Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }

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KALYUG... Part 13...


( Who will Survive... )



Early Night... 11:10 PM...



Location... ***** Seher Shersing house...



....aaahhhh... Huhhh... Kon ho tum log... Aur hume iss tarah bandh kar kyun rakha hai... Aaahhh huhhhh mujhe chod do tumhe jo chahiye mai de dunga...


Thadddddd....


Tony... ( Gusse mai ) mujhe jo chahiye woh hai jawaab ek sawaal ka... ek sawaal ek jawab theek hai... Lekin usse pehle... Ummmm... Hannn mill gaya ek sec...



Tony uthte hue hall se kitchen ki taraf jata h.... Wohi hall mai Shersing uska beta bandhe hue the aur thodi dur hi Shersing ki patni Rama bhi bandhi hui thi... Ghar ke sabhi sadasyon ke chehre par darr tha ab kya hone waala h unke saath yehi soch rahe the...


Wanhi kamalnath ki Tony se alag hi darr ke halat kharab ho gayi usko kuch bolte nhi ban raha tha ab use Tony ko dekh Yashoda ki fikr ho rahi thi kaise woh 14 saal se iske saath rahi hogi... Kahi isne use kaid toh nahi kar rakha yeh darr uske man mai sata raha tha... Usse jald se jald Yashoda se milna tha magar yaha Tony TejSingh ko dhundne me madat kar raha Isliye abhi usne chupp rehna hi theek samjha... Pehle TejSingh se mill le uske baad Yashoda ko jald se jald wanha se le aunga... Yeh vichar uske Mann me aa rahe the tabhi Tony ek baar fir hall me aa jata h jiske hath me chaaku dekh woh dar jata hai aur aane waale Pal ki kalpana karne lagta hai kya hoga...



Wohi Tony sab cheezon ko nazarandaaz kar Shersing ke samne baithta hai... Uske haath mai chaku dekh Shersing ki halat batt se battarr hone lagti hai... Woh chatpatane lagta hai rote hue bheekh maangta hai beta aur Rama ki bhi halat kharab ho gayi unki aankhon mai bhi aansu aa gye the yeh soch kar shayad agla number unka ho...


Lekin Tony iss baat se koi fark nahi padd raha tha woh shant awastha mai Shersing ke paas baithta hai aur uske hath ko pakad chaku se uski ek ungli kaat deta hai...


Shersing ki cheenkh nikal jati hai woh chatptata hai magar bandhe hone ke karan kuch nahi kar pata... dheere dheere uska Rona band hota hai... Dusri taraf baaki log yeh dekh kar darr gaye Rama ka toh Saadi mai moot nikal gaya... Aur beta toh jaise sadme mai chala gya... Kamalnath bhi apne chehre par paseena ponch dar ko chupane me nakamyab ho raha tha...

Tony... ( Shanti ko toadte hue ) Ek sawal ek jawaab nahi toh dusri ungli... Agar pehli nahi katata toh shayad tu nahi batata ab dhyaan se sun... TejSingh kaha hai...



TejSingh ka naam sun Shersing ki halat kharab se aur khrab ho gayi thi use samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya jawaab de... Wahi beta kuch bolne ki halat mai nahi tha Rama dar se kampne lagi thi TejSingh ka naam sunkar...


Shersing... ( Darr se rote hue ) mujhheee... Nahiii... Pataaaa... Tummm kissss Tejjjjsinghh ki baat kar rahee ho...


Ahhhhhhh....


Tony... ( Ek aur ungli kaat uski teesri ungli ko pakadte hue ) maine pehle hi kha tha ek sawaal ek jawaab bina jhooth... Aur yaad nahi aa raha toh yaad dila deta hun... Yashoda ko toh tum jante hi hoge... ( Shersing ek baar fir chonk jata hai... Ab use confirm ho gya tha Tony usi TejSingh ki baat kar raha hai ) Yaad aaaya yaa aur yaad dilaun jinke ghar ko tune apna ghar samjh beech diya mai uss TejSingh ki baat kar raha hun... Kha hai woh... mujhe unka pata bata do mai tumhe chodd dunga... aur jhooth bola toh tujhe pata hi hai kya hoga...



Shersing... ( Rote hue ) batata hunn... Btata hun... TejSingh ab iss duniya mai nahi Raha...


Tony... KYAA...


Tony ko bhut tezzz jhatka laga... Iska anumaan shayad usko nahi tha... Woh toh yaha TejSingh ko kisi aur maksad se dhoodne aaya magar woh maksad chodo ab woh Yashoda ko kya jawaab dega.... Use laga tha Uske TejSingh agar Yashoda ke paas raha toh Shyad un dono ke beech yeh cold relation hai woh khtm ho jayega and kya pata...


Yashoda use pasand kar le... Kaafi time se Tony ander hi ander Yashoda ko pasand karne laga tha... Pehle usko samjh nhi aa raha woh ek ajnabi ki itni parwaah kyun kar raha hai... Magar jaise jaise samay beeta Nandu bada hota chala gya waise waise use samjh aa gaya woh uski itni parwaah kyun kar raha hai... Kahi na kahi Yashoda aur Nandu ki wajah se usko ek pariwar mill gya tha... Wanhi Nandu ke sath apne riste ko usne naam de diya tha wanhi Yashoda aur uske beech abhi cold situation hi thi...



Poori basti mai Sher bana Tony Yashoda ke saamne kuch bol nahi pata tha... Woh intzaar mai tha uss ek pal jab Yashoda bhi use pasand kar le... Aur kal jab Yashoda ke muhh se usne suna ki uske baba ki pasand se woh shaadi karegi toh Tony bina kuch soche nikal pada TejSingh ko dhoodne magar use kya pta tha yaha kya hua hai...


Wanhi kamalnath bhi ghutno ke bal baith kar rone lagta hai... Use kuch unhoni ka abhaas hua tha magar laga nahi tha TejSingh ko hua hoga... Woh TejSingh ke saath bitaye apne palon ko yaad karne lagta hai uski aankhein aansun bahane lagti hai tabhi use woh pal yaad aata hai jab TejSingh ne use Yashoda ka khayal rakhne ko kaha tha... Woh pal yaad karte hi usne soch liya tha ab se Yashoda uske saath hi rahegi... Woh Tony ki taraf dekhta hai jo kuch soch raha tha abhi woh kuch bolne ko tha tabhi...


Tony... ( Gusse mai Shersing ka coller pakadte hue ) kisne kiya yeh sab bata... Kisne kiya warna agli baar chaaku ungli par nahi teri garden par chalega... Bol kisne kiya tune...??



Shersing... ( Rote hue ) nahi maine kuch nahi kiya mujhe chod do... Woh toh usne khud ko pakhe se latka kar atma hatya kar li thi... isme Mera koi hath nahi...


Magar Tony ko uski baat se koi jayada fark nahi pada tha ab poori kahani use samjh aa rahi thi TejSingh ke saath kya hua... Use ek pal jo Yashoda ko uske paas laa sakta tha woh bhi door ho gaya tha... Aur kiski wajah se... Shersing huhhhh... Tony chaku ko mutthi mai kas ke pakadta hai...


Khaccchhhhh...


Ke saath do cheenkh sunayi deti h pehli Shersing ki jiski gardan ke pass se chaaku chute hue peeche kursi mai ghuss gaya tha... Dusri uski biwi ki jo yeh dekh beshosh ho gayi thi... Peeche khade kamalnath ka bhi moot nikal jata h... Shersing ki gardan se khoon ki patli lakeer nikalti hai jo behte hue neeche girne lgti h... Use dard ho raha tha magar filhaal woh zinda tha magar kab tak... ???



Tony ko ab yaha rukne ka koi maksad nahi dikha toh woh ghar ka gate khol bahar nikal gya... Wohi kamalnath abhi thodi der pehle gyi ghatna ko dekh thar thar kaamp raha tha... Uski chetna thodi der baad lauti toh Tony ko apne pass na dekh ghabra gaya aur ghar se bahar nikal gaya...


Late Night... 12:05 AM...


Location... Basti....


Thakkkkk.... thaakkkkk....


Mai... Aayiiiiii... Aayiiiiii... Darwaza kholo.... Aayiii... Sweetyyyyy.... Sweetyyyyy.... Ayyyiiiii... Sweetyyyyy....


Thakkkkkk thakkkkkk....



Mujhe samjh nahi aa raha tha kya karun... jab Nazim baba behosh ho gye toh mai jaldi se madat maangne Bahar bhag nikalna maa ki halat kuch Jayda kharab thi kya Kara jaye samjh nahi aa rha tha... mujhe bahar nikal Baba ka khyaal aaya magar woh nahi the toh mai aayi se madat maangne laga magar jaise jaise time nikal raha tha mera Rona badhta jaa raha tha... Nazim baba kabhi bhi hosh mai aa sakte hai mai kya karun...


Tabhi mai sab kuch chod dubara ghar ki taraf doudne laga... Mujhe maa ki chinta ho rahi kahi Nazim baba dubara se maa ko marne na lage... Mai aagan mai phuncha Maa abhi bhi behosh padi thi unki sir se khoon behte hue poore chehre ko bhigo chuka tha... Jisse unka chehra laal pad chaka tha wanhi paas mai Nazim baba bhi gire pade the magar mujhe uski koi fikar nahi thi dar toh sirf maa ka tha... Mujhe jald se jald maa ko aspataal le jana hoga...



Mai maa ke paas jakar baith gya unko hosh mai laane ki koshish karne laga magar sab nakaam sabit hua... Mere aansun nahi ruk rahe the Baba ki bhut yaad aa rahi aaj woh yaha hote toh shayad yeh sab na hota aur Maa bhi theek hoti... Maa ki halat kharab dekh mujhe kuch nahi sujha maine Maa ko uthne ki koshish ki lekin mai gir gya... Aaahhhh... Bhut tez dard hua gutno mai... Ek do jagh se fat bhi gye the... Magar mujhe dard se jayada abhi bhi maa ki chinta ho rahi thi kaise bhi karke maa ko pehle hospital le jana hoga...


Maine ek baar fir koshish ki maa ko uthane ki iss baar mai kamyab ho gya... Itna wazan maine kabhi nahi uthaya tha haatho Mai bhut jor padd raha mai... Ghutno mai dard alag se mai sab cheezon ko darkinaar kar Maa ko goad me le bahar nikal gya... Poori basti sunsaan padi thi raat bhi bhut ho chuki thi... Mujhe chakne mai bhi muskill ho rahi magar pta nhi kaise mai doudne laga... Isse mujhe dard kam ho raha tha lekin ghutno mai zor padd raha tha...



Abhi mai basti se bahar nikalna hi tha ki ek baar fir Mera pair patthar se takra gya mai gir gaya mere saath maa bhi gir gayi... Unke muhhh se cheekh nikal aayi Shayad unhe hosh aa gaya tha...


Yashoda.... ( Aankhe khol nadndu ko dekhte hue ) Aaahhhhh bettaaa... Nanduu... Tuuuu yehhhh kyaaaa kaarrrr rahaaaa hai... Tujheeee.... Chot aahhhhh lag jayegi beta...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) maa... Ahhhh tujheeee kuchh nahi hogaaa... Maaa tuuu fikar mat kar... Tujheeee meri Kasam.. kuchh mat bol... Mujhe karne de jo mai karrrr raha hoon...


Kehte hua mai ek baar fir khada hua... hua pair ghutne chill gye the khoni se bhi khoon nikal raha tha mujhe khade hone mai bhi dard ho raha tha... Magar khud se jayada mujhe maa ki fikr ho rahi thi jinki halat aur kharab ho gayi thi... Mai jaise taise khada hua maa ko ek baar fir goad mai uthaya... Woh behoshi ki halat mai mujhe hi dekh rahi thi... Unhe khud se jayada meri chanta ho rahi aansun unke bhi beh rahe the... Mai jaldi se jaldi maa ko aspataal le jana chahta tha toh ek bar fir maine doudna shuru kiya...



Hhhhhhhh... hhhhhhhh... hhhhhhhh... mujhe yeh karna hi hoga maa ke liye... Maa tumhe kuch nahi hoga bas thoda time aur bass hum phunch hi gye... maa maa tum sun rahi ho na aankhen kholo maa...


Maa adkhuli aankhon se dekh rahi thi kuch kehna chaah rahi thi magr ab unke muhh se bolte bhi nahi ban raha tha... mai lagatar unse baat karte hue bhagta raha road sunsaan dali thi aaspaas koi nahi tha madat karne ke liye... Mere pair jawaab de rahe the chappal meri kab gir gayi pta nahi chala unme se khoon riss raha tha... Kitna bhaga mujhe yaad nahi abhi hospital mai time tha ki....


Dhaammmm.... Ek baar fir mai gir pada saath mai maa bhi jo girte hi behosh ho gayi thi... Ek baar fir unka sir zameen ko jaa laga... Meri halat aur kharab ho gayi thi mere pair nahi hill paa rahe the khada hona door ki baat hai... Mai ghisat ghisat kar maa ke paas phuncha unke sir ko goad me rakh thap thapate laga...



Mai... ( Rote hue ) maaaa.... utho maaa... Dekkkho... Mujjjheee aankhein kholo.... Areee koiiii hai meri madat karo.... Koi toh meri madat karo.... Aahhhahhh maaaaa.....



Chrrrrrrrrrrrrr....



Huhhhh.... Abhi mai ro hi raha tha ki mai dekhta hun Ek gadhi mere bagal se rukti hai... Mai aankhein kholne ki koshish karta hun toh samne ek lady ek aadmi ke saath khadi hui thi... mai unse madat maangne ke liye muhh kholne hi wala tha ki tabhi mai behosh ho jata hun...



Late Night... 1:15 AM...



Location... ****** Seher Bus stand...



....kon ho tum meri beti Yashoda kha hai mujhe abhi uske paas jana hai... Ab se woh mere saath rahegi tum ek khooni ho... Kahi tumne uske saath bhi toh kuch nahi kiya...


Tony... ( Gusse me ) apni jubaan ko lagaam do... Mai kon hoon mai aache se janta hun mujhe batane ki zaroorat nahi hai... Yashoda meri hai woh mere saath rahegi aur tumne usse Milne ki koshish bhi ki toh yaad rakhna mai kon hoon aur kya kar sakta hoon...


Kamalnath... ( Darte hue ) kyaaaa kaarrrr logeeee tummmm maij bhi dekhta hun... Jaate hi police ko compliant kar dunga tumne khoon kiya hai.... Aur meri beti Yashoda ko jabardasti apne saath rakha hai...



Tony... ( Gusse me coller pakd utha deta hai ) tum aukat se jayada bol diye... Maine bola na Yashoda sukarshit mere saath hai... Aur mere saath hi rhegi baat khtam aur rahi baat police ek nahi dus baar complaint kr dena meri koi mera jhaant ka Baal bhi tedha nahi kar payega... Lekin tumhara bhut kuch bigad sakta hai... Mujhe pta hai tu kiss colony me rehta hai... Teri biwi Manju kitne baje sabji lene jaati hai... Teri beti payal kon si bus se school jaati hai... Toh ek baar complaint karne se pehle Inka soch lena... Teri complaint se mujhe fark nahi padega lekin Inka bhut kuch bigad jayega...


Kamalnath... ( Dar se kampte hue ) tum aisaaaa nahhiii kaarrrr sakteeeee mereee pariwaar ko kyunnnn beech mai laa rahe ho.....


Tony... ( gusse me ) aur mujhse mera pariwar cheen rhe ho wohhhh....



Kamalnath... ( Hairaan ) huhhhh...



Tony... ( Gusse me ) mai pyaar karta hoon tu usko mujhse door karega... Kaat daalunga jisne bhi mujhe usse door karne ki koshish ki... Yeh chetavni nahi sacchai hai....


Itna bol kamalnath ko chod deta hai... Aur ek jagh baith jata hai... Usne kya socha tha kya ho gya itne saalo se ek pal ka intezar kar raha tha jab Yashoda usko pasand kare Ek ummed use TejSingh ke roop mai dikhi magar ab woh bhi nahi rahi... saath hi use Yashoda ki fikr bhi ho rahi thi... Poora din ho gya use ghar se bahar aaj iska yaha Mann nahi lag raha tha woh ab TejSingh ki wajah se ruka tha ab woh jald se jald wapas apne pariwar ke paas jana chahata tha...


Thodi der mai bus bhi aa jati hai... Tony ek nigaah kamalnath ki taraf maar bus Mai chadh jata hai... Wanhi kamalnath bhi chup chap Tony ke peeche bus Mai baith jata hai... Use ab Yashoda se pehle apne ghar ko surakshit karna tha... Use apni beti ki fikar ho rahi thi...



....Huhhhhh mai haar nahi manunga...



Early Morning... 3:35 AM...


Location... ****** Seher Railway station...



...bhaisahab train kitni der mai aayegi...


Aadmi... Samay toh ho chuka aane hi waali hogi... Waise aap theek toh hai yeh sir par chot kaise lagi...


Nazim... ( Haklate hue ) kuuuchhh nahiiii wohhhh bassss pair fisaallll gyaaa tha...


Aadmi... Aacha aacha theek hai magar tumhe itna paseena kyun aa raha h... Tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai meri salaah mano... Toh tum pehle kisi aache doctor ko dikha lo...



Nazim... ( Ghabtare hue ) nahiiii... Meraa... Abhi Jana bhut zaroori hai...


Aadmi Nazim ko dekh kuch bolta usse pehle train dhere dhere platform par lagna shuru hi jaati h... Aur apna ticket no dekh apni boogi ki Taraf chal deta hai...


Nazim bhi train rukte hi jhat se Train mai chdh jata hai... Train mai jayada bheed nahi thi woh ek jagh baith jata hai... Uss birth par pehle se ek ladka so raha tha Nazim ke baithte hi uski neend khul jati hai... Dekhne se Jayda bada nahi laga rah tha... Sir par choti maathe par tilak... Tabhi train chal padhti hai...


Ladka... Kya hua bhaisahab sab theek hai...


Nazim... ( Paseena ponchte hue ) bas thodi tabiyat kharab hai...




Ladka... ( Pani ki bottle dete hue ) yeh lijiye paani pijiye... Itni tabiyat kharab hai toh kyun safar kar rahe ho woh bhi akele... Waise kha Tak jaana hai aapko... Woh kya hai na mujhe subh college time par pahuncha hai uske liye Sona padega aur aap meri seat par baithe hue hai...


Nazim... ( Kuch sochta hai fir ) mera koi nahi hai mai ***** seher jaa raha hun wanha mere door ke rishte daar rehte hai unhone mujhe kaam karne ke liye wanha bulaya hai... Tum chinta mat karo mai kahi aur baith jata hoon...


Nazim yaha se bhi nikal leta hai... Waise hi woh sawaal jawab dena nahi chahta tha pehle se uski fati padi thi... Kahi Tony usko dhoond na le woh jald se jald seher se bahar nikal jana chahta tha... Lekin har koi usse sawaal kar raha tha kahi uske muhh se kuch nikal na jaye isliye usne pehle khudko sabse door kiya fir gate ke paas baith gya...



Nazim...( Man mai ) Huhhhhh... Yeh jagh theek hai yaha koi behen ka loda apni maa nahi chudayega... Subh hote hi mai ***** phunch jaunga fir mai azaad... Ahhhhhhh haramkhor ne bhut zor se mara abhi tak dard kar raha hai... uss Randi ke bacche ko aisa sabak sikhaunga ki yaad rakhega....


Abhi woh soch mai gum hi tha ki uski peeth par ek hath aata hai... Jisse woh buri tarah se ghabra jata hai aur mudkar dekhta hai toh wohi ladka khada hua tha... Jise dekh woh thoda relax hota hai...


Nazim... Haan kya hua...


Ladka... Aapka sach mai koi apna nahi hai...


Nazim... ( Sunker pehle ghatabta hai fir ) nahi... Waise tum yeh kyun puch rahe hai...


Abhi woh kuch aur kehta ki usse pehle usse ek dhakka lagta hai aur woh train se neeche gir jata hai...



Ladka... Jab koi hai nahi toh kyun zinda hai faltu ka bojh ban raha hai... Huhhhh... chalo ab so jate hai... No. 1289... Hmmmm abhi bhut baaki hai... Awwwwww need aa rahi hai...


Aur angdai lete hue ek baar gate se baar dekhta hai... Nazim ki body kahi dikhai nahi padti train bhi kaafi raftaar se chal rahi thi... Woh wapis aake apne berth par let jata hai...







( Huffff here We go... Update has been posted deri ke liye maafi chahunga pehle election fir ghar par ganpati ji wajah se update late ho gaya... Next week mai 3 update aayenge hum cover kar lenge... Like target 30 next update will be on Thursday or Friday late ho gya toh... Till then stay tuned... )


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Kahani m romanch badhta jaa raha
Kamalnath ka pakka ho gaya tha ki woh mar Chuka h jab woh gher per nahi Mila
Shesingh k mutabik usne khud ko pankhe se latka lia lekin mujhe lagta h sher Singh n mara hoga use ab yeh Raj shayad ab na khule kyonki shersingh bhi ab nahi raha
Bechara tony k Dil m Yashoda k liye pyar ki Kalyan khili lekin lagta h aise hii murjha jayengi
Nandu n apni taraf se poori koshis ki apni maa ko aspatal pohchane ki lekin bechara nahinker paya ab dekhna yeh kia woh dono admi or aurat unki madad kerte h ya nahi
Nazim tony k dar se bhag raha tha or aisa Bhaga ki Dunia hii chhod gaya
Yeh lauda kon jisne dhakka dia or yeh kyon kaha 1289...... abhi bahot Baki h
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
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[Bhupinder Singh]

Nice update

KALYUG... Part 13...


( Who will Survive... )



Early Night... 11:10 PM...



Location... ***** Seher Shersing house...



....aaahhhh... Huhhh... Kon ho tum log... Aur hume iss tarah bandh kar kyun rakha hai... Aaahhh huhhhh mujhe chod do tumhe jo chahiye mai de dunga...


Thadddddd....


Tony... ( Gusse mai ) mujhe jo chahiye woh hai jawaab ek sawaal ka... ek sawaal ek jawab theek hai... Lekin usse pehle... Ummmm... Hannn mill gaya ek sec...



Tony uthte hue hall se kitchen ki taraf jata h.... Wohi hall mai Shersing uska beta bandhe hue the aur thodi dur hi Shersing ki patni Rama bhi bandhi hui thi... Ghar ke sabhi sadasyon ke chehre par darr tha ab kya hone waala h unke saath yehi soch rahe the...


Wanhi kamalnath ki Tony se alag hi darr ke halat kharab ho gayi usko kuch bolte nhi ban raha tha ab use Tony ko dekh Yashoda ki fikr ho rahi thi kaise woh 14 saal se iske saath rahi hogi... Kahi isne use kaid toh nahi kar rakha yeh darr uske man mai sata raha tha... Usse jald se jald Yashoda se milna tha magar yaha Tony TejSingh ko dhundne me madat kar raha Isliye abhi usne chupp rehna hi theek samjha... Pehle TejSingh se mill le uske baad Yashoda ko jald se jald wanha se le aunga... Yeh vichar uske Mann me aa rahe the tabhi Tony ek baar fir hall me aa jata h jiske hath me chaaku dekh woh dar jata hai aur aane waale Pal ki kalpana karne lagta hai kya hoga...



Wohi Tony sab cheezon ko nazarandaaz kar Shersing ke samne baithta hai... Uske haath mai chaku dekh Shersing ki halat batt se battarr hone lagti hai... Woh chatpatane lagta hai rote hue bheekh maangta hai beta aur Rama ki bhi halat kharab ho gayi unki aankhon mai bhi aansu aa gye the yeh soch kar shayad agla number unka ho...


Lekin Tony iss baat se koi fark nahi padd raha tha woh shant awastha mai Shersing ke paas baithta hai aur uske hath ko pakad chaku se uski ek ungli kaat deta hai...


Shersing ki cheenkh nikal jati hai woh chatptata hai magar bandhe hone ke karan kuch nahi kar pata... dheere dheere uska Rona band hota hai... Dusri taraf baaki log yeh dekh kar darr gaye Rama ka toh Saadi mai moot nikal gaya... Aur beta toh jaise sadme mai chala gya... Kamalnath bhi apne chehre par paseena ponch dar ko chupane me nakamyab ho raha tha...

Tony... ( Shanti ko toadte hue ) Ek sawal ek jawaab nahi toh dusri ungli... Agar pehli nahi katata toh shayad tu nahi batata ab dhyaan se sun... TejSingh kaha hai...



TejSingh ka naam sun Shersing ki halat kharab se aur khrab ho gayi thi use samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya jawaab de... Wahi beta kuch bolne ki halat mai nahi tha Rama dar se kampne lagi thi TejSingh ka naam sunkar...


Shersing... ( Darr se rote hue ) mujhheee... Nahiii... Pataaaa... Tummm kissss Tejjjjsinghh ki baat kar rahee ho...


Ahhhhhhh....


Tony... ( Ek aur ungli kaat uski teesri ungli ko pakadte hue ) maine pehle hi kha tha ek sawaal ek jawaab bina jhooth... Aur yaad nahi aa raha toh yaad dila deta hun... Yashoda ko toh tum jante hi hoge... ( Shersing ek baar fir chonk jata hai... Ab use confirm ho gya tha Tony usi TejSingh ki baat kar raha hai ) Yaad aaaya yaa aur yaad dilaun jinke ghar ko tune apna ghar samjh beech diya mai uss TejSingh ki baat kar raha hun... Kha hai woh... mujhe unka pata bata do mai tumhe chodd dunga... aur jhooth bola toh tujhe pata hi hai kya hoga...



Shersing... ( Rote hue ) batata hunn... Btata hun... TejSingh ab iss duniya mai nahi Raha...


Tony... KYAA...


Tony ko bhut tezzz jhatka laga... Iska anumaan shayad usko nahi tha... Woh toh yaha TejSingh ko kisi aur maksad se dhoodne aaya magar woh maksad chodo ab woh Yashoda ko kya jawaab dega.... Use laga tha Uske TejSingh agar Yashoda ke paas raha toh Shyad un dono ke beech yeh cold relation hai woh khtm ho jayega and kya pata...


Yashoda use pasand kar le... Kaafi time se Tony ander hi ander Yashoda ko pasand karne laga tha... Pehle usko samjh nhi aa raha woh ek ajnabi ki itni parwaah kyun kar raha hai... Magar jaise jaise samay beeta Nandu bada hota chala gya waise waise use samjh aa gaya woh uski itni parwaah kyun kar raha hai... Kahi na kahi Yashoda aur Nandu ki wajah se usko ek pariwar mill gya tha... Wanhi Nandu ke sath apne riste ko usne naam de diya tha wanhi Yashoda aur uske beech abhi cold situation hi thi...



Poori basti mai Sher bana Tony Yashoda ke saamne kuch bol nahi pata tha... Woh intzaar mai tha uss ek pal jab Yashoda bhi use pasand kar le... Aur kal jab Yashoda ke muhh se usne suna ki uske baba ki pasand se woh shaadi karegi toh Tony bina kuch soche nikal pada TejSingh ko dhoodne magar use kya pta tha yaha kya hua hai...


Wanhi kamalnath bhi ghutno ke bal baith kar rone lagta hai... Use kuch unhoni ka abhaas hua tha magar laga nahi tha TejSingh ko hua hoga... Woh TejSingh ke saath bitaye apne palon ko yaad karne lagta hai uski aankhein aansun bahane lagti hai tabhi use woh pal yaad aata hai jab TejSingh ne use Yashoda ka khayal rakhne ko kaha tha... Woh pal yaad karte hi usne soch liya tha ab se Yashoda uske saath hi rahegi... Woh Tony ki taraf dekhta hai jo kuch soch raha tha abhi woh kuch bolne ko tha tabhi...


Tony... ( Gusse mai Shersing ka coller pakadte hue ) kisne kiya yeh sab bata... Kisne kiya warna agli baar chaaku ungli par nahi teri garden par chalega... Bol kisne kiya tune...??



Shersing... ( Rote hue ) nahi maine kuch nahi kiya mujhe chod do... Woh toh usne khud ko pakhe se latka kar atma hatya kar li thi... isme Mera koi hath nahi...


Magar Tony ko uski baat se koi jayada fark nahi pada tha ab poori kahani use samjh aa rahi thi TejSingh ke saath kya hua... Use ek pal jo Yashoda ko uske paas laa sakta tha woh bhi door ho gaya tha... Aur kiski wajah se... Shersing huhhhh... Tony chaku ko mutthi mai kas ke pakadta hai...


Khaccchhhhh...


Ke saath do cheenkh sunayi deti h pehli Shersing ki jiski gardan ke pass se chaaku chute hue peeche kursi mai ghuss gaya tha... Dusri uski biwi ki jo yeh dekh beshosh ho gayi thi... Peeche khade kamalnath ka bhi moot nikal jata h... Shersing ki gardan se khoon ki patli lakeer nikalti hai jo behte hue neeche girne lgti h... Use dard ho raha tha magar filhaal woh zinda tha magar kab tak... ???



Tony ko ab yaha rukne ka koi maksad nahi dikha toh woh ghar ka gate khol bahar nikal gya... Wohi kamalnath abhi thodi der pehle gyi ghatna ko dekh thar thar kaamp raha tha... Uski chetna thodi der baad lauti toh Tony ko apne pass na dekh ghabra gaya aur ghar se bahar nikal gaya...


Late Night... 12:05 AM...


Location... Basti....


Thakkkkk.... thaakkkkk....


Mai... Aayiiiiii... Aayiiiiii... Darwaza kholo.... Aayiii... Sweetyyyyy.... Sweetyyyyy.... Ayyyiiiii... Sweetyyyyy....


Thakkkkkk thakkkkkk....



Mujhe samjh nahi aa raha tha kya karun... jab Nazim baba behosh ho gye toh mai jaldi se madat maangne Bahar bhag nikalna maa ki halat kuch Jayda kharab thi kya Kara jaye samjh nahi aa rha tha... mujhe bahar nikal Baba ka khyaal aaya magar woh nahi the toh mai aayi se madat maangne laga magar jaise jaise time nikal raha tha mera Rona badhta jaa raha tha... Nazim baba kabhi bhi hosh mai aa sakte hai mai kya karun...


Tabhi mai sab kuch chod dubara ghar ki taraf doudne laga... Mujhe maa ki chinta ho rahi kahi Nazim baba dubara se maa ko marne na lage... Mai aagan mai phuncha Maa abhi bhi behosh padi thi unki sir se khoon behte hue poore chehre ko bhigo chuka tha... Jisse unka chehra laal pad chaka tha wanhi paas mai Nazim baba bhi gire pade the magar mujhe uski koi fikar nahi thi dar toh sirf maa ka tha... Mujhe jald se jald maa ko aspataal le jana hoga...



Mai maa ke paas jakar baith gya unko hosh mai laane ki koshish karne laga magar sab nakaam sabit hua... Mere aansun nahi ruk rahe the Baba ki bhut yaad aa rahi aaj woh yaha hote toh shayad yeh sab na hota aur Maa bhi theek hoti... Maa ki halat kharab dekh mujhe kuch nahi sujha maine Maa ko uthne ki koshish ki lekin mai gir gya... Aaahhhh... Bhut tez dard hua gutno mai... Ek do jagh se fat bhi gye the... Magar mujhe dard se jayada abhi bhi maa ki chinta ho rahi thi kaise bhi karke maa ko pehle hospital le jana hoga...


Maine ek baar fir koshish ki maa ko uthane ki iss baar mai kamyab ho gya... Itna wazan maine kabhi nahi uthaya tha haatho Mai bhut jor padd raha mai... Ghutno mai dard alag se mai sab cheezon ko darkinaar kar Maa ko goad me le bahar nikal gya... Poori basti sunsaan padi thi raat bhi bhut ho chuki thi... Mujhe chakne mai bhi muskill ho rahi magar pta nhi kaise mai doudne laga... Isse mujhe dard kam ho raha tha lekin ghutno mai zor padd raha tha...



Abhi mai basti se bahar nikalna hi tha ki ek baar fir Mera pair patthar se takra gya mai gir gaya mere saath maa bhi gir gayi... Unke muhhh se cheekh nikal aayi Shayad unhe hosh aa gaya tha...


Yashoda.... ( Aankhe khol nadndu ko dekhte hue ) Aaahhhhh bettaaa... Nanduu... Tuuuu yehhhh kyaaaa kaarrrr rahaaaa hai... Tujheeee.... Chot aahhhhh lag jayegi beta...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) maa... Ahhhh tujheeee kuchh nahi hogaaa... Maaa tuuu fikar mat kar... Tujheeee meri Kasam.. kuchh mat bol... Mujhe karne de jo mai karrrr raha hoon...


Kehte hua mai ek baar fir khada hua... hua pair ghutne chill gye the khoni se bhi khoon nikal raha tha mujhe khade hone mai bhi dard ho raha tha... Magar khud se jayada mujhe maa ki fikr ho rahi thi jinki halat aur kharab ho gayi thi... Mai jaise taise khada hua maa ko ek baar fir goad mai uthaya... Woh behoshi ki halat mai mujhe hi dekh rahi thi... Unhe khud se jayada meri chanta ho rahi aansun unke bhi beh rahe the... Mai jaldi se jaldi maa ko aspataal le jana chahta tha toh ek bar fir maine doudna shuru kiya...



Hhhhhhhh... hhhhhhhh... hhhhhhhh... mujhe yeh karna hi hoga maa ke liye... Maa tumhe kuch nahi hoga bas thoda time aur bass hum phunch hi gye... maa maa tum sun rahi ho na aankhen kholo maa...


Maa adkhuli aankhon se dekh rahi thi kuch kehna chaah rahi thi magr ab unke muhh se bolte bhi nahi ban raha tha... mai lagatar unse baat karte hue bhagta raha road sunsaan dali thi aaspaas koi nahi tha madat karne ke liye... Mere pair jawaab de rahe the chappal meri kab gir gayi pta nahi chala unme se khoon riss raha tha... Kitna bhaga mujhe yaad nahi abhi hospital mai time tha ki....


Dhaammmm.... Ek baar fir mai gir pada saath mai maa bhi jo girte hi behosh ho gayi thi... Ek baar fir unka sir zameen ko jaa laga... Meri halat aur kharab ho gayi thi mere pair nahi hill paa rahe the khada hona door ki baat hai... Mai ghisat ghisat kar maa ke paas phuncha unke sir ko goad me rakh thap thapate laga...



Mai... ( Rote hue ) maaaa.... utho maaa... Dekkkho... Mujjjheee aankhein kholo.... Areee koiiii hai meri madat karo.... Koi toh meri madat karo.... Aahhhahhh maaaaa.....



Chrrrrrrrrrrrrr....



Huhhhh.... Abhi mai ro hi raha tha ki mai dekhta hun Ek gadhi mere bagal se rukti hai... Mai aankhein kholne ki koshish karta hun toh samne ek lady ek aadmi ke saath khadi hui thi... mai unse madat maangne ke liye muhh kholne hi wala tha ki tabhi mai behosh ho jata hun...



Late Night... 1:15 AM...



Location... ****** Seher Bus stand...



....kon ho tum meri beti Yashoda kha hai mujhe abhi uske paas jana hai... Ab se woh mere saath rahegi tum ek khooni ho... Kahi tumne uske saath bhi toh kuch nahi kiya...


Tony... ( Gusse me ) apni jubaan ko lagaam do... Mai kon hoon mai aache se janta hun mujhe batane ki zaroorat nahi hai... Yashoda meri hai woh mere saath rahegi aur tumne usse Milne ki koshish bhi ki toh yaad rakhna mai kon hoon aur kya kar sakta hoon...


Kamalnath... ( Darte hue ) kyaaaa kaarrrr logeeee tummmm maij bhi dekhta hun... Jaate hi police ko compliant kar dunga tumne khoon kiya hai.... Aur meri beti Yashoda ko jabardasti apne saath rakha hai...



Tony... ( Gusse me coller pakd utha deta hai ) tum aukat se jayada bol diye... Maine bola na Yashoda sukarshit mere saath hai... Aur mere saath hi rhegi baat khtam aur rahi baat police ek nahi dus baar complaint kr dena meri koi mera jhaant ka Baal bhi tedha nahi kar payega... Lekin tumhara bhut kuch bigad sakta hai... Mujhe pta hai tu kiss colony me rehta hai... Teri biwi Manju kitne baje sabji lene jaati hai... Teri beti payal kon si bus se school jaati hai... Toh ek baar complaint karne se pehle Inka soch lena... Teri complaint se mujhe fark nahi padega lekin Inka bhut kuch bigad jayega...


Kamalnath... ( Dar se kampte hue ) tum aisaaaa nahhiii kaarrrr sakteeeee mereee pariwaar ko kyunnnn beech mai laa rahe ho.....


Tony... ( gusse me ) aur mujhse mera pariwar cheen rhe ho wohhhh....



Kamalnath... ( Hairaan ) huhhhh...



Tony... ( Gusse me ) mai pyaar karta hoon tu usko mujhse door karega... Kaat daalunga jisne bhi mujhe usse door karne ki koshish ki... Yeh chetavni nahi sacchai hai....


Itna bol kamalnath ko chod deta hai... Aur ek jagh baith jata hai... Usne kya socha tha kya ho gya itne saalo se ek pal ka intezar kar raha tha jab Yashoda usko pasand kare Ek ummed use TejSingh ke roop mai dikhi magar ab woh bhi nahi rahi... saath hi use Yashoda ki fikr bhi ho rahi thi... Poora din ho gya use ghar se bahar aaj iska yaha Mann nahi lag raha tha woh ab TejSingh ki wajah se ruka tha ab woh jald se jald wapas apne pariwar ke paas jana chahata tha...


Thodi der mai bus bhi aa jati hai... Tony ek nigaah kamalnath ki taraf maar bus Mai chadh jata hai... Wanhi kamalnath bhi chup chap Tony ke peeche bus Mai baith jata hai... Use ab Yashoda se pehle apne ghar ko surakshit karna tha... Use apni beti ki fikar ho rahi thi...



....Huhhhhh mai haar nahi manunga...



Early Morning... 3:35 AM...


Location... ****** Seher Railway station...



...bhaisahab train kitni der mai aayegi...


Aadmi... Samay toh ho chuka aane hi waali hogi... Waise aap theek toh hai yeh sir par chot kaise lagi...


Nazim... ( Haklate hue ) kuuuchhh nahiiii wohhhh bassss pair fisaallll gyaaa tha...


Aadmi... Aacha aacha theek hai magar tumhe itna paseena kyun aa raha h... Tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai meri salaah mano... Toh tum pehle kisi aache doctor ko dikha lo...



Nazim... ( Ghabtare hue ) nahiiii... Meraa... Abhi Jana bhut zaroori hai...


Aadmi Nazim ko dekh kuch bolta usse pehle train dhere dhere platform par lagna shuru hi jaati h... Aur apna ticket no dekh apni boogi ki Taraf chal deta hai...


Nazim bhi train rukte hi jhat se Train mai chdh jata hai... Train mai jayada bheed nahi thi woh ek jagh baith jata hai... Uss birth par pehle se ek ladka so raha tha Nazim ke baithte hi uski neend khul jati hai... Dekhne se Jayda bada nahi laga rah tha... Sir par choti maathe par tilak... Tabhi train chal padhti hai...


Ladka... Kya hua bhaisahab sab theek hai...


Nazim... ( Paseena ponchte hue ) bas thodi tabiyat kharab hai...




Ladka... ( Pani ki bottle dete hue ) yeh lijiye paani pijiye... Itni tabiyat kharab hai toh kyun safar kar rahe ho woh bhi akele... Waise kha Tak jaana hai aapko... Woh kya hai na mujhe subh college time par pahuncha hai uske liye Sona padega aur aap meri seat par baithe hue hai...


Nazim... ( Kuch sochta hai fir ) mera koi nahi hai mai ***** seher jaa raha hun wanha mere door ke rishte daar rehte hai unhone mujhe kaam karne ke liye wanha bulaya hai... Tum chinta mat karo mai kahi aur baith jata hoon...


Nazim yaha se bhi nikal leta hai... Waise hi woh sawaal jawab dena nahi chahta tha pehle se uski fati padi thi... Kahi Tony usko dhoond na le woh jald se jald seher se bahar nikal jana chahta tha... Lekin har koi usse sawaal kar raha tha kahi uske muhh se kuch nikal na jaye isliye usne pehle khudko sabse door kiya fir gate ke paas baith gya...



Nazim...( Man mai ) Huhhhhh... Yeh jagh theek hai yaha koi behen ka loda apni maa nahi chudayega... Subh hote hi mai ***** phunch jaunga fir mai azaad... Ahhhhhhh haramkhor ne bhut zor se mara abhi tak dard kar raha hai... uss Randi ke bacche ko aisa sabak sikhaunga ki yaad rakhega....


Abhi woh soch mai gum hi tha ki uski peeth par ek hath aata hai... Jisse woh buri tarah se ghabra jata hai aur mudkar dekhta hai toh wohi ladka khada hua tha... Jise dekh woh thoda relax hota hai...


Nazim... Haan kya hua...


Ladka... Aapka sach mai koi apna nahi hai...


Nazim... ( Sunker pehle ghatabta hai fir ) nahi... Waise tum yeh kyun puch rahe hai...


Abhi woh kuch aur kehta ki usse pehle usse ek dhakka lagta hai aur woh train se neeche gir jata hai...



Ladka... Jab koi hai nahi toh kyun zinda hai faltu ka bojh ban raha hai... Huhhhh... chalo ab so jate hai... No. 1289... Hmmmm abhi bhut baaki hai... Awwwwww need aa rahi hai...


Aur angdai lete hue ek baar gate se baar dekhta hai... Nazim ki body kahi dikhai nahi padti train bhi kaafi raftaar se chal rahi thi... Woh wapis aake apne berth par let jata hai...







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KALYUG... Part 13...


( Who will Survive... )



Early Night... 11:10 PM...



Location... ***** Seher Shersing house...



....aaahhhh... Huhhh... Kon ho tum log... Aur hume iss tarah bandh kar kyun rakha hai... Aaahhh huhhhh mujhe chod do tumhe jo chahiye mai de dunga...


Thadddddd....


Tony... ( Gusse mai ) mujhe jo chahiye woh hai jawaab ek sawaal ka... ek sawaal ek jawab theek hai... Lekin usse pehle... Ummmm... Hannn mill gaya ek sec...



Tony uthte hue hall se kitchen ki taraf jata h.... Wohi hall mai Shersing uska beta bandhe hue the aur thodi dur hi Shersing ki patni Rama bhi bandhi hui thi... Ghar ke sabhi sadasyon ke chehre par darr tha ab kya hone waala h unke saath yehi soch rahe the...


Wanhi kamalnath ki Tony se alag hi darr ke halat kharab ho gayi usko kuch bolte nhi ban raha tha ab use Tony ko dekh Yashoda ki fikr ho rahi thi kaise woh 14 saal se iske saath rahi hogi... Kahi isne use kaid toh nahi kar rakha yeh darr uske man mai sata raha tha... Usse jald se jald Yashoda se milna tha magar yaha Tony TejSingh ko dhundne me madat kar raha Isliye abhi usne chupp rehna hi theek samjha... Pehle TejSingh se mill le uske baad Yashoda ko jald se jald wanha se le aunga... Yeh vichar uske Mann me aa rahe the tabhi Tony ek baar fir hall me aa jata h jiske hath me chaaku dekh woh dar jata hai aur aane waale Pal ki kalpana karne lagta hai kya hoga...



Wohi Tony sab cheezon ko nazarandaaz kar Shersing ke samne baithta hai... Uske haath mai chaku dekh Shersing ki halat batt se battarr hone lagti hai... Woh chatpatane lagta hai rote hue bheekh maangta hai beta aur Rama ki bhi halat kharab ho gayi unki aankhon mai bhi aansu aa gye the yeh soch kar shayad agla number unka ho...


Lekin Tony iss baat se koi fark nahi padd raha tha woh shant awastha mai Shersing ke paas baithta hai aur uske hath ko pakad chaku se uski ek ungli kaat deta hai...


Shersing ki cheenkh nikal jati hai woh chatptata hai magar bandhe hone ke karan kuch nahi kar pata... dheere dheere uska Rona band hota hai... Dusri taraf baaki log yeh dekh kar darr gaye Rama ka toh Saadi mai moot nikal gaya... Aur beta toh jaise sadme mai chala gya... Kamalnath bhi apne chehre par paseena ponch dar ko chupane me nakamyab ho raha tha...

Tony... ( Shanti ko toadte hue ) Ek sawal ek jawaab nahi toh dusri ungli... Agar pehli nahi katata toh shayad tu nahi batata ab dhyaan se sun... TejSingh kaha hai...



TejSingh ka naam sun Shersing ki halat kharab se aur khrab ho gayi thi use samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya jawaab de... Wahi beta kuch bolne ki halat mai nahi tha Rama dar se kampne lagi thi TejSingh ka naam sunkar...


Shersing... ( Darr se rote hue ) mujhheee... Nahiii... Pataaaa... Tummm kissss Tejjjjsinghh ki baat kar rahee ho...


Ahhhhhhh....


Tony... ( Ek aur ungli kaat uski teesri ungli ko pakadte hue ) maine pehle hi kha tha ek sawaal ek jawaab bina jhooth... Aur yaad nahi aa raha toh yaad dila deta hun... Yashoda ko toh tum jante hi hoge... ( Shersing ek baar fir chonk jata hai... Ab use confirm ho gya tha Tony usi TejSingh ki baat kar raha hai ) Yaad aaaya yaa aur yaad dilaun jinke ghar ko tune apna ghar samjh beech diya mai uss TejSingh ki baat kar raha hun... Kha hai woh... mujhe unka pata bata do mai tumhe chodd dunga... aur jhooth bola toh tujhe pata hi hai kya hoga...



Shersing... ( Rote hue ) batata hunn... Btata hun... TejSingh ab iss duniya mai nahi Raha...


Tony... KYAA...


Tony ko bhut tezzz jhatka laga... Iska anumaan shayad usko nahi tha... Woh toh yaha TejSingh ko kisi aur maksad se dhoodne aaya magar woh maksad chodo ab woh Yashoda ko kya jawaab dega.... Use laga tha Uske TejSingh agar Yashoda ke paas raha toh Shyad un dono ke beech yeh cold relation hai woh khtm ho jayega and kya pata...


Yashoda use pasand kar le... Kaafi time se Tony ander hi ander Yashoda ko pasand karne laga tha... Pehle usko samjh nhi aa raha woh ek ajnabi ki itni parwaah kyun kar raha hai... Magar jaise jaise samay beeta Nandu bada hota chala gya waise waise use samjh aa gaya woh uski itni parwaah kyun kar raha hai... Kahi na kahi Yashoda aur Nandu ki wajah se usko ek pariwar mill gya tha... Wanhi Nandu ke sath apne riste ko usne naam de diya tha wanhi Yashoda aur uske beech abhi cold situation hi thi...



Poori basti mai Sher bana Tony Yashoda ke saamne kuch bol nahi pata tha... Woh intzaar mai tha uss ek pal jab Yashoda bhi use pasand kar le... Aur kal jab Yashoda ke muhh se usne suna ki uske baba ki pasand se woh shaadi karegi toh Tony bina kuch soche nikal pada TejSingh ko dhoodne magar use kya pta tha yaha kya hua hai...


Wanhi kamalnath bhi ghutno ke bal baith kar rone lagta hai... Use kuch unhoni ka abhaas hua tha magar laga nahi tha TejSingh ko hua hoga... Woh TejSingh ke saath bitaye apne palon ko yaad karne lagta hai uski aankhein aansun bahane lagti hai tabhi use woh pal yaad aata hai jab TejSingh ne use Yashoda ka khayal rakhne ko kaha tha... Woh pal yaad karte hi usne soch liya tha ab se Yashoda uske saath hi rahegi... Woh Tony ki taraf dekhta hai jo kuch soch raha tha abhi woh kuch bolne ko tha tabhi...


Tony... ( Gusse mai Shersing ka coller pakadte hue ) kisne kiya yeh sab bata... Kisne kiya warna agli baar chaaku ungli par nahi teri garden par chalega... Bol kisne kiya tune...??



Shersing... ( Rote hue ) nahi maine kuch nahi kiya mujhe chod do... Woh toh usne khud ko pakhe se latka kar atma hatya kar li thi... isme Mera koi hath nahi...


Magar Tony ko uski baat se koi jayada fark nahi pada tha ab poori kahani use samjh aa rahi thi TejSingh ke saath kya hua... Use ek pal jo Yashoda ko uske paas laa sakta tha woh bhi door ho gaya tha... Aur kiski wajah se... Shersing huhhhh... Tony chaku ko mutthi mai kas ke pakadta hai...


Khaccchhhhh...


Ke saath do cheenkh sunayi deti h pehli Shersing ki jiski gardan ke pass se chaaku chute hue peeche kursi mai ghuss gaya tha... Dusri uski biwi ki jo yeh dekh beshosh ho gayi thi... Peeche khade kamalnath ka bhi moot nikal jata h... Shersing ki gardan se khoon ki patli lakeer nikalti hai jo behte hue neeche girne lgti h... Use dard ho raha tha magar filhaal woh zinda tha magar kab tak... ???



Tony ko ab yaha rukne ka koi maksad nahi dikha toh woh ghar ka gate khol bahar nikal gya... Wohi kamalnath abhi thodi der pehle gyi ghatna ko dekh thar thar kaamp raha tha... Uski chetna thodi der baad lauti toh Tony ko apne pass na dekh ghabra gaya aur ghar se bahar nikal gaya...


Late Night... 12:05 AM...


Location... Basti....


Thakkkkk.... thaakkkkk....


Mai... Aayiiiiii... Aayiiiiii... Darwaza kholo.... Aayiii... Sweetyyyyy.... Sweetyyyyy.... Ayyyiiiii... Sweetyyyyy....


Thakkkkkk thakkkkkk....



Mujhe samjh nahi aa raha tha kya karun... jab Nazim baba behosh ho gye toh mai jaldi se madat maangne Bahar bhag nikalna maa ki halat kuch Jayda kharab thi kya Kara jaye samjh nahi aa rha tha... mujhe bahar nikal Baba ka khyaal aaya magar woh nahi the toh mai aayi se madat maangne laga magar jaise jaise time nikal raha tha mera Rona badhta jaa raha tha... Nazim baba kabhi bhi hosh mai aa sakte hai mai kya karun...


Tabhi mai sab kuch chod dubara ghar ki taraf doudne laga... Mujhe maa ki chinta ho rahi kahi Nazim baba dubara se maa ko marne na lage... Mai aagan mai phuncha Maa abhi bhi behosh padi thi unki sir se khoon behte hue poore chehre ko bhigo chuka tha... Jisse unka chehra laal pad chaka tha wanhi paas mai Nazim baba bhi gire pade the magar mujhe uski koi fikar nahi thi dar toh sirf maa ka tha... Mujhe jald se jald maa ko aspataal le jana hoga...



Mai maa ke paas jakar baith gya unko hosh mai laane ki koshish karne laga magar sab nakaam sabit hua... Mere aansun nahi ruk rahe the Baba ki bhut yaad aa rahi aaj woh yaha hote toh shayad yeh sab na hota aur Maa bhi theek hoti... Maa ki halat kharab dekh mujhe kuch nahi sujha maine Maa ko uthne ki koshish ki lekin mai gir gya... Aaahhhh... Bhut tez dard hua gutno mai... Ek do jagh se fat bhi gye the... Magar mujhe dard se jayada abhi bhi maa ki chinta ho rahi thi kaise bhi karke maa ko pehle hospital le jana hoga...


Maine ek baar fir koshish ki maa ko uthane ki iss baar mai kamyab ho gya... Itna wazan maine kabhi nahi uthaya tha haatho Mai bhut jor padd raha mai... Ghutno mai dard alag se mai sab cheezon ko darkinaar kar Maa ko goad me le bahar nikal gya... Poori basti sunsaan padi thi raat bhi bhut ho chuki thi... Mujhe chakne mai bhi muskill ho rahi magar pta nhi kaise mai doudne laga... Isse mujhe dard kam ho raha tha lekin ghutno mai zor padd raha tha...



Abhi mai basti se bahar nikalna hi tha ki ek baar fir Mera pair patthar se takra gya mai gir gaya mere saath maa bhi gir gayi... Unke muhhh se cheekh nikal aayi Shayad unhe hosh aa gaya tha...


Yashoda.... ( Aankhe khol nadndu ko dekhte hue ) Aaahhhhh bettaaa... Nanduu... Tuuuu yehhhh kyaaaa kaarrrr rahaaaa hai... Tujheeee.... Chot aahhhhh lag jayegi beta...


Mai... ( Rote hue ) maa... Ahhhh tujheeee kuchh nahi hogaaa... Maaa tuuu fikar mat kar... Tujheeee meri Kasam.. kuchh mat bol... Mujhe karne de jo mai karrrr raha hoon...


Kehte hua mai ek baar fir khada hua... hua pair ghutne chill gye the khoni se bhi khoon nikal raha tha mujhe khade hone mai bhi dard ho raha tha... Magar khud se jayada mujhe maa ki fikr ho rahi thi jinki halat aur kharab ho gayi thi... Mai jaise taise khada hua maa ko ek baar fir goad mai uthaya... Woh behoshi ki halat mai mujhe hi dekh rahi thi... Unhe khud se jayada meri chanta ho rahi aansun unke bhi beh rahe the... Mai jaldi se jaldi maa ko aspataal le jana chahta tha toh ek bar fir maine doudna shuru kiya...



Hhhhhhhh... hhhhhhhh... hhhhhhhh... mujhe yeh karna hi hoga maa ke liye... Maa tumhe kuch nahi hoga bas thoda time aur bass hum phunch hi gye... maa maa tum sun rahi ho na aankhen kholo maa...


Maa adkhuli aankhon se dekh rahi thi kuch kehna chaah rahi thi magr ab unke muhh se bolte bhi nahi ban raha tha... mai lagatar unse baat karte hue bhagta raha road sunsaan dali thi aaspaas koi nahi tha madat karne ke liye... Mere pair jawaab de rahe the chappal meri kab gir gayi pta nahi chala unme se khoon riss raha tha... Kitna bhaga mujhe yaad nahi abhi hospital mai time tha ki....


Dhaammmm.... Ek baar fir mai gir pada saath mai maa bhi jo girte hi behosh ho gayi thi... Ek baar fir unka sir zameen ko jaa laga... Meri halat aur kharab ho gayi thi mere pair nahi hill paa rahe the khada hona door ki baat hai... Mai ghisat ghisat kar maa ke paas phuncha unke sir ko goad me rakh thap thapate laga...



Mai... ( Rote hue ) maaaa.... utho maaa... Dekkkho... Mujjjheee aankhein kholo.... Areee koiiii hai meri madat karo.... Koi toh meri madat karo.... Aahhhahhh maaaaa.....



Chrrrrrrrrrrrrr....



Huhhhh.... Abhi mai ro hi raha tha ki mai dekhta hun Ek gadhi mere bagal se rukti hai... Mai aankhein kholne ki koshish karta hun toh samne ek lady ek aadmi ke saath khadi hui thi... mai unse madat maangne ke liye muhh kholne hi wala tha ki tabhi mai behosh ho jata hun...



Late Night... 1:15 AM...



Location... ****** Seher Bus stand...



....kon ho tum meri beti Yashoda kha hai mujhe abhi uske paas jana hai... Ab se woh mere saath rahegi tum ek khooni ho... Kahi tumne uske saath bhi toh kuch nahi kiya...


Tony... ( Gusse me ) apni jubaan ko lagaam do... Mai kon hoon mai aache se janta hun mujhe batane ki zaroorat nahi hai... Yashoda meri hai woh mere saath rahegi aur tumne usse Milne ki koshish bhi ki toh yaad rakhna mai kon hoon aur kya kar sakta hoon...


Kamalnath... ( Darte hue ) kyaaaa kaarrrr logeeee tummmm maij bhi dekhta hun... Jaate hi police ko compliant kar dunga tumne khoon kiya hai.... Aur meri beti Yashoda ko jabardasti apne saath rakha hai...



Tony... ( Gusse me coller pakd utha deta hai ) tum aukat se jayada bol diye... Maine bola na Yashoda sukarshit mere saath hai... Aur mere saath hi rhegi baat khtam aur rahi baat police ek nahi dus baar complaint kr dena meri koi mera jhaant ka Baal bhi tedha nahi kar payega... Lekin tumhara bhut kuch bigad sakta hai... Mujhe pta hai tu kiss colony me rehta hai... Teri biwi Manju kitne baje sabji lene jaati hai... Teri beti payal kon si bus se school jaati hai... Toh ek baar complaint karne se pehle Inka soch lena... Teri complaint se mujhe fark nahi padega lekin Inka bhut kuch bigad jayega...


Kamalnath... ( Dar se kampte hue ) tum aisaaaa nahhiii kaarrrr sakteeeee mereee pariwaar ko kyunnnn beech mai laa rahe ho.....


Tony... ( gusse me ) aur mujhse mera pariwar cheen rhe ho wohhhh....



Kamalnath... ( Hairaan ) huhhhh...



Tony... ( Gusse me ) mai pyaar karta hoon tu usko mujhse door karega... Kaat daalunga jisne bhi mujhe usse door karne ki koshish ki... Yeh chetavni nahi sacchai hai....


Itna bol kamalnath ko chod deta hai... Aur ek jagh baith jata hai... Usne kya socha tha kya ho gya itne saalo se ek pal ka intezar kar raha tha jab Yashoda usko pasand kare Ek ummed use TejSingh ke roop mai dikhi magar ab woh bhi nahi rahi... saath hi use Yashoda ki fikr bhi ho rahi thi... Poora din ho gya use ghar se bahar aaj iska yaha Mann nahi lag raha tha woh ab TejSingh ki wajah se ruka tha ab woh jald se jald wapas apne pariwar ke paas jana chahata tha...


Thodi der mai bus bhi aa jati hai... Tony ek nigaah kamalnath ki taraf maar bus Mai chadh jata hai... Wanhi kamalnath bhi chup chap Tony ke peeche bus Mai baith jata hai... Use ab Yashoda se pehle apne ghar ko surakshit karna tha... Use apni beti ki fikar ho rahi thi...



....Huhhhhh mai haar nahi manunga...



Early Morning... 3:35 AM...


Location... ****** Seher Railway station...



...bhaisahab train kitni der mai aayegi...


Aadmi... Samay toh ho chuka aane hi waali hogi... Waise aap theek toh hai yeh sir par chot kaise lagi...


Nazim... ( Haklate hue ) kuuuchhh nahiiii wohhhh bassss pair fisaallll gyaaa tha...


Aadmi... Aacha aacha theek hai magar tumhe itna paseena kyun aa raha h... Tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai meri salaah mano... Toh tum pehle kisi aache doctor ko dikha lo...



Nazim... ( Ghabtare hue ) nahiiii... Meraa... Abhi Jana bhut zaroori hai...


Aadmi Nazim ko dekh kuch bolta usse pehle train dhere dhere platform par lagna shuru hi jaati h... Aur apna ticket no dekh apni boogi ki Taraf chal deta hai...


Nazim bhi train rukte hi jhat se Train mai chdh jata hai... Train mai jayada bheed nahi thi woh ek jagh baith jata hai... Uss birth par pehle se ek ladka so raha tha Nazim ke baithte hi uski neend khul jati hai... Dekhne se Jayda bada nahi laga rah tha... Sir par choti maathe par tilak... Tabhi train chal padhti hai...


Ladka... Kya hua bhaisahab sab theek hai...


Nazim... ( Paseena ponchte hue ) bas thodi tabiyat kharab hai...




Ladka... ( Pani ki bottle dete hue ) yeh lijiye paani pijiye... Itni tabiyat kharab hai toh kyun safar kar rahe ho woh bhi akele... Waise kha Tak jaana hai aapko... Woh kya hai na mujhe subh college time par pahuncha hai uske liye Sona padega aur aap meri seat par baithe hue hai...


Nazim... ( Kuch sochta hai fir ) mera koi nahi hai mai ***** seher jaa raha hun wanha mere door ke rishte daar rehte hai unhone mujhe kaam karne ke liye wanha bulaya hai... Tum chinta mat karo mai kahi aur baith jata hoon...


Nazim yaha se bhi nikal leta hai... Waise hi woh sawaal jawab dena nahi chahta tha pehle se uski fati padi thi... Kahi Tony usko dhoond na le woh jald se jald seher se bahar nikal jana chahta tha... Lekin har koi usse sawaal kar raha tha kahi uske muhh se kuch nikal na jaye isliye usne pehle khudko sabse door kiya fir gate ke paas baith gya...



Nazim...( Man mai ) Huhhhhh... Yeh jagh theek hai yaha koi behen ka loda apni maa nahi chudayega... Subh hote hi mai ***** phunch jaunga fir mai azaad... Ahhhhhhh haramkhor ne bhut zor se mara abhi tak dard kar raha hai... uss Randi ke bacche ko aisa sabak sikhaunga ki yaad rakhega....


Abhi woh soch mai gum hi tha ki uski peeth par ek hath aata hai... Jisse woh buri tarah se ghabra jata hai aur mudkar dekhta hai toh wohi ladka khada hua tha... Jise dekh woh thoda relax hota hai...


Nazim... Haan kya hua...


Ladka... Aapka sach mai koi apna nahi hai...


Nazim... ( Sunker pehle ghatabta hai fir ) nahi... Waise tum yeh kyun puch rahe hai...


Abhi woh kuch aur kehta ki usse pehle usse ek dhakka lagta hai aur woh train se neeche gir jata hai...



Ladka... Jab koi hai nahi toh kyun zinda hai faltu ka bojh ban raha hai... Huhhhh... chalo ab so jate hai... No. 1289... Hmmmm abhi bhut baaki hai... Awwwwww need aa rahi hai...


Aur angdai lete hue ek baar gate se baar dekhta hai... Nazim ki body kahi dikhai nahi padti train bhi kaafi raftaar se chal rahi thi... Woh wapis aake apne berth par let jata hai...







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[Frieren]

Introduction....

Hyy Doston welcome back aap sabhi ka... Bhut time se fans mere se story ki demand kar rahe the so here we are... Coming with a new story new consept... Story ke baare mai baat karne se pehle mai aap sabko batana chahunga... Koi iss story par purani story lekar baat nahi karega.. mai chahunga jo bhi log hai woh iske baare mai baat Karen na ki purani story ko lekr koi comment paas kare ki update kab aayega... Woh story unofficially close ho chuki hai mere mind se I don't know how to restart that... So please thoda sa corporate kare mere saath...​

Baat kare iski toh jaisa aap title se thoda bhut anumaan laga sakte hai... Yeh story thodi Mythology se inspired hai poori story based nahi hai itna gyaan toh nahi mujhe concept ke baare haan liken jitna bhI maine Google YouTube se is topic ke baare mai padha Jo thoda bhut relate hoga isme... Aur aise bhut se jagh se bhi story mai aayengi aapko lagega yeh toh iss movie ka seen hai yaa iski story yeh hai.. toh woh log jayada dimaag na lagayen... story ko story ke jaise padhe itna hi hota toh har koi story na likh deta kahi se uthakar nahi na... So please yeh comment na kare.. iska seen hai aisa hoga n all... Isme aapko- Insect Fantasy Romance Thriller Sab milega aapko so bane rahiye stay tuned....

Baaki update Try Krunga 2 update in a week dun.. coz job bhi hai meri.. Sunday aur Thursday.... Sunday free rehta hun and Thursday ko daily thoda thoda time nikal kar update post kar hi sakta hun... Aur yeh story complete hogi iske liye aap mujhe doshi kar sakte hai agar nahi hui toh...

Baki comment krke bataye yeh consept story ka aapko kaisa laga aur kitne excited hai aap ise padhne ke liye... Jitna jayada positive response utna jaldi update dene ki koshish karunga mai...

1st..the poster of story is outstanding, poster dekh ke hi feel aa rahi hai ki crazy things hone wali hai isme.. The way that boy stand in that pic, gives me goosebumps

Ant hi aarambh hai, this topic is broad as hell... I hope ki ise padhte waqt mujhe dar jarur lage..

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[Frieren]

( KALYUG... Part 1 )

( Corrupt government / corruption... )



Time... 12:39AM location unknown......



Hhhhhhhh hhhhhhhh hhhhhhhh mujhe yeh karna hi hoga maa ke liye... Maa tumhe kuch nahi hoga bas thoda time aur bass hum phunch hi gye... maa maa tum sun rahi ho na aankhen kholo maa...


Ek ** saal ka ladka Jo dikhne se greeb lag raha hai badan par fate purane kapde h... Saath uski maa jise ladke ne peeth par utha rakha hai jinki haalat kahi se theek nahi lag rahi sir par gehri chot khoon paani ki tarah beh raha hai... Aakhon se aasun beh rahe hai apne bete ko uski chinta karte dekh kar... Dard mai baar baar behosh hone ke bawajood bete ki baatain unhe hosh khone nahi de rahi hai... Uski saasain dhere dhere kamjor ho rahi hai jo pta nahi kab band ho jayen... Woh apne bete se baatein Karna chahti hai lekin uske muhh se kuch lafs bhi nikalana sambhav nahi ho paa raha hai... Aasun bahane ke alawa woh kuch aur nahi kar sakti... Saath hi woh apne betain palo ko yaad kar rahi hai...


Year **** ( past )


Location government hospital... Time 4:35AM...



....Doctor doctor jaldi chaliye 217 bed waali lady ko pain shuru ho gaya hai..... Nurse


Doctor... ( Jo gehri neend mai tha ) chilla kyun rahi hai... Yeh government hospital hai pata hai na... Chal mai aata hoon thodi mai..


Nurse.. magar doctor woh pait***


Doctor... ( Beech mai hi ) suna nahi tune maine kya kaha... Chal jaa ab yaha se aata hun mai...


Uske baad doctor gate band kar leta hai fir ek gehri neend sone ke liye let jata hai... Wohi nurse jo yeh sab sun kar jara bhi aacharya nahi hua quki jab se woh yaha kaam kar rahi roz aise kitne hi cases usko dekhne ko milte hai... Soch kar ek bund aansun ki uski nikal jaati hai fir dusre hi pal woh bhaagi bhaagi normal ward mai enter karti hai...


Lady jise dekh kar lag raha hai pet se hai... Dard mai tadap rahi magar madat karne waala koi nahi hai... Poora ward khaali pada hua hai... Jisse anumaan laga sakte hai government hospital ki kya sthiti chal rahi hai... Jaha ek doctor ek nurse aur ek hi compounder poora hospital chala rahe hai... Isliye yaha koi mareez dekhne ko nahi mill raha jiske pass thoda bhut bhi Paisa hai private hospital mai jata hai...


Lady jiske pass na ilaaj ke liye paise hai na koi rishtedar madat karne waala... Aasun bahate hue tadapte hue apne pet par hath fer apne bete se baatein kar rahi hai... Shayad usne bhi haar maan li hai nurse ko bhi gye kaafi samay ho chala hai dard mai uski aankh band ho hi rahi hai magar baar baar uske pet mai dard use aankhen band nahi karne de raha sayad uska beta uski maa ki sthiti samjh raha hai... Jo abhi duniya mai aaya hi nahi.... dard mai karahte hue woh haar maan chuki hai magar fir uske chehre par ek muskaan dikh hi jati hai jab woh pet par haath rakh bete ko 'natkhat' Nand kishore keh pukaarti hai....


Tabhi Nurse ward mai enter karti hai lady ko iss halat mai dekh uski aankhon se bandh Tut padta hai.. woh bhi gareeb thi lady ki problem samjh sakti thi... Ameer log gareeb ko kede makode se jayada nahi samjhte... Jitna jayada Ameer utna jayada dard woh gareebon ko dete hai... Jiska natija uske saamne lady ** saal pregnant hai aage peeche koi nahi... Woh bhi gareeb hai magar kam se kam uska pariwar hai... Jinki madat se woh aaj government hospital mai naukri kar rahi hai... ** Saal ki bina shaadi ke kaise apne ko bachaya hai woh khud jaanti hai... Kai ameerjade uske peeche pade hai... Raaste Mai rok kar kabhi uska haath pakd lete hai kabhi uske angon ko chu lete hai woh chatpata kar kaise bhi wanha se baag jaati hai... Rote waqt woh yahi sab soch rahi thi ki ek cheeckh ne uska dhyaan kheencha jo lady ki thi...


Bhaag kar woh ward mai jaati hai lady haath pakad check karti hai nabs dheme chal rahi thi... Use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kare... kya ek baar fir doctor ke paas jaya jaye yeh vichar uske man mai jise uske jatak diya.. aur khud lady ko jaise taise karke moving bed par shift kar deti hai.. aur fouran use Operation Theatre mai le jane lagti hai...


OT mai woh lady ko check karti hai saare equipment lagati hai... Lady ko hosh mai lane ki koshish karti hai... Magar baar baar woh behosh ho rahi thi dard ke maare.. woh ek injection lady ko deti hai jisse woh hosh mai aaye magar woh bhi nakamyab ho jaata hai... Iss halat mai normal delivery nahi ho sakti thi... Cesarean delivery woh bina permission ke kar nahi sakti thi... Woh kya kare kya kare kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha...


Dewaar par tangi gadhi ki taraf woh baar baar dekh rahi thi... Subh ke 6 baj chuke the doctor abhi tak nahi aaya woh gate gadhi lady teeno ko baar baar dekh rahi thi... Kya kare isi muskill mai fasi rehne ke baad woh kuch faisla karti hai... Aur OT ki light Lady ke upar kar deti hai paas mai pade gloves mask aur kenchi padke woh ek nazar lady ki taraf dekhti hai... Jiska ek hath uske pet par abhi bhi hota hai... kaapte haath se woh lady ke hath ko pakad pet se alag karti hai aur shuru ho jaati hai....


Kareeb ghante bhar ki mehnat ke baad woh operation karne mai sucessful ho jati hai... goad mai bacche lo liye woh ek tak use niharti hai... Jo gulabi rang chote chote haath pair idher udher maar kar kilkaari maar raha hai... dikhne mai kisi shehzade ki tarah behad khubsurat dikh raha tha... Woh ek tak use niharti rehti hai baccha roye jata hai woh chupp karane ki koshish karti hai magar ladka roye jaa raha tha... woh jaldi se baache ko ek kapde mai lapet kar maa ki taraf dekhti hai toh uske hosh hi udd hate hai....


Lady ka hath bed se neeche latka hua tha aakhen bhi band padi thi dekhne se lag raha tha shayad saasain bhi ruk chuki hai... Woh jaldi se baache ko apne se alag kar ek palne mai rakh deti hai... Aur lady ke paas ja use check karti hai toh dhaak se neeche gir jati hai... Woh sunya ki awastha mai phunch gayi thi... Lady aur dard na seh saki usne dum toad diya tha.... Uske chehre par jaha pehle muskaan thi wohi marte waqt chinta ki lakeeren saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi... Jo sayad apne bete ke liye thi...


Sab apni soch mai gum the magar ladka roye jaa raha tha shayad woh apni maa ka dhoondh raha tha... Jiski awaaz sun Nurse ko hosh aata hai aur bacche ko apni goad mai utha leti hai phut phut kar rone lagti hai...


Time 9:25 AM...


Nurse bacche ko haath mai liye apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi thi... Tabhi use raaste mai dairy dikati hai jisse use yaad aata hai ladke ne subh se kuch nahi khaya aur woh uske liye kuch paise se doodh khareed leti hai.. aur saath hi rikshaw kar apne ghar ki taraf chal deti hai... Poore Raaste uski aankhon nam hi thi aasun rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the saath hi use poori raat ki kahani uske saamne dimaag Mai ghoom rahi thi.. tabhi use subh ki hui baat yaad aati hai...


Earlier 1 hour ago...


...Aahhh hhhhh hmm Yashoda kaha ho ek chai pila do jara...


Doctor ubasi lete hue ward mai enter karta hai aur Nurse jiska naam yashoda hai use chai ke liye kehta hai... jaha ward mai yashoda na pakar chaaro taraf use dhoondne ki koshish karta hai.. tabhi uska dhyaan OT ki taraf jata hai jiski light abhi tak jal rahi hoti hai... Woh ander jaake dekhta hai toh use nurse ek kone mai khadi dikhayi deti hai jiske haath mai baccha rehta hai... Tabhi ek nazar woh lady ki taraf daalta hai aur use check karta hai... jisse use pta chahta hai lady dum toad chuki hai tabhi woh nurse ko khoya hua dekh kehta hai...


Doctor... Kya hua yeh toh mar gayi tum kyun muh latka ke baithi ho jao aur apna kaam karo mere liye chai banao tab tak mai Manoj ko phone kar deta hun body ko hatane ke liye yaha se...


Doctor ki baat sun woh ek baar fir hosh mai aati hai aur laanat bari nazron se use dekhti hai.... Magar woh kar bhi kya sakti thi agar use yaha rehna hai toh doctor ki baat na maane ka sawaal hi nhi uthta.. magar ek problem uske saamne yeh thi ki ladka Jo rote rote badi mushkil se abhi hi soya tha uske haath ki ek ungli abhi bhi uske haath mai hi thi... Agar woh chai banane jaati hai toh use baache ko yahi chod kar jana padega... Abhi woh apni soch mai ghum hi thi tabhi use doctor ki baat sun jor ka dhakka lagta hai... Aur uske maathe par paseena aur chinta ubhar aati hai...


Doctor... Aur haan 10 bje tak Ravi aayega Usko operation ka saman aur injection de Dena jo maine tumhe kal rakhne ko diya tha.. saath mai woh ****rs bhi dega woh le lena... Ab jaldi karo tumhe pta hai na mujhe uthane ke baad chai der se peene ki aadhat nahi hai warna Mera sir dard karta hai... Chalo jao khadi kyun ho... Yashoda sunayi de raha hai tujhe...


Yashoda jo iss samay doctor ki baat sun khoyi hui thi.. tabhi doctor use jhakjhor kar hilata hua kaam ki dubara kehta hai... Magar use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kare kya jawaab de.. qki woh injection toh usne raat ko hi lady ko laga diya tha.. jise doctor ne Ravi ko bech diya hai... Ab woh injection kaha se laye abhi kuch soche usse pehle ek bar fir doctor use jhakjhor deta hai...


Doctor... Kha khoi ho tabiyat toh theek hai tumhare... Yaa kaan behnre ho gye hai jaldi se apne kaam par lag jao mujhe ek baat baar baar kehne ki aadat nahi hai....


Doctor ki baat se uska gussa saaf pta chal raha tha tabhi yashoda kapte hotho se use raat ki poori baat batati hai jisse sun doctor gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur apna gussa yashoda par nikaal deta hai... Ek rakh ke tappad use maarte hue kehta hai...


Doctor... Tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui bina mujhse puche... Cesarean delivery krne ki kisse permission li tumne... Jawaab do kisse puch kar yeh sab kiya... Pta bhi hai jo injection tumne ise diya uski keemat kya thi... Jawaab do hai koi jawaab tumhare paas...


Yashoda aakhon mai aasun liye maar kha rahi thi... Qyuki use khud nahi pata tha uski keemat usne bas lady ki madat ke liye woh injection use de diya tha... Doctor ek baar fir thappad uske gaal par jadd deta hai... Aur cheenkhta hua kehta hai...


Doctor... Nikal jao iss hospital se warna mai kuch kar dunga tumhe... Aur jo mera nuksaan hua hai woh tumhari salary se kaat lunga jao dafa ho jao yaha se abhi isi waqt mai tumhe nokri se nikalta hun...


Yashoda use kuch kehna chahti thi magar doctor uski nahi sunta... Woh pairon mai girkar doctor ko hospital na nikalane ke liye mana rahi hoti hai magar doctor ek nahi sunta aur pair jhatk deta hai jisse sir paas table se lagta hai.... Jisse uski pakad chooth jati hai uske pairon se... Aur doctor wanha se chala jata hai...


Peeche Yashoda roti rehti hai magar uski sunne waala koi nahi tha... Usse reh rehkar yaad aata hai uske maa papa ne use nurse banane ke liye kitni mehnat ki thi... Yaha tak uski padhai ke liye unke paas ek matr jo zameen ghar ki aur kuch gehne the woh bhi girwi rakh diye the.. yeh sochkar ki unki beti padh likh kar unki gareebi ko door karegi... magar aaj use yaha se nikaal diya gaya yeh baat kaise kaise woh apne maa papa ko bataegi....


Abhi woh Soch me gum hi thi ki Tabhi use baache ki rone ki awaaz sunayi deti hai.... jisse uska dhyaan Tut jata hai aur Nazar utha kar jab woh use dekhti hai toh use lady ki yaad bhi aati hai... Usse baache ki fikar bhi hoti hai ki ab iska kya hoga doctor shayad ise bhi... Nhi nhi... Yeh sochkar hi uske rongte khade ho jate hai... Aur woh aage badh baache ko apni goad mai utha leti hai...

Baacha bhi uski goad mai aa Rona kam kar deta hai magar hath pair abhi bhi maar raha tha jise dekh rote hue bhi uske chehre par ek muskurahat aa jati hai uske masoom Surat par woh ek kiss kar deti hai... Aur natakhat Nandkishor kehti hai jo uski maa pet mai jab tha usse baatain karte waqt keh rahi thi... jisse sun ladka bhi kilkaari leta hua hass deta hai aur yashoda ki ungli pakad leta hai... Jisse woh chudane ki koshish krti hai magar ladka nahi chodta... Ab uske chehre par muskaan aur gehri ho jaati hai... Woh ek tak use dekhti rehti hai tabhi woh Uth khadi hoti hai aur bacche ko saath le ghar ki taraf nikal padti hai...


To be continued...


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Update was nice... But there was many spelling mistake, jiske karan mujhe padhne me kaafi dikkat huyi kayi jagah... So Ise improve karo bas.

Writing skills was really good, thought level was also good... Mostly iss update me drama tha jo emotionally connect kiya...

After reading this update, I can easily say ki ju ki ye story teen cheezon me define kar sakti hu main...

1. ASUR - Web series
2. Monster - anime
3. Death note (little bit)

Update ki shuruaat me jo aurat marne ki kagaar par hai wo jarur Nurse hi hogi(jo maa bani hai hero ki) ... Jise bachha godh me lene ke karan ghar aur samaaj se shayad nikal dia hoga aur ab ye halat huyi.. Ya may be firse isme bhi government ki envolvement hogi then hero ko past pata chalegi aur fir hero may be government ya system ke khilaaf jung shuru karega... Although I'll be glad if kuch alag hua isse to

The heart of this update was surely the pain of motherhood and innocence of that newborn... Which is excellently explain by u... Mujhe ummeed nhi thi kahani ki shuruaat iss tarah se hogi, really.

Thanks for the update... Dekhti hu aage kya hai kahani me (my 2nd revo on xf so galti huyi ho to aadat daal lena )

 

[Dharmendra Kumar Patel]

बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट

 

[ellysperry]

( KALYUG... Part 1 )

( Corrupt government / corruption... )



Time... 12:39AM location unknown......



Hhhhhhhh hhhhhhhh hhhhhhhh mujhe yeh karna hi hoga maa ke liye... Maa tumhe kuch nahi hoga bas thoda time aur bass hum phunch hi gye... maa maa tum sun rahi ho na aankhen kholo maa...


Ek ** saal ka ladka Jo dikhne se greeb lag raha hai badan par fate purane kapde h... Saath uski maa jise ladke ne peeth par utha rakha hai jinki haalat kahi se theek nahi lag rahi sir par gehri chot khoon paani ki tarah beh raha hai... Aakhon se aasun beh rahe hai apne bete ko uski chinta karte dekh kar... Dard mai baar baar behosh hone ke bawajood bete ki baatain unhe hosh khone nahi de rahi hai... Uski saasain dhere dhere kamjor ho rahi hai jo pta nahi kab band ho jayen... Woh apne bete se baatein Karna chahti hai lekin uske muhh se kuch lafs bhi nikalana sambhav nahi ho paa raha hai... Aasun bahane ke alawa woh kuch aur nahi kar sakti... Saath hi woh apne betain palo ko yaad kar rahi hai...


Year **** ( past )


Location government hospital... Time 4:35AM...



....Doctor doctor jaldi chaliye 217 bed waali lady ko pain shuru ho gaya hai..... Nurse


Doctor... ( Jo gehri neend mai tha ) chilla kyun rahi hai... Yeh government hospital hai pata hai na... Chal mai aata hoon thodi mai..


Nurse.. magar doctor woh pait***


Doctor... ( Beech mai hi ) suna nahi tune maine kya kaha... Chal jaa ab yaha se aata hun mai...


Uske baad doctor gate band kar leta hai fir ek gehri neend sone ke liye let jata hai... Wohi nurse jo yeh sab sun kar jara bhi aacharya nahi hua quki jab se woh yaha kaam kar rahi roz aise kitne hi cases usko dekhne ko milte hai... Soch kar ek bund aansun ki uski nikal jaati hai fir dusre hi pal woh bhaagi bhaagi normal ward mai enter karti hai...


Lady jise dekh kar lag raha hai pet se hai... Dard mai tadap rahi magar madat karne waala koi nahi hai... Poora ward khaali pada hua hai... Jisse anumaan laga sakte hai government hospital ki kya sthiti chal rahi hai... Jaha ek doctor ek nurse aur ek hi compounder poora hospital chala rahe hai... Isliye yaha koi mareez dekhne ko nahi mill raha jiske pass thoda bhut bhi Paisa hai private hospital mai jata hai...


Lady jiske pass na ilaaj ke liye paise hai na koi rishtedar madat karne waala... Aasun bahate hue tadapte hue apne pet par hath fer apne bete se baatein kar rahi hai... Shayad usne bhi haar maan li hai nurse ko bhi gye kaafi samay ho chala hai dard mai uski aankh band ho hi rahi hai magar baar baar uske pet mai dard use aankhen band nahi karne de raha sayad uska beta uski maa ki sthiti samjh raha hai... Jo abhi duniya mai aaya hi nahi.... dard mai karahte hue woh haar maan chuki hai magar fir uske chehre par ek muskaan dikh hi jati hai jab woh pet par haath rakh bete ko 'natkhat' Nand kishore keh pukaarti hai....


Tabhi Nurse ward mai enter karti hai lady ko iss halat mai dekh uski aankhon se bandh Tut padta hai.. woh bhi gareeb thi lady ki problem samjh sakti thi... Ameer log gareeb ko kede makode se jayada nahi samjhte... Jitna jayada Ameer utna jayada dard woh gareebon ko dete hai... Jiska natija uske saamne lady ** saal pregnant hai aage peeche koi nahi... Woh bhi gareeb hai magar kam se kam uska pariwar hai... Jinki madat se woh aaj government hospital mai naukri kar rahi hai... ** Saal ki bina shaadi ke kaise apne ko bachaya hai woh khud jaanti hai... Kai ameerjade uske peeche pade hai... Raaste Mai rok kar kabhi uska haath pakd lete hai kabhi uske angon ko chu lete hai woh chatpata kar kaise bhi wanha se baag jaati hai... Rote waqt woh yahi sab soch rahi thi ki ek cheeckh ne uska dhyaan kheencha jo lady ki thi...


Bhaag kar woh ward mai jaati hai lady haath pakad check karti hai nabs dheme chal rahi thi... Use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kare... kya ek baar fir doctor ke paas jaya jaye yeh vichar uske man mai jise uske jatak diya.. aur khud lady ko jaise taise karke moving bed par shift kar deti hai.. aur fouran use Operation Theatre mai le jane lagti hai...


OT mai woh lady ko check karti hai saare equipment lagati hai... Lady ko hosh mai lane ki koshish karti hai... Magar baar baar woh behosh ho rahi thi dard ke maare.. woh ek injection lady ko deti hai jisse woh hosh mai aaye magar woh bhi nakamyab ho jaata hai... Iss halat mai normal delivery nahi ho sakti thi... Cesarean delivery woh bina permission ke kar nahi sakti thi... Woh kya kare kya kare kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha...


Dewaar par tangi gadhi ki taraf woh baar baar dekh rahi thi... Subh ke 6 baj chuke the doctor abhi tak nahi aaya woh gate gadhi lady teeno ko baar baar dekh rahi thi... Kya kare isi muskill mai fasi rehne ke baad woh kuch faisla karti hai... Aur OT ki light Lady ke upar kar deti hai paas mai pade gloves mask aur kenchi padke woh ek nazar lady ki taraf dekhti hai... Jiska ek hath uske pet par abhi bhi hota hai... kaapte haath se woh lady ke hath ko pakad pet se alag karti hai aur shuru ho jaati hai....


Kareeb ghante bhar ki mehnat ke baad woh operation karne mai sucessful ho jati hai... goad mai bacche lo liye woh ek tak use niharti hai... Jo gulabi rang chote chote haath pair idher udher maar kar kilkaari maar raha hai... dikhne mai kisi shehzade ki tarah behad khubsurat dikh raha tha... Woh ek tak use niharti rehti hai baccha roye jata hai woh chupp karane ki koshish karti hai magar ladka roye jaa raha tha... woh jaldi se baache ko ek kapde mai lapet kar maa ki taraf dekhti hai toh uske hosh hi udd hate hai....


Lady ka hath bed se neeche latka hua tha aakhen bhi band padi thi dekhne se lag raha tha shayad saasain bhi ruk chuki hai... Woh jaldi se baache ko apne se alag kar ek palne mai rakh deti hai... Aur lady ke paas ja use check karti hai toh dhaak se neeche gir jati hai... Woh sunya ki awastha mai phunch gayi thi... Lady aur dard na seh saki usne dum toad diya tha.... Uske chehre par jaha pehle muskaan thi wohi marte waqt chinta ki lakeeren saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi... Jo sayad apne bete ke liye thi...


Sab apni soch mai gum the magar ladka roye jaa raha tha shayad woh apni maa ka dhoondh raha tha... Jiski awaaz sun Nurse ko hosh aata hai aur bacche ko apni goad mai utha leti hai phut phut kar rone lagti hai...


Time 9:25 AM...


Nurse bacche ko haath mai liye apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi thi... Tabhi use raaste mai dairy dikati hai jisse use yaad aata hai ladke ne subh se kuch nahi khaya aur woh uske liye kuch paise se doodh khareed leti hai.. aur saath hi rikshaw kar apne ghar ki taraf chal deti hai... Poore Raaste uski aankhon nam hi thi aasun rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the saath hi use poori raat ki kahani uske saamne dimaag Mai ghoom rahi thi.. tabhi use subh ki hui baat yaad aati hai...


Earlier 1 hour ago...


...Aahhh hhhhh hmm Yashoda kaha ho ek chai pila do jara...


Doctor ubasi lete hue ward mai enter karta hai aur Nurse jiska naam yashoda hai use chai ke liye kehta hai... jaha ward mai yashoda na pakar chaaro taraf use dhoondne ki koshish karta hai.. tabhi uska dhyaan OT ki taraf jata hai jiski light abhi tak jal rahi hoti hai... Woh ander jaake dekhta hai toh use nurse ek kone mai khadi dikhayi deti hai jiske haath mai baccha rehta hai... Tabhi ek nazar woh lady ki taraf daalta hai aur use check karta hai... jisse use pta chahta hai lady dum toad chuki hai tabhi woh nurse ko khoya hua dekh kehta hai...


Doctor... Kya hua yeh toh mar gayi tum kyun muh latka ke baithi ho jao aur apna kaam karo mere liye chai banao tab tak mai Manoj ko phone kar deta hun body ko hatane ke liye yaha se...


Doctor ki baat sun woh ek baar fir hosh mai aati hai aur laanat bari nazron se use dekhti hai.... Magar woh kar bhi kya sakti thi agar use yaha rehna hai toh doctor ki baat na maane ka sawaal hi nhi uthta.. magar ek problem uske saamne yeh thi ki ladka Jo rote rote badi mushkil se abhi hi soya tha uske haath ki ek ungli abhi bhi uske haath mai hi thi... Agar woh chai banane jaati hai toh use baache ko yahi chod kar jana padega... Abhi woh apni soch mai ghum hi thi tabhi use doctor ki baat sun jor ka dhakka lagta hai... Aur uske maathe par paseena aur chinta ubhar aati hai...


Doctor... Aur haan 10 bje tak Ravi aayega Usko operation ka saman aur injection de Dena jo maine tumhe kal rakhne ko diya tha.. saath mai woh ****rs bhi dega woh le lena... Ab jaldi karo tumhe pta hai na mujhe uthane ke baad chai der se peene ki aadhat nahi hai warna Mera sir dard karta hai... Chalo jao khadi kyun ho... Yashoda sunayi de raha hai tujhe...


Yashoda jo iss samay doctor ki baat sun khoyi hui thi.. tabhi doctor use jhakjhor kar hilata hua kaam ki dubara kehta hai... Magar use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kare kya jawaab de.. qki woh injection toh usne raat ko hi lady ko laga diya tha.. jise doctor ne Ravi ko bech diya hai... Ab woh injection kaha se laye abhi kuch soche usse pehle ek bar fir doctor use jhakjhor deta hai...


Doctor... Kha khoi ho tabiyat toh theek hai tumhare... Yaa kaan behnre ho gye hai jaldi se apne kaam par lag jao mujhe ek baat baar baar kehne ki aadat nahi hai....


Doctor ki baat se uska gussa saaf pta chal raha tha tabhi yashoda kapte hotho se use raat ki poori baat batati hai jisse sun doctor gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur apna gussa yashoda par nikaal deta hai... Ek rakh ke tappad use maarte hue kehta hai...


Doctor... Tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui bina mujhse puche... Cesarean delivery krne ki kisse permission li tumne... Jawaab do kisse puch kar yeh sab kiya... Pta bhi hai jo injection tumne ise diya uski keemat kya thi... Jawaab do hai koi jawaab tumhare paas...


Yashoda aakhon mai aasun liye maar kha rahi thi... Qyuki use khud nahi pata tha uski keemat usne bas lady ki madat ke liye woh injection use de diya tha... Doctor ek baar fir thappad uske gaal par jadd deta hai... Aur cheenkhta hua kehta hai...


Doctor... Nikal jao iss hospital se warna mai kuch kar dunga tumhe... Aur jo mera nuksaan hua hai woh tumhari salary se kaat lunga jao dafa ho jao yaha se abhi isi waqt mai tumhe nokri se nikalta hun...


Yashoda use kuch kehna chahti thi magar doctor uski nahi sunta... Woh pairon mai girkar doctor ko hospital na nikalane ke liye mana rahi hoti hai magar doctor ek nahi sunta aur pair jhatk deta hai jisse sir paas table se lagta hai.... Jisse uski pakad chooth jati hai uske pairon se... Aur doctor wanha se chala jata hai...


Peeche Yashoda roti rehti hai magar uski sunne waala koi nahi tha... Usse reh rehkar yaad aata hai uske maa papa ne use nurse banane ke liye kitni mehnat ki thi... Yaha tak uski padhai ke liye unke paas ek matr jo zameen ghar ki aur kuch gehne the woh bhi girwi rakh diye the.. yeh sochkar ki unki beti padh likh kar unki gareebi ko door karegi... magar aaj use yaha se nikaal diya gaya yeh baat kaise kaise woh apne maa papa ko bataegi....


Abhi woh Soch me gum hi thi ki Tabhi use baache ki rone ki awaaz sunayi deti hai.... jisse uska dhyaan Tut jata hai aur Nazar utha kar jab woh use dekhti hai toh use lady ki yaad bhi aati hai... Usse baache ki fikar bhi hoti hai ki ab iska kya hoga doctor shayad ise bhi... Nhi nhi... Yeh sochkar hi uske rongte khade ho jate hai... Aur woh aage badh baache ko apni goad mai utha leti hai...

Baacha bhi uski goad mai aa Rona kam kar deta hai magar hath pair abhi bhi maar raha tha jise dekh rote hue bhi uske chehre par ek muskurahat aa jati hai uske masoom Surat par woh ek kiss kar deti hai... Aur natakhat Nandkishor kehti hai jo uski maa pet mai jab tha usse baatain karte waqt keh rahi thi... jisse sun ladka bhi kilkaari leta hua hass deta hai aur yashoda ki ungli pakad leta hai... Jisse woh chudane ki koshish krti hai magar ladka nahi chodta... Ab uske chehre par muskaan aur gehri ho jaati hai... Woh ek tak use dekhti rehti hai tabhi woh Uth khadi hoti hai aur bacche ko saath le ghar ki taraf nikal padti hai...


To be continued...


( Kaafi samay lag gya pehla update aap sab ke saamne hazir aacha ya bura jaisa bhi ho comment kar mujhe jaroor batana... Next update bhi taiyar hai... 15 like aim hote hi post kar dunga.. bhut time baad return Kiya hai.. hope dhere dhere skills sudhar jayengi.. )


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