Lusmin Abid Rehman
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Hot updateMain: (Haste hue) "Rehne do, inhe lagta hai ki yeh buddhi ho gayi hain, isliye aisa bol rahi hain. Chalo, inke liye winter ke kuch badhiya kapde dikha do."
Meri is baat par Ammi aur Chachi dono ne meri taraf sharm aur thode gusse se ghoor kar dekha. Unki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si kashmakash thi. Par is se pehle ki wo dono kuch bol paati, us chalaak salesgirl ne turant do behad shandaar suits unke haathon mein thama diye.
Salesgirl: (Badi politely) "Ma'am, yeh dono suit aap par bohut jachenge. Yeh hamare latest collection se hain aur inki keemat sirf 55,000 rupaye har ek ki hai."
"Pachpan hazar?!"
Ammi aur Chachi dono shock se lagbhag chilla uthi. Unke hosh ud gaye the aur wo turant us ladki se behas karne lagi ki itne mehnge kapdon ki kya zaroorat hai, yeh paison ki barbaadi hai.
Main: (Unhe beech mein tokte hue thodi robdaar aawaz mein) "Shhh... Shopping main karwa raha hu aur paise bhi main hi dunga. Isliye jismein aap dono khubsurat lago, wo chup-chaap le lo."
Ammi mujhe samjhane lagi, aur unka saath dete hue Chachi bhi mujhe rokne lagi. Tabhi Noor, jo mera plan achhe se samajh rahi thi, usne apna 'emotional blackmail' wala teer chhod diya.
Noor: (Thoda udaas sa chehra banate hue) "Ammi Jaan, le lo na. Itne dino baad toh hum sab ek saath shopping par aaye hain, kuch toh achha lena hi chahiye. Aur Chachi Jaan, aap bhi le lo."
Chachi: (Ghabrate hue) "Main? Beta, itna mehnga suit main pehan kar kahan jaungi..."
Noor: (Nakhre se muh ferte hue) "Chachi Jaan, nahi lena toh mat lo. Aap toh waise bhi humein paraya samajhti ho. Main aur Imran aakhir hain hi kaun aapke? Apna mante toh humari khushi ke liye zaroor le lete."
Chachi: (Jaldi se Noor ke kareeb aate hue) "Arre Noor beta, tum galat samajh rahi ho..."
Main: (Noor ka saath dete hue) "Chachi, wo galat nahi samajh rahi, aap galat samajh rahi ho. Aap waqayi humein apna nahi manti, warna itni si baat par aise nakhre nahi karti."
Ammi side mein khadi yeh saara khel chup-chaap dekh rahi thi. Unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki is zidd ka kya kiya jaye. Maine chupke se us salesgirl ko ishara kiya. Mera ishara paate hi wo turant Ammi ke paas gayi aur unka hath pakad kar unhe changing room ki taraf le jaane lagi.
Salesgirl: (Makkhan lagate hue) "Ma'am, inki baaton ko chhodiye aur idhar aaiye. Aapki skin tone, aapki haseen aankhon ka color aur aapke baalon ke shade par toh yeh kapda kisi apsara jaisa lagega. Aap par yeh suit itna jachega ki Sir aapse nazrein nahi hata payenge. Aaiye please, ek baar try kijiye."
Ammi, uski un meethi taarifon mein aakar, bina kuch zyada bole changing room ke andar chali gayi.
Ab bachi Chachi Afsana. Noor aur meri lagatar emotional baaton aur zidd ke aage aakhir unhe apne hathiyar daalne hi pade.
Chachi: (Lachaar hokar, haami bharte hue) "Theek hai... theek hai! Tum dono bas chup ho jao. Main le lungi. Par... mujhe yeh wala design kuch khaas achha nahi laga."
Mere chehre par ek shaitani aur jeet bhari muskaan aa gayi.
Maine hawa mein apne haath uthaye aur ek zordaar 'Chutki' (snap) bajayi.
Mera ishara dekhte hi, us salesgirls ne andar se ek se badhkar ek behtareen, luxury aur designer kapdon ka poora dher Chachi ke theek samne table par laakar saja diya. Kamra chamchamate kapdon se bhar gaya.
Salesgirl: (Ek haseen suit ko uthate hue) "Ma'am, ab dekhiye hamara sabse exclusive aur premium collection. Inki range 20,000 se shuru hokar 5 Lakh rupaye tak jati hai!"
Chachi ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi. Unka poora jism ek pal ke liye jaise sunn pad gaya.Chachi: (Gale mein atki hui aawaz aur poore shock ke saath) "Kya?! Paanch Lakh?!"
"Paanch Lakh?!" Chachi ki aawaz mein itna bada jhatka tha ki wo wahi sofe par girte-girte bachi. Unke liye itne mehnge kapde sapne mein bhi dekhna mushkil tha.
Tabhi Noor, ek dam samajhdar aur pyari bahu ki tarah, aage aayi aur usne Chachi ka hath apne naram hathon mein thaam liya.
Noor: (Bade pyar se, unki aankhon mein dekhte hue) "Chachi jaan, aap is parivar ki izzat ho. Aapne apni poori zindagi dusron ke liye nikal di, kya ab aapka khud ke liye jeene ka haq nahi hai? Imran aapko apni Ammi ki tarah hi pyar karta hai, aur main aapko apni ammi manti hu. Please, humari khushi ke liye le lijiye."
Noor ki is meethi aur emotional aawaz ne Chachi ka dil pighla diya. Chachi jo kal raat se dari aur ghabrai hui thi, unhe Noor mein ek dam apni sagi beti jaisa pyar nazar aaya.
Chachi: (Udaas aur bhaar dil se, Noor ko gale lagate hue) "Noor beta, tum sach mein bohut achhi ho. Mujhe toh kabhi kisi ne itna pyar aur izzat nahi di... main tumhari baat nahi taalungi."
Chachi ne Noor ko apni beti ki tarah gale se laga liya. Chachi ko lag raha tha ki unhe ek sahara mil gaya hai, par unhe nahi pata tha ki yeh usi jaal ka ek hissa tha jisme Noor mujhe poori tarah support kar rahi thi. Mera rasta ab aur bhi saaf ho gaya tha.
Chachi aur Noor ki yeh baatein chal hi rahi thi ki achanak changing room ka darwaza khula. Sabki nazrein us taraf ghoomi.
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Jab Ammi (Salma) bahar aayi, toh mere dimaag ke fuse ud gaye. Unhone jo dress pehni thi, wo bilkul upar dekh rahe image jese the Ek haseen, tight-fitting printed dress jisme unka bhara hua figure poori tarah se highlight ho raha tha. Matching hijab ke andar unka gora, gol aur chamakta hua chehra kisi qyamat se kam nahi lag raha tha. Unki chaudi hips aur heavy chest us dress mein itni bawal lag rahi thi ki main apne hosh kho baitha.
Mera muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Main unhe ek bhookhe bhediye ki tarah, poori hawas bhari nazron se upar se niche tak ghoor raha tha. Meri aankhon mein unke jism ko noch khane ki bhookh saaf dikh rahi thi.
Ammi ne aaine mein khud ko dekha aur phir unki nazar aaine ke zariye mujh par padi. Unhone meri us 'lusty' aur nangi nazar ko saaf pakad liya. Pehle toh wo ghabrai, par phir ek jawan mard ke dimaag ko is tarah apne husn se pagal hote dekh kar, unke andar ka auratpan jaag utha. Gussa hone ya daantne ke bajaye, unka chehra sharm se laal ho gaya (blush karne lagi) aur unhone nazakat se apni palke jhuka li. Wo andar hi andar is attention ko poori tarah enjoy kar rahi thi. vo bhi unki sage beta ki use gandi nazoro ko injoy kar rahe the
Ab baari meri thi kapde change karne ki. Salesgirl mere liye ek premium pant aur shirt lekar aayi aur changing room ki taraf ishara kiya.
Par mere dimaag mein game abhi bohut upper level par chal raha tha. Main muskuraya, aur changing room mein jaane ke bajaye, maine us VIP room ke theek beecho-beech khade hokar apni shirt ke button kholne shuru kar diye.
Chachi: (Ghabrate hue) "Imran... yeh kya kar rahe ho? Andar ja kar change karo na!"
Par maine kisi ki nahi suni. Maine shirt utaar kar sofe par phek di. Kamre mein khadi chaaro aurtein—Noor, Ammi, Chachi aur wo Salesgirl—meri body dekh kar but (statue) ban gayi. Mera chouda seena (wide chest), khatarnak six-pack abs, aur bade-bade muscular biceps dekh kar unki saansein atak gayi thi.
Ammi aur Chachi nazrein churane ki koshish kar rahi thi, par unki aankhein chori-chupe mere muscular chest aur abs par hi tiki thi. Noor bade fakhr se muskura rahi thi, kyunki yeh jism uski property tha.
Par asli dhamaka tab hua jab maine nayi pant pehanne ke liye, bina kisi sharm ke, apni pant ki chain kholi aur use niche farsh par gira diya.
Main ab sirf apne underwear mein khada tha, aur mere 8-inch ke king cobra ki wajah se mere underwear mein ek bohut bada, hard aur clearly visible tambu (bulge) ban gaya tha. Wo itna bada tha ki chhupaye nahi chhup raha tha.
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Salesgirl jo ab tak mere paise lekar acting kar rahi thi, us buldge ko dekh kar uski acting hawa ho gayi aur uske muh se ek dam sachhai nikal aayi. Uski aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi.
Salesgirl: (Bohut loud aur shock aawaz mein) "OMG!! What the fuck Sir!! Yeh toh bohut bada hai... Aapki teeno begamon ke toh halat kharab ho jate hoge is lene me to tabi aap ki pass theen begame he "
Yeh sunte hi kamre mein jaise bomb phat gaya.
Ammi aur Chachi ka chehra sharm se tamatar jaisa laal ho gaya. Wo dono apne dono hathon se apna chehra chhupa kar aaju-baaju dekhne lagi, par unki saansein itni tez chal rahi thi ki unki chhaati zor-zor se upar niche ho rahi thi. Un dono ke dimaag mein Salesgirl ki baat aur mera wo 'bahut bada' saiz buri tarah chhap chuka tha.
Aur Noor? Wo wahi khadi apni haseen muskaan ke saath mujhe dekh rahi thi, poore garv ke saath apna haqq jataate hue,
Salesgirl ki us behadd bold aur sharamnaak baat ke baad kamre ka mahaul ekdum garam aur ajeeb sa ho gaya tha. Ammi aur Chachi sharm se paani-paani thi, par maine bina kisi jhijhak ke nayi pant pehni aur shopping ka agla daur shuru kiya. Ab waqt tha unke jismon ke liye aise kapde chunne ka, jo Jammu ki sard raaton mein aag laga dein.
Maine khud Ammi ke liye 4 behad khubsurat aur premium winter dresses select ki. Jab Ammi ek-ek karke unhe pehan kar bahar aayin, toh main khud ko unki taarif karne se rok nahi paya.
Green Velvet Suit: "Ammi, is hara rang mein aapka gora chehra aur yeh bhara hua husn itna khil raha hai ki Jammu ki waadiyan bhi aapse jalne lagengi."
Maroon Pashmina: "Yeh maroon color aapki aakhon ki kashish ko aur badha raha hai, bilkul kisi haseen khwab ki tarah."
Ammi meri har taarif par palke jhuka leti, unke hothon par ek dabi hui muskaan thi. Par kahani mein twist tab aaya jab maine unke liye ek behad sexy, deep-neck red silk ki nighty nikal kar unke samne rakhi.
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Ammi: (Ghabrate hue, nighty ko dekh kar) "Nahi Imran! Yeh kya behoodgi hai? Main is umar mein yeh sab pehan kar kahan ghoomungi? Mujhe yeh nahi chahiye."
Wo bohut uncomfortable ho rahi thi. Tabhi Noor aage aayi. Usne Ammi ke kandhe par hath rakha aur unke kaan ke bilkul paas jakar bohut dheere se kuch 'whisper' (fusfusayi) kiya.
Main wahi khada dekh raha tha. Noor ki baat sunte hi Ammi ka chehra jo darr se safed ho raha tha, wo achanak khushi, sharm aur ek ajeeb si chamak se laal ho gaya. Unhone ek lambi saans li, nighty ki taraf dekha aur bina mujhse nazrein milaye boli:Ammi: "Theek hai... pack karwa do."
Main andar hi andar bohut suspicious (shaki) ho gaya. Aisa kya jadu kar diya Noor ne ek hi second mein?
Ab baari thi Chachi Afsana ki. Maine unke liye bhi 4 haseen designer winter suits pasand kiye.
Blue Kashmiri Embroidery: "Chachi jaan, aap is libaas mein itni masoom aur attractive lag rahi hain ki koi bhi aapko dekhega toh uska dil machal jayega."
Black Silk Kurti: "Yeh kaala rang aapki body ke curves ko itna perfect dikha raha hai ki bas dekhte rehne ka jee kar raha hai."
Chachi sharm se dohari hui jaa rahi thi. Par asli jhatka unhe tab laga jab maine unke samne 2 behad hot, transparent lace wali nighties aur 1 black bra-panty ka set rakh diya.
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Chachi: (Aankhein phad kar) "Ya Allah! Imran, hosh mein toh ho? Main do bachon ki maa hu, apni umar dekho aur meri umar dekho! Main yeh besharmi wale kapde hargiz nahi lungi!"
Main kuch bolta, usse pehle hi Ammi aage aa gayi! Jo Ammi abhi 5 minute pehle khud aisi nighty lene se mana kar rahi thi, wo ab Chachi ko samjhane lagi.Ammi: "Arre Afsana, isme besharmi ki kya baat hai? Shohar ke liye hi toh pehnogi na? Ikbaal bhai jaan bhi khush ho jayenge tumhe naye roop mein dekh kar. Le lo, Imran itne pyar se dila raha hai."
Noor ne bhi Ammi ka poora saath diya aur aakhir mein Chachi ko wo hot nighties aur lingerie set lena hi pada. Main hairaan tha! Ammi achanak se mere plan mein meri help kyu kar rahi thi? Unhe kya ho gaya tha?
Aakhir mein baari meri begum ki thi. Maine Noor ke liye 4 bohut hi khoobsurat modern dresses, 2 behad qatilana nighties aur 3 luxury bra-panty sets kharide.
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Jab Noor kapde try karke aayi, toh maine uski kamar mein hath daal kar use apne kareeb khincha aur sabke samne (bina kisi darr ke) uski taarif ki:
Main: "Meri jaan, in kapdon ki kismat khul gayi jo tumhare is haseen jism ko chhu rahe hain. Tum se zyaada khubsurat aur sexy aurat is poore mall mein kya, poore shehar mein nahi hai. Jammu mein tum bawal macha dogi."
Noor ne muskura kar mera gaal choom liya aur apni jeet bhari nigahon se Ammi aur Chachi ko dekha.
Shopping khatam karke, bill pay karke hum sab thak-haar kar ghar wapas aa gaye. Ammi aur Chachi apne-apne kamron mein chali gayi aur main aur Noor apne bedroom mein aa gaye.
Kamre ka darwaza band hote hi, mere andar ka sabra toot gaya.
Main: "Noor, idhar aao. Yeh batao, tumne mall mein Ammi ke kaan mein aisa kya fusfusaya tha ki wo achanak se hot nighty lene ke liye maan gayi? Aur uske baad usne Chachi ko bhi wo sexy lingerie lene ke liye force kiya. Kya raaz hai yeh?"
Noor bed par aaram se baith gayi, apne baal kholte hue ek shaitani aur jeet bhari muskaan ke saath boli:Noor: "Maine bas itna bola tha ki... 'Aap khareed lo, aapka Rahul aa raha hai Jammu aapko lene.'"
Mere pairo tale zameen khisak gayi! Mera dimaag jaise sunn pad gaya.
Main: (Shocked hokar) "Kya?! Rahul aa raha hai Jammu?!"
Noor: (Bade aaram se) "Haan, aaj subah uski baat hui thi mujhse. Ammi ka phone switch off aa raha tha, isliye usne mere number par call kiya tha. Wo plan bana raha hai wahan aane ka."
Mere andar gusse ki aag bhadak uthi. Wo 10-inch land wala Rahul meri saari mehnat par paani pherne wala tha!
Main: (Gusse se dant piste hue) "Yeh kutta bhi na! Kahan se beech mein aa gaya? Mera poora plan kharab kar dega yeh!"
Noor jaldi se uthi, usne mere dono gaalon par apne naram hath rakhe aur meri aakhon mein dekhte hue mujhe shant karne lagi.
Noor: "Aap chinta mat karo meri jaan. Wo Jammu aayega zaroor, par use aane mein time lagega. Jab tak wo wahan pahuchega, aapko kaafi waqt milega Jammu mein Ammi ko apne bistar par lene ke liye. Ammi tadap rahi hai, aur Jammu ki un thandi raaton mein jab wo us nighty mein aapke samne hongi... toh wo khud ko rok nahi payengi. Aur aapki begum hai na aapke saath, main sab manage kar lungi."
Noor ki in baaton ne mere gusse ko thanda kiya aur uski jagah ek nayi hawas ne le li. Rahul aayega, par us se pehle Ammi ke jism ka swaad main chakhunga. Jammu ka yeh safar ab ek bada kurukshetra banne wala tha!
Shandar updateRaat ka waqt tha aur ghar ke sabhi log dining table par khana khane ke liye baithe the. Shopping se aane ke baad Ammi aur Chachi ne apne-apne naye kapde sabko dikhaye the, par table par jo guftagu shuru hui, usne dono ka mood kharab kar diya.
Chacha Ikbaal: (Khana chabate hue thode taane bhare lehze mein) "Imran beta, paisa ped par nahi ugta. Maine dekhe wo kapde... ek-ek kapda itna mehnga! Kya zaroorat thi itne paise kharch karne ki? Ye toh nira fuzool kharchi hai."
Abbu: (Chacha ki baat mein haami bharte hue) "Haan beta, Ikbaal bilkul sahi keh raha hai. Ghar ki aurton ko saade kapdon mein bhi toh kaam chal jata hai. Itna show-off karne ki ya itne mehnge kapde pehanne ki kya zaroorat thi? Paise bacha kar rakhte toh kisi kaam aate."
Yeh baatein sunkar Ammi aur Chachi dono ke chehre utar gaye. Unke hath mein niwala wahin ruk gaya. Dono ki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si udaasi chha gayi. Unhone socha tha ki unke naye aur haseen kapde dekh kar unke shohar thodi taarif karenge, unke husn ko acknowledge karenge, par yahan toh sirf paison ka rona ro rahe the. Unhe andar hi andar bohut akela aur old feel hua, jaise unki khubsurti ki inke dimaag mein koi keemat hi nahi thi.
Kamre mein ek chuppi chha gayi thi. Noor ne table ke niche se mere pairo par apna pair rakha, jaise mujhe ishara kar rahi ho. Maine paani ka glass niche rakha aur bohut hi shant par gehri aawaz mein bolna shuru kiya.
Main: "Chacha jaan, Abbu... aap dono ko shayad yeh fizool kharchi lag rahi ho, par mere nazariye se dekhiye. Ammi, Chachi aur Noor sirf is ghar ki aurtein nahi hain, yeh hamare ghar ki izzat hain. Agar yeh saste aur aam kapde pehengi toh kya yeh humare ghar ko shobha dega? Unhe mehnge aur achhe kapde pehanne chahiye jo unpar achhe lagein, kyunki wo hamare ghar ki shaan hain."
Meri aawaz mein ek ajeeb sa thehraav tha jisne sabka dhyan meri taraf kheench liya. Ammi aur Chachi ne apni jhuki hui nazrein utha kar mujhe dekha.
Main: "Main bas itna kehna chahta hu ki paison se bade rishte-naate hote hain, jinki koi keemat nahi lagayi ja sakti. Agar main aaj in par laakhon rupaye bhi kharch kar deta na, tab bhi main inki asli haisiyat aur rutbe ke hisaab se kapde nahi khareed pata."
Maine Chachi ki taraf dekha, jinki aankhon mein ab halke aansu tairne lage the.Main: "Aap hi sochiye Chacha jaan, Chachi Jammu ki itni kadi thand mein akele poore ghar ka kaam karti hain. Thande paani se kapde dhona, sabke liye khana banana, jhaadu-pocha karna... Aaj kal ek ordinary naukrani bhi sirf jhaadu-pocha lagane ke mahine ke 10,000 rupaye leti hai. Aur Chachi bina kisi shiqayat ke salon se yeh sab kar rahi hain."
Phir maine Abbu ki taraf dekhte hue Ammi ke liye kaha.Main: "Aur Ammi... Ammi poora din Abbu aapki itni seva karti hain. Aapki ek-ek goli, aapki dawaiyon ka dhyan rakhti hain, aapke aaram ke liye apna aaram chhod deti hain. Kya is sewa ki koi keemat lagayi ja sakti hai? Inki is mehnat ke aage yeh chand hazar ke kapde kuch bhi nahi hain. Inki haisiyat ke hisaab se kapde khareedne mein aakhir kya galat hai? Izzat paison se nahi, rishto-naato ki majbooti aur ek dusre ki qadar karne se hoti hai."
Dining table par bilkul sannata chha gaya. Abbu aur Chacha dono ke paas meri in logical aur dil chhoo lene wali baaton ka koi jawab nahi tha. Unhone chup-chaap apna khana khana shuru kar diya, unhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya tha.
Par table ke doosri taraf ka manzar kuch aur hi tha. Ammi aur Chachi mujhe ek aisi nazar se dekh rahi thi jisme pyar, shukriya aur ek ajeeb si kashish thi. Mere in lafzon ne unke dilon mein ek bohut bada aur gehra 'soft spot' bana diya tha. Jo taarif, jo qadar aur jo attention unhe apne shoharon se saalon mein nahi mili thi, wo maine unhe chand shabdon mein de di thi.
Un dono ko mehsoos hua ki main na sirf unke jism ki khubsurti ko dekhta hu, balki unki mehnat aur unki value ko bhi samajhta hu. Unki aankhon ki wo nami saaf bata rahi thi ki main ab unke dilon mein ek aisi jagah bana chuka hu jahan se mujhe nikalna ab kisi ke bas ki baat nahi thi. Noor ne garv se meri taraf dekha aur halki si muskurahat ke saath apna khana aage badhaya. Mera yeh emotional daanw bilkul sahi jagah par laga tha.
Khane ki table par meri un gehri aur jazbaati baaton ke baad jo sannata chhaya tha, use todte hue maine aakhir mein apna aakhri daanw chal hi diya.
Main: "Waise maine aap sab ko pehle hi bata diya tha ki kal hum sab log Jammu nikal rahe hain. Tickets confirm ho chuki hain, isliye apni-apni packing aaj raat hi poori kar lijiyega. Subah humein jaldi nikalna hoga."
Meri is baat ne table par baithe har shaks ke dimaag mein ek alag hi halchal macha di.
Abbu aur Chacha Ikbaal, jo thodi der pehle paison ko lekar gyan baant rahe the, ab bilkul shant the. Unhone chup-chaap haami bhari aur apne kamron ki taraf chale gaye. Par Ammi aur Chachi ke uthne ka andaz is baar bilkul alag tha. Unke chehron par ab koi thakawat ya udaasi nahi thi. Jammu jaane ki khabar aur mere un lafzon ne unke andar ek nayi jaan foonk di thi.
Kamre se bahar nikalte waqt, Ammi ne ek aakhri baar palat kar mujhe dekha.
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Unki un nasheeli aankhon mein ab darr nahi, balki ek ajeeb sa sukoon aur kashish thi. Wahi Chachi Afsana, jo hamesha sharm ke maare nazrein churati thi, aaj unhone ek bohut hi naram aur shukraguzaar muskaan ke saath mujhe dekha aur apne kamre mein chali gayi.
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Raat ko jab main aur Noor apne kamre mein aaye, toh Noor ne darwaza lock karte hi mere gale mein bahein daal di.
Noor: (Khushi se mere gaal ko choomte hue) "Aapne toh aaj table par kamaal hi kar diya! Ek hi teer se do shikaar. Chacha aur Abbu ki bolti band kar di, aur Ammi aur Chachi ke dilon mein apne liye wo jagah bana li jo unke shohar saalon mein nahi bana paye."
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Main: (Uski kamar ko pakad kar khud se chipkate hue) "Yeh toh sirf shuruaat hai meri jaan. Un aurton ko apni poori zindagi mein kabhi woh izzat aur attention nahi mili jiski wo haqdaar hain. Maine bas unhe unki asli value ka ehsaas dilaya hai. Ab Jammu mein jab unhe pyar aur apnepan dono ki bhookh lagegi, toh unhe meri hi yaad aayegi."
Noor aur maine mil kar apni aur Rizwan ki packing poori ki. Bags pack karte waqt hum dono ke dimaag mein Jammu ka wo haseen aur khatarnak plan chal raha tha.
Agle din subah jaldi hi ghar mein halchal shuru ho gayi. Sab log taiyar the. Jammu ka mausam thanda hota hai, isliye sabne apne naye aur halke garam kapde pehan liye the.
Jab Ammi aur Chachi bahar aayin, toh unka roop dekhne layak tha. Ammi ne wahi maroon pashmina suit pehna tha jo kal maine unke liye select kiya tha, aur Chachi us blue Kashmiri embroidery wale suit mein bilkul nayi naveli dulhan ki tarah khil rahi thi. Kal raat meri taarifon ka asar unke chehron par saaf nazar aa raha tha—dono ke chehre par ek ajeeb sa glow tha.
Jalal aur Chacha Ikbaal ka poora dhyan Noor aur ammi par tha, par Noor bohut chalaki se mere paas hi khadi rahi.
Main: "Chaliye, taxiyan bahar aa chuki hain. Saaman diki mein rakhiye aur baithiye. Station pahunchna hai."
Ghar ko lock karke hum sab station ki taraf nikal gaye. Train ka safar thoda lamba tha, par mera dimaag aage ki planning mein laga hua tha. Jammu ka wo ghar thoda chota tha aur wahan adjust hone mein sabko mushkil hone wali thi—aur yahi meri leye sabse badiya muka hone wala tha.
Train mein apni seat par baithte hue, maine window se bahar dekha aur ek shaitani muskaan mere hothon par aa gayi.
Chacha apni saazish mein lage the, Jalal meri Ammi ke khwabon mein khoya tha, aur Ammi-Chachi mere un emotional lafzon (aur mere us 8-inch ke ke bare me he soch rahe the) ke nashe mein ghum thi. Par un sab ko nahi pata tha ki wo Jammu ghoomne nahi, balki mere bichhaye hue ek bohut bade aur haseen jaal mein fhasne jaa rahe hain. Khel ka agla aur sabse bada chapter ab Jammu ki thandi aur kaali raaton mein shuru hone wala tha.
Raat ka gehra andhera train mein phaila hua tha. Dibbe ki zyada-tar lights band ho chuki thi aur ek halki si peeli night-light jal rahi thi. Sab aurtein sone ke liye apne-apne berths par ja chuki thi, jabki main (Imran), Abbu aur Chacha Ikbaal aapas mein baatein kar rahe the.
Tabhi meri nazar Jalal par padi, jo chupke se Ammi-Abbu ke coupe (cabin) ki taraf ja raha tha. Use wahan jaate dekh mera dil zor se 'dhak' se kar gaya. Maine turant ek bahana banaya aur Abbu-Chacha se bola ki main bathroom ja raha hu. Main dabe paon uske peeche gaya aur seedha Ammi ke cabin ke paas pahunch gaya.
Andar se halki-halki aawazein aa rahi thi. Darwaza poori tarah lock nahi tha, halka sa bhida hua tha. Maine bina aawaz kiye use thoda sa dhakka diya aur andar jhaanka.
Andar ka nazara dekh kar mera khoon khol gaya!
Jalal ne Ammi (Salma) ko bed ke kinare tightly pakad rakha tha. Usne Ammi ki salwar ka naada khol diya tha aur peeche se unki bhari hui, gol gaand ko apne kamar se bilkul chipka rakha tha. Jalal ka muh Ammi ki gardan mein ghusa hua tha aur wo unhe behad hawas se choom raha tha, jabki Ammi ki saansein darr aur maze ke beech ulghe hui lag rahi thi.
Jalal ki hawas poori tarah se us par haavi ho chuki thi. Uski garam-garam saansein Ammi ki gardan par pad rahi thi, aur wo unhe besharmi se choomte aur kaat-te hue behak raha tha. Uska ek haath Salma Ammi ke bhare hue mummon ko kapdon ke upar se hi zor-zor se masal raha tha, jabki doosra haath unki salwar ke andar ghusa hua tha. Uski unglian Ammi ki geeli aur garam chut mein tezi se andar-bahar ho rahi thi.
Ammi ki saansein bhari ho chuki thi, unke pair kaanp rahe the, par wo darr aur jhunjhlahat mein fusfusayin:"Jalal… nahi… please… yeh galat hai… main teri Badi Ammi hu… Imran ki ammi… tere ammi jese hu"
Jalal ne unki gardan par apne daant aur zor se gadaaye aur unke kaan mein besharmi se bola:"Galat? Dekh toh sahi Badi Ammi… teri yeh chut kitni geeli ho rakhi hai. Main toh hamesha se chahta tha ki teri is bhari hui jawani ke maze lu. Aaj koi nahi rok sakta mujhe."
Usne Ammi ki salwar ko ek hi jhatke mein neeche khinch diya aur apna land unki gol gaand ki darar mein ragadne laga. Ammi ka poora badan ek saath sehem sa gaya.
Bahar andhere mein khada main (Imran) apna phone nikal kar yeh poora scene HD quality mein record kar raha tha. Mera 8-inch ka kala land pant se bahar nikal chuka tha. Main use tezi se hila raha tha, par jab bhi Ammi ki wo bebas lachar siskariyan sunta aur unki bhare bade gaand ko Jalal ke land se ragadte dekhta, mera land aur lohe jaisa sakht ho jata. Par nasha itna gehra tha ki main jhad chata tha par nahi jhd pa raha tha. Frustration aur hawas se mera dimaag phatne ko ho raha tha.
Ammi ne lachaar aur kamzor aawaz mein Jalal se kaha:"Jalal… agar karna hi hai toh… main tera land choos leti hu… bas andar mat daalna… please beta…"
Jalal ki aankhein hawas se chamak uthi. Wo thoda piche hua aur shaitani muskaan ke saath bola:"Theek hai… apni zubaan se mera lund choos. Achhe se choosna, warna poora andar utaar dunga."
Ammi ghutno ke bal baith gayi. Jaise hi unhone Jalal ki land ko dekha unke chehre par saaf disappointment (nirasha) dikh rahi thi—wo sirf 4-inch ka patla sa land tha, jiski tulna na Rahul ke 10-inch se ho sakti thi aur na hi mere 8-inch ke king cobra se.
Phir bhi, aadat aur majboori se laachar hokar, Ammi ne apna muh khola aur use poora andar le liya. Wo apna muh upar-neeche chalane lagi, jeebh se supade ko chaatne lagi, aur haath se uske andon ko sehlane lagi. Ammi us waqt ekdum trained aur experienced lag rahi thi.
Jalal ke muh se behooda aawazein nikalne lagi:"Ahh… kya muh hai tera Salma! Itna garam muh… poora lund andar le rahi hai… haan choos… aur zor se… teri jeebh kamaal kar rahi hai… is umar mein bhi kitni gandi hai tu… mera lund choos rahi hai… wahhh… teri garam thook se mera lund chamak raha hai… choos… apne muh se mera lund nigal…!"
Main bahar khada yeh poora video record kar raha tha. Yeh recording na sirf Jalal ko barbaad karne ke liye kaafi thi, balki Ammi aur Chachi Afsana ko hamesha ke liye mere bistar par laane ka sabse bada aur aakhri 'Brahmastra' ban chuki thi. Train Jammu ki taraf badh rahi thi, aur mere shikaar ab poori tarah se mere jaal mein phans chuke the.
Sirf 2-3 minute mein Jalal jhad gaya. Usne Ammi ke baal pakad kar zor se dhakka diya aur pura maal unke muh mein bhar diya.Ammi ne turant muh se nikaal kar thukne ki koshish ki, lekin kuch hissa unke hothon par, chin par aur boobs par gir gaya. Jalal jaldi se apne kapde theek karke bhag gaya.Lekin Ammi… woh zameen par baithi rahi. Unki aankhon mein sharm, gussa aur ek ajeeb si bhook thi. Woh jhuki, zameen par gira hua virya aur thook ka mixture apni zubaan se chaatne lagi. Chaat-chaat kar saaf karne lagi jaise unki bhook mit hi nahi rahi ho.Yeh dekh kar mera control chhoot gaya. Maine zor-zor se hilaya aur apna mota, garam maal bahar nikaal diya — compartment ke floor par aur door par.Main wapas apne coupe mein aaya. Noor abhi bhi so rahi thi. Maine uske paas let gaya, lekin neend nahi aa rahi thi. Sirf Ammi ki woh chaati hui zubaan aur unki geeli chut ki yaad aa rahi thi.
Main compartment mein wapas aa kar let gaya tha, lekin neend door-bhag rahi thi. Woh scene aankhon ke saamne ghum raha tha — Ammi ka zameen par baith kar virya chaatna, unki geeli chut, unki moti gaand… sab kuch. Mera lund phir se khada ho gaya.Noor gehri neend mein thi. Maine apna mota lund bahar nikala aur hilane laga. Pehli baar jaldi jhad gaya tha, lekin ab doosri baar mein bhi mann nahi bhara. Maine tez-tez hilaya, Ammi ke muh ki yaad mein, unki jeebh ki yaad mein. Teesri baar… chauthi baar… haath thak gaya, kalaai dard karne lagi, lekin poora sukoon nahi mil raha tha. Mera lund laal ho chuka tha, supada chamak raha tha, lekin mann bhara nahi tha.Frustration se bharke main uth baitha. Train abhi bhi tez chal rahi thi. Maine dekha — Ammi-Abbu wale coupe ka darwaja ab bhi halka sa khula tha. Abbu ki kharate ki awaaz bahar tak aa rahi thi. Ammi shayad thak kar so gayi hongi.Mera dil zor se dhadka. Main chupke se utha, Noor aur Rizwan ko ek nazar dekha aur dheere se unke coupe mein ghus gaya. Andar bilkul andhera tha. Sirf platform ki halki si roshni darwaje ke gap se aa rahi thi.Ammi side mein leti hui thi, unka muh mere taraf tha. Abbu unke bilkul saath let kar zor-zor se kharra rahe the. Ammi ki saansein bhari hui thi, unke bade mumme har saans ke saath upar-neeche ho rahe the. Unki salwar abhi bhi thodi si khiski hui thi.Main bilkul paas chala gaya. Mera dil zor se dhadak raha tha. Maine apna abhi bhi sakht aur laal lund bahar nikala aur haath se hilate hue Ammi ke mulayam, garam hothon par ragadne laga. Uska supada unke lower lip par ragad raha tha. Ek halki si chamakdar precum unke hothon par lag gaya.Ammi ne neend mein halka sa hilkora liya, lekin aankhen nahi kholi.Maine aur himmat ki. Apne lund ko unke hothon par zor se ragadne laga. Kuch hi der baad… Ammi ne neend mein hi apna muh thoda sa khol diya.Woh mauka tha.Maine turant apna mota supada unke garam, geele muh mein dhakel diya. Ammi ke hoth mere lund ke around band ho gaye. Andar ka garam, nam muh bilkul swarg jaisa lag raha tha. Maine kuch der tak wait kiya, sirf andar rakhe rakha. Unki saansein mere lund par pad rahi thi.Phir dheere-dheere maine apna lund andar-bahar karna shuru kiya.
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Bahut ahista… bahut dheere… taaki woh na jaage. Har dhakke ke saath mera lund unke muh mein thoda aur gehra ja raha tha. Unki jeebh neend mein hi mere lund ke neeche se guzar rahi thi.“Ufff Ammi…” maine bahut halke se saans mein bola.Maine ek haath se unke bade mumme ko dabaya, kamiz ke upar se hi. Dusre haath se unke baal pakad liye. Ab mera dhakka thoda tez ho gaya tha, lekin abhi bhi controlled. Mera mota lund unke muh mein andar-bahar ho raha tha, unke hoth stretch ho rahe the.Ammi ne neend mein hi halki si siski bhari aur unke muh ka geelapan badh gaya. Unki jeebh ab mere lund ko lapetne lagi thi. Chahe woh jaan-bujh kar kar rahi hon ya neend mein… mujhe farak nahi pad raha tha.Main apni speed badhaane wala tha ki tabhi Abbu ki kharrate mein ek halka sa change aaya. Main ruk gaya, lund Ammi ke muh ke andar hi daba ke rakha. Dil zor se dhadak raha tha.Abbu phir se normal kharrate lagaane lage.Maine dheere se saans li aur Ammi ke muh mein apna lund dheere-dheere andar-bahar karne laga. Ab mera mann pura bhara ja raha tha. Yeh woh sukoon tha jo pehle haath se hilane mein nahi mila tha.Main soch raha tha — aaj sirf muh… kal shayad aur kuch.
Main Ammi ke muh mein apna mota 8 inch ka lund dheere-dheere andar-bahar karte hue 5 minute tak lagatar chalta raha. Unka garam, geela muh aur jeebh ka halka sa sparsh mera dimag uda de raha tha. Abbu ki kharrate ki awaaz background mein chal rahi thi.Jab jhadne wala tha toh maine jaldi se lund bahar nikala. Mera lund phadak raha tha. Maine Ammi ke chehre ke bilkul upar lund ko rakha aur zor se hilaya.“Uffff… Ammi jaan…” maine dheemi si siski ke saath apna pura maal unke chehre par chhod diya.Bahut saara virya tha gadha, safeed aur chip-chipata. Pehla jhatka unke maathe par pada, doosra unke dono aankhon par, teesra unke naak aur hothon par.
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Ek bada sa glob unke chin par gira aur wahan se unki gardan par behne laga. Mera virya itna zyada tha ki Ammi ka pura chehra almost cover ho gaya tha. Kuch boondein unke kamiz ki gale par bhi gir gayi.
Jaise hi garam aur chip-chipata virya unke chehre par pada, Ammi ne neend mein hi halka sa hilkar “hmm…” kiya aur unki baahein thodi si uthi. Mera dil zor se dhadka. Gand faat gayi thi us pal. Agar woh jaag gayi toh sab khatam.Lekin woh phir se shaant ho gayi. Shukr hai!Main jaldi se apna lund andar kiya, pant upar ki aur dabe paon wahan se bhag gaya. Apne coupe mein aa kar let gaya. Dil abhi bhi zor-zor se dhadak raha tha.
Train ki chhan-chhan aur patriyon ki aawaz ab thak kar tham chuki thi. Subah jab meri aankhein khuli, toh Noor mujhe halke se hila rahi thi. Uski aawaz mein ek ajeeb sa sukoon aur utsah tha.
Noor: "Uthiye Imran... uthiye, hum Jammu pahunch gaye hain."
Main jhatke se utha aur jaldi se khud ko sambhaltay hue taiyar hua. Train station par ruk chuki thi. Humne apna saaman sameta aur platform par utar gaye. Jammu ki thandi aur taaza hawa ne hum sabki thakawat ko ek pal mein door kar diya.
Sabhi log—Abbu, Ammi, Chacha Ikbaal, Chachi Afsana, Jalal, Noor aur main—station ke bahar ek bade aur luxury restaurant mein nashte ke liye ruke. Hum sabne ek bada sa round table chun liya aur aamne-saamne baith gaye. Khana serve ho chuka tha, garam-garam puri-bhajhi aur chai ki mehak table par phaili hui thi. Sab log bhooke hone ki wajah se khane mein mashgool the.
Main bhi roti ka tukda tod raha tha, par mera dimaag khane mein bilkul nahi tha. Mera dimaag toh abhi bhi raat ke us aakhri aur behad garm manzar mein ghuma hua tha jab sab ke so jaane ke baad main chupke se ammi abbu ki compartmen ki andar gaya tha, aur Ammi ke us behoshi bhare nened ke aalam mein mera 8-inch ka king cobra unke muh mein tha. Maine raat unke muh mein apna land amdr bhar kiya tha aur pura maal nichod kar unka poora chehra apne gaadhe virya se bhar diya tha.
Maine ahista se apni nazar uthayi aur table ke doosri taraf baithi Ammi ki taraf dekha.
Wo seedha mujhe hi dekh rahi thi.
Unki un khubsurat, haseen aankhon mein halka sa gussa, behad gehra shak aur ek ajeeb sa khauf saaf dikhai de raha tha. Unhone mujhe do second ke liye ghoora aur phir ghabra kar dheere se apni nazrein chura li. Unka chehra sharm aur ghutana se tamatar ki tarah laal ho raha tha.
Main samajh gaya tha ki chal kya raha hai. ammi ko pata chl gaya he ke mene raat ko kya kiya mene Raat ko jab Jalal jhad kar chala gaya tha, tab tak Ammi ne sirf uska 4-inch ka patla land chusa tha aur usne thoda sa paani unke muh mein chhoda tha. Lekin uske baad jo tufan aaya tha wo mera 8-inch ka mota aur lohe jaisa sakht land tha, jisne unke poore muh ko phad kar rakh diya tha. Aur jab mera maal nikla, toh wo itna bhari-bharkam aur zyada tha ki unka poora chehra, thhodi aur gaal us se lepat ho gaye the. Subah jab unhone uth kar mirror mein apna chehra dekha hoga, toh unhe bina kisi shak ke samajh aa gaya hoga ki yeh Jalal ki aokat se bahar ki baat thi. Yeh unka apna beta Imran hi tha jisne unke ghehare nened ka fayda utha kar unki jism aur unke muh ka fayda uthaya tha.
Phir bhi, Ammi ke muh se ek lafz nahi nikla. Wo chup-chaap, nazrein jhukaye apna khana kha rahi thi. Par unki nazar... unki nazar baar-baar bhatak kar meri taraf aa rahi thi. Unki aankhon mein pal-pal rang badal rahe the—kabhi ek maa ka gussa, kabhi ek aurat ki sharm, aur kabhi ek aisi tapan jo bataye bina rehti nahi thi.
Noor ne table ke niche se mera haath kaskar pakda aur mere kaan ke paas aakar bilkul halke se poocha:
Noor: "Kya hua? Aap aaj itne khamosh kyu hain? Aise kahan khoye hue hain?"
Main halke se muskura diya, uski aankhon mein dekha aur bola:Main: "Kuch nahi begum... bas raat ki thakawat aur safar ka nasha abhi tak dimaag par hai."
Noor ne samajhdari se sar hilaya aur muskura kar Rizwan ko khilana shuru kar diya. Par andar hi andar, mera dimaag jeet ke nashe mein jhoom raha tha. Khel ab sirf saazish nahi raha tha, khel ab behad khatarnak aur majedaar hone wala tha. Ammi ko pata chala chuka tha ki unke jism par unke bete ka kabza ho chuka hai, aur sabse badi baat—wo yeh jaante hue bhi chup thi!
Maine Ammi ki taraf ek baar phir se nazar daali.
Is baar jab unki nazar meri nazron se takrayi, toh unki aankhon mein gussa pehle se kam tha... aur us gusse ki jagah ek aisi pyas aur helplessness thi jise dekh kar mera land pant ke andar phir se phan uthane laga tha.
vese aaht aur cucklod ki diry ki baad me ak system story lekhne ki soch raha hu jes me hero ki pass ak system hota he anime ki tarh mere kses pure yahe he ki phale ahat aur cucklod diry khatm ho jaye pher me cucklod se saniyaas le logamatlab dubara cucklod par basd story nahe lekhuga