Fantasy कालदूत(पूर्ण)

[Naik]

Kal se regular updates suru ho jayenge

Ok bhai intizar rehega

 

[Adirshi]

nice update .to ye 3 dost hai rohit ,santosh aur vikrant ( vikram hai ya vikrant ??) ..
teeno rajnagar jaa rahe hai apni kuch purani yaade taaza karne jaha par log goom ho rahe hai ..
waise sumitra devi ka bhajan gaana aur tabhi raghav ki ringtone bajna majedar tha .

lagta hai kuch purani baate yaad karenge teeno dost aur rohit sach batane ki soch raha hai vikrant ko ki uska affair tha nandini ke saath ..

dekhte hai raman kuch pata laga paata hai yaa nahi gumshuda logo ka ...

shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

nice update bhai waiting for next update

shukriya bhai agla update jald hi

 

[Adirshi]

nice update bro............new characters ki story m entry ho gyi.........mtlb story past se present m aa gyi.........

shukriya bhai ab present main hi chalegi story

 

[Adirshi]

Bhai mujhe long stories pasand hai jo 200 update se uper ho or word me bhi bari ho
But fantasy ho horror ho
Kya apki story long or update bare or regular hai

bhai story kitni lambi hogi ye main nahi bata sakta abhi par ha ab se update regular aayenge ye confirm hai
thanks sath bane rahe

 

[Adirshi]

very very very good and nice updated waiting for next updates waiting for next updates waiting for next updates waiting for next updates waiting for next updates

shukriya bhai agla update jald hi

 

[Adirshi]

भाग 3

नए नए किरदारों की शुरुआत हो रही
चलो अच्छा है जल्द से जल्द सबसे परिचय हो जाये

रोहित सन्तोष विक्रम तीन पुराने मित्र जो एक दूसरे से मिलेंगे राजनगर में,

दूसरी तरफ राघव रमन और अनिरुद्ध का सीन
अभी इस पर कुछ नही लिखना
इस अपडेट में बस इंट्रो ही था

नए अपडेट का इंतजार ​

is review ke liye shukriya swati ji

 

[Moon Light]

हुजूर आते आते बहुत देर करदी.... !!!

 

[Adirshi]

Short but nice update naye characters ka introduction thoda brief hona chahiye tha
Dekhnewali baat hogi ki ye naye character kon hai inka kaal sena ya birju k pariwar se koi sambandh hai aur ye nandini k rohit k sath sambadh the toh usne vikram se shadi kyun ki
for next update

shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

nice start

awesome update

good update

thank you very much