Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[umesh Rathod]

Salty Bhai ek suggestion hai agar aap intimate seen mai pura explain na kre to acha rhega kyuki ye adultery story nhi hai to...
Aur words bhi waste ho rhe hai pura sex seen explain krne mai......

Agar apko lagta hai ki mai Galt hu to aapko jaise sahi Lage aap likh sakte hai ham aapke sath hai....... Keep writing keep growing

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Yrr ye problem tab aati thi jb twins hote the...

Have you even read the story or not?

Ye problem ati hai jab Ek Qi User Non-Qi User ko pregnant karta hai! Kyu ke uski Qi aur Spirit me balance bigad jaata hai.

Sprit clan wale logo ne pehle bhi to jabarjasti sambandh banaye the.....aisa hi bataya tha shayad...

Yes...Lekin usko dhayan se padho, Unhone ladkiyon ko kidnap ker ke unhe Qi User banaya tha...Unme se kuch zinda bachti thi aur baaki process me he mar jati thi.

Is baat se tou mere maan main bhi a raha hai. Maybe cure ban chuka hai lakin abhi tak story main yah charcha nahi hoi.

Aarav: Mnemosyne's Gaze ki kuch limits hai! Unki sabhi memories ko daikhna bhi possible nahi tha.


Parth: Aisa kya?... Ye to phir tumhare liye bhi surprise ho ga! Varsha Ji ne tumhare blood se cure bana liya tha... Aarohi, Urvi aur meri beti hai.


Aarav: Huh?

Charcha huwi hai, Ab beech me dialogue skip karo gye to yaad kya rahe ga?

Kyu ke Arav ka beta Derek bhi to un bacho jaisa e hai. Arav aik Qi User hai aur Derek ki Maa (abhi naam bhul raha hu) Qi Holder nahi thi. Phir bhi Derek thik hai usy baakio jaise koi problem nahi hoi. Tou maybe Cure ban chuka hai.

Kyu ke Aarav ek Soul Purifier hai! Soul Purifier kisi ki bhi soul ko purify aur usko balance ker sakta hai, Soul Purifier introduce karwate huwe ye bhi bataya gaya tha ke wo he sirf kisi Non-Qi User ke saath bhi sambandh bana sakte the.

Aarav ke blood se cure ban sakta hai to uska khud ka bacha kaise uska shikar ho ga?

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Salty Bhai ek suggestion hai agar aap intimate seen mai pura explain na kre to acha rhega kyuki ye adultery story nhi hai to...
Aur words bhi waste ho rhe hai pura sex seen explain krne mai......

Agar apko lagta hai ki mai Galt hu to aapko jaise sahi Lage aap likh sakte hai ham aapke sath hai....... Keep writing keep growing

Actually main agar ye story kisi aur platform per likhta to skip he karta! Lekin yanha adult forum per uske saath chalne ki koshish ki thi... Kanhi aur to sirf ye likh deta ke unke beech kuch huwa aur aage plot ko continue karta.

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Good update and I love tinker bell if possible create a image for her

AI try kiya tha! Lekin usme feel nahi thi, Tinkerbell ke liye design main ne daala huwa hai, Update 41 ya 42 me uski image bhi daali thi aur aage uski human form me bhi image daali thi...Delete ho gayi kya?

 

[Looteraaa]

Have you even read the story or not?

Nahi padhi!!!

Yes...Lekin usko dhayan se padho, Unhone ladkiyon ko kidnap ker ke unhe Qi User banaya tha...Unme se kuch zinda bachti thi aur baaki process me he mar jati thi.

Ek comment ki wajah se hi ye confusion hua tha pata nhi tumne uss launde k comment pr kb reply diya... Agr time pr dete....wese to m sabke nhi padhta lekin uspe tumhara jawab jarur padhta..

Isiliye shayad likha tha...uspe v dhyan dena tha

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Nahi padhi!!!


Ek comment ki wajah se hi ye confusion hua tha pata nhi tumne uss launde k comment pr kb reply diya... Agr time pr dete....wese to m sabke nhi padhta lekin uspe tumhara jawab jarur padhta..

Isiliye shayad likha tha...uspe v dhyan dena tha

Kiski baat ker rahe hai ap?

I think main ne reply kiya ho ga! Agar Ye Qi user's aur Non-Qi Users ki baat hai to ye baat ek baar huwi thi aur usko explain kiya tha, Ab yaad nahi ke kisko kiya tha.

 

[Looteraaa]

Kiski baat ker rahe hai ap?

I think main ne reply kiya ho ga! Agar Ye Qi user's aur Non-Qi Users ki baat hai to ye baat ek baar huwi thi aur usko explain kiya tha, Ab yaad nahi ke kisko kiya tha.

Hmnn kiya hi hoga... main kaha mana kar raha hu aakhir mere comment pr bhi to reply aaya hi tha thoda late hi sahi...

Agr wo mera comment hota to notification jaroor aa jaata ...... Chook gaya ....aapki explanation padhne se..


Main is story ke hi comments padhta hu wo bhi kabhi kabhar kyunki bohot sare ho jaate h.... Baaki kitni hi stories chalti h me update pe dhyan deta hu..

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Hmnn kiya hi hoga... main kaha mana kar raha hu aakhir mere comment pr bhi to reply aaya hi tha thoda late hi sahi...

Life busy chal rahi hai Ab update ke beech rest brainstorming ke liye nahi aur bhi kaam ke liye leta hu

Agr wo mera comment hota to notification jaroor aa jaata ...... Chook gaya ....aapki explanation padhne se..

Maybe...Main ne Details short rakhne ki koshish ki thi, Maybe kuch zyada he short ho gayi ya sab usko boring samajh ker skip ker gye, Lekin main ne sab update me he explain kiya tha.

Main is story ke comments kabhi kabhar padh leta hu...wo Bhi kuchh kyunki bohot sare ho jaate h

Main Reply late karta hu lekin sab reviews saath saath he padh leta hu... Reply bhi busy time me nahi de sakta, Agar kuch galat likh diya to confusion badh jati hai

 

[Akil]

Waiting for your next update bro

 

[umesh Rathod]

Actually main agar ye story kisi aur platform per likhta to skip he karta! Lekin yanha adult forum per uske saath chalne ki koshish ki thi... Kanhi aur to sirf ye likh deta ke unke beech kuch huwa aur aage plot ko continue karta.

Ok broo keep going waiting for next update