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Punit Kumar Bhai ye Complete haiBhai ya story bech Mai chorkar dusra story, kuch hazam nahi hota, 1 story to complete koro
Ye sirf ek Holi Special Adventure tha
Par aapka koi sujhav ho toh jarur batayie main aage likhna chahunga
Punit Kumar Bhai ye Complete haiBhai ya story bech Mai chorkar dusra story, kuch hazam nahi hota, 1 story to complete koro
Aapke Suggestion bahut badiya hai bhai, specially Mahendra, Maalti k Bhai aur Salma wala.. main espe jarur likhungaMonu bhai yaha bhi kuchh shuru karo likhna. Maa bete par kuchh likhne ki soch rahe the fir thande baste me daal diya. Monu aur Malti par bahut kuchh likha ja sakta hai. Aap to kalam ke jadugar hai jhapat se ek short story likh daliye yahan. Sath main upanyas me malti ke pichhle dino me lautate hue Mahendra Jheth Ji ke sath Malti Maa ke sambandh par likhiye kaise mahendra se sambandh bane kya kya hua. Malti ke bhai ke sath uske sambandh par jiske naam par Harshita ne malti se maje liye the aur sath me shadi se purv Malti aur uski saheli salma ki ashleel masti aur uska ashiq ke sath sambandho par kuchh likhiye purane itihas par najar dalte hue. Ek request.
Manu Bhai maa beta ka nafrat sa pyar Tak ka safar esa koi story lekha jo v story es subject par lekha hi aj tak comple Nehi kya hi Manu Bhai app es subject ke uper socea jarur ea Mera request hai.Aapke Suggestion bahut badiya hai bhai, specially Mahendra, Maalti k Bhai aur Salma wala.. main espe jarur likhunga
Sabse jada khushi toh es baat ki hai, ki aapko ye sab yaad hai
Rahi baat raha pe koi nayi short story likhne ki toh man mera bhi hai, par kuch acha mil nahi raha
Main bhi es baar yaha pe pure Maa Bete ki incest romantic story hi likhna chahta hu
Bus koi acha sa plot mil jaye toh jarur likhna suru kar dunga
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Bhai aap jis Story ka reference de rahe hai wo maine padi nahi hai, par main koshish karunga pehle wo padu taki samajh saku ki aap kiya chahte haiManu Bhai maa beta ka nafrat sa pyar Tak ka safar esa koi story lekha jo v story es subject par lekha hi aj tak comple Nehi kya hi Manu Bhai app es subject ke uper socea jarur ea Mera request hai.
Bhai aap jis Story ka reference de rahe hai wo maine padi nahi hai, par main koshish karunga pehle wo padu taki samajh saku ki aap kiya chahte haiManu Bhai maa beta ka nafrat sa pyar Tak ka safar esa koi story lekha jo v story es subject par lekha hi aj tak comple Nehi kya hi Manu Bhai app es subject ke uper socea jarur ea Mera request hai.
Bhai eak story Kam bata raha hu ' teri tadap jaldi khatam nahi hogi'Bhai aap jis Story ka reference de rahe hai wo maine padi nahi hai, par main koshish karunga pehle wo padu taki samajh saku ki aap kiya chahte hai
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