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The writing... Never felt like it's more than 6k words... The time passed once I started reading .. the scenes... emotions... Love...family ... everything is awesome
Since next update will be entirely different and will be about kaera, so you can take your time. I will treat this as completed so won't have to wait long. Anyways awesome post.
Good one like previous
bahut hi shandaar update tha bhai, AVA ki press conference ki vajah se VEER par lage Sare iljaam dur ho gaye, FRANS ki DGSI bhi samaj gai ki unki chuk hui he, sath hi parivar milan imotional raha vahi SUHANA ka love tree bhi bada ho gaya he. But ant me lag raha he ki AVA khudkushi karne ja rahi he, kyonki vo tut chuki heVEER ne bhi dutkara aur uski maa jise vo behad pyar karti thi vo bhi GOD ke pass chali gai jis se AVA apne apko akela mehsus kar rahe he
Bhai bahut hi badhiya update tha 149 maza aagay
Lajawab update Bhai
Nice update! Hope you get a good phone soon! Things are progressing well for veer on his journey. Looking forward to what you have thought for him in the next part.
Super Duper fantabulous update Werewolf bhai...
Nice n fantastic
fantastic update bro
Nice behtreen dhamakedar update
जबरदस्त अपडेट भाई
Bhai update shupdate to theek hai par sona bhi zaroori hai.. ye kaunsa time hua bhai.. subah bhi doge to bhi padh hi lenge hum
Superb awesome update brother to gud luvd it eagerly waiting for next update
And thnx man for Posting this update after so much difficulties take care
Ab to mujhe bhi yaad rakhna padega wrna jaise mere haal hain kuch dino mein phir khichdi ban jaani hai..
werewolf भाई बहुत हीं जोरदार स्टोरी लिख रहे है आप मैं पहले भी 8- 10 बार कमेंट कर चूका हु आप की स्टोरी पे फिर मेरी id ब्लॉक होगई फिर जब दूसरी id बनाई तो सिर्फ साइलेंट रीडर की तरह पड़ता रहा और नैन भाई की स्टोरी पे तो हम हमेशा हीं उपस्थित रहे है वो बात अलग है की आज कल वो खुद बिन बताए गायब है
मुझे आप की स्टोरी हमेशा से पसंद थी लेकिन आज फिर एक बार कमेंट करने का कारण है जो लास्ट अपडेट आप ने दिया मुझे क्रीमसन की मौत वाले अपडेट की तुलना मे ये वाला ज्यादा पसंद आया वीर अपनी माँ बहनो और दादा जी से मिलना और सुहाना का वीर के लिए इस तरह खुल कर सामने आना वकई बहुत मजेदार और रोमेंस से भरपूर था![]()
Awesome update
Bhai once again thanks for your efforts
Phone karab hua koi bi kya kar sakta he so we understand the situation so koi baat nahi. Aapko ye sab explain karke batane ki jarurat nahi bhai.
Very very very nice update ava ki mom ko bhi crimson ne marwa diya ava ne dgsi ko clear kar diya ki uska kidnap crimson ne kiya tha Veer se milkar uski family khush ho gyi veer ne Suhana se bhi mil liya and Suhana fallen in love with Veer Veer india laut rha hai aur us pahadi par ava hi hai jo suicide karne ja rhi hai
Excellent update bhai ....
This update is full with emotion.
Aapne har kisi ke emotions ko bohot achhr tareeke se likha hai....
Superb....
for your hardwork and update....
Nice update bro
Awesome update
Nice update bro weting for next update
Bhai bohat pyara update kahne ko mega update thaa per jis tarah se aapne isme sare emotions ko jama kiya woh ek atulniya hain. Shuruwat jaha kis ko apne sabse hardik azeez ke bichadne ke gham ki jis ke wastey usne yah sab kiya wohi khatam ho gayi. phir apradh bodh ki ussne veer ke liye kiya kiya aur usko kaisay beqasoor sabit karwaya DGSI ko apni ghalti ka manna aur veer ko beqasoor karar dena phir public ke sentiments change hona. Veer ki family se reunion ko bade acche se darshaya har ek ka alag emotions aur alag tarah se veer se milna aur sab se badi baat abhi question answer session hona aur India me sab ko jawab Dena jo ki crimson mission se bhi mushkil hoga magar yaha ek ko nahi bhulna chahiye Ji haan Suhana ko woh stabh sa ho jaana aur foran usko veer ki zindagi ki khabar milna like kisi pyasey insaan ko tapte registan me thanda Pani mil jana. Soch se bahar hai uski halat phir ko kuch bhi kiya woh to hona hi thaa magar end moqe per uska apne aap ko rok Lena bohat thaa warna sab barbaad ho jaata uska. Uspe bhi ab aki sawalo ka ghera hoga.
Aur aakhir me kiya Ava apni zindagi khatam kar legi nahi usay Aisa nahi karna chahiye zindagi ka to naam ki chaltey rehna aur aage badna. Agli update ka Intezar rahega aur apna khayal rakhey sath sath is story ke Safar per chaltey rahey aisay hi.
Mind blowing update
Bhai itna kuch hone ke baad bhi apne update de diya uske liye thanxxx ... Or baat karein update ki to bohot hi badhiyan tha ... Bechari ava ki ma mar gai .... Or woh pahadi pe khud ko khatam karne pohonch gai ... Lekin woh aisa karegi nahi ... Kyunki abb usse jeene ki koi wajah dhundhni hogi ... Or veer ka sath dene se kya behter rahega .... Chalo abb veer ke uper se saare charges hat gaye hain yeh to badhiyan hua.. Or woh family se bhi mil liya .... Bass abb unke sawalon ke jawab dena baki hai .... Dekhtein hai ki woh kya jawab dega ... Mast update tha bhai ..
Jaandaar bhai updated ekdm pyara bs ab love life dekna hai bole toh veer ki sbhi wife ek sath![]()
The story flabbergasted me. The sudden U turn from culprit to victim of big conspiracy is the keynote of your narration warewolf Bhai. It's quite an adventurous journey with your story. I was pretty busy in my sister's marriage . I read your story today. The deliciousness of your story touched a new height.I will wait for another week for your next extravaganza meanwhile be healthy and happy. Thank you warewolf bhai
Thanks apka bhi Bhai hme itni achi story dene ke liye hamare liye itni pareshan hone ke liye apke mobile ka jitna afsos apko hai utna hin hum logo ko bhi hai bhai to utna preshan mat hoiye hum log wait kr lenge Bhai ap apne kimti samay se hamare liye itna time dete ho it's our duty to wait for your update and understand your situation and problem
Super update bro
Time for the family‘s questions? let’s see how the handle.
Maybe Ava will get mission, make veer friend![]()
bahut badhiya update hai............
waiting for next update
Shandar jandar update Raha bhai......
Itni pareshani aane ke bad bhi aapane update Diya iske liye dhanyvad..
Ava Ki Halat sachmuch bahut hi dayani hai Ek Taraf Se Veer ne use Maaf karne se mana kar diya dusri Taraf use apni Mata ji ka nidhan ke bare mein Pata Chala.. is Khabar se Eva bilkul Hi Tut gai hai..
Jis halat mein abhi yah hai use halat mein bhi usne Veer Ki madad karne se Piche Nahin Hati aur media ko bulakar Veer ki sari sacchai Bata Di Ki vah Kyon Yahan per Aaya hua tha ..vah Ek Nirdosh insan hai na ki Mujrim..
Veer ko apni family ko Dobara dekhna sachmuch Dil Ko sukun milane wali baat ho gai..
Aarohi Tejal apni Maa Aur Dada Ji ke sath vah Ek alag hi state mein chala gaya tha jahan per use bahut Samay Bad sukun mil raha ho eisa mahasus hua...
Suhana iski Ek alag Kahani Banti Ja Rahi Hai Veer ke sath... shadishuda Hote Hue bhi vah Veer ke Taraf aakarshit Hote ja rahi hai..... ab uski doctor ne bhi kah diya hai ki vah Veer ko Pyar Karne Lagi Hai...
Dekhte hain Veer aur Suhani ke bich Kahani kya Mod Leti Hai!!
Filhal Veer To Apne Parivar ke sath khush hai aur unke Sath hi India Wapas ja raha hai Jahan per uska Samna Kai Tarah Ke sawalon se hoga dekhte hain Veer ine sawalon ko kaise sambhalta hai Kyunki sacchai ko Bata Nahin Sakta..
Fantastic update![]()
Boht Zaberdast update rahi, full with emotions, sentiments, La jawab. Lets see Ava kesy safe hoti, mera khyaL tha k Veer apni family k sath Ava k pass jaye ga Grace Martin ki tazyat k lye or apnaiyat ka ehsas dilany k liye. Lets see agy updates ma esa kuch nazer ayee. Rhnxx for a Good update and ending or Crimson Arc
Superb![]()
Awesome Update Bhai!!!!
Jabardast update
Ava ne apni maa ko bachane ke liye kya- kya nahi kiya par.. Sab fail ho gaya..
Khair .. apne dukh me bhi usne veer ke bare me socha or veer par jo ilzam laga hua tha use hatva kar veer ko nirdosh ghosit karva diya..
Veer apni family se bhi mil liya ab India ke liye nikal gaye .. waha pahoch kar sawalo ka bhandar tutega veer par..
Suhana ko pyaar ho gaya hai or woh apni feeling or emotion ko control nahi kar pa rahi .. Khair abhi to waha se bhag kar chali gay par kya uske dil me jo pyaar veer ke liye hai usse accept kar payegi..?
Shandar update bhai ...
Nice update
Bestest update forever
Interesting update
Bina chut diye marne jaa rahi hai ??![]()
Wonderful update bro finally veer ki life m kuch wakt ke liye shanti
Ab dekhna y h ki kya ava sach m mr jaaegi aur x man kya karega next
Superb![]()
Weating too next update
Superb update![]()
Bahut hi shandar aur romanchak update bhai![]()
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....
Nice update
Mast update h bhai...![]()
Nice And Fantastic Update Bhai Keep Posting
Nice update...
Lagta hai agla number apni suhana ji ka hai
Ab jo hoga Ava ke sath wo next update me pata chalega...
Jo ki next week aaye ga![]()
ये क्या दादा, आवा के साथ ऐसा क्यूं। वीर को वहां रहना चाहिये था।
Zabardast update![]()
Wow bro khubsurat update.... You have got us involved inthis story so tightly... Thanks bhai
Fantastic update bhai ji
Jabardast Updateeee
Toh Ava ne apna prayschit kiya aur Veer ko ek innocent insaan bana diyaa aur yeh sabit karwa diya ke Veer begunaah hai.
Par yeh aakhir mein Ava kyaa kar gayi. Kyaa sach mein Ava ka kirdaar yehi tak thaa. Mujhe toh aisa nhi lag raha hai. Mujhe lagta hai Veer usse bacha legaa. Aur shayad uss Crimson ke bande ko bhi dhundega jarur.
Dekhte hai ab aage kyaa hota hai.
Wonderful update Bhai![]()
Bahut badia Lajawab Jabardast update
Boht Zabardast update
Superb update bro...
Waiting for next
Bura laga ki itni pareshani ka saamna krna pada phone ki wajah se bhaya. My condolences
Emotional update Ava ke sath bhi achcha nahi hua akeli ho gyi bechaari she is beautiful person last mei toh saans hee atak gayi (wtf is she doing)
Suhana ki manosthiti dekhkar toh boht dukh hua kaha vo itni samajhdaar jo pagal si ho gyi ek kal aaye ladke ke liye she is above the trinity for me. Galti bhi kar di usne ab dekho iske consequences kya honge ya honge bhi?
Veer ke charges toh clear ho gye aur Ava ki madad uski achchayi dikhati hai.
Family se milna toh boht achcha laga unhe bhi pta lag gya hoga ki Veer ke sath kuch toh bura hua hai uski huliya bhi toh kharab hoga fight ke baad se. Sabne sawalo ke javab mangne ki baat ki hai. Tej ne toh dara hee diya ki ye kon nayi musibat aa gyi
Bhawna ka locket ko check krna( naam yaad nahi aa raha uska) ye dikhata hai ki usko bhi boht kuch pta hai uske baare mei ki. Tumne ek baar kaha tha ki locket manhoos hai nikalne ke baad banda mar jaata hai toh kya pta lucky bhi ho ki agar sath rahe toh marne bhi nhi dega.
Business arc mei Veer obviously business karega sab jante hai ki jisme Veer ki ruchi hai usme advertising bhi lagti hai aur abhi-abhi itni badi celebrity se vasta pada hai toh ye baat khaali toh nahi jaani chahiye baaki Aadam bhediya sir ki marzi
France mei boht se log maan gaye ki Veer begunah hai par abhi bhi kaafi log honge ki jinhe ye sab jhuth lag rha hoga aur ye lagana bhi chahiye bhai hadsa boht bada hua tha.
Bhaya Veer ke ghar jaane se pehle kisi ko bhul mat jana yaha par, pata nahi usne kya socha hoga Veer ke baare mei news wagers dekhkar Reply zarur kijiyega
Awesome story
Awesome update
nice update but vary sad for ava and suhana
Another excellent update. Ava ki manosthiti, Veer ka apni family se milna, Suhana se milna aur fir Ava ka apni jimdagi se nirash hona, bahut khubi se likha hai.
Ava's mental state aptly described.
Yes, maa to maa hoti hai.
Ava is still in a state of shock. Shi time hai, ab usko apne bachpan ki saheliyon ki sabse jyada jarurat hai.
I think, this may change Veer's opinion about Ava.
Har ek sadsya ke baare me kya khoob likha hai.
As always, Arohi is most practical, taking care of everybody.
Suhana ka yeh reaction to hona hi tha.
Excellent narration.
Arohi, Arohi, always intelligent, practical, I love this character.
Aankhein dekhte hi Veer bhaanp chuka tha ki ye khubsoorat aankhein kayi raato se uski talaash me pehra di hai.
Tejal ka bhi kya milan dikhaya hai.
Maa to aisi hi hoti hai, sabse pehle jaamch-padtaal ker le ki uska beta theek hai ki nahin. Pendant ka bhi koi to raaj hai. Bas ek hint mila tha jab raj purohit ne apne baadshah ko kaha tha ki ise apne se alag nahin hone dijiye.
Dadaji ki presence hi unka Veer ke liye pyar batati hai.
hmmm...
One simple line, sab kuch bata deti hai. Ab to Suhana ko bhi apni feelings Veer ke liye manani padengi.
So sad, let's see how Ava is saved.
No! Noooo! Plz No!
Don't tell me Ava is gonna Die
Plz No !
awsome bhai mast comeback
but again ek aur suspense.
The update was fantastic
Eager to know about kaira in the next update, hoping it to be a Bang![]()
Excellent update![]()
Very interesting and fablous update
Ayca aysin turan
Fantastic Fabulous Mazedaar Update Sir![]()
Outstanding nd thrilling update![]()
Wait for next update werewolf Bhai
Nice update
Super update
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149 यानी कि 150 की ओर एक बार फिर से क्रीमसन आर्क की समाप्ति एवं आपकी पुनः छुट्टियों की तैयारी... सही है..
आज जो मिलन समारोह आयोजित किया गया है एवा की वज़ह से बहुत उत्तम रहा... सुहाना की मनोदशा समझ सकते हैं क्युकी वीर ही उसको पूरे तरीके से समझ सकता है...
सभी दादा माँ बहिन से मिलकर उसे भी एक प्यारी सी अनुभूति होती है...
फ्रांस की एजेंसी को तो पूरा घनचक्कर बना दिया है..
ऐवा की माँ के अंत की योजना क्रीमसन की मानसिक विपक्षीप्त को दर्शाता है.. ये सिस्टम भी एक अलग ही खेल खेल रहे हैं...
अंत मे ऐवा को पहाड़ी से....
इन्तेज़ार रहेगा अंतिम अंक का क्रीमसन आर्क के पूर्ण आयोजन का..
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Waiting bro
क्रिम्पसन बुरा व्यक्ति अवश्य था लेकिन लोगों को अपने अंतिम समय पर जब अपने कर्मों का बोध होता है तो वो कुछ अच्छा करने की तमन्नाइ भी होते है। लेकिन क्रिम्पसन आखिरी वक्त पर भी अपने बुरे कर्मों का एक और अध्याय लिखता दुनिया से फानी हो गया।
उसने एक ऐसी महिला की हत्या करा दी जो अत्यंत ही लाचार , बेबस , असहाय , बीमार और करीब डेढ़ साल से कोमा से ग्रस्त बिस्तर पर पड़ी थी। स्विटी इस जुर्म मे अप्रत्यक्ष तौर पर उसका साथी बनी।
देखता हूं ग्रेसी मार्टिन के हत्यारों को कब न्याय के कटघरे मे खड़ा किया जाता है !
एवा की मानसिक अवस्था वही समझ सकता है जो इस हालात से गुजरा हो और किसी अपने को खोया हो।
वह तनाव मे है। वह अवसादग्रस्त है। वो पुरी तरह से निराश है। और शायद ये वजह काफी होता है जब लोग जीना ही नही चाहते।
लेकिन सुसाइड करना वैचारिक रूप से , सामाजिक रूप से और कानूनन रूप से गलत है। यह किसी भी दृष्टिकोण से सही नही है।
जिन्दगी बहुत अनमोल है । गाॅड गिफ्ट है। इस दुनिया मे बहुत कुछ है। समय को पानी की तरह बह जाने दो। थोड़ा इन्तजार करो। समय कभी एक सा नही रहता , बदलता रहता है। दिमाग मे गलत विचारों की आंधी थम जाएगी। आवेग रूक जाएगा। बस , ऊपर वाले पर भरोसा रखो।
मुझे विश्वास है , एवा के साथ कुछ भी गलत नही होगा।
क्रिम्पसन कांड के बाद वीर का अपने परिवार से मिलन बहुत ही सुखद लगा।
सुहाना ने वीर के साथ एक अच्छे दोस्त का फर्ज निभाया। लेकिन शायद वह इस दोस्ती की सीमा रेखा को पार कर गई है। वह वीर से मोहब्बत करने लगी है।
और मोहब्बत पर किसी का वश नही होता। कोई जोर आजमाइश नही होता। यह कभी भी , किसी से भी , और कहीं भी हो सकता है।
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग।
Jab bhi story padta hun toh apka comments jarur dhudta hun sir![]()
Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro
Ava ko uske kiye ki saza mil gayi hai usko zindagi ne achcha sabak sikhaya hai ab samajh aa gaya ki veer ne kyu kaha ki same condition me mai tumhare jaisa nahi karta.suhana aur veer ke milan me mai thoda sa udash hun jaisa maine soncha tha waisa kuch khaas hua nahi han sab public me the lekin thoda samhal kar baat ki ja sakti thi agar bhavnayen kamjor thi tab bhi bina baat ke wo sab baten ho gayi jinko dimaag rokne ki koshish karta hai sabse jada wahi tadpi hai aur sabse jada saport bhi kiya hai.kulmila kar badhiya update
Bhai maza aagya update padkar
Waiting for next update
So first of all amazing update bro,
To grace martin ke marne ka raaz bhi khul gaya crimson ko manna pare ga bari hi tagri planning ki thi us ne,
Aur ye sweetie ka kiya aage role dekhne ko mile ga ya nhi?
Filhal baat karte he veer ki to finally veer apni family se mil hi gaya aur sb use dekh ke khush aur bhawok hogye he,
Aur suhana ka to kiya hi kehna us ki friend ne andaza laga liya he ke use veer se pyar hogya he but suhana ko nhi pata tha abhi tak,
Ab jb us ki friend ne use btaya he ke use veer se pyar hogya he to wo bhag gai waha se turant,
Aab aage dekhna ye he ke suhana aage kiya kare gi kiya wo veer se distance maintain karne ki koshish kare gi ya is pyar ko accept kare gi,
Jo bhi hoga mujhe itna to pata he ke aap kich acha hi karo ge,
Veer ab DGSI ki nazro me bhi hero ban gaya he aur france ki public ki nazro me bhi,
Aur use reward bhi mila he jo obviously wo business arc me use kare ga,
Ava bilkul akeli hogai he aur puri trha se toot bhi gai he,
Lakin ye kiya bhai ava suicide karne ja rahi he ab aage kiya hoga wo janne ki jaldi he,
Baqi update ke bare me aur kiya hi kahe har bar ki tarha buhat zabardast aur mazedar update tha bhaaya,
Keep it up bro
Lots of love and respect![]()
When is the next update bro?
Waiting..
Ek aur lajawab update
Jabardast action packed arc ke ant me ek emotional update to banta hi tha.
Veer apni begunahi sabit karne me kamyab raha. Vo bhi usi Ava ki help se jiski vajah se kahi na kahi ye sab hua..
Veer ka family reunion ek dum emotional aur heart relaxing tha. Tez bahut excited thi to Aarohi shant aur khush.
Mujhe lagta hai ki inn shabdo ka sirf iss update me hi nahi puri kahani me khas mahatv hai.
Paristhiti kitni hi jatil kyu na ho aarohi rasta nikal hi leti hai.
Jaise yahan usne rasta nikal liya usi tarah Veer ki jindagi me bhi apni khas jagah bana hi legi.
Veer ki love life sirf kisi ek ke sath hona, mushkil hi lagta hai. Kyoki usse pyar karne vale bahut hai. Ragini ke sath to vo kahi aage badh gya hai, Nidhi ko apne Dil ka haal bayan karne ki koshish veer ne ki hai, Sath me Kavya, Sweta, Aarohi, Suhana, Sonia aur bhi bahut hai.
Aise me kisi ek ke sath pyar betuka aur baki sabke sath anyay hi lagega.
Haa veer ke liye problem hogi sabko ek dusre ki sacchai batana aur sabke liye razi karna. Ye vo kaise karega ye dekhne vali baat hogi.
Aur kahani ki theme bhi harem based hai, veer badhshah jaisi jindagi hasil karega aur ek badhshah ki to kayi raniya hoti hai
Aarohi ke liye kahi gyi line isi liye khas hai ki vo bhi unn sab me apni jagah bana legi.
Bhavna ke sath bhi veer ka rishta aur mazboot hota jaa rha hai, barso apni maa ke bina rehne ke baad ye jaruri bhi hai.
Veer ne bhawna ko kaha hai ki vo ghar chalkar sab kuch btayega. Kya veer jhuth bolega yaa sach.
Kyoki sach btane me system ka raaz btane ki sambhavana hai. Khair agar system ke bare me veer bhawna ko btata hai ( jiski mujhe kam hi umeed hai ) to bhi acha hi hoga. Agar usse bhawna ke liye koi khatra paida na ho jaye to.
India pahuchkar baki sabke sawalo ka jawab kaise deta hai ye dekhne vali baat hogi.
Suhana pyar karne lagi hai veer se, lekin media ki vajah se mio bhi nahi payi bechari.
Khair ab inki mulakat bhi india me hi karana. Suhana ko phir se las vegas mat bhej dena Werewolf bhai.
Ava (poor girl ) pehle jitna gussa tha Ava ko lekar ab utni hi sympathy feel ho rahi hai. I think use uske kiye ki saja apni maa ko khokar mil chuki hai. Aapne Ava ke character ko kafi acha handle kiya hai. Itna kuch karne ke baad bhi ab uske liye bura lagta hai. Suicide koi solution nahi hai, dekhte hai vo kaise bachegi. Kya system ki help se yaa koi aur use bachayega.
Jaise aapne Ava ka character justify kiya vaise aap Sweta ke character ke sath nahi kar paye.
Uska character annoying feel hota hai, itni aged hone ke baad bhi vo bahut immature lagti hai.
Jis tarah vo bhawna ko compete karne ki koshish karti hai, jaise vo veer ko usse chinkar uspar apna ekadhikar jamana chahti hai.
Ek maa se bete ko alag karne ki bekar koshish karti hai, jabki ye possible nahi hai.
Abhi bhi lagta hai ki jo usne past me kiya uska puri tarah se afsos nahi hai use.
I hope ki aapne Sweta ke liye bhi ache plans bana ke rakhe honge.
And as usual kahani itni jabardast hai ki agar sabhi updates ek sath mil jaye to khana pina bhulakar pehle ise hi khatam krunga.
Waiting for next update
Waiting
Bhai Aaj update aayega?? Kya
Behtreen story bhai
Awesome updates bhai
Waiting for the next update bhai
Thankyou![]()
Waiting for update
Bohot shandaar update diya hai sir....
Kiya fight ki hai veer ne crimson ka kaam pura hoa ab agee dekhte hai .....
Suhana ko veer se Pyar ho gaya hai..
Natalia q apni jaam de Rahi hai bohot bura hoa hai uske Sath bhi vo veer ko back protect kare tu Maza aa jae well Maza aa gya sir ...,![]()
First of all, Sorry i was unable to review on recent updates due to some issues at workplace.
Still busy for few weeks may be ....
The reunion was just a neccessity for Veer but i believe that the main game would be how Veer would manage to explain it to his family members
But suhana is just a bae. What a character development and it just peaked in this arc.
This love string is too tight for suhana.
Her reunion is not yet completed bcoz she was not able to express herself
Now whats in the next update, kaera but i think u should also give some glimpse of suhana and Veer's meetup
Amazing
yaha apki story ke liye aata hu ... only 3 stories on xforum .. jinke liye check karta hu working main time nikal kar ... superb story ...
Mind blowing update
Baki do kon hai
Veer is now in between sea of love.But feeling bad for Ava,hope she will stay alive and everything will be clear with Veer.So,all is well now, anyway beautiful update.
raj- hero of family n meri fantasy
Werewolf Bhai, agy update kb aye gi.
Superb update bro
Veer ka next mission Ava ko suside krne s rokna hona chahiye.....Ava ek important character hai or sayad Kiara Wale mission k liy v Veer ko uski jarurat ho sakti hai....agar Ava mar gayi to Veer kahi uski mout ka ek Karan khud ko na samjhe....
intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....
agar ava mar jati hai to us ka marna hazam nahi ho ga filhal, itni development k bad ye character itni asaani se mar jaye to ye nainsaafi ho gi is character k sath, to is liye mujhy nai lagta k ava marne wali hai. aur ye bhi ho sakta hai k veer ko ava ko save karne ka mission mil jaye. kya esa possible hai k dono systems yani pari aur lily mil kar kaam karein solo missions nah ho kar 2no ko same mission as a team mily, it'll good agar esa hota hai to
keep writing and keep updating![]()
भी ये साइड प्रॉब्लम कर रही है
Werewolf Bhai..one request..don't promise timelines of updates which are hard to keep..no one disputes the time and effort put in from your side for every episode..time to lagta hi hai bhai..if you were to go over pichle 4-5 episodes ke first given day.versus.actual posting..you wud know what I mean..am equally anxious to read the next one..take.care..and hope for a dhamaka update..
Superb update
Kya renshu ava ko bachaayega?
Waiting for the next update
Zabardast khatarnak update yaar superb
Waiting for next update
Ara mien uss way mien kha rha tha ki renshu ne veer ko bhi bachaya tha toh sayad ava ko bhi bacha le
Aur renshu ko veer ke system ke baare mien baatne wala vo unknown caller right toh kya uss unknown caller ne kisi aur system ke baare mien bhi khabar di hai?
Ava ko toh bc marne hi doh saali gaddari karbe
Lekin phir mien sochta hu ava maar gyi toh veer ke hath ek chut nikal jayegi aur dono system ka sex nhi dekh paayege hum
Ab review last update k baad hi dungi. Next update kaera wala h ...
uske baad hi review dungi.![]()
Aapko explain krne ki zaroorat nhi sir...
jab time rhe tbhi update de aap... Pressure mat lijiye...
koi train nhi chhoot rhi kisi ki ... Bas inform kar diya kariye ki update abhi nhi aaega. Aur hum sab samajh jaenge... Zaroori nhi ki aap har ek ko reason deke samjhae... We can understand nd it's totally ok...
Electronic gadgets aise hi hote h... Mera to ye kitni baar ho chuka h... Kbhi laptop se data chala gya to kbhi phone se to kbhi pc se... Backup bna k rkhti hu ab to main...
waiting for new new update... Keep writing sir ..![]()
Bhai ab ye Wale update me hi kaira ki information lane Wale ho na
Bhai kya aaj update ayega ...
Miss SUHANA ka or aapka nature kuch jada he milta julta lg rha hai Rihanna or mujhe ni lgta proof Dena pde is bat pe![]()
Eagerly waiting Werewolf bhai...
Waiting for the next update
Late night hochu ka hai bhai
Waiting for your update bro
Bhai ki late night ab early morning tak jaati hai.. tab tak bhajan karo
149 completed
bhai you are fantastic
Bhai its already 2:30 which is a late night but no sign of update?
Intezaar......
Werewolf bhai raat toh kafi lambi ho gayi ab toh Surya devta ke bhi aane ka samay ho gaya hai parantu aap kab aaoge...
जिसका इंतज़ार शिद्दत से करोगे, वही अक्सर नहीं आते।
waiting for update....
Take your time brother, I know it require so much hard work..
Bhai update kab do ge
bhai waiting for next update
Waiting next
Update complete krte krte nind lag gyi hogi Bhai common hai kal nhi ayi to aj a jaegi utna tension mat lijiye Bhai log
I had requested Werewolf.bhai ki mat bolen ki pakka update aayega. Log der raat intezar karte reh gaye befuzul ke..Last 5-6.updates ka yehi hua hai. Werewolf Bhai..you are losing credibility.with.every.update. People would.be happier if you only give out about update when you are about to finish.
That is my suggestion only. I am an.ardent admirer.of.your writing . This feel that better to be realistic.
Update 150 has been posted.Wow...
Best story bhi bahot badhiya likha hai ap neUpdate - 150 ~ The Return of the Queen
Ab tak...
[D-Dear! Stop it! What the hell are you doing? H-Hey don't scare me! Please!]
Woh awaaz vyakul thi. Ladki ne fir ahista se apne mann me uss awaaz ko jawaab diya.
'There's nothing left now! I must go as well! Lily...!'
[W-Wait!! N-Noooooo!]
Aur usne apna perr aage badha diya.
[Noooooooooooooo!!!!!]
Ab aage...
Sab kuch akhir samaapt hua. Veer ke Paris ke safar par poornviram laga aur ghar waapsi ke liye woh Paris se ravana ho chuka tha. Idhar, Mumbai me uska sabhi besabri se intezar kar rahe the.
Veer ke sahi salamat milne ke baad, uski phone par Ragini se baat hui. Sirf Ragini hi nahi, Mumbai me maujood Bhumika, Shweta, Sonali, Suman, Aabha, se leke harr kisi se uski baatein hui.
Aur sabhi ye jaan ke khush the ki Veer mehfooz tha. Ragini toh betaab thi use dekhne ke liye. Magar, Veer ke liye mushqile abhi khatam kaha hui thi. Asli, daav pench toh ab ladne the use.
Sawalo ka chakravyuh jo racha jaa raha tha Tej, Arohi aur Bhavna ki iss tigdam dwara. Shabdo ki inn bhool bhulaiyaa se bhi toh mehfooz aana abhi baaki tha. Ek choonk aur saara ka saara bhaanda phoot jaana tha uska. Veer ne khud ko iske liye mann hi mann taiyaar kar liya tha. Woh jaanta tha ki jaise hi woh ghar pohuchega, ye teeno deviyaan uss par prashno ke baan leke toot padengi.
Kherr! Ye sab toh yaha ki baatein thi. Lekin, kuch aur ghatnaaye bhi hui thi. Veer ke ird gird se hatke.
Jab Veer Paris jaa raha tha, toh jaane se pehle uski mulaqat Kaera se hui thi. Jaha usne Kaera ke puraane ghar se ek diary dhoondhte hue use saunpi thi. Veer ne diary toh saunp di thi. Magar, uske parinaam kya kya hue, inn baato se woh anibhigya tha.
Woh nahi jaanta tha ki Kaera ko diary thamaane ke baad Kaera ne kya kiya, uske saath kya hua. Bas itna zaroor jaanta tha ki Kaera ki favourability uske prati ghat ke 50 ho gayi thi. Aur, mission bhi dhara ka dhara reh gaya tha.
Na hi uska koi reward mila aur na hi koi notification aaya. Par, asal me kya hua tha inn beete dino? Ye baat, toh samay hi bata sakta tha.
Mumbai...
Night ~ 11:13 PM
Ye woh samay tha jab Veer Paris ke liye nikalne wala tha. Seer Vision! Uss legendary skill ka istemaal karne ke baad, Veer diary ki yaadon me doob gaya tha.
Labyrinth me usne harr woh yaad bator ke dhoondhi thi jo diary ke andar samahit thi. Diary apne kaal me jin jin ghatnakramo ko dekhe hue thi, Veer ne unn sab ko haasil kiya tha. Use Kaera ke baare me na jaane kya kya maalum chala. Aur, kuch dino ke baad hi usne woh diary Kaera ko thamaayi thi.
Aaj usi din ki raat thi. Kaera diary leke apne ghar aa chuki thi. Apni atyant hi vyast zindagi me use din bhar uss diary ko khol ke padhne ka samay na mila.
Raat hote hi, jab woh apne kamre me bilkul jaa hi rahi thi toh peeche se uski personal maid Julia ne use awaaz lagaayi,
Julia : Miss?
Kaera : Hmm?
Julia : Are you heading to bed?
Kaera (nods) : Yes!
Julia : Okay! Have a good night, Miss!
Woh shubhraatri kehte hue mudi ki itne me Kaera ne kuch soch use pukara,
Kaera : Julia!?
Julia (turns) : Yes???
Kaera : Can you please prepare a coffee for me? I think I'll need it tonight!
Julia : Are you going to stay awake for office work?
Kaera : Not that actually! Just something else! I'll be waiting inside.
*Thud*
Aur apne kamre ka darwaza band kar woh andar chali gayi. Usne Julia ko nahi bataya ki woh diary padhne jaa rahi thi. Coffee mangwane ke peeche yahi kaaran tha.
Na hi Julia ne apni taraf se pucha ki uski Miss bhala kis liye aaj derr tak jaagne wali thi. Kaera harr baat harr kisi se saajha nahi karti thi. Aur Julia bhi ye samajhti thi ki zaroori nahi use harr baatein bataayi jaaye.
Woh apni jagah jaanti thi aur uska aadar bhi karti thi.
Kamre ke andar aate hi Kaera ne apne kapde badle aur ek silk light purple nightdress daal woh apne bed par aayi.
Tab tak Julia uske liye coffee leke bhi aa chuki thi. Coffee ko uske bed se lagi side table par rakh woh punah 'goodnight' bol apne khud ke kamre me chali gayi.
Idhar uske jaate hi Kaera ne apni almaari khol wahi diary nikaali jo Veer ne aaj use thamayi thi. Ye uske puraane ghar se mili thi. Na jaane isme aisa kya hone waala tha. Magar, woh iske andar dekhne ke liye kaafi icchuk thi.
Usne diary kholi...!
Panne kaafi puraane prateet ho rahe the. Kaera ne pehle toh bina kuch padhe hi diary ko khol kaagaz paltaate hue use jaancha. Woh bhaanp rahi thi.
Diary waqai purani thi. Itne saalo se diary ke na khulne ke kaaran, kayi saare panne aapas me chipak chuke the. Badi hi savdhani se Kaera ne unn panno ko pehle toh alag-alag kiya. Poora jayza liya ki harr panna alag hai ya nahi. Uske baad hi woh diary ke pehle page par aayi.
Pehle page par aate hi uski nazar uss naam par pad gayi. Waha likha hua tha~
Archana!
"M-Mother!!!!??"
Kaera ke komal haath panne par likhe uss naam par firr gaye. Diary uski Maa Archana ki thi?
Page aage paltaate hue usne sab kuch fir padhna chaalu kiya. Likhawat dekhte hi woh pehchaan chuki thi ki ye uski maa ki hi likhawat thi. Woh apne emotions bhuli thi. Apna ateet nahi. Bhali bhaati yaad tha use ki uski maa kis tarah likha karti thi.
Usne ek gehri saans li, aur fir padhna shuru kiya.
Kaera! Karan! Mere pyaare baccho! Tum dono ko jabse mene paaya hai, mein bata nahi sakti ki mein kitni khush-kismat hu.
Tum dono mere jigar ke tukde ho. Tumhari kam aqal maata shri se theek se diary tak likhna nahi aata. (;^ω^)
Ye meri pehli koshish hai. Kuch nahi soojh raha tha kya likhu. Fir tum dono ka khayal aaya. Tum dono toh meri saanso me baste ho. Toh socha kyu na tum dono se hi iss diary likhne ki aadat ki bhi shuruaat karu?
Tum dono ke hone se dekho...! Mujhe bahana mil gaya ki diary me kya likha jaaye. Ye tumhari maa, ab se harr roz tumhari shaitaaniyo ko isme likha karegi. Jab tum dono bade ho jaoge na tab ise tum dono ke saamne kholungi.
Ye bataane ki bachpan me tum dono ne mujhe kitna sataaya hai. (^_^メ)
Shuru ke 2-3 panne Kaera aur Karan ke hi zikr ke the. Archana ka apne baccho ke liye pyaar harr ek shabd me jhalak raha tha. Pata nahi kyu par Kaera ki aankhein apne aap hi namm ho rahi thi.
Magar, unn panno ke baad jaise vishay gambheer ho gaya.
Mera swaasth bigad raha hai. Shareer se taqat jaise khatam ho rahi hai. Iss umr me ye sab nahi hona chahiye. Abhi toh tum dono ko bada hote dekhna hai mujhe. School se, college se graduate hote dekhna hai. Apne baccho ki shaadiyaan hote dekhna hai. Tumhare baccho ko dekhna hai.
Magar, haalat din-ba-din battar hoti jaa rahi hai. Mujhe abhaas ho gaya hai. Mera bachna ab mushqil hai.
Mere preeya baccho. Kuch bhi theek nahi ho raha hai. Tumhare Papa jin baba pe vishvaas kiye hue hai, mujhe woh ab sahi nahi lag rahe.
Kaera...! Jab se tumhare liye woh ye keh ke gaye hai ki tumhe ghar par rakha jaaye, aur bahar na nikalne diya jaaye. Mera vishvaas unn par se uth chuka hai. Baccho ko panchhi ki tarah kisi pinjre me qaid kar ke nahi rakha jaata. Tum toh mera apna khoon ho.
Lekin, tumhare Papa ye maan'ne ko taiyaar nahi hai. Meri aur unki ladayi lagbhag roz hone lagi hai. Mein harr baar uss baba ka virodh karti hu aur woh mujhe sunaane lagte hai.
Woh mera vishvaas nahi kar rahe. Magar...! Mujhe apne aap par atal vishvaas hai. Mein samajh chuki hu ki woh koi dhongi hai aur hamare sirf paiso par niyat hai uski.
Mere lakh mana karne ke baad bhi Kishor meri ek baat nahi maan rahe. Agar baccho ka samay subah se leke raat tak sirf padhaayi me vyateet kar denge toh kya hi parivaarik prem ka ehsaas kar payenge woh?
Kaera ka yu alag alag teachers ke dwara padhaya jaana, use kamre me band rakhna, baahar na nikalne dena. Ye sab...! Use asal zindagi se dur le jaane laga hai.
Aur mujhe darr hai..! Kahi ek na ek din- Woh kisi machine ki tarah na bann ke reh jaaye.
Agar aisa hua, toh meri bacchi apni bhavnaaye bhul jayegi. Woh bhul jayegi ki prem kya hota hai, harsh-ullas kya hota hai, gussa-berr kya hota hai. Harr bhavnaaye, insaan ko insaan banati hai.
Mein nahi chaahti, meri bacchi insaan se ek machine bann jaaye.
Gyaan arjit karna acchi baat hai. Lekin, gyaan iss tarah arjit karna...! Prayogik nahi.
Aur isliye, jaane se pehle mein tumhare saath kuch baatein saajha karke jaana chahti hu Kaera.
Karan ki mujhe fiqr nahi. Mamla tumhara gambheer hai meri bacchi. Aur mein jaanti hu ki tumhare sambhalte hi, Karan apne aap sambhal jayega. Woh tumse bohut prem karta hai beti.
Lekin, use jalan bhi hoti hai. Prem shuru se tumhe adhik mila hai. Use nahi. Jis kaaran woh muh fulaaye baitha rehta hai. Magar...! Woh tumhara kabhi dil se bura nahi chaahega. Iss baat ki pratyabhuti mein leti hu. Fir chaahe mein rahu ya na rahu.
Aur isliye mein ye diary likh rahi hu. Umeed hai jaane se pehle mein isme harr woh baat likh paungi jo tumhari zindagi me madad karengi.
Agar tum ye diary padh rahi hogi, toh zaahir hai meri maujoodgi ab waha nahi hogi. Aasha karti hu tum safalta ki uchaaiyo ko choom rahi hogi. (^‿^)
Kaera! Harr ek shabd dhyaan se padhna. Ho sakta hai tumhe iss diary ki zaroorat hi na pade. Mein khamakha chintit ho rahi hu. Lekin, Maa hu. Ek bhi mauka haath se jaane nahi dena chaahti jaha mein tumhare liye kaam aa saku.
Isliye...! Agar tumhe zaroorat pade, toh bas iss diary ko padh lena. Inme mene mool bhavnao ko tumhare ateet ke saath mila kar samjhaya hai.
Khushi!
Duniya ka harr ek vyakti ise paane ke liye marta hai beti. Ye kya hoti hai? Kya sirf muskurana khushi hai? Nahi beti!
Ek baar ki baat hai. Tum nanhi si thi. ^_^
Aur school me tumhara ye pehla result tha. Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai tum meri ungli pakad ke mere saath school gayi thi. Tumhara jab result aaya tha tab tumhe nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai.
Mein toh behad khush thi result se. Lekin, tumhari samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha. Haha! (✿^‿^) Tum bas taktaki lagaaye hume apni pyaari aankhon se ghoor rahi thi. Tum me utni samajh hi nahi thi.
Magar, jab teacher ne tumhe chocolate de ke shabashi di, tab tumhare hontho par muskaan bikhri thi. Tumhe samajh aa chuka tha ki tumne kuch accha kiya hai.
Aur yahi...! Asli khushi hai meri bacchi.
Jab aap mehsoos karo ki aap apni zindagi apne tareeqe se jee rahe ho. Na ki kisi ke dabaav me.
Jab aap samay ke bahaav ke saath behte jao, apni kismat par bina koi krodh jataate hue.
Jab mehsoos hoye ki zindagi ki paristhitiya acchi hai.
Jab aap dusro ke saath acche sambandh rakho aur unka aanand lo.
Jab kuch paane ke liye kadi mehnat karo aur use paa lo.
Inn sab ke parinaam, khushi leke aate hai bacchi. Ise yaad rakhna.
Nirasha!
Khushiyo ke saath, dukh bhi hamesha zindagi me aate rahenge beti. Par ghabrana nahi. Nirasha kab hoti hai? Kya tumhe pata hai?
Jab tumhara premi ya khaas dost tumhe asweekriti ya dhoka de.
Kisi khaas dost ya premi ko alvida kehna.
Jab koi parinaam mann ke mutabik na aaye.
Koi khaas jab guzar jaaye aur unki yaadein aapko unki yaad dilaaye.
Ye sthitiya nirasha leke aati hai.
Tumhe shayad yaad na ho. Lekin, jab tum first class me thi na. Tab, hum sab tumhari Nani ke ghar gaye the. Tumhare Nana ji duniya se jaa chuke the. Tumhe yaad bhi nahi tha ki tum unse mili ho ya nahi. Lekin, fir bhi tum unke shav ko dekh zorr zorr se ro rahi thi.
School me kisi se jhagda hona ho ya fir tumhari khaas dost Ava, Sonia se tumhara lad jaana. Tum roti thi. Kyuki tumhe ehsaas tha ki kisi apne se tumhara mann bhed hua hai.
Ye niraasha hai Kaera! Yaad rakhna!
Krodh!
Gussa kab aata hai? Tumhe bhi bachpan me kabhi kabhi behad gussa aata tha.
Jab lage ki tumhara raasta rok diya gaya hai.
Jab lage ki koi anuchit ya galat tareeqe se pesh aa raha hai.
Jab tumhari apni cheez koi dusra tumse chhinaane ki koshish kare.
Jab lage ki koi niji jeevan me hastakshep kar raha hai.
Jab mehsoos ho ki kisi apne ko thes pohuchayi jaa rahi hai.
Jab na-insaaf ho.
Jab dhoka, asweekriti mile.
Jab koi tumhari niji aur samajik seemaaye ko laangh jaaye aur apne matlab ke liye kuch haasil karna chaahe.
Ye paristhitiya krodh ko jagaati hai. Aise waqt pe hamesha thande dimaag se kaam karna Kaera. Mujhe vishvas hai tum sahi nirnay hi logi.
Bachpan me, ek baar Sonia ne tumhara mann pasand khilauna le liya tha. Tumne uss bechari ke baal kheench ke use rote hue ghar bhaga diya tha. Ye krodh hai.
Aur ye kabhi bhi accha nahi hota. Jab bhi krodh aaye, hamesha sabse pehle khud ko shaant karne ki koshish karna. Mujhe poori umeed hai tum ye kar logi.
Darr!
Tum kabhi bhi bhoot preto ki film se dara nahi karti thi. Unhe dekhna tumhara shauk tha. Mujhe yaad hai. ^_^
Lekin...! Tumhare do asli darr hai beti. Ek baahri darr aur ek andhruni.
Baahri darr hai~ Rejection!
Meri beti ho tum! Proud ho tum khud par, tumhari apni pride hai. You are the Queen my love. Toh rejection kaise le sakti ho? Aur isliye, tum darrti ho.
Andhruni darr hai tumhara~ Claustrophobia.
Ek doctor ne mujhe ye baat batayi thi. Ek baar ki baat hai jab hum sab tumhare papa ke acche business ki safalta ki kaamna ke liye shirdi gaye hue the.
Aneko mandiro me humne darshan kiye the. Waha se nashik bhi jaana hua. Waha ek mandir tha jaha par ek gufa thi. Neeche jaati hui gehri gufa. Tum darr rahi thi. Jab hum sab neeche gaye, toh waha aur bhi log maujood the.
Jagah kam aur log zyada hone ki wajah se waha ghutan si mehsoos karne lagi thi tum. Aur, rone lagi. Gehri saansein lete hue, baahar aate hue tum achanak hi behosh ho gayi thi. Meri saansein hi atak gayi thi tumhari haalat dekh.
Daudte bhaagte hum tumhe doctor ke paas le gaye the. Aur, tab usne hume ye bataya tha ki aapki beti ko Claustrophobia hai.
Lage jab koi kaam theek se na hone waala ho.
Bhavishya ke parinaam ke baare me jab negative way me socho.
Ye sab darr paida karta hai bacchi! Kabhi bhi...! Kaisi bhi paristhiti zindagi me aaye. Darrna mat. Darr tum par shobha nahi deta. Tum meri beti ho!
Ghrina!
Tumne kabhi kisi se ghrina nahi ki. Kyuki tumhare papa harr woh cheez tumhe laa ke dete the jo auro ke paas nahi hoti thi. Aksar, bacche tumse ghrina kiya karte.
(^_^メ)
Magar ek baar tumhe bhi jalan hui thi. Nafrat bhi karne lagi thi tum. Aur gussa bhi aaya tha tumhe.
USA hum sab revisit karne gaye the. Meri shadi ke honeymoon ke baad ye dusri baar tha jab mein waha jaa rahi thi.
Karan aur tumhari, garmiyon ki chhutiyaan lag chuki thi. Hum sab waha ek kamre me ruke hue the.
Tumhare papa ke ek mitr unse milne aaye the. Aur unke sang unka ladka, Prince bhi tha jo tumhari hi hum-umr ka tha.
Tum dono hi ek dusre ko ye bataane me lage hue the ki 'mere papa ke paas zyada paisa hai.'
Haha! (^^)
Aur isi jhagde me uss ladke ne apne papa ke ek helicopter ka zikr kar diya tha.
Jo uss waqt hamare paas nahi tha. Pehli baar tumne use jalan ki bhaavna se dekha tha. Nafrat bhi thi tumhari aankhon me. Aur gussa bhi. Badle me tumne uske bhi baal kheench diye the. Fufu~ (^^)
Ye jalan hai Kaera. Ghrina! Jab bhi aisa mehsoos hoye toh hamesha yaad rakhna ki kisi aur ke paas kya hai, kitna hai...! Farq nahi padta.
Farq padta hai ki woh uss kitne me se sansaar ke uddhaar ke liye kitna de raha hai. Agar woh adhik saksham hai, toh use adhik dayavaan bhi hona chahiye.
Kabhi ye mat dekhna ki kiske paas adhik dhan hai. Ye dekhna ki kiske paas kitna hai, aur woh utne me se kitna dene ke liye tatpar hai. Tumhe tumhara jawab mil jayega.
Mene tumhe mool bhavnao ke baare me samjha diya hai beti. Iske aage bas kuch yaadon ke baare me likhungi jo hum sabne saath guzaari hai. Umeed hai ye diary tumhare kisi kaam toh aayegi. Agar na aaye, toh bas apni iss maa ki akhiri nishani samajh ise rakh lena.
Iske aage sab kuch Archana ki lekhni me kuch puraani yaadon ke kisse the.
*Tip*
Kaera ki namm aankhon se apne aap aasu gir uss diary ke panno par gir rahe the. Naina beh rahe the. Jhar rahe the.
Use nahi pata tha ye sab kyu ho raha tha magar woh chaah ke bhi inn aasuo ko rok nahi paa rahi thi.
Use turant hi samajh aaya ki woh dukhi thi.
*Flip*
Jaldbaazi me panno ko paltaate hue woh uss page par aayi jaha 'nirasha' ke baare me uski maa ne samjhaya tha. Woh firse padhna chaah rahi thi ki woh dukhi kyu thi. Ye aasu kyu beh rahe the?
Aur agle hi shan uski nazre uss line par punah tik gayi,
'Koi khaas jab guzar jaaye aur unki yaadein aapko unki yaad dilaaye.'
Padhte hi Kaera ke honth thar-thara uthe.
"M-Mamma!!!"
Jaise harr ek sawaal ka uttar maujood tha usme. Arjun jab rannbhumi me duwidha ki paristhiti me tha. Toh Shri Krishna ne unki madad ki thi.
Kuch ussi prakaar se Kaera ke liye ye diary thi. Jisme uske harr ek sawaalo ke uttar maujood the.
Itne saalo se woh zindagi ka matlab jaan'na chaah rahi thi. Aur ek diary ne uski samasyao ka hal khoj nikala. Ye diary uske liye Amrit samaan thi.
Woh raat bhar uss diary ko padhti rahi. Na hi woh soyi aur na hi usne aalas dikhaya. Poori diary usne raat bhar me padh ke samaapt kar di thi.
Jab agli subah hui, toh woh apne kamre se baahar hi nahi nikli.
Julia ne baahar se use awaaz lagayi toh pata chala ki woh office ke liye nahi jaane wali thi. Na hi koi wajah batayi Kaera ne aur na hi woh baahar aayi.
Aaj ka din toh guzar gaya. Magar, Karan ko turant hi iski bhanak lag chuki thi. Woh jaldbaazi me office jaane se pehle taiyaar hoke seedha Kaera ke floor par aaya.
Karan : Where's dii?
Julia : She has shut in herself.
Karan : What???
Julia : She doesn't want to come out. She wants to be inside alone for sometime.
Karan : What? B-But why? What happened?
Julia : I don't know, Sir Karan! I'm just as clueless as you are!
Karan : B-But-! If Dad discovers this! There'll be problems. Is she okay?
Julia (nods) : She seems okay!
Karan : What about her food?
Julia : She asks me to put her food outside her door. After eating the food, she slides the empty dishes out. This is what's been happening since the last 2 days.
Karan (frowns) : Damn it!! J-Just what happened suddenly?
Woh aage badhte hue Kaera ke kamre ke ke baahar khada hua aur usne darwaza khat-khataate hue awaaz lagayi.
Karan : Diii?
*Knock* *Knock*
Karan : D-Dii? Please answer me!
Aur kuch derr baad fir andar se Kaera ki awaaz aayi.
Kaera : Yes? What is it?
Karan : Y-Ye sab kya hai di? Aap andar kyu ho? Baahar aaiye please! Bataiye! Kya hua hai?
Kaera : Mujhe...! Akelapann chahiye kuch dino ke liye.
Karan : Lekin kyu?
Kaera : Because I need it! Leave!
Karan : B-But dii-! Dad-
Kaera : I said leave!
Na chaahte hue bhi Karan ko waha se jaana hi pada. Ek umeed lete hue ki shayad jald hi uski behan baahar aaye aur sab kuch saajha kare. Magar, aisa na hua.
Khabar Kishor tak pohuch gayi. 3 din se Kaera se na toh uski koi baat hui thi aur na hi koi messages praapt hue the. Use khabar lag chuki thi ki Kaera office ke kaamo me apni upasthiti nahi de rahi hai 3 dino se.
Ghar par aate hi Julia ne sab kuch bata diya tha. Jise jaan'ne ke baad woh ek confusion me jaa chuka tha.
Kaera ne aisa pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Woh taajub tha ki harr baar uski anumati lene wali uski ladki aaj bina koi khabar diye aise kaise khud ko kamre ke andar band kar li?
Darwaze par aate hue usne khat-khataya,
Kishor : Kaera?
Kaera (andar se) : Yes?
Kishor : Baahar aao!
Kaera : No!
Jawaab sunte hi Kishor ki aankhein taajub me fel gayi. Peeche khade Julia aur Karan bhi ek dusre ko dekh chintan me the. Ye pehli baar ho raha tha. Kaera ne Kishor ke aadesh ko sunane se inkaar kar diya??
Kishor : Kaera??? Mene kaha baahar aao! Mujhe tumse baat karni hai.
Kaera : Leave! I need some time. I want no-one around me.
Kishor (surprised) : Tum-!!!?
Kaera : ...
Kishor : Kya mein jaan sakta hu ye sab kya chal raha hai? Andar kyu ho tum? Kya koi baat hui hai?
Kaera : Nothing! I told you! Mujhe akelapann chahiye abhi. For sometime...!
Kishor : Kisliye?
Kaera : To discover myself!
Kishor : Huh?
Kaera : I won't be coming out for few days.
Kishor : Kaera! Ye kya harqate hai? Do you have any idea how much loss your childish actions can bring to our business?
Kaera : Childish? Right! Be it childish then!
Kishor : You-!!! Kaeraaaa!!!! Baahar aao! Abhi!!!
Kaera : ...
Kishor : Kaaaaeeerraaaa!!!!
Kaera : LEAVE!!!!
Kishor hairat ke maare stabdh reh gaya. Uski beti ne aaj pehli baar ye kiya tha. Na sirf woh uski baat nahi maan rahi thi balki...! Palat ke jawab bhi de rahi thi.
Kishor (frowns) : Karan!
Karan : H-Haan Dad!?
Kishor : Kaera ki absence me tum meetings me jaoge. Clear?
Karan : M-Mein? Lekin-! Mein harr jagah dii ki tarah itna swiftly aur efficiently work nahi kar sakta.
Kishor : Sirf yahi ki meetings ki baat kar raha hu mein. Overseas jaane ki zaroorat nahi.
Karan (nods) : O-Okay!
Kishor : Julia!?
Julia : Yes Sir??
Kishor : You'll give me each and every update!
Kehte hue woh waha se tezz qadmo ke sath nikal gaya.
Julia sarr jhukaye bas dheere se 'yes' hi keh paayi. Kaera ki pal pal ki khabar dene ke kaam ab uske upar tha.
Dekhte hi dekhte kayi din guzar chuke the. Nexacom ke profits ghat rahe the. Karan apna 100% de raha tha magar...!
Woh akela kaafi nahi tha. Baaki, companies Kaera ki absence ka fayda uthate hue apna business badha rahi thi. Business opportunities ko steal kar rahi thi.
Profit ka graph nirantar gir raha tha. Aur Kaera, khud ko yu hi apne kamre me band kiye hue thi. Woh baar baar wahi diary padhti. Aur harr baar use padhte hue use aisa lagta jaise woh ye pehli baar padh rahi hai.
Aur tabhi, use ye dhyaan bhi aaya.
'I lost it!!!!'
Woh hairaan thi. She lost her virginity. Ab use uski ahamiyat ka bodh ho raha tha. Prem ke baare me bhi diary me vistaar se likha hua tha.
Ek jhatke me use woh sab yaad aane laga. Woh raat jab woh Veer naam ke yuvak se pehli baar mili thi. Uska woh nashe me hona. Veer ka use kamre me le jaana. Aur waha uss raat ka rangeen hona.
Sochte hi uski bauhe kass uthi.
Ye sab kiski badaulat hua tha...??
Veer!!!
***
Diary ko thamaane se pehle jab Veer diary ko apne ghar leke aaya tha. Toh ye wahi din tha jab Aabha ne use haafte hue paseene se tar-batar aata dekh liya tha.
Kaera ne jo kuch bhi diary me padha tha.
Woh toh usme tha hi nahi!!!
Raat ko jab Veer ne araam lene ke baad diary kholi toh diary me maatr 2-3 panne hi bhare hue the. Archana ne sirf itna hi likha hua tha. Apne baccho ke baare me.
Uske aage poori ki poori diary safed kore panno se bhari padi thi. Archana ko toh ye bodh hi nahi tha ki bhavishya me Kaera ki aisi dasha ho jayegi.
Par fir Kaera ne jo padha woh kya tha?
'Wtf? What is this?'
Veer jhunjhlate hue mann me bola. Diary bas 3 panno tak bhari thi. Baaki sab khaali tha.
[Looks like...! She wanted to write but she passed away before doing that.]
Pari ki awaaz uske mann me aayi. Aur uske vachan satya the. Archana bohut kuch likhna chaahti thi. Magar, akaal mrityu ka woh shikaar ho baithi thi. Isliye, kuch bhi likh na paayi.
Seer Vision ko istemaal karne ke baad Veer ko diary ke saath saath Kaera ki bhi kayi yaadon ke baare me pata chala tha. Kaera ka woh shirdi, nashik, USA me jaana. Aisi kuch yaadein thi jinko usne labyrinth me se badi mushqil se paaya tha.
'Wait! Meri ek baat samajh nahi aayi Pari!'
[What is it, Master?]
'Tumne bataya ki Seer Vision mujhe uss vastu ki life history dikha dega jo jo usne apne kaal me dekhi hai. Right?'
[Right!]
'Toh fir mujhe Seer Vision ka istemaal karte waqt Miss Kaera ke shirdi, ya nashik ya fir USA ke drishya kyu nazar aaye? Tab diary toh ghar par maujood rahi hogi. Ye sab drishya diary ke ird gird nahi huye. Miss Kaera toh desh ke baahar thi. Fir mein woh sab kaise dekh paaya?'
[A very good question Master. Samjhati hu-!]
'Yes Please!'
[Diary bhale hi ghar me thi. Lekin, kabhi na kabhi unn safar ka zikr toh hua hoga na Ghar me? Diary ki maujoodgi me?]
'Ahn!!?'
Veer ka muh ye sochte hi khul gaya. Woh ye kaise bhul gaya? Bhale hi diary ghar par thi. Lekin kabhi na kabhi Archana ya Kishor ne ghar par unn trips ka zikr kisi na kisi se toh kiya hi hoga.
'Matlab woh bhi include ho gaya? Seer Vision! It was insanely strong!'
[Yes! Warna aapki halat itni kharab kaise hui? It's because the skill was too strong. Legendary skills aisi hi hoti hai Master. That's the reason why it took a toll on you.]
'I see!'
Aur ab...! Sab kuch uske haatho me tha. Kaera ke Mission ke liye zyada din shesh nahi the.
'Pari!!!'
[Yes!]
'Purchase that skill! Miss Kaera ke emotions ko wapas laane ke liye, unki aur unki mom ki yaadon ko saamne laane ke liye, mujhe ye karna hi hoga.'
Aur agle hi shan,
*Ding*
['Copycat' is now available.]
Copycat! Ek aisi skill jo dusro ki lekhni ki nakal karne me saksham thi.
Yahi woh skill thi jo Veer ne Paris jaane se pehle khareedi thi. Bina iske toh kuch bhi nahi hone waala tha.
Adhure panno ko akhir wahi toh bharne waala tha. Archana ki writing 3 panno tak seemit thi. Lekin, woh teen panne kaafi the uski lekhni ki nakal utaarne ke liye.
Veer din raat, shabdo ka sahi istemaal kar uss diary ko bharne me lag gaya. Kahi se bhi usne aisa nahi lagne diya jaise ye kisi aur ke dwara likhi gayi thi.
Copycat urja bohut kheechti thi. Upar se sahi shabdo ka chayan karna aur saare bhaav saamne rakhna. Khaas kar jab aap kisi ko bhaav ke hi baare me samjha rahe ho.
Veer jo subah ko baithata, raat tak hote hote uska shareer paseene se lath-path maalum padta. Uske haath itne stats hone ke bawajood dard karne lagte. Kisi mrit vyakti ke uss zamaane se laayi gayi uski likhawat ki nakal karna, ye behad urja leta tha.
Jab tak Veer ne diary ko harr tarah se bhar nahi diya tab tak usne apna zara bhi waqt zaaya nahi kiya.
Diary ke complete hote hi, ek kaam aur bach gaya tha ab.
Veer ne diary ko khola aur apne paas rakhi chai ke cup ko dekha. Aur agle hi shan usne woh chai ka cup diary par palta diya.
[Wh-Whaaaaatttt!??]
Pari bhauchakki reh gayi. Kintu, usne agle hi pal Veer ke mann me jhaanka aur ye pata lagte hi ki Veer ne aisa kyu kiya, usne ek raahat ki saans li.
[You are so smart, Master!]
Veer ne fir paani bhi uss diary par giraya. Aur glue ka ek diluted version bana ke uske kuch panno ko aapas me jod diya. Diluted version isliye taaki nikaalne se woh araam se nikal aaye.
'Miss Kaera intelligent hai. Zara bhi unhe shaq nahi hona chahiye ki diary me ye sab abhi likha gaya hai aur diary pehle khaali thi. Ye karna zaroori tha.'
[Indeed!]
Usne fauran hi Suman ko bulaya,
Suman : Aapne mujhe bulaya Maalik? Pichle kayi dino se aap kamre ke baahar zyada aa nahi rahe ho. Sab theek toh hai na?
Veer : Hmm! Sab theek hai Suman! Mujhe tumse ek kaam hai.
Suman : Kahiye na maalik!
Veer : Ye diary pakdo!
Suman : Diary? Kiski hai?
Veer : Woh mein tumhe nahi bata sakta. Par tumhe ek kaam saunp raha hu. Kar dogi na?
Suman : Aap aadesh dijiye Maalik! Aap kab se mujhse meri anumati puchne lage? Aisa mat kiya kariye.
Veer : Umm! Ahem! A-Alright! So...! Tumhe iss diary ko upar terrace par rakhna hai. Ise sukhana hai. Khol ke mat dekhna andar kya hai aur na hi kisi ke saamne ye diary aani chahiye.
Suman : Jii! K-Kya mein jaan sakti hu isme aisa kya hai?
Veer : Suman! Ye diary meri nahi. Aur isme aisa jaan'ne laayak kuch bhi nahi hai tumhare liye.
Suman (nods) : Mein samajh gayi!
Suman ne aage koi sawaal nahi kiye. Woh apni jagah jaanti thi. Jab diary me uske matlab ka kuch nahi tha, toh uski dilchaspi turant hi samaapt ho gayi.
Veer ke aadesh anusaar usne diary ko chhat par rakh uski nigraani theek se kari. Jab tak ki woh poore se sookh nahi gayi aur chai aur glue ki gandh nahi chali gayi.
Yahi kaaran tha jo Veer ne diary Kaera ko turant nahi thamaayi thi. Kyuki woh adhuri thi.
Par Kaera...! Inn sab se anjaan thi.
Use laga ye sab uski Maa Archana dwara diya gaya tha. Balki, sachhaayi toh yahi thi ki woh sab..! Veer ke shabd the!
Ek mahina guzar chuka tha. Akhir kaar...! Kaera apne kamre se baahar aayi. Nexacom ne kaafi losses jhele hue the inn beete dino.
Julia apni miss ko baahar aata dekh turant hi uske qareeb aayi.
Julia : Miss!? Ruchika Miss is waiting for you! You are finally out!
Ruchika ne jab Kaera ko dekha toh woh chaunk uthi. Balki, Ruchika akeli nahi thi. Julia ka bhi yahi haal tha.
Kaera kuch alag si prateet ho rahi thi. Uske chehre par alag hi tej nazar aa raha tha. Pehle se kayi guna adhik. Uski aankhein pehle se zyada dhaar-daar thi.
Ruchika : Uh! M-Miss! M-Mein woh batana aayi thi ki...! S-Some of the rival companies are stealing opportunities from us. Aapki absence me kuch companies deal nahi kar rahi. Rumours are spreading that you have stepped down from your post. Rival companies ka hi kiya dhara hai yeh sab.
Kaera ki nigaahein jaise hi Ruchika par gayi, bechari Ruchika ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.
Kaera : They dare to do that? Then let them know...! Their nightmare is coming...!
Ruchika (gulps) : Y-Yes!!
Kaera turant hi waha se mud neeche ki orr chal di. Ruchika uske peeche peeche daudte hue bhaagi. Aur idhar,
Julia stabdh nigaaho se bas ghatit hote hue sab kuch dekhti rahi.
Julia : M-Miss!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
We have completed 150 updates. Isi ke saath Crimson arc yaha samaapt hota hai. Jitne answers dene the woh arc ke ant ke pehle sab de diye gaye hai. Baaki ke uttar hum aage ke arcs me jaanenge. Business arc rahega ab. Mujhe ek outline banaani padegi uski. Toh Dil se like thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai. 150. Btw ye update more than 5k words ka hai.
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Awesome Update bhai....!!!!!Update - 150 ~ The Return of the Queen
Ab tak...
[D-Dear! Stop it! What the hell are you doing? H-Hey don't scare me! Please!]
Woh awaaz vyakul thi. Ladki ne fir ahista se apne mann me uss awaaz ko jawaab diya.
'There's nothing left now! I must go as well! Lily...!'
[W-Wait!! N-Noooooo!]
Aur usne apna perr aage badha diya.
[Noooooooooooooo!!!!!]
Ab aage...
Sab kuch akhir samaapt hua. Veer ke Paris ke safar par poornviram laga aur ghar waapsi ke liye woh Paris se ravana ho chuka tha. Idhar, Mumbai me uska sabhi besabri se intezar kar rahe the.
Veer ke sahi salamat milne ke baad, uski phone par Ragini se baat hui. Sirf Ragini hi nahi, Mumbai me maujood Bhumika, Shweta, Sonali, Suman, Aabha, se leke harr kisi se uski baatein hui.
Aur sabhi ye jaan ke khush the ki Veer mehfooz tha. Ragini toh betaab thi use dekhne ke liye. Magar, Veer ke liye mushqile abhi khatam kaha hui thi. Asli, daav pench toh ab ladne the use.
Sawalo ka chakravyuh jo racha jaa raha tha Tej, Arohi aur Bhavna ki iss tigdam dwara. Shabdo ki inn bhool bhulaiyaa se bhi toh mehfooz aana abhi baaki tha. Ek choonk aur saara ka saara bhaanda phoot jaana tha uska. Veer ne khud ko iske liye mann hi mann taiyaar kar liya tha. Woh jaanta tha ki jaise hi woh ghar pohuchega, ye teeno deviyaan uss par prashno ke baan leke toot padengi.
Kherr! Ye sab toh yaha ki baatein thi. Lekin, kuch aur ghatnaaye bhi hui thi. Veer ke ird gird se hatke.
Jab Veer Paris jaa raha tha, toh jaane se pehle uski mulaqat Kaera se hui thi. Jaha usne Kaera ke puraane ghar se ek diary dhoondhte hue use saunpi thi. Veer ne diary toh saunp di thi. Magar, uske parinaam kya kya hue, inn baato se woh anibhigya tha.
Woh nahi jaanta tha ki Kaera ko diary thamaane ke baad Kaera ne kya kiya, uske saath kya hua. Bas itna zaroor jaanta tha ki Kaera ki favourability uske prati ghat ke 50 ho gayi thi. Aur, mission bhi dhara ka dhara reh gaya tha.
Na hi uska koi reward mila aur na hi koi notification aaya. Par, asal me kya hua tha inn beete dino? Ye baat, toh samay hi bata sakta tha.
Mumbai...
Night ~ 11:13 PM
Ye woh samay tha jab Veer Paris ke liye nikalne wala tha. Seer Vision! Uss legendary skill ka istemaal karne ke baad, Veer diary ki yaadon me doob gaya tha.
Labyrinth me usne harr woh yaad bator ke dhoondhi thi jo diary ke andar samahit thi. Diary apne kaal me jin jin ghatnakramo ko dekhe hue thi, Veer ne unn sab ko haasil kiya tha. Use Kaera ke baare me na jaane kya kya maalum chala. Aur, kuch dino ke baad hi usne woh diary Kaera ko thamaayi thi.
Aaj usi din ki raat thi. Kaera diary leke apne ghar aa chuki thi. Apni atyant hi vyast zindagi me use din bhar uss diary ko khol ke padhne ka samay na mila.
Raat hote hi, jab woh apne kamre me bilkul jaa hi rahi thi toh peeche se uski personal maid Julia ne use awaaz lagaayi,
Julia : Miss?
Kaera : Hmm?
Julia : Are you heading to bed?
Kaera (nods) : Yes!
Julia : Okay! Have a good night, Miss!
Woh shubhraatri kehte hue mudi ki itne me Kaera ne kuch soch use pukara,
Kaera : Julia!?
Julia (turns) : Yes???
Kaera : Can you please prepare a coffee for me? I think I'll need it tonight!
Julia : Are you going to stay awake for office work?
Kaera : Not that actually! Just something else! I'll be waiting inside.
*Thud*
Aur apne kamre ka darwaza band kar woh andar chali gayi. Usne Julia ko nahi bataya ki woh diary padhne jaa rahi thi. Coffee mangwane ke peeche yahi kaaran tha.
Na hi Julia ne apni taraf se pucha ki uski Miss bhala kis liye aaj derr tak jaagne wali thi. Kaera harr baat harr kisi se saajha nahi karti thi. Aur Julia bhi ye samajhti thi ki zaroori nahi use harr baatein bataayi jaaye.
Woh apni jagah jaanti thi aur uska aadar bhi karti thi.
Kamre ke andar aate hi Kaera ne apne kapde badle aur ek silk light purple nightdress daal woh apne bed par aayi.
Tab tak Julia uske liye coffee leke bhi aa chuki thi. Coffee ko uske bed se lagi side table par rakh woh punah 'goodnight' bol apne khud ke kamre me chali gayi.
Idhar uske jaate hi Kaera ne apni almaari khol wahi diary nikaali jo Veer ne aaj use thamayi thi. Ye uske puraane ghar se mili thi. Na jaane isme aisa kya hone waala tha. Magar, woh iske andar dekhne ke liye kaafi icchuk thi.
Usne diary kholi...!
Panne kaafi puraane prateet ho rahe the. Kaera ne pehle toh bina kuch padhe hi diary ko khol kaagaz paltaate hue use jaancha. Woh bhaanp rahi thi.
Diary waqai purani thi. Itne saalo se diary ke na khulne ke kaaran, kayi saare panne aapas me chipak chuke the. Badi hi savdhani se Kaera ne unn panno ko pehle toh alag-alag kiya. Poora jayza liya ki harr panna alag hai ya nahi. Uske baad hi woh diary ke pehle page par aayi.
Pehle page par aate hi uski nazar uss naam par pad gayi. Waha likha hua tha~
Archana!
"M-Mother!!!!??"
Kaera ke komal haath panne par likhe uss naam par firr gaye. Diary uski Maa Archana ki thi?
Page aage paltaate hue usne sab kuch fir padhna chaalu kiya. Likhawat dekhte hi woh pehchaan chuki thi ki ye uski maa ki hi likhawat thi. Woh apne emotions bhuli thi. Apna ateet nahi. Bhali bhaati yaad tha use ki uski maa kis tarah likha karti thi.
Usne ek gehri saans li, aur fir padhna shuru kiya.
Kaera! Karan! Mere pyaare baccho! Tum dono ko jabse mene paaya hai, mein bata nahi sakti ki mein kitni khush-kismat hu.
Tum dono mere jigar ke tukde ho. Tumhari kam aqal maata shri se theek se diary tak likhna nahi aata. (;^ω^)
Ye meri pehli koshish hai. Kuch nahi soojh raha tha kya likhu. Fir tum dono ka khayal aaya. Tum dono toh meri saanso me baste ho. Toh socha kyu na tum dono se hi iss diary likhne ki aadat ki bhi shuruaat karu?
Tum dono ke hone se dekho...! Mujhe bahana mil gaya ki diary me kya likha jaaye. Ye tumhari maa, ab se harr roz tumhari shaitaaniyo ko isme likha karegi. Jab tum dono bade ho jaoge na tab ise tum dono ke saamne kholungi.
Ye bataane ki bachpan me tum dono ne mujhe kitna sataaya hai. (^_^メ)
Shuru ke 2-3 panne Kaera aur Karan ke hi zikr ke the. Archana ka apne baccho ke liye pyaar harr ek shabd me jhalak raha tha. Pata nahi kyu par Kaera ki aankhein apne aap hi namm ho rahi thi.
Magar, unn panno ke baad jaise vishay gambheer ho gaya.
Mera swaasth bigad raha hai. Shareer se taqat jaise khatam ho rahi hai. Iss umr me ye sab nahi hona chahiye. Abhi toh tum dono ko bada hote dekhna hai mujhe. School se, college se graduate hote dekhna hai. Apne baccho ki shaadiyaan hote dekhna hai. Tumhare baccho ko dekhna hai.
Magar, haalat din-ba-din battar hoti jaa rahi hai. Mujhe abhaas ho gaya hai. Mera bachna ab mushqil hai.
Mere preeya baccho. Kuch bhi theek nahi ho raha hai. Tumhare Papa jin baba pe vishvaas kiye hue hai, mujhe woh ab sahi nahi lag rahe.
Kaera...! Jab se tumhare liye woh ye keh ke gaye hai ki tumhe ghar par rakha jaaye, aur bahar na nikalne diya jaaye. Mera vishvaas unn par se uth chuka hai. Baccho ko panchhi ki tarah kisi pinjre me qaid kar ke nahi rakha jaata. Tum toh mera apna khoon ho.
Lekin, tumhare Papa ye maan'ne ko taiyaar nahi hai. Meri aur unki ladayi lagbhag roz hone lagi hai. Mein harr baar uss baba ka virodh karti hu aur woh mujhe sunaane lagte hai.
Woh mera vishvaas nahi kar rahe. Magar...! Mujhe apne aap par atal vishvaas hai. Mein samajh chuki hu ki woh koi dhongi hai aur hamare sirf paiso par niyat hai uski.
Mere lakh mana karne ke baad bhi Kishor meri ek baat nahi maan rahe. Agar baccho ka samay subah se leke raat tak sirf padhaayi me vyateet kar denge toh kya hi parivaarik prem ka ehsaas kar payenge woh?
Kaera ka yu alag alag teachers ke dwara padhaya jaana, use kamre me band rakhna, baahar na nikalne dena. Ye sab...! Use asal zindagi se dur le jaane laga hai.
Aur mujhe darr hai..! Kahi ek na ek din- Woh kisi machine ki tarah na bann ke reh jaaye.
Agar aisa hua, toh meri bacchi apni bhavnaaye bhul jayegi. Woh bhul jayegi ki prem kya hota hai, harsh-ullas kya hota hai, gussa-berr kya hota hai. Harr bhavnaaye, insaan ko insaan banati hai.
Mein nahi chaahti, meri bacchi insaan se ek machine bann jaaye.
Gyaan arjit karna acchi baat hai. Lekin, gyaan iss tarah arjit karna...! Prayogik nahi.
Aur isliye, jaane se pehle mein tumhare saath kuch baatein saajha karke jaana chahti hu Kaera.
Karan ki mujhe fiqr nahi. Mamla tumhara gambheer hai meri bacchi. Aur mein jaanti hu ki tumhare sambhalte hi, Karan apne aap sambhal jayega. Woh tumse bohut prem karta hai beti.
Lekin, use jalan bhi hoti hai. Prem shuru se tumhe adhik mila hai. Use nahi. Jis kaaran woh muh fulaaye baitha rehta hai. Magar...! Woh tumhara kabhi dil se bura nahi chaahega. Iss baat ki pratyabhuti mein leti hu. Fir chaahe mein rahu ya na rahu.
Aur isliye mein ye diary likh rahi hu. Umeed hai jaane se pehle mein isme harr woh baat likh paungi jo tumhari zindagi me madad karengi.
Agar tum ye diary padh rahi hogi, toh zaahir hai meri maujoodgi ab waha nahi hogi. Aasha karti hu tum safalta ki uchaaiyo ko choom rahi hogi. (^‿^)
Kaera! Harr ek shabd dhyaan se padhna. Ho sakta hai tumhe iss diary ki zaroorat hi na pade. Mein khamakha chintit ho rahi hu. Lekin, Maa hu. Ek bhi mauka haath se jaane nahi dena chaahti jaha mein tumhare liye kaam aa saku.
Isliye...! Agar tumhe zaroorat pade, toh bas iss diary ko padh lena. Inme mene mool bhavnao ko tumhare ateet ke saath mila kar samjhaya hai.
Khushi!
Duniya ka harr ek vyakti ise paane ke liye marta hai beti. Ye kya hoti hai? Kya sirf muskurana khushi hai? Nahi beti!
Ek baar ki baat hai. Tum nanhi si thi. ^_^
Aur school me tumhara ye pehla result tha. Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai tum meri ungli pakad ke mere saath school gayi thi. Tumhara jab result aaya tha tab tumhe nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai.
Mein toh behad khush thi result se. Lekin, tumhari samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha. Haha! (✿^‿^) Tum bas taktaki lagaaye hume apni pyaari aankhon se ghoor rahi thi. Tum me utni samajh hi nahi thi.
Magar, jab teacher ne tumhe chocolate de ke shabashi di, tab tumhare hontho par muskaan bikhri thi. Tumhe samajh aa chuka tha ki tumne kuch accha kiya hai.
Aur yahi...! Asli khushi hai meri bacchi.
Jab aap mehsoos karo ki aap apni zindagi apne tareeqe se jee rahe ho. Na ki kisi ke dabaav me.
Jab aap samay ke bahaav ke saath behte jao, apni kismat par bina koi krodh jataate hue.
Jab mehsoos hoye ki zindagi ki paristhitiya acchi hai.
Jab aap dusro ke saath acche sambandh rakho aur unka aanand lo.
Jab kuch paane ke liye kadi mehnat karo aur use paa lo.
Inn sab ke parinaam, khushi leke aate hai bacchi. Ise yaad rakhna.
Nirasha!
Khushiyo ke saath, dukh bhi hamesha zindagi me aate rahenge beti. Par ghabrana nahi. Nirasha kab hoti hai? Kya tumhe pata hai?
Jab tumhara premi ya khaas dost tumhe asweekriti ya dhoka de.
Kisi khaas dost ya premi ko alvida kehna.
Jab koi parinaam mann ke mutabik na aaye.
Koi khaas jab guzar jaaye aur unki yaadein aapko unki yaad dilaaye.
Ye sthitiya nirasha leke aati hai.
Tumhe shayad yaad na ho. Lekin, jab tum first class me thi na. Tab, hum sab tumhari Nani ke ghar gaye the. Tumhare Nana ji duniya se jaa chuke the. Tumhe yaad bhi nahi tha ki tum unse mili ho ya nahi. Lekin, fir bhi tum unke shav ko dekh zorr zorr se ro rahi thi.
School me kisi se jhagda hona ho ya fir tumhari khaas dost Ava, Sonia se tumhara lad jaana. Tum roti thi. Kyuki tumhe ehsaas tha ki kisi apne se tumhara mann bhed hua hai.
Ye niraasha hai Kaera! Yaad rakhna!
Krodh!
Gussa kab aata hai? Tumhe bhi bachpan me kabhi kabhi behad gussa aata tha.
Jab lage ki tumhara raasta rok diya gaya hai.
Jab lage ki koi anuchit ya galat tareeqe se pesh aa raha hai.
Jab tumhari apni cheez koi dusra tumse chhinaane ki koshish kare.
Jab lage ki koi niji jeevan me hastakshep kar raha hai.
Jab mehsoos ho ki kisi apne ko thes pohuchayi jaa rahi hai.
Jab na-insaaf ho.
Jab dhoka, asweekriti mile.
Jab koi tumhari niji aur samajik seemaaye ko laangh jaaye aur apne matlab ke liye kuch haasil karna chaahe.
Ye paristhitiya krodh ko jagaati hai. Aise waqt pe hamesha thande dimaag se kaam karna Kaera. Mujhe vishvas hai tum sahi nirnay hi logi.
Bachpan me, ek baar Sonia ne tumhara mann pasand khilauna le liya tha. Tumne uss bechari ke baal kheench ke use rote hue ghar bhaga diya tha. Ye krodh hai.
Aur ye kabhi bhi accha nahi hota. Jab bhi krodh aaye, hamesha sabse pehle khud ko shaant karne ki koshish karna. Mujhe poori umeed hai tum ye kar logi.
Darr!
Tum kabhi bhi bhoot preto ki film se dara nahi karti thi. Unhe dekhna tumhara shauk tha. Mujhe yaad hai. ^_^
Lekin...! Tumhare do asli darr hai beti. Ek baahri darr aur ek andhruni.
Baahri darr hai~ Rejection!
Meri beti ho tum! Proud ho tum khud par, tumhari apni pride hai. You are the Queen my love. Toh rejection kaise le sakti ho? Aur isliye, tum darrti ho.
Andhruni darr hai tumhara~ Claustrophobia.
Ek doctor ne mujhe ye baat batayi thi. Ek baar ki baat hai jab hum sab tumhare papa ke acche business ki safalta ki kaamna ke liye shirdi gaye hue the.
Aneko mandiro me humne darshan kiye the. Waha se nashik bhi jaana hua. Waha ek mandir tha jaha par ek gufa thi. Neeche jaati hui gehri gufa. Tum darr rahi thi. Jab hum sab neeche gaye, toh waha aur bhi log maujood the.
Jagah kam aur log zyada hone ki wajah se waha ghutan si mehsoos karne lagi thi tum. Aur, rone lagi. Gehri saansein lete hue, baahar aate hue tum achanak hi behosh ho gayi thi. Meri saansein hi atak gayi thi tumhari haalat dekh.
Daudte bhaagte hum tumhe doctor ke paas le gaye the. Aur, tab usne hume ye bataya tha ki aapki beti ko Claustrophobia hai.
Lage jab koi kaam theek se na hone waala ho.
Bhavishya ke parinaam ke baare me jab negative way me socho.
Ye sab darr paida karta hai bacchi! Kabhi bhi...! Kaisi bhi paristhiti zindagi me aaye. Darrna mat. Darr tum par shobha nahi deta. Tum meri beti ho!
Ghrina!
Tumne kabhi kisi se ghrina nahi ki. Kyuki tumhare papa harr woh cheez tumhe laa ke dete the jo auro ke paas nahi hoti thi. Aksar, bacche tumse ghrina kiya karte.
(^_^メ)
Magar ek baar tumhe bhi jalan hui thi. Nafrat bhi karne lagi thi tum. Aur gussa bhi aaya tha tumhe.
USA hum sab revisit karne gaye the. Meri shadi ke honeymoon ke baad ye dusri baar tha jab mein waha jaa rahi thi.
Karan aur tumhari, garmiyon ki chhutiyaan lag chuki thi. Hum sab waha ek kamre me ruke hue the.
Tumhare papa ke ek mitr unse milne aaye the. Aur unke sang unka ladka, Prince bhi tha jo tumhari hi hum-umr ka tha.
Tum dono hi ek dusre ko ye bataane me lage hue the ki 'mere papa ke paas zyada paisa hai.'
Haha! (^^)
Aur isi jhagde me uss ladke ne apne papa ke ek helicopter ka zikr kar diya tha.
Jo uss waqt hamare paas nahi tha. Pehli baar tumne use jalan ki bhaavna se dekha tha. Nafrat bhi thi tumhari aankhon me. Aur gussa bhi. Badle me tumne uske bhi baal kheench diye the. Fufu~ (^^)
Ye jalan hai Kaera. Ghrina! Jab bhi aisa mehsoos hoye toh hamesha yaad rakhna ki kisi aur ke paas kya hai, kitna hai...! Farq nahi padta.
Farq padta hai ki woh uss kitne me se sansaar ke uddhaar ke liye kitna de raha hai. Agar woh adhik saksham hai, toh use adhik dayavaan bhi hona chahiye.
Kabhi ye mat dekhna ki kiske paas adhik dhan hai. Ye dekhna ki kiske paas kitna hai, aur woh utne me se kitna dene ke liye tatpar hai. Tumhe tumhara jawab mil jayega.
Mene tumhe mool bhavnao ke baare me samjha diya hai beti. Iske aage bas kuch yaadon ke baare me likhungi jo hum sabne saath guzaari hai. Umeed hai ye diary tumhare kisi kaam toh aayegi. Agar na aaye, toh bas apni iss maa ki akhiri nishani samajh ise rakh lena.
Iske aage sab kuch Archana ki lekhni me kuch puraani yaadon ke kisse the.
*Tip*
Kaera ki namm aankhon se apne aap aasu gir uss diary ke panno par gir rahe the. Naina beh rahe the. Jhar rahe the.
Use nahi pata tha ye sab kyu ho raha tha magar woh chaah ke bhi inn aasuo ko rok nahi paa rahi thi.
Use turant hi samajh aaya ki woh dukhi thi.
*Flip*
Jaldbaazi me panno ko paltaate hue woh uss page par aayi jaha 'nirasha' ke baare me uski maa ne samjhaya tha. Woh firse padhna chaah rahi thi ki woh dukhi kyu thi. Ye aasu kyu beh rahe the?
Aur agle hi shan uski nazre uss line par punah tik gayi,
'Koi khaas jab guzar jaaye aur unki yaadein aapko unki yaad dilaaye.'
Padhte hi Kaera ke honth thar-thara uthe.
"M-Mamma!!!"
Jaise harr ek sawaal ka uttar maujood tha usme. Arjun jab rannbhumi me duwidha ki paristhiti me tha. Toh Shri Krishna ne unki madad ki thi.
Kuch ussi prakaar se Kaera ke liye ye diary thi. Jisme uske harr ek sawaalo ke uttar maujood the.
Itne saalo se woh zindagi ka matlab jaan'na chaah rahi thi. Aur ek diary ne uski samasyao ka hal khoj nikala. Ye diary uske liye Amrit samaan thi.
Woh raat bhar uss diary ko padhti rahi. Na hi woh soyi aur na hi usne aalas dikhaya. Poori diary usne raat bhar me padh ke samaapt kar di thi.
Jab agli subah hui, toh woh apne kamre se baahar hi nahi nikli.
Julia ne baahar se use awaaz lagayi toh pata chala ki woh office ke liye nahi jaane wali thi. Na hi koi wajah batayi Kaera ne aur na hi woh baahar aayi.
Aaj ka din toh guzar gaya. Magar, Karan ko turant hi iski bhanak lag chuki thi. Woh jaldbaazi me office jaane se pehle taiyaar hoke seedha Kaera ke floor par aaya.
Karan : Where's dii?
Julia : She has shut in herself.
Karan : What???
Julia : She doesn't want to come out. She wants to be inside alone for sometime.
Karan : What? B-But why? What happened?
Julia : I don't know, Sir Karan! I'm just as clueless as you are!
Karan : B-But-! If Dad discovers this! There'll be problems. Is she okay?
Julia (nods) : She seems okay!
Karan : What about her food?
Julia : She asks me to put her food outside her door. After eating the food, she slides the empty dishes out. This is what's been happening since the last 2 days.
Karan (frowns) : Damn it!! J-Just what happened suddenly?
Woh aage badhte hue Kaera ke kamre ke ke baahar khada hua aur usne darwaza khat-khataate hue awaaz lagayi.
Karan : Diii?
*Knock* *Knock*
Karan : D-Dii? Please answer me!
Aur kuch derr baad fir andar se Kaera ki awaaz aayi.
Kaera : Yes? What is it?
Karan : Y-Ye sab kya hai di? Aap andar kyu ho? Baahar aaiye please! Bataiye! Kya hua hai?
Kaera : Mujhe...! Akelapann chahiye kuch dino ke liye.
Karan : Lekin kyu?
Kaera : Because I need it! Leave!
Karan : B-But dii-! Dad-
Kaera : I said leave!
Na chaahte hue bhi Karan ko waha se jaana hi pada. Ek umeed lete hue ki shayad jald hi uski behan baahar aaye aur sab kuch saajha kare. Magar, aisa na hua.
Khabar Kishor tak pohuch gayi. 3 din se Kaera se na toh uski koi baat hui thi aur na hi koi messages praapt hue the. Use khabar lag chuki thi ki Kaera office ke kaamo me apni upasthiti nahi de rahi hai 3 dino se.
Ghar par aate hi Julia ne sab kuch bata diya tha. Jise jaan'ne ke baad woh ek confusion me jaa chuka tha.
Kaera ne aisa pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Woh taajub tha ki harr baar uski anumati lene wali uski ladki aaj bina koi khabar diye aise kaise khud ko kamre ke andar band kar li?
Darwaze par aate hue usne khat-khataya,
Kishor : Kaera?
Kaera (andar se) : Yes?
Kishor : Baahar aao!
Kaera : No!
Jawaab sunte hi Kishor ki aankhein taajub me fel gayi. Peeche khade Julia aur Karan bhi ek dusre ko dekh chintan me the. Ye pehli baar ho raha tha. Kaera ne Kishor ke aadesh ko sunane se inkaar kar diya??
Kishor : Kaera??? Mene kaha baahar aao! Mujhe tumse baat karni hai.
Kaera : Leave! I need some time. I want no-one around me.
Kishor (surprised) : Tum-!!!?
Kaera : ...
Kishor : Kya mein jaan sakta hu ye sab kya chal raha hai? Andar kyu ho tum? Kya koi baat hui hai?
Kaera : Nothing! I told you! Mujhe akelapann chahiye abhi. For sometime...!
Kishor : Kisliye?
Kaera : To discover myself!
Kishor : Huh?
Kaera : I won't be coming out for few days.
Kishor : Kaera! Ye kya harqate hai? Do you have any idea how much loss your childish actions can bring to our business?
Kaera : Childish? Right! Be it childish then!
Kishor : You-!!! Kaeraaaa!!!! Baahar aao! Abhi!!!
Kaera : ...
Kishor : Kaaaaeeerraaaa!!!!
Kaera : LEAVE!!!!
Kishor hairat ke maare stabdh reh gaya. Uski beti ne aaj pehli baar ye kiya tha. Na sirf woh uski baat nahi maan rahi thi balki...! Palat ke jawab bhi de rahi thi.
Kishor (frowns) : Karan!
Karan : H-Haan Dad!?
Kishor : Kaera ki absence me tum meetings me jaoge. Clear?
Karan : M-Mein? Lekin-! Mein harr jagah dii ki tarah itna swiftly aur efficiently work nahi kar sakta.
Kishor : Sirf yahi ki meetings ki baat kar raha hu mein. Overseas jaane ki zaroorat nahi.
Karan (nods) : O-Okay!
Kishor : Julia!?
Julia : Yes Sir??
Kishor : You'll give me each and every update!
Kehte hue woh waha se tezz qadmo ke sath nikal gaya.
Julia sarr jhukaye bas dheere se 'yes' hi keh paayi. Kaera ki pal pal ki khabar dene ke kaam ab uske upar tha.
Dekhte hi dekhte kayi din guzar chuke the. Nexacom ke profits ghat rahe the. Karan apna 100% de raha tha magar...!
Woh akela kaafi nahi tha. Baaki, companies Kaera ki absence ka fayda uthate hue apna business badha rahi thi. Business opportunities ko steal kar rahi thi.
Profit ka graph nirantar gir raha tha. Aur Kaera, khud ko yu hi apne kamre me band kiye hue thi. Woh baar baar wahi diary padhti. Aur harr baar use padhte hue use aisa lagta jaise woh ye pehli baar padh rahi hai.
Aur tabhi, use ye dhyaan bhi aaya.
'I lost it!!!!'
Woh hairaan thi. She lost her virginity. Ab use uski ahamiyat ka bodh ho raha tha. Prem ke baare me bhi diary me vistaar se likha hua tha.
Ek jhatke me use woh sab yaad aane laga. Woh raat jab woh Veer naam ke yuvak se pehli baar mili thi. Uska woh nashe me hona. Veer ka use kamre me le jaana. Aur waha uss raat ka rangeen hona.
Sochte hi uski bauhe kass uthi.
Ye sab kiski badaulat hua tha...??
Veer!!!
***
Diary ko thamaane se pehle jab Veer diary ko apne ghar leke aaya tha. Toh ye wahi din tha jab Aabha ne use haafte hue paseene se tar-batar aata dekh liya tha.
Kaera ne jo kuch bhi diary me padha tha.
Woh toh usme tha hi nahi!!!
Raat ko jab Veer ne araam lene ke baad diary kholi toh diary me maatr 2-3 panne hi bhare hue the. Archana ne sirf itna hi likha hua tha. Apne baccho ke baare me.
Uske aage poori ki poori diary safed kore panno se bhari padi thi. Archana ko toh ye bodh hi nahi tha ki bhavishya me Kaera ki aisi dasha ho jayegi.
Par fir Kaera ne jo padha woh kya tha?
'Wtf? What is this?'
Veer jhunjhlate hue mann me bola. Diary bas 3 panno tak bhari thi. Baaki sab khaali tha.
[Looks like...! She wanted to write but she passed away before doing that.]
Pari ki awaaz uske mann me aayi. Aur uske vachan satya the. Archana bohut kuch likhna chaahti thi. Magar, akaal mrityu ka woh shikaar ho baithi thi. Isliye, kuch bhi likh na paayi.
Seer Vision ko istemaal karne ke baad Veer ko diary ke saath saath Kaera ki bhi kayi yaadon ke baare me pata chala tha. Kaera ka woh shirdi, nashik, USA me jaana. Aisi kuch yaadein thi jinko usne labyrinth me se badi mushqil se paaya tha.
'Wait! Meri ek baat samajh nahi aayi Pari!'
[What is it, Master?]
'Tumne bataya ki Seer Vision mujhe uss vastu ki life history dikha dega jo jo usne apne kaal me dekhi hai. Right?'
[Right!]
'Toh fir mujhe Seer Vision ka istemaal karte waqt Miss Kaera ke shirdi, ya nashik ya fir USA ke drishya kyu nazar aaye? Tab diary toh ghar par maujood rahi hogi. Ye sab drishya diary ke ird gird nahi huye. Miss Kaera toh desh ke baahar thi. Fir mein woh sab kaise dekh paaya?'
[A very good question Master. Samjhati hu-!]
'Yes Please!'
[Diary bhale hi ghar me thi. Lekin, kabhi na kabhi unn safar ka zikr toh hua hoga na Ghar me? Diary ki maujoodgi me?]
'Ahn!!?'
Veer ka muh ye sochte hi khul gaya. Woh ye kaise bhul gaya? Bhale hi diary ghar par thi. Lekin kabhi na kabhi Archana ya Kishor ne ghar par unn trips ka zikr kisi na kisi se toh kiya hi hoga.
'Matlab woh bhi include ho gaya? Seer Vision! It was insanely strong!'
[Yes! Warna aapki halat itni kharab kaise hui? It's because the skill was too strong. Legendary skills aisi hi hoti hai Master. That's the reason why it took a toll on you.]
'I see!'
Aur ab...! Sab kuch uske haatho me tha. Kaera ke Mission ke liye zyada din shesh nahi the.
'Pari!!!'
[Yes!]
'Purchase that skill! Miss Kaera ke emotions ko wapas laane ke liye, unki aur unki mom ki yaadon ko saamne laane ke liye, mujhe ye karna hi hoga.'
Aur agle hi shan,
*Ding*
['Copycat' is now available.]
Copycat! Ek aisi skill jo dusro ki lekhni ki nakal karne me saksham thi.
Yahi woh skill thi jo Veer ne Paris jaane se pehle khareedi thi. Bina iske toh kuch bhi nahi hone waala tha.
Adhure panno ko akhir wahi toh bharne waala tha. Archana ki writing 3 panno tak seemit thi. Lekin, woh teen panne kaafi the uski lekhni ki nakal utaarne ke liye.
Veer din raat, shabdo ka sahi istemaal kar uss diary ko bharne me lag gaya. Kahi se bhi usne aisa nahi lagne diya jaise ye kisi aur ke dwara likhi gayi thi.
Copycat urja bohut kheechti thi. Upar se sahi shabdo ka chayan karna aur saare bhaav saamne rakhna. Khaas kar jab aap kisi ko bhaav ke hi baare me samjha rahe ho.
Veer jo subah ko baithata, raat tak hote hote uska shareer paseene se lath-path maalum padta. Uske haath itne stats hone ke bawajood dard karne lagte. Kisi mrit vyakti ke uss zamaane se laayi gayi uski likhawat ki nakal karna, ye behad urja leta tha.
Jab tak Veer ne diary ko harr tarah se bhar nahi diya tab tak usne apna zara bhi waqt zaaya nahi kiya.
Diary ke complete hote hi, ek kaam aur bach gaya tha ab.
Veer ne diary ko khola aur apne paas rakhi chai ke cup ko dekha. Aur agle hi shan usne woh chai ka cup diary par palta diya.
[Wh-Whaaaaatttt!??]
Pari bhauchakki reh gayi. Kintu, usne agle hi pal Veer ke mann me jhaanka aur ye pata lagte hi ki Veer ne aisa kyu kiya, usne ek raahat ki saans li.
[You are so smart, Master!]
Veer ne fir paani bhi uss diary par giraya. Aur glue ka ek diluted version bana ke uske kuch panno ko aapas me jod diya. Diluted version isliye taaki nikaalne se woh araam se nikal aaye.
'Miss Kaera intelligent hai. Zara bhi unhe shaq nahi hona chahiye ki diary me ye sab abhi likha gaya hai aur diary pehle khaali thi. Ye karna zaroori tha.'
[Indeed!]
Usne fauran hi Suman ko bulaya,
Suman : Aapne mujhe bulaya Maalik? Pichle kayi dino se aap kamre ke baahar zyada aa nahi rahe ho. Sab theek toh hai na?
Veer : Hmm! Sab theek hai Suman! Mujhe tumse ek kaam hai.
Suman : Kahiye na maalik!
Veer : Ye diary pakdo!
Suman : Diary? Kiski hai?
Veer : Woh mein tumhe nahi bata sakta. Par tumhe ek kaam saunp raha hu. Kar dogi na?
Suman : Aap aadesh dijiye Maalik! Aap kab se mujhse meri anumati puchne lage? Aisa mat kiya kariye.
Veer : Umm! Ahem! A-Alright! So...! Tumhe iss diary ko upar terrace par rakhna hai. Ise sukhana hai. Khol ke mat dekhna andar kya hai aur na hi kisi ke saamne ye diary aani chahiye.
Suman : Jii! K-Kya mein jaan sakti hu isme aisa kya hai?
Veer : Suman! Ye diary meri nahi. Aur isme aisa jaan'ne laayak kuch bhi nahi hai tumhare liye.
Suman (nods) : Mein samajh gayi!
Suman ne aage koi sawaal nahi kiye. Woh apni jagah jaanti thi. Jab diary me uske matlab ka kuch nahi tha, toh uski dilchaspi turant hi samaapt ho gayi.
Veer ke aadesh anusaar usne diary ko chhat par rakh uski nigraani theek se kari. Jab tak ki woh poore se sookh nahi gayi aur chai aur glue ki gandh nahi chali gayi.
Yahi kaaran tha jo Veer ne diary Kaera ko turant nahi thamaayi thi. Kyuki woh adhuri thi.
Par Kaera...! Inn sab se anjaan thi.
Use laga ye sab uski Maa Archana dwara diya gaya tha. Balki, sachhaayi toh yahi thi ki woh sab..! Veer ke shabd the!
Ek mahina guzar chuka tha. Akhir kaar...! Kaera apne kamre se baahar aayi. Nexacom ne kaafi losses jhele hue the inn beete dino.
Julia apni miss ko baahar aata dekh turant hi uske qareeb aayi.
Julia : Miss!? Ruchika Miss is waiting for you! You are finally out!
Ruchika ne jab Kaera ko dekha toh woh chaunk uthi. Balki, Ruchika akeli nahi thi. Julia ka bhi yahi haal tha.
Kaera kuch alag si prateet ho rahi thi. Uske chehre par alag hi tej nazar aa raha tha. Pehle se kayi guna adhik. Uski aankhein pehle se zyada dhaar-daar thi.
Ruchika : Uh! M-Miss! M-Mein woh batana aayi thi ki...! S-Some of the rival companies are stealing opportunities from us. Aapki absence me kuch companies deal nahi kar rahi. Rumours are spreading that you have stepped down from your post. Rival companies ka hi kiya dhara hai yeh sab.
Kaera ki nigaahein jaise hi Ruchika par gayi, bechari Ruchika ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.
Kaera : They dare to do that? Then let them know...! Soon! They will be dealing with their nightmare.
Ruchika (gulps) : Y-Yes!!
Kaera turant hi waha se mud neeche ki orr chal di. Ruchika uske peeche peeche daudte hue bhaagi. Aur idhar,
Julia stabdh nigaaho se bas ghatit hote hue sab kuch dekhti rahi.
Julia : M-Miss!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
We have completed 150 updates. Isi ke saath Crimson arc yaha samaapt hota hai. Jitne answers dene the woh arc ke ant ke pehle sab de diye gaye hai. Baaki ke uttar hum aage ke arcs me jaanenge. Business arc rahega ab. Mujhe ek outline banaani padegi uski. Toh Dil se like thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai. 150. Btw ye update more than 5k words ka hai.
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