Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Harry rocks]

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Bhai aapki poori kahani bas abhi hi padha hu.ye mera pehla comment hai is story me.
Sach kahu to mujhe start me ye kahani bohot hi awesome lagi lekin jaisey jaisey me kahani ko padhta gaya mujhe thori slow hoti gayee.bas mera yahi kehna hai ke kahani ko itna bhi slow mat karo ke boring ho jaaye.abhi to me ko boring lag rahi hai.bas Thora speed badhaongry to kahani aur bhi acchi hongi.
Aapke regular readers mujhe gaali de saktey hai mere comments par lekin jo mujhe laga me ne keh diya.

Bas yahi to karan h bhai pahale regular update isliye hi aate the kyunki regular or dher sare review aate the lekin ab uska ulta ho raha h review kam aate h isliye likhne m maja ni aata, or uper se is samay preshaniya to itni h pucho mat ye 2020 bahut kharab chal raha h , ghar m 2 deaths papa ki tabiyat or kam ki tension is chalker m akhir kRu kya m

 

[Harry rocks]

aaj update nh ayega kya.....☹☹☹

Aayega bhai abhi wo hi likh raha hu complete hote hi post karunga

 

[d€¥]

Aayega bhai abhi wo hi likh raha hu complete hote hi post karunga

wait nh hota apke story ka jldi se update do bhai

 

[AdityaA]

Nice story h bhai padh ke maja aa gya kya likhte ho bhai aap bhai apki story bahut achi last update padh ke bhai maja aa gya ab prity aur veer ki engagement hogi aur sayad is engagement me naina aur karan ka mulakat hoga mujhe lagta h naina bhi karan ki sahi bahan h aur naina ki maa karan ki apni maa h may be kuchh bhi ho sakta h aap next update jaldi do bhai

 

[Kumar Raj]

Pahle pariwar ko sambhalo Bhai bad m story

 

[Naina]

 

[rakku]

Aayega bhai abhi wo hi likh raha hu complete hote hi post karunga

Wah lockdown k time m kisi na kisi story p update aa hi raha hai..accha timepass ho jayga..

 

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[Harry rocks]

Maaf kerna dosto us badtameez ki vajah se dimag kharab ho gaya tha isliye thodi der tak likhne ka bilkul man ni tha , lekin aap tension mat lo , abhi khana kha ker wapas se update likhne beth raha hu aaj 11 sade 11 baje tak update pakka dedunga . Please itni der wait kiya h to kuch der or ker lo.

 

[Bunny..]

Maaf kerna dosto us badtameez ki vajah se dimag kharab ho gaya tha isliye thodi der tak likhne ka bilkul man ni tha , lekin aap tension mat lo , abhi khana kha ker wapas se update likhne beth raha hu aaj 11 sade 11 baje tak update pakka dedunga . Please itni der wait kiya h to kuch der or ker lo.

Ok we r waiting sir