Nice introduction...Update 2
phele ek chota intro story ki demand ke hisab se
Ashu : Age 22
abhi mumbai ke cllg se gradute hua h
vse to kahne ko puri family h fir bhi life me bilkul akela h asa kyo h ye to aapko aage pta chlega
iski abhi abhi nayi nayi job lagi h SK GOC me [abhi ke liye itna hi]
iske past ke bare me sirf kuch logo ko hi pta h baki sb yhi sochte h {ya isne btaya hi ye ho } ki ye anath h
ashu 8 saal phele mumbai aaya tha apni aage ki study ke liye
Mohit : Age 22
ashu ka khass frnd
ye bhaishab bhi vo insan he jise ashu ke past ke baare me pta he
ye aur ashu 8 saal se frnd h
Ye ab apne papa ki company me kaam krne vala h
kiran : Age 21
Mohit ki behan he jo inhi ki cllg se study ker rhi h kaafi bindass he aur apne asspass ka mahol ko happy rakhne vali h ye
Ashu ko apne bhai se bhi bhdkar maanti h
beautifull he mumbai me rehne ke baad bhi apni limitations me rhti h
Rohtash : Age 47
mohit ke papa ki khud ki company h
mumbai ke jaane manne businessman h
Meena : Age 44
Beautifull h bhot koi nhi kh skta ki 44 ki hogyai h aaj bhi 35 ki hi lgti h
vse to pese vali h per rehti bilkul simple h
Housewife h apne pariwar ko pyar krne wali ek perfect woman
Rohan : Age 22
iski ashu/mohit ke sath dosti 7saal purani h asa kyo to vo aage pta chl jaayega
isko ashu ke baare me pata h
isko mohit ne apni company me job dilwa di h kyoki bhaishab SK ke interview me reject jo hogye h
Mukesh : Age 46
ye school teacher he
bhai inka 7saal pehle delhi se mumbai transfer hua tha bss tbhi se rohan ki ashu aur mohit se dosti hogyi
Reena : Age 43
ye gaon se belong krti h inki shadi jldi hi hogayi thi aur bache bhi
Ye bhi meena ki hi trh beautifull h
housewife h ye bhi apni family se full pyar krti h
jb se mohit ashu aur rohan ki aaps me dosti hui tb se hi inlogo ne ek dusre ke ghr jaana start ker diya to issi vje se kuch time baad inke mom ki bhi aaps me frndship hogyi thi [obvious h bhai inke papa ki to fir honi hi thi - ab to haal ye h har hafte 2no pack ldate h sat sunday ko]
aaj ke time per Reena Meena ki dosti sholay ke Jay Veeru jesi dosti dono 1 2sre ke baare me sb jaanti jitna inko inke husband nhi jaante h
ye dono bhi Ashu ke past ke baare me janti but inki betiyo aur husband ko kuch nhi pta
mukesh aur rohtash ki family time time prr family get together krti rhti h
Karishma : Age 25 unmarried h
rohan ki bdi behan h
SK GOC ki heads me se ek
Brilliant minded aur hdd se jada khubsurat { beauty with brain }
[bhai ab aap log ye mt sochna ki inhone hi ashu ki job lgvai h naa ji asa bilkul nhi h ashu apne talent per job lga h]
Kiran Karishma ko hi apna idol manti h aur issi ko flow kr rhi h aur Karishma bhi time time per Kiran ko support krti rhti h
Roshni : Age 31 teacher h [bhai teacher witcher nhi bole to full to genius h]
married h
2 betiya h inki ek 5 saal ki h aur ek abhi 1 saal ki hone wali
Inke pati ke baare me baad me jaan lenge
[ye vhi aurat h jo ashu ko flight me mili thi]
ye ek ekloti insaan h jo ashu ka pura sach jaanti h asa kese to bhai ye to aage hi pta chlega
Aage ke liye ye bhi delhi hi jaa rhi h apne pariwar ke sath
SK Grp Of COMPANIES ye ek MNC h
Iski 4 heads aur 4ro hi ladies h jinme se 3 foreiners h aur ek INDIAN [vo ekloti h karishma]
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kuch samy baad flight delhi land kr jaati h sbhi airport se bhr aate h
Ashu : mam taxi lete h bus me to pareshan ho jaayenge
Mam : haa yhi shi rhega vrna bacho ki to halt khrab ho jaayegi
taxi lekar ye sbhi apne ghr ki trf nikal jaate h
jb ye taxi se utarte h tabhi ashu ke pass ek call aata h usse dekher ashu serious ho jaata h ...........
Abhi ke liye itna hi
Aur ye intro abhi itna hi h baaki jese hi story aage bhdti jaayegi intro aate jaayenge
Aur ye story 100% complete hogi
koi glti ho to comment box open h usme apna jaadu dikhae
aur story pasand aaye to support it......
Papa.......Update 3
aage...
Mam : kya hua ashu kiska call h jo tum itne dare huye ho
Ashu : Mam vo vo
Mam : kya vo vo kar rha jldi bata na kis ka call
Ashu : vo meena anty call h
Mam : phir isme itna darne ki kya baat h chlo jaldi kro phon uthao vrna cut jaayega
itni hi der me call cut jaati he
Mam : kya hua ashu tune call kuu nhi uthya tum to asa kabhi nhi krte ho
Ashu : vo mam m unko bina bataye delhi aagya huu
Mam : jor se kyaa ... ashu tum itne laprva kese ho skte ho tumhe pta hna vo log tumse kitna pyaar krte h fir bhi tumne asa kiya kyon
Ashu : Mam aapko to pta hi h ki hme urgent hi delhi ke liye niklna pda tha
Mam : haa ye to h fir bhi tume kam se kam ek baar to unhe inform krna hi chaiye hi tha
dekho unka fir se call aa rha chlo ab jldi se call uthao
mam ki baat sunkar ashu jaldi se call uthata he
Ashu : hello.....bss abhi ashu itna hi bol paya tha ki dusri se awaj aati h
kutte kamine haramjade ase hi kuch aur gaaliyan pdti h
Reena : aur gaaliya do didi iski himmat kese hui hmme bina btaye yha se jaane ki isne hmme 1baar bhi call krna jruri nhi smja
Meena : haa reena tu bilkul shi bol shi bol rhi h isne to hmme ek jhatke me hi paraya kr diya h
Ashu : anty aap log meri baat to suniye plzz
Meena : nhi hmme tujse koi baat nhi krni h kyon reena
Reena : haa didi aap shi bol rhi ho
Ashu : aap dono to meri pyari anty hona aap apne bete se baat nhi krogi
Meena : Nhi ....spat lehje me
Ashu : udass hote .. chlo to me rkhta hu jb kisko mujse baat hi nhi krni h to
Meena : okk jldi bolo kya bolna h hmm sun rhe h
Ashu : anty aaplogo ko to pta hi h me apne aapko prove krna chata hu
M : haa to hmm logo ne tuje kbhi kisi cheej ke liye rokaa h
As : anty yrr aap log meri baat to sun lo
R : haa haa jldi bol
As : to jb hmare cllg me company aayi thi to unme mere slection hogya fir uske baad exam hone se me aap logo ko bta nhi paaya aur aaj me aap logo ke pass aakr surprise dene vaala tha per achanak company se call aagya ki kl hi aapko joining krni isliye muje achanak aana pada
R/M : tu sach bol raha h
A : Aapki kasam anty aur aap log chaho to mohit aur rohan se puch skte ho mne unko kha tha aap logo ko btane ke liye .... aur ashu ek suspense vali smile deta h
R/M : kya kha tune mohit aur rohan ko tune bola tha
A : haa anty kya undo ne aapse nhi btaya
R/M : aaj unn dono kameeno ko ghr aane do hm btaati h unko
fir udass hote hue ... ab to tu bhi chla gya h ab hamara mn kese lgega
A : fir kya hua anty isme kya problem h kuch time ke liye kbhi aap yha aa jaana to kbhi me vha fir hm full enjoy krenge
R/M : khushi se .... sach naa
A : bilkul sach .. chlo anty me aapse baadme baat krta hu abhi muje apna saman set krna h
R/M : okk byy take care beta and love you
A : Byy anty & love u2
aur ashu call cut kar deta h
Mam : mna liya apni antyio ko
A : haa aur anty jada der mere se naraz rh hi nhi skti h
Mam : haa haa muje pta h
chlo ab jldi se ye sb ander le chlo hm kb se bahr khde h
ashu jldi se
aap bhi naa mam aap itni der bahr kyo khdi ho meri angels ko kuch ho jaata to
A : ab aap muje kya dekh rhi ho ander chlo me saman lekar aata hu
aur roshni ghr kaa lock open keke ander chli jaati h
aur ashu peeche peeche bag lekar chl deta h
Roshni ne delhi ke posh area me ek normal sa ghr khareeda tha jise ashu aur roshni kuch samay pehle hi final karke gye the
chlo ghr ke baare me thoda jaan lete h
ye ek normal ghr h jisme 1drawing room 2bedroom h aur kitchen aur 1 room chat per h
ashu aur roshni milkar jldi se apna saman set krte h apne room me
Roshni : ashu tum khanna order kr do pari bol rahi h usko bhuk lg rhi h jbb tak khana aayega tbb tak hm sb fresh bhi ho lenge
ashu khana order krne ke baad khud bhi fresh hone chla jaata h
sab khana khaate h uske baad bhai number aata h sone kaa aur 4ro masterbedroom me sone chle jaate h aaj ke safar ki thakan se sabko neend aa rahi hoti
ashu bed ke left kone per so jaata h aur roshni right side aur dono bache unke beech me
pari ashu ki trf hoti h aur choti vali roshni ki trf
Ashu (Pari se): gn my angel ... aur uske maathe per kiss kr deta
Pari : gn papa........
Nice update bro....Update 4
ab aage
subh ke 7 bje ashu ke ghr delhi me
Pari Ashu ke pet per baith ker usse jagane ki kosis ker rhi thi prr ashu ne bhi jese thaan rkha tha ki aaj abhi nhi uthna h
Pari : paa utho naa
Ashu : gudiya sone do naa
Pari : nhi utho abhi utho
Ashu : betu bss 5mint aur so jaane do fir me uth jaunga ........ashu pari se request krte hue kehta h
Pari : nhi abhi uthiye mujhe fir breakfast bhi krna h
Ashu : to betu apni mumma ko bolo naa khana de
Pari : nhi muje to apki goad me hi baithker hi khana h
aur ab me sirf 3tak counting krungi agr aap tb tak nhi uthe to fir apni katti ho jaayegi
asa khker pari apni counting suru ker deti h
one ....no response
two ....again no response
thr.....bss abhi pari ne itna hi bola tha ki ashu uth jaata h
uthkr ashu pari ko goad me uthakr bed se niche utr jaata h
Ashu : vse princess aap bhot naughty hogye
Pari : nhi paa me to naughty nhi hu me to bhot shareef hu aur hasakar ashu ki chest me apna sir chupa leti h
Ashu : ohh tum aur vo bhi shareef abhi to kuch der pehle muje dhamki de rhi thi vo kya tha
asa kahker ashu pari ko gudgudi krne lag jaata h jisse pari jor jor se hasne lag jaati h
Pari : hahahahahahah nhi papa ruk jaaiye plzz hahahaha
Ashu : fir dhamki dogi
Pari : masoom se face bnakar .... kbhi nhi
aur ashu pari ko chod deta aur pari door ki trf bhaag jaati h aur door ke pass phunchkr ashu ko bolti
Pari : agr paa aap aage bhi nhi uthe to me roj asa hi krungi aur hasker bhagne lagti h
Ashu : ruko tumhe to me btata hu aur pari ke peeche bhaagne ko hota hi h ki
tbhi kitchen se awaj aati h
Roshni : agr tum dono baap beti jldi se bhr nhi aaye to aaj tumhari kher nhi h aur dono me se kisi ko breakfast bhi nhi milega
in dono baap beti ne to muje preshan ker rkha h pta nhi dono ko kb aakal aayegi beti sbse upper aur baap ki to bss pucho hi ye inka roj ka drama pta nhi kb kahatm hoga ....roshni apne aap se bolti h
Ashu : [jor se aur jaldi se] haa haa bss aa rhe h
chlo betu vrna tumhari mummy apni watt lga degi tum mumma ke pass jao tb tak me fresh hokar aata hu
Pari : okk paa
aur kitchen ki trf chli jaati h
aur ashu bathroom me ghuss jaata h
Ashu kuch der me fresh hokar baahr aata h aur kitchen ki trf chla jaata h
kuch der me sabhi dinning table per baith jaate h
aur pari jaldi se ashu ki goad me baith jaati h
aur fir sabhi breakfast krne lgte h ashu aur pari dono aaps me ek dusre ko khilane lagte h joki inka roj kaa hi kaam h
roshni bhi ek baar unki trf dekhti h aur smile krke apna breakfast krne lg jaati
kuch der me teeno apna breakfast finish ker lete h tbhi roshni ashu se bolti h
RO : ashu roohi bhi ab tak uth gyi hogi to tum usse chaat per ghuma lao tb tak me kitchen kaa kaam finish krti hu
AS : okk
aur room se roohi ko lekar chaat ki trf chl deta
AS : chlo pari baby apn upr chlkar masti krte h
Pari khus hokar : okk paa
aur ashu dono ko lekar upr chl deta h vhi roshni kitchen me bartan dhone lagg jaati h
KUCH SAMAY BAAD
around 8:30 in master bedroom
ashu office ke liye ready ho chuka tha aur roshni uski tye bandh rhi hoti h aur ashu se bolti h
Roshni : dekho ashu aaj office me tumhara first day h to bilkul masti nhi aur dhyan rkhana ki ab ye office hi hamara future h
tabhi ashu roshni ki kamar per hath dalkar haste huye bolta h .....okk baby
Roshni : ashu be serious ye joke nhi h
aur vha per dhyan se kaam krna h tumhe vha kuch bhi ho skta h so be carefull
aur dhyan rhe tumhe kisi ki njr me nhi aana h iss baat ka khass dhyan rkhna h tumhe
or haa ye yha ke jitne bhi kaam he tumhare vo sb jaldi niptao muje yha jada din nhi rhna h iss seher me mera dum ghuteta h
Ashu : yess mam
aur muje bhi pata h in sb ki importance so app chinta mt kariye me sb kuch bhot carefully karunga aur jaldi bhi
kyoki yhi se hokar to jaata h mere ghr vapsi ka rasta.......
aur fir ashu pehle to roshni ko kuch der tak kiss krta h aur fir apni dono pariyo ko aur byy bolkar ghr se nikal padta h apni manjil ki trf jo thi
SK GOC
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Aaj ke liye bss itna hi
phdiye aur btaiye ki ksa lga aur kitne sudhar ki jrurat h
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