Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

[Rohan]

nice update
bro aap ki story mixed up ho gai hi
clear update do

Bhai kya shamaj nahi aya

 

[Rohan]

Aab Bhai yaha par char jagah ka jikar hoga

1. Pehla dharti me reh rahe insaan jis jagah ko me (dharti lok ) kahuga
2. Dusra patal yaha aasur rehte hai.. ....jis jagah ko me (patal lok ) kahuga
3. Tishri jaha hamare hero ka jaha dharti se pehle janam hua tha magar kisi karan vash use dubara punar janam lena pada us jagah ko me (raaj log ) kahuga..............

1. Or jaha bhagwaan rehte h us jagah ko (bhagwaan lok) kahuga.

Patal lok characters
Is lok me main 4 aasur ka raaj chalta hai. Or

ek un aasuro ki bhan hai.

Or ek aasur guru hai.

Baki uski sena (soldiers) vahera hai.

Ab chalte hai. Introduction ke taraf

1. Aasurraj ( ye Patal lok ka raja hai.). Maha shaktishali jiski shakti ki koi seema (ye koi ladki nahi hai.) Nahi hai. Maha vidvansh Kari hai ye
2. danvasur( ye aasurraj ka dusra Bhai hai.)
3. kamasur ( ye aasurraj ka tisra Bhai hai )
4. kutrasur (ye aasurraj ka 4 bhai hai.
5. Prerna ( ye Charo Bhai ki ekloti bhai hai).

In pacho ko kuch vardan prapt hai. Vo samay ane par pata chal jaega.....

Or ek aasurguru hai ( ye aasuro ke guru hai.)

Bhai characters koi shamaj Na aae ho to bta Dena......


New characters (hero family)

Rahul : hamare story ka hero
Age : 17 years
Colour : blue eyes ( nili aakh)

(Ye apni bua ke pass rehta hai. kiu ye bhi age ki story me pata chal jaega.)

Or boxing me bhi best hai or padai me bhi bohot acha hai jyadatar jim karna or jogging karna pasand hai or dekhne me bohot handsome lagta hai or bohot attractive bhi...

Mala : ye rahul ki bua hai
Age : 35 years
Colour : simple and attractive
Or ek dum slim hai.
( Ye housewife hai or ghr par hii rehti hai or apne sabhi beti or rahul se bohot pyaar karti hai)

Mohan : ye rahul ke phufa hai
Age : 38 years
Look : simple & fair

or kaam ( work) ke silsile me bahar hii rehte hai or bohot kaam ghr ate hai.

Payal : ye rahul ki bhan hai ( mala bua ki beti)
Age : 17
Colour : ek daam dhood ki tarha gora
Figure : ek dam jabardast & khubsurat

dil ki bohot saaf hai or rahul ki same age ki hai
magar inki ek problem hai ki ye jyda tar padai me ghusi rehti hai. Or hamesha class me top karti hai...
Ek or baat hai isme vo aage pata chal jaegi.

Ruchi or nisha : ye bhi rahul ki choti bhan hai (mala bua ki beti)
Age : 16 hai dono ki
Colour : bohot jyada attractive

Vese dono ki age mai sirf 1 ( one) minute ka farak hai isliye ye twins hai..

Or ek or baat ye dono bohot hii natkhat (setan ) hai magar apne bhai rahul ki haar baat manti hai

Dekhne me bohot hiii cute ek dam pari ki tarha hai....

Hamesha mazak karti rehti hai...


New characters of heroine
Heroine - sunaina
age 17
Height 5.8
Figure jabardast
Colour - blue eyes
Very cute girl and very modern magar ek khaas baat hai isme ye IT ( information technology ) ke bhi baap hai

Father - suresh
Age - 40
Height - 5.10
Magar abhi bhi young lagte hai or inka chota sa khudka business hai
Mother - rinky
Age -38
Colour - fair & attractive
Ye house wife hain.
Or apni family se bohot pyaar karti hi.

 

[Harry rocks]

Aab Bhai yaha par char jagah ka jikar hoga

1. Pehla dharti me reh rahe insaan jis jagah ko me (dharti lok ) kahuga
2. Dusra patal yaha aasur rehte hai.. ....jis jagah ko me (patal lok ) kahuga
3. Tishri jaha hamare hero ka jaha dharti se pehle janam hua tha magar kisi karan vash use dubara punar janam lena pada us jagah ko me (raaj log ) kahuga..............

1. Or jaha bhagwaan rehte h us jagah ko (bhagwaan lok) kahuga.

Patal lok characters
Is lok me main 5 aasur hai. Or ek aasur guru hai.
Baki uski sena (soldiers) vahera hai.
Ab chalte hai. Introduction ke taraf

1. Aasurraj ( ye Patal lok ka raja hai.). Maha shaktishali jiski shakti ki koi seema (ye koi ladki nahi hai.) Maha vidvansh Kari.
2. Aasur danva ( ye aasurraj ka dusra Bhai hai.)
3. Aasur kamasur ( ye aasurraj ka tisra Bhai hai )
4. Aasur kutra (ye aasurraj ka 4 bhai hair.

Prerna ( ye Charo Bhai ki ekloti bhai hai. In pacho ko kuch vardan prapt hai. Vo samay ane par pata chal jaega.....

Or ek aasurguru
Bhai characters koi shamaj Na aae ho to bta Dena......


New characters (hero family)
Rahul : hamare story ka hero
(Ye apni bua ke pass rehta hair kiu ye bhi age ki story me pata chal jaega.)
Or boxing me bhi best hai or padai me bhi bohot acha hai jyadatar jism karna ese pasand hai or dekhne me bohot handsome lagta hai...

Mala : ye rahul ki bua hai
( Ye housewife hai or ghr par hii rehti hai or apne sabhi beti or rahul se bohot pyaar karti hai)

Mohan : ye rahul ke phufa hai or kaam ( work) ke silsile me bahar hii rehte hai or bohot kaam ghr ate hai.
Payal : ye rahul ki bhan hai ( mala bua ki beti) dil ki bohot saaf hai or rahul ki same age ki hai
Jekne me ek daam slim or bohot hii khubsuraat hai magar inki ek problem hai ki ye jyda tar padai me ghusi rehti hai. Or hamesha class me top karti hai...

Ruchi or nisha : ye bhi rahul ki choti bhan hai (mala bua ki beti)
Vese dono ki age mai sirf 1 ( one) minute ka farak hai isliye ye twins hai..
Or ek or baat ye dono bohot hii natkhat (setan ) hai magar apne bhai rahul ki haar baat manti hai
Dekhne me bohot hiii cute ek dam pari ki tarha hai....
Hamesha mazak karti rehti hai...


New characters of heroine
Heroine - sunaina
age 17
Height 5.8
Figure jabardast
Colour - blue eyes
Very cute girl and very modern magar ek khaas baat hai isme ye IT ( information technology ) ke bhi baap hai

Father - suresh
Age - 40
Height - 5.10
Magar abhi bhi young lagte hai or inka chota sa khudka business hai
Mother - rinky
Age -38
Colour - fair & attractive
Ye house wife hain.
Or apni family se bohot pyaar karti hi.

Nice update bhai and please mere thread p bhi jarur visit kijiye
My story name is
Pyare rishte

 

[Rohan]

Nice update bhai and please mere thread p bhi jarur visit kijiye
My story name is
Pyare rishte

Thanks for supporting bhai

Or jese hii thoda sa bhi time milega apke thread ko jarur paduga.
Topic to bahot zabardast hai.
Pyare rishte..
Mujhe lagta hai story bhi bahot achi hogi.........

 

[Rohan]

Aab Bhai yaha par char jagah ka jikar hoga

1. Pehla dharti me reh rahe insaan jis jagah ko me (dharti lok ) kahuga
2. Dusra patal yaha aasur rehte hai.. ....jis jagah ko me (patal lok ) kahuga
3. Tishri jaha hamare hero ka jaha dharti se pehle janam hua tha magar kisi karan vash use dubara punar janam lena pada us jagah ko me (raaj log ) kahuga..............

1. Or jaha bhagwaan rehte h us jagah ko (bhagwaan lok) kahuga.

Patal lok characters
Is lok me main 4 aasur ka raaj chalta hai. Or

ek un aasuro ki bhan hai.

Or ek aasur guru hai.

Baki uski sena (soldiers) vahera hai.

Ab chalte hai. Introduction ke taraf

1. Aasurraj ( ye Patal lok ka raja hai.). Maha shaktishali jiski shakti ki koi seema (ye koi ladki nahi hai.) Nahi hai. Maha vidvansh Kari hai ye
2. danvasur( ye aasurraj ka dusra Bhai hai.)
3. kamasur ( ye aasurraj ka tisra Bhai hai )
4. kutrasur (ye aasurraj ka 4 bhai hai.
5. Prerna ( ye Charo Bhai ki ekloti bhai hai).

In pacho ko kuch vardan prapt hai. Vo samay ane par pata chal jaega.....

Or ek aasurguru hai ( ye aasuro ke guru hai.)

Bhai characters koi shamaj Na aae ho to bta Dena......


New characters (hero family)

Rahul : hamare story ka hero
Age : 17 years
Colour : blue eyes ( nili aakh)

(Ye apni bua ke pass rehta hai. kiu ye bhi age ki story me pata chal jaega.)

Or boxing me bhi best hai or padai me bhi bohot acha hai jyadatar jim karna or jogging karna pasand hai or dekhne me bohot handsome lagta hai or bohot attractive bhi...

Mala : ye rahul ki bua hai
Age : 35 years
Colour : simple and attractive
Or ek dum slim hai.
( Ye housewife hai or ghr par hii rehti hai or apne sabhi beti or rahul se bohot pyaar karti hai)

Mohan : ye rahul ke phufa hai
Age : 38 years
Look : simple & fair

or kaam ( work) ke silsile me bahar hii rehte hai or bohot kaam ghr ate hai.

Payal : ye rahul ki bhan hai ( mala bua ki beti)
Age : 17
Colour : ek daam dhood ki tarha gora
Figure : ek dam jabardast & khubsurat

dil ki bohot saaf hai or rahul ki same age ki hai
magar inki ek problem hai ki ye jyda tar padai me ghusi rehti hai. Or hamesha class me top karti hai...
Ek or baat hai isme vo aage pata chal jaegi.

Ruchi or nisha : ye bhi rahul ki choti bhan hai (mala bua ki beti)
Age : 16 hai dono ki
Colour : bohot jyada attractive

Vese dono ki age mai sirf 1 ( one) minute ka farak hai isliye ye twins hai..

Or ek or baat ye dono bohot hii natkhat (setan ) hai magar apne bhai rahul ki haar baat manti hai

Dekhne me bohot hiii cute ek dam pari ki tarha hai....

Hamesha mazak karti rehti hai...


New characters of heroine
Heroine - sunaina
age 17
Height 5.8
Figure jabardast
Colour - blue eyes
Very cute girl and very modern magar ek khaas baat hai isme ye IT ( information technology ) ke bhi baap hai

Father - suresh
Age - 40
Height - 5.10
Magar abhi bhi young lagte hai or inka chota sa khudka business hai
Mother - rinky
Age -38
Colour - fair & attractive
Ye house wife hain.
Or apni family se bohot pyaar karti hi.

Bhai koi character me confusion hai to isko jarur padna or kuch samaj me na ae
Puch ( ask) lena jo shamaj me naa aae.....

Kiuki character thode jyada hoge is story me
Abhi kuch update ke baad rahul ki maa ( nakli maa) ka bhi character aaega...

 

[sonukale]

Nice intro

 

[Yellow Flash]

Nice

 

[Mahiirathore]

Nice Update

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Nic update

 

[John Cena]

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