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Super sandar fantastic mind-blowing excellent work
Kar dunga Bhai. Status update karna hai Ava ka. Uske baad lagaunga.Werewolf bro apne ava ka stats update ni kia
Thanks man!First of all Welcome back Bhai![]()
Pari ne hint di hai already. Pari ke existence ko khatam kiya jaa sakta hai. Isliye baaki Pari Veer se thoda darrti hai. Siwae iss Pari ke. Ye completely trust rakhti hai.Baki jese update me dikhaya ki is vaali pari ka aur veer ka bond bohot khas hai aur vo Puri tarah se veer pr trust krti hai but baaki sab abhi bhi veer pr pura trust nahi krti aur unlogo ko veer se khatara bhi hai ab vo kya khatara hai vo aage pta chalega.
Umeedo par paani fir gaya.Uske baad veer aur Ava ka conversation jisme Ava ko kuch jyada hi ummide hai veer se aur last me veer ka Ghar aana .
More like... Veer ne use mana liya.Jese veer Ghar aaya toh uske liye situation kafi aasan ho gyi kyoki sirf kavya hi thi Ghar pr aur usne thode bohot nakhre krke veer ko mana liya .
Title poora read karne ka man. Interrogation ke aage (1) bhi toh likha hua tha. Iska matlab saaf tha ki iska agla bhaag bhi hoga. Aur, isi bhaag me sab toh milne se raha.Pr mene expect ye Kiya tha ki veer ka interrogation Puri family dwara liya jayega jab me update ka title read Kiya pr last me bhi vo Mila nahi.
Update bahut bada ho jaata agar sab ek hi me rakhta toh. Thoda thoda mind me feed karwana hai ju logo ke. Ek saath me woh hotch potch ho jaata hai aur adhiktar details dimag me yaad nahi rehti.Chalo koy nahi bhai but ye vala update meri bhavnao se nyay nahi kr paya pr koy nahi.
Thanks a lot man!Update achaa tha Ab Next Update me dekhte hai veer ke sath kya hota hai.
Good too see you back brother![]()
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Garofano ko nahi jaante kya man?
Ava aur Veer ka relationship sudharne me samay lagega. Lekin, hum antar dekh hi sakte hai. Kaafi tezi se woh ek dusre ke qareeb aa rahe hai. Ek samay tha jab Veer Ava ka naam sunane tak se chidh jaata tha. Par, ab woh use khud Mumbai leke aaya hai.nice beautiful and full of emotions update
veer jaha eva ko lekar mumbai pahuch gaya hai par usse thik se baat nahi kar raha hai
eva jo chahti hai veer ke saath uska relation sahi ho iisliye wo bhi veer ko time dena chahti hai
but mumbai me fir se aakar use appne dosto ki yaad bhi aa gayi jinse door hue zamana ho gaya
ab to veer hi sahra aur maksad dono hi eva ka hai
Agle bhaag me hume pata lag jayega. Veer aur Pari. Dono hi ek dusre se zyada derr naraaz nahi reh sakte.idhar pari ne bhi apna aur baaki pariyo ki baat batakar apni taraf se baat clear kar di
aur khud ki galti mankar sleep mode me chali gayi par veer ispar thoda over react kar gyaa
jiska usse baad me abhas hua
ab dekhte kya dono me fir se sulah kaise hoti hai
Woh personalities nahi hai ab bhai. Woh alag alag log hai. Ye purana belief tha ki alag alag personalities hai. Par ye galat saabit hua. Pari alag alag log hai. Woh ek vyakti nahi hai. Unke naam bhi alag alag ho. Par, filhal hum sabhi ko sirf Pari naam se hi bula rahe hai.veer ek akela abhi tak system owner hai jiske pas ek se jyada system personalities hai
Violet nahi. Ava!yeh shayd aage chalkar uske liye fayad rahega jab saari personalities ko veer par comlete trust ho jayega
violet ko bhi andaza ho gaya hai shayd veer ke question karne se is baat ka
Thanks a lot man.ab ghar me to war suru hone wala hai veer aur gharwalo ke beech me sawal jawab ko
suruat kavya ni ki hai aur ab baaki log aa gaye hai samne
dekhte veer kaise nikalta hai iss war se aur kaise manata hai sabhi ko
keep writing
your work rocksss
Pehle target toh poora karo.Next update kab ayega bhai