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Fantasy Aag 🔥 Nafrat Ki (fantasy + adultery + Revenge + Incest)

Kesi lagi ap sabko story

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takurkingx

New Member
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Update 1 ★
Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean 🌊) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna

Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊) main khud jata Hain


Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the

Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the

Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain

Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho

Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain


Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu

Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain

Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho


Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain

Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath

Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona

Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga

Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain

Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho

Sab : jee hum jante Hain

Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain


Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean 🌊) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold 🪙 se bara hua the

Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake


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Milte Hain agli update main
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Guys please support Karna is story ko bi aur Meri dusri story ko bi and week main 2 update iske ayege aur 2 update us story ke thank you 🙏 👍
Nice and fantastic update bro 😁 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯
 

takurkingx

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★ Update 2 ★


Woh ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) se Nikal kar Chala gaya aur sabse pahle usne kapde change Kiya aur phir ek gold ki dukan per Chala gaya aur dukan wale se bola

Ladka : hello sir Kya ap gold lenge

Dukan wala : haa kyun Nahin bechna Hain Kya

Ladka : jee ha bechna Hain yeh raha

Yeh bolkar ladka gold dukan wale ko deta Hain jab dukan wala check karta Hain toh ladka se Bolta hain

Dukan wala : tumhare pass yeh kaha se aya Hain

Ladka (jhoot bolte hue ) : yeh mere dada jee ka Hain aur bi bohut sara rakha hua Hain Lekin filhal mujhe sirf yeh bechna Hain

Dukan wala : thek Hain yeh gold bilkul original Hain aisa gold Maine apni life main. Kabhi Nahin dekha Hain

Ladka : Kya Sacha main toh Kitne paise honge iske

Dukan wala : is ek ant ki qeemat 10 lakh Hain thek Hain

Ladka : okay sir ao mujhe paise de dejiye

Dukan wala : thek Hain ager aur bi bechna Hain toh woh bi mujhe de Dena main usko bi karid lunga okay

Ladka : okay sirf

Dukan wala : yeh lo beta pure 10 lakh Hain thek Hain naa

Ladka : okay uncle main chalta ho

Dukan wala : are are 1 minute rok Jao

Ladka : Kya hua uncle

Dukan wala : Tum toh jante ho aj Kal ke halat toh Kahi aisa na ho ke bad main police aakar tang kare ishi liye apna naam aur address likwa do

Ladka : okay Mera Naam NAKSH Agerwal Hain aur main ******* society main rehta ho

Dukan wala : are wah main bi uski bagal wali society main rehta ho

Naksh : okay uncle phir bad main mulakat Hogi bye

Dukan wala : thek Hain beta bye

Phir Naksh waha se Nikal jata Hain

Ab aghe Kahani Naksh ki jubani Jab 3rd person ki zarorat Hogi toh waha per 3rd person AA jayega

Main jab waha se Chala gaya toh bohut khush tha kyunke ek gold ki ant ke 10 lakh Jo mile the toh waha toh samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) bara hua Hain pata nahin Kitna paise honge un sabke

Main (mam me ) : Lekin Jo bi ho mujhe jald se jald Sara ka Sara gold waha se Nikal Lena chahiye kyunke Meri hi tarha waha koi aur bi jaa Sakta Hain Lekin Nikalo kese itna Sara gold aur ager Nikal bi Liya toh rakhoga kaha yeh Samaj Nahin AA Rahi hain

Abhi main yeh sab Soch hi Raha the keere Kano main Kisi ki rone ki awaz ayi yeh koi admi ke rone ki awaz Thi jab Maine dekha toh park 🏞️ ki and main ek admi Zameen per beth kar to Raha Hain tab mujhe yad aya ke Kuch der pahle toh main bi ishi tarha roo Raha tha tab Kisi ne mujse Nahin pocha ke kyun roo Rahe ho Lekin Kya mujhe us admi ki madad Karni Chahiye Kya has Karni Chahiye

Yeh soch kar main uske pass Chala gaya aur us admi ke pass ponch kar use bola

Main : uncle ap roo kyun Rahe ho

Admi : Kuch Nahin beta apni Kismat per roo Raha ho aur koi bast nahin Hain

Main : koi problem hain toh bolo main tumhari help kar Sakta ho

Admi : Nahin Tum Meri help Nahin kar sakte Tum Jao Yaha se

Main : uncle duk bantbe se Kam hota Hain ao bolo Kya baat hain

Admi : mujhe mere beto aur unki bewiyo ne Apne hi Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain

Main : Soo sad uncle bay tha way maine apko Kahi dekha Hain

Admi : tv per news main dekha Hoga

Main : haa yad AA gaya Hain al wahi Hain naa the business tycoon Manish Malhotra

Admi : has main wahi ho

Main : toh phir apko Apne beti ne Ghar se kyun nikala

Manish : mere beto se dokhe se Mera Sara business Apne Naam Karwa diya Hain aur mujhe Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain kyunke unko paiso ka lalach tha ishi liye use dokhe se mujse sign karwaya ager toh todi sabar karte toh main apna Sara business unko de deta lakin Nahin in hone mujhe Ghar se Nikal diya Hain ab main Kya karo aur kaha Jao

Main : uncle is main main apki help kar Sakta ho

Manish : woh kese beta

Main : main apko paise Dunga business ke Liye ap ek new business Shuru karo paise Sara ka Sara main Dunga aur company bi mere Naam per Hogi


Manish : is main Mera Kya faida aur tumhare pass itne paise kaha se aye

Main : O aam (mango 🥭 ) khao gutliya mere liye chod do aur Rahi apki faide ki baat toh main apko us company ke 10 % main partner bana dunga aur ap hi company ke MD honge Apke pass sari power Hogi har ek decision Lena ka aur jab main dunya ke samne aaoga toh phir main honga aur Jab tak some pass power Hain ap is company ko us unchai tak ponchai ge ke jaha ajj aoki company Thi aur ab Apke beto ki ap Apne beto se badla le Lena us company ko barbad Karke bolo manzor Hain

Manish : woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin itna paise tumhare pass kese aye hain

Main : woh mere Apne paise Hain

Manish : tumhare pass itne sab paise kaha se AA gaye

Main : Meri family I'd ek secret Hain ishi liye woh Meri Apne Hain thek Hain naa

Manish : thek Hain Samaj gaya paise kaha Hain

Main : woh apko aj sham tak mil jayege Lekin main apko adress send kar Dunga aur haa paise toh Nahin Hain Lekin gold 🪙 aur diamond 💎 Hain mere pass woh dedu

Manish : haa de do main Sab thek kar dunga

Main : okay apko aj sham tak mil jayega ap ****hotel AA Jana okay

Manish : okay main AA jaoga

Phir Manish waha se Chala gaya aur naksh wahi reh gaya aur Kuch soch ne laga

Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe update hue ayi aur Naksh ke body ke takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya




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Milte Hain agli update main

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Ager update PASAND aye toh like aur comment lazmi Karna thank you 🙏 🙏
Very well ❤️‍🩹 ❤️‍🩹 ❤️‍🩹 ❤️‍🩹 update bro
 

Piter

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Update 1 ★
Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean 🌊) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna

Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊) main khud jata Hain


Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the

Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the

Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain

Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho

Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain


Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu

Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain

Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho


Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain

Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath

Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona

Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga

Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain

Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho

Sab : jee hum jante Hain

Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain


Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean 🌊) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold 🪙 se bara hua the

Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Milte Hain agli update main
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Guys please support Karna is story ko bi aur Meri dusri story ko bi and week main 2 update iske ayege aur 2 update us story ke thank you 🙏 👍
Nice update withing for next
 

Piter

Hi
36
87
19
★ Update 2 ★


Woh ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) se Nikal kar Chala gaya aur sabse pahle usne kapde change Kiya aur phir ek gold ki dukan per Chala gaya aur dukan wale se bola

Ladka : hello sir Kya ap gold lenge

Dukan wala : haa kyun Nahin bechna Hain Kya

Ladka : jee ha bechna Hain yeh raha

Yeh bolkar ladka gold dukan wale ko deta Hain jab dukan wala check karta Hain toh ladka se Bolta hain

Dukan wala : tumhare pass yeh kaha se aya Hain

Ladka (jhoot bolte hue ) : yeh mere dada jee ka Hain aur bi bohut sara rakha hua Hain Lekin filhal mujhe sirf yeh bechna Hain

Dukan wala : thek Hain yeh gold bilkul original Hain aisa gold Maine apni life main. Kabhi Nahin dekha Hain

Ladka : Kya Sacha main toh Kitne paise honge iske

Dukan wala : is ek ant ki qeemat 10 lakh Hain thek Hain

Ladka : okay sir ao mujhe paise de dejiye

Dukan wala : thek Hain ager aur bi bechna Hain toh woh bi mujhe de Dena main usko bi karid lunga okay

Ladka : okay sirf

Dukan wala : yeh lo beta pure 10 lakh Hain thek Hain naa

Ladka : okay uncle main chalta ho

Dukan wala : are are 1 minute rok Jao

Ladka : Kya hua uncle

Dukan wala : Tum toh jante ho aj Kal ke halat toh Kahi aisa na ho ke bad main police aakar tang kare ishi liye apna naam aur address likwa do

Ladka : okay Mera Naam NAKSH Agerwal Hain aur main ******* society main rehta ho

Dukan wala : are wah main bi uski bagal wali society main rehta ho

Naksh : okay uncle phir bad main mulakat Hogi bye

Dukan wala : thek Hain beta bye

Phir Naksh waha se Nikal jata Hain

Ab aghe Kahani Naksh ki jubani Jab 3rd person ki zarorat Hogi toh waha per 3rd person AA jayega

Main jab waha se Chala gaya toh bohut khush tha kyunke ek gold ki ant ke 10 lakh Jo mile the toh waha toh samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) bara hua Hain pata nahin Kitna paise honge un sabke

Main (mam me ) : Lekin Jo bi ho mujhe jald se jald Sara ka Sara gold waha se Nikal Lena chahiye kyunke Meri hi tarha waha koi aur bi jaa Sakta Hain Lekin Nikalo kese itna Sara gold aur ager Nikal bi Liya toh rakhoga kaha yeh Samaj Nahin AA Rahi hain

Abhi main yeh sab Soch hi Raha the keere Kano main Kisi ki rone ki awaz ayi yeh koi admi ke rone ki awaz Thi jab Maine dekha toh park 🏞️ ki and main ek admi Zameen per beth kar to Raha Hain tab mujhe yad aya ke Kuch der pahle toh main bi ishi tarha roo Raha tha tab Kisi ne mujse Nahin pocha ke kyun roo Rahe ho Lekin Kya mujhe us admi ki madad Karni Chahiye Kya has Karni Chahiye

Yeh soch kar main uske pass Chala gaya aur us admi ke pass ponch kar use bola

Main : uncle ap roo kyun Rahe ho

Admi : Kuch Nahin beta apni Kismat per roo Raha ho aur koi bast nahin Hain

Main : koi problem hain toh bolo main tumhari help kar Sakta ho

Admi : Nahin Tum Meri help Nahin kar sakte Tum Jao Yaha se

Main : uncle duk bantbe se Kam hota Hain ao bolo Kya baat hain

Admi : mujhe mere beto aur unki bewiyo ne Apne hi Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain

Main : Soo sad uncle bay tha way maine apko Kahi dekha Hain

Admi : tv per news main dekha Hoga

Main : haa yad AA gaya Hain al wahi Hain naa the business tycoon Manish Malhotra

Admi : has main wahi ho

Main : toh phir apko Apne beti ne Ghar se kyun nikala

Manish : mere beto se dokhe se Mera Sara business Apne Naam Karwa diya Hain aur mujhe Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain kyunke unko paiso ka lalach tha ishi liye use dokhe se mujse sign karwaya ager toh todi sabar karte toh main apna Sara business unko de deta lakin Nahin in hone mujhe Ghar se Nikal diya Hain ab main Kya karo aur kaha Jao

Main : uncle is main main apki help kar Sakta ho

Manish : woh kese beta

Main : main apko paise Dunga business ke Liye ap ek new business Shuru karo paise Sara ka Sara main Dunga aur company bi mere Naam per Hogi


Manish : is main Mera Kya faida aur tumhare pass itne paise kaha se aye

Main : O aam (mango 🥭 ) khao gutliya mere liye chod do aur Rahi apki faide ki baat toh main apko us company ke 10 % main partner bana dunga aur ap hi company ke MD honge Apke pass sari power Hogi har ek decision Lena ka aur jab main dunya ke samne aaoga toh phir main honga aur Jab tak some pass power Hain ap is company ko us unchai tak ponchai ge ke jaha ajj aoki company Thi aur ab Apke beto ki ap Apne beto se badla le Lena us company ko barbad Karke bolo manzor Hain

Manish : woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin itna paise tumhare pass kese aye hain

Main : woh mere Apne paise Hain

Manish : tumhare pass itne sab paise kaha se AA gaye

Main : Meri family I'd ek secret Hain ishi liye woh Meri Apne Hain thek Hain naa

Manish : thek Hain Samaj gaya paise kaha Hain

Main : woh apko aj sham tak mil jayege Lekin main apko adress send kar Dunga aur haa paise toh Nahin Hain Lekin gold 🪙 aur diamond 💎 Hain mere pass woh dedu

Manish : haa de do main Sab thek kar dunga

Main : okay apko aj sham tak mil jayega ap ****hotel AA Jana okay

Manish : okay main AA jaoga

Phir Manish waha se Chala gaya aur naksh wahi reh gaya aur Kuch soch ne laga

Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe update hue ayi aur Naksh ke body ke takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya




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Milte Hain agli update main

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Ager update PASAND aye toh like aur comment lazmi Karna thank you 🙏 🙏
Nice update withing for next
 

aj0062

New Member
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Update 1 ★
Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean 🌊) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna

Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊) main khud jata Hain


Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the

Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the

Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain

Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho

Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain


Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu

Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain

Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho


Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain

Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath

Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona

Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga

Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain

Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho

Sab : jee hum jante Hain

Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain


Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean 🌊) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold 🪙 se bara hua the

Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake


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Woh ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) se Nikal kar Chala gaya aur sabse pahle usne kapde change Kiya aur phir ek gold ki dukan per Chala gaya aur dukan wale se bola

Ladka : hello sir Kya ap gold lenge

Dukan wala : haa kyun Nahin bechna Hain Kya

Ladka : jee ha bechna Hain yeh raha

Yeh bolkar ladka gold dukan wale ko deta Hain jab dukan wala check karta Hain toh ladka se Bolta hain

Dukan wala : tumhare pass yeh kaha se aya Hain

Ladka (jhoot bolte hue ) : yeh mere dada jee ka Hain aur bi bohut sara rakha hua Hain Lekin filhal mujhe sirf yeh bechna Hain

Dukan wala : thek Hain yeh gold bilkul original Hain aisa gold Maine apni life main. Kabhi Nahin dekha Hain

Ladka : Kya Sacha main toh Kitne paise honge iske

Dukan wala : is ek ant ki qeemat 10 lakh Hain thek Hain

Ladka : okay sir ao mujhe paise de dejiye

Dukan wala : thek Hain ager aur bi bechna Hain toh woh bi mujhe de Dena main usko bi karid lunga okay

Ladka : okay sirf

Dukan wala : yeh lo beta pure 10 lakh Hain thek Hain naa

Ladka : okay uncle main chalta ho

Dukan wala : are are 1 minute rok Jao

Ladka : Kya hua uncle

Dukan wala : Tum toh jante ho aj Kal ke halat toh Kahi aisa na ho ke bad main police aakar tang kare ishi liye apna naam aur address likwa do

Ladka : okay Mera Naam NAKSH Agerwal Hain aur main ******* society main rehta ho

Dukan wala : are wah main bi uski bagal wali society main rehta ho

Naksh : okay uncle phir bad main mulakat Hogi bye

Dukan wala : thek Hain beta bye

Phir Naksh waha se Nikal jata Hain

Ab aghe Kahani Naksh ki jubani Jab 3rd person ki zarorat Hogi toh waha per 3rd person AA jayega

Main jab waha se Chala gaya toh bohut khush tha kyunke ek gold ki ant ke 10 lakh Jo mile the toh waha toh samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) bara hua Hain pata nahin Kitna paise honge un sabke

Main (mam me ) : Lekin Jo bi ho mujhe jald se jald Sara ka Sara gold waha se Nikal Lena chahiye kyunke Meri hi tarha waha koi aur bi jaa Sakta Hain Lekin Nikalo kese itna Sara gold aur ager Nikal bi Liya toh rakhoga kaha yeh Samaj Nahin AA Rahi hain

Abhi main yeh sab Soch hi Raha the keere Kano main Kisi ki rone ki awaz ayi yeh koi admi ke rone ki awaz Thi jab Maine dekha toh park 🏞️ ki and main ek admi Zameen per beth kar to Raha Hain tab mujhe yad aya ke Kuch der pahle toh main bi ishi tarha roo Raha tha tab Kisi ne mujse Nahin pocha ke kyun roo Rahe ho Lekin Kya mujhe us admi ki madad Karni Chahiye Kya has Karni Chahiye

Yeh soch kar main uske pass Chala gaya aur us admi ke pass ponch kar use bola

Main : uncle ap roo kyun Rahe ho

Admi : Kuch Nahin beta apni Kismat per roo Raha ho aur koi bast nahin Hain

Main : koi problem hain toh bolo main tumhari help kar Sakta ho

Admi : Nahin Tum Meri help Nahin kar sakte Tum Jao Yaha se

Main : uncle duk bantbe se Kam hota Hain ao bolo Kya baat hain

Admi : mujhe mere beto aur unki bewiyo ne Apne hi Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain

Main : Soo sad uncle bay tha way maine apko Kahi dekha Hain

Admi : tv per news main dekha Hoga

Main : haa yad AA gaya Hain al wahi Hain naa the business tycoon Manish Malhotra

Admi : has main wahi ho

Main : toh phir apko Apne beti ne Ghar se kyun nikala

Manish : mere beto se dokhe se Mera Sara business Apne Naam Karwa diya Hain aur mujhe Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain kyunke unko paiso ka lalach tha ishi liye use dokhe se mujse sign karwaya ager toh todi sabar karte toh main apna Sara business unko de deta lakin Nahin in hone mujhe Ghar se Nikal diya Hain ab main Kya karo aur kaha Jao

Main : uncle is main main apki help kar Sakta ho

Manish : woh kese beta

Main : main apko paise Dunga business ke Liye ap ek new business Shuru karo paise Sara ka Sara main Dunga aur company bi mere Naam per Hogi


Manish : is main Mera Kya faida aur tumhare pass itne paise kaha se aye

Main : O aam (mango 🥭 ) khao gutliya mere liye chod do aur Rahi apki faide ki baat toh main apko us company ke 10 % main partner bana dunga aur ap hi company ke MD honge Apke pass sari power Hogi har ek decision Lena ka aur jab main dunya ke samne aaoga toh phir main honga aur Jab tak some pass power Hain ap is company ko us unchai tak ponchai ge ke jaha ajj aoki company Thi aur ab Apke beto ki ap Apne beto se badla le Lena us company ko barbad Karke bolo manzor Hain

Manish : woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin itna paise tumhare pass kese aye hain

Main : woh mere Apne paise Hain

Manish : tumhare pass itne sab paise kaha se AA gaye

Main : Meri family I'd ek secret Hain ishi liye woh Meri Apne Hain thek Hain naa

Manish : thek Hain Samaj gaya paise kaha Hain

Main : woh apko aj sham tak mil jayege Lekin main apko adress send kar Dunga aur haa paise toh Nahin Hain Lekin gold 🪙 aur diamond 💎 Hain mere pass woh dedu

Manish : haa de do main Sab thek kar dunga

Main : okay apko aj sham tak mil jayega ap ****hotel AA Jana okay

Manish : okay main AA jaoga

Phir Manish waha se Chala gaya aur naksh wahi reh gaya aur Kuch soch ne laga

Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe update hue ayi aur Naksh ke body ke takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya




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ajaysingh 2345

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Update 1 ★
Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean 🌊) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna

Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊) main khud jata Hain


Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the

Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the

Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain

Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho

Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain


Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu

Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain

Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho


Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain

Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath

Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona

Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga

Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain

Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho

Sab : jee hum jante Hain

Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain


Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean 🌊) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold 🪙 se bara hua the

Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake


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Milte Hain agli update main
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Guys please support Karna is story ko bi aur Meri dusri story ko bi and week main 2 update iske ayege aur 2 update us story ke thank you 🙏 👍
Nice update 💯💯💯💯💯❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹
 

ajaysingh 2345

New Member
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14
★ Update 2 ★


Woh ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) se Nikal kar Chala gaya aur sabse pahle usne kapde change Kiya aur phir ek gold ki dukan per Chala gaya aur dukan wale se bola

Ladka : hello sir Kya ap gold lenge

Dukan wala : haa kyun Nahin bechna Hain Kya

Ladka : jee ha bechna Hain yeh raha

Yeh bolkar ladka gold dukan wale ko deta Hain jab dukan wala check karta Hain toh ladka se Bolta hain

Dukan wala : tumhare pass yeh kaha se aya Hain

Ladka (jhoot bolte hue ) : yeh mere dada jee ka Hain aur bi bohut sara rakha hua Hain Lekin filhal mujhe sirf yeh bechna Hain

Dukan wala : thek Hain yeh gold bilkul original Hain aisa gold Maine apni life main. Kabhi Nahin dekha Hain

Ladka : Kya Sacha main toh Kitne paise honge iske

Dukan wala : is ek ant ki qeemat 10 lakh Hain thek Hain

Ladka : okay sir ao mujhe paise de dejiye

Dukan wala : thek Hain ager aur bi bechna Hain toh woh bi mujhe de Dena main usko bi karid lunga okay

Ladka : okay sirf

Dukan wala : yeh lo beta pure 10 lakh Hain thek Hain naa

Ladka : okay uncle main chalta ho

Dukan wala : are are 1 minute rok Jao

Ladka : Kya hua uncle

Dukan wala : Tum toh jante ho aj Kal ke halat toh Kahi aisa na ho ke bad main police aakar tang kare ishi liye apna naam aur address likwa do

Ladka : okay Mera Naam NAKSH Agerwal Hain aur main ******* society main rehta ho

Dukan wala : are wah main bi uski bagal wali society main rehta ho

Naksh : okay uncle phir bad main mulakat Hogi bye

Dukan wala : thek Hain beta bye

Phir Naksh waha se Nikal jata Hain

Ab aghe Kahani Naksh ki jubani Jab 3rd person ki zarorat Hogi toh waha per 3rd person AA jayega

Main jab waha se Chala gaya toh bohut khush tha kyunke ek gold ki ant ke 10 lakh Jo mile the toh waha toh samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) bara hua Hain pata nahin Kitna paise honge un sabke

Main (mam me ) : Lekin Jo bi ho mujhe jald se jald Sara ka Sara gold waha se Nikal Lena chahiye kyunke Meri hi tarha waha koi aur bi jaa Sakta Hain Lekin Nikalo kese itna Sara gold aur ager Nikal bi Liya toh rakhoga kaha yeh Samaj Nahin AA Rahi hain

Abhi main yeh sab Soch hi Raha the keere Kano main Kisi ki rone ki awaz ayi yeh koi admi ke rone ki awaz Thi jab Maine dekha toh park 🏞️ ki and main ek admi Zameen per beth kar to Raha Hain tab mujhe yad aya ke Kuch der pahle toh main bi ishi tarha roo Raha tha tab Kisi ne mujse Nahin pocha ke kyun roo Rahe ho Lekin Kya mujhe us admi ki madad Karni Chahiye Kya has Karni Chahiye

Yeh soch kar main uske pass Chala gaya aur us admi ke pass ponch kar use bola

Main : uncle ap roo kyun Rahe ho

Admi : Kuch Nahin beta apni Kismat per roo Raha ho aur koi bast nahin Hain

Main : koi problem hain toh bolo main tumhari help kar Sakta ho

Admi : Nahin Tum Meri help Nahin kar sakte Tum Jao Yaha se

Main : uncle duk bantbe se Kam hota Hain ao bolo Kya baat hain

Admi : mujhe mere beto aur unki bewiyo ne Apne hi Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain

Main : Soo sad uncle bay tha way maine apko Kahi dekha Hain

Admi : tv per news main dekha Hoga

Main : haa yad AA gaya Hain al wahi Hain naa the business tycoon Manish Malhotra

Admi : has main wahi ho

Main : toh phir apko Apne beti ne Ghar se kyun nikala

Manish : mere beto se dokhe se Mera Sara business Apne Naam Karwa diya Hain aur mujhe Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain kyunke unko paiso ka lalach tha ishi liye use dokhe se mujse sign karwaya ager toh todi sabar karte toh main apna Sara business unko de deta lakin Nahin in hone mujhe Ghar se Nikal diya Hain ab main Kya karo aur kaha Jao

Main : uncle is main main apki help kar Sakta ho

Manish : woh kese beta

Main : main apko paise Dunga business ke Liye ap ek new business Shuru karo paise Sara ka Sara main Dunga aur company bi mere Naam per Hogi


Manish : is main Mera Kya faida aur tumhare pass itne paise kaha se aye

Main : O aam (mango 🥭 ) khao gutliya mere liye chod do aur Rahi apki faide ki baat toh main apko us company ke 10 % main partner bana dunga aur ap hi company ke MD honge Apke pass sari power Hogi har ek decision Lena ka aur jab main dunya ke samne aaoga toh phir main honga aur Jab tak some pass power Hain ap is company ko us unchai tak ponchai ge ke jaha ajj aoki company Thi aur ab Apke beto ki ap Apne beto se badla le Lena us company ko barbad Karke bolo manzor Hain

Manish : woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin itna paise tumhare pass kese aye hain

Main : woh mere Apne paise Hain

Manish : tumhare pass itne sab paise kaha se AA gaye

Main : Meri family I'd ek secret Hain ishi liye woh Meri Apne Hain thek Hain naa

Manish : thek Hain Samaj gaya paise kaha Hain

Main : woh apko aj sham tak mil jayege Lekin main apko adress send kar Dunga aur haa paise toh Nahin Hain Lekin gold 🪙 aur diamond 💎 Hain mere pass woh dedu

Manish : haa de do main Sab thek kar dunga

Main : okay apko aj sham tak mil jayega ap ****hotel AA Jana okay

Manish : okay main AA jaoga

Phir Manish waha se Chala gaya aur naksh wahi reh gaya aur Kuch soch ne laga

Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe update hue ayi aur Naksh ke body ke takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Milte Hain agli update main

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Ager update PASAND aye toh like aur comment lazmi Karna thank you 🙏 🙏
Nice update withing for next 💯💯💯💯💯❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹
 
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