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Wahi dusri or

Abhishek k jane k baad vidhi fir se udas ho gayi , jise naina ne notice ker liya.

Naina ne is baare me vidhi se baad m baat kerne ka socha , or wo abhi rest kerne apne kamre me chali gayi.

Agli subah jab sab fresh ho gaye the ,tabhi bhola bhi vaha aapahuncha or khans banane laga , subah k nashte k liye.

Tabhi piche se veer aaya or or bhola k kandhe pe ek chapat lagate hue bola.

Veer :- or bhai bhola , kya hal chal h , badi bhuk lagi h yar kya bana h.

Lekin veer ne jese hi bhola k kandhe pe hath rakha uski ek tez chink nikal gayi .

Bhola :- aaahhh.

Jise sun veer ghabra gaya or uski chink sun sab vaha aaphunche, sab ye dekh k chonk gaye ki bhola k kandhe se khun nikal raha tha.

Naina :- kya hua veer yaha , ye bhola chilaya kyu or ye khun kesa .

Veer :- pata ni naina ye sab kese hua.

Ye bol veer abhi abhi jo hua uske bare me naina ko bata deta h, jise sun veer ko naina bhola ki shirt utarne ko bolti h.

Bhola khub na nukur kerta h , per naina ni mani or usne veer se bhola ki Shirt utarwa hi di.

T shirt utarte hi veer ne dekha ki bhola ka ek kandha buri tarah ghayal h or uspe patiya bandhi h.

Naina ;- are bhola ye chot kese lagi tumhe .

Bhola hickhicate hue :- wo mesahab kal raat ek bhediye ne mujh per hamla ker diya , shayad wo hi tha , jiske baare me aapne bataya tha.

Wo to meri kismat achi h ki m bach k bhag gaya.

Naina :- wese ye baat thodi aajib ni h preety , jab humne us bhediye ko goli mari tab uske daye kandhe pe hi goli lagi thi or tumhare bhi chot daye kandhe pe h.

(Thoda serious hote hue) kahi esa to ni ki tum hi ho vo darinda.

Bhola hickichate hue :- nnni nni memsahab ye ap kya bol rahi ho m kese bhediya hounga m to.

Naina haste hue :- are bas bas itna dar kyu rahe ho yar , m to bas majak ker rahi thi.

Ager tumhe chot lagi to kaam pe kyu aaye tum esa kero ab tum ghar jao.

Bhola mana kerta h ,lekin naina ni mani or use bhej hi diya.

Bhola k jane k baad naina ne vidhi se boli.

Naina :- vidhi di mujhe kuch baat kerni h aapse akele me.

Dono ek kamre me jate h or fir naina boli.

Naina :- di m baat ko jyada ghumaungi firaungi ni , bas m yahi confirm kerna chahati hu ki aap officer abhishek se pyaar kerti ho na.

Vidhi ye sun chonk gayi or boli.

Vidhi jhut :- ni to ye tumse kisne kaha.

Naina :- dekhiye di humare pass time bahut kam h aapke 23ve birthday ko keval 5 din bache h or yadi aapke dil m sach m kuch h to bol dijiye, kahi esa na ho bahut der ho jaye

Naina ki baat sun vidhi ghabra gayi or usne sharmate hue is sach ko swikar to ker liya , lekin apne halato ko leke rone lagi , jise naina chup karate hue boli

Naina :- di aap chinta mat kijiye , aapki ye choti bahan aapse vada kerti h ki aapki shadi jarur hogi or abhishek k sath hi hogi.

Vidhi :- per kese.

Naina :- mere paas ek plan or h .

Fir naina ne sabko ander bulaya or sumitra se pahale vidhi k rishte ki baat ki , sumitra bhi apni beti ki khushi ko apni khushi maan ker ha bol di.

Fir naina ne sabko apna plan bataya , jise sunker vidhi boli.

Vidhi :- ni m esa ni ker sakti , m abhishek ki jaan ko khatre me ni dal sakti naina.

Naina :-. Meri baat ko samjhiye di , yahi aakhiri rasta h hamare pass.aap mujhpe bharosa rakhiye di , m aapko vachan deti hu ki abhishek ko kuch ni hoga.

Vidhi :- per kese naina , jesa tumne bataya ki tumhare plan ki safalta k liye us bhediye ki asli pahachan pata hona jaruri h.

Hum kese pata karenge wo kon h.

Preety :- are don't worry big sister , jr sister ne is baare me pahale hi pata ker diyela h , wo jo koi bhi tha , bhesh badal k kuch der pahale tak humare bich hi tha.

Sumitra :- kya kon tha vo.

Naina :- bhola.

Short flashback

Naina ne jabse werewolf ki kahani suni thi or jab se vo bhola se mili thi use bhola ki harkato se uspe shak hone laga.

Jese usko dekhte hi bhola ka naina ko gusse se dekhna , us raat jungle me yantra ko dekh dar jana or fir bar bar kahane pe bhi us yantra ko na pakadna.

Or isliye hi naina ne us nakli shadi wale din bhola lo chuti dedi thi .

Or aaj naina ne bhola k usi side wale khande pe chot dekhi to usne man hi man preety ko apni new power use kerne ko kaha.

Jo ye thi ki wo apni us power ko activate kerne k baad kisi bhi chalawe ko pahachan sakti h ,arthat koi uske samne roop badal k aaye to bhi use uska asli roop dikh jayega.

Vesa hi bhola k sath hua , jese hi preety ne apni power activate ki use bhola ka asli roop najar aagaya or usne naina ko ye baat bata di

Isliye usne bhola ko jabardasti wapas bhej diya.

Sumitra or vidhi ko yakin hi ni ho raha tha , jo wafadar nokar unke 7 salo se kam ker raha tha , wo hi unka asli dushman tha

Sham ko vidhi ne abhishek ko dinner pe bulaya jaha , sumitra ne vidhi ka rishta rakha abhishek k samne

Jise sun abhishek khush ho gaya kyunki vo bhi vidhi ko like kerta tha, lekin vidhi jese hi vo bhi kabhi apne dil ki baat ni kah paya.

Abhishek :- aunty , sach kahu to m bhi college time se vidhi ko chahta hu per kabhi kah ni paya.

Or aaj jab kismat khud mujhe mere pyaar se mila rahi h to m na kese kahu, mujhe ye rishta definitely manjoor h.

TAbhi naina boli .

Naina :- kismat hamesha sath ni deti officer, ager fal pana ho to kuch karm bhi kerne padte .

Abhishek :- matlab

Naina :- matlab yah h ki ager aapko ager vidhi di ko pana h to humara sath dena hoga.

Ye bol naina sari bAate bata ker abhishek ko plan batati h , jise sun abhishek bola.

Abhishek :- m tum logo se kitni baar bolu ki m ye sab bakwas ko ni manta , ye bhut pret tritya sab bakwas h.

Tabhi vaha side me bethi preety jo sari baate sun rahi thi vo gusse se uthi or abhishek ki or badhi.

Naina dar gayi kyunki usne preety ka gussa dekha tha, usne preety ko kuch bolna chaha, per preety ne apna hath uper ker naina ko shant rahane ka ishara kiya.

Preety k hath pe bana trittya ka nishan bhi chamak raha tha, preety ja ker bilkul abhishek k samne khadi ho gayi.

Or apna ek hath abhishek k bagal se aage ese bhadaya, jese kisi chij ko pakad rahi ho.

Abhishek abhi kuch bolta usse pahale hi preety ki banduk jo ek kone me padi hui thi , wo apne aap udte hue preeti k us hath me aagayi.

Abhishek vidhi or sumitra ki to ye dekh ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi.

Preeti style se banduk ko pakde hue :- to mr abhishek abhi bhi in baato ko bakwas bologe , ya plan execute kab kerna h vo discuss ker le.

Abhishek ab kya bolta bichara , vo to heran ho chuka tha ye sab dekh ker or preeti k hath pe chamkte hue nishan dekh ker bhi.

Use live evidence jo mil gaya tha , isliye wo ready ho gaya , or fir sab ne plan ek baar or discuss kiya.

Agli subah

Sumitra ne bhola ko bulaaya or boli.

Sumitra :- maaf kerna beta tumhe chot lagi hui m bhi taklif di , per ye kaam bhi bahut jaruri tha.

Bhola :- are ni ni malkin aap mafi mat mangiye, ye to kaam h mera , vese bhi ab m thik hu.

Sumitra :- chalo ye to achi baat , h darasal kaam ye tha ki tumhe vidhi beti or abhishek ko aaj shahar leke jana hoga.

Bhola k to ye sun aankho me ek baar chamak aagayi , kyunki use vidhi ko kidnapped kerne ka moka jo mil gaya tha.

Bhola :- wo sab to thik h malkin lekin kya ek anjan k sath choti malkin ko bhejna sahi hoga.

Sumitra :- are m ttumhe batana to bhul hi gayi , tumhari choti malkin ki mane abhishek se shadi fix ker di h , kyunki tumhari malkin shuru se abhishek ko pasand kerti h.

Isliye to ye dono jane wale h shadi ki shopping kerne or naina bhi shadi tak koi na koi us bhediye ka upay soch hi legi.

Ye sun bhola k tan badan me aag lag gayi.

Bhola :- ni ye ni ho sakta vidhi sirf or sirf meri h , wo tantrika isse pahale kuch kare , is londe ko aaj hi khatam ker vidhi ko lejaunga.

Ye soch bhola man hi man hasne laga.

Kuch der baad abhishek or vidhi bhi teyar ho ke aagaye .

Or bhola unhe jeep me bitha ker nikal pada , shahr se madhsvpur k bich ka pura rasta sunsan tha , isi baat ka fayda uthana chaha bhola ne.

Bhola gadi chala raha tha or abhishek or vidhi romantic baato me lage hue the, jisse werewolf ka para high hone laga tha

Vidhi :- bas 2 din ki baat or fir hum dono ek ho jayenge he na jaan

Abhishek :- ha jaan , ye to h , ab to bas tum ye socho ki honeymoon pe kaha jana h.

Ye sun vidhi to sharma gayi lekin bhola ne apna aapa kho diya or usne jor se brake lagayi .

Or gusse me guraya

Bhola :- esa ni ho sakta.

Abhishek :- tum hote kon ho humare bich bolne wale

Bhola :- teri mot .

Ye bol bhola dahadte hue apne asli roop me aagaya , jise dekh vidhi or abhishek dar k mare kampne lage.

Lekin vidhi ne sahas dikhate hue abhishek ka hath pakad ek or bhagi.

Werewolf haste hue :- bhago kitna bhag sakte ho m bhi to dekhu ye bol vo bhi unke piche bhaga .

Thodi der bhagne k baad vidhi or abhishek ek jagh ruk gaye , ab unse or ni bhaga ja raha tha shayad.

Tabhi vo bhediya bhi vaha aaphuncha , lekin abhi bhi un 3no k bich kuch duri thi .

Werewolf :- haha bola tha na tum bhag sakte ho per bach ni sakte , ab to tum gaye.

Ye bol warewolf unpe jhapatne k liye chalang lagayi thi ki ek goli aaker use lagi , wo bhi chandi ki, thik uske sine me.

Ye goli naina ne chalayi thi , jo wHi ek ped pe chupi bethi thi or unke idher aane ka hi ishara ker rahi thi.

Yahi plan tha naina ka or shetano ki tarah us werewolf or uski maa ki shaktiya bhi din m kamjor pad jati h , ye baat naina janti thi .

Isliye is bAR usne raat k bajaye din ka plan banaya , is vajah or naina k dobara kavach ko pahanne se komolika ko plan k bare m pata na chala.

Wo bhi bhola k piche piche kuch duri pe gadi me aarahi thi , or sath me preety bhi thi.

Or usne vidhi se contact kerne k liye Bluetooth ka istemal kiya tha, isliye jab werewolf ne unper hamla kiya tab naina ne hi un bluetooth k jariye us specific jagah aane ko kaha , jaha wo pahale se ready thi.

Or aage kya hua wo aap jante hi h .

Naina or preety uske pas gayi or naina ne pucha.

Naina :- bata kaha milegi teri maa.

Bhola marte hue :- ni bataunga , mar to raha hi hu , isliye apne hi hatyare ka fayda kya karu.

Jise sun preety gusse me aagayi or boli.

Preeti :- aakhiri baar puch rahi hu , kaha milegi teri ma.

Bhediya :- bola na ni batunga.

Preety ne gusse se gardan pakad li uski or chilayi :- kya bola ni batayega , ek trittya ko mana karega tu , teri ye majal .

Aakhiri baar puch rahi hu chupchap pata bata verna , teri aatma ka vo hal hoga , jiska andaza ni h tujhe.

Trittya nam sunte hi bhediya ki gand fat gayi or uski najar preety k nishan pe gayi jise dekh uski halat kharab ho gayi.

Or usne ek sab kuch bak diya , jise sun preeti ne uski gardan tod ker uska kaam nipta diya.

Naina :- di aap or abhishek ab ghar jaiye , aage khatra h bbahut.

Naina ne unhe samjha bhujaker ghar bhej diya or khud nikal pade komolika k ade pe.

Wahi dusri or

Jungle k ek kone me ek bahut hi purana khandar tha , jo komolika ka ada tha.

Komolika ghumti hui apne bete k lotne ka intezaar ker rahi thi , kyunki use subah se hi kuch anhoni ka andesha ho raha tha or bola se uska contact bhi ni ho raha tha or din hone ki vajah se vo kuch khas ker bhi ni sakti thi

Ab bhale hi wo dayan ho , lekin thi to wo bhi ma hi na.

Komolika :- kidher rah gaya mera dinu subah se, na koi khabar na kuch , kahi esa to ni ki us tantrika ne mere bache ko.

Ni ni esa ni ho sakta.

Tabhi uske kaan me ek aavaj pahunchi.

Aawaz :- badi bechain ho komolika.

Komolika ne us or dekha to chonk ker chilayi .

Komolika :- tantrika tu yaha kese pahunchi

Naina :- bas tere bete ne hi bataya rasta.

Komolika :- kya kiya tume mere bete k sath , kaha h mera beta.

Naina :- sabar rako, abhi milva dete h .

Preety jara bhola urf dinesh ko leker to aayo.

Tabhi khandar me preety enter kerti h , jisne dinesh ki lash ko uthaya hua tha.

Dinesh ki lash dekh komolika rone lagi apne bete k sine pe sir rakh or kuch der baad vo chilayi.

Komolika :- ni chodungi, tum yaha aato gaye ho tum yaha lekin ab jinda ni lotoge.

Ye bol usne do aag k gole bana naina or preety ki or feke.

Lekin preeti teyar thi , usne bhi ek bada sa gola banaya or un golo ki or choda , vo gole preeti ki shakti se takra ker nasht ho gaye or preety ka gola sidha komolika ko laga.

Jise ghayal komolika samjh gayi ki uska pala ek trittya se pad gaya h , jiske aage vo kuch bhi ni.

Komolika rote hue boli:- m tum logo ko ni hara sakti or apne bete ke bina bhi ni ki sakti isse acha hoga m khud ko hi khatam ker lu.

Ye bol komolika ne ek chaku mangwaya or usne pahale apni choti kat dali , kyunki dayno ki sari shaktiya uski choti m hoti h or fir usi chaku ko usne apne sine m ghop liya or wo mar gayi.

Ye sab itna jaldi hua ki naina or preety sirf dekhte hi rah gayi.

Kuch der baad naina or preety ne un dono maa bete ki lasho ka antim sanskar kiya or nikal pade ghar ki or.

Ghar jaker unhone sabko ye khushkhabri sunayi to sab khushi se jhum uthe.

Agle din kafi dhumdham se abhishek or vidhi ki sagai karwayi gayi .

Uske agle din naina or uske dosto ne ab vaha se vida lene ki permission mangi sumitra se.

Sumitra :- beti tumne jo hum per ahasan kiya h hum use jindagi bhar ni bhulenge.

Beti per ek icha or thi kuch din or yahi ruk jati to acha hota.

Lekin naina ne unhe apne mission k bare me samjhate hue , unse jane k liye permission mangi or ye vada bhi kiya ki vo vidhi ki shadi m jarur aaaayenge.

Is tarah naina or uske dosto ne waha se vida li.

Lekin ek baat jo sabse jyada ajib lag rahi thi use or usko khaye ja rahi thi ki

Vo jese jese apni manjil ki or bad rahe the , vese vese preety ka gussa or gusse me kiya gaya vahashipan bhi bad raha tha

Usko samjh ni aaraha tha ki aakhir ye chakkar kya h , kya connection h preety or trittya k bich

Pareshani ek ni kayi thi , vo samrat ki khoj me madavpur aaye the , lekin yaha unhe na samrat mila or na hi koi hint , isliye ab use samjh ni aaraha tha ki ab vo aage kis or jaye.

Wahi dusri or

Ranvir to ab buri tarah se pagal ho chuka tha , wo apne hi office me tod fod macha raha tha.

Kyunki Dn ne ek bahut bada jhatka use de dala tha , kese aaiye jante h

Aaj subah wo abhi office me kaam ker hi raha tha ki uske office ka peon aaya.

Peon :- may I come in sir.

Ranvir :- come in , bolo kya kam h.

Peon :- sir ye ek letter aaya h aapke liye .

Ranvir :- ok ise yaha rakh do or jao.

Peon vesa hi kerta h or chala jata h , kuch der baad jab vo letter dekhta h to uske pero tale jamin khisak jati h or gusse se chilaya.

Ranvir :- ni esa ni ho sakta , ni

Kese kese hua ye , kisne kiya ye.

Jarur wo dn hi hoga , kamine tune mujhe kahi ka ni choda , ab tu ni bachega.

Ye bol wo gusse se tod fod macha raha tha, kyunki wo letter ek legal notice tha , jiske according ab vo apni hi main company ka owner ni raha tha

Uske 60 % shares kahi or kisi or k pas chale gaye the , per ye sab hua kese usko samjh ni aaraha tha.

Esa kese hua ye next update me hi pata chalega.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- shani lok .

Shani dev bahut chinta me the.

Devi chaya :- kya hua putra itne chintit kyu ho.

Shani :- chintit hone ka hi to vishay h mata , jis ghatna karm ko leker hum or narayan chintit the , us ghatna ka aarambh ho chuka h.

Wo samay aachuka h jab karan ka ek karm is sansar k bhagya ka nirnay karega.

Mata :- tum chinta mat kero putra , mujhe mahadev per or apne putra karn per purn vishwas h , sab kuch sahi hi hoga.

Shani :- asha h mata esa hi ho

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Update no :- 118

Karan k jane k bad pret apne kamo me lag gaye lasho ko thikane k liye , unhonne arif ko utha ker uske ghar k bahar fake diya tha.

Or ab vo uske gundo ki lasho ko thikane lagane me lage hue the , unhone sabhi lasho ko ek jagah ikattha ker diya tha .

Abhi vo soch hi rahe the ki lasho ka kiya jaye , tabhi achanak ek aag ka gola aaya or un lasho k dher pe ja gira or sari lashe jalne lagi.

Pret ye dekh us disha me dekh chonk gaye or us disha me dekhne lage jaha se vo gola aaya tha.

Jaha unhone paya ki ek admi khada h , jisne uper se leker niche tak kale kapde pahane h , yaha tak ki uska chahra bhi dhaka hua h , ye or koi ni karan ka sahayak kaal tha.

Kaal tana marte hue :- kese bevkoof pret ho tum log , jo itna bhi ni jante ki kachre ko sirf jalata jata h , or ye log bhi is samaj ka kachra hi the , to tumhe inki lasho ka kya kerna h ye sochne ki jarurat bhi kyu aan padi.

Pret 1 :- abe tu h kon jo hume gyan de raha h , or ye jante hue bhi hum kon h fir bhi .

Kaal :- m dand nayak karan ka sahayak or sevak hu , kaal nam h mera.

Pret 1 :- haha ,kisko murkh bana raha h , jisne swayam hum preton ko pret raj samet prajit ker dala , usko tujh jese tuch prani ki sahayta ki kya avashyakata.

Pret 2 :- bhai mujhe to lagta h ye koi shatru ka admi h , dekh kya rahe ho khatm ker do ise

Ye bol sabhi pret kaal ki or bhage, kaal ne jyada kuch ni kiya , usne bas apne dhanush ka ahavahan kiya or uski khali pratyncha ko khicha or chod diya.

Jise ek esi dhvani utpan hui ,jisse sare pret sah ni paye or vahi gir ker tadfne lage.

Tabhi vaha preto ka naya raja aapahuncha , jise vikral ki mot k baad preto ko niyantran me rakhne k liye swayam pretraj ne niyukt kiyA tha or sakht hidayat di thi ki uske rajya me kisi bhi bekasur ka ant na ho.





Pret sirf apne bhojan k liye sirf janvaro ka hi shikar ker sakte h , ese niyam isi raja ne banaye or pretraj ki agya se karan ki sahayta k liye preto ko isne hi bheja, ye raja h , isliye m ise king hi likhunga.

King kaal k paas jaker :- he mahan aatma , kripya mere sipahiyo ko shama ker de , inhe aapki vastvikta ka or apki shaktiyo ka gyan na tha.

Kaal :- aap shama mang mujhe lajjit na kare rajan , m apki kahi gayi baat se bhali bhanti parichit hu, parantu apne purane sathiyo ke ant se bhi inlogo ne shiksha na li or inhe apni shakti ka ahankar ho gaya.

Hey rajan aap preto ne adharm ka marg tyag dharm k marg ko chuna , parantu apke ye sipahi ye na samjh sake ki dharm ki rah me aahankar jese dosho ka koi sthan ni.

Usi ahankar k chalte inhone ye janne tak ka prayas na kiya ki m kon hu, or ye tak na socha ki ager m shatru hota to inki sahayta kyu kerta

Isliye mane inper pran ghatak prahar na kiya kyunki mera udeshya keval inke ahankar ka ant kerne ka tha , inka ni.

Ye bol kaal ne ek chutki bajayi or sare pret normal ho gaye .

King :- tum sab kaan khol ker sun lo , kaal ne jo bhi bataya h , wo shat pratisath satya h , isliye ye hamari agya h, aaj se tum dand nayak k sath , inki bhi aagya manoge.

Preto ne aapne raja ki aagya man li or kaal se agya le wo waha se nikal gaye.

Kaal :- aP kuch puchna chahte h rajan.

King :- ji, mere man me ye shanka thi , jab aapne dand nayak k parivar ki raksha ka uttaradayitv swayam liya ,to fir aaj aap kyu ni gaye sonam ya radha ki raksha hetu.

Kal :- ye kaam m ker sakta tha rajan , parantu mujhme na itna sahas h or na hi ye mera adhikar h ki m dand nayak k karmpath k madhya aayu.

Niyati ne karan or jyoti ka apne purani jindagi me aane ka yahi upay nirdharit kiya tha ,ese me mera ye sab kerna kaha uchit hota.

King kaal ki baat se sahamat hota h , tabhi kaal bolta h.

Kaal :-rajan acha hua apse uchit samay pe bhet ho gayi , anyatha m aapse milne aane hi wala tha.

Ab samay aachuka h maharaj ki karan or jyoti k apne jivan k ek bade satya se avgat hone ka.

Jiske liye unhe aavashyakata hogi us ashtra ki jo aap danvo ka sabse balishth or abhedya ashtra h.

King :- kahi aap uski baat to ni ker rahe.

Kaal :- ha rajan m usi "Trishastra" k vishay me baat ker raha hu.

Kaha milega vo trishastra rajan.

King :-. Kaal , trishastra ek ni apne nam k anusar 3 bhago me vibhajit h ,jiska pahala bhag dand nayak ne bhutkal me vilral k ant k sath hi prapt ker liya tha.

Kaal :- or baki 2 bhag.

King :- vo to hume bhi gyaat ni sahayak ,ye rahasya kafi gupt rakha gaya h , kyunki is ashtra ki shakti ka gyaan aapko bhi h.

Kaal :- hmm, chaliye ab mujhe aagya dijiye rajan.

Iske baad kaal or king dono waha se gayab ho gaye.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- garima house

Yaha to hungama macha hua tha.

Geeta :- radha kahi ye tumhara koi majak to ni na , ager esa h to ye bahut hi ghatiya majak h.

Radha rote hue :- ni masi m sach bol rahi hu , m bhala esi baat pe kese majak ker sakti hu bhala.

Kavya rote hue :- beti ager tu sach bol rahi h to kaha meri bachi ,or mere lala (kavya bachpan me karan ko pyaar se lala kahati thi ) kaha h , tune use jane kyu diya beti.

Ab radha or riya ki halat kharab ho gayi , unhe samjh ni aaraha tha ki vi kya or kese bataye sabko ki jyoti ne to unhe bachane k baad unki or dekha tak ni.

Or jesi galti unhone ki thi , us hisab se esa hona banta bhi tha unke sath.

Jyoti k jane k baad radha or riya kafi der waha roti rahi thi or fir jyoti k bodyguard ne kafi unpe jor dala to vo vapas apne ghar aagayi , jinhe bodyguard chod gaya tha.

Wo pahale to kafi der kamre me beth roti rahi , per ab iska kya fayda , jab chidiya chug gayi khet

Jyoti ne us raat sahi hi kaha tha ,ki jis din tumhare samne sachai aayegi , tab tum praischit k ek moke ko bhi tarsogi or aaj vesa hi ho raha tha.

Kafi der yu rote rahane k baad unhe is baat ka hosh aaya ki ye baat janne ka adhikar to pure parivar ko h ki unki pyari beti or bahan jyoti jinda or shayad karan bhi .

Ye baat unke dhyan me aate hi wo hall me jaker wo sabko bulati h or unhe sari aaj jo hua vo rote rote sab bata deti h.

Tabhi bahar car rukne ki aawaz aati h or sath me garima k sab k bulane k bhi .

Sab jese hi ghar k bahar jate h to pate h ki ek gadi khadi h , jiske side me garima khadi h.

Geeta :- kya hua didi , sab thik to h na.

Shivani :- bhua wo sab chodiye , mujhe aapko ek bahut gi badi shocking ya yu kaho ek good news deni h ki.

Garima :- yahi na beta ki tumhari didi or bhaiya jinda h or sahi salamat h.

Garima ki is baat se sab chini jate h or kavya boli .

Kavya khushi k ansu k sath :- didi kya radha sahi bol rahi h , kya mere bache jinda h , ager esa h to kaha h vo , hume abhi unhe dhundne jana hoga.

Tabhi sonam bahar nikalte hue boli.

Sonam :- kisi ko kahi jane ki jarurat ni h choti maa , m apne bhaiya or didi ko apne sath le ker hi aayi hu.

Ye bol wo karan ka hath pakad use bahar aane ko bolti h , karan dhire dhire car se bahar nikalta h or sath me jyoti bhi

Jise dekh sab chonk uthe , lekin agle hi pal sabke chahro pe vo ronak lot aayi , jo un dono k jane k baad kho si gayi thi.

Shivani to bacho jese bhai kahate hue karan ki kr dodi , jise dekh karan ki ankho me bhi ansu aagaye.

Or wo bhi shivani ki or doda or agle hi pal shivani ko apne pyar bhare aghosh me leliya.

Shivani bas roye ja rahi thi or bas bole ja rahi thi.

Shivani :- bhaiyu aap agye , aap kaha or kyu chale gaye the , jante ho aapki pricess kitni akele ho gayi thi , jante ho aapke bina yaha sabka kya haal ho gaya tha.

Karan rote hue :- m bhi apni princess dur hoker kaha khush tha mera bacha, per halat hi ese ho gaye the , yakin maan meri gudiya , jitna mujhse dur hoker tu royi , usse kayi jyada m roya hu mera bacha.

Per ab kyu ro rahi ho , shant ho jao meri princess aapke bhaiyu aapse vada kerte h ki ab m aapko chod k kahi ni jaunga.

Shivani khush ho karan k dono gal chum :- sachi .

Jyoti :- muchi meri gudiya , ab sara pyar bhaiya ko hi milega, ya apni didu k liye bhi kuch h.

Fir shivani jyoti se bhi mili or fir karan geeta se bhi mila , priya to so chuki thi , or jesa ki mane pahale bataya rohan bahar gaya hua tha or uski maa bhi dusri city gayi hui thi apni bahan se milne.

Jaha karan ko dekh sabhi khush the , wahi 2 ankho me dukh or pida saf saf dikh rahi thi , galat mat samjhna dosto kuch , ye or koi ni thi wo kavya hi thi , jo karan or jyoti ko sahi salamat dekh khush to itni thi ki jiski koi sima ni .

Lekin use samjh ni aaraha tha kis muh se vo karan or jyoti k pas jaye or unko gale lagaye , unpe apna sneh lutaye, kyunki use apne bhut kal me kiye gaye karan or jyoti k sath wale atyachar yaad aarahe the , jiski glani k kaaran wo himmat ni ker pa rahi thi.

Or wahi dusri or radha or jyoti ka bhi kuch esa hi haal tha , unka to ye man ker raha tha ki apne bhai ko abhi sine se laga le , lekin unke karmo ki glani unhe esa ni kerne de rahi thi.

Karan ki najar jab in 3no pe padi to radha or riya ko rota dekh ek baar to wo tadaf utha , or wo unki or bhadne laga , lekin tabhi use wo raat ki sari ghatna yaad aagayi , jisse wo gussa ho gaya or ruk gaya.

Per jab usne apni choti maa ko dekha , to uske jahan me wo sari baate gunjane lagi jo mata chaya ne kavya ka sach batate hue karan ko batayi.

Kavya ka balidan yaad aate hi karan ki ankhe nam ho gayi or wo kavya ki or badha or uske per chu liye.

Kavya ko to samjh hi ni aaraha tha , ye kya ho raha h or wo kese react kare , usko to apne aap pe or gussa aane laga , ki jis bete ko usne dukh k alawa kuch ni diya , wo aaj bhi apni usi choti ma ka itna saman kerta h.

Kavya k kuch na bolte dekh , karan ruansi aawaz me bola

Karan :- kya aaj bhi apne lalla ko apna ashirwad na dogi choti ma.

Karan ka itna bolna hi tha ki kavya ka control chut gaya or usne jhat se karan ko sine se lagate hue rone lagi .

Kavya :- mujhe maaf ker de mere bache , apni choti maa ko maaf ker de , m to tujhse mafi mangne layak bhi ni , ek m hu jisne tujhe dukh dene k liye kya ni kiya or ek tu h jo aaj bhi mujh jesi dusht orat se aaj bhi sneh kerta h , mujh jesi orat mar jana

Karan bich me hi kavya k muh pe hath rakh k na ka ishara kerta h or bola

Karan :- choti maa , aap maat roye na , m sab kuch jan chuka hu or apko mafi mangne ki koi jarurat ni h , mere liye aaj bhi aap meri vahi pyari choti maa ho

Kavya or rote hue :- mujhe apni galti ki saja de mere bache , tab hi mujhe is glani roopi agni se rahat milegi, bol mere bache esa m kya karu.

Karan alag hote hue :- kuch ni choti ma , apko kuch kerne ki jarurat ni or ager aap kuch kerna hi chahti ho to bas ek baar apne muh se lalla bol do.

Kavya rote hue :- lallaaa.

Karan :- choti maaaa

Ye bol wo fir se kavya k sine se lag gaya or kavya ki najar jese hi jyoti pe padi , usne apni ek bah fela di , jyoti bhi rote hue kavya k sine se lag gayi.

Kavya rote hue jyoti se bhi mafi mangti h or karan jese jyoti bhi kavya ko shant karane lagi.

3no maa bete ka prem dekh waha mojud sabhi ki ankhe nam ho gayi thi , wahi garima ko kavya k sath kiye gaye vyavahar k liye sharminda mahasoos ker rahi thi , bhale hi abhi tak use sach pata na chala ho , lekin ye drishy dekh usko kavya pe vishwas jarur ho gaya tha.

Raat bahut ho gayi thi isliye wo ghar k ander jate h or sab kuch der baat kerte h , sabne decide ker liya tha man hi man ki vo kal puchenge karan or jyoti se ki vo aakhir bache kese or itne din kaha the vo

Aaj parivar ka har koi karan or jyoti k sath sona chahata tha isliye sabne decide kiya ki sab gade bicha k chat pe soyenge gade bicha ker

Aaj salo baad kavya apne karan or jyoti ko apne sine se laga ker sula rahi thi , uske ek side jyoti to dusre side karan tha , jo kavya se vese hi chipke hue the , jese koi chota bacha apni maa se chipake sota h.

Or karan k piche se sonam uske chipke so rahi thi or jyoti k shivani , fir geeta or garima .

Radha or riya ko to ek dam kone me sula diya gaya, un dono ko to karan ese ignore kerne ki koshis ker raha tha, jese wo yaha ho hi na.

Lekin esa kerne me khud karan ko bhi taklif ho rahi thi , wo chahe kitni bhi koshis ker le , lekin apne dil me kisi k liye bhi nafrat ki bhavna ni la sakta tha , yahi to uske saaf dil ki pahachan thi or yaha baat to uski sabse ladli choti bahan ki thi , lekin radha ko uski galti ki saza dena bhi avashyak tha , isliye na chahate hue bhi use esa kerna pad raha tha.

Isi udhedbun me karan ki kab aankh lag gayi use pata hi na chala.

Wahi dusri or.

Naina or uske dost lagbhag 80 km dur aachuke the , raat ho chuki thi to sabhi ek dhabe pe ruk ker khana kha rahe the

Preety :- ab aage ka kya sister, us d2 ne to hume bevkoof bana diya madhavgarh me samrat to milna dur , uska koi hint tak na mila.

Veer :- ha naina ,ese me hum kese decide kare ki hume kis or jana hoga , kyunki ab hum haryana border k karib h ,or yaha se hume kese pata chalega ki us dusht ne aunty ko kaha bandhi bana rakha h.

Naina :- vahi to samjh ni aaraha veer mujhe bhi ki hum kya kare.

Abhi 3no isi bare me soch rahe the , ki naina ka phone ring hua , jab usne screen pe dekha to call sumitra ka tha.

Naina :- ye itni raat ko sumitra aunty ka phone kyu aaraha h.

Esa sochte hue usne call pick kiya to samne se sumitra ki aavaj aayi , jo kafi dari hui lag rahi thi.

Sumitra :- hello hello naina beti , tum jaldi se yaha wapas aajao , vo vidhi vidhi.

Bas itne me phone cut jata h jise sun naina ghabra jati h or dobara call kerti h , per phone koi ni utha raha tha.

Phone speaker pe tha isliye veer or preety ne bhi sun liya tha, isliye unhone bina der kiye waha se apni jeep ki or 3no bhage or full speed me vapas ridhi k ghar ki or bhadne lage.

Lekin ese to bahut der lag jati , or kahi isi bich gadbad na ho jaye is chakkar me naina ne preety ko teleportation power use kerne ko kaha or ek sunsan jagah se wo 3no teleport ho sidha vapas vidhi k ghar pahunch gaye or jaldi se ghar k ander bhage.

Wo jese ghar k ander pahunche to wo chonk gaye , sara ghar uthal puthal ho rakha tha , jese waha koi tufan aaya ho or ek jagah pe sumitra behosh padi thi.

Naina jaldi se uske pass jati h or pani dal ker use hosh me lati h , naina ko dekh ker sumitra uske gale lag rone lagi , wo bahut dari hui thi.

Naina :- aunty apki ye halat kese or ye sab kisne kiya or vidhi di kaha h.

Vidhi ka nam sun sumitra fut fut k rone lagi or jo vo boli use sun 3no buri tarah chonk gaye.

Sumitra :- beti meri vidhi ko bacha lo , wo darinda , wo werewolf vidhi ko utha ker le gaya h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Kuch der baad police aagayi or ranvir ko utha ker le gayi , police ki van k aankho se ojhal hone tak sabhi van ki or dekhte rahe

Or jese hi van waha se chali gayi , garima ghutno k bal girker buri tarah rone lagi ,aakhir roye bhi kyu na bechari , jis bhai ko wo apne maa baap se bhi jyada pyaar kerti thi , use manti thi , usi bhai ka esa nich karm dekh wo kaha bardasht ker sakti thi .

Geeta radha or sonam use sambhalne me lage hue the , wahi kavya to karan k liye pareshan ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ko dekh saaf saf pata chal raha tha ki wo abhi shant na hua h.

Or ye baat sach bhi thi , karan abhi vichlit or ashant tha , kyunki aaj uske hatho me uski maa or hone wale bhai ya bahan ka hatyara tha fir bhi na chahte hue bhi use us hatyare ko chodna pada .

Or us hatyare ki raksha bhi unhone ki jise wo mahadev k baad sabse jyada manta tha , jinka wo ansh tha , yani ki shani dev ne .

Kavya karan k pass jane ko hui ki pahale hi karan bina kuch bole ghar se bahar chala gaya.

Sonam karan ko yu jate Dekh ghabra gayi or sath me uski baki sari bahane bhi sivay jyoti k , kyunki wo karan ki manosthiti ko bhali bhanti samjh sakti thi , kyunki uska haal bhi kuch vesa hi tha.

Sabhi bahane jab karan ko rokne gayi to kavya ne unhe roka or jyoti se boli

Kavya :- ja beti , ab tu hi apne bhai ko sambhal sakti h , mujhe is baat ka pura yakin h.

Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas apni gardan ha me hila ker nikal gayi karan k Piche , bahar ja ker dekha to paya karan to waha h hi ni , jyoti samjh gayi ki karan kaha gaya hoga.

Usne pahale dekha ki koi aas pas to ni h na , fir usne apni ankh band ki or teleport ho pahunch gayi us jagah jaha se jyada shanti or aanand to unhe swarg lok me bhi na mila

Yani apni ma dwara banwaye gaye usi pyare se ghar me , jaha pahunchte hi wo apne bhai ko dhundne lagi.

Wahi dusri or

Naina vidhi ko ghar leker aayi , jaha sumitra vidhi ko sahi salamat dekh fule na sama rahi thi or na hi wo naina ka dhanyawad kerte kerte thak rahi thi.

Naina ne pahale vidhi ki shuddhi ki or fir use aaram kerne ko bhej diya or wo khud bhi apne dosto k sath aram kerne chali gayi.

Lekin naina k man me uth rahe sawal usko sone kese dete , usko samjh ni aaraha tha , akhir uske sath hi esa kyu ho raha tha.

Pahale wo ek sadharan si ladki thi , jiski duniya sirf uski padhai or pita tak simit thi ,lekin us hadse ne to uski duniya or uske jine ka maksad hi badal diya tha.

Uper se jese jese vo aage bhad rahi thi , usko sawalo k jwab kam or kayi naye sawal mil rahe the , jinke utter ka use koi andaza ni tha.

Tabhi uski najar pass me so rahi preety p jati h , or jo aaj ki ladayi se thak ker chur ho gayi thi or lette hi so gayi thi.

Sawal to preety k bare m bhi bahut the naina k dimag me , jese uski shaktiyon or uske tritiya hone ka etc

Lekin uske dil me ab is baat ku fikar bhi hone lagi thi , ki jese aage age vo badh rahe h , sankat or bhi khatarnak roop me samne aarahe h , jiske kaaran uske sath sath uske dosto ki jaan bhi khatre me padti ja rahi h

Isliye usne than liya , ki ab vo jald hi is baare me kuch karegi.

Yu hi naina vaha kuch din or ruki vidhi ko sambhalne k liye , jo lagna bhi tha , bechari k sath niyati ne esa khel jo khela tha.

Ab vidhi kafi had tak normal ho chuki thi , isiliye ab naina or uske dosto ka vidai ka samay aacuka tha , sumitra or vidhi ne unhe kuch din or rukne ko kaha , per ab unke liye or rukna mushkil hi tha , isliye unhonne vapas aane ka wada ker nikal pade haryana border ki or.

Raat hone tak wo haryana border k pass bane dhabe p khana kha rahe the .

Veer :-. Border pe to hum aachuke naina , ab hume kaha chalna h uska kese pata kare.

Naina :- bhul gaye veer kabristan me preton k leader ne hume upaay bataya tha , or ab usi upaay ka time aagaya h.

Preety :- to chalo sister, fir der kis baat ki.

Naina :- are moti , pahale khana to kha le , har time ghode pe savar rahati h.

is tarah hasi majak me khana khate h ,fir naina or uske dost bahar gadi k pas jate h jo dhabe k piche khadi thi , or jaha jungle tha.

Naina ne waha ek bada sa chapta pathar dekha or uske uper map bicha diya , jo haryana border se jude states ka tha, or map k charo kono p padhar rakh diye , taki map hile ni.

Fir naina ne apne bag se ek locket nikala , jo komolika ka tha , jo naina ne uske antim sanskar se pahale nikal liya tha .

Naina :- friends , ab hume samrat tak yahi locket pahuchayega .

Preety :- per kese sister.

Naina :- samraat tak pahuchne k liye hume pahale uske bhai markesh tak pahuchna hoga.

Or komolika ka ye locket jo use markesh ne diya tha , ab yahi uska pata batayega.

(Preety se ) preety lo pahale apni trittya shakti ko jagrit kero or fir isko muthi me bich ker ese todo ki , iska chura ban jaye.

Preety bilkul wesa hi kerti h , or fir naina us chure ko map pe fela ker apna yantra uske charo or ghumate hue kuch mantra bolti h or fir boli.

Naina :- bata he kali shakti kaha milega tujhe banane wala markesh

Naina k esa bolne k pach minute bad hi map per fela sara locket ka chura apne aap khisata hua ek point pe aaker fel gaya or fir gayab ho gaya , or wo jagah chamakne lagi.

Naina :- lo veer mil gayi humari manjil ka rasta , yahi h wo location ab jaha jana h.

Veer :- hmm , iske according ab hume rajasthan jana hoga.

Preety :- hmm rajasthan k kisi kulbhata ganv me ki location h ye to.

Naina :-. To chalo der kis baat ki.

Fir 3no dost nikal pade rajasthan ki or ek or nayi musibat ka samna kerne , per is baat se anjan ki , ab jo khatra unke samne aane wala h , uske aage piche wale sare khatre kuch bhi na the

Location :- kulbhata

Rajasthan jo mashoor h apne amulya dharohar , mahan itihas , veero ki bhumi or santo k karmbhumi hone k kaaran .

Ye wahi bhumi h jaha , rana pratap, rana sanga , bappa rawal jese veero ne janm liya , ye vahi bhumi h jaha panna dhay or hadi rani jesi verangnao ne apna balidan diya , yahi h vo bhumi jaha meera bai , sudas jese mahan santo ne janm liya.

Is bhumi ki mahima ka vanan kerne k liye shabd ni h mere pas , lekin jaha rajasthan apne mahan itihas or sanskriti k liye mashoor h .

Utna hi mashoor h apne rahasmayi sthano or dantkathao k liye.

Esi hi ek katha judi hui h kulbhata se bhi.

Chaliye jara najar marte h kulbhata pe bhi.

Kulbhata jo kabhi ek hasta khelta khushal ganv tha , ab vo bilkul veeran hone ki kagar pe tha

Esa kyu vo aage hi pata chalega , lekin yaha ki sthithi sahi na thi , aaye din yaha logo ki mot ho rahi thi , jiska kaaran medical science k according to atyadhik pyaas thi , matlab yaha k log kafi dino se pani ni pi rahe the .

Lekin main kaaran kuch or hi tha , darasal yaha pine k pani ka keval ek hi sadhan hi tha , wo tha yaha ganv k bicho bich mojud ek kua.

Esa ni tha ki ye kua sukh chunka tha , balki kua to upper tak pani se laba lab bhara hua tha.

Lekin fir bhi log katrate the is kue se pani bharne k kiye , yaha tak ki vo log milo dur dusre ganv se bhi pani lane ko teyar the, is kue k aas pas bhi ni fatakte

Ab log bhi pani k liye itni dur jate jate thak chuke the , isliye wo ab ganv chod ker jane lage the, lagbhag 70% ganv ab khali ho chuka tha or kue k as pas k sare ghar to bilkul khali the.

Tabhi ek musafir jo rajasthan ki garmi m kahi ja raha tha , lekin raste pyaas ki vajah se vo Yaha aapahucha tha , to usne jese hi kue ki or dekha , wo turant bhaga bhaga waha aaya or bina der kiye kue se pani nikal pine laga.

Jab usne pet bhar k pani pi liya to achanak uske gale me ek second dard hua , or fir usne apne hosh gava diye .

Matlab ki ab uska sharir uske vas me na tha, vo kisi ke vashikaran me aachuka tha.

Tabhi kue se ek bhayanak aawaz aayi.

Awaaz :- bahar kya kar rahe ho , ander aajao , mane tumhari pyas bhujayi , ab tum meri pyas bhujao.

Wo admi itna sunte hi kue me kud gaya or fir uska kuch pata na chala.

Us aadmi ko kudte hue 2 ganv valo ne dekha , in logo ne us admi ko jab pani pite dekha to use rokne ki koshis ki thi, lekin unke pahuchne tak kafi der ho chuki thi or ye hadsa ho chuka tha.

Admi 2 :- hey bhagwan kab tak chalega esa , kab tak yu hi masumo ko apne pran gavane padenge.

Admi 3 :- ha bhai , pata ni kab ishvar ko hum per daya aayegi or hume in dusht brahmrakshaso se mukti milegi

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Jyoti jungle wale ghar me pahunch karan ko yaha waha dhundne lagi , use karan ki bahut chinta ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ki manosthiti abhi thik ni thi .

Use is baat ki chinta ho rahi thi ki uska bhai , abhi dukhi hoga or kahi ro raha hoga , jise shant karwane k liye jyoti tadaf rahi thi.

Usne apne jhule ,mandir or garden charo or dhunda karan ko , per wo use kahi na mila .

Tabhi uske kano me karan ki aawaz aayi .

Karan :-. Gudiya m yaha hu , ander aajao.

Ye aawaz ghar k ander se aayi thi , jo almost normal hi thi , jise sun jyoti ko kuch shanti padi or wo turant ghar me bhagi .

Jaha karan unke or asha k room me betha tha , or uske hath me uski maa ki tasvir thi.

Jyoti jaker karan k gale lag gayi or rone lagi , karan tasvir ko side me rakhte hue jyoti ko shant karwate hue bola.

Karan :-. Ro kyu rahi ho meri pyari gudiya , tumhe to balki khush hona chahiye , aaj humne apne maa k hatyare ko uske anjam tak pahuncha hi diya h.

Jyoti karan ko itna shant dekh khush bhi thi or heran bhi.

Karan :- kya hua meri jaan , ese kyu ghur rahi ho mujhe.

Jyoti masumiyat se sisakte hue :- bhai jab aap achanak se ghar chod yaha aagaye to m dar gayi , mujhe laga...

Karan :- tumhe laga ki m abhi yaha dukhi ho ker rone aya hounga h na.

Jyoti gardan ha me hila deti h .

Karan :- ni gudiya , esa bilkul bhi ni h , m ashant jarur tha per udas ya dukhi ni , kyunki mane jo bhi kiya , wo bilkul sahi or uchit tha .

Or ager me sahi hu to kyu bina vajah dukhi ho aansu bahau.

Karan serious hote hue :- or vese bhi dandnayak karan ne vyarth me ansu bahana or vyarth k logo k liye ansu bahana usi din chod diya tha , jis din is matlabi sansar ki vastvikta se hum parichit hue.

Jyoti samjh gayi thi ki karan ka ishara us raat k hua hadse se h.

Karan :- m to bas yaha bas isliye aaya taki maa ki basayi hui humari is pyari duniya me aaker tumhare sath kuch samay bita ker apne ashant man ko shant ker saku.

Kyunki m janta tha ki meri pranpriya mere piche poche yaha jarur aayegi.

Ye bol karan ne jyoti k hotho ko halka sa chum liya .

Jyoti apne bhai ka naya roop dekh bahut khush thi , use khushi thi ki karan purani bato ko bhula ker , aage bhad raha h .

Fir kuch karan or jyoti yu hi ek dusro ki baho me pyar bhari baate kerte h , jyoti ne kavya ko phone kerke bol diya tha ki vo or karan ab normal h or kal subah tak wo ghar lot aayenge.

Raat ko karan apne hatho se khana banake jyoti ko us jhule pe bitha ker khilata h , jese kabhi asha un dono ko khilati thi.

Jyoti us pal ko yaad ker thodi bhavuk hui or uski ankh me ek bund aasu aagaya , jise dekh karan muskurate hue uske ansu pochta h or usko muskurane ka ishara kerta h.

Karan k is pyar bhare andaz se jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi , jise dekh karan jyoti ka mastak chum leta h or fir dono bhai bahan ek dusre ko khana khilate h.

Phir karan jyoti ko jhulane lagta h or kuch dee baad jyoti k sath beth jata h.

Jyoti :- bhai , ma k hatyare ko to humne uske mukam tak pahuncha diya h , ab humara aage kya kerna h.

Karan :- vahi gudiya , jiske liye humara janm hua h , ab bahut hua ye lukka chupi ka khel , ab vakt aagay h , dusht shaktiyo ko is baat ka gayan hone ka ki unka kaal aachuka h.

Bahut hua nakaratmak shaktiyon ka atyachar,ab samay achuka h ki is sansar k samaksh dand nayak k aane ka.

Ye sun jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi or karan k bhi.

Karan apni jagah se utha or apni ankh band ki or uske sharir se ek ati prakashaman tej nikalne laga or usike sath karan apne dand nayak roop me aagaya.

Karan :- m dand nayak karan mahadev k diye hue usk kavach ko ab khud se vilag kerta hu , jisne meri jivan urja ko chupaya hua tha .

Hey devadhidev mahadev apne is bhakt ki pprathna ko swikar kare.

Tabhi aasman se ek roshni karan or jyoti k tan pe padi or unke uper se vo kavach hat gaya.

Karan :-. Hey shani dev , aaj aapne bhale hi apne is bhakt ko nirash kiya, jiske liye m aapse rusht abhi bhi hu, parantu is kaaran m aapke diye hu kartavy se khud ko vimukh kadapi ni
Karunga , ye asha putra or jyoti k bhai karan ka vachan h aapko.

Wahi dusri or.

Mata chaya bhojan ki thali le kabse shani dev ko dhund rahi thi , lekin pura shani lok dhundne k baad bhi wo unhe na mile.

Tabhi mata chaya ko kuch dhyan aaya.

Mata :- jarur mera putra wahi hoga.

Mata chaya gayab ho sidha pahunch gayi , surya lok me mojud usi van me , jaha unka dusra nivas sthan tha.

Mata chaya ka andaza sahi tha , shani dev vahi nadi k kinare bethe the or udas bethe , nadi me kankad phek rahe the.


Mata chaya unke pas gayi or boli :- putra.

Mata chaya ko dekh shani dev jaldi se apni udasi ko chupane ki nakam koshis kerte hue apne chahre pr jhuti muskan late h.

Mata chaya shani k side me beth :- itne yug bit gaye , parantu mera putra bilkul na badla , putra mata hu m tumhari , tum bhale hi karmfal data ho , parantu fir bhi mujhse kuch ji chupa sakte.

Putra karan tumhara hi ansh h , tum ek prakar se uske pita hi ho , jese hanuman pavan dev k putra h , or isliye putra k kahe katu shabdo ka kya bura manna , ye baat tum bhi samjh sakte ho ki jo bhi hua , usme keval dosh paristhitiyon ka tha.

Shani dev mata chaya k gale lag bole.

Shani :- mata kisne kaha karan ne jo mujhe katu vachan kahe uske kaaran m udaas hu , in sab vachno ko sunne ka to abhyas sa ho gaya h , vese bhi m chahe kuch bhi ker lu , parantu manushy mujhe dand adhikari hi samjhta h , jiska mujhe koi dukh ni , kyunki mere bhay k kaaran vyakti kuch bhi bure karm kerne se pahale hajar baar sochta h or ager wo chetna se kaam le to wo kabhi mere dandvidhan ka patra ni banta, or jesa ki aapne kaha , karan to mera putra h or usne jo bhi mujhe kaha , mujh per usne apna wahi adhikar samjh ker kaha jo ek putra apna pita pe samjhta h.



M to udaas or chintit bas is kaaran hu mata kyunki jisdin karan ko vastvikta ka gyaan hoga , to wo is shan ko smaran ker tut na jaye mata , m aaj karan k kahe gaye katu shabd ko sahan ket gaya mata parantu apne putra ko yu tutta hua na dekh paunga.

Mata chaya :- jab itna kuch samjhte hi ho putra , to itni si baat ko kyu ni samjhte putra jese tum apne putra ko yu hatash or dukhi ni dekh sakti vese hi tumhari mata bhi to apne putra ko yu udaas ni dekh sakti na.

Isliye putra jo abhi hua hi ni uski kyu vyarth chinta kerna , dekho putra mahadev ki kripa se karan apne marg se bhatka ni h , apitu ab vo purntah saj h , apne karmpath pe agrasar hone k liye.

Isliye mere pyare putra , chinta ko tyag do or apne guru dev pe vishwas rakho , mahadev jo bhi karenge , uchit hi karenge.

Mata chaya k samjhane se shani bhi shant ho gaye or apni mata k hatho bhojan ker , aage ki yojna pe kaam kerne lage.

Location :- patal lok

Vp yu hi apni aage ki dusht yojna banane me laga hua tha , ki tabhi pura patal lok dagmagane laga , mano jese bhukamp aagaya ho .

Asuro me bhadgad mach gayi or sab idher udher bhane lage.

Vp gusse se chilaya :- shant ho jao sab.

Vp ki aawaz sun sab shant ho gaye or bhukamp bhi ruk gaya.

Vp :- patal lok me esa bhukamp , ye koi sadharan baat ni ho sakti , avashya hi kuch to gadbad h.

Vp ne apni aankh band kr jese hi dhyan lagaya , to uski herani or gusse ki koi sima n rahi.

Kyunki mahadev k kavach k hatne se ab karan vapas sare sansar ki drishti me aachuke the.

Vp gusse :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

1 asur :- kya hua maharaj

Vp :- vo rakshak karan jivit h or sath me uski sangini bhi.

Asur :-. Asambhav , mrityu k mukh se koi bhi ni bach sakta , humne khud apni aankho se unke shav dekhe the na maharaj.

Vp :- tumhara kahana anuchit bhi ji h senik, parantu itne yugo me ek baat se m bhali bhanti parichit ho chuka hu , jaha wo kapti shani or vishnu mojud ho vaha kuch bhi asambhav ni.

Bhut kal ki tarah ek baar fir us shani ne hum sabko chala h .


(Gusse se chilaya) shaniiiii, bahut hua tera ye parpanch , ab dekh m kya kerta hu

Ye bol vp hasne laga or apni yojna banane m lag gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi
Stay tuned

Nice update

 

[Sam221]

Bhai aapki poori kahani bas abhi hi padha hu.ye mera pehla comment hai is story me.
Sach kahu to mujhe start me ye kahani bohot hi awesome lagi lekin jaisey jaisey me kahani ko padhta gaya mujhe thori slow hoti gayee.bas mera yahi kehna hai ke kahani ko itna bhi slow mat karo ke boring ho jaaye.abhi to me ko boring lag rahi hai.bas Thora speed badhaongry to kahani aur bhi acchi hongi.
Aapke regular readers mujhe gaali de saktey hai mere comments par lekin jo mujhe laga me ne keh diya.

 

[Last benchers]

Waiting

 

[Vinod1368]

Superb mind blowing. Veer aur Prity officially ek ho tahe hai. Shayad Karan ke dadaji Karan ke father ko jail se riha krana chahte hai?

 

[sam4321]

Aacha update hai, karan ab aaage kay karta hai , apne dada dadi ko kaise sabak sikhata hai ......... Ye jungle ka kay matter hai , aaisa kay hai us jungle mai ....... Naina apne aagley safar ki taraf chal padi ........dekhate hai aage ky hota hai intajar rahega .....

sorry bhai kuch busy ho gaya tha time nahi mil raha tha......par ab time hi time hai ....... Ab aap jitne jaldi ho sake update dete jaye...... Intajar rahega next update ka.

 

[Harry rocks]

Iska matlab wo uski sagi bahen h or wo orat in do ki maa h

Kinki baat ker rahe ho bhai

 

[d€¥]

aaj update nh ayega kya.....