Incest KAAL...PYAR AUR JUNG

[StrangersX]

kashi shiv ki nagri...yaha aane par hi aap sakshat shiv darbaar me ho esa pratit hota hai.yaha bahot si esi chize hai jo ansuljhi hai..
shiv ka praman khud vishnu aur bramha nahi de paye to tuchh manushy kya denge..yaha anek prakar ki puja ki jati hai..kuch ko moksh dilane ki,kuch khud shiv ban ne ki aur kuch kali vidhya prapt karne ki..
yaha ke manikarnika ghat jaha har prakar ki chize hai jaha chita raat din jalti hai aur aghori yaha khud anek kriya e karte hai...
kashi me logo ki aava jahi lagi rehti hai kuch yaha kisi apne ki moksh kriya ke liye aate hai to kuch yaha khud moksh prapt karne aate hai..
aaj bhi yaha yatri aaye hue hai jisme se kuch gujarat ke rehne wale hai..jo ganga kinare beth puja karwa rahe the..tabhi usme se kisi aurat aur sath me aaye aadmi ne kisi ko ghat ke paas dekha..wo ek ladka tha jo kuch kriya kar waha se jaa raha tha..wo aurat aur aadmi puja me hone ke karan uske paaas na jaa sake aur puja khatam kar use dhundhne ka prayas kiya to wo nahi mila...us aadmi ne turant apna mobile nikala aur kisi ko phone laga diya...
aadmi:- bhaiya aaj mene yaha kashi me vicky ko dekha.
samne se :- kya bol rahe ho bhai..sach keh rahe ho kya..sach me vo vicky hi tha na.
aadmi :- ha bhai wo vicky hi tha..par sadhu jesa vesh tha uska..aur halat bhi kuch thik nahi thi.
samne se :- bhai me abhi ghar par baat karta hu aur hum udhar aane ke liye nikalte hai..please aap udhar hi rahiyega hum turant aate hai..
aadmi :- koi baat nahi bhai aap aa jao milte hai...me idhar pata karta hu aap aao.

aadmi us aurat se kehta hai ke wo ghar par baat kar raha hai aur idhar aane ke liye nikal rahe hai..

idhar samne vala aadmi turant apne ghar par jata hai aur apne ghar me sab ko bulata hai aur batata hai ke roshan bhai aur kapila bhabhi kashi gaye hai aur unhone waha puja karate vakt vicky ko dekha hai..sab chonk jate hai ke vicky abhi kashi me hai aur wo vaha kaise pohcha..sab turant bolte hai ke wo sab kashi jaake vicky ko dhundhenge..
idhar vicky ke ghar me sabko aash jag jati hai ke itne salo ke baad vicky ki koi khabar mili thi...par sab chintit the ke wo vicky ko kya bol kar ghar wapis layenge..vicky jis condition me ghar chod gaya tha us condition me wo kabhi ghar wapis nahi aayega..
vicky ke ghar me uske papa,mummy,bhai,bhai ki wife,biwi,aur bachhi,mama,mami,mama ka ladka,mama ki ladji,chcha,chachi,chacha ke do ladke the.vicky ki wife khus ho jati hai ke ab uska suhag use mil jayega,par wo shayad dari hui thi ke jis sanyog se vicky ghar se gaya tha usme vicky ki koi galti nahi thi..
aur roshan ne jisko call kiya tha wo vicky ke mama the.

wo sab turant car se kashi jane ke liye nikal jate hai.
1500 km ka yeh rasta jese kat hi nahi raha tha..jese tese kar ke dusre din raat wo sab kashi pohonchte hai aur sab ek hotel me ruk jate hai..waha pohonch ke vicky ke papa sidha roshan ko call laga dete hai...aur roshan ko molne bula dete hai..roshan bhi unko wahi jagah bulata hai jaha usne vicky ko dekha tha..manikarnika ghat.

vicky ki puri family waha pohonch jati hai...vicky ki family ke sath vicky ke sasural wale bhi wahi the jisme ek vidhwa saas,vicky ki badi sali aur uska husband bhi tha..
roshan jese hi unhe mila wo turant vicky ki family ko wah jagah dikjayi jaha vicky tha...wo jagah bahot gandi,badbudaar aur bhayanak thi..ganga kinare jaha laash jalane ke baad,asthiya aur baki aghor kriya hoti hai waisa kuch tha.
wo sab alag alag hoke dhundh rahe the tabhi waha ek sadhu aata hai sab thak ke waha idhar udhar dekh rahe the tabhi woh sadhu bola,
sadhu :- kya hua aap sab yaha ese chintit kyu hai kishi ka kriyakarm karne aaye the kya.
vicky dad :- pranam guruji,nahi hum yaha apne bete ko dhundh rahe hai.usko yaha dekha hai inhone.
sadhu :- yaha aake koi khota nahi hai vats,yaha aake sab kuch na kuch pate hi hai,,yeh bhole baba ka darbaar hai.yaha sab kuch milta hai.
vicky dad :- baba humari ek galti ki vajah se mera beta ghar chod gaya tha 4 saal pehle aur aaj inhone use yaha dekha hai,,hum use dhundh ke vapas le jane aaye hai.
sadhu :- agar zinda hoga to bhi shayad aapke kisi kaam ka nahi,jo yaha ek baar aata hai wo vapis nahi jata.
vicky dad :- ese na kahi guruji aap koi upay dikhaiye.
sadhu:- tum kal se yaha ke aashram aur har ghat achhe se dekho shayad tumhe mil jaye.
vicky dad :- pranam guruji.
sadhu :- kalyan ho putra.
phir sadhu waha se nikal jata hai

vicky mom :- aapne unhe vicky ka photo dikhana chahiye tha shayad pehchan jate.
vicky dad :- dhayn se nikal gaya..chalo sab aaram karte hai kal achhe se dhundhenge..

sab hotel aa jate hai aur apne apne room me chale jate hai,safar ke chalte sab so jate hai kyu ke kal se un sab ka imtehaan tha.

dusre din subah.
sab wapas se dhundhna shuru kar dete hai..
aadha din bita hi tha ke kuch aghori jese dikhne wale sadhu unhe samne milte hai tabhi ek sidhh tantrik...
tantrik :- apne bachhe ko dhundh rahe ho kya..
sab :- ha baba.
tantrik :- kya kiya tha uske saath bhul gaye.
vicky mom:- aap jante hai kya mere bete ko.
tantrik :- nahi par aap sab ki vyakulta ko jaan gaya..aap ko gyat bhi nahi hai ke woh kis dard se guzra hai..kya kya saha hai..pathhar ban gaya hai..esa koi dhundho jo thik esa hi ho.
phir tantrik chala jata hai.
sab dhundhne me lage the tabhi ganga kinare ek aashram jesa tha bahot bada nahi par chota bhi nahi..
bahot darawni jagah thi..shamshaan ke ek dam bagal me aur sadi gali laashe bhi kinare par dikh rahi thi..sab dar gaye yeh dekh kar..
tabhi ek baba aaye aur sab ko andar bulaya.
sab darte darte andar gaye..aur baba ko avicky ka photo dikhaya.
baba :- aap kyu dhundh raha hai ishe.
vicky mom :- mera beta hai yeh mujh se naraz hai idhar aa gaya hai use vapas le jaana hai..
vicky wife :- baba wo mere pati hai me unse bahot pyar karti hu,meri bachhi kese ji rahi hai yeh sirf mehi jaan ti hu..kripa kar bataiye ke woh kaha milenge..
baba :- beta wo yahi par hi hai humare aashram me par aap sab ka usse milna sambhav nahi hai.
vicky wife :- kya wo yaha par hi hai..aap bataiye kaha hai woh..mujhe unse milna hai kaise hai woh..kaha hai..
baba :- beta aap me se koi usse nahi mil sakta wo abhi aghor hai..wo yaha sadhak hai..
vicky wife :- baba esa naa kahe..me unse bahot pyar karti hu unke bina me nahi ji sakti..
baba :- itna hi pyar tha to tab kaha gaya tha tumhara pyar jab uske sath sab hua..wo roya tha na tumhare samne..gidgiya tha na..
aap uske maa baap hai aap bhi nahi vishvaas kar paye..
vicky ki bachhi :- dadaji mujhe mere papa se milna hai,,me unse bahot gussa hu woh mujhe chod kar chale gaye the..me unse bahot pyar karti hu..please aap mila dijiye..
baba :- beta abhi me aapko usse mila to nahi sakta par usko dikha to sakta hu par aap usko aavaz mat dijiyega..
baba sab ko batate hai ke vicky ab samay insan nahi hai ek aghori hai..wo apne saath hue anyay ki vajah se bina dil ka pathhar ban gaya hai..kaise kude se nikal ke khata tha,kaise logo ka maar kha kar rehta tha...nali ke paas sota tha,kaise rota tha,bhukh se bilakhta tha.
sab log yeh sab sun ke dard me chale gaye..unhe vicky ke dard ka pata chala to sab tut gaye..
baba ne kaha abhi aap uski manostithi samajhye bad ka baad me dekhenge..baba sab ko leke samshaan ke nazdiki hisse me gaye..waha ek aadmi sirf langot pehne sadhna me tha..vaha manv khopdi padi thi jisme khun tha aur koi puja ho rahi thi..dikhne me wo aadmi bhayankar tha...ek dam ganda,unsuljhe baal aur choto se bhara badan.
jese aneko yatna sahi ho par abhi bhi yeh badan wahi sab jhel raha hai..
baba :- yahi hai aap sab ka vicky.
sab chonk gaye ek saath me.
tabhi apni vidhi kar raha vicky utha aur waha padi lash hilne lagi aur vicky usse kuch bola aur us laas ne apna sina chir dil nikal liya aur vicky ke chrno me rakh diya.
vicky bhi uska dil le kar khun vali khopdi me daal use khane laga..aur jor jor se hasne laga...
yeh sab dekh vicky ki maa,saas ki to sanse hi phul gayi aur behosh hone hi vali thi ke aashran ki sadhikaone unhe sabhal liya aur baba ke sath bahar aa gaye...

baba :- mene kaha tha tha yahi hoga..wo pathha ban chuka hai...aapne kya kiya uske sath aap jane par ab agar uski life me aap sab wapas aaye to sab ko taklife hongi..koi sahan nahi kar payeha.
vicky saas :- hum sab seh lenge aap bas usse milwa dijiye hum samjhayenge usko.
baba :- yeh itna bhi aasan nahi hai..bahot darad hoga aap sab ko..usko pane ke liye aap ko kya kya karna padega aap ko pata bhi nahi hai..
wo ab itna bada tantrik hai ke uske saamne me to kuch hu hi nahi..uska aapke saath ana naa aana ab uske hi hath me hai..wo sirf shiv parvati ka aadesh leta hai..unke siva kisika nahi..agar aapko use pana hai to aap prathna kare prabhu se ke wo aapko apna beta lotaye...
vicky mom :- bataiye baba kya karna hoga.
baba :- aap sab striya kal harishchandra ghat subah aa jaiye kal vahi baatchit hogi..
sab :- pranam baba..aur sab chale gaye wapas..

sab thode khus the ke aakhir 4 saal baad apne vicky ki ek zalak ko to dekh paye.
agle din ghat par jane ka sochte sochte sab so gaye...

 

[Kratos]

Interesting concept....

 

[Pandit Raj]

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[Delta101]

Nice...... Pls share next update.

 

[xlion]

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[StrangersX]

Update -2

subah hui sab jage aur sab aurte ghat par jane ke liye taiyar hone lagi...abhi andhera hi tha aur suraj nikalne me vakt tha.sab aurate taiyar ho gayi aur nikal padi harishchandra ghat ki taraf.
jab sab aurte vaha pohonch gayi tab vaha unhe baba ke sadhak mile jo unhe ghat ke paas jaha baba the vaha tak le gaye.

baba :- aap sab aa gaye,yaha virajye..ab me aap sab ko vistar se sab bataunga jo jaruri hai aap sab ke jaan ne ke liye..

baba :- jab vicky yaha aaya tha tab vo hume ganga ghat ki nali ke paas pada mila tha.wo bahot zakhmi tha aur behosh bhi.
uske badan se khoon nikal raha tha aur dard me karah raha tha.
hum use apne aashram le aaye,aur uski dawai aur baki ka prabandh karaya.
2-3 din ke baad use hosh aaya,uske baad bhi vo kuch bola nahi sirf hath jod dhanyvaad kiya aur jaane laga.
mene use roka aur kaha ke kyu jaa rahe ho yahi ruko aur aashram me sewa karo par wo nahi mana.
wo din me ghat par rehta jo milta wo khata kuch kaam milta to wo karta aur wahi nali ke paas so jata,,
wo aaj bhi wahi sota hai aur uska kehna hai ke yahi uska jivan hai..par ek din shivratri ko ek mahan rishi yaha aaye the vicky par prabhu ki daya hui aur wo rishi use mile aur kaha ke wo mere aashram me jaye aur waha gyan aur shakti prapt kare aur logo ki sewa me jivan bitaye..
par vicky ne kaha wo gyan prapt karega par wo kisi bhi sewa me bandhna nahi chahta..
bas abhi mere jine ka maksad nahi bacha.use mukti chahiye thi.
rishi ne use kaha ke abhi tum apni siksha shuru karo aur baki baad me dekhenge..kisi tarah samjhane par wo mana aur mere aashram me siksha prapt karna shuru kiya aur aaj usi rishi ke margdarshan aur shiv kripa se wo itna shaktishali hai ke uska tod nahi hai par agar use grihasth jivan me lana hai to uski sari vidhya aur powers bandh jayengi aur wo sirf ek purush ban jayega wahi jo..jo duniya se hara tha..

vicky mom :- baba hum kya kare aap hi bataiye..mujhe mera beta chahiye..
baba :- beti tumhe tumhara beta milega par kya tumhe pata hai ke uske baad tumhara jivan badal jayega...
vicky mom :- kese baba
baba :- uski sadhna aur shaktiyo se uska sharir takatwar ho gaya hai..shakti bandhne ke baad bhi kuch yaade aur shakti bach jayengi..
aur uski kaam shakti pehle se gayi guna adhik badh gayi hai..agar yahi shaktiya bandh gayi to uski nazar me tum sab sirf aurte rahogi jab uski kaam vasna jag gayi tab wo kisi maa,bahen,ya kisi rishte me bhed nahi karega..
baba :- usme itni shaktiya hai ke wo bandhne ke baad uspar dush prabhav dalengi..aur wo kabu me nahi rahe ga.
vicky mom :- aap hi upay bataye ke hum kya kare.
vicky wife :- me kuch bhi karungi par mujhe unke sath ke sivah kuch bhi nahi chahiye.
vicky saas :- ji baba meri bachhi sahi keh rahi hai.
baba :- kya aapko sahi lagega ke kisi din wo aapse aake sambhog karne ko kahe aur aap fir usse galat samho aur wapas wahi glti karo.
kya aap sabhi uske sath sambhog kar sakengi jis din wo kabu me naa rahe.
tum uski patni ho kya tum use yeh permission de paogi ke wo kisi bhi stri se sambandh bana le..
aap sab vichar kare ke agar aap sab uske bare me samjhengi aur sari bato ke jaan lene ke baad hi vidhi aap ko bataunga.
agar aap sab sehmat hai tab hi aap kal mujhe thik isi samay yaha milye tab aap ko aage ke baare me bataunga ke kya karna hai.

phir baba vaha se chale jate hai aur sab aurte vaha puja karti hai aur hotel ki taraf nikal jati hai.

tabhi unke piche koi sadhu hota hai jo bahot umra daraz hai jo unse puchta hai ke aap kya vicky ke ghar se hai.
sab aurate haa kehti hai.
sab aurate :- kya aap vicky ko jante hai.
sadhu :- ha beta me jaan ta hu..bahot shaktishali hai...gusse wala par sab ki madad karne wala..har baar kehta hai ke uske jese abhgi koi na rahe bas yahi uska prayas rahega jab tak wo is diniya me hai..jab mrutyu aaye tab shiv ji ke charno me haste mukh se jaaunga.
phir sadhu baba chale jaate hai...aur sabhi aurte vapas hotel aa jati hai..par ghat ke baare me kuch hi baate batati hai pura varnan nahi kar payi koi bhi kyu ki baate hi aisi thi ke koi bata nahi saki.
hotel me sab bethe the aur kon ruke aur kon nahi yahi discussion chal rahi thi..
vicky ke papa :- zyada din nahi ruk sakta vaha bahot problem ho rahi hai..boss maan nahi rahe..beta bahot zaroori hai aur job chod nahi sakta.
vicky ke mama :- aap chinta naa kare me hoo yaha aap sab jaye me behna ke sath rukta hu.
vicky ki mom kuch bolna chahti thi par bich me vicky ke dad bol pade.
vicky dad :- yah sahi rahega.
waise bhi nilesh aur arpita bhi nahi ruk sakte.aur dharmesh ko bhi jana padega.
aur tay hota hai ke sirf vicky ke mama,maa,saas,wife aur bachhi rukenge baki sab nikal jayenge.

gadi me sab saaman rakh diya gaya tha aur sab jane ke liye ready the..jo rukne wale the unse mil baki sab nikal gaye.
rat ka khana khane ke baad sab apne apne room me chale gaye.
raat karib 12 baje vicky ki maa ke room me knock hua aur uski maa door kholti hai to waha vicky ke mama the..
vicky mom :- krishna tum itni raat..kya hua.
krishna :- ha behna tumhe dekhne aya tha tum thik to ho na.
vicky mom :- ha bhai me thik hu. aur door bandh kar deti hai.
krishna :- achanak se wo vicky ki maa ko baho me bhar leta hai aur chumne ki koshish karta hai aur kehta hai..shushila tum kyu tension leti ho me huna..
shushila :- yeh kya kar rahe ho krishna tum aur ek tamacha khinch ke maar deti hai..aur kehti hai mere isi kukarmo ka fal hai ke mera beta 4 saal se dur hai mujhse aur isi gande kaamo ki vajah se me uspar vishwas nahi kar payi..
aaj ke baad agar tumne ye dubara karne ki koshish ki to me tumhe zinda nahi chodungi aur sab ko sab sach bataungi bhale mujhe jaan hi kyu na deni pade par me apne sab kukarm sab ko bata dungi..uske baat tumhari tum jaano.
krishna vaha se mafi mangne ki nakam koshish kar chala jata hai...
aur sab so chuke the aur shushila apne atit ke baare me sochne lag jaati hai..

 

[StrangersX]

Interesting concept....

THANK YOU BHAI..THIS US MY FIRST STORY

 

[Kabiransari]

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[Kratos]

Update -2

subah hui sab jage aur sab aurte ghat par jane ke liye taiyar hone lagi...abhi andhera hi tha aur suraj nikalne me vakt tha.sab aurate taiyar ho gayi aur nikal padi harishchandra ghat ki taraf.
jab sab aurte vaha pohonch gayi tab vaha unhe baba ke sadhak mile jo unhe ghat ke paas jaha baba the vaha tak le gaye.

baba :- aap sab aa gaye,yaha virajye..ab me aap sab ko vistar se sab bataunga jo jaruri hai aap sab ke jaan ne ke liye..

baba :- jab vicky yaha aaya tha tab vo hume ganga ghat ki nali ke paas pada mila tha.wo bahot zakhmi tha aur behosh bhi.
uske badan se khoon nikal raha tha aur dard me karah raha tha.
hum use apne aashram le aaye,aur uski dawai aur baki ka prabandh karaya.
2-3 din ke baad use hosh aaya,uske baad bhi vo kuch bola nahi sirf hath jod dhanyvaad kiya aur jaane laga.
mene use roka aur kaha ke kyu jaa rahe ho yahi ruko aur aashram me sewa karo par wo nahi mana.
wo din me ghat par rehta jo milta wo khata kuch kaam milta to wo karta aur wahi nali ke paas so jata,,
wo aaj bhi wahi sota hai aur uska kehna hai ke yahi uska jivan hai..par ek din shivratri ko ek mahan rishi yaha aaye the vicky par prabhu ki daya hui aur wo rishi use mile aur kaha ke wo mere aashram me jaye aur waha gyan aur shakti prapt kare aur logo ki sewa me jivan bitaye..
par vicky ne kaha wo gyan prapt karega par wo kisi bhi sewa me bandhna nahi chahta..
bas abhi mere jine ka maksad nahi bacha.use mukti chahiye thi.
rishi ne use kaha ke abhi tum apni siksha shuru karo aur baki baad me dekhenge..kisi tarah samjhane par wo mana aur mere aashram me siksha prapt karna shuru kiya aur aaj usi rishi ke margdarshan aur shiv kripa se wo itna shaktishali hai ke uska tod nahi hai par agar use grihasth jivan me lana hai to uski sari vidhya aur powers bandh jayengi aur wo sirf ek purush ban jayega wahi jo..jo duniya se hara tha..

vicky mom :- baba hum kya kare aap hi bataiye..mujhe mera beta chahiye..
baba :- beti tumhe tumhara beta milega par kya tumhe pata hai ke uske baad tumhara jivan badal jayega...
vicky mom :- kese baba
baba :- uski sadhna aur shaktiyo se uska sharir takatwar ho gaya hai..shakti bandhne ke baad bhi kuch yaade aur shakti bach jayengi..
aur uski kaam shakti pehle se gayi guna adhik badh gayi hai..agar yahi shaktiya bandh gayi to uski nazar me tum sab sirf aurte rahogi jab uski kaam vasna jag gayi tab wo kisi maa,bahen,ya kisi rishte me bhed nahi karega..
baba :- usme itni shaktiya hai ke wo bandhne ke baad uspar dush prabhav dalengi..aur wo kabu me nahi rahe ga.
vicky mom :- aap hi upay bataye ke hum kya kare.
vicky wife :- me kuch bhi karungi par mujhe unke sath ke sivah kuch bhi nahi chahiye.
vicky saas :- ji baba meri bachhi sahi keh rahi hai.
baba :- kya aapko sahi lagega ke kisi din wo aapse aake sambhog karne ko kahe aur aap fir usse galat samho aur wapas wahi glti karo.
kya aap sabhi uske sath sambhog kar sakengi jis din wo kabu me naa rahe.
tum uski patni ho kya tum use yeh permission de paogi ke wo kisi bhi stri se sambandh bana le..
aap sab vichar kare ke agar aap sab uske bare me samjhengi aur sari bato ke jaan lene ke baad hi vidhi aap ko bataunga.
agar aap sab sehmat hai tab hi aap kal mujhe thik isi samay yaha milye tab aap ko aage ke baare me bataunga ke kya karna hai.

phir baba vaha se chale jate hai aur sab aurte vaha puja karti hai aur hotel ki taraf nikal jati hai.

tabhi unke piche koi sadhu hota hai jo bahot umra daraz hai jo unse puchta hai ke aap kya vicky ke ghar se hai.
sab aurate haa kehti hai.
sab aurate :- kya aap vicky ko jante hai.
sadhu :- ha beta me jaan ta hu..bahot shaktishali hai...gusse wala par sab ki madad karne wala..har baar kehta hai ke uske jese abhgi koi na rahe bas yahi uska prayas rahega jab tak wo is diniya me hai..jab mrutyu aaye tab shiv ji ke charno me haste mukh se jaaunga.
phir sadhu baba chale jaate hai...aur sabhi aurte vapas hotel aa jati hai..par ghat ke baare me kuch hi baate batati hai pura varnan nahi kar payi koi bhi kyu ki baate hi aisi thi ke koi bata nahi saki.
hotel me sab bethe the aur kon ruke aur kon nahi yahi discussion chal rahi thi..
vicky ke papa :- zyada din nahi ruk sakta vaha bahot problem ho rahi hai..boss maan nahi rahe..beta bahot zaroori hai aur job chod nahi sakta.
vicky ke mama :- aap chinta naa kare me hoo yaha aap sab jaye me behna ke sath rukta hu.
vicky ki mom kuch bolna chahti thi par bich me vicky ke dad bol pade.
vicky dad :- yah sahi rahega.
waise bhi nilesh aur arpita bhi nahi ruk sakte.aur dharmesh ko bhi jana padega.
aur tay hota hai ke sirf vicky ke mama,maa,saas,wife aur bachhi rukenge baki sab nikal jayenge.

gadi me sab saaman rakh diya gaya tha aur sab jane ke liye ready the..jo rukne wale the unse mil baki sab nikal gaye.
rat ka khana khane ke baad sab apne apne room me chale gaye.
raat karib 12 baje vicky ki maa ke room me knock hua aur uski maa door kholti hai to waha vicky ke mama the..
vicky mom :- krishna tum itni raat..kya hua.
krishna :- ha behna tumhe dekhne aya tha tum thik to ho na.
vicky mom :- ha bhai me thik hu. aur door bandh kar deti hai.
krishna :- achanak se wo vicky ki maa ko baho me bhar leta hai aur chumne ki koshish karta hai aur kehta hai..shushila tum kyu tension leti ho me huna..
shushila :- yeh kya kar rahe ho krishna tum aur ek tamacha khinch ke maar deti hai..aur kehti hai mere isi kukarmo ka fal hai ke mera beta 4 saal se dur hai mujhse aur isi gande kaamo ki vajah se me uspar vishwas nahi kar payi..
aaj ke baad agar tumne ye dubara karne ki koshish ki to me tumhe zinda nahi chodungi aur sab ko sab sach bataungi bhale mujhe jaan hi kyu na deni pade par me apne sab kukarm sab ko bata dungi..uske baat tumhari tum jaano.
krishna vaha se mafi mangne ki nakam koshish kar chala jata hai...
aur sab so chuke the aur shushila apne atit ke baare me sochne lag jaati hai..

Dekho concept interesting hai....ye main bata Chuka hoon. Koshish karna ki is theme ke sath justice karo. Kyonki tumne jo concept pick Kiya hai tantra... sadhana.. Siddhi..is pe story is forum par hongi bhi to bhaut kam...kyonki theme mature hai... theme ke sath justice tabhi hoga jab childish dialogue nahi likhoge matlab..jaan, janu, honey,baby ye vicky ke character ko suite nahi karenge. Hero ko aggressive dikhana kyonki aghori hote to shant hai but jab hat jaaye tab fit wo kaak hai..aur Vicky ek supreme level ka sadhak ban gaya hai...wo aghor path pe chal chuka..hai usne apne ghar me aisa kya dekha maa aur mama ke sexual relations aur ho sakta hai aur bhi kuch dekha ho..jo wo ghar se nikale Jane ke baad is raste par chala aur ek sadhana ban gaya wo bhi uche star ka. Jab wo ghar wapas jaayega to koshish karna family ko maafi jaldi na mile..baaki shaktiya bandh di jaayengi par unke effect se physic uski strong rahegi sexual power high rahegi...

 

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Dekho concept interesting hai....ye main bata Chuka hoon. Koshish karna ki is theme ke sath justice karo. Kyonki tumne jo concept pick Kiya hai tantra... sadhana.. Siddhi..is pe story is forum par hongi bhi to bhaut kam...kyonki theme mature hai... theme ke sath justice tabhi hoga jab childish dialogue nahi likhoge matlab..jaan, janu, honey,baby ye vicky ke character ko suite nahi karenge. Hero ko aggressive dikhana kyonki aghori hote to shant hai but jab hat jaaye tab fit wo kaak hai..aur Vicky ek supreme level ka sadhak ban gaya hai...wo aghor path pe chal chuka..hai usne apne ghar me aisa kya dekha maa aur mama ke sexual relations aur ho sakta hai aur bhi kuch dekha ho..jo wo ghar se nikale Jane ke baad is raste par chala aur ek sadhana ban gaya wo bhi uche star ka. Jab wo ghar wapas jaayega to koshish karna family ko maafi jaldi na mile..baaki shaktiya bandh di jaayengi par unke effect se physic uski strong rahegi sexual power high rahegi...

Thanks for your suggestion.. Appreciate..