★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest - 2020 - Chit Chat & Discussion Thread ★☆★

[Damha]

Review Index Done Kahin kuch chhuta to nahi

Behan ki nath ka dard 2 baar add ho gya hai Edit ker do

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

nahi abhi parhni hai

Ye kya dost....aapne read tak nhi ki aur demand kar di....not fair.....?

Well....start to fir bhi hogi.....ok

Thanks buddy......

 

[Damha]

Ye kya dost....aapne read tak nhi ki aur demand kar di....not fair.....?

Well....start to fir bhi hogi.....ok

Thanks buddy......

Abhi ap ki bari ane me time hai aur main ne demand nahi ki suggestion dia tha

 

[KR$NA]

Behan ki nath ka dard 2 baar add ho gya hai Edit ker do

Theek to hai

 

[Damha]

Theek to hai

Entry thread me check karo 2 baar add huwi hai no 25 aur no 20 per jis wajha se review thread me beech wali stories ka index nahi bana hai

 

[KR$NA]

Entry thread me check karo 2 baar add huwi hai no 25 aur no 20 per jis wajha se review thread me beech wali stories ka index nahi bana hai

Done

 

[KR$NA]

Review Index Updated Koi err ho toh bata dena guys

 

[KR$NA]

Kya baat hain aaj kal pathakon ke sameeksha par tippni maare wale log bhi idhar xf aane lage hai
pratiyogita mein khud sameeksha de janab ..

Kaun?

 

[Damha]

Done

Thanks

 

[Naina]

Sahi kaha naina....waise ankit bhai ye story likhne wale hai.....

Aur jaha tak har update me suspense ka bola....to saayad aapne ankit bhai ki story read nhi ki....nhi to ye kahti hi nhi....

Uski story ke har update ke end me suspense jaroor rahta hai....aur aage ja kar suspense se dimaag ki dahi ho jati hai....are aaj-kal to lassi ban rahi hai......

To aap suspense ki taraf se befikr raho....wo to itna milega ki sir ghoom jayga....

Isiliye ankit ki story kam log hi dekhte hai....wahi...jo dimaag chala sake...baki sab to chutiyape me hi khush rahte hai.........

"Pyar ki bhookh" kahani k writer hai.. xp pe 2015 ke end mein suru kiye the shayad par complete nahin kar paye... ab phir se restart ki hai us story ko