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Koshish karoga Lekin pic aur gif kaha se lao yeh toh batao please jaisa main Chahta ho yahi se jab Kisi powerfull villain kaBhai pic add karna
Congratulations for new thread★ Update 1 ★
Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna
Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean) main khud jata Hain
Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the
Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the
Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain
Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho
Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain
Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu
Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain
Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho
Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain
Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath
Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona
Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga
Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain
Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho
Sab : jee hum jante Hain
Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain
Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold
se bara hua the
Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake
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Milte Hain agli update main
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya ha aapne★ Update 1 ★
Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna
Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean) main khud jata Hain
Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the
Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the
Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain
Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho
Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain
Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu
Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain
Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho
Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain
Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath
Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona
Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga
Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain
Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho
Sab : jee hum jante Hain
Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain
Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold
se bara hua the
Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake
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Milte Hain agli update main
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Guys please support Karna is story ko bi aur Meri dusri story ko bi and week main 2 update iske ayege aur 2 update us story ke thank you![]()
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Thank youBahut hi badhiya update diya ha aapne
Agar kahani likhni aati hai, aur kahani likhna chahte ho..???Koshish karoga Lekin pic aur gif kaha se lao yeh toh batao please jaisa main Chahta ho yahi se jab Kisi powerfull villain ka