Serious Why is Success a bad thing..???

[Aakash.]

Jiski wajah se ham sharab pine lage hai na..

Wo kisi aur ke wajah se achar khane lagi hai.. ​

Hum khamoshi padhlenge, Agar chup tum raho
Tum aadat bano humari, Hum bigad jaayenge...
Ristrcted ​

 

[The Immortal]

दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ा दिए ज्ञानी भाई ने । इतना बेहतरीन कैसे कोई लिख सकता है ! ठीक ही कहा था हर्षित भाई ने , वो उनके आइडियल राइटर हैं । बहुत कुछ सीखा जा सकता है उनके राइटिंग स्किल से । उन्होंने ऐसे भाषा का इस्तेमाल किया कि कोई अंधा और हिंदी नहीं जानने वाला व्यक्ति भी शब्दों को अपने उंगलियों के स्पर्श मात्र से ही अच्छी तरह से समझ जाए ।

, kahani ko jitni baar padho fir bhi hasi rok nahi paate . Aise hi Yug Purush ko gyani bhai nahi kaha jata
Well sayad abhi review likhne ke liye aap speechless hain , but iska 2nd part padhne ke baad aap kuch bhi likh nahi paayenge speechless sabd bhi khud speechless ho jata hai Atmakami ke aage , iski guarantee to harshit1890 bhau bhi de denge

 

[The Immortal]

" Three girls..." , " Samundar...." The Loner " aur " 8th semester " padhne ke baad kuchh baki hi nahi rah gaya hai kuchh kahne ke liye.
He is such a gems .
Emotions ke saath kafi khel khelte hai Gyani bhai.
Perfect example of a great writer.

Sivam the incomplete intention nahi padhi abhi tak

 

[Aakash.]

8th semester

Aap aaj wahi to the ​

 

[Aakash.]

Pee Loon Teri Saundi Saundi Saanson Ko Har Dum,
Pee Loon Hai Peenay Ka Mausam...
​

 

[The Immortal]

Pee Loon Teri Saundi Saundi Saanson Ko Har Dum,
Pee Loon Hai Peenay Ka Mausam...
​

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

, kahani ko jitni baar padho fir bhi hasi rok nahi paate . Aise hi Yug Purush ko gyani bhai nahi kaha jata
Well sayad abhi review likhne ke liye aap speechless hain , but iska 2nd part padhne ke baad aap kuch bhi likh nahi paayenge speechless sabd bhi khud speechless ho jata hai Atmakami ke aage , iski guarantee to harshit1890 bhau bhi de denge

Three girls aur The loner padhne ke baad hi samajh gaya tha ki wo kis level ke writer hai.... eske baad ek different types ki story " Samundar ke Khiladi " likha unhone jo ek alag hi style se likha gaya hai. Eske baad 8th semester..... Waise Arman par kabhi kabhi bahut gussa bhi aaya mujhe lekin hum jante hai ki kabhi kabhi vilen ka kirdar kar raha insaan bhi Nayak hota hai. Example Shahrukh Khan ki movie " Bazigar ".
Atamkami ab to meri first choice ban gayi hai padhne ke liye.

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Aap aaj wahi to the ​

Kal aur aaj dono din traveling me tha esliye Gyani bhai ki puri kahani padh dali. Kal Ghar pe hi rahunga aur Full rest karunga.

 

[Aakash.]

Are Kal to humse nafrat thi aapko ​

 

[Aakash.]

Kal aur aaj dono din traveling me tha esliye Gyani bhai ki puri kahani padh dali. Kal Ghar pe hi rahunga aur Full rest karunga.

Hume to free time nahi mil pa raha ​

 

[Yug Purush]

Three girls aur The loner padhne ke baad hi samajh gaya tha ki wo kis level ke writer hai.... eske baad ek different types ki story " Samundar ke Khiladi " likha unhone jo ek alag hi style se likha gaya hai. Eske baad 8th semester..... Waise Arman par kabhi kabhi bahut gussa bhi aaya mujhe lekin hum jante hai ki kabhi kabhi vilen ka kirdar kar raha insaan bhi Nayak hota hai. Example Shahrukh Khan ki movie " Bazigar ".
Atamkami ab to meri first choice ban gayi hai padhne ke liye.

Dimag khisak jaayega.. Padhte hue.
Kyunki mera likhte hue khisak gaya tha..
Btw thanx for ur kind words