahi thi, lagta hai ho gaya sab kuch aaj.
- Nahi bhadwe, aisa abhi tak kuchh nahi hua hai.
Main uske diya gaali ko sun hans diya, aur sawal kiya -
- To aaj itna khush dikhne ki wajah?
- Aaj teri bibi ko, ahem, mera matlab apni setting ko ghuma raha tha.
Mere andar khushi aur lazzat ki lehar daud gayi, aur maine aage poochha -
- Oh ho, kahan-kahan ghumaya?
- Mall ghumaya - street food.
- Achchha achchha, matlab date jaisa.
- Samajh sakte ho, mini-date jaisa kuchh.
Mera plan rang laane laga tha, unke rozana milne se un dono ke darmiyaan ishq badhne laga tha.
- Haan apni setting ko khilate-pilate rehna chahiye.
- Ha ha ha, bilkul madarchod, waise kal se main khud lene jaunga, helmet pehne rahunga to khak pata chalega kisiko.
Ye sun mera lund khadak gaya.
- Tum khud, achchha bilkul lene jao, tumhari hi setting hai, waise bhi mujhe faltu ka up-down karna pad jata hai.
- Phone kar dena, usko surprise dunga kal.
Mujhe hansi aa gayi, lekin saath mein maza bhi aa raha tha, aur main agle din ki raah dekhne laga.
Agle din main office gaya, aur maine dupahar mein Noor ko keh diya ki neeche aa jao, lekin neeche main nahi tha - wahan uska boyfriend intezaar kar raha tha. Mujhe pura din meetha-meetha judai ka dard hota raha, mujhe zara bhi nahi pata tha ki aakhir Noor uske saath kya kar rahi hai. Lekin mujhe itna pata tha ki jo bhi kar rahi hai woh apne boyfriend aur mujhe, dono ko sukoon farma rahi thi.
Main un dono ko zara bhi disturb nahi kar raha tha aur aise hi 4 din beet gaye. Noor ke chehre pe chamak aur khushi faili hui thi, lekin main har raat us kameene se poochhta ki kya aaj meri bibi ne use chhodne diya aur har dafa woh naa mein hi jawab deta, aur iski wajah se main thoda mayoos ho jata.
Relative ke yahan shadi ka din kareeb aa chuka tha, maine pehle hi us kameene ko saath chalne ko keh rakha tha - pichhle 4-5 dinon mein Noor ne sirf ishq nahi kiya balki sabke liye shadi ke naye kapde bhi khareede the. Hum sab dining table pe baith ke sabne faisla kiya ki hum cab se jayenge, aur shadi wale din maine cab book karwa di.
Agle din hum sab tayyar ho gaye, shadi hamari qaum ki thi isliye Ammi aur Noor ne burqa ki jagah hijab pehna. Mere dil ke ek kone mein tha ki shayad woh din aaj hi hai.
Noor bahut khubsurat dikh rahi thi, uske chehre pe raunak thi. Hum sab cab mein baith shadi ke liye nikal gaye, aur kuchh waqt ke baad hum marriage hall pahunch gaye.
Marriage hall khachakhach bhara hua tha logon se, aur hum bhi ghul-mil gaye. Shadi ki dawat chal rahi thi, hum bhi dawat mein shamil hue -
Kuchh waqt hi beete the ki meri nazar usi kameene pe padi jo auraton ko ghoor raha tha. Hum dono ki nazar takrai, aur woh mere paas aaya aur ishaaron se poochha ki uski setting kahan hai, to maine use ishaare se bataya ki woh andar relatives se baatein kar rahi hai.
Woh intezaar karne laga, aur main phir logon mein ghul-mil gaya. Ek-do ghante beet gaye phir jaake Noor bahar nikli andar se. Maine us ladke ke paas gaya aur ishaare se Noor ko dikhaya aur woh khada ho gaya.
Aur main phir bheed mein ghul-mil gaya, aur woh meri bibi ke kareeb chala gaya - ek ghanta aur beet gaya tab woh kameena mere paas aaya aur mere kaan mein phusphusaya, “Koi khai jagah khojo mere liye, aaj lagta hai Eid ka chand dikhne wala hai.” Ye sunte hi mera dil ek pal ko jaise ruk gaya, jaisa maine socha tha waise hi hua, Noor ne aakhirkaar ek aakhri deewal gira di thi. Main uski baat sunte hi marriage hall mein un dono ke liye jagah dhoondhne laga…
Main marriage hall mein un dono ke liye jagah dhoondhne laga, dil zor-zor se dhadak raha tha aur mera lund pyjame mein akad gaya tha—saala, aaj Noor apne yaar ke saath poora khel khelne wali thi, aur main unka rakhwala ban ke tamasha dekhne wala tha.
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Shadi mein meri Ammi rishtedaron ke saath ghul-mil gayi thi, aur Abbu bhi purani baatein nikal thahake laga rahe the. Rizwan meri Ammi ki god mein so chuka tha, aur main ek kamre ki talaash kar raha tha, jahan meri bibi Noor apne yaar ke saath rangraliyan mana sake. Main marriage hall ke peechhe gaya to dekha wahan pe kuchh kamre the. Main aage badha aur andar khol ke dekha to pehle kamre mein ek khala sex kar rahi thi. Darwaza khulte hi meri nazar unpe gayi—woh meri Ammi umar ki khala thi, aur unke upar marriage ka catering wala ek staff chadha hua tha. Yeh tasveer dekh mera haal aur behaal ho gaya. Main bahar nikla aur doosra kamra dekha to woh khali tha. Maine jhat se phone nikala aur use message kar ke peechhe bulaya. Woh kuchh waqt mein akele aaya. “Ye is kamre mein ek khala chudwa rahi hai, tum bagal wale mein Noor ko le jao, aaram se maze lo, main chaukidari karunga,” ispe woh hansa aur phir woh wahan se chala gaya. Aur kareeb 10 minute ke kaat khane wali intezaar ke baad woh kamina meri bibi ke saath idhar kamre ki aur aaya. Main chhip gaya taki Noor mujhe na dekh le.
Un dono ki baat mere kaan mein ja rahi thi, jise sun mera lund harakat kar raha tha.
Ye keh Noor ne jaise sehmati us kameene ko dedi aur woh dono us chhote se kamre mein ghus gaye, aur main bahar khada ho gaya. Kamre mein koi tareeka nahi tha dekhne ke liye, lekin kamra chhota hone ki wajah se awaaz saaf sunai pad rahi thi…
- Hira safe nahi lag raha ye, chhodo na kabhi baad mein.
- Nahi Noor babu, aaj achchha dastoor hai, jo jaane do meri jaaneman, aur kitna tadpaogi?
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Main kamre ke bahar khada tha, dil ek thandi si lehar ke saath dhadak raha tha, aur mera lund pyjame mein lohe ki tarah kadak ho chuka tha, uski har nass mein ek garam sansani daud rahi thi, jaise koi bijli ka jhatka har pal usmein utar raha ho. Andar se awaazein aane lagi—pehle Noor ki dheemi, sulgi hui siskiyan, jaise woh saans ko daba ke apni awaaz chhupane ki koshish kar rahi ho, uski har siski ek halke se “sss” ke saath bahar nikal rahi thi. Phir Hira ki tharki, dheemi awaaz aayi, uski boli mein ek gandi si madhoshi thi, “Arre babu, zara kapde utar na, yeh hijab abhi bhi kyun pehna hai, pura nanga kar doon kya tujhe ekdum se?” Noor ka jawab dheeme se aaya, uski awaaz mein sharam ka ek chhota sa sur aur masti ka ek thoda sa rang ghula hua tha, “Haye Hira, dheere bol na, darwaza band bhi nahi hai poora, koi sun lega to meri izzat ka kya hoga, thodi si awaaz bhi bahar jayegi to?”
Hira ne apni woh madhur, tharki hansi chhodi, halki si khanak ke saath, jaise usne Noor ki sharam ko mazaak mein uda diya ho, “Arre meri jaan, darwaza thodi khula hai bas, koi nahi aayega yahan, ab chhod de yeh sharam, meri Noor babu.” Kamre se ek halka sa kharashne ka shor sunai diya, jaise Noor ka hijab dheere se zameen pe sarak gaya ho, uski silwaton ka halka sa ragad ek pal ke liye sunai diya. Uske baad ek dheemi si “phus-phus” ki awaaz aayi, shayad Hira ne uski kameez ke button kholne shuru kar diye the, har button ke khulne ke saath ek chhota sa “tik” ka shor, jaise koi chhoti si chabi khul rahi ho. Noor boli, uski awaaz ab thodi bhari aur gehri ho gayi thi, jaise uska dil bhi ab thodi si tezi se dhadak raha ho, “Hira, yeh itna bada hai, dheere-dheere karna, mujhe darr lag raha hai, meri saans ruk jayegi agar jaldi kiya to.”
Hira ne jawab diya, uski awaaz mein ek gandi si khushi thi, jaise woh Noor ke darr ko apne liye ek trophy samajh raha ho, “Arre meri jaaneman, yeh gadha tujhe dheere-dheere hi chadhega, pehle tujhe thoda gila kar doon, zara sabar kar.” Phir ek halki si “chap-chap” ki awaaz aayi, jaise Hira apne lund ko haath se sehla raha ho, uski ungliyon ke ragadne ka woh gila shor dheeme se bahar tak aa raha tha. Uske baad ek thodi si gili “thap” ki dhun sunai di, shayad usne apna mota, garam lund Noor ki chut ke muhane pe rakh diya ho, woh thap ek pal ke liye ruki, phir dobara aayi, jaise woh uski gili chut pe dheere-dheere ragad raha ho. Noor ki siskiyan ab thodi tez ho gayi, uski awaaz mein ek halki si kampan thi, “Haye, yeh garam hai, Hira, zara ruk ja, meri jaan nikal rahi hai iski garmi se,” par Hira ne dheeme se, ek tharki si sur mein kaha, “Rukne ka waqt nahi hai babu, ab to yeh andar jana hi chahta hai, thoda sa khol apni yeh tangen, meri rani.”
Main bahar khada tha, meri saansein tezi se chal rahi thi, har saans ke saath mera seena upar-neeche ho raha tha, aur har awaaz mere kaanon mein ek garam chingari ki tarah gir rahi thi, jaise koi aag ka gola mere andar jal raha ho. Andar se ek halka sa “khach” ka shor aaya, shayad Noor ki salwar neeche sarki thi, uski resham si fabric ka zameen pe girne ka woh dheema sa shor ek pal ke liye sunai diya. Phir Hira ki awaaz aayi, uski boli mein ek gahra maza tha, “Wah babu, yeh gori chut kitni sundar hai, dekh to kitni gili ho gayi, ab to yeh mera lund mang rahi hai, ekdum taiyar hai.” Noor ne dheeme se, thodi si sharamate hue kaha, “Haye, bas dheere se daal na, meri jaan nikal jayegi warna, yeh itna mota hai,” aur uski awaaz ke saath ek halki si “ahh” nikli, jaise Hira ne apna lund uski chut ke andar thodi si dhakel diya ho, woh “ahh” dheere se ek lambi siski mein badal gayi.
Phir ek lambi, dheemi “thap-thap” ki awaaz shuru ho gayi, har thap ke saath ek halka sa gila shor, jaise Hira ne dheere-dheere uski chudai shuru kar di thi, woh rhythm ek baar dheema pada, phir thodi si tezi pakdi, har thap ke saath Noor ki siskiyan ek sur mein badalne lagi, “Hira… haye… dheere… ahh… zara ruk…” par Hira bola, uski awaaz mein ek gahra sukoon tha, “Arre babu, ab to pura maza le, yeh tera hai aaj, thodi si taangein aur khol na.” Uske baad ek thodi si tez “thap” aayi, shayad Hira ne apna lund thoda aur andar dhakka diya ho, aur Noor ki ek lambi “aaah” ke saath uski saans ek pal ke liye ruk gayi, phir ek gahri siski ke saath bahar nikli. Hira ki awaaz aayi, “Haan babu, ab maza aaya na, dekh kitna andar tak gaya,” aur uski boli ke saath ek gahri saans ki awaaz sunai di, jaise woh bhi apne lazzat ke samundar mein dhire-dhire doob raha ho.
Mera shareer kaanp raha tha, meri ungliyan pyjame ke upar lund ko dabane lagi thi, uski garam chhuan mere haathon mein mehsoos ho rahi thi, par main khud ko rok raha tha—andar jo dheemi, gili chudai ka shor chal raha tha, uski har awaaz mere dil mein ek garam dhoop ki tarah fail rahi thi. Main darwaze ke paas chhipa khada raha, har ek shabd, har ek siski, har ek thap ko apne kaanon mein samet raha tha, aur unki yeh dheemi, madhosh masti meri rooh ko ek ajeeb si khushi se bhar rahi thi.
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Main darwaze ke paas chhipa khada tha, mera lund pyjame mein ek garam, sakht rod ban chuka tha, har jhatke ke saath thodi si garmi uske sira se tapak rahi thi, aur mera shareer ek dheemi si thartharahat mein doob gaya tha. Andar se Noor ki siskiyan ab ek madhur, gahri taan mein badal gayi thi—woh lambi, sulgi hui “aaah” jo uske honthon se nikal rahi thi, ek aisi awaaz thi jo usne kabhi mere saath nahi chhodi thi, har saans ke saath uski woh moan ek gili, makhmali dhun ban rahi thi. Hira ki awaaz uske beech mein goonj rahi thi, uska sur ek tharki si madhoshi se bhara hua, “Haan babu, ab to pura andar gaya, dekh kitna maza hai, zara aur josh se chilao na.” Noor ki woh bhari, kaanpti awaaz aayi, “Haye Hira… yeh… yeh itna gehra hai… ahh… meri jaan nikal rahi hai,” aur uski har “ahh” ke saath ek tez “thap” ki awaaz milti thi, jaise Hira ka mota lund uski chut mein dheere-dheere aur andar tak dhakel raha ho, har dhakke ke saath ek gila, chamkila shor kamre ki deewaron se takra raha tha.
Noor ki siskiyan ab ek lambi, tooti-tooti sargam ban gayi thi, “Hira… ahh… dheere na… haye… zor se mat… ooooh,” uski awaaz mein ek ajeeb si masti thi, ek woh lazzat jo usne mere saath kabhi nahi dikhai—mere liye to bas thodi si chuppi aur “tauba tauba” thi, par yahan uski har moan ek garam, gili chingari ki tarah ud rahi thi. Hira ne dheeme se, ek gahre sukoon ke saath kaha, “Arre meri rani, ab to yeh tujhe pura bhar raha hai, zara aur khul ja, tera yeh maza dekh mera lund aur tadap raha hai.” Phir ek halka sa “chhap” ka shor aaya, shayad Hira ne uski gori janghon ko thodi aur chauda kiya ho, uske baad “thap-thap-thap” ki awaaz ek tez, gili rhythm mein badal gayi, jaise woh ab Noor ko poori taakat se chod raha ho, har thap ke saath uski chut ka gila shor aur uske honthon se nikalti woh “ooooh” ek doosre mein ghul rahi thi. Noor boli, uski awaaz ab ek toote hue sur mein thi, “Hira… bas… ahh… itna andar… haye… main mar jaungi… ooooh,” aur uski woh “ooooh” ek lambi, kaanpti cheekh mein badal gayi, jaise uska shareer ab Hira ke lund ke saath ek ho gaya ho.
Main bahar khada tha, meri saansein ek garam, tezi se chalne wali hawa ban gayi thi, har saans ke saath mera seena upar-neeche ho raha tha, aur mera lund pyjame ke andar itna sakht tha ki uski nass-nass dard karne lagi thi, par haath lagane ki himmat nahi thi. Andar ka shor chal raha tha—Hira ki gahri “hmmm” ki awaaz, jaise woh apne maza ke samundar mein dhire-dhire doob raha ho, aur Noor ki woh siskiyan, “Hira… ahh… yeh… haye… aur mat… ooooh,” jo ab ek madhur, gili dhun mein badal gayi thi, ek aisi awaaz jo mere kaanon mein ek garam tel ki tarah gir rahi thi. Kamre se ek halka sa “khach-khach” ka shor bhi aaya, shayad zameen pe padi Noor ki salwar uske pairon ke neeche ragad rahi ho, phir Hira ki awaaz, “Wah babu, teri yeh chut ab meri hai, pura maza le na,” aur uske saath ek aur tez “thap” aayi, jaise usne apna lund poori garmi ke saath uski chut mein pel diya ho. Noor ki ek lambi “aaahhh” nikli, uski awaaz ab ek thaki hui, madhosh cheekh thi, “Hira… bas… ahh… meri jaan… ooooh,” aur woh moan mere dil mein ek aag ki tarah fail gayi, jo usne mere liye kabhi nahi utari thi.
Mera shareer ab ek thartharahat mein tha, meri ungliyan pyjame ke upar lund ko dabaye ja rahi thi, uski garam chhuan meri hatheli mein chhilkane lagi thi, aur har awaaz—Noor ki woh siskiyan, Hira ka woh thap-thap—mere kaanon mein ek garam, makhmali rang bhar rahi thi, jaise main unke ishq ka hissa ban gaya ho, khushi se dooba hua, unki chudai ka pehra dete hue.
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Andar ka shor dheere-dheere thama, Noor ki woh lambi, madhosh siskiyan ab ek halki, thaki hui saans mein badal gayi thi, jaise woh abhi bhi Hira ke garam sparsh ke neeche pighal rahi ho. Hira ki awaaz aayi, uska sur ek gahre sukoon aur tharki pyaar se bhara hua, “Arre babu, kaisa laga tujhe, yeh maza to kabhi na bhoolna, haan?” Noor ne dheeme se, ek makhmali si hansi ke saath jawab diya, “Haye Hira, tu kitna ganda hai… lekin haan, yeh… yeh kuchh alag tha, meri to jaan hi nikal gayi.” Kamre mein ek halka sa “sar-sar” ka shor sunai diya, shayad Noor ne apni salwar uthai ho aur uski resham si fabric uski gori janghon pe phir se chadh rahi ho. Hira bola, uski awaaz mein ek thodi si chhedchhad thi, “Wah meri jaaneman, tujhe aisa maza pehle kabhi mila kya? Tera woh miya to shayad tujhe aise na chod pata ho, kitna dheela hai na woh?” Noor ne ek halki si hansi chhodi, uski awaaz mein ek pyaar bhari shikayat thi, “Haye chhod na uski baat, woh to bas kaam mein laga rehta hai, tujh jaisa thodi hai jo har waqt yeh sab sochta ho,” aur uske baad ek dheemi si “chum” ki awaaz aayi, shayad Hira ne uske honthon pe ek geela chumban de diya ho.
Hira ne phir poochha, uski awaaz mein ek ganda sa maza tha, “Sach bol babu, mera yeh lund tujhe zyada pasand aaya na, uske chhote se tukde se to yeh dugna bada hai, bol na?” Noor ne dheeme se kaha, uski awaaz ab ek thodi si sharam aur thodi si khushi se bhari thi, “Haye Hira, tu kitna besharam hai… haan thik hai, tera yeh… yeh bada hai, lekin uski baat mat kar, mujhe sharam aati hai,” aur uske baad ek halki si “thap” ki awaaz aayi, shayad Noor ne uske seene pe pyaar se maara ho. Hira ne hans ke kaha, “Arre meri rani, uska to bas kaam karna kaam hai, tujhe asli maza to main hi deta hun, yeh dil se dil tak ka rishta usse kahan banta hai?” Noor ne jawab diya, uski awaaz mein ek gahra pyaar tha, “Haan Hira, tu alag hai, tujhse yeh sab… dil se dil tak hi lagta hai,” aur phir ek dheemi si “sar-sar” ki awaaz ke saath ek chhota sa chumban ka shor, jaise dono ek doosre ke gale lag gaye ho, unki saansein ek saath mil rahi thi.
Main bahar khada tha, unki yeh pyaar bhari baatein mere kaanon mein ek garam, makhmali dhun ki tarah goonj rahi thi, aur mera lund pyjame mein ek tez jhatke ke saath phat gaya—ek garam, gila dhaar mere pyjame ke andar baha, meri tangen kaanp rahi thi, aur mera dil ek ajeeb si khushi se bhar gaya tha. Hira ka har sawal, Noor ka har jawab, unki yeh baatein mujhe ek cuck ki tarah sukoon de rahi thi—main jaanta tha yeh maza mera nahi, Hira ka tha, aur Noor ki woh awaazein, woh pyaar, mere liye nahi thi. Andar se ek halka sa “khach” ka shor aaya, shayad darwaza khulne ki tayyari mein ho, to main jhat se ek kone mein chhip gaya, meri saans abhi bhi tezi se chal rahi thi, par mera chehra ek khushi se chamak raha tha. Noor aur Hira kamre se bahar nikle—Noor ka chehra ek thaki hui raunak se bhar gaya tha, uski aankhon mein ek chamak thi, aur Hira uske peechhe tha, ek tharki si muskaan ke saath. Dono shadi ki bheed mein wapas ghul-mil gaye, aur main chhipa khada raha, sochta hua ki yeh unka rishta hai, main to bas iska ek hissa hun, unki khushi ka chaukidar.
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Main chhipne ke baad dheere se bheed mein wapas ghul gaya, meri aankhein Noor ko dhoondh rahi thi, aur thodi der baad woh mujhe door se dikhi—woh ek kone mein relatives ke saath baithi thi, uska chehra ek thaki hui chamak se bhar gaya tha, uski aankhon mein ek alag si raunak thi, jaise abhi bhi Hira ke sparsh ki garmi uske shareer mein baaki ho. Usne hijab thik kiya hua tha, lekin uski woh thaki hui muskaan, uski dheeli si chaal, yeh sab mujhe dikha raha tha ki woh abhi bhi us lazzat ke baad ke sukoon mein doobi hui thi. Main door se use dekhta raha, mera dil ek garam khushi se bhar gaya, mera lund abhi bhi pyjame mein halka sa sakht tha, uski garmi abhi thandi nahi hui thi, aur main soch raha tha ki yeh Noor meri wahi biwi hai jo ab Hira ki ho chuki thi. Tabhi woh kamina mere paas aaya, uski aankhon mein ek tharki si chamak thi, aur woh dheeme se bola, “Bhadwe, kaam ho gaya, teri bibi ko maze de diye, ab woh thak gayi hai.” Usne ek haath meri peeth pe rakha, ek chhoti si thapki di, aur hans ke chala gaya.
Kuchh der baad shadi ka mahaul khatam hone laga, hum sab apne gharwaalon ke saath cab ki taraf badhe. Ammi aur Abbu aage baith gaye, Rizwan Ammi ki god mein soya hua tha, aur main aur Noor peechhe ki seat pe baith gaye. Noor ka sir ek taraf jhuka hua tha, uski aankhein band thi, aur uski saansein ek dheemi, thaki hui rhythm mein chal rahi thi—woh gehri neend mein doob gayi thi, shayad Hira ke saath us chhote se kamre mein bitaaye waqt ne uski saari taakat chheen li thi. Main use dekhta raha, uske chehre pe ek sukoon bhari thakan thi, uski gori gardan pe ek halka sa pasine ka daag chamak raha tha, aur uske honthon pe ek chhoti si muskaan abhi bhi thi, jaise woh sapne mein bhi us maza ko yaad kar rahi ho. Cab chalne lagi, maine apna haath uski jangh pe rakha, uski garmi mere haath mein utar aayi, par woh neend mein thi, ekdum shant. Mera dil khushi se bhar gaya—yeh thakan, yeh sukoon, yeh sab Hira ka diya hua tha, aur main iska hissa banke khush tha.