Kya Raj in namunoo ko sabak seekhayega yaa aise hi inki bakwaas sunta rahega? Ye roof top se girl hostal par koun nazar rakh Raha tha aur wo ladki Manisha to nahi jiski supari iss aadmi ne li hai iska matlab Manisha ka bhi kuch past hai jo aage open hone waala hai? Dono gangs ne fielding to poori laga li hai magar dekhna hoga ki plan kiska poora hota hai yaa do gangs ki mulakat Nirwana se hoti hai? Usha Raj ke chacha ne bhi killer bheja hai to pata nahi wo is kaam ko kitna complecat karta hai? Nice update.
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Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ki shikayat bhari gujaraish par, to bhai peechle kuch updates ek common format par aa rahe the ki ek bada sa sex scene thodi school ki nokjhonk aur update khatam. Mujhe nahi pata wo sex scene aage story mein koi contribution denge yaa nahi magar un updates mein un sex scene ka mujhe koi logic nahi laga jaise Jin ladkiyon ko Raj ne bachaya unke saath sex haalaki suruaat un ladkiyon ne hi ki thi magar Raj ka participation se aisa laga ki Raj ne un par jo ahsaan kiya uski kimat bhi le li. Ab kahani, lekhak ki brain child hai to main us par koi negative comments karna pasand nahi karta sirf updates padhta hoon aur agar same pattern chalta rahta hai to kahani padhana chod deta hoon, afterall who am I guide aur dictat writer when I cannot write story. Isiliye maine peechale kuch updates par comments nahi diye the magar mujhe ye jaankar bhi kushi hui ki mere jaise ek anjaan se paathak ke comments bhi
Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ke liye mahatv rakhte hai to comments de diye waise bhi aaj ka update fir se poorani speed aur logical pattern par tha to comments to dene hi waala tha. Magar ye jaankar bhi Khushi Hui ki lekhak apne har paathak ko lekar jaagruk hai to uske liye dhanywaad.