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Bhai aur kitna intezar...?? Please ab restart kr digiye story ko🙏

Welcome back brother... Bta nhi skta ki kitni khushi ho rhi hai aapko wapas dekh kr...Kafi dino se aapke iss ek msg ka intezar roj krta tha joki aaj jake khatam hua🥹🥳 Ha lekin ye ummeed jarur thi aap wapas aaoge....Thanks a lot for coming back🙌 Take your time and continue this masterpiece...

As always a very great update brother... Btw, yha Derek ka age 18-19 ke aaspas hona kuch samajh nhi aaya. Kyuki Aarav to kewal 10 sal ke liye gayab hua tha (Earth ke time ke hisab se), aur iss update se ye to clear ho gya ki Derek ka birth Aarav ke jane ke bad hi hua hoga. To iss hisab se to...

Bhai yrr itni choti choti bato pe itna gussa mt dikhaya kro.... Ye writer pichle kafi dino se consistently jis time pe update ka bola hai uss time pe update de rhe hai. Agar ek bar ek din ka late ho hi gya to usme itna kya bechain hona. Writer ke hardwork ko motivate nhi kr skte agar to aise...

First of all , Welcome Back Brother:heart: Ye story iss forum ki meri one of the favorite story me se hai to itne din isse wapas dekh kr kafi shi lga😌 As always a very brilliant update Ye update whi se suru hua jha se pichla update khatam hua tha yani Level up tower me....Well bhut din bad...

Once again very brilliant updates brother... Sorry pichle update ka review na de paya😅, Dono hi updates abhi read kiye aur dono hi upates kafi kamal ke the... So Abhay and Meera have shifted to Mumbai...Most probably abhi to aisa hi lg rha hai ki Mumbai hi main city hone wali hai iss story ki...

Are ha!! Ispe to dhyan hi nhi diya😅😂🤣

Once again a very great, informative as well as shocking update.... With this update Chinatown arc come to an end....Ye pura arc hi mostly System se related rha. Different System Holders , unke bich me ladai , so many new cards and skills sb kuch dekhne ko mila iss arc me....And the most...

Update 50:declare:

Welcome Back Brother:welcome1: So happy to see you back

So finally the legendary fight ended with this insane and biggest update.... As always kafi kuch dekhne ko mila iss update me....Jaw long aakhir kar mara gya aur ek aur nye system holder ka bhi entry ho gya hai Renshu aur new system holder ka fight as expected utna hi nhi tha jitna hme phle...

Very good and well written update brother 👏 Your writing style has been the best part of your story for me in both the updates. Everything was written with complete detailing. Jha tk bat kre update ki to This was only the second update of the story yet the thrill has started to begin. Maybe iss...

Congratulations on starting new story brother:congrats: Phla update padh kr to yhi feel hua ki ye story maximum stories ke tarah kewal 'sex focused' story nhi hone wala hai. Aur ummed hai ki ho bhi aisa hi.:) Btw, Story me supernatural stuff bhi hone wala hai??

That's the reason brother why I never ask for update. Everyone has to understand that writers are writing story on this forum just because of their passion. Aur tumlog khud bhi socho bhai kuch earn to hone wala hai nhi yha se to jahir si bat koi bhi aadmi apne job or daily life ko hi n priority...

Bhai kya hi likh dala hai ye!!! Hr update ko padhne ke bad ek question aata hai mn me ki ab isse badhiya kya hi hoga pr phir agle update me hi answer mil jata hai ki ye hoga Without any doubt this is the greatest fight scene I have ever read...And for writing such updates a massive :respekt:for...

Welcome back @Flymovers777 bhai Bhut sandar likhte ho aap aur ye story iss forum ki one of the most unique story me se hai. Mtlb koi bhi faltu ki chiz nhi aur reality ke bhut krib Iss story ko maine Feb ke starting me start kiya tha padhna aur 27-28 feb ke lagbhag latest update tk pahucha tha...

it's ok bro... waise ye bat mai khud bhi janta tha ki mere revo. Ka reply aaiega hi aaiega bhale thora late aaie... kyuki bhut time se follow kr rha hu aapko aur itna to janta hu ki aap sare review ka hi reply dete ho.

Ye yha kya nya chutiyapa chalu kiya gya hai do (ya ek hi) chutiyo dwara🤣 khaskar ye Dark RIder dwara I mean criticism is not a bad thing...It definitely helps the writer in improving and correcting his mistakes....But the thing is that , koi logic bhi to ho usme....Ye padh ke to aisa lga jaise...

AS ALWAYS A GREAT UPDATE BROTHER.... Bhut lamba intezar krna pda iss update ke liye prr aise update ke liye ye itntezar bhi worth it tha... An update full of action First of all sorry bro itne late review ke liye...Exams me busy chal rha tha Iss update me 2 main fight scene dekhne ko mile aur...

Happy Birthday Bhai❤️