Recent content by Game_changer

Kya? Don't tag me unnecessary.. I'll report u then.

Nice start... Ummeed hai jald hi kahani ke agle panne khulenge

Lekhak hero ke 18+ hone ki pratiksha me... Kahani ab tak to thik hi hai.. Lekin waise koi mor nhi aa rahe.. Jise padh kar aage jaannne ki utsukta badhe.

Badhiya update tha.. Waise kuch naya ya khulasa to nhi hua.. Lekin haa aapne ek naye dushman ko banane ki taiyari puri achhi kar li hai. Dekhte hai ye waqt kis or le jata hai iss kahani ko..

Bhai ❌ Kalpana aapki hai aapse behtar use kaun darsha payega? Reader opinion nhi... Apna perspective dete hai sirf aur writer ki galtiya bata sakte hai. Bas.

Kahani ko khicha ja raha hai iss waqt shayad.. Update bilkul sahi tha isme koi galti nhi hai, lekin kahani pichle update se bilkul bhi aage hi nhi badhi.. Ye dono update ek saath hote to behtar hota... Kyunki har update ek kahani ke naye mor ko dikhata hai, ya naye rishte ko.. Yaha aisa kuch...

Ek aur badhiya update.. Yakeenan wo laas abhay ki nhi hogi.. Lekin jiski bhi laas hai iska matlab gaon me koi qatil bhi jarur ho sakta hai. Kahani me rahasya laya ja sakta hai iss mor par.. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

@DEVIL MAXIMUM don't listen to anyone.. Write in ur style in ur way.. Mujhe tumhari kalpana padhni hai na ki kisi aur ki.. Bas aap puri mehnat kijiye.. Dhanyavaad mahoday.

Shuruaat to sahi hai..Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..

I guess, bete ne hi truck se apne baap ko maara hai past me jakar... Reason:- unknown, most likely cheating aur revenge ke liye