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Avi : priya beta ...chalo jaldi apna samaan bandho ...mujhe us aadmi se apna card bhi lena h

Priya : chachu ab kaha jayenge hum

Avi : beta ab koi aisi jagah jayenge jaha per shanti se reh sake

Priya : lekin chachu sab jagah aise log rehte h ...kyu na hum tau ji ke pass chalein

Avi : nahi beta . Tumhari dadi ko nahi pasand ... isliye main nahi jaa skta ...maa jis din mujhe muaf kr dengi us din main vaha per chala jaunga

Priya : lekin chacha dadi aisi kyu h ...vo to aapko sabse jyada pyar krti thi ?

Avi : beta aapki dadi aapko aur mujhe dono ko pasand nahi karti ...kya kar sakte h ...vaise bhi main apni betu k sath khus hu

Priya : aap rajni chachi se shadi krke unhe bhi le aao phir ...

Avi : ab uske baare me baat mat krna ...main sirf dard de skta hu ...main manhoos hu na ...jaha bhi jaata hu vahi log dar se jeete h ...

Priya : okay ab main kabhi rajni ka naam nhi lungi ..
..ooops .aap ye daadhi katwalo ...pehle hero jaise lagte the. Ab dekho kaise khatarnaak janwar jaise lagte ho ..

Avi : hahahah ...chalo jaldi kahin police yaha na aa jaye .. us aadmi k ghar chalte h jiski car humne li thi

Priya : uske ghar ka kaise pata hoga chachu ...

Avi : uski car ke pepars se ...chalo ab detective mat bano ...

Dono ne jo saman lena tha vo liya aur baaki jo saboot the vo mita diye ...Avi priya ko leke nikal pada ...ek ghar me pahucha aur usko uski car vapis krke samajhaya ki us raat ko bhool jaye ...agar koi kahe to bol dena main usko nahi jaanta ...

Aur avi apna Identity card leke chal pada priya ko leke ek nayi jagah ...abhi vo train ka wait kr rha tha ki vaha per mr rakesh aa gaye ...

Rakesh : hello young boy

Avi : aap yaha kya kar rhe h ...kyu aap mere bare me janna chahte h

Rakesh : itna bada kaand krne wale ko main bhala kaise chhod skta hu

Avi : aapko kaise pata

Rakesh : daro mat fauji hu ...vo log galat the lekin aaj desh bhar me sirf usi ka jikra hai ...sab dhoondh rahe h ki ye kaam aakhir kisne kiya ...itni berehmi se maar kaise diya tumne un logo ko ...

Avi : aapko kya lena dena h ...

Rakesh : mujhe tumhari madad chahiye ...

Avi : main anjan aadmiyo se baat nahi krta ..jaiye yaha se ..

Rakesh : to main batadu ki tum hi vo ho jisne in bachcho ki jaan bachai h ...vaise ek baat batadu ...raat jin logo ko tumne maara h unme 6 aurat thi . Jo pakdi gai h ...ve ek kamre me band thi ...police ne unko bhi maar dala ...ye bhi mujhe pata h ...

Avi : to aap kyu mera sir kha rahe h ...

Rakesh : beta ...tumhari aankho me maine kuch dekha h ...main sirf tumhari madad krna chahta hu

Avi : aap abhi khud mujhse madad mang rhe the ...meri madad kya karenge ...

Rakesh : hahaha ...yahi madad to chahiye thi ki tum mujhse kuch mango ...

Avi : ab mujhe aap gussa dila rahe h

Rakesh : army join karoge

Avi : nahi ... dhanyawad ...aur aap jo soch rhe h main nahi batane wala ...pls aap mera peecha chhod dijiye ...siway dard k kuch hasil nhi hoga. ..

Rakesh : mujhe janna h ...phir bhi ....main hamesha jindagi bas ghar aur border per raha hu ...ab retired hu to life me kuch hai nahi karne ko ...maine apna jawan beta khoya h ... ...tumhe lagta hoga main ab bhi tumse majaak kr rha hu ...ye dekho mere bete ki photo ...chahe to pata kar skte ho ...mujhe tumhare ander ek khus insaan dikhai deta h ...jisko tum duniya se chhipaye baithe ho ...

Avi chup ho jaata h ...kyuki usko apne baap ki yaad aati h ki ek uska baap tha jo hamesha apni jimmedaari se bhaagta raha ...aur ek ye hai jo marne k baad bhi apne bete k liye ro rha hai ...
Avi sochta hai ki is insaan ko kyu dard du ...phir ek kosis karta h ...usko rote hue fauji ko dekhke ...kyuki hamare desh me kya sab desho me faujiyo ki itni ijjat ki jaati h ...avi usko ab aur rulana nahi chahta tha ...

Avi : aap ghar jaiye uncle ...mere bare me jaankar khusi nahi hogi. ..

Rakesh : beta main dard se is tarah juda hua hu ...jis tarah tum ho ...maine apne parivaar ko khoya hai ....naksali hamle me mera parivaar kho gaya ...mere bete ki laash k alawa mujhe kuch nahi mila ...aur tum kehte ho ki mujhe dukhi nahi karna chahte ...kya mere dard se bhi bada h tumhara dard ...

Avi ab apni yadon ka pitaara kholna chahta tha ...jee bharke rona chahta tha. Isliye vo kehta hai ...chaliye ...aapko main batata hu ki main kaun hu ...

Avi rakesh aur priya ko leke train me baith jaata h ...
Rakesh bhi avi ka peecha kar rha tha apne ghar ka taala lagake bas avi ke peeche rehta tha ..usko avi ke baare me pata nhi kya dilchaspi hui thi ...poori raat ka kand usne apni aankho se dekha tha. Bas jaha light band hui thi vo nahi dekh paaya ..lekin laashein bhi dekhi thi .. aur baad me un aurato ko maarne wala bhi rakesh tha avi ne chhod di thi ya usse bach gai thi ...kyuki unko is kaam ki aadat lag gai thi .. jis vajah se yaha se jaane ke baad ve bahar bhi yahi karti ...isliye rakesh ne maut k ghaat utaar diya unhe bhi ...fauji tha to daya nahi aati thi lekin nirdayi nahi tha ...jisko maut di ..jhatke se dedi ...tadpa ke nahi maara ...


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Billu : ajeet bhaiyya ...avi bhai haydrabaad me hai ..unka phone aaya tha ...jara news channal lagake dekho ...

Ajeet news channal lagake dekhta hai ...jisme live telecast chal raha tha ...news anchor bawre hue pade the ...""dekhiye kitna bhayank manjar hai yaha ka ...laashe gajar muli ki tarah kaat di gai hai. Sochiye jab inhe maara gaya hoga tab kitna marmik drishya raha hoga ..."""

Ajeet : billu ...ye kaam apna avi hi kar skta hai ...dekha tha maine ek baar usko ...uski najar aur uska hath. ...jab chalta tha khoon hi khoon ...chalo ...hame avi ko laana hoga ...dadaji ne to bistar hi pakad liya hai jabse vo gaya hai ...pata nhi kyu chachi aur daadi ne usko ghar se nikaal diya ...bhala isme avi ki kya galti ...vo to bas badla le rha tha ... apne bhai ki madad kr rha tha ... akhir Rohit bhaiiya ne galti hi kya ki thi ...dusri caste me pyar krna gunaah to nahi ...ye samaaj aur iske kanoon ...chal billu ...subbu aur ajay ko bhi bulala .. chalte hai charo ...
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Inki to gaadi nikal padi ... haydrabaad ke liye. Jabki avi train me baith kar jaa rha tha. ..delhi ke liye. Usne soch liya tha ...ab vo kaashi jayega....jaha par usko shanti mil sake ...Mr rakesh bhi utaawle ho rhe the ....

Rakesh : arvind ab to batado ...safar bhi lamba hai ab kyu na baat shuru ki jaaye .. aise me safar bhi kat jayega

Priya : chachu aap inko batao ...main so jaati hu ...

Rakesh : dekha bachchi samajhdaar hai ...

Avi : haan ...ye samjhdaar hai ...kyuki usko pata hai jo bhi hua hai usme kahi na kahin iska bhi utna role hai jitna mera ...

Rakesh : phir to bachchi ko sone do ...tab tak main wait krta hu ...

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Saal 1980
( Samay ke sath umra badhegi ... confuse mat hona .. shuru se likh rha hu ...jab beto ki shadi hui thi .. avi k bachpan bhi dikhega. Lekin story ka focus kaafi logo per rahega )

Ghar ka mukhiya (sabse chhota )- thakur Shivraj singh...Age-44

Ye ek aise shakhs hai jo Apne bhaiyo me sabse chhote hai ....lekin inka rutba unse kahi jyada hai . Kyuki ye bade hi samajhdaar aur shant aadmi hai ...shant se matlab hai ki bina soche samjhe ye koi faisla nahi lete ...bade hi gehre insaan hai ...inko jab galat hota dikhta hai tab ye kisi apne ko bhi nahi bakhstey .. kyuki inke liye apni maan maryada sabse jaruri hai ...

Patni -: Raghubiri devi :Age :42

ye bhi thakur shivraj se kam nahi hai ...ye inki patni hai. Aur vaisa hi rasookh hai .. thakur Shivraj aajtak inke samne kabhi bhi jyada nahi bolte ...kyuki ve inko bada pyar krte hai . Ye bhi unke sukh dukh me hamesha unki dhaal ki tarah rahi hai ....aur nidar to itni ki agar koi inki baat ko kaat de to usko taare dikhane me der nahi karti ...inko bhi jaise vardaan mila hai ...sahi aur galat pehchanne ka ...jiski vajah se inka samman bahut tha . Aur patni to thi hi ye thakur shivraj ki ...

Bada beta : thakur vikram singh ,Age- 25

Ye ghar me sabse bada hai ...aur seedha hai ... apney pita ki bahut ijjat krte hai. Aur unhi ke sath rehte hai. Chahete jo hai. .. kyuki inhe apne pita ke jaisa hi banna hai ...

majhla Beta : thakur raghuvir ,Age-23

Ye naam inko maa se mila hai ...aur ye mastmaula hai ...shareer banane ka shauk hai ...inhe police me jaana h ...kyuki ye apne ek mama se prabhavit rahe hai .. ve ek dushman ki goli se mar gaye the ...jinki vajah se inhe bhi kanoon ki vardi pehnni hai ...

Chhota beta : thakur Ravindra singh ,Age -21

Ye nikamma hai is ghar ka ...aur hamesha ghar se bahar rehta h. ..nasha nhi krta hai ...bas iska ghar me man nahi lagta. . inki maa inhe laad pyaar itna karti hai jiski vajah se ye pitaji ki maar se bach jaate hai. Lekin Raghubiri ji jab isko daant padti h to inka paksh nahi leti . Kyuki unko pata hai ab ye jawan ho chuka hai .. lekin inhe apne gharwale jaise ache nahi lagte ... apni man marji krte h . Apni jimmedaari se bhaagte h hamesha ...

Ye teeno abhi kunware hai ...

Sabse chhoti beti : thakur rajkumari ,Age - 18

Ye apne bhaiyo ki chaheti h ... lekin ravindra k sath ladti rehti hai kyuki vo hamesha isko pareshan karta hai . .bholi hai ...jyada batcheet nahi karti.... apne aap me rehne wali hai ...


Bade bhai: thakur baldev singh Age-50

Naam ki tarah bal bahut h sareer me ...lekin swabhav bahut hi alag ...bas apni mauj me rehte h. Aur hamesha apni patni ki sunte h jo thodi teekhi h. Lekin achi h ...ye bas apne kaam se kaam rakhte h ..lekin parivaar ke liye hamesha tayyar. . aur sabse badi baat jab baat parivaar per aati h tab inka gussa itna hota h ki shivraj bhi darte hai. Aisa kabhi kabhi dekhne ko milta hai

Patni : roopwati .. age-48

Naam ki tarah roopwan ...inhe ghamand hai apne roop ka ...kyuki inki shadi bhi thakur baldev k pita ne mang ker ki thi bahu k roop me ...kadwi baate krna aur dusre se jalna jaise khoon me hai ...lekin darti bhi hai kyuki raghubiri chhoti bhale ho jab sunati hai tab bolti band kr deti h. Har baar inke beech ki ladaai sirf sabse badi hema bacha leti h jo raghubiri ko le jaati h ...

Bada beta : thakur omkaar singh ,Age - 27

Swabhav se thode teekhe h . Kyuki har baat kanto se bhari hoti h lekin sach bolte h ...jo kadwa hota hai. Vaise to koi inko chhedta nahi h lekin nyaay darshan jarur karwa dete hai.. jab koi inko chhed deta hai. Kisi ko nahi bakhstey.

Chhota beta : thakur veer singh ,Age - 25

Ye thode aalsi hai ...kheti me dhyan rakhte hai. Aur majdooro ka khayal rakhte hai
Lekin kisi ka dil nhi dukhate. Jo bhi karte hai dil se .. inhe ghar se jyada khet me rehna pasand hai

Beti : thakur megha singh Age - 23

Ye apni maa ki laadli hai ...aur apne yaha per sabse jyada padhi likhi ... isliye ghar me isko alag hi darja dete h . Inka attiude bahut jyada h. Matlab nakchadhi hai. Koi agar kuch keh de to sikayat kr deti h.


Sabse bade bhai : thakur gyaan Singh age-52

Ye thode nasedi hai ... thakur hai na ...to inko apni hadd nahi pata ...bas mauj masti krte hai .. aur parivaar me inka naam se darte h lekin ye shivraj se darte hai kyuki vo inke galat kaamo ko andekha kr dete h per samjhate bhi hai ...


Patni : thakur hema singh ,age -49

Ye ghar ki badi h isliye koi bada kaam ho to inko batake kiya jaata hai. Baad me ye raghubiri per nirnay chhod deti h . Ghar ko ek karke chalne me inka bahut bada yogdaan raha hai. Ye raghubiri per bahut viswas karti h. Unke sath inki banti bhi h.


Beta : thakur kuwar singh ,age - 30

Inko shadi ho chuki hai ...aur ye apne chacha ko bahut maante h .. pehelwani ka shauk rakhte hai .
Seedhe h ...bailbuddhi . .inke apni pasand ke kaam karna aur khana bahut pasand hai ...jyada kisi ke muh nahi lagte ...seedhe hone ki vajah se baato me aa jate hai . Jiska faayda log uthate rehte h. Ghar aake inhe daant padti h. Lekin ye kabhi bura nahi maante. ..chup sunte hai ...chacha ke chahete hai ...

Patni : surekha . Age - 28

Ye bas ghar ke kaamo me vyast rehti hai...inhe bhi khana banane me aanand milta hai jab inke pati chaav se khate hai .. sabhi ko inke hath ka khana pasand hai . Ghar ki bahu ke roop me abhi tak akeli hone ke kaaran sab ki pyaari hai ..




Beti : thakur prabha singh ,age - 26

Inki bhi shadi ho chuki h aur apne sasural me rehti h ..inke pati MLA hai .. hariyana me ...jiski vajah se inhe ghamand hai .. aur kabhi kabhi faaltu bol jaati h . Lekin galti nahi maanti ...


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""Maa bhookh lagi hai ...khana de do ""

Raghubiri : beta kabhi ye bhi dhyan rehta hai ki ghar me kya ho rha h ...ya aawaragardi me hi rehta h . Kisi din tere chakkar me tera baap mujhe ghar se nikaal dega.
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Ye tha thakur ravindra jo bahar se aake seedhe maa se khana maang raha tha. Raghubiri ji har baar inhe samjhane ki kosis krti thi ...lekin ye to bas taane samajhte the insab k kehne ko ...inhe lagta tha ki koi inko pyar nhi krta ...bas sab inke peeche pade rehte hai ...isi vajah se ye hamesha chidchidhe rehte h ... apne man ki karna chahte hai. ..

Ravindra : maa ..khana dena hai ya nahi . Ya aate hi mujhe bas sunana shuru kar di ho ...

Raghubiri : beta main tere bhale ke liye hi kehti hu. Dekh bahar wale bhi tujhe nikamma samajhte hai ...aur tu hai ki sunta nahi hai

Ravindra : koi samne se keh ke to dekhe ... jubaan na kheech lunga main un sabki ...

Raghubiri : bas bas. Aata hi kya h tujhe ..bas ladna jhagadna . Apne bhai k sath chala jaya kar ...kamsekam kuch seekhega. Padhai me bhi tera man nahi lagta....

Ravindra : maa padhta to hu ...dimaag me nahi ghusta to kya karu ...

Raghubiri : le chal .. chupchap khana kha. .


Tabhi ghar me shivraj ji aate hai ...aur ravindra ko khata hue dekhte hai. Isliye kuch nahi kehte.
Din bhar beta bahar rehta hai ...shaam ko daant padti hai ...roj ka kaam hai ...shivraj ji dinbhar logo ki baate sunte hai .. unka dukh aur samasya .....jiski vajah se dinbhar busy rehte h. Jameen jaydaad ki kami nahi h isliye sabki madad krte hai ...

Shivraj : bhagwaan laao khana de do .. phir nikalna h . Pass ke ganv me panchayat hai ...raat ko vaha jaana hai .dekh vikram kaha reh gaya. Usko bhi sath jaana h mere ...

Raghubiri : ji abhi laai ...vaise panchayat kisliye hai

Shivraj : vo do bhaiyo me jhagda ho gaya h ghar ke batware ke liye . Ek kehta h main purana Makan lunga tu khaali jameen le ...dusra kehta hai ki yaa to makaan de ya kaali jameen jyada de... makaan banane ke paise de nahi to ... chalo main dekh lunga ...

Raghubiri : dekhiye ji . In faislo ko jara dekhkar kijiyega.. jab faisla hota h aur koi nakhus hota h to vo dushman ban jaata h

Shivaraj : are bhagwaan mera koi kya bigaad lega jab mere 2 sher mere sath rehte h ...vaise bhi abhi tak koi mere barabar ka nahi h jo mujhe chot pahuchane ka soch bhi sake ...

Raghubiri : haan ...lekin phir bhi ...seedhe sher se takkar lena aashan hota h lekin bhediya kab waar karde pata nahi hota ji ...bata de rhi hu ..

Shivraj bhi bas muskura ker reh jaate the ...jiski vajah se ravindra khana khate hue bhi hasta rehta h kyuki usko pata h ...sabke samne uska baap chahe kuch bhi ho ..lekin uski maa ke samne bheegi billi jaisa h.
Ravindra khana khake chupchap bahar chala jaata h . Shivraj dekhta h lekin apni patni se kuch nahi poochta ..

Ravindra apni taai k pass chala jaata h ...jo bahar aangan me baithi h aur hukka gudguda rahi h ..
Ravindra jaake taai ke pass baith jaata h ...roopwati dekhti h ...ki Ravindra aaj thoda khus hai ...

Roopwati : aa gaya tu.. khana kha liya .. yaa aaj bhi daant khake aaya h apne baap se ..

Ravindra : naa taai .. aaj to pher maa ne pitaji ko lapet diya .

Roopwati : teri maa jitna bole h na ...itna bilna shobha na deta ...per kya karu ... chhhoot hi itni de rakkhi h ...chal tu bata .. jo manne kaha tha vo karke aaya kya ?

Ravindra : haa taai ...vo chhori badhiya h ...per dekh taai ..pitaji ne dekh liya to main tera naam le dunga

Rooowati : tu bhi darpok nikla ...mera kya h pher ek baar keh dungi main to ki nyara ghar dedo .. main to tere bhale ke liye keh rhi thi. . nahi to beta to mere bhi h ...per main to tujhe chahu hu ...mujhe tu sabse pyaara h is ghar me ...jab tu hua tha na manne tera sabse jyada dhyan rakkha tha. Teri maa to ghar ke kaam me lagi rehve thi. Main tujhe apni chhati te lagake rakkha karu thi.

Ravindra : taai pher aisi baat karan laggi ...main aaj usse milke aaya hu....vo keh rhi thi ki rishta bhej du uske gharaa me ...uska baap manega na ..

Roopwati : tu ek ber apni maa te kehke dekh .. agar baat Bani to theek varna main to teri gail hu hi ..nu bata mere jaisi sohni to hai ya nahi .

Rabindra : taai aap jyada sohni ho usse . Lekin aapke baad vo hi ek hai jo aapko takkar de sake hai ..

Roopwati : haa to ...gareeb chhori hai ..kehde apne baap se. Isi se byaah karunga main ...varna beta us chhori ka dil toot jaaga ...aisa na kariye kisi ke dil ko tode na karte ..ek baar byaah pacche tere kadmo me hogi vaa...

Ravindra : taai abhi vo chhoti se ..uske gharwale manenge nahi ...

Roopwati : haa to tu mauj kar itne ...vaise bhi abhi tere bhai bhi reh rahe hai ...shadi bagair ...log baat banavenge. Ki thakur ka chhora uske hath te likad gaya ..

Ravindra : thik hai taai ...


Hua ye tha ki roopwati ne ravindra ko chaal me leke ek ladki ko patane bheja tha ...isi vajah se din bhar bahar rehta tha ...vo gareeb ghar ki ladki thi .. seedhi thi kaafi ...jiski vajah se vo ravindra ki baato me aa gai ... roopwati jitni ghaagh hai h ye sab jaante h ...aur sabko pata hai ravindra ko bigaadne me iska hath hai ... roopwati ko apne baap ke paise ka ghamand tha.aur roopwaan to thi hi .. Jiski vajah se ye ghar me sab per roab chalati thi lekin jab se shadi hui h is ghar me aai h to dekhti h shivraj ki hi chalti h .. usko nicha dikhane ke liye isne plan banaya h taaki ravindra apne baap ka samna kare . Aur gareeb ki ladki se shadi krle ... thakur hone ki vajah se jaat paat ka keeda bhi h . To thakur shivraj ka sir nicha ho jayega ...iski itni tagdi planning h jiska kisi ko pata nahi h ...

 

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Avi : priya beta ...chalo jaldi apna samaan bandho ...mujhe us aadmi se apna card bhi lena h

Priya : chachu ab kaha jayenge hum

Avi : beta ab koi aisi jagah jayenge jaha per shanti se reh sake

Priya : lekin chachu sab jagah aise log rehte h ...kyu na hum tau ji ke pass chalein

Avi : nahi beta . Tumhari dadi ko nahi pasand ... isliye main nahi jaa skta ...maa jis din mujhe muaf kr dengi us din main vaha per chala jaunga

Priya : lekin chacha dadi aisi kyu h ...vo to aapko sabse jyada pyar krti thi ?

Avi : beta aapki dadi aapko aur mujhe dono ko pasand nahi karti ...kya kar sakte h ...vaise bhi main apni betu k sath khus hu

Priya : aap rajni chachi se shadi krke unhe bhi le aao phir ...

Avi : ab uske baare me baat mat krna ...main sirf dard de skta hu ...main manhoos hu na ...jaha bhi jaata hu vahi log dar se jeete h ...

Priya : okay ab main kabhi rajni ka naam nhi lungi ..
..ooops .aap ye daadhi katwalo ...pehle hero jaise lagte the. Ab dekho kaise khatarnaak janwar jaise lagte ho ..

Avi : hahahah ...chalo jaldi kahin police yaha na aa jaye .. us aadmi k ghar chalte h jiski car humne li thi

Priya : uske ghar ka kaise pata hoga chachu ...

Avi : uski car ke pepars se ...chalo ab detective mat bano ...

Dono ne jo saman lena tha vo liya aur baaki jo saboot the vo mita diye ...Avi priya ko leke nikal pada ...ek ghar me pahucha aur usko uski car vapis krke samajhaya ki us raat ko bhool jaye ...agar koi kahe to bol dena main usko nahi jaanta ...

Aur avi apna Identity card leke chal pada priya ko leke ek nayi jagah ...abhi vo train ka wait kr rha tha ki vaha per mr rakesh aa gaye ...

Rakesh : hello young boy

Avi : aap yaha kya kar rhe h ...kyu aap mere bare me janna chahte h

Rakesh : itna bada kaand krne wale ko main bhala kaise chhod skta hu

Avi : aapko kaise pata

Rakesh : daro mat fauji hu ...vo log galat the lekin aaj desh bhar me sirf usi ka jikra hai ...sab dhoondh rahe h ki ye kaam aakhir kisne kiya ...itni berehmi se maar kaise diya tumne un logo ko ...

Avi : aapko kya lena dena h ...

Rakesh : mujhe tumhari madad chahiye ...

Avi : main anjan aadmiyo se baat nahi krta ..jaiye yaha se ..

Rakesh : to main batadu ki tum hi vo ho jisne in bachcho ki jaan bachai h ...vaise ek baat batadu ...raat jin logo ko tumne maara h unme 6 aurat thi . Jo pakdi gai h ...ve ek kamre me band thi ...police ne unko bhi maar dala ...ye bhi mujhe pata h ...

Avi : to aap kyu mera sir kha rahe h ...

Rakesh : beta ...tumhari aankho me maine kuch dekha h ...main sirf tumhari madad krna chahta hu

Avi : aap abhi khud mujhse madad mang rhe the ...meri madad kya karenge ...

Rakesh : hahaha ...yahi madad to chahiye thi ki tum mujhse kuch mango ...

Avi : ab mujhe aap gussa dila rahe h

Rakesh : army join karoge

Avi : nahi ... dhanyawad ...aur aap jo soch rhe h main nahi batane wala ...pls aap mera peecha chhod dijiye ...siway dard k kuch hasil nhi hoga. ..

Rakesh : mujhe janna h ...phir bhi ....main hamesha jindagi bas ghar aur border per raha hu ...ab retired hu to life me kuch hai nahi karne ko ...maine apna jawan beta khoya h ... ...tumhe lagta hoga main ab bhi tumse majaak kr rha hu ...ye dekho mere bete ki photo ...chahe to pata kar skte ho ...mujhe tumhare ander ek khus insaan dikhai deta h ...jisko tum duniya se chhipaye baithe ho ...

Avi chup ho jaata h ...kyuki usko apne baap ki yaad aati h ki ek uska baap tha jo hamesha apni jimmedaari se bhaagta raha ...aur ek ye hai jo marne k baad bhi apne bete k liye ro rha hai ...
Avi sochta hai ki is insaan ko kyu dard du ...phir ek kosis karta h ...usko rote hue fauji ko dekhke ...kyuki hamare desh me kya sab desho me faujiyo ki itni ijjat ki jaati h ...avi usko ab aur rulana nahi chahta tha ...

Avi : aap ghar jaiye uncle ...mere bare me jaankar khusi nahi hogi. ..

Rakesh : beta main dard se is tarah juda hua hu ...jis tarah tum ho ...maine apne parivaar ko khoya hai ....naksali hamle me mera parivaar kho gaya ...mere bete ki laash k alawa mujhe kuch nahi mila ...aur tum kehte ho ki mujhe dukhi nahi karna chahte ...kya mere dard se bhi bada h tumhara dard ...

Avi ab apni yadon ka pitaara kholna chahta tha ...jee bharke rona chahta tha. Isliye vo kehta hai ...chaliye ...aapko main batata hu ki main kaun hu ...

Avi rakesh aur priya ko leke train me baith jaata h ...
Rakesh bhi avi ka peecha kar rha tha apne ghar ka taala lagake bas avi ke peeche rehta tha ..usko avi ke baare me pata nhi kya dilchaspi hui thi ...poori raat ka kand usne apni aankho se dekha tha. Bas jaha light band hui thi vo nahi dekh paaya ..lekin laashein bhi dekhi thi .. aur baad me un aurato ko maarne wala bhi rakesh tha avi ne chhod di thi ya usse bach gai thi ...kyuki unko is kaam ki aadat lag gai thi .. jis vajah se yaha se jaane ke baad ve bahar bhi yahi karti ...isliye rakesh ne maut k ghaat utaar diya unhe bhi ...fauji tha to daya nahi aati thi lekin nirdayi nahi tha ...jisko maut di ..jhatke se dedi ...tadpa ke nahi maara ...


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Billu : ajeet bhaiyya ...avi bhai haydrabaad me hai ..unka phone aaya tha ...jara news channal lagake dekho ...

Ajeet news channal lagake dekhta hai ...jisme live telecast chal raha tha ...news anchor bawre hue pade the ...""dekhiye kitna bhayank manjar hai yaha ka ...laashe gajar muli ki tarah kaat di gai hai. Sochiye jab inhe maara gaya hoga tab kitna marmik drishya raha hoga ..."""

Ajeet : billu ...ye kaam apna avi hi kar skta hai ...dekha tha maine ek baar usko ...uski najar aur uska hath. ...jab chalta tha khoon hi khoon ...chalo ...hame avi ko laana hoga ...dadaji ne to bistar hi pakad liya hai jabse vo gaya hai ...pata nhi kyu chachi aur daadi ne usko ghar se nikaal diya ...bhala isme avi ki kya galti ...vo to bas badla le rha tha ... apne bhai ki madad kr rha tha ... akhir Rohit bhaiiya ne galti hi kya ki thi ...dusri caste me pyar krna gunaah to nahi ...ye samaaj aur iske kanoon ...chal billu ...subbu aur ajay ko bhi bulala .. chalte hai charo ...
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Inki to gaadi nikal padi ... haydrabaad ke liye. Jabki avi train me baith kar jaa rha tha. ..delhi ke liye. Usne soch liya tha ...ab vo kaashi jayega....jaha par usko shanti mil sake ...Mr rakesh bhi utaawle ho rhe the ....

Rakesh : arvind ab to batado ...safar bhi lamba hai ab kyu na baat shuru ki jaaye .. aise me safar bhi kat jayega

Priya : chachu aap inko batao ...main so jaati hu ...

Rakesh : dekha bachchi samajhdaar hai ...

Avi : haan ...ye samjhdaar hai ...kyuki usko pata hai jo bhi hua hai usme kahi na kahin iska bhi utna role hai jitna mera ...

Rakesh : phir to bachchi ko sone do ...tab tak main wait krta hu ...

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Saal 1980
( Samay ke sath umra badhegi ... confuse mat hona .. shuru se likh rha hu ...jab beto ki shadi hui thi .. avi k bachpan bhi dikhega. Lekin story ka focus kaafi logo per rahega )

Ghar ka mukhiya (sabse chhota )- thakur Shivraj singh...Age-44

Ye ek aise shakhs hai jo Apne bhaiyo me sabse chhote hai ....lekin inka rutba unse kahi jyada hai . Kyuki ye bade hi samajhdaar aur shant aadmi hai ...shant se matlab hai ki bina soche samjhe ye koi faisla nahi lete ...bade hi gehre insaan hai ...inko jab galat hota dikhta hai tab ye kisi apne ko bhi nahi bakhstey .. kyuki inke liye apni maan maryada sabse jaruri hai ...

Patni -: Raghubiri devi :Age :42

ye bhi thakur shivraj se kam nahi hai ...ye inki patni hai. Aur vaisa hi rasookh hai .. thakur Shivraj aajtak inke samne kabhi bhi jyada nahi bolte ...kyuki ve inko bada pyar krte hai . Ye bhi unke sukh dukh me hamesha unki dhaal ki tarah rahi hai ....aur nidar to itni ki agar koi inki baat ko kaat de to usko taare dikhane me der nahi karti ...inko bhi jaise vardaan mila hai ...sahi aur galat pehchanne ka ...jiski vajah se inka samman bahut tha . Aur patni to thi hi ye thakur shivraj ki ...

Bada beta : thakur vikram singh ,Age- 25

Ye ghar me sabse bada hai ...aur seedha hai ... apney pita ki bahut ijjat krte hai. Aur unhi ke sath rehte hai. Chahete jo hai. .. kyuki inhe apne pita ke jaisa hi banna hai ...

majhla Beta : thakur raghuvir ,Age-23

Ye naam inko maa se mila hai ...aur ye mastmaula hai ...shareer banane ka shauk hai ...inhe police me jaana h ...kyuki ye apne ek mama se prabhavit rahe hai .. ve ek dushman ki goli se mar gaye the ...jinki vajah se inhe bhi kanoon ki vardi pehnni hai ...

Chhota beta : thakur Ravindra singh ,Age -21

Ye nikamma hai is ghar ka ...aur hamesha ghar se bahar rehta h. ..nasha nhi krta hai ...bas iska ghar me man nahi lagta. . inki maa inhe laad pyaar itna karti hai jiski vajah se ye pitaji ki maar se bach jaate hai. Lekin Raghubiri ji jab isko daant padti h to inka paksh nahi leti . Kyuki unko pata hai ab ye jawan ho chuka hai .. lekin inhe apne gharwale jaise ache nahi lagte ... apni man marji krte h . Apni jimmedaari se bhaagte h hamesha ...

Ye teeno abhi kunware hai ...

Sabse chhoti beti : thakur rajkumari ,Age - 18

Ye apne bhaiyo ki chaheti h ... lekin ravindra k sath ladti rehti hai kyuki vo hamesha isko pareshan karta hai . .bholi hai ...jyada batcheet nahi karti.... apne aap me rehne wali hai ...


Bade bhai: thakur baldev singh Age-50

Naam ki tarah bal bahut h sareer me ...lekin swabhav bahut hi alag ...bas apni mauj me rehte h. Aur hamesha apni patni ki sunte h jo thodi teekhi h. Lekin achi h ...ye bas apne kaam se kaam rakhte h ..lekin parivaar ke liye hamesha tayyar. . aur sabse badi baat jab baat parivaar per aati h tab inka gussa itna hota h ki shivraj bhi darte hai. Aisa kabhi kabhi dekhne ko milta hai

Patni : roopwati .. age-48

Naam ki tarah roopwan ...inhe ghamand hai apne roop ka ...kyuki inki shadi bhi thakur baldev k pita ne mang ker ki thi bahu k roop me ...kadwi baate krna aur dusre se jalna jaise khoon me hai ...lekin darti bhi hai kyuki raghubiri chhoti bhale ho jab sunati hai tab bolti band kr deti h. Har baar inke beech ki ladaai sirf sabse badi hema bacha leti h jo raghubiri ko le jaati h ...

Bada beta : thakur omkaar singh ,Age - 27

Swabhav se thode teekhe h . Kyuki har baat kanto se bhari hoti h lekin sach bolte h ...jo kadwa hota hai. Vaise to koi inko chhedta nahi h lekin nyaay darshan jarur karwa dete hai.. jab koi inko chhed deta hai. Kisi ko nahi bakhstey.

Chhota beta : thakur veer singh ,Age - 25

Ye thode aalsi hai ...kheti me dhyan rakhte hai. Aur majdooro ka khayal rakhte hai
Lekin kisi ka dil nhi dukhate. Jo bhi karte hai dil se .. inhe ghar se jyada khet me rehna pasand hai

Beti : thakur megha singh Age - 23

Ye apni maa ki laadli hai ...aur apne yaha per sabse jyada padhi likhi ... isliye ghar me isko alag hi darja dete h . Inka attiude bahut jyada h. Matlab nakchadhi hai. Koi agar kuch keh de to sikayat kr deti h.


Sabse bade bhai : thakur gyaan Singh age-52

Ye thode nasedi hai ... thakur hai na ...to inko apni hadd nahi pata ...bas mauj masti krte hai .. aur parivaar me inka naam se darte h lekin ye shivraj se darte hai kyuki vo inke galat kaamo ko andekha kr dete h per samjhate bhi hai ...


Patni : thakur hema singh ,age -49

Ye ghar ki badi h isliye koi bada kaam ho to inko batake kiya jaata hai. Baad me ye raghubiri per nirnay chhod deti h . Ghar ko ek karke chalne me inka bahut bada yogdaan raha hai. Ye raghubiri per bahut viswas karti h. Unke sath inki banti bhi h.


Beta : thakur kuwar singh ,age - 30

Inko shadi ho chuki hai ...aur ye apne chacha ko bahut maante h .. pehelwani ka shauk rakhte hai .
Seedhe h ...bailbuddhi . .inke apni pasand ke kaam karna aur khana bahut pasand hai ...jyada kisi ke muh nahi lagte ...seedhe hone ki vajah se baato me aa jate hai . Jiska faayda log uthate rehte h. Ghar aake inhe daant padti h. Lekin ye kabhi bura nahi maante. ..chup sunte hai ...chacha ke chahete hai ...

Patni : surekha . Age - 28

Ye bas ghar ke kaamo me vyast rehti hai...inhe bhi khana banane me aanand milta hai jab inke pati chaav se khate hai .. sabhi ko inke hath ka khana pasand hai . Ghar ki bahu ke roop me abhi tak akeli hone ke kaaran sab ki pyaari hai ..




Beti : thakur prabha singh ,age - 26

Inki bhi shadi ho chuki h aur apne sasural me rehti h ..inke pati MLA hai .. hariyana me ...jiski vajah se inhe ghamand hai .. aur kabhi kabhi faaltu bol jaati h . Lekin galti nahi maanti ...


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""Maa bhookh lagi hai ...khana de do ""

Raghubiri : beta kabhi ye bhi dhyan rehta hai ki ghar me kya ho rha h ...ya aawaragardi me hi rehta h . Kisi din tere chakkar me tera baap mujhe ghar se nikaal dega.
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Ye tha thakur ravindra jo bahar se aake seedhe maa se khana maang raha tha. Raghubiri ji har baar inhe samjhane ki kosis krti thi ...lekin ye to bas taane samajhte the insab k kehne ko ...inhe lagta tha ki koi inko pyar nhi krta ...bas sab inke peeche pade rehte hai ...isi vajah se ye hamesha chidchidhe rehte h ... apne man ki karna chahte hai. ..

Ravindra : maa ..khana dena hai ya nahi . Ya aate hi mujhe bas sunana shuru kar di ho ...

Raghubiri : beta main tere bhale ke liye hi kehti hu. Dekh bahar wale bhi tujhe nikamma samajhte hai ...aur tu hai ki sunta nahi hai

Ravindra : koi samne se keh ke to dekhe ... jubaan na kheech lunga main un sabki ...

Raghubiri : bas bas. Aata hi kya h tujhe ..bas ladna jhagadna . Apne bhai k sath chala jaya kar ...kamsekam kuch seekhega. Padhai me bhi tera man nahi lagta....

Ravindra : maa padhta to hu ...dimaag me nahi ghusta to kya karu ...

Raghubiri : le chal .. chupchap khana kha. .


Tabhi ghar me shivraj ji aate hai ...aur ravindra ko khata hue dekhte hai. Isliye kuch nahi kehte.
Din bhar beta bahar rehta hai ...shaam ko daant padti hai ...roj ka kaam hai ...shivraj ji dinbhar logo ki baate sunte hai .. unka dukh aur samasya .....jiski vajah se dinbhar busy rehte h. Jameen jaydaad ki kami nahi h isliye sabki madad krte hai ...

Shivraj : bhagwaan laao khana de do .. phir nikalna h . Pass ke ganv me panchayat hai ...raat ko vaha jaana hai .dekh vikram kaha reh gaya. Usko bhi sath jaana h mere ...

Raghubiri : ji abhi laai ...vaise panchayat kisliye hai

Shivraj : vo do bhaiyo me jhagda ho gaya h ghar ke batware ke liye . Ek kehta h main purana Makan lunga tu khaali jameen le ...dusra kehta hai ki yaa to makaan de ya kaali jameen jyada de... makaan banane ke paise de nahi to ... chalo main dekh lunga ...

Raghubiri : dekhiye ji . In faislo ko jara dekhkar kijiyega.. jab faisla hota h aur koi nakhus hota h to vo dushman ban jaata h

Shivaraj : are bhagwaan mera koi kya bigaad lega jab mere 2 sher mere sath rehte h ...vaise bhi abhi tak koi mere barabar ka nahi h jo mujhe chot pahuchane ka soch bhi sake ...

Raghubiri : haan ...lekin phir bhi ...seedhe sher se takkar lena aashan hota h lekin bhediya kab waar karde pata nahi hota ji ...bata de rhi hu ..

Shivraj bhi bas muskura ker reh jaate the ...jiski vajah se ravindra khana khate hue bhi hasta rehta h kyuki usko pata h ...sabke samne uska baap chahe kuch bhi ho ..lekin uski maa ke samne bheegi billi jaisa h.
Ravindra khana khake chupchap bahar chala jaata h . Shivraj dekhta h lekin apni patni se kuch nahi poochta ..

Ravindra apni taai k pass chala jaata h ...jo bahar aangan me baithi h aur hukka gudguda rahi h ..
Ravindra jaake taai ke pass baith jaata h ...roopwati dekhti h ...ki Ravindra aaj thoda khus hai ...

Roopwati : aa gaya tu.. khana kha liya .. yaa aaj bhi daant khake aaya h apne baap se ..

Ravindra : naa taai .. aaj to pher maa ne pitaji ko lapet diya .

Roopwati : teri maa jitna bole h na ...itna bilna shobha na deta ...per kya karu ... chhhoot hi itni de rakkhi h ...chal tu bata .. jo manne kaha tha vo karke aaya kya ?

Ravindra : haa taai ...vo chhori badhiya h ...per dekh taai ..pitaji ne dekh liya to main tera naam le dunga

Rooowati : tu bhi darpok nikla ...mera kya h pher ek baar keh dungi main to ki nyara ghar dedo .. main to tere bhale ke liye keh rhi thi. . nahi to beta to mere bhi h ...per main to tujhe chahu hu ...mujhe tu sabse pyaara h is ghar me ...jab tu hua tha na manne tera sabse jyada dhyan rakkha tha. Teri maa to ghar ke kaam me lagi rehve thi. Main tujhe apni chhati te lagake rakkha karu thi.

Ravindra : taai pher aisi baat karan laggi ...main aaj usse milke aaya hu....vo keh rhi thi ki rishta bhej du uske gharaa me ...uska baap manega na ..

Roopwati : tu ek ber apni maa te kehke dekh .. agar baat Bani to theek varna main to teri gail hu hi ..nu bata mere jaisi sohni to hai ya nahi .

Rabindra : taai aap jyada sohni ho usse . Lekin aapke baad vo hi ek hai jo aapko takkar de sake hai ..

Roopwati : haa to ...gareeb chhori hai ..kehde apne baap se. Isi se byaah karunga main ...varna beta us chhori ka dil toot jaaga ...aisa na kariye kisi ke dil ko tode na karte ..ek baar byaah pacche tere kadmo me hogi vaa...

Ravindra : taai abhi vo chhoti se ..uske gharwale manenge nahi ...

Roopwati : haa to tu mauj kar itne ...vaise bhi abhi tere bhai bhi reh rahe hai ...shadi bagair ...log baat banavenge. Ki thakur ka chhora uske hath te likad gaya ..

Ravindra : thik hai taai ...


Hua ye tha ki roopwati ne ravindra ko chaal me leke ek ladki ko patane bheja tha ...isi vajah se din bhar bahar rehta tha ...vo gareeb ghar ki ladki thi .. seedhi thi kaafi ...jiski vajah se vo ravindra ki baato me aa gai ... roopwati jitni ghaagh hai h ye sab jaante h ...aur sabko pata hai ravindra ko bigaadne me iska hath hai ... roopwati ko apne baap ke paise ka ghamand tha.aur roopwaan to thi hi .. Jiski vajah se ye ghar me sab per roab chalati thi lekin jab se shadi hui h is ghar me aai h to dekhti h shivraj ki hi chalti h .. usko nicha dikhane ke liye isne plan banaya h taaki ravindra apne baap ka samna kare . Aur gareeb ki ladki se shadi krle ... thakur hone ki vajah se jaat paat ka keeda bhi h . To thakur shivraj ka sir nicha ho jayega ...iski itni tagdi planning h jiska kisi ko pata nahi h ...

Fantastic update..bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

Hello guys ...ye main new story start krne jaa rha hu ...iska plot maine soch rakha hai ...ye simple story hogi ...jisme naam (story) se pata chal gaya hoga

Aur is baar ummeed yahi hai ki aap log bore nahi honge ...
Mobile se likhta hu na to time lagta hai ...
Plot k baare me batata hu - is story me ye hoga ki ek middle class banda survive krta hai ghar me ,college me , naukri pesha me , aur love life me ....apne mind k jariye kya se kya ban jaata h vo ...
Usme kaha luck sath dega aur kahan love ....kyuki dhokha har jagah hota hai isme bhi yahi dikhaya jayega lekin haar kr bhi jeetna hi jindagi h mere dosto ...

Is baar yahi likhunga

Need some Support
Ab bas itna hi kahunga ki aaplog pareshan nahi honge .. mujhe likes ya cmnts ki itni chahat nhi hoti ...kyuki page badhte hai ...phir update dhoondhni padti h ...
phir bhi likes to bante hai taaki ye pata chal sake ki meri story read ho rhi hai

Sarahniye bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

Hello guys ...ye main new story start krne jaa rha hu ...iska plot maine soch rakha hai ...ye simple story hogi ...jisme naam (story) se pata chal gaya hoga

Aur is baar ummeed yahi hai ki aap log bore nahi honge ...
Mobile se likhta hu na to time lagta hai ...
Plot k baare me batata hu - is story me ye hoga ki ek middle class banda survive krta hai ghar me ,college me , naukri pesha me , aur love life me ....apne mind k jariye kya se kya ban jaata h vo ...
Usme kaha luck sath dega aur kahan love ....kyuki dhokha har jagah hota hai isme bhi yahi dikhaya jayega lekin haar kr bhi jeetna hi jindagi h mere dosto ...

Is baar yahi likhunga

Need some Support
Ab bas itna hi kahunga ki aaplog pareshan nahi honge .. mujhe likes ya cmnts ki itni chahat nhi hoti ...kyuki page badhte hai ...phir update dhoondhni padti h ...
phir bhi likes to bante hai taaki ye pata chal sake ki meri story read ho rhi hai

Nayi kahani ki bahut-bahut badhai bhai

 

[Vipul]

Hello guys ...ye main new story start krne jaa rha hu ...iska plot maine soch rakha hai ...ye simple story hogi ...jisme naam (story) se pata chal gaya hoga

Aur is baar ummeed yahi hai ki aap log bore nahi honge ...
Mobile se likhta hu na to time lagta hai ...
Plot k baare me batata hu - is story me ye hoga ki ek middle class banda survive krta hai ghar me ,college me , naukri pesha me , aur love life me ....apne mind k jariye kya se kya ban jaata h vo ...
Usme kaha luck sath dega aur kahan love ....kyuki dhokha har jagah hota hai isme bhi yahi dikhaya jayega lekin haar kr bhi jeetna hi jindagi h mere dosto ...

Is baar yahi likhunga

Need some Support
Ab bas itna hi kahunga ki aaplog pareshan nahi honge .. mujhe likes ya cmnts ki itni chahat nhi hoti ...kyuki page badhte hai ...phir update dhoondhni padti h ...
phir bhi likes to bante hai taaki ye pata chal sake ki meri story read ho rhi hai

Congratulations bhai for new thread

 

[The king]

Nice update bhai or flashback kitna lamba chalega bhai ye bhi bata do waiting for next update

 

[The Thinker]

Fantastic update..bhai

Thank you

 

[The Thinker]

Nayi kahani ki bahut-bahut badhai bhai

Thank you

 

[The Thinker]

Congratulations bhai for new thread

Thank you