Romance 𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗞𝗶𝗻𝗴'𝘀 𝗚𝗮𝗺𝗯𝗶𝘁

[Werewolf]

Index :

Update 1 | Update 2 | Update 3
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[mistyvixen]

Yeah. Humor will be occasional now. Things will get intense so the narration would be more like calculating and analysing based. But I'll try to add it wherever it's possible.

Yeah, write it at your owne pace and idk there should be things like likes target on this one they are good for fantasy and incest stories here... continue this one of if want something you can show later as apart from majorly incest theme based stories

 

[Werewolf]

Yeah, write it at your owne pace and idk there should be things like likes target on this one they are good for fantasy and incest stories here... continue this one of if want something you can show later as apart from majorly incest theme based stories

I'm not setting any target for this one. And, I don't think people are reading it. (Because the updates got late.)

So, hardly any activity here. This one is tough for me to write because I have to undergo those memories again and again to remember what transpired. And, I don't wanna do that. But, still... I'm doing it in order to write this. Of course, the dialogues are recreated. They aren't exact same dialogues. (No one has such sharp memory.) But the things which are happening.... (Which happened) They are as it is.

 

[JaideepRaj]

Gotta reread the previous updates

 

[dc jutt]

Update.....

 

[Evaran Eternity]

Review ki shuruwaat ki jaye.

Interesting, interesting.
Bagair erotic scene ke baad bhi, uff… update thoda erotic feeling de gaya, khaaskar bathroom scene. Maine nahi socha tha baat itni jaldi yahan tak pahunch jayegi, wo bhi Rachit ki taraf se. Shakt launda aakhir pigal hi gaya update ki ending mein.

Kabhi lagta hai Prerna Rachit ko phansa rahi hai, to kabhi lagta hai Khushi parda ke peeche rehkar innocent ban ke Rachit ka game na baja de. Waise is update ko dekh kar to yahi lagta hai ki Khushi madam ke dil ke andar kuch feelings to hain.

“Prerna yahan humaare liye sab kuch manage karne ke liye nahi hai. Smiles Hai na?”

Ye lines kaafi kick karti hain. Isse ye samajh aata hai ki Khushi ne kuch lamba soch kar hi number manga hai.
Along with that, yahan Prerna ka zikr aana thoda sandheh paida karta hai. Kya is samay bhi Khushi Prerna ko yaad kar rahi hai?

Story ki shuruwaat se jis tarah humne Prerna ko observe kiya hai, wo shuru se surprise deti aayi hai. Pehle propose, phir ekdum se bold move. Video call mein nude hona itni jaldi kaun karta hai

Agar Rachit ki taraf se relationship confirmation aa gaya hota, to ye itna vichitra move nahi lagta. Par yahan bina relationship ke, unsure rehte hue bhi itna daring move… kaafi odd lagta hai.
Maybe Prerna ne yahan jaan-bujhkar smart act kiya ho. Socha ho ki agar wo Rachit ki ye demand poori kar de, to Rachit proposal accept kar lega, aur baad mein Rachit ka bada wala katega.

Main ye bhi soch raha tha jis tarah sabko lagta hai ki Prerna Rachit ka kategi, agar sach mein Prerna genuine love nikle aur katne ke liye Khushi ho, to wo absolute cinema moment hoga.
Waise agar Rachit ko dhoka ya jo bhi milta hai, wo bina wajah ke nahi milega. Kuch na kuch aisa zaroor hua hoga jiske chalte Prerna wajah bani ho.

Kahin aisa to nahi ki Prerna un psycho logon mein se ho jinki ajeeb fantasies hoti hain? Jaise logon ko bura chahna, unhe beizzat karna, unhe humiliate karna, dhoka dena, tadpana…

Kyuki Rachit ki wajah se pehle koi takleef rahi ho, aisa lagta nahi. Agar aisa hota to Rachit ko kuch idea zaroor hota ki uski wajah se Prerna ne pehle suffer kiya hai.

Ya phir kahin aisa to nahi ki Rachit ki family ki wajah se Prerna ya uski family ne kabhi suffer kiya ho, aur ab badla lene ke liye Prerna ka istemal ho raha ho

(Thoda filmy lagta hai, aur mushkil hai, par story mein possibilities ignore bhi nahi ki ja sakti. Saari possibilities ko dhoondhna padega.)

Money factor yahan fit nahi baithta, kyuki Rachit na rich hai na poor, aur Prerna khud vakeel hai. To paisa wajah nahi lagta.

Ab aate hain Rachit par. Mujhe Rachit apne aap par thoda zyada confident, kahin-kahin overconfident laga khaaskar apni observation skills ko lekar.

Jaise aksar hota hai, jawani ki shuruwaat mein agar ladki muskurakar baat kar le, to ladka apne sapne saja leta hai. Kahin na kahin Rachit bhi isi dal-dal mein phansa.

Writing ki baat karna bekaar hai wo to hamesha perfect rehti hai. Ju ke liye bas itna hi keh sakta hoon ki kisi bhi tarah ka plot ho, wo use master level tak pahucha sakta hai.

Generally main romance nahi padhta, par ye eklauta romance hai jise main follow kar raha hoon.

Overall, ache updates aa rahe hain.
Waiting for the next one.

Ye review maine pehle notes mein rakha tha, par notes me kahin ghoom ho gaya tha. Isliye late diya.

Baadshah mein bhi kuch paragraphs bache hain. Unhe poora karke post karunga

Werewolf

 

[GHANSA23]

Index :

Update 1
Update 2
Update 3
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Ye kab likh dali bhaya mujhe to pata hi nahi tha
Or ye complete hai kya ya phir iske or bhi update ayenge
Mai bad me padunha bhaya adha adhura hai abhi story kam se kam 10 update hone do
Or isme emotion ka tadka dale rkhna jisse uper se pani aane chahiye
Baki niche se to bad me aana hi hai

 

[Werewolf]

Ye kab likh dali bhaya mujhe to pata hi nahi tha
Or ye complete hai kya ya phir iske or bhi update ayenge
Mai bad me padunha bhaya adha adhura hai abhi story kam se kam 10 update hone do
Or isme emotion ka tadka dale rkhna jisse uper se pani aane chahiye
Baki niche se to bad me aana hi hai

May me chalu kiya tha Bhai thread.
Yes. Iske updates aayenge but time lenge. Kyunki, abhi current story par zyada focus hai. Zyada updates ki nahi hai ye story. Suspense + psychological mind games type hai. Erotica bhi rahega.

 

[GHANSA23]

May me chalu kiya tha Bhai thread.
Yes. Iske updates aayenge but time lenge. Kyunki, abhi current story par zyada focus hai. Zyada updates ki nahi hai ye story. Suspense + psychological mind games type hai. Erotica bhi rahega.

Ab story likho to emotional karde aise khatarnak scene rakhna bhaya ab jab padunga is story ko tab bataunga kaisa laga
Mai wo recap wala review dena nahi aata bhaya
Review k nam pe sab recap chep rahe
Baki apan to padega jo ju likho

 

[Werewolf]

Ab story likho to emotional karde aise khatarnak scene rakhna bhaya ab jab padunga is story ko tab bataunga kaisa laga
Mai wo recap wala review dena nahi aata bhaya
Review k nam pe sab recap chep rahe
Baki apan to padega jo ju likho

Wahi Review me jaise hi apan summary dekhta hai toh poora mood phuss ho jaata hai apna. Anyways, jab padhna ho padhne ka. Isko bhi jald se jald khatam karna padega.

 

[ayush01111]

Waiting for prena more love update